Scorpiour wrote:

[senaya's Easy]

1. 00:19:434 (5) - the reverse arrow touches HP bar fixed
2. 00:31:286 (3) - i suppose you wanna follow vocal here, but the blank at 00:31:039 - is weird because vocal is start from here. so perhaps the slider could move to prev white tick and add one repeat, or make two 1/2 slider here~ i like 2nd suggestion. not sure if it's playable for newbies though but changed anyway.
   
   
3. 00:47:088 (4) - ^ ^
4. 00:58:446 (1) - since this is the lowest diff, this slider may hard for new players to click because it's too close to spinner but far away from centre. My suggestion is end your spinner at 00:57:705 - ~ sure, changed.
5. 01:18:693 (3) - same as 00:31:286 this part was changed by Aleks, leaviing this to him to decide.
6. 01:26:594 (4) - recommend to reduce the volumn of finish here changed to 40%
7. 01:38:845 - start your spinner here for vocal~? okay
8. 02:06:711 (4) - i'd like to add a finish here :> oh right, forgot. added.
9. 02:36:094 (3) - remove sliderwhistle here, heard weird true
10. 02:42:267 (1) - ^ ^
11. 02:49:180 (2) - ^ ^
12. 02:53:378 (5) - also suggest to reduce the volumn of finish here~ changed to 40% again
13. 02:54:119 (1) - add a finish at head? added
14. 03:05:629 - start spinner here? okay
15. 03:48:976 (1) - recommend to remove sliderwhistle done

that's all ~ thank you :3

Piscis wrote:

All suggestion~

[senaya's Easy]
00:37:705 (3) - Add clap to slider end. i tried it before and i don't really like how it sounds :<
00:43:878 (1) - Add whitle to slider start. done
00:47:829 (1) - ^ ^
00:50:051 (1) - Add whitle. i don't like it
00:51:780 (1) - Add whitle to slider start. done
00:55:730 (1) - Add whitle. i don't like it
01:06:347 (1) - Add clap to slider end. done
01:17:705 (1) - Add whitle. ^
01:19:434 (1) - Add whitle to slider start. ^
01:27:335 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,1) - Put a clap in the same way as other difficulty? ok
02:23:501 (2) - Add whitle. done
02:25:724 (2) - Add clap. is not distance snap... fixed snapping

h3k1ru wrote:

o/

[General]

про sb уже говорил в irc, для психоделика надо бы помедленнее ==, трек медленный sb должна быть тоже! done, 7--> 4.72

про оффсеты в irc написал http://puu.sh/1ivW5 пока хз, пропустим

[Normal]

00:22:397 (3) - вистл пропустил наверно da! or wait... xD

02:14:612 (1) - уменьши громкость на финише ofc

03:28:404 (2) - кривой же no, norm as is

[Hard]

00:35:730 (5,1) - сделал бы спейсинг постоянным o: okay!

well, nothing really to point out, perfect map as usual~

1. SB:
   
   1. 03:11:751 - Here you start with some fades that seem a bit weird... The usual effect is that the background becomes bigger and fades, but you did exactly the opposite. I don't know if this was on purpose, but it looks preeetty weird.
      I took the time to modify the code a little - and tested it, and looked very good. I hope you like it as well! Here:
      

      Sprite,Background,Centre,"hole.jpg",320,240
       L,191751,5
        F,0,0,735,1,0.5
        S,0,0,735,0.8,1
        F,0,735,1470,0.5,0
        S,0,735,1470,1,1.1
        F,0,1470,1959,0,0

   2. 03:25:465 - How about adding a flash here, so that the change in spinning direction of the background isn't so sudden? Plus I think it would be hella amazing !
2. Settings:
   
   1. With the stuff mentioned in the previous point, I don't know if it would be necessary to add an Epilepsy Warning. I'm just making sure to make you consider it, but in my opinion, it isn't needed. Better ask in #lounge or #modhelp anyway.
   2. Personally, I don't like how the countdown sounds in this particular song - the intro is so peaceful and then... The countdown sounds and it's so bleh. I don't know, I'd suggest to remove it, but if you like it you may keep it!

