zeroclover wrote:

General

offset - 8ms (you can ignore this, im sure = =) I'm not sure orz
+500ms for audiolead Melophobia said about audiolead too, so.. fixed



Hard

00:19:283 (6) - move close to (1), its too suddenly for easy listening song I think it's ok, so not fixed~
00:26:870 (5) - give more spacing, so i can feel (1) jump later, its fit to the song ^ same

overall already fine

Normal

still not sure about stream on normal
example : 00:33:249 (1,2,3) - pretty hard to read for newbies If I'm a newbie, I'm going to play [Easy] first

Easy

fine


~~
im modding with feeling when playing..
only that i can found

MMzz wrote:

[Hard]

00:24:981 (1,2,3) - This is the only thing I don't like about this diff. I really think you should follow the vocals instead of the drums here because the vocals are more powerful and noticable. I did this. http://puu.sh/Xuch I deleted 3 and added two notes to resemble the vocal notes. You don't have to do this, just a suggestion~ fixed~

[Normal]

00:27:740 (4) - Not sure if this is good placement because a beginner isn't going to think of back-tracking in the map, they will expect everything be very visible and straight forward. So maybe move this? okay ._.
01:00:154 (4) - 4 beat kickbacks are also bad for beginners because they aren't going to expect the 4th repeat because they can't see it. (This usually works with longer sliders because they can see the repeat arrow) So maybe tilt this upwards a little and just make it a 3 beat? http://puu.sh/Xuih 2 beat with 2 circles is ok :3

[Easy]

Good easy~ =w=b thanks =w=b

[Taiko]

OD and HP Drain 6. ok
Really good taiko, for once I can agree with a SV higher than 1.4 because of the BPM.


Good mapset have a star~

MMzz wrote:

[TaiGu]

00:20:671 (51) - Move this note back to the red tick to fit the instrument sound there, it will lead back into the drum beat better than what you have and won't sound/feel unsnapped.you can hear one fingersnap if you remove this note

KinomiCandy wrote:

[TaiGu]

00:16:705(42) - Finish here, please at D or K (Big don or kat)D or K can't appear after 1/4 if I remembered clearly
01:15:843(149) - Finish here, please at D or K (Big don or kat)^

R e v i v e wrote:

From modding queue >.<

Great song & sweet drum Mickey :>

Easy

01:09:119 (1) - Forget whistle. ;w; oh yeah sorry lol. added

Normal

01:00:498 (5) - Not clap and whistle here ? just clap xD

Hard

00:24:809 (9) - Whistle here? yeah, I forgot lol. added
00:34:464 (3) - End of slider add whistle? no~
00:38:429 (8) - Start of slider add whistle? ^

Taiko

Maybe use SV 1.6 ? no. It's tooooooooo slow

00:28:085 (101,102,103,104) - ddkk ?ok
01:00:498 (20) - k? ok~
01:03:429 (31) - ^ ^
01:13:257 (68) - ^ ^
01:19:981 (95) - ^ ^


I hope this map get rank soon me too xD

Good Luck.

1. add "nyanyannya" in tags because it's the composer and lyric writer

1. 00:57:567 (6) - spacing a little close since it's 1/4 o.o? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410787
2. 01:16:360 (6) - finish .?
3. 01:25:498 (6) - put here? looks better o.o http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410747

1. 00:33:257 (1,2) - move (1) up a little and move (2) here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410790
2. 01:16:188 - add something o.o?
3. 01:16:878 (4) - can remove this one if u add note ^

1. 00:17:912 (3) - I think the end sounds weird o.o remove clap .?
2. 00:39:464 (1) - make it symmetrical with (4) o.o

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~


General

1. add "nyanyannya" in tags because it's the composer and lyric writer o.o?

Hard

1. 00:57:567 (6) - spacing a little close since it's 1/4 o.o? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410787 no~
2. 01:16:360 (6) - finish .? why lol
3. 01:25:498 (6) - put here? looks better o.o http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410747 I've copied from 00:18:774 (5,6,1) - so no~

Normal

1. 00:33:257 (1,2) - move (1) up a little and move (2) here.? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410790 okay~
2. 01:16:188 - add something o.o? no~
3. 01:16:878 (4) - can remove this one if u add note ^^

