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The map's topic button actually redirects to an unexistent topic... Dunno how to solve that,try to see if reuploading it solves this problem,or try asking someone else...Oh well,it's probably a BSS problem. Well,if that's so you will have to wait a bit to solve this!
- 00:31:687 (5) - A New Combo here is highly suggested to prevent your combo chain there from being too long.
- 00:33:059 (7,8,1) - Oh well...This pattern is not really wrong but anyways it doesen't feel that good to play,as it is a bit crumped. What about using this pattern? I know you are trying to keep the symmetry there,anyways this pattern flows absolutely better than the current one:SPOILER
276,192,34087,1,8,0:0:0
260,124,34430,6,0,B|248:92|219:65,2,70,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,160,35801,2,0,B|428:148|455:119,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,284,37173,2,0,B|280:336|207:313,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,232,38544,6,0,B|136:136,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 00:39:401 (2) - This is a rather subjective thing,so just fix this if you want: what about adding a whistle here? It fits really good according to the voice repeating itself and according to the bass too! The same applies for 00:44:887 (4) - .
- 00:39:916 (1) - Add a clap at the end,it is consistent with 00:37:173 (3) - and prevents the pattern from being empty of claps there. If you do this,remember to add a clap at 00:43:344 (2) - too!
- 01:29:287 (3,4,5) - Again,this returning back from 01:27:916 (2) - feels quite unappealing imho... You should instead follow up a bit more the flow using this kind of pattern:SPOILER
216,340,89287,5,0,0:0:0
148,360,89630,1,0,0:0:0
84,328,89973,2,0,B|64:296|72:256,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,204,90659,5,0,0:0:0
176,172,91002,1,0,0:0:0
244,180,91345,2,0,B|280:172|296:132,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,120,92030,2,0,B|432:140|456:212,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:50:373 (2,3) - I'm not really against this type of patterns,but using 2 1/1 circles like this after a 3/2 space could be really confusing for beginners,as they will think this is instead another type of pattern. What about instead transforming them in just a 1/1 slider? That fits pretty good and thanks to its press-hold rhythm it won't be that difficult to catch this. The same applies for 01:55:859 (4,5) - !
- 02:06:316 (2) - I don't see why you here aren't following the voice by skipping over them with a 2/1 slider. I mean,you didn't do that for all the other patterns,and this 2/1 slider fits honestly talking quite bad with the rhythm itself. What about instead using a 3/2 slider/note combination like in this image?
- 00:37:173 (1) - Please,consider extending this by 1/1 as you did before. It fits really good within the vocals and the rhythm itself,so why are you changing this? You could extend this by 1/2 to follow the guitar,too!
- 00:41:287 (1) - As you are following the guitar here,a whistle at the end would be pretty good to emphatize the guitar getting its pitch higher there.
- 00:43:344 (3) - Why this antijump? It really does not make sense. As it's just a normal diff,MANY players will confuse this,as the song isn't even remotely asking for it. Please,make the spacing higher here :\
- 00:44:030 (4,5) - That's a really little and unneded thing,so just fix if you want: what about making the slider 4 encircle the note 5 in a better way? It's just an optional graphical thing however,so just fix if you want SPOILER
152,192,44030,2,0,B|184:148|168:84|116:64,1,150
92,140,44887,1,0,0:0:0 - 01:06:659 (6,1,2,3) - What's this transition? It is a bit strange and out of place imho... What about using this kind of pattern? I tried not to break your symmetry there so yeah :3SPOILER
316,156,66659,2,0,B|272:184|272:184|256:232,1,100
340,236,67344,5,4,0:0:0
416,208,67687,1,0,0:0:0
416,288,68030,2,0,B|379:327|325:328,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,284,68716,1,0,0:0:0
256,364,69059,1,0,0:0:0
184,328,69401,2,0,B|132:327|96:288,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,228,70087,6,0,B|-1:150|85:118|44:36,3,200,0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:18:316 (4) - Please add a new combo here instead of having one at 01:19:687 (1) - . This makes much more sense rhythmically talking,as it follows really well the new synthesizer's phrase. The same applies for 01:29:287 (2) - !
- 02:00:830 (6) - I guess you forgot a clap at the end of this slider? You have used this in the Easy diff
- 00:23:459 (1) - It seems you forgot a whistle here,as the other patterns all have these whistles. Remember to add it! :3
- 00:30:316 (1,2,3) - I really don't like how you're using these antijumps there for the symmetry. Due to the slider's SV being quite high,that antijumps really breaks the flow. How about placing them like this example I'm doing for you?SPOILER
376,40,30316,6,0,B|396:112,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
I fixed the following spacing and added a clap missing at the end of 00:31:173 (3) - too!
256,108,30830,1,0,0:0:0
117,107,31173,2,0,B|136:40,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
117,205,31687,2,0,B|89:238|91:284|109:304|117:329|155:354|199:347,1,210,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,348,32544,2,0,B|356:355|394:330|402:305|420:285|422:239|395:206,1,210
256,60,33573,2,0,B|256:132,1,70 - 00:31:687 (4) - A new combo here would fit perfectly with the piano being played there.
