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Celldweller - Memories of a Girl I Haven't Met

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Mercurial
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Mercurial
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 13 de octubre de 2015 at 04:53:35 p.m.

Artist: Celldweller
Title: Memories of a Girl I Haven't Met
Tags: Wish Upon a Black Star Special Edition Klayton Fixt Kei
BPM: 95,75
Filesize: 1774kb
Play Time: 00:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2 stars, 66 notes)
  2. Kei's Normal (1,34 stars, 49 notes)
Download: Celldweller - Memories of a Girl I Haven't Met
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Thank you TicClick for your timing check <3
Thank you Kei for your awesome work in the Lyrics and Klayton hentai Support ♥ /o/ and your guest diff :)

Lyrics
In this lonely place
Bathed in silence
And thoughts of you

I can't see your face
But I'm trying
To envision you

So are you really out there,
Are you awake with memories?

Of a boy you haven't met yet,
Who's wished upon the Pleiades?

This song goes to show something of myself I want to get rid of, but even after years of endless fighting, I just can't do so.
Last edited by Mercurial , edited 18 times in total.
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick 
135,626.631853785901,4,2,0,40,1,0
10151,625,4,2,0,40,1,0
16075,625,4,2,0,40,1,0
16401,625,4,2,0,40,1,0
20126,625,4,2,0,40,1,0
25149,626.631853785901,4,2,0,40,1,0
30142,625,4,2,0,40,1,0
40132,625,4,2,0,40,1,0

I love it so much.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Thanks <3

This map was made with this weather
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Free SB gibe money pls.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
LOADSAKUDOZ! HUEHUEHUEHUEHUE!1!1111!!1!!1!1
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Go go :3 si necesitas una dificultad podría hacerte una
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Double posting ftw.

Enjoy :3
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Double kd ftw.

Nah, jk
Nitori
177 posts
Joined September 2011
Nitori
Normal:
I didn't really like all the breaks. It's quite a bit for a 45-second song, even though there were no vocals. Maybe you can find something small to fill the break. Just a quiet beat or two each.

Other than that, there's not much I can really say. It's a great map, despite how short it is. x3
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Oh thanks for the comment. The problem is that there's no sound, so adding notes there would be considered as overmap
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Okay, the song is 45 secs long, an Easy difficulty should be added, seriously.
Piscis
261 posts
Joined October 2010
Piscis
Hey~

[Hard]
I want a hit sound...
00:00:135 (1) - add whistle
00:00:448 (2) - ^
00:01:074 (4) - add whistle to slider start
00:02:014 (5) - add whistle to slider end
00:02:954 (1) - add whistle
00:05:148 (1) - add whistle to slider start and middle
00:06:088 (2) - add whistle to slider start
00:07:027 (3) - add whistle to slider end
00:07:967 (1) - add whistle
00:08:594 (3) - ^
00:10:463 (1) - ^
00:11:088 (3) - ^
00:12:026 (4) - add whistle to slider start
00:12:963 (1) - add whistle
00:13:588 (3) - add whistle to slider start
00:14:526 (4) - add whistle
00:16:075 (2) - add whistle to slider start
00:17:963 (1) - ^
00:18:588 (2) - add whistle
00:20:438 (1) - add whistle to slider start
00:21:063 (2) - add whistle
00:22:001 (3) - add whistle to slider start
00:22:938 (1) - add whistle
00:23:563 (3) - ^
00:25:462 (1) - add whistle to slider start and end
00:26:715 (2) - add whistle
00:29:848 (1) - ^
00:30:142 (1) - add finish
00:30:454 (2) - add whistle
00:30:767 (3) - add whistle to slider start
00:32:329 (1) - ^
00:32:954 (3) - add whistle
00:33:579 (4) - ^
00:34:204 (6) - ^
00:35:142 (1) - ^
00:35:454 (2) - ^
00:36:079 (4) - add whistle to slider start
00:40:132 (3) - ^
00:40:757 (4) - ^
00:41:382 (5) - add whistle
00:41:694 (6) - ^
00:42:319 (1) - ^
00:42:632 (2) - ^
00:42:944 (3) - add whistle to slider end
00:43:569 (4) - ^

It is an example~
Good luck!!!!!!!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Thanks, I was looking for some "Hit Sounding" mod, since I'm too lazy to do by myself.
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Nagisawa
Hi! is for MOD4MOD slot in your que ~

  • General
  1. Fix a editor bug in hard diff http://puu.sh/1eGnf

  • Kei's Normall
    00:23:563 (2) - After the slider is missing. which, I think, is not needed. Try to make the slider longer, or mount a note.

