1. 删掉所有蓝线书签

1. 00:38:386 (2) - 和(3)太近了 建议1-2 grid right
2. 02:21:845 - +note并且clap
3. 03:41:305 (4) - 开头也clap

1. 03:34:818 (2) - 结尾clap

1. fine

1. AR+1
2. 01:13:818 (7) - clap
3. 01:21:521 (5) - 感觉这个slider该拆成两个
4. 02:31:575 (5) - ^
5. 02:23:872 (7) - clap
6. 03:23:548 (7) - ^
7. 03:49:575 (6) - NC

1. 01:03:521 (1) - 总觉得这个音太响了 一开始我换了5%音感觉不错 但是加了whistle以后怎么都有原本鼓声成分在里面
2. 建议：把whistle音换到S然后单独改一下这个key音
3. 01:17:467 (6) - 考虑改位置 被前面note挡住了 建议往左下角拉做大三角
4. 01:32:224 (1,2,3,4) - suggestion:每个依次往下微移一格o.o
5. 01:58:332 (2) - 结尾加clap
6. 02:04:332 (5) - clap
7. 02:06:926 (1) - 和02:05:953 (3) - 没对齐嘛o.o
8. 02:13:251 (6) - suggestion:0.5x+删掉02:13:575 (7) -
9. 02:27:521 (6) - 考虑改位置 被前面note挡住了 建议往右上角拉做大三角
10. 03:04:980 (5) - NC
11. 03:07:575 (4) - ^(o.o我承认只是觉得好看
12. 03:10:656 (1) - 和03:10:494 (6) - 做stack效果会好些 然后把NC后移一位
13. 03:12:764 (5) - 建议这个音放轻 和01:03:521 (1) - 应该做成一样的效果 感觉。(然后再加个NC就更完美了
14. 03:31:251 (1,2) - 后面又没有类似spacing的排列 这个就显得突兀了o.o
15. 03:49:575 (6) - NC

• 00:08:386 - put note to follow the previous pattern.
  00:39:683 (1) - remove NC?
  01:21:197 (5,1) - do you have a special reason for this too large distance?
  03:31:251 (1,2,1) - ^

• 00:11:143 (1) - too sudden SV change and it will cause mistake. 1.0x is enough imo.
  and same as other sliders like as 00:31:899 (1).
  00:22:818 (3,1,2) - how about make a triangle like this?
  SPOILER

  

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.
Easy and Normal seem good for me

[Hard]
00:47:467 (6,7,1) - That's a weird part because of the spacing
00:53:143 (8,1) - ^

That's a few, but you've done a great job

GL for rank ^^

spboxer3 wrote:

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general

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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. nope~

Easy

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 01:39:683 (4,2) -

FIX~

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 00:38:710 - I don't know why do you want to used whistle ("叮"'s sound) It's just confuse for me :/ FIX~
   
   
   
2. 01:03:683 - 70% vol it's too low for kiai time. at least 80%~85% it's more fit 我估计是你默认游戏的音效声音调太小了，80%的音效在我这边听已经完全盖过音乐声音了Orz....楼下的都同上^
   
   
3. 01:21:845 - 70% vol ((if you change kiai vol. please unify this time section.
   
   
4. 01:49:413 (2) - same as 00:38:710 - FIX~
   
   
5. 02:13:737 - same as prew kiai
   
   
6. 03:23:791 - ^

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:48:115 (1) - [nazi] move 2 grid right (( make 00:47:467 (5,1,2) - more pretty curve

FIX~


looks pattern haven't big problem

Normal

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  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. unuesd green line
   00:42:926 FIX~
   01:52:980

FIX~

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. [kiai time] increase to 80~85% (vol)
   

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:07:899 (4) - [suggestion] rotate 14° make more good curve for 00:07:575 (3,4) - FIX~
   
   
2. 00:11:629 (2) - Actually, I think reverse it's more fit for this part. 因為00:11:143 (1,2) - 背景音樂來說是很強的音 但是你現在這個spacing一致 不能突顯那個音的重力,因此我建議你把這個改成reverse方向的pattern ((而且因為是Normal 不需要讓spacing完全一致 祇要不要太超過就OK了 FIX~
   
   
3. 01:01:088 (1) - [suggestion] ^ same 14° lol FIX~
   
   
4. 01:06:926 (2,3,4,5) - It's a awkward curve shape for me. you know that~01:07:737 (3,4,5) - the radian didn't fit the 01:06:926 (2) - 問題在中間那兩顆 妳懂的>_> FIX~
   
