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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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nanaz0r wrote:

Welp this is just all spacing suggestions and I just kinda skimmed through the map sorry orz



[General]
I noticed that at the end the spinners don't end at the same time. You have to be more specific

[Trainer] All Done
00:02:710 (2,3,4) Move (2) 5 grids to right and (4) one grid up
00:11:460 (1,2,3,1,2,3) my suggestion

SPOILER

00:23:178 (1,2,3,4,5) ^

SPOILER

00:29:897 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ^

SPOILER

00:32:710 (1,2,3,4,5) Move (1) one grid to the right, (4) down one grid, and (5) up one grid then 2 grids to the left
01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5) I'd fix this spacing


[Gym Leader Chao]
Remove the bookmarks? Done


[Elite Four]
The video plays in the other difficulties, but not this one o_o Fixed


Good luck~ and pokemon ftw

chaotic_iak wrote:

Apparently I have a different update than okamiratsu. A pretty large update: http://puu.sh/1hPf1

Also bookmarks are for my convenience, at least until this map starts to be bubbled.

I see what nanaz0r meant:
End of last spinners:
Trainer: 01:32:710 (and this starts differently anyway)
Gym Leader Chao: 01:36:460
Elite Four: 01:37:710
Champion: No last spinner

Gabe wrote:

Pokémooon <3

Also, is the video neccesary? I really think it's useless and I prefer playing with this beautiful background.

Gabe wrote:

Mkay good, also:

Some of your skin's elements are not used, which means you have to delete them since they are.. useless.

unused files

playfield.png
menu-button-background.png
ranking-A.png
ranking-B.png
ranking-C.png
ranking-D.png
ranking-S.png
ranking-SH.png
ranking-accuracy.png
ranking-back.png
ranking-graph.png
ranking-maxcombo.png
ranking-panel.png
ranking-perfect.png
selection-mods.png
selection-mods-over.png
selection-options.png
selection-options-over.png
selection-random.png
selection-random-over.png
selection-selectoptions.png
selection-selectoptions-over.png

Hope that's it.

1. if your skin is from this map you should ask Chibi_Fox for skin permission 0 0
2. delete all bookmarks to make your beatmap looks tidily~

1. you should have only one distance spacing in this diff 0 0
2. 00:09:272 (1) - finish.and for new players this spinner should end at 00:10:835 -
3. 00:15:210 (1) - should end at 00:19:585 -
4. 00:29:897 (1) - +finish
5. 00:40:210 (1,2,3) - confusing. change it to a reverse slider plz 0 0
6. 00:46:303 (1) - should start from 00:46:460 - . and should add finish
7. 01:22:710 (1) - ends here. 01:24:585 -
8. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing rhythm for mew players. change it to sliders or easier rhythm.
9. 01:28:178 (1,2,3) - move them to 01:28:022 -

1. 00:14:897 (8) - stack not well.and looks ugly with 00:15:210 (1,2) -
2. 01:12:710 (1) - finish at start
3. 01:32:866 (1) - +finish

1. 00:09:428 (3,4,5) - the rhythm should be ↓
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:522 (1,2,4) - stack not well
3. 00:30:366 (1) - +finish
4. 00:51:460 (3) - finish at end
5. 01:10:210 (1,2) - better a short slider should be instead
6. 01:25:522 (5,6) - ctrl+G
7. 01:32:710 (1) - silence spinner end

1. 00:02:710 (5) - clap at end
2. 00:07:397 (2) - 1 grid down and 1 grid right(grid level 3
3. 00:13:178 (4) - fix the blanket slider shape
4. 00:27:241 (8) - clap
5. 00:57:710 (6) - stack not well with 00:57:085 (4) - . and clap here
6. 00:59:585 (10) - NC should start here, not 01:00:210 (1) -
7. 01:19:428 (3) - this rhythm confusing. try to cut the slider and add notes.
   for example
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:20:991 (6) - NC
9. 01:32:241 (5) - NC

sherrie__fay wrote:

req from scorpiour's baka queue 0 0
sherrie for rule-breakers
=A=infact he asked me to do this
sco is a good person indeed

[Hard]

1. 00:09:428 (3,4,5) - the rhythm should be ↓ /*Done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:522 (1,2,4) - stack not well /*Fixed all I could do.
3. 00:30:366 (1) - +finish /*It doesn't sounds good for me there, as it's on a red tick, but put a finish in 00:30:210
4. 00:51:460 (3) - finish at end /*Added clap instead, sounds better imo.
5. 01:10:210 (1,2) - better a short slider should be instead /*I don't feel as there should be a slider there, as there are strong hits (I don't know how to explain, but I feel better smashing the buttons there than holding them for a while)
6. 01:25:522 (5,6) - ctrl+G /*Done
7. 01:32:710 (1) - silence spinner end /*I made a simple fade out, I guess that is what you are trying to say.