  • Hard
    Hitsounds
    00:00:761 (3) - whistle
    00:01:074 (4) - whisle on slider end
    00:02:954 (1,2,3) - like this
    and if you agree, make this: 00:03:268 (2) - whistle on slider start 00:04:521 (4) - whistle

    00:05:461 - whistle. in the middle of the slider. in revers
    00:08:281 (2) - whistle
    00:09:221 (4) - whistle
    00:04:521 (4) - whistle on slider start
    00:12:026 (4) - ^
    00:13:588 (3) - ^
    00:14:526 (4) - whistle
    00:16:075 (2) - whistle on slider start
    00:17:026 (3) - whistle
    00:21:063 (2) - whistle on slider start
    00:23:563 (3) - ^
    00:24:813 - add note here and add whistle
    00:30:454 (2) - whistle
    00:31:235 (4) - whistle on slider start
    00:32:954 (3) - whistle
    00:33:892 (5) - ^
    00:35:142 (1) - ^
    00:36:079 (4) - whistle on slider start
    00:39:985 (2) - whistle
    00:40:132 (3) - whistle on slider end
    00:41:382 (5) - whistle
    00:42:632 (2) - ^
    00:43:569 (4) - whistle on slider end

    Object and nc
    00:19:838 - andd note. make simmetry with 00:17:963 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1eGCJ
    00:30:142 (1) - remove nc
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Thanks, I'll check it later.
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
Hi from your modding queue!
M4M

[Hard]

00:00:135 (1,2,3,4) - It's not perfect square, use these coordinates:
00:00:135 (1) - 108;80
00:00:447 (2) - 195;76
00:00:760 (3) - 194;167
00:01:074 (4) - 105;167
Of course you can rotate it, but please, keep it perfect.
00:18:588 (2) - Move on 204;224 because it's too close to 00:17:963 (1)
00:30:142 (1) - Remove NC, because it's unnecessary, if 00:29:848 (1) - means to be "comboart", delete it though, because it doesn't fit though.
00:37:017 (5) - Move on 288;252 to make the same distance between slider end and slider body, really, it looks much better

Since your sliders aren't perfect, I recommend circle size -1 or make every slider perfect, but if you make CS -1, you must use higher snap, so select what will be easier for you
You must hitsound this! You could use the same hitsounding style like on normal.

[Kei's Normal]

00:42:319 (1) - Move on 284;127 00:42:632 (2) - 312;172 00:42:944 (3) - 352;204 Because it was going against 00:42:944 (3)'s direction

Good luck.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
All the mods have been accepted.

I'll be modding your maps in this week or weekend, thanks for your cooperation <3
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
Hello !

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[Kei's Normal]

Hitsound:

  1. 00:13:588 (2) - the end slider really add whitle is make sense if follow guitar imo
  2. 00:39:829 (1) - need add whistle in start slider is really sense as guitar imo
  3. 00:43:882 (4) - add whistle in repeat slider ? is look good hear for me is here guitar
Gameplay:

look great for me

[Hard]

Hisound:

  1. 00:03:268 (2,3) - add whistle something here because the guitar is really strong that i hear for i add the red tick (2) and white tick (3) is sense for me imo or just something add here whistle
  2. 00:09:534 (5) - add whistle ? ^ same explain because guitar is strong imo
  3. 00:19:213 (3) - ^ in end slider?
  4. 00:23:563 (3) - I guess you forget add whistle in start slider and end slider
there is little lack hitsound like 00:30:162 at 00:37:017 try more add hitsound

Gameplay:

  1. 00:23:563 (3) - this slider don't like really good arc try this http://puu.sh/1gvIS if you like here code
SPOILER
180,172,23563,2,0,B|188:104|256:80|324:104|332:172,1,225
or try remap you owm orz

look good for me

[]
Me gusta
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye ![/quote]
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
About the slider, done. Thank you, I couldn't find a good pattern for that slider, I stink making stuff :P
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Dante: En cuanto pueda reviso los mods. Probablemente lo haga hoy, mas a la noche.