Easy

1. 00:17:912 (3) - I think the end sounds weird o.o remove clap .? no change about hitsound lol
2. 00:39:464 (1) - make it symmetrical with (4) o.o fixed~

nice map, have a star~

Good luck~

1. 00:19:464 (1) - This jump is very unexpected. Even moving it one grid right and down would make this better. You remember how I've missed on my first try on both sliders like this. Btw the same says AIMod :3
2. 01:25:671 (1) - The second one like that. As above, moving one grid could work, but not exactly. I wish I could see something like this with these two sliders:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:26:878 (5,1) - Hm, strange thing. This is playable, but really looks strange. Why you don't use 1.0x here?
4. 00:47:050 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern, you did it before and it looks much better (I like how sliders flow like a wave)
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:57:050 (5,6,1) - Well, again. How this part is so special that you use increased spacing for 1/4?
6. 00:58:602 - Pretty loud vocal sound! You must place something here. And here's an illustration of possible fix for two suggestions above (decreased AR to make it clear):
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:05:671 (7,8,1) - Make all the spacings the same please
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:12:567 (2) - Just move this note to 01:12:395, you'll see that it fits better.

1. 00:17:912 - Starting a slider at the blue tick (offbeat) is not a good idea imo, esp. in Normal. This is possibly fine, but I still recommend to place slider end at the blue tick but, slider start at the white one as much as possible. That would make the rhythm a bit easier.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Nice, nothing else to say.

1. 00:17:912 (3) - The same thing as in Normal, but here I HIGHLY suggest to change the pattern. As for easy, it is too weird to play. Try to keep slider starts at white ticks in Easy diffs.
2. 00:22:912 (1) - Nope. This is too far from the center and too fast appearing after the spinner. Give players some recovery after the spinner, or at least move this note like that
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:24:119 (2) - Same thing with blue tick

1. 00:08:085 - add a kat here? There're many similar places, I suggest you to look the map through. Some triples would fit, at least I enjoy playing the map with them more. Doubles are too offbeat for me.

1. 00:36:878 - Changing this to kat feels more intuitive for me.
2. Try using 2.0-2.1 SV because I don't like how big notes touch the usual ones lolol

grumd wrote:

— Overall
I'm just curious why that BG is halfly white? o_o That's strange, I suggest you to find something different. I can't find another BG :<
Anyway, very good mapset, I like it. Starrd yay \:D/
i even can pass both taikos yaaay

Hard

— Overall
Some 1/4 are placed too far from the previous objects. Most of them are fine, but some are confusing. I will mention them in Mapping section.

— Mapping

1. 00:19:464 (1) - This jump is very unexpected. Even moving it one grid right and down would make this better. You remember how I've missed on my first try on both sliders like this. Btw the same says AIMod :3 fixed
2. 01:25:671 (1) - The second one like that. As above, moving one grid could work, but not exactly. I wish I could see something like this with these two sliders: ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:26:878 (5,1) - Hm, strange thing. This is playable, but really looks strange. Why you don't use 1.0x here? ok ._.
4. 00:47:050 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern, you did it before and it looks much better (I like how sliders flow like a wave) no.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:57:050 (5,6,1) - Well, again. How this part is so special that you use increased spacing for 1/4? okay fixed ._.
6. 00:58:602 - Pretty loud vocal sound! You must place something here. And here's an illustration of possible fix for two suggestions above (decreased AR to make it clear): okay ._.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:05:671 (7,8,1) - Make all the spacings the same please fixed~
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:12:567 (2) - Just move this note to 01:12:395, you'll see that it fits better. added note

Normal

— Mapping

1. 00:17:912 - Starting a slider at the blue tick (offbeat) is not a good idea imo, esp. in Normal. This is possibly fine, but I still recommend to place slider end at the blue tick but, slider start at the white one as much as possible. That would make the rhythm a bit easier. no~
   
   SPOILER

   
   Nice, nothing else to say.

Easy

— Mapping

1. 00:17:912 (3) - The same thing as in Normal, but here I HIGHLY suggest to change the pattern. As for easy, it is too weird to play. Try to keep slider starts at white ticks in Easy diffs. fixed
2. 00:22:912 (1) - Nope. This is too far from the center and too fast appearing after the spinner. Give players some recovery after the spinner, or at least move this note like that okay ._.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:24:119 (2) - Same thing with blue tick fixed

Taiko

1. 00:36:878 - Changing this to kat feels more intuitive for me.
2. Try using 2.0-2.1 SV because I don't like how big notes touch the usual ones lolol okay, using 2.10 xD

AIBat stuff:
AIBat says you should add a new combo manually at 00:22:567 in Hard :s how can I forgot this!? and yeah, Added

suzutsukikanade wrote:

U are awesome \o/

Netsukawa wrote:

เดี๋ยวม็อดทีหลัง \o/

1. Add "nogu" in tags ? เหมือนชื่อลุงอาร์มอะ _

1. แนะนำว่าให้ใช้ 1.6 ดีกว่านะ เพราะเขาน่าจะมีกฏอยู่ว่า 1.4 or 1.6 หรือว่ามัน recommend หว่า
   