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Champion Iris.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1985
PreviewTime: 72710
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Battle! Champion Iris
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:okamiratsu
Version:Elite Four
Source:Pokemon Black/White 2
Tags:DakeDekaane chaotic_iak
BeatmapID:178223
BeatmapSetID:59338

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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212,236,90991,1,2,0:0:0
212,236,91147,1,0,0:0:0
212,236,91303,1,2,0:0:0
148,120,91616,6,0,B|92:120,2,55.0000016784668,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,120,92241,1,2,0:0:0
280,120,92397,1,0,0:0:0
280,120,92553,1,2,0:0:0
256,192,92710,12,0,97710,0:0:0

sherrie__fay wrote:

req from scorpiour's baka queue 0 0
sherrie for rule-breakers
=A=infact he asked me to do this
sco is a good person indeed

[General]

1. if your skin is from this map you should ask Chibi_Fox for skin permission 0 0
2. delete all bookmarks to make your beatmap looks tidily~

[Easy]

1. you should have only one distance spacing in this diff 0 0Distance snap is 1
2. 00:09:272 (1) - finish.and for new players this spinner should end at 00:10:835 - fixed
3. 00:15:210 (1) - should end at 00:19:585 - done
4. 00:29:897 (1) - +finishdone
5. 00:40:210 (1,2,3) - confusing. change it to a reverse slider plz 0 0 Done
6. 00:46:303 (1) - should start from 00:46:460 - . and should add finishdone
7. 01:22:710 (1) - ends here. 01:24:585 - done
8. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing rhythm for mew players. change it to sliders or easier rhythm.Fixed
9. 01:28:178 (1,2,3) - move them to 01:28:022 -done

[Normal]

1. 00:14:897 (8) - stack not well.and looks ugly with 00:15:210 (1,2) -fixed
2. 01:12:710 (1) - finish at startdone
3. 01:32:866 (1) - +finishdone

[Hard] "look at previous post of this diff"

1. 00:09:428 (3,4,5) - the rhythm should be ↓
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:20:522 (1,2,4) - stack not well
3. 00:30:366 (1) - +finish
4. 00:51:460 (3) - finish at end
5. 01:10:210 (1,2) - better a short slider should be instead
6. 01:25:522 (5,6) - ctrl+G
7. 01:32:710 (1) - silence spinner end

[Champion]

1. 00:02:710 (5) - clap at enddone
2. 00:07:397 (2) - 1 grid down and 1 grid right(grid level 3fixed
3. 00:13:178 (4) - fix the blanket slider shapefixed?
4. 00:27:241 (8) - clapdone
5. 00:57:710 (6) - stack not well with 00:57:085 (4) - . and clap heredone
6. 00:59:585 (10) - NC should start here, not 01:00:210 (1) - done
7. 01:19:428 (3) - this rhythm confusing. try to cut the slider and add notes.no change
   for example
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:20:991 (6) - NCdone
9. 01:32:241 (5) - NCno change

sherrie__fay wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:14:897 (8) - stack not well.and looks ugly with 00:15:210 (1,2) - Fixed
2. 01:12:710 (1) - finish at start Done
3. 01:32:866 (1) - +finish Done

JudgeTheDude wrote:

[Gym Leader Chaos]
00:10:210 (1) - This shape is weird, you can do it like this 00:11:460 (3)
00:10:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I also don't like that placings in general, the notes seems to be placed too randomly, and this shape 00:13:960 (7) is really weird.
The motivation is the sliders 1,3,5,7 are broken by out-of-track circles 2,4,6,8. I'll think up another way to make it better if the current state is too bad.
I don't like the hitsounds in this diff in general, but I'm not a hitsound modder. It's just my opinion. My general hitsound style aka pretty large use of them

DakeDekaane wrote:

All fixed in my diff, thanks /o/

Update is here /o/ http://puu.sh/1NJQ2

Static Noise Bird wrote:

