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Junichi Masuda - Battle! Champion Iris

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okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 11, 2013 at 4:27:11 PM

Artist: Junichi Masuda
Title: Battle! Champion Iris
Source: Pokemon Black/White 2
Tags: DakeDekaane chaotic_iak
BPM: 192
Filesize: 20630kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Champion (5 stars, 301 notes)
  2. Elite Four DakeDekaane (4.68 stars, 212 notes)
  3. Gym Leader Chao (3.99 stars, 146 notes)
  4. Trainer (2 stars, 101 notes)
Download: Junichi Masuda - Battle! Champion Iris
Download: Junichi Masuda - Battle! Champion Iris (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Champion Iris' Theme from pokemon Black/White 2 (she's a champion)
Gym Leader done by chaotic_iak
Elite Four done by DakeDekaane
Trainer and Champion by Me
Made inprovement in Champion Diff
If you downloaded the map before 12/17/2012 please redownload
[Mods]
SPOILER
chaoic_iak
- t e n n y a -
nanaz0r
sherrie__fay
JudgeTheDude
Static Noise Bird
SuperMoutarde
TMAstraf
Hellzero
nanda2009
[Stars]
SPOILER
DakeDekaane
chaotic_iak
Yu-Izanagi-12
cirno
sheela901
Back from the grave
Last edited by okamiratsu , edited 46 times in total.
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak
Yay since I like the song.

Red needs to be changed or otherwise unrankable, Black should be changed but not necessary, Blue may be changed because most likely it's just above my skill level.

[General]
Why forced skin -_- Up to you.
Maybe don't silent the spinners...
I'd use 01:12:710 as preview point.

[Trainer]
Add more lead in probably?
Easy shouldn't have slider velocity that fast. Even Normal shouldn't. I'm assuming this is either Easy or Normal, so my mod is basically broken to two.
00:04:585 (5,1) - Maintain spacing
00:09:272 (1) - More gap after spinner for Easy/Normal
00:20:678 (1) - 2.5-beat gap is rather hard to judge for Easy
00:21:616 - To maintain rhythm there should be some object here for Easy/Normal
00:22:710 - ^
00:24:116 - ^
00:30:210 - Put some object to maintain consistency (00:32:710 (1) has an object)
00:41:616 (1,1,1) - Preferably not three consecutive spinners in Easy/Normal, since they seem confusing
00:46:303 (1) - More gap after spinner
00:53:335 (2) - Kinda hidden by previous 4
01:06:147 (1) - More gap after spinner
01:18:803 (4) - Don't stack for Easy
01:28:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't put 1/2-beat gaps in Easy

[Elite Four]
01:25:522 (5) - Hidden by previous spinner

[Champion]
No problem!

Yay. Trainer has basically problematic slider velocity and difficulty on maintaining consistencies, but otherwise you're pretty good. Yay.

EDIT: OH WAIT I JUST REALIZED THAT YOU ASKED FOR A GUEST DIFF HERE. Okay guest diff will come soon.
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

chaotic_iak wrote:

Yay since I like the song.

Red needs to be changed or otherwise unrankable, Black should be changed but not necessary, Blue may be changed because most likely it's just above my skill level.

[General]
Why forced skin -_- Up to you.
Maybe don't silent the spinners...Changed to 30
I'd use 01:12:710 as preview point.Done

[Trainer]
Add more lead in probably?It's 2 seconds now
Easy shouldn't have slider velocity that fast. Even Normal shouldn't. I'm assuming this is either Easy or Normal, so my mod is basically broken to two.This is easy, Gymleader is normal (your diff), Elite Four is Hard, and Champion is Insane
00:04:585 (5,1) - Maintain spacing
00:09:272 (1) - More gap after spinner for Easy/Normal
00:20:678 (1) - 2.5-beat gap is rather hard to judge for Easy
00:21:616 - To maintain rhythm there should be some object here for Easy/Normal
00:22:710 - ^
00:24:116 - ^
00:30:210 - Put some object to maintain consistency (00:32:710 (1) has an object)
00:41:616 (1,1,1) - Preferably not three consecutive spinners in Easy/Normal, since they seem confusing No change
00:46:303 (1) - More gap after spinner
00:53:335 (2) - Kinda hidden by previous
01:06:147 (1) - More gap after spinner
01:18:803 (4) - Don't stack for Easy
01:28:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't put 1/2-beat gaps in Easy
All Done

[Elite Four]
01:25:522 (5) - Hidden by previous spinner Done

[Champion]
No problem! :)

Yay. Trainer has basically problematic slider velocity and difficulty on maintaining consistencies, but otherwise you're pretty good. Yay.

EDIT: OH WAIT I JUST REALIZED THAT YOU ASKED FOR A GUEST DIFF HERE. Okay guest diff will come soon.
Thank you for the mod
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak
http://puu.sh/16TWI

In case you don't know: Save the file in the song's folder ("[your osu! folder]/Songs/Junichi Masuda - Battle! Champion Iris" most likely).

Yes I know it's Gym Leader Chao and not Gym Leader. If you don't want the "Chao" part as an attribution to me, you can remove it; I don't really mind. But add my name (chaotic_iak) in the tags.

Yes it comes difficult in the kiai time. I just feel it fits perfectly, since the song becomes very uplifting and such. I have HP Drain of 2 to balance it somewhat.
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

chaotic_iak wrote:

http://puu.sh/16TWI

In case you don't know: Save the file in the song's folder ("[your osu! folder]/Songs/Junichi Masuda - Battle! Champion Iris" most likely).

Yes I know it's Gym Leader Chao and not Gym Leader. If you don't want the "Chao" part as an attribution to me, you can remove it; I don't really mind. But add my name (chaotic_iak) in the tags.