I'll edit this post with my response to those mods as soon as I can.
Darksonic
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Joined November 2010
Darksonic
HUEHEUHEUHEUHE

Kei's Normal:

Por que usas 1,50x de slider velocity?, deberías ponerlo en 1, fijate que tenes prácticamente todos los sliders que suenan off, arregla eso.

00:20:751 (2): Podrías moverlo a x:68 y:140, no hace una gran diferencia pero creo que se ve mejor si esta casi o a la altura del slider.
00:21:063 (3,4): Para que estos dos sliders estén en perfecta simetría, 4 debería estar en x:282 y:200, ademas que queda con un spacing mucho mas similar. (Si haces CTRL+H y CTRL+G al 3 lo vas a notar)
00:32:642 (2): Tal y como antes usaste un Finish, tal vez podrías usar otro acá?
00:43:882 (4): Borra el repeat y agrega nota en 00:45:132?

Hard:

00:02:954 (1): Centra esta nota? O sea, moverla a x:256 y:232, ya que despues tenes un copy paste de sliders, se ve mucho mejor. (Si lo haces acomoda el spacing de los sliders)
00:05:148 (1): Dat forma, hacelo simplemente así ?
00:12:026 (4): Tal vez podrías curvarlo? Aunque el slider que viene esta un poco lejano en el tiempo, esta superpuesto en esa posición y se ve algo feo, fluye mejor con una curva imo.
00:30:142 (1): Alguna razón por la cual hayas empezado otro Combo acá? D:, se ve raro, deberías borrar el NC, queda mejor si todo el pattern esta en el mismo combo.
00:31:235 (4): Este slider debería terminar en 00:31:704.
00:32:329: Esto no debería terminar en 00:32:642?, lo veo un poco antes, es intencional?, digo, porque en la Normal si hay una nota justo ahí, y suena bien, y btw lo mismo que en esa diff, podrías agregar un Finish en el final del slider.
00:43:569 (4): Proba esto ?, con ese slider largo y sin una nota ahí suena algo vacío.

Suerte Eze ql :3
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

Darksonic wrote:

HUEHEUHEUHEUHE
Most useful mod ever.
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei

Darksonic wrote:

HUEHEUHEUHEUHE

Kei's Normal:

Por que usas 1,50x de slider velocity?, deberías ponerlo en 1, fijate que tenes prácticamente todos los sliders que suenan off, arregla eso.
En realidad está en 1x. Mercurial lo buggea cuando lo sube. Respondo a los mods mas tarde. He estado ocupada estos días
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
are you really-really sure what between "black" and "star" should be a gap? (tags) check the ranked celldweller maps :/
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
[General]
  1. Inherited line on 30142 to start kiai isn't necessary, you can start kiai with that red section too.
  2. A bit of some unused space could be cuted from lyrics to save space.
  3. Add "Kei" to tags.

[Kei's Normal]
  1. 00:13:276 (1) - no need for nc
  2. 00:22:938 (1) - same
  3. 00:34:204 (5) - this slider extended by one repeat would sound nicer

