Stefan wrote:
mfw I see Ono's mod
no just kidding, let us see what we can do here (Note: This is NOT a real mod, so please do NOT give KD for this):
[Kantan]
The Kantan is really inconsistent in its difficulty level. You have section where you've did it quite simple with big breaks while on other sections like 01:03:963 (63,64,65) or 01:19:531 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92) it becomes quite complex and beginner-unfriendly. The amount of circles isn't the big issue (tho some could be removed but these are really just some. And some necessary beats are missing here, especially in the Kiai section.
To make it less dense , 01:01:369 is removed
Since the tone at 01:03:963 is similar to the one at 01:02:017, I would not probably remove them
01:19:855 removed
Besides of these things I still want to mention some parts:
00:34:774 (31,32,33,34,35,36) - Seems easier if you have only 00:37:369 (34,35) for 1/2: http://puu.sh/c0cNM/9486e0e05d.jpg
Patterns here are partially changed and some of them removed to a more simple way
01:02:017 (60,61,62,63,64,65) - by far too complex and hard to follow, my example: http://puu.sh/c0cCQ/d70ad005c9.jpg
Changed to only 1/1 notes
01:11:423 (74) - 01:16:288 - http://puu.sh/c0ccD/0c5cebe966.jpg
01:48:720 (125,126,127) - hold the same rhythm like 01:46:126 (122,123)
Fixed
In short: Less 1/2 in this Difficulty helps a lot.
[Futsuu]
This Difficulty is much more appropriate for some 1/2, they are still some unnecessary and not assisting 1/2 in which should be removed, aren't many but helpful to remove:
00:20:342 (29) - removed
01:02:017 (98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106) - It's quite exhausting to hold the constant metronom switch here and should be done easier: http://puu.sh/c0di6/5f755a9207.png Choosed to simplify it, and 01:08:342 removed
01:08:342 (111) - You might want to remove this to put at 01:07:523 k instead. Fixed
01:16:126 (128) - no change here, since they share similar tones. 01:19:693 removed btw
01:23:585 (145) - It has more structure in the rhythm without this note. Fixed
What I can say more is some parts seems a bit unconnected mapped sometimes, that may be me who thinks like that but oh well.
[Muzukashii]
Muzukashii is good, some less circles here but there isn't much issues here.
[Oni]
A really heavy density/note increase compared to Muzukashii. Since there are three (!) Inner Oni Difficulties (where you also mapped one of them) in your set you should use this Difficulty instead. From now try to keep a note lenght of five-seven 1/4 notes in a row. things like 01:18:882 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1) are overkill for player who comes from Muzukashii Difficulties. And in general some more breaks will be necessary to make this anyhow rankable.
Well, I prefer not changing this map since it can't be more simplified. It would be weird by removing more notes.
About ooxxooxooxx streams, players can practice on other maps , then turn to this map when good enough. It's impossible to have all oni difficulties the same level on osu
[Tama's Oni]
Except of some more complex pattern and density in the Kiai section this Difficulty is good, what I like is that oo oooo ooo is used which differs it better from the first Oni Difficulty. As said pattern and density in the Kiai section is very complex and shouldn't be here for the Oni Difficulty. Both Oni Difficulties can nearly work as Inner Oni Difficulties.
Simplified many parts of the map by removing unnecessary notes
[Inner Oni]
Seems fine, didn't found much wrong here for now.
[Ping's Inner Oni]
It's fine, not my taste to be honest but in general good mapped. The only thing which is pretty weird mapped is 00:11:099 (82,83,84,85,86,87,88). dkdkdkd is kinda unfitting, if you really want to keep the 1/6 here, make this as dddkkkd.
Indeed. Changed to kkkkkkd instead , dddkkkd is a bit too hard in 1/6
[Haereticus' Inner Oni]
Good so far.
Okay, let us come to a result: This map isn't ready yet to be qualified. Ono made a great job here in helping here and it's definitely noticable but the map shouldn't be qualified for now. From my sight you should get some more modders to solve the current problems in Kantan, Oni and Tama's Oni. But do not think your Map is bad, it's quite decent but has too many issues to be bubbled at the moment. If you think it's really ready feel free to pm me.
Thanks for the mod-like post
I'll update it as soon as my other maps go to the graveyard.