[General]
01:00:210 to 01:07:710 - Use 1/6 signature for this section

[Trainer]
ALL DONE
00:00:210 (1) - Would be better as symmetrical.
00:02:710 (2,3,4) - Jumps in Easy diff is not a good thing.
00:20:210 - Why not add something?
00:22:710 - ^
00:50:835 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps, nonono.
00:52:710 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Actually this whole part is rather bad for constant spacing changes. Do something proper.
00:58:335 (4) - Touches next slider.
00:58:960 (5) - Not very good shape.
01:00:210 (1) - Put sliderpoints on ticks.
01:02:085 (1) - Bad shape.
01:04:897 (2,3,4,5) - Don't stack so much.
01:09:585 (1) - Would be better symmetric, again.
01:15:210 (1,2,3) - Weird shapes, but can't really complain since they look funny.
01:18:803 (4) - This is a bit compressed though, make it a little less curvy.

[Gym Leader Chao]
DONE
Balance curves more on the center, many of them look ugly now and I'm not going to point out every one of them.
00:10:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overall placement and slider shapes are kind of not good IMO.
00:14:897 (8) - Touches next slider end.
00:20:210 (1,2) - Slightly touching, no need for that.
00:22:710 (1,2) - ^
00:40:210 (1,3) - Too compressed, make them a bit less curved.
00:42:710 (1,3) - ^

[Elite Four]
ALL DONE
00:10:210 (1,3) - Touching HP bar.
01:09:897 (6,7,1,2) - Bit awkward curve.

[Champion]
Watch the slider shapes, 80% of them are plain ugly or just unfitting.
Might do proper mod for this diff later, even though I'm not too advanced with insane diffs.

1. 00:22:085 (4,5) - Don't stack objects in Easy diff, it is too hard for new players. Plz unstack
2. 00:24:585 (4,5) - ^
3. 01:01:147 (2,3) - ^
4. 01:03:022 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:35:210 (1) - why so close? 0.3 DS is confusing to read for Easy diff! Place further away from 00:33:960 (5)
6. 00:41:616 (1,1,1) - these spinners are a bit short for Easy diff imo
7. 00:50:835 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I would avoid such overlapping as 00:51:147 (2) and 00:52:710 (1) or 00:52:085 (4) and 00:53:960 (3)
8. 01:26:147 (2) - it sounds weird when you suddenly use soft hitsound in the middle of normal one.
9. 01:16:460 (2) - ^

1. 00:02:710 (2,3) - Odd placement, do something prettier
2. 00:07:710 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:14:897 (8,1) - place so that these two don't touch each other
4. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure you wanna include something that hard in this diff? It's supposed to be the Normal I guess so I think it might be a bit too hard
5. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

1. You should hitsound the intro like in Elite Four diff, it would sound much better
2. 00:17:085 (5) - fix overlapping with 00:16:147 (3)
3. 00:40:678 (2) - stack with 00:39:585 (7) ?
4. 01:25:210 (2,3) - Place so that the curve is not "broken"? like this:
   
   Screenshot

   
   Code

   164,232,75210,2,0,P|244:256|304:180,1,180
   300,120,75678,2,0,P|248:72|148:108,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:26:460 (6,7) - ^
6. You should lower the hitsounds volume when you're using Normal sampleset imo it's too noisy

1. Missing Skin Files: reversearrow.png; spinner-approachcircle.png; count3.png; count2.png; count1.png; score-dot.png
2. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: Champion : 1996 - Elite Four : 1985 - Gym Leader Chao : 1996 - Trainer : 2007

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Hi, from my queue ~

[Trainer] All Done

1. 00:22:085 (4,5) - Don't stack objects in Easy diff, it is too hard for new players. Plz unstack
2. 00:24:585 (4,5) - ^
3. 01:01:147 (2,3) - ^
4. 01:03:022 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:35:210 (1) - why so close? 0.3 DS is confusing to read for Easy diff! Place further away from 00:33:960 (5)
6. 00:41:616 (1,1,1) - these spinners are a bit short for Easy diff imo
7. 00:50:835 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I would avoid such overlapping as 00:51:147 (2) and 00:52:710 (1) or 00:52:085 (4) and 00:53:960 (3)
8. 01:26:147 (2) - it sounds weird when you suddenly use soft hitsound in the middle of normal one.
9. 01:16:460 (2) - ^

[Gym Leader Chao] Waiting for update

1. 00:02:710 (2,3) - Odd placement, do something prettier
2. 00:07:710 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:14:897 (8,1) - place so that these two don't touch each other
4. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure you wanna include something that hard in this diff? It's supposed to be the Normal I guess so I think it might be a bit too hard
5. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[Elite Four]
Perfect, I can't find anything to mod, sorry, very nice map. The hitsounding should be taken as an example for other diffs xD

