- t e n n y a - wrote:

m4m ~

[General]

1. The BG kinda questionable and it's unrankable :/ ✘ Seem fine to me
2. make all tags same on all diff o_o ✔
3. delete the osb file?✘ No need to

[Normal]

1. 00:07:256: add note? ✘
2. 01:22:015: move this slider or crtl+r it, the reverse arrow almost hidden by 01:20:732 's slider head ✔
3. 03:40:625: add finish on the slider head? ✔
4. 03:56:026: ^ ✔

[Hard]

1. 00:08:860: add finish on the head? ✔
2. 00:10:785: add finish here ✘ Sound weird and I do not hear finish sound
3. 02:29:716: add note and clap here? ✔
4. 03:47:684: clap? ✔
5. 04:13:994: add finish on the slider head? ✔

that's all nice diff
good luck

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Offset: 1,148 (yours is too late :<) ✔


extend the audio lead-in time ✔

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:063, ends on 01:25:705
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:05:651, ends on 02:36:293
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:30:197, ends on 03:56:186
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:063, ends on 01:25:705
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:05:651, ends on 02:39:020
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:30:197, ends on 04:02:282
✔

[Normal]
00:37:095 (1,2) - not symmetrical :< ✔
00:45:117 (2) - ✔

01:00:839 (2) - romove finish ✘ Feel empty without it
01:24:742 (2) - add a note? ✘ Do something different
01:39:983 - remove finish ✔
01:50:250 - ^ ✔
02:20:411 - ^ ✘ Feel empty without it
02:30:037 (4) - ✔



[Hard]
01:32:110 (3) - ✔

02:39:169 (2) - newcombo here and not the previous ✘ To be consistent with this NC 02:41:575 (1) -
03:48:153 (3) - 1 gird right ✔
03:48:313 (4) - 1-2 girds up ✔
03:50:880 (4) - ummm...not looks so good @.@ ✔
--------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset
GL

Kin wrote:

Hi M4M here ~
Well I think my mod is only nazi stuff <_<
Then, Only suggest except RED ~

general :

No easy diff ? ✘ Unless somebody do guest, This is fine
No sb ? Then delete OSB ✘ Somebody is doing SB I think
Turn off enable countdown ✔
turn off letterbox during break[/color] ✔

Normal :

SV look too hight for normal diff
00:04:998 (4,5,1) - Hard pattern ✘ I follow rhythm here as best and as easy as possible.
00:26:816 (1,2,3) - want to try this ? http://puu.sh/18PqM ✔

144,192,26816,6,0,B|168:260|240:284|308:256|324:192,1,240,4|0
412,165,27779,2,0,B|396:104|312:68|236:112|228:196,1,240,8|0
323,194,28741,1,0

00:53:768 (5) - Move the 4th point to x100 y274 ✔
01:35:479 (2,1) - overlap ✘ If I change position I have to remap again, which I don't want
01:52:164 (2) - move it to x424 y100 ✔
03:13:661 (1) - try this ? http://puu.sh/18PE1 ✔

212,140,79757,2,0,B|260:88|260:88|376:88,1,180,8|0

03:58:902 (3) - try this ? http://puu.sh/18PIC ✔

396,180,238902,2,0,B|360:264|280:260|236:220,1,180,8|0

Hard :

01:34:677 (5) - This slider is bit strange for me, try this http://puu.sh/18PR8 ✔
02:40:452 (5) - you can make this slider better like this : http://puu.sh/18PVa ✔
03:40:613 (1) - ^ : http://puu.sh/18PX1 ✔

that all I can find ~

Good luck for ranking ~

Akashi_S wrote:

My modding is not good, so please bear with me!

RED : Please fix, unrankable
Bold : Strong suggestion
Underline: Mild suggestion
Nothing: Opinion

[General]
Suggestion: One more difficulty around 3.5~3.7 star rating if possible.
Because the BG image is generally blue-ish, so try refraining from using blue-related color for combo...
Clear.