[Hard]
Imo CS4 would look better, since it's calm song.
  1. 00:05:148 (1) - improve this slider by moving 2nd anchor 2 ticks right
  2. 00:12:963 (1,2,3) - for me it doesn't flow well this woud look better
    SPOILER
  3. 00:12:963 (1) - remove nc
  4. 00:15:776 (1,2,3) - any reason that spacing there is smaller?
  5. 00:22:938 (1) - remove nc
  6. 00:29:848 (1) - it's being covered by spinner's hitburst, move it away somewhere from centre
  7. 00:30:142 (1) - remove nc, no need for it
  8. 00:30:767 (3) - slider looks much better if 2nd point is moved two grids up
  9. 00:31:235 (4) - since kiai is mainly mapped to vocal, this slider sounds odd, just extend it by 1/16 , like that
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/1hAGJ
  10. 00:32:329 (1) - two grids up
  11. 00:33:267 (x) - would recommend to add note here, since it really feels empty without it, plays much better and fits with music
  12. 00:37:017 (5) - i am not sure what this note does follow, previous slider sounds okay without it
  13. 00:40:132 (3,4) - both sliders got ugly arcs, they doesn't look nice, that would look better
    SPOILER
    [/spoiler]
  14. 00:43:569 (4) - got idea, for better rhythm there, look
    actually it follows vocal, but sounds much better
    [spoilerbox]
00:45:757 (1) - end spinner like in Kei's diff, sounds better
Actually title is "Memories of a Girl I haven't Met" but I wonder why singer sings "boy you haven't met".
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
(ignore post above, it's bugged and cannot delete/edit it due to weird reasons.)

[General]
  1. Inherited line on 30142 to start kiai isn't necessary, you can start kiai with that red section too.
  2. A bit of some unused space could be cuted from lyrics to save space.
  3. Add "Kei" and "Klayton" to tags.

[Kei's Normal]
  1. 00:13:276 (1) - no need for nc
  2. 00:22:938 (1) - same
  3. 00:34:204 (5) - this slider extended by one repeat would sound nicer

[Hard]
Imo CS4 would look better, since it's calm song.
  1. 00:05:148 (1) - improve this slider by moving 2nd anchor 2 ticks right
  2. 00:12:963 (1,2,3) - for me it doesn't flow well this woud look better
    SPOILER
  3. 00:12:963 (1) - remove nc
  4. 00:15:776 (1,2,3) - any reason that spacing there is smaller?
  5. 00:22:938 (1) - remove nc
  6. 00:29:848 (1) - it's being covered by spinner's hitburst, move it away somewhere from centre
  7. 00:30:142 (1) - remove nc, no need for it
  8. 00:30:767 (3) - slider looks much better if 2nd point is moved two grids up
  9. 00:31:235 (4) - since kiai is mainly mapped to vocal, this slider sounds odd, just extend it by 1/16 , like that
    SPOILER

    but also this will work
    SPOILER
  10. 00:32:329 (1) - two grids up
  11. 00:33:267 (x) - would recommend to add note here, since it really feels empty without it, plays much better and fits with music
  12. 00:37:017 (5) - i am not sure what this note does follow, previous slider sounds okay without it
  13. 00:40:132 (3,4) - both sliders got ugly arcs, they doesn't look nice, that would look better
    SPOILER
  14. 00:43:569 (4) - got idea, for better rhythm there, look
    actually it follows vocal, but sounds much better
    SPOILER
  15. 00:45:757 (1) - end spinner like in Kei's diff, sounds better

Actually title is "Memories of a Girl I haven't Met" but I wonder why singer sings "boy you haven't met".
Last edited by Bass , edited 4 times in total.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

are you really-really sure what between "black" and "star" should be a gap? (tags) check the ranked celldweller maps :/
Wait, wut.

Let me check it as well.

Edit: There's not a gap.

Edit2: Thanks Bass <3 Mostly followed :)
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei

Nagisawa wrote:

  • Kei's Normall
    00:23:563 (2) - After the slider is missing. which, I think, is not needed. Try to make the slider longer, or mount a note.
    I didnt get at all what you tried to say but well. If it is what I think then nope. I want to leave that empty space. It would fit more than adding a note or making that slider longer.

Bass wrote:

[Kei's Normal]
    1. 00:13:276 (1) - no need for nc Fine
    2. 00:22:938 (1) - same ^
    3. 00:34:204 (5) - this slider extended by one repeat would sound nicer I feel the space after this slider kinda empty too so I added a slider and a note instead of a repeat.