[Champion] All Done

1. You should hitsound the intro like in Elite Four diff, it would sound much better
2. 00:17:085 (5) - fix overlapping with 00:16:147 (3)
3. 00:40:678 (2) - stack with 00:39:585 (7) ?
4. 01:25:210 (2,3) - Place so that the curve is not "broken"? like this:
   
   Screenshot

   
   Code

   164,232,75210,2,0,P|244:256|304:180,1,180
   300,120,75678,2,0,P|248:72|148:108,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:26:460 (6,7) - ^
6. You should lower the hitsounds volume when you're using Normal sampleset imo it's too noisy

[AIBat] Done

1. Missing Skin Files: reversearrow.png; spinner-approachcircle.png; count3.png; count2.png; count1.png; score-dot.png
2. Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn: Champion : 1996 - Elite Four : 1985 - Gym Leader Chao : 1996 - Trainer : 2007

That's it for me! Good luck with this, the skin is very cute xD

TMAstraf wrote:

Trainer: done
00:35:210 Maybe more distance to last circle

Champion: done
00:40:366 Put Slider on same position like 00:39:585
00:48:803 ^ 00:47:553

Elite Four:
There was no video...I didn't notice that thanks

That's all from mine =)

Hellzero wrote:

Hi from ♥Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[All diffs]
Add spinner 01:32:710 - 01:36:460
you have spinner in Elite Four but not have in Champion. Why?
[Champion]
00:09:272 (1) - You should start spinner at 00:09:116 It more fit music
00:50:210 (1,2,3) - Make shape slider more pretty and put on circles along slider

SPOILER

00:51:460 (5) - Try this shape or same

SPOILER

00:53:960 (5) - I think you can make more pretty shape for this.
00:56:616 (1) - remove NC
00:55:835 (4) - add NC
00:56:147 (1) - remove
01:06:460 (4,5) - Visually spacing too close
01:07:085 (1) - Maybe make 2 sliders instead 2-revers-slider because it even doesn't fit music
[Trainer]
00:09:272 (1) - You should start spinner at 00:09:116 It more fit music
00:11:460 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:49:116 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:41:616 (1,1,1) - It's boring... And don't fit music
00:58:960 (5) - Not pretty shape :c What you think about this?

SPOILER

[Gym Leader Chao]
00:00:210 (1) - end spinner at 00:02:085 It more fit music
00:05:210 (1) - ^
00:13:960 (7) - make more good shape >.<
00:17:710 (1,2,3,4) - visually spacing close. Extend these
00:36:460 (5) - move to x:232 y:312
00:38:960 (5) - like ^
01:10:366 (1) - end spinner at 01:12:397
[Elite Four]
00:03:335 (1) - Lonely NC it's not good
00:08:178 (1) - ^
00:19:897 (1) - ^
00:15:210 (1) - remove NC (I don't see reason because it's triplet)

Need more works with slider shape. You can make these more better. Good luck!

Also Katty Pie say you must add in skin
sliderfollowcircle.png
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png
All Suggestions Done

Hellzero wrote:

[Gym Leader Chao]
00:00:210 (1) - end spinner at 00:02:085 It more fit music I don't want the next object to be less than two beats after spinner. Besides, if I were to follow music, the spinner would probably end at 00:02:710.
00:05:210 (1) - ^
00:13:960 (7) - make more good shape >.< Included in major fix around there.
00:17:710 (1,2,3,4) - visually spacing close. Extend these Why? I can't see why it would be bad.
00:36:460 (5) - move to x:232 y:312 Why?
00:38:960 (5) - like ^
01:10:366 (1) - end spinner at 01:12:397 Removed spinner for something (I hope to be) better.

chaotic_iak wrote:

Blargh so I finally got around mapping again. Sorry for the who-knows-how-long wait.

Hellzero wrote:

[Gym Leader Chao]
00:00:210 (1) - end spinner at 00:02:085 It more fit music I don't want the next object to be less than two beats after spinner. Besides, if I were to follow music, the spinner would probably end at 00:02:710.
00:05:210 (1) - ^
00:13:960 (7) - make more good shape >.< Included in major fix around there.
00:17:710 (1,2,3,4) - visually spacing close. Extend these Why? I can't see why it would be bad.
00:36:460 (5) - move to x:232 y:312 Why?
00:38:960 (5) - like ^
01:10:366 (1) - end spinner at 01:12:397 Removed spinner for something (I hope to be) better.