Yes it comes difficult in the kiai time. I just feel it fits perfectly, since the song becomes very uplifting and such. I have HP Drain of 2 to balance it somewhat.
thanks a lot i'll update it
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak
Edited: http://puu.sh/17e6g

Also I'd say don't use white combo color, because white + kiai = flashing. Bad.
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

chaotic_iak wrote:

Edited: http://puu.sh/17e6g

Also I'd say don't use white combo color, because white + kiai = flashing. Bad.
Alright I changed to color and updated
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak
Hm... Why the beatmap link has a video, I'm sure I downloaded with video, but there is no video in the resulting folder?
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
sorry about my lateness ><
from my queue

[General]
  1. I'm sure that you wont need the playfield, mod selection, ranking tab, menu button background, ranking numbers, ranking menu, and star. because it wont show up in the map.
  2. please add reverse-arrow.png to complete the skin
[Trainer]
  1. 00:37:710- make this slider nice owo?
[Gym Teacher Chao]
  1. 00:45:835- slider 2 and 3 are so close, repair them would be nice
  2. 01:27:866 - almost hidden by previous slider. repair them?
  3. 01:30:366 - ^
[Elite Four]
  1. 00:24:585 - add whistle at the slider would nice
Champion diff should be fine since it's good to me.
you need to strengthen your slider shape

that's all from me, good luck :3
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane

- t e n n y a - wrote:

sorry about my lateness ><
from my queue

[Elite Four]
  1. 00:24:585 - add whistle at the slider would nice /*Added
Also I've corrected some hitsounds.

Update~
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Champion Iris.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1985
PreviewTime: 72710
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Battle! Champion Iris
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:okamiratsu
Version:Elite Four
Source:Pokemon Black/White 2
Tags:DakeDekaane chaotic_iak
BeatmapID:178223
BeatmapSetID:59338

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"d18edaf4dfbfe623bc42827c4f4c4e78-d57ija8.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Combo4 : 168,84,0
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212,148,80991,1,2,0:0:0
212,148,81147,1,0,0:0:0
212,148,81303,1,2,0:0:0
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okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

- t e n n y a - wrote:

sorry about my lateness >< No problem
from my queue

[General]
  1. I'm sure that you wont need the playfield, mod selection, ranking tab, menu button background, ranking numbers, ranking menu, and star. because it wont show up in the map. Done
  2. please add reverse-arrow.png to complete the skin
Done

[Trainer]
  1. 00:37:710- make this slider nice owo?
Done

[Gym Teacher Chao]
  1. 00:45:835- slider 2 and 3 are so close, repair them would be nice Done
  2. 01:27:866 - almost hidden by previous slider. repair them? Done
  3. 01:30:366 - ^
Done

[Elite Four]
  1. 00:24:585 - add whistle at the slider would nice
Done

Champion diff should be fine since it's good to me.
you need to strengthen your slider shape :)

that's all from me, good luck :3
thanks for modding
nanaz0r
46 posts
Joined December 2009
nanaz0r
Welp this is just all spacing suggestions and I just kinda skimmed through the map sorry orz



[General]
I noticed that at the end the spinners don't end at the same time.

[Trainer]
00:02:710 (2,3,4) Move (2) 5 grids to right and (4) one grid up
00:11:460 (1,2,3,1,2,3) my suggestion
SPOILER
00:23:178 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
SPOILER
00:29:897 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ^
SPOILER
00:32:710 (1,2,3,4,5) Move (1) one grid to the right, (4) down one grid, and (5) up one grid then 2 grids to the left
01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5) I'd fix this spacing


[Gym Leader Chao]
Remove the bookmarks?


[Elite Four]
The video plays in the other difficulties, but not this one o_o


Good luck~ and pokemon ftw :)
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
I just realized why my diff shows no video

Trainer, Gym Leader, Champion
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"d18edaf4dfbfe623bc42827c4f4c4e78-d57ija8.jpg"
Video,0,"Battle(xvid).avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Elite Four

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"d18edaf4dfbfe623bc42827c4f4c4e78-d57ija8.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Add the video as a background in my diff or add the video line in my diff's .osu file, that should fix it.
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

nanaz0r wrote:

Welp this is just all spacing suggestions and I just kinda skimmed through the map sorry orz



[General]
I noticed that at the end the spinners don't end at the same time. You have to be more specific

[Trainer] All Done
00:02:710 (2,3,4) Move (2) 5 grids to right and (4) one grid up
00:11:460 (1,2,3,1,2,3) my suggestion
SPOILER
00:23:178 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
SPOILER
00:29:897 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ^
SPOILER
00:32:710 (1,2,3,4,5) Move (1) one grid to the right, (4) down one grid, and (5) up one grid then 2 grids to the left
01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5) I'd fix this spacing


[Gym Leader Chao]
Remove the bookmarks? Done


[Elite Four]
The video plays in the other difficulties, but not this one o_o Fixed


Good luck~ and pokemon ftw :)
Thanks for modding
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak
Apparently I have a different update than okamiratsu. A pretty large update: http://puu.sh/1hPf1

Also bookmarks are for my convenience, at least until this map starts to be bubbled.

I see what nanaz0r meant:
End of last spinners:
Trainer: 01:32:710 (and this starts differently anyway)
Gym Leader Chao: 01:36:460
Elite Four: 01:37:710
Champion: No last spinner
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

chaotic_iak wrote:

Apparently I have a different update than okamiratsu. A pretty large update: http://puu.sh/1hPf1

Also bookmarks are for my convenience, at least until this map starts to be bubbled.

I see what nanaz0r meant:
End of last spinners:
Trainer: 01:32:710 (and this starts differently anyway)
Gym Leader Chao: 01:36:460
Elite Four: 01:37:710
Champion: No last spinner
I added your update and about the spinner thing I want to keep champion without ending spinner
Aurele
Global Moderator
7,514 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Pokémooon <3

Also, is the video neccesary? I really think it's useless and I prefer playing with this beautiful background.
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

Gabe wrote:

Pokémooon <3

Also, is the video neccesary? I really think it's useless and I prefer playing with this beautiful background.
Yes i think is neccesary since its the actually song that plays while battling her plus I edited the video so that when the music starts its the exact same time the battle starts
Aurele
Global Moderator
7,514 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Mkay good, also:

Some of your skin's elements are not used, which means you have to delete them since they are.. useless.
unused files
playfield.png
menu-button-background.png
ranking-A.png
ranking-B.png
ranking-C.png
ranking-D.png
ranking-S.png
ranking-SH.png
ranking-accuracy.png
ranking-back.png
ranking-graph.png
ranking-maxcombo.png
ranking-panel.png
ranking-perfect.png
selection-mods.png
selection-mods-over.png
selection-options.png
selection-options-over.png
selection-random.png
selection-random-over.png
selection-selectoptions.png
selection-selectoptions-over.png
Hope that's it.
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

