Hi Yli. Mod Time :3[Weakness:]
• 00:11:844 (4): I feel this Note unnecesary, it doesn't make a lot of sense adding a Note to follow a Note in a section where you have especially just the piano. To follow just the piano, I'd remove this Note
• 00:15:701 (2): I'd move this Note to the middle (
x:256 y:256), in my opinion looks better than before and makes a better transition
• 00:38:844 (1): I'd add a Whistle here to emphatisize the Piano
• 00:49:558 (3,4): The sentence
'Because of you' it is the most important in the song (well, this is the name). So, in my personal point of view this sentence should be 100% followed with beats. To don't make a difficult pattern to new players (meh.. anyways the BPM is low
), transform (3,4) in a 1/2 slider and after that add a Note in 00:50:415
• 02:03:271 (2,3): Actually flow better if you do a Ctrl + J in these objects and then move it to
x:220 y:268• 02:47:414 (4): Add a Whistle at the beginning to follow the piano and the Vocal properly
• 02:51:700: Add a Normal hitsound here instead of that Whistle
• 03:16:557 (4): The Whistle at the end is really unnecesary you don't have anything to remark at this point. Remove it please
• 03:17:629: I have to do agree with Gabe about that, the difference between (4,1) is preety high and the New players will not know what to do. I suggest you a little break here, at least
this makes the player put more attention in my opinion
[Mistake:]
Settings:--> I feel the approach rate a bit high for this difficulty, I'd reduce it by 1 Tick instead (AR-1)
• 00:11:844 (7): Nothing to remark at the Slider end.. Remove this Whistle please
• 00:33:701 (3): You should follow the Vocal and piano nearer since it is a Normal, I don't how it plays the repetition in this Slider either.. Try a pattern like this to follow the music better
• 00:52:558 (4): This Slider looks weird looking the flow, Could you rotate it 180º Clockwise + Flip Horizontally then?
• 02:51:700: As I said in
Weakness, you should add a Normal hitsound instead of a Whistle
• 03:16:557 (5): Remove the Whistle at the end as I said in
Weakness[Fault:]
• 00:13:129 (1): Remove the Whistle from this Note as I stated in
Mistake• 00:18:915 (3,4): Wait.. I didn't understand this jump, it feels really unnecesary. With a Flip Horizontal (Ctrl+H), the pattern will look more fluent (Re-arrange the spacing a bit after to do that)
• 00:29:844 (3): Listen properly the music (I'd say in 25% playback), the Slider end is not following anything in the music. Just replace this 1/4 Slider to a Simple Note in here to follow the music properly
• 00:33:487 (4): To follow properly the Vocal, make this Slider 1/4 longer
• 00:43:558 (4,1): Increase the distance between these Notes to 2.0x, if you let the distance in 1.0x between these Notes the flow won't be the best because actually when you play the map you can feel an unnecesary stop after to the 2.0x jump between the previous (2,3,4).
• 01:05:843 (2,3): Hmm.. I didn't understand this antijump, the antijumps should follow just the sentence
'Because of you' I guess, just keep the 1,0x between these Notes.
• 01:17:415 (5,1): This overlap looks preety bad. If I were you, I'd move this Note to another place, you can maybe move to
x:184 y:160• 01:40:129 (3): Hmm.. Add a New Combo here to make the pattern Antijump - Jump more readable
• 01:40:557 (5,1): Increase the Spacing between these notes to 2.0x as I explained in 00:43:558
• 02:02:414 (2,3): Keep the 1.0x between these Notes, the antijump is really unnecesary here
• 02:31:343
(x): Add a Note here to follow the Vocal properly
• 02:51:700 (3,4,1): Since this is in 1/6, the Spacing increase could be Hard to be read. If you want to increase the spacing here, is ok, but I suggest you to reduce it a bit. At least make the spacing between these Notes around 1.6x or 1.7x
• 03:10:986 (6,7): Again this unnecesary antijump, please avoid that here please
• 03:13:986 (1,2,3,4,5): The pattern 'Antijump - Jump' plays bad here, the Drums are acting here, and when you have Drums acting you use jumps instead.. Use the 1.0x between (1,2,3), then the jump pattern fit perfectly
• 03:16:557 (5): Remove the Whistle at the end as I mentioned in the previous diffs.
• 03:25:129 (3,1): Swap the Whistle placement in these Notes, the whistle sounds much more reasonable if you add in (3) because will remark the piano
• 03:26:843 (4): Add a Whistle at the Slider beginning
• 03:29:414 (3): The symetry is not that important. This Slider doesn't fit really well here, instead of that use 2 single Notes in 03:29:414 and 03:30:271 (with NC and finish this one), because those places are the only to add beats.
[Kyshiro's Mystery:]
• 00:02:630 (7): This Slider doesn't sound fitting, I recommend you to listen the music in 25% playback. I'm sure that you don't have anything to be followed at the beginning of it, so remove this Slider and add a Single Note in 00:02:844
• 00:04:558 (5): I have to do agree with Kiddo about this point. This slider doesn't fit with the music, the Vocal is not placed on a Blue tick.. Hmm.. Kiddo's idea is much better than yours (sorry), you should change that please, and break this 'border', because the rhythm is much more important than a simple border
• 00:10:772 (2): Again you are not following the music properly (25% playback please), change this Slider to a simple Note in 00:10:987, to follow the piano
• 00:21:701 (4): Replace the Whistle in a Finish instead, the Piano becomes highest in this place
• 00:28:558 (5): Add a Finish in this note, same reason as above
• 01:37:343 (8): The long Vocal starts here, this note is really unnecesary. Would be better if you remove the Note from here and then the Spinner starts here and finish in 01:38:843. This kind of musics with low BPM are not like the others with higher BPM where you can add a Note 1/4 before and the spinner sounds properly, if you want to do this kind of things you should add a Note + a Spinner 1/8 later and
NOT 1/4
• 02:31:129 (1): Listen that in 25% playback, you don't have anything in 1/8 to follow. Change this in 1/4 please, because this is consider an overmap
• 02:32:843 (5): (^)
• 02:38:629 (6,7): Add a Soft finish in (7) and remove it from (6)
• 02:39:057: I'd add a break till here to 02:44:414, it is a really long map to don't have any break. At least a little would be good to give a little respite to players
And that's about it.. Well done difficulties.
The biggest problems are in Fault, but anyways are not that big xD
Call me back for a recheck after to check my mod!