2. 00:05:326 (19) - k
3. 00:11:188 (42) - K ?
4. 00:16:360 (61) - k ?
5. 00:18:257 (68) - k
6. 00:21:016 (76,77,78,79,80) - k dkkd ?
7. 00:24:981 (91) - ลบ ?
8. 00:28:602 (104) - d ?
9. 00:29:464 (107) - k ?
10. 00:34:636 (125) - add k ?
11. 00:45:326 (158) - add d
12. 00:50:843 (173) - ^
13. 00:53:602 (184) - Highly recommend to change it to slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/415552
14. 01:00:843 (206) - d
15. 01:06:360 (227) - d
16. 01:08:774 (235) - k ?
17. 01:11:877 (247) - d ?
18. 01:13:257 (252) - k ?
19. 01:14:636 (258) - ^ ?
20. 01:15:843 (264) - ^ ?
21. 01:17:395 (270) - D
22. 01:19:981 (279) - k ?
23. 01:26:705 (303) - d

1. 00:18:257 (45) - I'd prefer k =A=
2. 00:20:498 (51) - add d and delete 00:20:671 (52) -
3. 00:36:705 (69,70) - add k k , considering from 00:33:947 (64,65)
4. 00:39:464 (74) - k ^
5. 00:43:602 (80) - add k ?
6. 01:06:016 (131) - ^
7. 01:26:705 (180) - d ?

Netsukawa wrote:

เพลงช้า Drain เยอะไม่ดีนะ D: ww

[General]

1. Add "nogu" in tags ? เหมือนชื่อลุงอาร์มอะ _ เหมือนเน็ทจะใช้อยู่คนเดียวนะ add nogu ใน tags เนี่ย 5555 NO

[Taiko]

1. แนะนำว่าให้ใช้ 1.6 ดีกว่านะ เพราะเขาน่าจะมีกฏอยู่ว่า 1.4 or 1.6 หรือว่ามัน recommend หว่า ย้อนไปอ่านที่แซมกับอาทบอกไว้ดิ 55
   
2. 00:05:326 (19) - k
3. 00:11:188 (42) - K ?
4. 00:16:360 (61) - k ?
5. 00:18:257 (68) - k
6. 00:21:016 (76,77,78,79,80) - k dkkd ?
7. 00:24:981 (91) - ลบ ?
8. 00:28:602 (104) - d ?
9. 00:29:464 (107) - k ?
10. 00:34:636 (125) - add k ?
11. 00:45:326 (158) - add d
12. 00:50:843 (173) - ^
13. 00:53:602 (184) - Highly recommend to change it to slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/415552
14. 01:00:843 (206) - d
15. 01:06:360 (227) - d
16. 01:08:774 (235) - k ?
17. 01:11:877 (247) - d ?
18. 01:13:257 (252) - k ?
19. 01:14:636 (258) - ^ ?
20. 01:15:843 (264) - ^ ?
21. 01:17:395 (270) - D
22. 01:19:981 (279) - k ?
23. 01:26:705 (303) - d

gudbye wrote:

http://puu.sh/ZzSz
Net is hentai owob Netsuhentai //run

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

[General]
Little suggestion: try to change your combo colors so they match with the Video Background. IDK why you chose green, it doesn't fit with the video's colors. I don't know what colors to chose lol no change~

Nothing to say for Easy/Normal/Hard
I didn't mod Taiko because I can't.

Good luck~

MMzz wrote:

Did a remod over IRC. Puush is down for me so here is a pastebin. http://pastebin.com/YEYfqg2S

Good luck!

grumd wrote:

A little recheck, so just few issues with rhythms. Pls apply them with BAT mod.
Hard:
00:34:464 (3,4) - make it like that, it follows the guitar very good. guitar is a good choice since no vocals sound here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419758 can't place a clap at 00:35:326 but I fixed to something else
00:32:223 (4) - placing a triple fits guitar better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419759 It's fit already imo
00:48:429 - try this rhythm: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419761 it follows much stuff at once so i'm doubt if it's really better I like this pattern better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420447
00:52:050 - add a note please, vocals are obvious enough here and it really sounds good fixed to 2 1/4 sliders http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/420450

just that, i'd be grateful if these fixes were included in final ranked version of this diff

Garven wrote:

What does this button do again?

Garven wrote:

What does this button do again?

Andrea wrote:

I'm late sorry >_<

nich95 wrote:

ยังไม่ทันจะว่างม็อดเลย แรงค์ซะแระ

Congrats