Akashi_S wrote:

그런데 이 곡은 rank를 위한 곡인데 insane 난이도에서 스코어가 좀 높네용 ;ㅅ;

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  [General]
  you have to use same red timing section in all diffs
  
  
  [Floor 1]
  
  03:46:376 (1) - add NC here for prevent NC bug
  02:32:968 - .... break time 29385ms........ too loooooooong D: add some note here.
  
  [Floor 10]
  
  oh... please.... don't abuse NC. you have many unnecessary NC. like this 00:35:985 (1,1,1,1) - it is so many....
  so i don't mention one by one
  easy and hard diff too
  
  [Floor 100]
  
  if it is hard diff, i think ar7 better
  od4 ? nono. 5 or 6
  4 is tooooooo low..
  
  02:31:324 - ^
  
  [Floor J]
  
  hp7(?)
  ar9 od7
  
  i think this is extra diff.....
  i'm sure that it's not insane diff
  it's not good about diff spread
  solution :
  1.난이도 하향조정 2. 노트크기 (circle size)를 늘인다 3. 난이도 1개 더 추가
  2번은 하더라도 1,3번 둘중 하나는 해야할거같군요..
  
  02:53:246 (5,6,7) - distance snap, (anti-jump)

intoon wrote:

o.o

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[General]
you have to use same red timing section in all diffs < 지금 그림으로 봐서는 GD와 제 난이도들의 차이인것 같네요. Jayel님께 물어보도록 하겠습니다.


[Floor 1]

03:46:376 (1) - add NC here for prevent NC bug < okay
02:32:968 - .... break time 29385ms........ too loooooooong D: add some note here. < on the things that I have to do.

[Floor 10]

oh... please.... don't abuse NC. you have many unnecessary NC. like this 00:35:985 (1,1,1,1) - it is so many.... < will fix this
so i don't mention one by one
easy and hard diff too

[Floor 100]

if it is hard diff, i think ar7 better < okay
od4 ? nono. 5 or 6 < fixed
4 is tooooooo low..

02:31:324 - ^ > ^

p.s 원래 랭크점수 limit이 2000만점이엇는데 이마저도 어프로브 점수 적용하면서 없어진듯하니 점수는 신경안쓰셔도되요 < 그렇군요.

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/ Sorry for late orz < it's fine thanks for modding

Floor 1

00:17:214 (2) - Slider with 3 repeats, please replace it with circles or a long slider, in easy diffs slider with more than 1 repeats are hard to read for a newbie player < fixed with long slider with 1 repeat.
00:29:281 (4) - Move this symmetric to the center? ( x:324 y:104) < fixed
00:55:091 (2) - As said before, slider with more than one repetition BLAH BLAH BLAH < XD fixed
01:13:862 (2) - 1 grid down < fixed
What about 40% volume from here 01:18:219 to here 01:24:253 ? < okay
01:25:594 (1) - x:420 y:268 < fixed
What about replacing 01:41:683 (1,2) With a slider that starts in 01:41:683 and ends in 01:42:018 and then a spinner that starts in 01:42:186 and ends in 01:44:365 ? < fixed
01:59:113 - You should start this kiai here in my opinion 01:59:784 <oops yup.
Or start it in 02:00:454 and add a new combo, it's better ^^ If you change kiai don't remember to change it in other diffs!
^ you mean don't forget to change XD XD XD XD XD
02:13:862 (2) - x:360 y:260 < fixed
02:21:739 - Silence the end of this spinner °A° < fixed
02:59:281 - Add finish? < okay
03:33:806 - End this spinner in 03:35:482 ? < I'll leave it as it is.. even though spinner is kinda short, I want to keep some space till next note.

Floor 10

00:49:392 (7) - Improve this slider's shape, it's crooked! < tried the best to fix XP..
01:44:365 - Silence the end of the spinner
01:57:102 (1,2,3) - What the hell D: Very hard to read! Replace with a slider that starts in 01:57:102 and ends in 01:57:353 With one repetition!
02:32:633 - Finish
02:49:728 (3) - It's not symmetric with 02:48:722 (1) fix it! < tried my best
03:01:376 You should start this section in 03:01:459 And also 40 % volume!
03:07:996 55% volume / 03:08:666 60% volume / 03:09:337 65% volume / <--- Try it, I'm not sure about this btw
03:30:789 (1) - Unneccessary NC, remove it! And remove also NC here 03:31:459 (1)

Floor 100

00:32:465 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes doesn't make any sense for me :/ < it was 10 notes stream following the instrumental, and made it into 5 notes to make it bit easy, if another modder points this out then I'll rethink about this.
03:46:711 (3) - Weird overlap with 03:47:046 (4) Place 3 away < fixed

I can't find other in this diff. Nice sliders :3

Floor J

I can't find errors but it's very very very nazi!