Pereira006 wrote:

[Kei's Normal]
Hitsound:

  1. 00:13:588 (2) - the end slider really add whitle is make sense if follow guitar imo [b]my whistles mostly follow the voice and there a whistle would sound like.. err.. too much and kinda unfitting imo :?
  2. 00:39:829 (1) - need add whistle in start slider is really sense as guitar imo yeah. nice idea :D
  3. 00:43:882 (4) - add whistle in repeat slider ? is look good hear for me is here guitar mmm i dont agree here with u. like i said before it sounds like too much and unfitting to me
Gameplay:

look great for me Thanks :D

Darksonic wrote:

Kei's Normal:

00:20:751 (2): Podrías moverlo a x:68 y:140, no hace una gran diferencia pero creo que se ve mejor si esta casi o a la altura del slider. se ve mas lindo :3
00:21:063 (3,4): Para que estos dos sliders estén en perfecta simetría, 4 debería estar en x:282 y:200, ademas que queda con un spacing mucho mas similar. (Si haces CTRL+H y CTRL+G al 3 lo vas a notar) listo
00:32:642 (2): Tal y como antes usaste un Finish, tal vez podrías usar otro acá? suena demasiado escandaloso como para esa parte. solo puse finish al comienzo del kiai para dar enfasis a que era el kiai. esto me hizo acordar que olvide un finish en el final de 00:39:829 (1) lol.
00:43:882 (4): Borra el repeat y agrega nota en 00:45:132? prefiero dejar el repeat para que asi este slider abarque toda la voz sin usar mas notas.
Thanks a lot everyone! Lots of things have been improved in my diff with so many mods :D

Mercu
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hola Mercurial

[General]

•Nohing~

[Hard]

•00:07:027 (3) - Un Whistle al comienzo suena bien
•00:17:026 (3) - Fue intencional ponerlo ahi oculto?
•00:22:001 (3) - Solo es un sugerencia :
SPOILER

no le haga caso

•00:43:569 (4) - Sinceramente no me gusto que lo ponga en todo el whistle

Bueno en general el mapset esta muy bien realizado no ha contactado a ningun MAT?

Disculpe el pequeño aun no soy un gran modder.

Buena Suerte~
Last edited by XinCrin , edited 2 times in total.
Darksonic
Global Moderator
2,794 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
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mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Estos modders de ahora que son educados y no tutean HAHAHA xD!. Buee.. ando con media hora libre, tiempo suficiente para ayudarte con esta pequeña song

[General:]

• Desactiva el Countdown, esta totalmente al pedo activado, ni siquiera aparece en el intro de la cancion

[Kei's Normal:]

• 00:11:401 (3): El comienzo de este Slider suena bastante innecesario porque no hay nada en la cancion que pida un beat en este lugar. Seguirias mejor el Ritmo si eliminas este Slider y tan solo pones una Nota en 00:11:713
• 00:13:588 (6): Un Whistle al final del Slider seria consistente y se siente bien en mi opinion
• 00:27:655: Este break se siente mapeable, podes agregar un Slider largo para seguir la Vocal larga, o lo que a vos te guste. Te lo digo, porque no me gusto much la idea de poner 3 breaks en una cancion de 50 seg. Yo se que lo podes hacer bien, por eso te lo pido :P
• 00:35:142 (1): El comienzo del Slider necesitaria algo para que siguiera mejor el Piano, yo intentaria un Finish al comienzo (si lo sentis alto, reducile un poco el volumen), o en todo caso un Whistle como hiciste en 00:45:132
• 00:39:829 (1): Se siente mejor cliquear algo en el comienzo del kiai, realmente. Seria mejor que cambiaras el Slider por 2 Notas, jugaria mejor en esta dificultad
• 00:42:632 (2): El doble Whistle no se siente del todo bien, yo lo eliminaria, me gusta mas como se siente

- No mucho mas aca, esta bien mapeado, ademas la cancion es corta :P.