   
5. 02:16:980 (2,3,4,5) - ^ FIX~
   
   
6. 03:40:007 (2,3,4,5) - same issue as 01:06:926 (2,3,4,5) - FIX~
   
   
7. 03:47:791 (2) - [suggestion] move this slider to x200,y76 same issue as curve 同樣是因為曲線問題 那改了後03:48:602 (3) - 就看著辦吧>_>

FIX~

Hard

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  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. unused green line
   00:42:926
   00:53:305
   01:42:602
   01:52:980
   02:03:359

FIX~

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. [kiai time] increase to 80~85% (vol)
   
   
2. 01:10:494 (2) - D: why do you used whistle? lol'd我真心不懂你的whistle怎麼放的(All of them) 看似有規律但是短期間內看不出來 讓人感覺怎麼突然就有這個音的感覺...;w;

唔俩长白后的第一个短白？...我听着不错就没改


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:01:413 (1,2,3,4) - [nazi] uneven spacing. 我的意愿就是让1和2还有3和4的间距平均就行了恩<3
   
   
2. 01:06:278 (1) - move 1 grid up ((grid size 4 讓這個slider的頭尾與01:05:467 (3) - 的尾端間距相同 FIX~
   
   
3. 01:06:926 (3) - ^ as you want to make a symmetry pattern FIX~
   
   
4. 02:16:332 (1,3) - ^ FIX~
   
   
5. 03:10:818 (1,2) - spacing issue? why do you used large spacing at this pattern. it's at 1/2 rhythm and not on the downbeat, so used originally spacing it's better imo 俩长的1/2靠在一起感觉不好看而且这样摆玩的时候比较好玩这样
   
   
6. 03:29:629 (2,3) - ^

^

Insane

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  Hitsound
  (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  [list:821e6]

1. [kiai time] increase to 80~85% (vol)
2. 同其他難度的音效lol

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 01:14:872 (4,5) - change spacing isn't on the fit point. ((音樂的重音在01:15:197 (1) - 但是你跳卻是在前面 感覺有些不適合 FIX~
   
   
2. 01:37:413 (1,6) - [nazi] you should stack it. FIX~
   
   
3. 02:01:899 (2,3,4,5) - [curve issue] 額...你懂的>_> FIX~
   
   
4. 02:16:818 (4,5) - same as 01:14:872 (4,5) - FIX~
   
   
5. 03:45:683 (1,2) - up 2 grid (size 4) because you should stack 03:44:710 (2,2) - imo

FIX~

Circus

• 
  
  Hitsound
  (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  

1. 同上方...
   

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:37:656 - when this diff it's must difficult diff you should add not at here imo ((it's more fit the music 本来是这样的，但是我觉得改成后面这个顿一下再打比较好玩
   
   
2. 02:13:251 (1) - 你使用了3 plat 的減速slider 但是說實話用單一的slider會更好 因為中間02:13:413 - 本來就沒聲音 而且加了也不是很適合 这个是那个谁谁谁建议我这么用的，没声音嘛如果用减速的话打起来也好打也比较有感觉，当然这块的话你实在是非常的觉得接受不了的话我会改~
   
   
3. 02:24:440 (3,4,5) - too far spacing D: 額...這個真心過大了 我認為不需要 畢竟太遠了根本很難打 而且這段spacing確實讓我感覺有些over了 FIX~
   
   
4. 02:27:359 (5,6,7) - ^ spacing都到2.00↑去了... 这个可以确定没问题test player没一个在这里断掉的
   
   
5. 03:24:278 (2,3,4) - ^ 这个可以确定没问题^
   
   
6. 03:33:034 (2,4) - stack it's pretty more imo. at least it's more clear pattern for player 这个没问题
   
   
7. 03:48:440 - Umm... 0.75 SV 對這段來說比較適合 這邊音樂的鼓點(高潮部分)已經結束了 感覺用0.75會給人比較舒服點的感覺

FIX~

OK~ cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item 对不起一个不小心没看到我就用紫色了T口T！！！！！！
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.

spboxer3 wrote:

recheck
[general]
音效建議是因為80%在kiai中比較有感覺70%來說實在太冷感了... 若你堅持不改就算了 因為這不是強迫的 还是觉得太吵了..算了吧/_\...

[Circus]
00:37:656 - ...你用3連依然會有你要的效果阿 而且比較適合音樂 FIX
02:13:251 (1) - 這點我還是會建議改 畢竟感覺中間的音多餘了...FIX
03:48:440 (1,2) - 節奏之前我記得不是這樣的 而且這個1/4拍距離太開了间距FIX


改完再叫我一次...我去休息了>_>

Mercurial wrote:

Hey someone, 1 month old bubble, just sayin'.

Also, due at the new rule about Vocaloid songs, the artist must be changed, I think.

tutuhaha wrote:

10.10！！！！！！My Birthday~\(≧▽≦)/~！！！！！！！！