Gabe wrote:

Mkay good, also:

Some of your skin's elements are not used, which means you have to delete them since they are.. useless.
unused files
playfield.png
menu-button-background.png
ranking-A.png
ranking-B.png
ranking-C.png
ranking-D.png
ranking-S.png
ranking-SH.png
ranking-accuracy.png
ranking-back.png
ranking-graph.png
ranking-maxcombo.png
ranking-panel.png
ranking-perfect.png
selection-mods.png
selection-mods-over.png
selection-options.png
selection-options-over.png
selection-random.png
selection-random-over.png
selection-selectoptions.png
selection-selectoptions-over.png
Hope that's it.
I deleted those already, If they aren't, I don't see the "full submit" option on the upload part anymore
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
req from scorpiour's baka queue 0 0
sherrie for rule-breakers
=A=infact he asked me to do this
sco is a good person indeed

[General]
  1. if your skin is from this map you should ask Chibi_Fox for skin permission 0 0
  2. delete all bookmarks to make your beatmap looks tidily~
[Easy]
  1. you should have only one distance spacing in this diff 0 0
  2. 00:09:272 (1) - finish.and for new players this spinner should end at 00:10:835 -
  3. 00:15:210 (1) - should end at 00:19:585 -
  4. 00:29:897 (1) - +finish
  5. 00:40:210 (1,2,3) - confusing. change it to a reverse slider plz 0 0
  6. 00:46:303 (1) - should start from 00:46:460 - . and should add finish
  7. 01:22:710 (1) - ends here. 01:24:585 -
  8. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing rhythm for mew players. change it to sliders or easier rhythm.
  9. 01:28:178 (1,2,3) - move them to 01:28:022 -
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:897 (8) - stack not well.and looks ugly with 00:15:210 (1,2) -
  2. 01:12:710 (1) - finish at start
  3. 01:32:866 (1) - +finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:428 (3,4,5) - the rhythm should be ↓
    SPOILER
  2. 00:20:522 (1,2,4) - stack not well
  3. 00:30:366 (1) - +finish
  4. 00:51:460 (3) - finish at end
  5. 01:10:210 (1,2) - better a short slider should be instead
  6. 01:25:522 (5,6) - ctrl+G
  7. 01:32:710 (1) - silence spinner end
[Champion]
  1. 00:02:710 (5) - clap at end
  2. 00:07:397 (2) - 1 grid down and 1 grid right(grid level 3
  3. 00:13:178 (4) - fix the blanket slider shape
  4. 00:27:241 (8) - clap
  5. 00:57:710 (6) - stack not well with 00:57:085 (4) - . and clap here
  6. 00:59:585 (10) - NC should start here, not 01:00:210 (1) -
  7. 01:19:428 (3) - this rhythm confusing. try to cut the slider and add notes.
    for example
    SPOILER
  8. 01:20:991 (6) - NC
  9. 01:32:241 (5) - NC
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane

sherrie__fay wrote:

req from scorpiour's baka queue 0 0
sherrie for rule-breakers
=A=infact he asked me to do this
sco is a good person indeed

[Hard]
  1. 00:09:428 (3,4,5) - the rhythm should be ↓ /*Done
    SPOILER
  2. 00:20:522 (1,2,4) - stack not well /*Fixed all I could do.
  3. 00:30:366 (1) - +finish /*It doesn't sounds good for me there, as it's on a red tick, but put a finish in 00:30:210
  4. 00:51:460 (3) - finish at end /*Added clap instead, sounds better imo.
  5. 01:10:210 (1,2) - better a short slider should be instead /*I don't feel as there should be a slider there, as there are strong hits (I don't know how to explain, but I feel better smashing the buttons there than holding them for a while)
  6. 01:25:522 (5,6) - ctrl+G /*Done
  7. 01:32:710 (1) - silence spinner end /*I made a simple fade out, I guess that is what you are trying to say.
Thanks for mod :3

Update goes here~
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Champion Iris.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1985
PreviewTime: 72710
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Battle! Champion Iris
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:okamiratsu
Version:Elite Four
Source:Pokemon Black/White 2
Tags:DakeDekaane chaotic_iak
BeatmapID:178223
BeatmapSetID:59338

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"d18edaf4dfbfe623bc42827c4f4c4e78-d57ija8.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
210,312.5,4,2,0,70,1,0
10210,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
20522,-100,4,2,0,90,0,0
30366,-90.9090909090909,4,1,0,80,0,0
38960,-90.9090909090909,4,2,0,90,0,0
40210,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
55210,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
56460,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
57710,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
58960,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
72710,-90.9090909090909,4,1,0,75,0,1
92710,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
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95210,-100,4,1,0,20,0,0
96460,-100,4,1,0,10,0,0
97710,-100,4,1,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 168,84,0
Combo5 : 255,255,0