[Normal]
SV seems too FAST for the standard of normal. Because the BPM is pretty fast 187.00, SV should be 1.00 or less in my opinion ✘ I don't think so
Your inherited points are not snapped! Please resnap those! = off by 12ms I think.
00:32:270 (5) - NC here? It seems appropriate to put it here and not making the combo too long.
00:44:784 (1,2) - nazi: Better blanket will look nicer here.
00:47:672 (2,3) - nazi: aesthetically awkward slider combination.
00:52:164 (3) - NC here? ✘
01:11:736 (4) - ^ ✘
01:19:757 (2) - The slider should end at 01:20:399 imo.
01:20:720 (3) - NC here? ✘
01:37:083 (1,2) - Refrain using the circle underneath of sliderend.
01:46:388 (1,2) - nazi: if possible, make it symmetrical.
01:47:351 (2,3,4,5) - This part confuses me.. ✘ Fine unless you have something better
02:22:324 (4) - NC here? ✘
03:26:495 (4) - NC here? ✘ For all the nc's on these parts , I keep same. 3 note combo very short
03:17:832 (3,4) - Distance here please..
03:35:479 (3) - ^ ✘ No spacing error
03:36:442 (5) - Make it more interesting here.. suggestion: 1/1 slider starts at 03:36:442 and 03:37:083
03:47:030 (4) - NC here? ✘
03:49:918 (3) - I think the slider should start at 03:49:918.

[Hard]
00:26:736 (2,3) - Distance here. Keep it consistent.
00:27:458 (4,5) - How about blanket the sliderstart of 5 in the slider 4. ✘ How?
00:31:789 (5) - NC here? ✘ Would not be consistent
01:33:233 (5,1) - nazi: They are kinda close together so it does not look good, try rearrange the position of the notes.
01:36:762 (4,5) - nazi: parallel the curve.
01:43:180 (4) - how about slider starting at 01:43:019 and ends at 01:43:180 ? ✘ Fine as is



Sorry I am lack of time right now.. so I'll stop modding here, I apologize..
The song is super long...

Good luck!

kajiyatta wrote:

hi from your queue (request M4M~)
General
almost suggestions
Normal
Placement
00:39:329(4) maybe move this? (like a triangle)

SPOILER

01:38:046(2) I don't recommend this because it's overlapped with sliders. so for newbie, it's a little difficult. try to replace? e.g.

SPOILER

01:43:500(4) It's not beautiful... maybe this?

SPOILER

01:48:634(4) spacing?
03:09:811(1,2) maybe this?

SPOILER

Rythem
01:12:698(1) well it's ok to fit vocal, but I suppose this. it's more better.

SPOILER

02:48:313(3) maybe this?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:43:500(3) add a clap or finish at head? I can hear it loud voice.
01:52:805(3)^
01:35:479(2) add finish at end? No Change
02:36:442(1) add finish?
04:02:431(1)^
03:30:345(1) add finish at head?

Hard
Placement
00:06:281(1) make beautiful balnket~

SPOILER

01:06:442(4,5) make this symmetrical?

SPOILER

01:33:073(4,5,6) make beautiful~

SPOILER

01:54:089(4,5,6) a bit weird for me. so I suppose this would be more better.

SPOILER

02:06:602(2,3,4) make blanket?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:07:083(3) add clap at reverse?
00:40:773(6) add finish at head?
01:50:078(5)^
03:50:880(4)^
01:22:645(5) delete finish?
04:02:431(1) add finish?

that's all. nice mapset! good luck and star~

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

Hi~

From Mod Request~

[General]
Letterbox during breaks check?
Music Track Leadin1000→2000or3000? ✘ Its enough imo, if more people say I'll change
Folder "OSB,File" Delete

[Hard]
00:36:281 - note
00:36:442 - ~ 00:36:762 - slider?
00:42:217 - Stack is incomplete ✘ I don't understand
00:42:859 - ^
00:43:500 - ^
00:57:939 - 00:57:458 - this slider Ctrl+C(copy)+Ctrl+V+Ctrl+H+Ctrl+J
02:49:276 - http://puu.sh/1aVfI ✘ Its like that? 0.0


[Easy]
00:35:960 - Remove Line?


good luck~

Tsukasa wrote:

Hiya~

Normal:

AR+1 orz
00:02:431 (2) -- Add a whistle to the very end of the slider
00:08:848 (1) -- Add a custom ticksound
00:27:779 (2) -- Add a clap sound at the end of the slider
00:30:354 -- Custom slidertick as well
00:36:762 -- If possible add a note here with clap and probably finish sound just to keep the flow of hitsound consistent
00:39:329 (4) -- Clap sound at the end of the slider
00:40:292 (5) -- Remove the clap at the beginning then add custom ticksound on 00:40:613
01:02:110 (4) -- Add a finish sound to the beginning
01:04:035 (2) -- Make a reverse slider, add a finish to the end, then shorten the next slider to a 1/1 snapping, don't forget a clap at the beginning. Should look like this It follows the song better this way
01:19:757 (2) -- Clap sound at the end of the slider
01:21:682 -- If possible, add a note with clap ✘ For flow reasons I am not.
01:24:249 -- custom ticksound
01:34:516 (1) -- Move the red point a grid right to straighten it out
01:54:089 (4) -- Move the middle point about 2 grids to the right
02:04:356 (1) -- Move the end point a grid down to straighten

Hard:

Nothing out of the ordinary here. Everything seems to check out

R e d wrote:

From my mod queue

[geral]

Need a easy diff


[Hard]

-1 OD because is 4 Min song and 187 bpm (kinda high)

00:01:148 (1) - why whistle? add a finish. No finish in 00:01:789

00:02:110 (2,3) - have low than 1,0 spacing? its ok but with that i my opinion you need to reduce slider speed in 00:01:148 (1) - 00:03:714 (1) -
because it feel fast compared to the spacing of the circles. Try slider speed Custom 0.90

00:04:677 (2) - what about volume hitsound 65% here? make this seems like guitar in growing the volume too

00:06:281 (1) - careful about the sliders. need more symetric.
How you did: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452995 how i did: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452999 (ok mine are not perfect but you get it)

take a look and correct sliders like this. i know its boring but must be done.

00:23:928 - in my opinion a new combo here. because of the lyrcis There no new lyric here 0.0?

00:40:773 (1) - again my opinion new combo here Your very incosistent on your combo's but I don't do it here because I need to add it here too 00:30:025 (5) -

00:41:575 (4) - remove new combo

00:42:217 (1) - new combo

00:42:217 - why volume down to 60%? keep it 70%.

00:42:217 (1) - example of a slider that you can improve

00:43:500 (4) - new combo

00:48:393 (4,5) - NOOOO D: that curve of this 2 circles after a slider. avoid this maybe stack them in end of slider Curve looks pretty to me

00:51:201 new combo

00:52:003 (1) - i dont get why you did new combo here. remove it , New vocal line.

00:52:003 - make a slider and end 00:52:164

00:52:484 - new combo

00:52:484 - i would make a slider here too...

01:14:303 new combo here in my opinion

01:18:955 (2) - move this circle a little more up?

Make 01:33:233 (5) and 01:33:554 (1) Have the same spacing of 01:33:393 (6) and 01:33:554 (1). why? for dont confuse people.

i would put clap here 01:35:158 (6) instead of 01:35:319. Same for same situations in the whole song. But yeah i understard why, because of the drums. But hitsounds are to help player on rytme.. so its weird a Clap on Red tick

01:50:078 new combo?

01:54:089 new combo

01:57:939 new combo

01:59:062 (4) - remove new combo

01:59:222 (1) - add new combo

02:04:356 (7) - new combo

02:04:356 - maybe volume 60%- 65% here

02:09:490 (2,3,4) - feels wierd this slider and the position os the circles

02:11:736 (3,4) - spacing is not the same as 02:11:896 (4,5)

02:14:623 (6) - what about a slider here instead of a circle? And add new combo

02:19:757 (6,7,8) - make all in line. (you need to change slider more "up" and the previews circles

02:22:966 (6,1) - look the spacing.. yeah you know and the voice start 02:23:126! if you dont fix that people gonna click early in 02:23:287 (1)

02:41:575 (1,3) - IMO avoid this because of overlap

02:48:153 - hitsound volume 70% here

02:48:474 - hitsound volume 75% here

03:09:811 - hitsound volume 50%, because 30% is almost nothing imo

03:10:934 (3) - make this slider a clone of 03:09:811 (1).

