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The Checkers - Julia ni Heartbreak

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DJPop
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DJPop
- Voices seem to be a bit late.
- Set the preferred skin to "ouendan2".

~Easy~
00:23:42 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hitclaps
00:37:79 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
01:09:05 (2) - not centered
01:20:55 (2) - ^
01:48:21 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hitclaps
02:19:47 (2) - not centered
02:30:96 (2) - ^

~Normal~
00:23:42 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hitclaps
00:37:79 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
01:21:98 (5) - move left a bit
01:48:21 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - hitclaps
01:56:47 (1) - start and end are not on the same level
02:22:34 (1) - offscreen
02:28:09 (3) - too much offscreen if play with Hard Rock mod
02:32:40 (5) - move right a bit

~Hard~
01:14:80 (3) - not centered
01:25:93 (9) - hitwhistle at start
02:36:35 (9) - ^

~Insane~
01:14:80 (3) - not centered
01:25:93 (9) - hitwhistle at start
02:36:35 (9) - ^


+Star
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
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Torran
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Torran
Thanks again for modding!

ouranhshc wrote:

overall - like dj pop stated, some of the voices sound late.
I know but there isn't much I can do about it, that's just how osu! handles sound events right now.
Lissette
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Lissette
i cant open this map, can you full-submit plz?
Torran
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Torran
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Lissette
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Lissette

soradg123 wrote:

Lissette wrote:

i cant open this map, can you full-submit plz?
OK...done!
doesn't work -_-a
and when i tried to enter, my osu crashed

Torran
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Torran
Strange...Perhaps it is a problem at your end?
Torran
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Torran
OK, I think I know the problem; something having to do with the name of the mp3 being capital and having spaces. I re-uploaded it with a lowercase name with no spaces in-between. Try re-downloading it again.
Lissette
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Torran
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Torran
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kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Map was good and nothing found~

Overall:
00:45:70-Make the black BG pic appeared here~
00:56:30-Make the black BG pic disappeared here~
01:40:85-^
02:06:54-Make the black BG pic appeared here~
02:14:62-Make the black BG pic disappeared here~
The hitsound~Check this~http://osu.ppy.sh/s/5182

Star~
Mismagius
9,266 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
Nothing found, sorry :(

Here is a star(ite olololol) for you. :3
jericho2442
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jericho2442
you need to end the kai time at the end of each map

[Hard]

01:05:046 (1,2,3) - make it so it looks like these are going to each other, atm (1,2) dont look like they are going to (3) so line (2) up so that it makes a a perfect line from (1) to (3) it looks much better that way
02:27:037 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
02:15:087 (1,2,3) - as with what i said in hard, make these line up better

______________________________________-
very nice maps, great job :) ima star this now
Diasios
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Diasios
I love it *w*

starred~
Leorda
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Leorda
No Problem here
Star!
No storyboard? Are you lazy to make a storyoard or can't make the storyboard?
Torran
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Torran

Leorda wrote:

No storyboard? Are you lazy to make a storyoard or can't make the storyboard?
A bit of both. I blame school for discontinuing storyboard production.
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
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Torran
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Torran
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Teara
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Teara
Nice~ Absolutely no problems found.
Tanmak
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Tanmak
Hello~

[Easy]
02:30:251 (1) Use '1huh.wav.'

[Hard]
02:02:047 (3) No use '4tuh.wav'

Another difficulty... I can't find problem..

However, I don't like sound effection '1huh.wav'. This sound hears like barking dog. :(
So, I arranged and upload this wave file. That sound still not enough...but more male sound than old. :lol:
Or you can change this another wave file. This is your choice.

Starred. :)
p.s.: I like Insane about effection sound~

Download: 1huh.zip
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[Easy] & [Normal]
Fine


[Hard] & [Insane]
Put timing point right on note is no good when audio sample set changing.
If player click the beat a little bit fast, it makes weird sound.
It is not applied at return point of slider, end of slider and end of spinner.
Just applied at start of slider and circle.

example>
01:12:466 - This is OK
01:13:185 - move foward 1/4 tick (at 01:13:095)

more exist.. but I don't point anymore.


Nice map! star~☆ :D
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
*starred.

Difficulty names: [Kigaru ni Ouen]/[Kakan ni Ouen]/[Gekiretsu ni Ouen]/[Karei ni Ouen]?

(I can't really mod too much on an authentic, sorry.)
bmin11
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minyeob
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minyeob
lol Ouendan

Anyway, can you make accurate spinners?

For example,
[Kakan ni Ouen]
01:26:029 (1) - Actually, this spinner starts too fast. Please recheck this on Youtube ALL300 Monster's replay video or something.

I'm too lazy to check all diff's spinner lol

Nice authentic mapping~
Torran
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Torran
Thanks! Done!
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Sorry, but I don't know how to mod authetic maps that much.

Looks good though, so far.

Have a star.
m980
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m980
Niiiice

[Kakan Ni Ouen]
01:56:119 (3) - Move this right abit, yes I know it's in the right spot, and 2 was moved since the grid doesn't extend to the ends, but spacing shouldn't be affected in this way.

The others look fine.

[All Difficulties]
Kiai timing should really start on Juuuuuuuulia (ie. 01:06:179 - ) It's kind of weird where it is now.