Lol good luck o/

1st Kiai : 00:46:711 ~ 01:17:549
2nd Kiai : 02:00:454 ~ 02:31:292
3rd Kiai : 03:13:527 ~ 03:44:365

03:42:853 snap to 03:42:856
03:57:601 snap to 03:57:605 

ScreenShot & Code

376,288,175426,2,0,B|344:344|264:336|232:280,1,160

00:42:016 snap to 00:42:018
03:42:853 snap to 03:42:856
03:57:601 snap to 03:57:605 

1st Kiai : 00:46:711 ~ 01:17:549
2nd Kiai : 02:00:454 ~ 02:31:292
3rd Kiai : 03:13:527 ~ 03:44:365

03:42:853 snap to 03:42:856
03:57:601 snap to 03:57:605 

ScreenShot & Code

376,288,175426,2,0,B|344:344|264:336|232:280,1,160

00:42:016 snap to 00:42:018
03:42:853 snap to 03:42:856
03:57:601 snap to 03:57:605 

Jayel wrote:

겟난 고칠 시간이 없어영 ㅠㅠㅠ 죄송합니다 ㅠㅠㅠ 가능한 빨리 고쳐서 보내드릴게요..

chaotic_iak wrote:

Yay from queue.

Must fix, preferably fix, maybe fix (or it's just me being noobish)

[Floor 1]
If this is Normal instead, it would be of no problem. But since it's Easy...
00:09:839 (4,5) - 1.5-beat gap is not good in Easy because it's hard to estimate and it's too short for players to switch to depend on approach circle
00:14:532 (2,3) - ^
00:27:940 (3) - Preferably no stacking in Easy because it might be hidden
00:33:303 - Preferably no speed change in Easy without sufficient break < remove sv change.
00:40:677 (1,2) - 1.5-beat gap
00:55:091 (2) - Stacking
01:06:655 (3) - ^
01:38:666 (2) - ^
01:41:348 (6,7) - ^
02:00:119 (2) - ^
02:25:761 (2) - ^
02:28:108 (3,4) - 1.5-beat gap
02:29:951 (1,2,3) - ^ Also 2,3 is stacked
03:17:549 (1,1) - Inconsistent spacing
03:27:940 (1,2) - 1/2-beat gap is even worse in Easy since Easy players tend to use mouse buttons, and 1/2-beat gap is hard for them
03:29:113 (4,1,2,3,1) - 1.5-beat gaps
03:32:130 (1,2) - 1/2-beat gap
03:32:297 (2,3) - 1.5-beat gap
03:43:024 (3,4,5) - Stacking and 1.5-beat gaps
03:50:901 (6,1) - 1.5-beat gap
03:51:739 (2,3) - ^
03:53:582 (5,1) - ^

^ I'll try to remove 1.5-gaps and stacking, but not all because sometimes it sounds really awkward if I try to make it all 1 or 2 beat gaps.

[Floor 10]
01:14:029 (4) - Hidden below slider, shouldn't in Normal because it's practically unreadable
01:15:370 (2) - ^
02:01:124 (2) - ^
02:19:728 (3) - ^
03:03:471 (3) - ^
03:14:197 (2) - ^

^ I think hidden below slider is totally readable and appropriate for normal because of the approaching circle is clearly visible and AR is not that high.

[Floor 100]
No mod? Okay.

Hm, you seem to have problems with timing in Easy. Yes, I know it follows the vocals and stuffs, but I still don't think they are good in Easy. Normal can have as many as you want as long as you don't overly spam everything. Good luck!

Azusa wrote:

Even though I made very little progress to my map, I decided to mod yours first. Hmm, 4 mins map. Please excuse my language, don't take it personally my friend.
Feel free to ignore comments you don't like.
I would like to start with Floor 100 even though you wanted me to mod 1 and 10 XD.

[Floor 100]

00:00:454 (1,2,3) - I found it is very annoying to see this stack right from the first beat. Consider to spread it out. < I won't fix this atm, if another modder said so, then I will.
00:01:795 (5,6) - From the end of the slider, the volume suddenly spikes up. Why can't it stay at 20% volume. It was an unexpected jump in volume for me. < fixed
00:03:135 (7) - 25% volume? or 30? 30% sounds fine to me. < fixed
00:05:985 (1) - Maybe I have a sensitive ear. I found it is way too loud. I feel the hitting beat covers the sound of the song. < fixed.
00:06:990 (2) - Are you really want to do this? < yes.
00:32:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I hated this kind of unexpected "fast hit"(? - - what is that called in English?) To me, this part is supposed to be nice and easy. Yeah, you heard the drums, but... I recommend to replace this with a single back-and-forth note. There is just not enough of "momentum" built up before this harsh chain note. < remove the stream XD
01:10:175 (2) - Again, this is just mean. XD < fixed (no overlap)
01:05:314 (8) - For my first play. I hit a late 50 here, because I did not expect this. Consider to delete this. Please. XD < fixed.
01:16:208 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - It is not like I can't understand this increased jump pattern. I have no suggestion. I just want to let you know it bothers me when I played. < I'll leave it as it is.
01:24:085 (6) - Inconsistent distance. Consider to play this on top to make a kite. < fixed.
01:37:493 (4,5,1,2,3) - To me, the note density here is little too high. It is hard to see. < fixed.
01:56:767 (5) - This note is not only mean but out of regular distance. It will be perfect if place it at the end of the slider. < fixed.