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240,240,43491,2,0,B|244:192,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,232,44116,5,0,0:0:0
384,204,44272,1,8,0:0:0
340,116,44585,1,0,0:0:0
384,140,44741,1,8,0:0:0
420,48,45053,5,0,0:0:0
368,44,45210,1,4,0:0:0
320,40,45366,2,0,B|220:48,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,40,45991,2,0,B|72:36,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,124,46616,5,0,0:0:0
144,164,46772,1,8,0:0:0
208,240,47085,1,0,0:0:0
160,224,47241,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,47553,5,0,0:0:0
308,192,47710,2,0,B|388:188|448:140,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,48803,1,0,0:0:0
204,192,48960,1,0,0:0:0
156,192,49116,2,0,B|228:264,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,192,49585,2,0,B|224:120,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,108,50210,6,0,B|388:140|388:244|324:276,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,192,51147,1,8,0:0:0
208,112,51460,2,0,B|144:144|144:248|208:280,2,200,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,53960,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,54585,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,55210,12,8,58960,0:0:0
256,192,59272,6,0,B|312:192|348:160,2,100
156,192,60210,6,0,B|108:192,3,50,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
12,156,60991,1,0,0:0:0
12,156,61147,1,0,0:0:0
84,84,61460,2,0,B|124:48|176:48,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,48,62085,6,0,B|324:48,3,50,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,84,62866,1,0,0:0:0
420,84,63022,1,0,0:0:0
464,176,63335,2,0,B|464:228|432:268,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
340,312,63960,6,0,B|292:312,3,50,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,276,64741,1,0,0:0:0
196,276,64897,1,0,0:0:0
156,184,65210,2,0,B|200:156|256:156,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,192,65835,5,2,0:0:0
260,68,66303,1,2,0:0:0
112,44,66772,1,2,0:0:0
8,152,67241,1,2,0:0:0
8,152,67397,1,0,0:0:0
108,140,67710,6,0,B|168:192|244:200,3,150
292,200,69272,1,0,0:0:0
340,192,69428,1,0,0:0:0
388,176,69585,1,8,0:0:0
432,156,69741,1,8,0:0:0
472,124,69897,1,0,0:0:0
504,84,70053,1,0,0:0:0
496,36,70210,5,8,0:0:0
448,28,70366,1,2,0:0:0
300,20,70835,1,2,0:0:0
156,156,71460,6,0,B|156:108,3,50,4|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,192,72241,2,0,B|252:192,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,72710,12,4,74428,0:0:0
184,160,74741,5,0,0:0:0
224,108,74897,1,0,0:0:0
288,108,75053,1,0,0:0:0
328,160,75210,1,0,0:0:0
256,336,75522,1,0,0:0:0
256,272,75678,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,75835,12,4,77241,0:0:0
364,284,77866,5,2,0:0:0
420,252,78022,1,0,0:0:0
452,196,78178,1,2,0:0:0
364,96,78491,2,0,B|364:66|388:47,2,55.0000016784668,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,79116,1,2,0:0:0
224,248,79272,1,0,0:0:0
168,280,79428,1,2,0:0:0
88,100,79897,5,8,0:0:0
276,32,80366,6,0,B|330:32,2,55.0000016784668,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,148,80991,1,2,0:0:0
212,148,81147,1,0,0:0:0
212,148,81303,1,2,0:0:0
300,248,81616,2,4,B|376:200|380:112,1,165.000005035401
276,32,82397,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,82710,12,4,84428,0:0:0
184,224,84741,5,0,0:0:0
224,276,84897,1,0,0:0:0
288,276,85053,1,0,0:0:0
328,224,85210,1,0,0:0:0
256,48,85522,1,0,0:0:0
256,112,85678,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,85835,12,4,87241,0:0:0
364,100,87866,5,2,0:0:0
420,132,88022,1,0,0:0:0
452,188,88178,1,2,0:0:0
364,288,88491,2,0,B|364:319|387:339,2,55.0000016784668,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,89116,1,2,0:0:0
224,136,89272,1,0,0:0:0
168,104,89428,1,2,0:0:0
88,284,89897,5,8,0:0:0
276,352,90366,6,0,B|332:352,2,55.0000016784668,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,236,90991,1,2,0:0:0
212,236,91147,1,0,0:0:0
212,236,91303,1,2,0:0:0
148,120,91616,6,0,B|92:120,2,55.0000016784668,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,120,92241,1,2,0:0:0
280,120,92397,1,0,0:0:0
280,120,92553,1,2,0:0:0
256,192,92710,12,0,97710,0:0:0
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Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
can i has taiko guests ? ;w;

futsuu/oni if possible
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

sherrie__fay wrote:

req from scorpiour's baka queue 0 0
sherrie for rule-breakers
=A=infact he asked me to do this
sco is a good person indeed

[General]
  1. if your skin is from this map you should ask Chibi_Fox for skin permission 0 0
  2. delete all bookmarks to make your beatmap looks tidily~
[Easy]
  1. you should have only one distance spacing in this diff 0 0Distance snap is 1
  2. 00:09:272 (1) - finish.and for new players this spinner should end at 00:10:835 - fixed
  3. 00:15:210 (1) - should end at 00:19:585 - done
  4. 00:29:897 (1) - +finishdone
  5. 00:40:210 (1,2,3) - confusing. change it to a reverse slider plz 0 0 Done
  6. 00:46:303 (1) - should start from 00:46:460 - . and should add finishdone
  7. 01:22:710 (1) - ends here. 01:24:585 - done
  8. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing rhythm for mew players. change it to sliders or easier rhythm.Fixed
  9. 01:28:178 (1,2,3) - move them to 01:28:022 -done
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:897 (8) - stack not well.and looks ugly with 00:15:210 (1,2) -fixed
  2. 01:12:710 (1) - finish at startdone
  3. 01:32:866 (1) - +finishdone
[Hard] "look at previous post of this diff"
  1. 00:09:428 (3,4,5) - the rhythm should be ↓
    SPOILER
  2. 00:20:522 (1,2,4) - stack not well
  3. 00:30:366 (1) - +finish
  4. 00:51:460 (3) - finish at end
  5. 01:10:210 (1,2) - better a short slider should be instead
  6. 01:25:522 (5,6) - ctrl+G
  7. 01:32:710 (1) - silence spinner end
[Champion]
  1. 00:02:710 (5) - clap at enddone
  2. 00:07:397 (2) - 1 grid down and 1 grid right(grid level 3fixed
  3. 00:13:178 (4) - fix the blanket slider shapefixed?
  4. 00:27:241 (8) - clapdone
  5. 00:57:710 (6) - stack not well with 00:57:085 (4) - . and clap heredone
  6. 00:59:585 (10) - NC should start here, not 01:00:210 (1) - done
  7. 01:19:428 (3) - this rhythm confusing. try to cut the slider and add notes.no change
    for example
    SPOILER
  8. 01:20:991 (6) - NCdone
  9. 01:32:241 (5) - NCno change
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak

sherrie__fay wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:897 (8) - stack not well.and looks ugly with 00:15:210 (1,2) - Fixed
  2. 01:12:710 (1) - finish at start Done
  3. 01:32:866 (1) - +finish Done
Thanks! http://puu.sh/1kroN
JudgeTheDude
595 posts
Joined September 2011
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my queue.
Sorry for the very long delay :?