[Hard:]

Settings:
--> VALE TOCARLOS BUACHO!! xD. Hablando en serio, no me gusta ese Circle Size pequeño, la cancion es lenta asi que es innecesario. Reducile el Circle Size en 1 Tick (CS-1)

• 00:01:074 (4,5): Esto se siente raro, no juega del todo bien con la cancion, intenta reemplazar tus 2 Sliders por esto:
SPOILER
• 00:04:408 (3): Rinde mas un Whistle al comienzo que al final, le da un toque especial al Instrumental
• 00:15:776 (1,2,3): Nope, un antijump no juega bien aca. Se siente todo demasiado lento, prefiero que mantengas el Spacing antes de que tengas cambio de Spacing, realmente
• 00:19:213 (1): No mappes innecesariamente, esto lo hiciste para tener algo para cliquear para que no te sea tan grande el espacio sin objetos y por simetria. Elimina este Slider que no sigue nada en la cancion, e intenta buscar otra variedad que siga mejor la musica
• 00:21:063 (2,3): Fluye mejor si desapilas estos Sliders :/
• 00:27:655 (1): Este Spinner no termina en un lugar correcto, el final se siente extraño. Seguiria mejor el Instrumental, si terminara en 00:28:595
• 00:30:767 (4,5): Otra vez estos Sliders apilados, desapilalos para que fluyan mejor :P
• 00:33:267 (x): En este lugar podrias seguir tranquilamente el Instrumental agregando una Nota
• 00:36:079 (4,5): Siento que un beat en el lugar donde esta (5) es completamente innecesario. Se siente mucho mejor si eliminas (5) y extendes el final del Slider hasta ese lugar
• 00:42:475 (x): Agrega una Nota como hiciste anteriormente para seguir la vocal correctamente
• 00:43:569 (4): Este Slider largo no juega del todo bien, puedes arriesgarte un poco mas viendo que es una Hard. Intenta cambiarlo por este ritmo
SPOILER
Por Cierto:: Eliminale el Whistle a este Slider, suena completamente random.

- Buee.. no soy nazi modder, por eso no mencione blankets que pueden estar mejores como por ejemplo en 00:13:588 (3,4), que se arreglarian con un simple cambio de Spacing que no afectaria en nada. Intenta encontrar estas cosas por tu mismo y arreglarlas asi el map se ve mas estetico. La velocidad de 1,50x se siente algo forzada al comienzo del map, pero bueno, no juega tan mal para ser sincero.

Aun puede mejorar capo!! Te dejo Star para mostrarte mi apoyo. No seas vago e intenta arreglar esas cosas que te deje :P, por ahi en un futuro me pegue una vuelta
Buena Suerte a los 2! ;)
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
3 fucking years have passed since I submitted this map.

Let's see if I can do any better to get it ranked.
phaZ
739 posts
Joined October 2011
phaZ
Celldwelloarrr
call me for a mod, somewhen^^

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dont think this song really needs a kiai-time. it doesnt fit imo.
[Hard]
00:14:526 (4) - although a break might fit to the vocals ("silence") it feels really strange not having anything here (its not really silent, and the lyrics are at mid sentence). i suggest sth like this or this
00:16:075 (1,2) - why the low ds?
00:17:651 - missing beat?
00:19:526 (3,1) - not that important, but stack doesnt fit here. would might even fit better at 00:17:026 (2,1) but, thats so unmportant.. you might take this into consideration tho~
00:20:438 (1) - make two stacked circles like at 00:10:463 (1,2) instead?
00:26:088 and 00:26:715 and 00:27:342 - should all feel/play the same way imo. change 00:25:462 (1,2) - to http://puu.sh/kL9IX/7c935f745a.jpg or http://puu.sh/kL9Kj/3cc8a0a421.jpg
00:30:162 to 00:44:819 - i think from a 1.0x sv to 1.5 is a to big difference. the song still is rather calm after all
00:43:569 (4) - your missing out some beats here..
[Normal]
think that this diff can have more patterns, if you wouldnt mind making it more attractive/appealing^^
00:00:135 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - i would suggest to use 4 times the same pattern. might be a little monotonius then tho so if you dont want to change it, then i suggest to make at 00:00:135 (1,2) - 3x circles instead and at 00:02:641 (1,2,3) - circle+slider (to get 3x circle -> circle+slider -> repeat-slider -> long slider aka from "difficult" to "easy")
00:10:776 (2) - strong beat is on slidertail atm. do http://puu.sh/kLalm/acf98e8394.jpg or http://puu.sh/kLapY/e491de0b8f.jpg maybe?
00:20:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should be the same rhythm like at 00:10:463 (1,2,3,4,5). or at least both the same
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well thats it for now. i might check again if sth happens to this map

calling. . .
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