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EastNewSound - Kaihou -Infinity-

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a32
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a32
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年3月14日 at 21:06:03

Artist: EastNewSound
Title: Kaihou -Infinity-
Source: Touhou
Tags: Undefined Fantastic Object Tsubaki Hijiri Byakuren Emotional Skyscraper Cosmic Wind kingdomkey raku Blaze Out ZUN
BPM: 143
Filesize: 5256kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.77 stars, 408 notes)
  2. Lunatic (5 stars, 508 notes)
  3. Normal (2.93 stars, 192 notes)
Download: EastNewSound - Kaihou -Infinity-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Completed~
time for some 善良
N-H-I
not accept GDs~
[Normal] by me
[Hard] by kingdomkey
[Lunatic] by me
Last edited by a32 , edited 17 times in total.
aonkub555
133 posts
Joined June 2012
aonkub555

a3272509123 wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年8月13日 at 14:02:07

Artist: EastNewSound
Title: Kaihou -Infinity-
Source: Touhou
Tags: Undefined Fantastic Object Tsubaki Hijiri Byakuren
BPM: 143
Filesize: 4983kb
Play Time: 00:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lunatic (5 stars, 3 notes)
Download: EastNewSound - Kaihou -Infinity-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
WIP~
Not accepting GD now~
why have note just that !? :!:
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
a32

aonkub555 wrote:

a3272509123 wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年8月13日 at 14:02:07

Artist: EastNewSound
Title: Kaihou -Infinity-
Source: Touhou
Tags: Undefined Fantastic Object Tsubaki Hijiri Byakuren
BPM: 143
Filesize: 4983kb
Play Time: 00:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lunatic (5 stars, 3 notes)
Download: EastNewSound - Kaihou -Infinity-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
WIP~
Not accepting GD now~
why have note just that !? :!:
Well~This song has just come out so I had just begun working on it~Plz be patient~
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
May i help you?♂Sir♂
pw384
2,287 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
渣mod._.

[Normal]
nazi:感觉AR=4比较好
02:12:618 (6) 这里不方._.
02:38:842 (2) 不对称，略不好看._.

[Hard]
00:00:451 (1) 转盘有些长._.
00:43:248 (1) 取消nc，感觉和上面有连贯性，那么在这里加nc吧00:44:087 (3)
00:47:444 (6) nc
00:47:863 (1) 取消nc


[Lunatic]
Orz..我不会mod ins以上的图...orz... :(
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
a32

384059043 wrote:

渣mod._.

[Normal]
nazi:感觉AR=4比较好这个先放着吧0.0
02:12:618 (6) 这里不方._.改了点..但感觉还是不方...
02:38:842 (2) 不对称，略不好看._.改了一点0.0我不会画slider喵


[Lunatic]
Orz..我不会mod ins以上的图...orz... :( 这个L超善良的啊

Thanks for modding and star~
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
[Normal]

  1. 01:15:975 (2) - 
    80,108,75975,2,0,B|188:80,1,110,0|8
  2. 02:48:283 (1,2,3) - 鋪開?
[Hard]
唔...這個...
  1. 這diff的分都快趕Lunatic了,而且play time和其他diff不同,建議砍掉01:49:541 - 02:01:919.
  2. NC下得比較混亂,像這些
  3. 00:50:381 (1) - Remove
  4. 01:02:548 (1) - ^
  5. 00:30:660 (6,1) - Swap the NC plz
  6. 00:47:444 (6,1) - ^
  7. 後面還有些我就不一一挑了
  8. Useless Timing Section:
    47234
    89402
[Lunatic]