[Trainer]
Seems ok

[Gym Leader Chaos]
00:10:210 (1) - This shape is weird, you can do it like this 00:11:460 (3)
00:10:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I also don't like that placings in general, the notes seems to be placed too randomly, and this shape 00:13:960 (7) is really weird.
I don't like the hitsounds in this diff in general, but I'm not a hitsound modder. It's just my opinion.

[Elite Four]
Seems ok

[Champion]
01:26:460 (6,7) - Stack them better please, put 7 right under 6's end

That's all, good luck for rank ^^
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak

JudgeTheDude wrote:

[Gym Leader Chaos]
00:10:210 (1) - This shape is weird, you can do it like this 00:11:460 (3)
00:10:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I also don't like that placings in general, the notes seems to be placed too randomly, and this shape 00:13:960 (7) is really weird.
The motivation is the sliders 1,3,5,7 are broken by out-of-track circles 2,4,6,8. I'll think up another way to make it better if the current state is too bad.
I don't like the hitsounds in this diff in general, but I'm not a hitsound modder. It's just my opinion. My general hitsound style aka pretty large use of them :P
Thanks! No update since nothing is changed.
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Hey Hey Hey D: Can i make a guest diff?
PLEASEEEEEEEE >w< i love the song XD
Also check your pms >w<
Birdy
5,741 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
[General]
01:00:210 to 01:07:710 - Use 1/6 signature for this section

[Trainer]
00:00:210 (1) - Would be better as symmetrical.
00:02:710 (2,3,4) - Jumps in Easy diff is not a good thing.
00:20:210 - Why not add something?
00:22:710 - ^
00:50:835 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps, nonono.
00:52:710 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Actually this whole part is rather bad for constant spacing changes. Do something proper.
00:58:335 (4) - Touches next slider.
00:58:960 (5) - Not very good shape.
01:00:210 (1) - Put sliderpoints on ticks.
01:02:085 (1) - Bad shape.
01:04:897 (2,3,4,5) - Don't stack so much.
01:09:585 (1) - Would be better symmetric, again.
01:15:210 (1,2,3) - Weird shapes, but can't really complain since they look funny.
01:18:803 (4) - This is a bit compressed though, make it a little less curvy.

[Gym Leader Chao]
Balance curves more on the center, many of them look ugly now and I'm not going to point out every one of them.
00:10:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overall placement and slider shapes are kind of not good IMO.
00:14:897 (8) - Touches next slider end.
00:20:210 (1,2) - Slightly touching, no need for that.
00:22:710 (1,2) - ^
00:40:210 (1,3) - Too compressed, make them a bit less curved.
00:42:710 (1,3) - ^

[Elite Four]
00:10:210 (1,3) - Touching HP bar.
01:09:897 (6,7,1,2) - Bit awkward curve.

[Champion]
Watch the slider shapes, 80% of them are plain ugly or just unfitting.
Might do proper mod for this diff later, even though I'm not too advanced with insane diffs.
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
All fixed in my diff, thanks /o/

Update is here /o/ http://puu.sh/1NJQ2
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

DakeDekaane wrote:

All fixed in my diff, thanks /o/

Update is here /o/ http://puu.sh/1NJQ2
I got it
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[General]
01:00:210 to 01:07:710 - Use 1/6 signature for this section

[Trainer]
ALL DONE
00:00:210 (1) - Would be better as symmetrical.
00:02:710 (2,3,4) - Jumps in Easy diff is not a good thing.
00:20:210 - Why not add something?
00:22:710 - ^
00:50:835 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps, nonono.
00:52:710 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Actually this whole part is rather bad for constant spacing changes. Do something proper.
00:58:335 (4) - Touches next slider.
00:58:960 (5) - Not very good shape.
01:00:210 (1) - Put sliderpoints on ticks.
01:02:085 (1) - Bad shape.
01:04:897 (2,3,4,5) - Don't stack so much.
01:09:585 (1) - Would be better symmetric, again.
01:15:210 (1,2,3) - Weird shapes, but can't really complain since they look funny.
01:18:803 (4) - This is a bit compressed though, make it a little less curvy.

[Gym Leader Chao]
DONE
Balance curves more on the center, many of them look ugly now and I'm not going to point out every one of them.
00:10:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overall placement and slider shapes are kind of not good IMO.
00:14:897 (8) - Touches next slider end.
00:20:210 (1,2) - Slightly touching, no need for that.
00:22:710 (1,2) - ^
00:40:210 (1,3) - Too compressed, make them a bit less curved.
00:42:710 (1,3) - ^

[Elite Four]
ALL DONE
00:10:210 (1,3) - Touching HP bar.
01:09:897 (6,7,1,2) - Bit awkward curve.

[Champion]
Watch the slider shapes, 80% of them are plain ugly or just unfitting.
Might do proper mod for this diff later, even though I'm not too advanced with insane diffs.
SuperMoutarde
257 posts
Joined November 2012
SuperMoutarde
Hi, from my queue ~

[Trainer]
  1. 00:22:085 (4,5) - Don't stack objects in Easy diff, it is too hard for new players. Plz unstack
  2. 00:24:585 (4,5) - ^
  3. 01:01:147 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:03:022 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:35:210 (1) - why so close? 0.3 DS is confusing to read for Easy diff! Place further away from 00:33:960 (5)
  6. 00:41:616 (1,1,1) - these spinners are a bit short for Easy diff imo
  7. 00:50:835 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I would avoid such overlapping as 00:51:147 (2) and 00:52:710 (1) or 00:52:085 (4) and 00:53:960 (3)
  8. 01:26:147 (2) - it sounds weird when you suddenly use soft hitsound in the middle of normal one.
  9. 01:16:460 (2) - ^
[Gym Leader Chao]
  1. 00:02:710 (2,3) - Odd placement, do something prettier
  2. 00:07:710 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:14:897 (8,1) - place so that these two don't touch each other
  4. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure you wanna include something that hard in this diff? It's supposed to be the Normal I guess so I think it might be a bit too hard
  5. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
[Elite Four]
Perfect, I can't find anything to mod, sorry, very nice map. The hitsounding should be taken as an example for other diffs xD