Please refer to the previous comment to the second verse part. It seems the same isn't it.

02:51:404 (1,2,3,4) - ???? I know it is hard to map the solo bridge part of Jpop. My take is that I would just follow the guitar. < I'll try my best...
03:07:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This quiet solo sing part is kinda weird, especially at here. Since it is the calm part, I suggest not to do any outrageous arrangements like this. From my experience, these calm parts give me the most trouble. Good luck. < not fixed atm. this part I considered as a crescendo and slowly getting having a larger spacing so that it is not surprising after the calm part is over.

03:23:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - The rhythm did not suggest this 1/8 5 circle set. Consider deleting 3,4,5. Use a slider at 3 which ends at 5. < fixed.
03:33:973 (1,2,3) - Awkward note time. Maybe this sounds better

SPOILER

< umm.. not fixed..
03:36:823 (4) - Delete, rhythm did not suggest this either. < fixed.
03:43:862 (4) - ^ < fixed.
03:48:722 (1) - Consider switching 1 and 2 < fixed
03:55:091 (3,4,5,6) - Oh wow, these are some fierce notes. I like variety, but I suggest you'd better be consistent with the space. I notice that not a lot of people like increase jumps. < removed note 5 here..

Even with those distance and placing issue, I was more comfortable playing this than your previous Floor 10 like a month ago. Good job, I really like your sliders. I can't make pretty sliders like these lllorz.

Sorry, but I guess only one more difficulty. (This takes longer than I expected.) I will do Floor 10. Let's see how much has this improved. Huh, there is Floor 50. It is only 2:51 long.

[Floor 10]
00:13:862 (1,2) - I don't like the idea of stacking in Normal Difficulties. < I'll keep as it is.
00:14:197 (2) - Clap? I don't feel like it. Delete this. < fixed
00:35:649 (3) - I got a quicker 100 here. In fact, it is hard to read the rhythm out even for me. < not fixed.
00:38:666 (1) - Stacking. I will stop pointing out stacking.
00:43:359 (4) - Unrankable It went out of bounds. < fixed
01:01:124 (1,2) - 16th note in normal, and it is stacked. I think this might be too hard for normal. Save these in harder difficulties.
01:03:471 (2) - out of bounds. This does not seem like a little bit out of the grid. Generally, I would avoid to go out of the grids.
01:05:314 (1,2) - Difficulty issue
01:07:325 (1,2) - ^
01:14:867 (1,2,3) - these are definitely too hard for normal
01:10:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^
01:16:208 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

For those 1/16 notes, I this it wouldn't be too bad if you use them sparingly. Placing before a slider feels OK. However, placing at the end of slider, consecutive 2 sets are just too hard for normal. From 2:48 to 2:59, it looks great. Try to employ this kind of pattern for other places. Those aforementioned problems pretty much sums up my mod for this difficulty.

02:19:057 (1,2,3) - This is a pattern for hard difficulty
03:46:040 (1,2) - Consider to use a circle at 1. and a quick slider starting at the end of the "1" slider and end at 2.
03:53:750 (4,1,2,1) - Very hard to read. Spread it out a bit.

That's all I have for 2 hrs. Good luck. I will come back and see after a while. Floor 100 looks great!

1. 00:09:839 (4,5) - it's unexpected to me...maybe u can try make it like 00:07:828 (2) - ？because the is Easy diff~=w=..just nazi~
2. 00:42:521 (2,3) - ^.....this feel no good to newible player~
3. 01:45:035 (1) - try to make more beautiful like~
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:51:906 - try add note?~
2. 01:02:633 - ^
3. 01:10:510 - ^...sudden the rhythm a half make less.....feel no good~
4. 03:44:532 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner for a Normal...

1. 00:17:884 (4) - turn it?~like~
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:30:455 (1,2,1,2) - try to ctrl+H?
3. have a big problem~
   
   1. 01:03:303 (2,3) - due Stack Leniency the slider3 no encircle pretty to 01:03:973 (4) -
      SPOILER

      [spoilerbox]
   2. 01:04:141 (5,6) - ^
   3. 01:12:856 (2,3,4) - ^
   4. 03:01:795 (3,4) - ^
   5. 03:41:683 (1,2) - ^
4. 03:43:862 - add note?~.....
5. 01:34:644 (3,1) - ...too close...try to