I really need to get an upload script setup for you guys. This rapidshare stuff is killing me ^^;
Edit: mirrored for ya
Very nice work on this one. Impressive for your first attempt!!
Two small gripes:
1. What's with the offset being so far into the song? The timing is perfect throughout, but I wonder why you did this. It doesn't have much effect in the end - except for the flashing in the background (for now, at least - this could change in the future, though).
2. I think you could add a bit more variation with the sound additions (finish/whistle). I don't think you used finish once in the song, and I can think of a few places it would be nice to have that variation. No sweat though - these things come with practice and experience!
Keep it up!
Edit: Added to official list.