[Champion]
  1. You should hitsound the intro like in Elite Four diff, it would sound much better
  2. 00:17:085 (5) - fix overlapping with 00:16:147 (3)
  3. 00:40:678 (2) - stack with 00:39:585 (7) ?
  4. 01:25:210 (2,3) - Place so that the curve is not "broken"? like this:
    Screenshot
    Code
    164,232,75210,2,0,P|244:256|304:180,1,180
    300,120,75678,2,0,P|248:72|148:108,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:26:460 (6,7) - ^
  6. You should lower the hitsounds volume when you're using Normal sampleset imo it's too noisy
[AIBat]
  1. Missing Skin Files: reversearrow.png; spinner-approachcircle.png; count3.png; count2.png; count1.png; score-dot.png
  2. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: Champion : 1996 - Elite Four : 1985 - Gym Leader Chao : 1996 - Trainer : 2007

That's it for me! Good luck with this, the skin is very cute xD
TMAstraf
100 posts
Joined February 2010
TMAstraf
Trainer:
00:35:210 Maybe more distance to last circle

Champion:
00:40:366 Put Slider on same position like 00:39:585
00:48:803 ^ 00:47:553

Elite Four:
There was no video...

That's all from mine =)
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hi, from my queue ~

[Trainer] All Done
  1. 00:22:085 (4,5) - Don't stack objects in Easy diff, it is too hard for new players. Plz unstack
  2. 00:24:585 (4,5) - ^
  3. 01:01:147 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:03:022 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:35:210 (1) - why so close? 0.3 DS is confusing to read for Easy diff! Place further away from 00:33:960 (5)
  6. 00:41:616 (1,1,1) - these spinners are a bit short for Easy diff imo
  7. 00:50:835 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I would avoid such overlapping as 00:51:147 (2) and 00:52:710 (1) or 00:52:085 (4) and 00:53:960 (3)
  8. 01:26:147 (2) - it sounds weird when you suddenly use soft hitsound in the middle of normal one.
  9. 01:16:460 (2) - ^
[Gym Leader Chao] Waiting for update
  1. 00:02:710 (2,3) - Odd placement, do something prettier
  2. 00:07:710 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:14:897 (8,1) - place so that these two don't touch each other
  4. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure you wanna include something that hard in this diff? It's supposed to be the Normal I guess so I think it might be a bit too hard
  5. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
[Elite Four] :)
Perfect, I can't find anything to mod, sorry, very nice map. The hitsounding should be taken as an example for other diffs xD

[Champion] All Done
  1. You should hitsound the intro like in Elite Four diff, it would sound much better
  2. 00:17:085 (5) - fix overlapping with 00:16:147 (3)
  3. 00:40:678 (2) - stack with 00:39:585 (7) ?
  4. 01:25:210 (2,3) - Place so that the curve is not "broken"? like this:
    Screenshot
    Code
    164,232,75210,2,0,P|244:256|304:180,1,180
    300,120,75678,2,0,P|248:72|148:108,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:26:460 (6,7) - ^
  6. You should lower the hitsounds volume when you're using Normal sampleset imo it's too noisy
[AIBat] Done
  1. Missing Skin Files: reversearrow.png; spinner-approachcircle.png; count3.png; count2.png; count1.png; score-dot.png
  2. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: Champion : 1996 - Elite Four : 1985 - Gym Leader Chao : 1996 - Trainer : 2007

That's it for me! Good luck with this, the skin is very cute xD
Thanks for modding
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

TMAstraf wrote:

Trainer: done
00:35:210 Maybe more distance to last circle

Champion: done
00:40:366 Put Slider on same position like 00:39:585
00:48:803 ^ 00:47:553

Elite Four:
There was no video...I didn't notice that thanks

That's all from mine =)
thanks for modding
Hellzero
687 posts
Joined April 2010
Hellzero
Hi from ♥Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[All diffs]
Add spinner 01:32:710 - 01:36:460
you have spinner in Elite Four but not have in Champion. Why?
[Champion]
00:09:272 (1) - You should start spinner at 00:09:116 It more fit music
00:50:210 (1,2,3) - Make shape slider more pretty and put on circles along slider
SPOILER
00:51:460 (5) - Try this shape or same
SPOILER
00:53:960 (5) - I think you can make more pretty shape for this.
00:56:616 (1) - remove NC
00:55:835 (4) - add NC
00:56:147 (1) - remove
01:06:460 (4,5) - Visually spacing too close
01:07:085 (1) - Maybe make 2 sliders instead 2-revers-slider because it even doesn't fit music
[Trainer]
00:09:272 (1) - You should start spinner at 00:09:116 It more fit music
00:11:460 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:49:116 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:41:616 (1,1,1) - It's boring... And don't fit music
00:58:960 (5) - Not pretty shape :c What you think about this?
SPOILER
[Gym Leader Chao]
00:00:210 (1) - end spinner at 00:02:085 It more fit music
00:05:210 (1) - ^
00:13:960 (7) - make more good shape >.<
00:17:710 (1,2,3,4) - visually spacing close. Extend these
00:36:460 (5) - move to x:232 y:312
00:38:960 (5) - like ^
01:10:366 (1) - end spinner at 01:12:397
[Elite Four]
00:03:335 (1) - Lonely NC it's not good
00:08:178 (1) - ^
00:19:897 (1) - ^
00:15:210 (1) - remove NC (I don't see reason because it's triplet)

Need more works with slider shape. You can make these more better. Good luck!

Also Katty Pie say you must add in skin
sliderfollowcircle.png
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

Hellzero wrote:

Hi from ♥Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[All diffs]
Add spinner 01:32:710 - 01:36:460
you have spinner in Elite Four but not have in Champion. Why?
[Champion]
00:09:272 (1) - You should start spinner at 00:09:116 It more fit music
00:50:210 (1,2,3) - Make shape slider more pretty and put on circles along slider
SPOILER
00:51:460 (5) - Try this shape or same
SPOILER
00:53:960 (5) - I think you can make more pretty shape for this.
00:56:616 (1) - remove NC
00:55:835 (4) - add NC
00:56:147 (1) - remove
01:06:460 (4,5) - Visually spacing too close
01:07:085 (1) - Maybe make 2 sliders instead 2-revers-slider because it even doesn't fit music
[Trainer]
00:09:272 (1) - You should start spinner at 00:09:116 It more fit music
00:11:460 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:49:116 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:41:616 (1,1,1) - It's boring... And don't fit music
00:58:960 (5) - Not pretty shape :c What you think about this?
SPOILER
[Gym Leader Chao]
00:00:210 (1) - end spinner at 00:02:085 It more fit music
00:05:210 (1) - ^
00:13:960 (7) - make more good shape >.<
00:17:710 (1,2,3,4) - visually spacing close. Extend these
00:36:460 (5) - move to x:232 y:312
00:38:960 (5) - like ^
01:10:366 (1) - end spinner at 01:12:397
[Elite Four]
00:03:335 (1) - Lonely NC it's not good
00:08:178 (1) - ^
00:19:897 (1) - ^
00:15:210 (1) - remove NC (I don't see reason because it's triplet)

Need more works with slider shape. You can make these more better. Good luck!