Looks good!
Lilac
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Lilac
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Torran
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Torran
Thanks you two, fixed.
Mok
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Mok
Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3 I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3

[General]
I think you should reduce the Hitsounds Volume, 'cause the song have a low rate. Try to reduce it over 7. Now the map.
Usa 1/4 snap divisor, is better than 1/2
Remeber to fix spacing after modify the beat x3
Do straight sliders or the pixels maybe let the map appear bad D:

[Kagiru ni Ouen]
01:23:424 (1,2) Move them 1/4 before.
02:33:843 (1,2) ^.

[Kakan ni Ouen]
Seems fine ^^.

[Gekiretsu ni Ouen]
Seems fine too :D

[Karei ni Ouen]
Gekiretsu ni Ouen and Karei ni Ouen are too similiar for two differents difficulties. Search new combo for Karei ni Ouen to make the map more difficult.

Finally, the map is fine ^^.

And that's all! I hope you search me again for other mods x3 Star!
minyeob
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minyeob
Bubble #1 ^^
Kim Jin Seok
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Kim Jin Seok
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arien666
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arien666
XD
Good map :3

Here's my star XD
Lilac
Elite Mapper
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Joined December 2008
Lilac
Hate to break it to you but...

Something is wrong with Karei ni Ouen. Because it makes both the male and the female cheerleading sound. You might want to fix that up.

Also, get rid of the letterbox during the break.
Torran
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Torran

MarioBros777 wrote:

Something is wrong with Karei ni Ouen. Because it makes both the male and the female cheerleading sound. You might want to fix that up.
You might want to try re-downloading; it seems that your osb got messed up.

MarioBros777 wrote:

Also, get rid of the letterbox during the break.
Um, you can see a letterbox behind a black background? Anyways, yeah, re-download.
m980
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m980
[Normal]
01:08:334 (1,2,3) - Maybe have spacing for this consistent.
01:19:831 (1,2,3) - ^
01:56:119 (3) - Perhaps more 3 over a bit more
02:18:754 (1,2,3) - Maybe have spacing for this consistent.
02:30:251 (1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
02:25:400 (4,5,7,8) - It's not like iNiS to have weird triangle formations. Move these down 1 lvl 3 grid.

Also.. consider making the Ouendan Cheers hitsounds instead of SB sounds. Just my 2 cents.

Tell me when these are done.
Torran
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Torran
Thanks again m980, corrected multiple spacing issues and pattern formations.
m980
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Bubble 4 u
Torran
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Torran
New osu! build messed with the animations.
m980
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m980
I'll assume nothing is changed other than the animations.
Torran
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m980 wrote:

I'll assume nothing is changed other than the animations.
I also took the chance to fix a consistency issue at 00:59:712 (3,4) on Normal and changed the length of breaks to make them more authentic in case this gets implemented.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Ephemeral
I thought the SB was broken at first.

Turns out it's just sparse.

Fade out the backgrounds to black. It looks ridiculous just snapping to black like that - I don't care how 'authentic' it is.
Torran
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Edit 01/07/10 - Thanks Ephemeral, added fading to everything.

Of course, everything would make more sense if there were dancers...
Huh, the preview time's broken.
Lilac
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Lilac
I'm back, to annoy you more...

[Kakan ni Ouen]
00:57:55 (1,2,3,4) - So you fixed it. XD
01:06:17 (1) - What an unsymmetrical slider. Try moving the 4th point 1 grid right and the last point 1 grid down.
01:11:92 (1) - ^ But in reverse.
01:17:67 (1) - ^
01:24:68 (1,2,3,4,5) - Together, one grid down?
01:56:47 (1) - That's one very ugly slider. But I don't you can change that.
02:04:92 (1) -Symmetry on that is bad. Try this...

Note the points.
02:16:59 (1) - Refer to first mod.
02:22:34 (1) - Refer to second mod.
02:28:09 (1) - Yeah...
02:35:10 (1,2,3,4,5) - One grid down?

Yeah... ^_^;
Torran
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Torran
Edit 01/08/10 - Thanks again MarioBros777, a lotta fixes on Kakan ni Ouen.

If I could give you 2 kudosu I would :)
Lilac
Elite Mapper
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Lilac
Aww shucks, soradg...

^_^;

Well, I altered some symmetry for Kiagru ni Ouen with no major space shift.

It's up to you whether you want to use it or not... I'd advise you to check with the previous .osu.

These fixes up sliders such as:

00:30:430 (1) -
01:06:179 (2) -
01:14:802 (2) -
01:56:478 (1) - and the consecutive ones after it.

Really, it's up to you in the end. You're almost going to get there, soradg123. This is where my modding ends.

Download: The Checkers - Julia ni Heartbreak (soradg123) [Kigaru ni Ouen].osu
Torran
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Edit 01/08/10 - Thanks again for the second time MarioBros777! Kigaru ni Ouen fixes by him.
m980
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Isn't Ephe cool? Popping a bubble and not rebubbling once the problem is taken care of.
Torran
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Torran

m980 wrote:

Isn't Ephe cool? Popping a bubble and not rebubbling once the problem is taken care of.
He's a very busy man I guess.
Ephemeral
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Ephemeral
Conciliatory rank.

Sort of. 8-)
Derekku
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Derekku
Nice job, but I wish that the Ouendan 2 skin had been set as default =3=
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