I have merged all other mods. I think.

http://puu.sh/2JmqY.osu

• Weird difficulty spread. No Normal difficulty? 2 Insane difficulties? Why?

1. 00:00:210 (1) - finish at the start of this slider. Also, delete the 2nd and 3rd point because it's useless
2. 00:05:210 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:116 (1) - not enough time to recover from spinner. change it to something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:15:210 (1) - ohwell
   too much spinners that followed by a 1/1 notes. It'll create a small space to recover from spinner. Which can cause a miss. Fix them too.
5. 00:41:616 (1,1,2,1,1,1) - possibly too hard for beginners. Change it something like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
   remember to delete the inhereted points too.
6. 00:58:960 (5) - not a great encircle. delete the 3rd and 4th point and add a point at 44,252
7. 01:06:147 (1,1) - not enough time to recover from spinner.
8. 01:17:710 (3,4,1,2,3) - no claps? 01:25:210 (1,2,1,2,3,4) are clap hitsounded. to keep it consistent. add clap on each 2 white ticks too.
9. 01:32:710 - where is the spinner? other diffs have a spinner here. Keep it consistent

• Nice diff.

1. 00:45:210 (1) - Need a bit of touch here.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Here's the code.
   
   

   344,200,45210,6,0,B|392:132|352:36|352:36|280:60|256:152|256:152|232:60|160:36|160:36|120:132|168:200,1,660,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:07:710 (2) - finish at the tail. Move it a bit to up so the body won't be blocked by (1). Try 444,72
3. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - NO. Weird flow. Change it to something like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:32:710 (8) - add a note
6. 00:13:178 (5) - stack it to (1) and move (6) to up. keep the distance

1. 00:49:585 (6) - the head is blocked
2. 00:27:085 (4) - ^
3. 01:36:460 - imo the spinner should stop here.

nanda2009 wrote:

[General]

• Weird difficulty spread. No Normal difficulty? 2 Insane difficulties? Why? Gym Leader is supposed to be Normal. Hard patterns plus very low HPD and OD...

[Gym Leader Chao]

• Nice diff. Thanks!

1. 00:45:210 (1) - Need a bit of touch here. Applied.
2. 01:07:710 (2) - finish at the tail. Move it a bit to up so the body won't be blocked by (1). Try 444,72 Changed body so the loop doesn't touch the 1.
3. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - NO. Weird flow. Change it to something like this Applied, somewhat.
4. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
5. 01:32:710 (8) - add a note What? There's a note there already.
6. 00:13:178 (5) - stack it to (1) and move (6) to up. keep the distance Are you referring to Elite Four?

nanda2009 wrote:

Hi. M4M

[General]

• Weird difficulty spread. No Normal difficulty? 2 Insane difficulties? Why? Trainer = Easy, Gym Leader = Normal, Elite Four = Hard, Champion = Isane

[Trainer] No Change

1. 00:00:210 (1) - finish at the start of this slider. Also, delete the 2nd and 3rd point because it's useless
2. 00:05:210 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:116 (1) - not enough time to recover from spinner. change it to something like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:15:210 (1) - ohwell
   too much spinners that followed by a 1/1 notes. It'll create a small space to recover from spinner. Which can cause a miss. Fix them too.
5. 00:41:616 (1,1,2,1,1,1) - possibly too hard for beginners. Change it something like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
   remember to delete the inhereted points too.
6. 00:58:960 (5) - not a great encircle. delete the 3rd and 4th point and add a point at 44,252
7. 01:06:147 (1,1) - not enough time to recover from spinner.
8. 01:17:710 (3,4,1,2,3) - no claps? 01:25:210 (1,2,1,2,3,4) are clap hitsounded. to keep it consistent. add clap on each 2 white ticks too.
9. 01:32:710 - where is the spinner? other diffs have a spinner here. Keep it consistent

[Gym Leader Chao]

• Nice diff.

1. 00:45:210 (1) - Need a bit of touch here.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Here's the code.
   
   

   344,200,45210,6,0,B|392:132|352:36|352:36|280:60|256:152|256:152|232:60|160:36|160:36|120:132|168:200,1,660,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:07:710 (2) - finish at the tail. Move it a bit to up so the body won't be blocked by (1). Try 444,72
3. 01:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - NO. Weird flow. Change it to something like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:25:210 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:32:710 (8) - add a note
6. 00:13:178 (5) - stack it to (1) and move (6) to up. keep the distance

[Elite Four] No Change

1. 00:49:585 (6) - the head is blocked
2. 00:27:085 (4) - ^
3. 01:36:460 - imo the spinner should stop here.