Also Katty Pie say you must add in skin
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All Suggestions Done
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak
Blargh so I finally got around mapping again. Sorry for the who-knows-how-long wait.

Hellzero wrote:

[Gym Leader Chao]
00:00:210 (1) - end spinner at 00:02:085 It more fit music I don't want the next object to be less than two beats after spinner. Besides, if I were to follow music, the spinner would probably end at 00:02:710.
00:05:210 (1) - ^
00:13:960 (7) - make more good shape >.< Included in major fix around there.
00:17:710 (1,2,3,4) - visually spacing close. Extend these Why? I can't see why it would be bad.
00:36:460 (5) - move to x:232 y:312 Why?
00:38:960 (5) - like ^
01:10:366 (1) - end spinner at 01:12:397 Removed spinner for something (I hope to be) better.
I have merged all other mods. I think.

http://puu.sh/2JmqY.osu
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

chaotic_iak wrote:

Blargh so I finally got around mapping again. Sorry for the who-knows-how-long wait.

Hellzero wrote:

[Gym Leader Chao]
00:00:210 (1) - end spinner at 00:02:085 It more fit music I don't want the next object to be less than two beats after spinner. Besides, if I were to follow music, the spinner would probably end at 00:02:710.
00:05:210 (1) - ^
00:13:960 (7) - make more good shape >.< Included in major fix around there.
00:17:710 (1,2,3,4) - visually spacing close. Extend these Why? I can't see why it would be bad.
00:36:460 (5) - move to x:232 y:312 Why?
00:38:960 (5) - like ^
01:10:366 (1) - end spinner at 01:12:397 Removed spinner for something (I hope to be) better.
I have merged all other mods. I think.

http://puu.sh/2JmqY.osu
updated
nanda2009
925 posts
Joined October 2009
nanda2009
Hi. M4M

[General]

  • Weird difficulty spread. No Normal difficulty? 2 Insane difficulties? Why?
[Trainer]

  1. 00:00:210 (1) - finish at the start of this slider. Also, delete the 2nd and 3rd point because it's useless
  2. 00:05:210 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:116 (1) - not enough time to recover from spinner. change it to something like this :
    SPOILER
  4. 00:15:210 (1) - ohwell
    too much spinners that followed by a 1/1 notes. It'll create a small space to recover from spinner. Which can cause a miss. Fix them too.
  5. 00:41:616 (1,1,2,1,1,1) - possibly too hard for beginners. Change it something like this.
    SPOILER
    remember to delete the inhereted points too.
  6. 00:58:960 (5) - not a great encircle. delete the 3rd and 4th point and add a point at 44,252
  7. 01:06:147 (1,1) - not enough time to recover from spinner.
  8. 01:17:710 (3,4,1,2,3) - no claps? 01:25:210 (1,2,1,2,3,4) are clap hitsounded. to keep it consistent. add clap on each 2 white ticks too.
  9. 01:32:710 - where is the spinner? other diffs have a spinner here. Keep it consistent
[Gym Leader Chao]

  • Nice diff.
  1. 00:45:210 (1) - Need a bit of touch here.
    SPOILER


    Here's the code.

    344,200,45210,6,0,B|392:132|352:36|352:36|280:60|256:152|256:152|232:60|160:36|160:36|120:132|168:200,1,660,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 01:07:710 (2) - finish at the tail. Move it a bit to up so the body won't be blocked by (1). Try 444,72
  3. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - NO. Weird flow. Change it to something like this
    SPOILER
  4. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 01:32:710 (8) - add a note
  6. 00:13:178 (5) - stack it to (1) and move (6) to up. keep the distance
[Elite Four]

  1. 00:49:585 (6) - the head is blocked
  2. 00:27:085 (4) - ^
  3. 01:36:460 - imo the spinner should stop here.
Well that's all. there are other problems for example slider shape, and placement. But I guess that's your mapping style. GL.
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak

nanda2009 wrote:

[General]

  • Weird difficulty spread. No Normal difficulty? 2 Insane difficulties? Why? Gym Leader is supposed to be Normal. Hard patterns plus very low HPD and OD...
[Gym Leader Chao]

  • Nice diff. Thanks!
  1. 00:45:210 (1) - Need a bit of touch here. Applied.
  2. 01:07:710 (2) - finish at the tail. Move it a bit to up so the body won't be blocked by (1). Try 444,72 Changed body so the loop doesn't touch the 1.
  3. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - NO. Weird flow. Change it to something like this Applied, somewhat.
  4. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
  5. 01:32:710 (8) - add a note What? There's a note there already.
  6. 00:13:178 (5) - stack it to (1) and move (6) to up. keep the distance Are you referring to Elite Four?
Also edited some other stuff. http://puu.sh/2KLkG.osu
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

nanda2009 wrote:

Hi. M4M

[General]

  • Weird difficulty spread. No Normal difficulty? 2 Insane difficulties? Why? Trainer = Easy, Gym Leader = Normal, Elite Four = Hard, Champion = Isane
[Trainer] No Change

  1. 00:00:210 (1) - finish at the start of this slider. Also, delete the 2nd and 3rd point because it's useless
  2. 00:05:210 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:116 (1) - not enough time to recover from spinner. change it to something like this :
    SPOILER
  4. 00:15:210 (1) - ohwell
    too much spinners that followed by a 1/1 notes. It'll create a small space to recover from spinner. Which can cause a miss. Fix them too.
  5. 00:41:616 (1,1,2,1,1,1) - possibly too hard for beginners. Change it something like this.
    SPOILER
    remember to delete the inhereted points too.
  6. 00:58:960 (5) - not a great encircle. delete the 3rd and 4th point and add a point at 44,252
  7. 01:06:147 (1,1) - not enough time to recover from spinner.
  8. 01:17:710 (3,4,1,2,3) - no claps? 01:25:210 (1,2,1,2,3,4) are clap hitsounded. to keep it consistent. add clap on each 2 white ticks too.
  9. 01:32:710 - where is the spinner? other diffs have a spinner here. Keep it consistent
[Gym Leader Chao]

  • Nice diff.
  1. 00:45:210 (1) - Need a bit of touch here.
    SPOILER


    Here's the code.