03:12:057 (1) - make slider start here because of the lyrics and White big tick

03:17:511 (5) - new combo here

03:17:672 (1) - remove new combo

03:23:928 (1) - new combo Imo Not sure :/

03:41:415 (2,3,4) - this 3 circles make a big curve, dont seems your circle style/parttern

03:48:153 (3) - move this 1 grid right to make a better pentagon lol

03:54:570 (4) - make this slider a clone of 03:53:768 (1) and reverse Crtl+r

03:55:372 (6) - same for this

03:58:260 (5) - make this circle in line with 03:57:779 (3)

03:59:543 (3) - i would avoid this because is not the kind of stuff we see in Hard diff. just insane

04:01:308 - new combo fix here IMO

[Normal]

WOOOOOOOOOW SLider speed TOOOOOOO HIGH change to 1,00 or even 0,90.
This gonna be hard to change, i know, but must be made for sure :s

Rest seems fine to me, but i can't mod everything because of the slider speed. really that need to be change.



All the best luck for you Taris

kurohana wrote:

General

1. Inconsistent kiai-times

Normal

1. 00:03:714 (3) - NC and ugly overlap with (2), also the slider could be nicer. Look here for a guide.
2. 00:08:848 (1) - Move up, looks nicer. Spacing remains the same.
3. 00:36:442 (3,4) - Make a nice bow http://puu.sh/1frnj
4. I mean this by sliderpoint
5. 00:43:500 (3) - Last sliderpoint 1 grid up (Should look like this)
6. 00:45:105 (2) - Make better blankets, 2nd sliderpoint 1 grid right, 3rd sliderpoint 2 grids down and 1 grid right.
7. 00:46:228 (1) - The beginning of the slider sounds very off, vocals start at 00:46:388, maybe use a long slider? http://puu.sh/1frrp
8. 00:56:014 (2) - 3rd sliderpoint 2 grids left.
9. 00:58:902 (2) - Stack with 00:56:976 (3)
10. 01:11:736 (4) - NC
11. 01:14:623 (3) - Look here this to make a symmetrical slider.
12. 01:21:682 - Add note to 'highlight' this beat. Also that little break doesn't fit >.>
13. 01:24:730 (5) - Unsnapped slider end.
14. 01:34:516 (1) - Spacing, also ugly overlap with (4)
15. 01:37:083 (1) - Ugly overlap with (4)
16. 01:38:046 (2,3) - Unstack this and form a triangle with the end of slider (1), (2) and the beginning of slider (3). Now you can see, (1) and (3) aren't symmetrical on both sides, move (3) 2 grids left.
17. 01:50:078 (2) - Same as 01:14:623 and set finish on the beginning
18. 01:53:768 (4) - NC
19. 01:57:297 (4,5,6) - Maybe add a slider? Especially (5) and (6) are another rhythm as the rest of the map and hard to recognize for beginners.
20. 02:02:110 (1) - 1 grid left for better blanket.
21. 02:02:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - This placement is hard to read and confusing, and (5) is difficult to see.
22. 02:10:452 - Add note, sounds empty. I want to be consistent with other kiai's so no change.
23. 02:14:623 (2) - Remove clap
24. 02:17:190 (3) - Remove finish
25. 02:18:474 (5) - NC
26. 02:19:757 (7) - Remove finish
27. 02:22:324 (4) - NC
28. 02:23:287 (1) - Same as 01:14:623
29. 02:27:137 - Add note
30. 02:34:998 (3) - NC
31. 02:35:319 (4) - The beginning sounds off. Maybe exchange (3) and (4) on the timeline? Sounds more better.
32. 02:48:313 (3) - Same as 01:14:623
33. 03:13:661 (1) - ^
34. 03:17:832 (5) - NC
35. 03:22:324 (4) - Ugly overlap with (3), maybe move?
36. 03:35:158 - Add note No, The pause in these part is in purpose. I think it fits the rhythm just fine
37. 03:35:800 - ^
38. 03:43:180 (5) - NC
39. 03:47:030 (4) - ^
40. 03:51:843 - Add note
41. 03:54:570 (4,5) - Spacing
42. 03:56:976 - Add note
43. 04:11:415 (4) - NC
44. 04:13:982 (1) - Add finish
45. 04:16:549 (4) - NC

Hard

1. 00:26:014 (6) - Use only 1 repeat to fit the song.
2. 00:29:864 - Add note, you mostly map by vocal.
3. 00:40:131 - ^
4. 01:33:554 (1) - Move to remove this little overlap with (5)
5. 02:04:356 (7) - NC because the music has changed
6. 02:20:399 (8) - Remove clap
7. 03:41:896 (5) - Remove finish
8. 03:49:757 (1) - Remove NC No, To be consistent with 02:24:891 (1) -
9. 03:50:880 (4) - NC ^ for consistency with 02:26:174 (5) -
10. 03:52:484 (1) - Remove NC No, for consistency with other kiai's combo (02:27:779 (1) - )
11. 04:15:586 (5,6) - Move like this?