1. 00:37:705 (3) - Ok, Imma be a little nazi about sliders with such a lazy composition xD Here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   280,280,37705,2,0,B|332:302|403:284|457:219|442:137|389:85|333:79,1,350

   As a general advice, elaborate your sliders. You'll always get something prettier!
   You could improve, for example, this: 01:03:631 (1) -, 01:19:434 (1) - and 02:10:415 (2) - (and maybe some other, but look for them!). Do it as an exercise!
2. 01:06:347 (1) - Did you, by chance, forget a whistle at the end of this? So it sounds like 00:58:446 (1).
3. 01:14:496 (2) - I'd add a whistle here, it sounds soo empty right now..
4. 01:19:434 (1) - And a whistle at the end of this kinda fits too. Remember that these are all suggestions, and you don't need to follow them if you don't agree.
5. 02:25:724 (2) - Spacing from (1) seems wrong. Can you space it correctly, please?
6. 02:49:180 (2) - Was the whistle in the sliderbody intentional? I don't think it was... So, remove it, please?
7. 02:54:119 (1) - Seems like you're missing a finish here!
8. 03:21:302 (1) - This kinda breaks the sound pattern... I mean...
   I was expecting to hit something at 03:21:547. It feels natural, because of the finishes you had placed so far. So this kinda sounded weird.
   I'd say that something like this could work better. You figure out if you like it, and then how you'd tweak the pattern.
9. 03:45:057 (1) - I don't dislike how the whistle in the slider body sounds, but I wonder if it was intentional or just something that happened without you knowing about it xD
   However, it doesn't quite fit the hitsounding pattern, so it's logical to remove it. Or maybe not, you decide.

1. 00:38:446 (2) - Not that this stack may cause too much confusion, but I think it's something avoidable, just in case.
   I'd rather have it unstacked. Something like this could work. Or some other thing. Who knows
2. 00:47:088 (3,1) - Vertically flipping this arrangement (and placing it accordingly) make it flow much, much better in my opinion. You should try it. Oh and try to replace the following elements in case you decide to apply this!
3. 01:38:845 (1) - You could split this spinner into two, finishing the existing one at 01:40:559 and starting the other one at 01:40:804 - (which of course would finish in the same place in which it does now). This sticks pretty well to the vocals, and I believe it's something a "Normal" player could handle.
   Still, your call!
4. 02:12:637 (1,3) - Believe it or not, adding some slight curvature to these sliders adds some extra flow to the patterns, that at least I really like.
5. 02:38:316 (1,2,3) - Maybe I'm just too nazi, but aesthetically, this looks a bit dull. I don't have any suggestions right now, but it just looks a little weird in my eyes. Maybe use something that isn't a wave? Or place the circles somewhere above the slider?
6. 03:05:629 (1) - Same thing about splitting the spinner!
7. 03:31:343 (1) - Very nice slider! I did some slight adjustments to make the blanket slightly better, hope you don't mind taking a look at it:
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   180,144,211343,6,0,B|268:144|268:144|344:144|372:216|344:288|272:288|272:288|216:288|216:288|176:288|156:252|176:216|212:216|212:216|276:216,1,560,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. 00:22:397 (1) - *Nazi* Can you make this more round please?
2. 00:47:829 (1) - You know... This is much easier with a red anchor instead of some many white ones. Just saying
3. 00:55:730 (1) - Very nice blanket! Had to say it! :3
4. 02:22:514 (1) - Same nazi stuff of 00:22:397 (1) (and the same thing for the symmetrical version of this slider, 02:24:736 (1)).

Mercurial wrote:

Be strong Aleks, you will find your way, sooner or later.

narakucrimson wrote:

Yeah Aleks, cheer up! thank you too .__.

[General]

1. SB:
   
   • 
     yes, applied everything, even more, fixed some lines by myself. Should be much better now :S
   1. Settings:
      