- 01:01:516 (4,1) - That's pretty much an optional thing,just fix if you want: What about adding a couple of claps at the note 4 and at the beginning of the slider 1 to follow the drums as you did in the Insane diff? They fit really good actually :3
- 01:03:059 (3) - Uhh,what is this note supposed to follow? You have clearly followed the synthesizer up to now,and this note sounds quite strange and unneded there. Delete it?
- 01:21:744 (1) - What about replacing this repeated slider with a 1/1 slider and 2 1/2 notes? Imho they fit better the synth,as by doing that 01:21:744 (1) - will follow the synth's held and the next next notes will continue the synthesizer's rhythm.
- 02:03:401 (x)- Why are you skipping over this drum if just a second later you follow it with 02:04:259 (5,6,1) - ? I suggest you to add a note there to complete the rhythm
- 02:10:259 (7) - I know you wanted to follow the guitar there,but because of the drums taking the part there this slider sounds really awkward to play and hear. I really suggest you to follow the drums this time by using a note with a 1/1 slider,so that you follow both the drums and the guitar:
- 02:43:001 (2,3,4) - Here I'd prefer to see instead an arch-based pattern following 02:43:344 (4) - ,as it feels pretty good to play. That's your choice,though!SPOILER
150,156,161973,6,0,B|173:108|197:73|256:61|315:73|338:108|362:156,1,280,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,300,163001,1,0,0:0:0
308,332,163173,1,0,0:0:0
256,336,163344,2,0,B|192:356|192:356|116:356,1,140
32,284,164030,2,0,B|96:264|96:264|172:264,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
- 00:24:487 (4) - Little graphical suggestion there: what about instead making this slider just like the first one? By rotating it a bit we have a pretty cool-looking pattern :3SPOILER
264,192,24059,1,0,0:0:0
If you see I also moved a bit away 00:24:059 (2) - to make 00:23:459 (1,2,3) - an equidistant pattern (if you see,those are all 3/4 transitions so
352,256,24316,1,0,0:0:0
352,255,24487,2,0,B|328:308|251:329|199:278,2,180,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,200,25430,1,0,0:0:0 - 00:36:487 (3) - Another minor thing: What do you think on putting this note exactly at 00:35:801 (1) - 's end? It creates a pretty good "ping-pong" flow that works really well here Here's an example on what you should do
- 00:36:830 (4) - I see you missed a clap here,you should add it instead,as it follows the drum in a really good way!
- 00:46:773 (1) - Add a whistle here? It sounds really good with the consistency given there! If you do this,remember to do the same to 00:49:516 (1) -
- 01:09:744 (4,5) - What an awkward transistion you have there! :U What about inverting the whole pattern 01:10:087 (5,6,7,8) - in this way? It is much nicer to play and it creates a nice little jump with 01:10:773 (1) - too!SPOILER
256,200,69744,2,0,B|256:92,1,108.000002574921
192,32,70087,1,0,0:0:0
160,112,70259,1,0,0:0:0
352,112,70430,1,0,0:0:0
320,32,70602,1,0,0:0:0
332,224,70773,6,0,B|352:276|408:296,1,108.000002574921,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 01:27:573 (6) - Well... I'm quite worried about this slider,as its repeat gets covered by 01:26:887 (2) - 's hitburst... Well,it's not really that difficult to recognize the repeat,but surely many MATs/BATs will point this out... What about modifying this into a curved slider encircling 01:26:887 (2) - ? That would solve definitely the problem:SPOILER
208,96,87573,2,0,B|236:68|276:68|304:96,2,107.999996704102
72,56,88173,5,0,0:0:0
28,187,88430,1,0,0:0:0 - 02:14:201 (2) - What do you think on making this arc wider by putting this at x:296 y:256? It is much more comfortable to play from my point of view.
- 02:15:230 (4) - A clap is missing at the beginning of this slider. Remember to add it!
- 02:33:401 (7,1,2,3,4) - Oh well,I don't like that much this structure you used there. What about instead using a pattern based off a triangular pattern and a quadrangular one? Here's what I have done here:SPOILER
256,160,153401,1,0,0:0:0
173,280,153744,5,0,0:0:0
336,280,154087,1,0,0:0:0
368,140,154430,1,0,0:0:0
144,140,154773,1,0,0:0:0
24,192,155116,5,2,0:0:0 - 02:45:916 (3,4,5,6,7) - I really don't understand the jumps used there,as the song isn't really requesting for them,and they seem quite random even for a Insane diff... :< What about instead using a quadrangular returning pattern there? From my point of view it fits much better...SPOILER
249,251,165916,1,0,0:0:0
356,212,166087,1,0,0:0:0
265,127,166259,1,0,0:0:0
156,172,166430,1,0,0:0:0
249,251,166602,1,0,0:0:0
356,212,166773,2,0,B|416:212|416:212|456:240,1,108.000002574921,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0