Strawberry wrote:

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1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:17:496 - kiai time should be ceased before the breaking time.~ fix these inherited points plz~
   改了
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:10:896 - to 00:20:496 - delete this part plz. lol okay just kidding~ however i think these rhythm could be disposed by a better way~ :3这个只好尊重原作者了233
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   2. 00:31:146 (4) - overlapped with the previous slider (3)~ yea, looks not such well x3. maybe you can just try this shape of that slider if you think it is not such forced.. anyway i think it would be a better effection~
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      改了
   3. 00:33:096 (1,2) - looks should be ctrl+g here for consistency with the previous pattern.. (and you can also do the same thing at 00:33:396 (3,4) if you thought necessary~ just depend on you. :3感觉不改更好些?
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   4. 00:38:796 (2) - just hate circle stacking with the slider's start after the same slider personally.. why not just stacking it with the the other slider's head of 00:38:196 (4)?? also better flow and feel during my test~done
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   5. 00:42:846 (2,3) - i just got a idea that ctrl+g them? would be funnier for broke the consistency with the previous four circles on the last combo~ btw i feel you can also switch the circle (4) to 1/4 slider to fill the rhythm since i think the link of thess two patterns (the brown combo and the marine blue one) could be more fluency~(also don't forget to exchange the clap on these circles.~鬼畜 改了 不过4还是留着吧...感觉节奏够紧了
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   6. 00:48:246 (2) - the break on 00:48:396 sounds unnatural and the stacked notes are easily to be clicked by mistake.. why not just switch that circle to an 1/2 slider and do an adjustment about position~ my example~
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      改了
   7. 01:04:596 (5) - bad appearance for overlapped.. ._.
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   8. 02:32:496 (1) - really plays awkward.. ;w; try this arragement?~
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3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:55:296 (1,3,5) - decreasing the volume of these claps.. noisy to me. ;w; (also same thing at 02:56:496 (1,2,3) - 02:57:696 (1,3,7,9,13,15) -

降了10%...应该好点了
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略累.. 剩下的再说..

Nymph wrote:

一百年后的recheck.

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

臥槽, 我要remap啊, 我要remap, 我要... 好吧我錯了orz.

raririn wrote:

感觉马上rank

1. 建议把Kiai统一一下，特别是Hard里

1. 00:15:096 (1,2,3,4) - 前面stack的感觉有点怪怪的……音乐在这里也是平稳下降的所以我倾向于或者两组stack，或者稳定间距的排布下来

1. 00:20:046 (1) - 感觉上有些多余，而且节奏上也不够干净，所以建议删掉。
2. 01:12:096 (2,3) - 建议交换位置，现在的感觉很拗手
3. 01:16:296 (1) - 不要这么遮挡
4. 01:39:096 (4,5,6,7) - 这里的三连感觉有些莫名，我倾向于选择2组1/2的stack

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ random bubble check~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. 建议把Kiai统一一下，特别是Hard里把hard的统一了 两个I的GD里多放了点烟花于是保留了

[Joker]

1. 00:15:096 (1,2,3,4) - 前面stack的感觉有点怪怪的……音乐在这里也是平稳下降的所以我倾向于或者两组stack，或者稳定间距的排布下来嗯 叠成两组了

[Regou]

1. 00:20:046 (1) - 感觉上有些多余，而且节奏上也不够干净，所以建议删掉。done
2. 01:12:096 (2,3) - 建议交换位置，现在的感觉很拗手done
3. 01:16:296 (1) - 不要这么遮挡fixed
4. 01:39:096 (4,5,6,7) - 这里的三连感觉有些莫名，我倾向于选择2组1/2的stackok

1. Tick 2 is a must on this difficulty.
2. 00:19:896 (5) - How does a player know how slow this is? Note: 00:15:696 (5) -
3. 01:35:946 (1,1) - This overlap needs to go.
4. 01:45:996 (2,1) - This is blatantly unreadable without tick rate 2.
5. 01:55:296 (1) - Is this really a slowdown? It should speed up, if you want to be consistent with 00:57:696 (1) -
6. 02:15:096 (5,6,7,8,1) - The stream needs to go outwards, not inwards.

1. Tick 2 as well.
2. 00:19:896 (4,1) - 0.5 -> 1.5x? Just no. Also the path of the second slider makes this literally almost unreadable, if not unreadable.

dkun wrote:

(Other staff members should be adding their opinions as well on this map.)

SapphireGhost wrote:

However, there is an audience for this kind of map that finds it playable and the unrank is subjective rather than objective.

384059043 wrote:

SapphireGhost wrote:

However, there is an audience for this kind of map that finds it playable and the unrank is subjective rather than objective.

The same opinion

SapphireGhost wrote:

dkun wrote:

(Other staff members should be adding their opinions as well on this map.)

If you need evidence that this map is readable, I was able to sightread Skystar, Regou and Joker and then achieved an FC on all three difficulties (with HD on Regou). I understand that some users find the map less readable, for which the lower difficulties are available. However, there is an audience for this kind of map that finds it playable and the unrank is subjective rather than objective.

I strongly disagree with the unranking of this map and I'm disappointed to see it done so quickly without any discussion in the Moderator's Lounge. If the map was literally impossible to sightread, then I would not have been able to sightread it.

384059043 wrote:

SapphireGhost wrote:

However, there is an audience for this kind of map that finds it playable and the unrank is subjective rather than objective.

The same opinion

kriers wrote:

SapphireGhost wrote:

If you need evidence that this map is readable, I was able to sightread Skystar, Regou and Joker and then achieved an FC on all three difficulties (with HD on Regou). I understand that some users find the map less readable, for which the lower difficulties are available. However, there is an audience for this kind of map that finds it playable and the unrank is subjective rather than objective.

I strongly disagree with the unranking of this map and I'm disappointed to see it done so quickly without any discussion in the Moderator's Lounge. If the map was literally impossible to sightread, then I would not have been able to sightread it.

says one of the best pattern readers in the game.

I certainly hope you don't think your reading capabilities should set the standard for everyone else in this game.

kriers wrote:

SapphireGhost wrote:

If you need evidence that this map is readable, I was able to sightread Skystar, Regou and Joker and then achieved an FC on all three difficulties (with HD on Regou). I understand that some users find the map less readable, for which the lower difficulties are available. However, there is an audience for this kind of map that finds it playable and the unrank is subjective rather than objective.

I strongly disagree with the unranking of this map and I'm disappointed to see it done so quickly without any discussion in the Moderator's Lounge. If the map was literally impossible to sightread, then I would not have been able to sightread it.

says one of the best pattern readers in the game.

I certainly hope you don't think your reading capabilities should set the standard for everyone else in this game.