      1. With the stuff mentioned in the previous point, I don't know if it would be necessary to add an Epilepsy Warning. I'm just making sure to make you consider it, but in my opinion, it isn't needed. Better ask in #lounge or #modhelp anyway. well, as we talked with Scorpicour, it should be warning for people who has sea disease.
      2. Personally, I don't like how the countdown sounds in this particular song - the intro is so peaceful and then... The countdown sounds and it's so bleh. I don't know, I'd suggest to remove it, but if you like it you may keep it! I just wanted to save it as in eee's old mapset...
   [Normal]
   1. 00:38:446 (2) - Not that this stack may cause too much confusion, but I think it's something avoidable, just in case.
      I'd rather have it unstacked. Something like this could work. Or some other thing. Who knows mmm, kay
   2. 00:47:088 (3,1) - Vertically flipping this arrangement (and placing it accordingly) make it flow much, much better in my opinion. You should try it. Oh and try to replace the following elements in case you decide to apply this! remade pattern
   3. 01:38:845 (1) - You could split this spinner into two, finishing the existing one at 01:40:559 and starting the other one at 01:40:804 - (which of course would finish in the same place in which it does now). This sticks pretty well to the vocals, and I believe it's something a "Normal" player could handle.
      Still, your call! uh oh, i see your point, but i want to keep star rating lower than 3.7 for "N" icon
   4. 02:12:637 (1,3) - Believe it or not, adding some slight curvature to these sliders adds some extra flow to the patterns, that at least I really like. kurwature *hehe, /me summons #poliish*. added anyway
   5. 02:38:316 (1,2,3) - Maybe I'm just too nazi, but aesthetically, this looks a bit dull. I don't have any suggestions right now, but it just looks a little weird in my eyes. Maybe use something that isn't a wave? Or place the circles somewhere above the slider? uh, replaced circles
   6. 03:05:629 (1) - Same thing about splitting the spinner! same..
   7. 03:31:343 (1) - Very nice slider! I did some slight adjustments to make the blanket slightly better, hope you don't mind taking a look at it: alright, accepted
   [Hard]
   1. 00:22:397 (1) - *Nazi* Can you make this more round please? done
   2. 00:47:829 (1) - You know... This is much easier with a red anchor instead of some many white ones. Just saying not always, red anchor giver slightly another affect ><
   3. 00:55:730 (1) - Very nice blanket! Had to say it! :3 heh, thanks
   4. 02:22:514 (1) - Same nazi stuff of 00:22:397 (1) (and the same thing for the symmetrical version of this slider, 02:24:736 (1)). done for both

Aaaand that should be all! If I keep saying stuff, I'll be forcing my personal opinion too much xD .____.

Superb mapset, I really like it.
Hope you can get this ranked soon!

Best wishes,
Naraku~

narakucrimson wrote:

[senaya's Easy]

1. 00:37:705 (3) - Ok, Imma be a little nazi about sliders with such a lazy composition xD Here: done
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   280,280,37705,2,0,B|332:302|403:284|457:219|442:137|389:85|333:79,1,350

   As a general advice, elaborate your sliders. You'll always get something prettier!
   You could improve, for example, this: 01:03:631 (1) -, 01:19:434 (1) - and 02:10:415 (2) - (and maybe some other, but look for them!). Do it as an exercise! 1st one looks ok, fixed 2nd one and a tiny little bit 3rd one
2. 01:06:347 (1) - Did you, by chance, forget a whistle at the end of this? So it sounds like 00:58:446 (1). fixed
3. 01:14:496 (2) - I'd add a whistle here, it sounds soo empty right now.. I think Alex did this but I'm adding it anyway
4. 01:19:434 (1) - And a whistle at the end of this kinda fits too. Remember that these are all suggestions, and you don't need to follow them if you don't agree. nah, it's ok. added.
5. 02:25:724 (2) - Spacing from (1) seems wrong. Can you space it correctly, please? from 02:26:217 (1) - ? fixed.
6. 02:49:180 (2) - Was the whistle in the sliderbody intentional? I don't think it was... So, remove it, please? it isn't there O_o
7. 02:54:119 (1) - Seems like you're missing a finish here! it is there o_O
8. 03:21:302 (1) - This kinda breaks the sound pattern... I mean...
   I was expecting to hit something at 03:21:547. It feels natural, because of the finishes you had placed so far. So this kinda sounded weird. i wanted to make it a bit different. maybe same patterns all the way would be boring?
   I'd say that something like this could work better. You figure out if you like it, and then how you'd tweak the pattern. done (i think?)
9. 03:45:057 (1) - I don't dislike how the whistle in the slider body sounds, but I wonder if it was intentional or just something that happened without you knowing about it xD it isn't there O_o
   However, it doesn't quite fit the hitsounding pattern, so it's logical to remove it. Or maybe not, you decide.
   i think that maybe you had a previous version of this map where these sliderwhistles were still present

Aleks719 wrote:

suddenly O.O