    344,200,45210,6,0,B|392:132|352:36|352:36|280:60|256:152|256:152|232:60|160:36|160:36|120:132|168:200,1,660,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 01:07:710 (2) - finish at the tail. Move it a bit to up so the body won't be blocked by (1). Try 444,72
  3. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - NO. Weird flow. Change it to something like this
    SPOILER
  4. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  5. 01:32:710 (8) - add a note
  6. 00:13:178 (5) - stack it to (1) and move (6) to up. keep the distance
[Elite Four] No Change

  1. 00:49:585 (6) - the head is blocked
  2. 00:27:085 (4) - ^
  3. 01:36:460 - imo the spinner should stop here.
Well that's all. there are other problems for example slider shape, and placement. But I guess that's your mapping style. GL.
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
M4M~

[Trainer]

  1. 00:03:335 (3) - put clap. you put clap on 00:00:835,00:02:085,00:04:585.
  2. 00:05:210 (1) - put Finish on Start Slider. it's more better i thought..
  3. 00:07:710 (4) - new combo and remove finish on 00:08:335. it is inapproprite! :?
  4. 00:09:116 (1,1) - for Newbie Player, those may see hard. spin reduce to 00:10:210
  5. 00:11:460 (1,3) - move to (236,260)
  6. 00:13:960 (2) - move to (244,96). Prev distance is 1.07x(approximately 1.1x)
  7. 00:20:210 (1) - put Finish
  8. 00:25:835 (5) - New combo
  9. 00:29:897 (1,2) - remove Finish on (1) and put finish on (2), and remove newcombo (1) and put newcombo (2)
  10. 00:30:835 (1) - remove new combo
  11. 00:40:210 (3) - newcombo
  12. 00:40:210 (3) - put Finish on Start slider
  13. 00:41:616 (1) - Finish?
  14. 00:44:116 (1) - ^
  15. 01:00:210 (1) - 3rd point (red point) move 1grid up
  16. 01:26:460 (2) - put clap on 01:27:397
  17. 01:29:897 (4) - remove finish
[Gym Leader Chao]
HP,OD 3
slider tick rate 1

  1. 00:12:710 (5) - Newcombo
  2. 00:15:210 (1) - Finish on start slider
  3. 00:49:116 (4) - newcombo
[Chanpion]
Circle Size 4 is better

  1. 00:15:210 (1) - finish on start slider
  2. 00:31:460 (5) - newcombo
  3. 00:49:897 (6,1) - looks better finish on (1)
  4. 01:10:210 (2) - finish
  5. 01:11:460 (6) - newcombo
  6. 01:19:428 (3,4,5) - clap on (3)'s end slider and (4),(5) clap
good
chaotic_iak
287 posts
Joined February 2012
chaotic_iak

TaMul wrote:

[Gym Leader Chao]
HP,OD 3 Changed.
slider tick rate 1 Changed.

  1. 00:12:710 (5) - Newcombo Changed.
  2. 00:15:210 (1) - Finish on start slider Changed.
  3. 00:49:116 (4) - newcombo I think it belongs to the same combo.
http://puu.sh/33GAF.osu
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

TaMul wrote:

M4M~

[Trainer]Done

  1. 00:03:335 (3) - put clap. you put clap on 00:00:835,00:02:085,00:04:585.
  2. 00:05:210 (1) - put Finish on Start Slider. it's more better i thought..
  3. 00:07:710 (4) - new combo and remove finish on 00:08:335. it is inapproprite! :?
  4. 00:09:116 (1,1) - for Newbie Player, those may see hard. spin reduce to 00:10:210
  5. 00:11:460 (1,3) - move to (236,260)
  6. 00:13:960 (2) - move to (244,96). Prev distance is 1.07x(approximately 1.1x)
  7. 00:20:210 (1) - put Finish
  8. 00:25:835 (5) - New combo
  9. 00:29:897 (1,2) - remove Finish on (1) and put finish on (2), and remove newcombo (1) and put newcombo (2)
  10. 00:30:835 (1) - remove new combo
  11. 00:40:210 (3) - newcombo
  12. 00:40:210 (3) - put Finish on Start slider
  13. 00:41:616 (1) - Finish?
  14. 00:44:116 (1) - ^
  15. 01:00:210 (1) - 3rd point (red point) move 1grid up
  16. 01:26:460 (2) - put clap on 01:27:397
  17. 01:29:897 (4) - remove finish
[Gym Leader Chao]
HP,OD 3
slider tick rate 1

  1. 00:12:710 (5) - Newcombo
  2. 00:15:210 (1) - Finish on start slider
  3. 00:49:116 (4) - newcombo
[Chanpion]Done
Circle Size 4 is better

  1. 00:15:210 (1) - finish on start slider
  2. 00:31:460 (5) - newcombo
  3. 00:49:897 (6,1) - looks better finish on (1)
  4. 01:10:210 (2) - finish
  5. 01:11:460 (6) - newcombo
  6. 01:19:428 (3,4,5) - clap on (3)'s end slider and (4),(5) clap
good
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue~

[Trainer]

00:39:897 (2) - Space

00:45:678 (1) - Put it at the center?

[Elite Four DakeDakaane]

00:51:147 (2) - Center?

It's short. Don't give me kudosu if it's useless. And star!
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
okamiratsu

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[Trainer]

00:39:897 (2) - Space Done

00:45:678 (1) - Put it at the center? Done

[Elite Four DakeDakaane]

00:51:147 (2) - Center? Done

It's short. Don't give me kudosu if it's useless. And star!
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