Let's see, maybe i take a look on it when you did the changes ^^

SC-DrawerX3 wrote:

M4M~

Normal

00:09:811 add note? this would keep the beat and sound better. No, I'm following the vocals
01:08:848 (3) - Make slider more Symetrical (move Middle slider point two grid right, move whole slider
1 grid left,
01:14:623 (3) - Make more symetrical
02:18:153 (1) - move one grid left
02:24:891 (2) - move one grid right or maby two grid
02:49:276 (4) - move one grid down
03:51:843 (2) - add clap

Hard

00:43:500 (1) - Move first sliderpoint on grid up and 3rd sliderpoint on grid left
01:47:511 (5) - Remove finish or set the volume on 40/50%
02:10:131 (4) - remove finish No, Finish sounds right here.

Really Neat Maps, good job :3

Good luck~

Lizellota wrote:

Hello~ sorry for quick check...i dont like the song and this song is so long ;_;
offset +3
[Hard]
00:26:014 (6) - add a repeat
00:31:789 (5) - NC
00:39:329 (2) - finish
00:41:575 (1) - remove NC
00:42:217 (3) - NC
00:46:388 (1) - remove NC? and maybe add clap on the slider tail?
00:47:190 (3) - NC
00:53:607 (2) - remove finish
00:53:768 (3) - finish
01:09:811 (9) - remove finish
01:10:452 - finish must be here
01:15:586 (5) - NC
01:17:190 (1) - remove NC
01:45:746 (1) - ^
01:46:388 (3) - NC
01:50:880 (1) - remove NC
01:51:522 (3) - NC
01:55:693 (1) - remove NC
01:56:495 (3) - NC
01:59:062 (1) - remove NC
01:59:222 (2) - NC
02:21:041 - finish
02:26:174 (5) - NC
02:27:779 (1) - remove NC
02:31:308 (7) - NC
02:32:912 (1) - remove NC
02:34:998 - finish
02:41:575 (1) - remove NC
02:41:736 (2) - NC
02:46:709 (1) - remove NC
02:46:869 (2) - NC
03:26:495 (3) - 1 grid left

Good luck ></ and sorry again

Saten wrote:

Geso!

[Hard]
00:01:156 (1) - finish on start
00:05:968 (6) - remove whistle from start
00:10:300 (5,6) - why are these using 1,1x spacing?
00:21:690 (1) - whistle on repeat & end
00:22:653 (2) - remove whistle
00:22:813 (3) - whistle on start
00:23:455 (4) - ^
00:24:899 (3) - ^
00:25:380 (4) - ^
00:25:861 (5) - whistle
00:36:450 (9) - Clap on start feels kinda weird for some reason. Remove it?
00:41:583 (3) - clap on start & second repeat
00:54:257 (5) - clap on start
00:58:910 (8) - remove finish from start?
01:07:893 - feels like something is missing here
01:18:482 (1) - remove finish from start & add clap instead
01:19:284 (3) - clap on start
01:50:888 (3) - clap on start & second repeat
01:56:503 (3) - finish on start
02:40:460 (5) - clap on start
03:07:252 (1) - finish
03:49:605 - feels like something's missing
04:01:316 (1) - clap
04:18:000 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]
00:56:022 (2,3,1) - obvious distance error
01:45:113 (6) - finish on end
01:46:396 (1) - finish on start
01:48:963 (1) - finish
01:50:086 (3) - finish on start
01:55:701 (1) - finish
01:56:022 (2) - finish on end
02:00:514 (3) - clap on end
03:07:252 (1) - finish
03:12:385 (3) - whistle
03:16:877 (3) - ^
03:21:369 (3,4,5) - another obvious distance error
03:21:369 (3,4,5) - finish on start


That's it
Good luck de geso