Well that's all. there are other problems for example slider shape, and placement. But I guess that's your mapping style. GL.

1. 00:03:335 (3) - put clap. you put clap on 00:00:835,00:02:085,00:04:585.
2. 00:05:210 (1) - put Finish on Start Slider. it's more better i thought..
3. 00:07:710 (4) - new combo and remove finish on 00:08:335. it is inapproprite!
4. 00:09:116 (1,1) - for Newbie Player, those may see hard. spin reduce to 00:10:210
5. 00:11:460 (1,3) - move to (236,260)
6. 00:13:960 (2) - move to (244,96). Prev distance is 1.07x(approximately 1.1x)
7. 00:20:210 (1) - put Finish
8. 00:25:835 (5) - New combo
9. 00:29:897 (1,2) - remove Finish on (1) and put finish on (2), and remove newcombo (1) and put newcombo (2)
10. 00:30:835 (1) - remove new combo
11. 00:40:210 (3) - newcombo
12. 00:40:210 (3) - put Finish on Start slider
13. 00:41:616 (1) - Finish?
14. 00:44:116 (1) - ^
15. 01:00:210 (1) - 3rd point (red point) move 1grid up
16. 01:26:460 (2) - put clap on 01:27:397
17. 01:29:897 (4) - remove finish

1. 00:12:710 (5) - Newcombo
2. 00:15:210 (1) - Finish on start slider
3. 00:49:116 (4) - newcombo

1. 00:15:210 (1) - finish on start slider
2. 00:31:460 (5) - newcombo
3. 00:49:897 (6,1) - looks better finish on (1)
4. 01:10:210 (2) - finish
5. 01:11:460 (6) - newcombo
6. 01:19:428 (3,4,5) - clap on (3)'s end slider and (4),(5) clap

TaMul wrote:

[Gym Leader Chao]
HP,OD 3 Changed.
slider tick rate 1 Changed.

1. 00:12:710 (5) - Newcombo Changed.
2. 00:15:210 (1) - Finish on start slider Changed.
3. 00:49:116 (4) - newcombo I think it belongs to the same combo.

TaMul wrote:

M4M~

[Trainer]Done

1. 00:03:335 (3) - put clap. you put clap on 00:00:835,00:02:085,00:04:585.
2. 00:05:210 (1) - put Finish on Start Slider. it's more better i thought..
3. 00:07:710 (4) - new combo and remove finish on 00:08:335. it is inapproprite!
4. 00:09:116 (1,1) - for Newbie Player, those may see hard. spin reduce to 00:10:210
5. 00:11:460 (1,3) - move to (236,260)
6. 00:13:960 (2) - move to (244,96). Prev distance is 1.07x(approximately 1.1x)
7. 00:20:210 (1) - put Finish
8. 00:25:835 (5) - New combo
9. 00:29:897 (1,2) - remove Finish on (1) and put finish on (2), and remove newcombo (1) and put newcombo (2)
10. 00:30:835 (1) - remove new combo
11. 00:40:210 (3) - newcombo
12. 00:40:210 (3) - put Finish on Start slider
13. 00:41:616 (1) - Finish?
14. 00:44:116 (1) - ^
15. 01:00:210 (1) - 3rd point (red point) move 1grid up
16. 01:26:460 (2) - put clap on 01:27:397
17. 01:29:897 (4) - remove finish

[Gym Leader Chao]
HP,OD 3
slider tick rate 1

1. 00:12:710 (5) - Newcombo
2. 00:15:210 (1) - Finish on start slider
3. 00:49:116 (4) - newcombo

[Chanpion]Done
Circle Size 4 is better

1. 00:15:210 (1) - finish on start slider
2. 00:31:460 (5) - newcombo
3. 00:49:897 (6,1) - looks better finish on (1)
4. 01:10:210 (2) - finish
5. 01:11:460 (6) - newcombo
6. 01:19:428 (3,4,5) - clap on (3)'s end slider and (4),(5) clap

good

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[Trainer]

00:39:897 (2) - Space Done

00:45:678 (1) - Put it at the center? Done

[Elite Four DakeDakaane]

00:51:147 (2) - Center? Done

It's short. Don't give me kudosu if it's useless. And star!