  1. 00:18:702 (1) - 前面那段clap不錯到這突然停了...?
  2. 00:32:129 (1) - overlap了
    116,160,32129,6,0,B|112:248|48:316,1,170
  3. 00:52:269 (1) - .......................................
  4. 00:57:513 (1) - 不好看
    428,292,57513,6,0,B|352:304|352:304|240:304,1,170,4|8
  5. 01:16:814 (4) - 折返箭頭被遮>_>?
  6. 01:21:010 - 這個break time取消怎麼樣?
  7. 01:25:206 (5,6,7,8) - 非常善良
  8. 02:46:604 (1) - 頭加個fin? 如果加的話 02:47:234 - 這裏加個note with finish
  9. 02:49:541 (5,6) - 這個fin實在有點奇怪lol
  10. 02:54:996 (1,2,3) - 這段fin建議改一下 將2的尾取消 3的頭加上 或者現在這樣的話3的尾加上fin
  11. Useless Timing Section:
    106185
0.0
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
a32

AmamiyaYuko wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 01:15:975 (2) - 
    80,108,75975,2,0,B|188:80,1,110,0|8
    ok
  2. 02:48:283 (1,2,3) - 鋪開?
好

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:18:702 (1) - 前面那段clap不錯到這突然停了...?加上了www
  2. 00:32:129 (1) - overlap了fixed
    116,160,32129,6,0,B|112:248|48:316,1,170
  3. 00:52:269 (1) - .......................................还好0.0
  4. 00:57:513 (1) - 不好看
    428,292,57513,6,0,B|352:304|352:304|240:304,1,170,4|8
  5. 01:16:814 (4) - 折返箭頭被遮>_>?确实是 fixed
  6. 01:21:010 - 這個break time取消怎麼樣?ok
  7. 01:25:206 (5,6,7,8) - 非常善良确实> >
  8. 02:46:604 (1) - 頭加個fin? 如果加的話 02:47:234 - 這裏加個note with finishfixed
  9. 02:49:541 (5,6) - 這個fin實在有點奇怪lol改了点lol
  10. 02:54:996 (1,2,3) - 這段fin建議改一下 將2的尾取消 3的頭加上 或者現在這樣的話3的尾加上fin好
  11. Useless Timing Section:
    106185    删了0.0
0.0

多谢modding~
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
滑条静音？

[Normal]
01:35:276 (4,5) - finish太多了就反而起不到强调的作用了，一定要用的话至少在音量上有些差别比较好
02:53:318 (5) - 头上finish?

[Hard]
00:19:122 (1) - 去掉NC?
00:49:332 (1) - 红线finish太奇怪了
01:02:548 (1) - 没必要单独一个NC..
01:05:905 (1) - 这么长的slider不减速么。。
01:11:569 (4) - 最后这个距离和其它不一样，看着不舒服
01:53:737 (5) - 前后spacing差得有点多
01:56:255 (1) - ^
02:36:115 (1) - 去掉NC?
02:41:569 (3,4) - overlap到一点，略影响美观
02:58:562 (1) - 从前面蓝线开始？
02:58:562 (1) - 转盘结尾消音

[Lunatic]
00:20:590 (1) - 不对称啊
00:25:625 (1) - 少了个NC?
00:46:395 (1) - 和前面00:45:555 (1)音乐一样但滑条速度不一样
00:51:639 (5,1) - 这个妥妥的要被喷。。不要冒这个险。把(1)往右往下一格可破
01:08:423 (3) - 建议四锚点，现在的不好看
01:13:877 (7,1) - 觉得这个overlap略难看。。
01:15:975 (1,4) - 不做个包围么。。
01:46:185 (1) - ctrl+r?
02:08:842 (1) - 头上移掉finish?
02:09:681 (3) - 头上加finish?

That's all I can find. GL~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Random mod


[General]
* Add "raku" in tags, since he is an arranger of this song
* Add "blaze out", since this come from that album


[Normal]
00:54:996 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)
01:05:485 (2) - Add finish?
01:19:332 (1) - ^
02:28:143 (1) - ^
02:30:451 - Add note with finish?


[Hard]
* I found the clap that aren't at upbeat (2nd and 4th white tick. Please add clap at upbeat instead downbeat
* This diff has no breaks, while other diff has one. Please add one break space for this diff

00:00:451 (1) - Perhaps remove this spinner and remap that part? Like others diff? Having a long spinner without following rhythm/vocal are useless
00:18:702 (1) - Why new combo?
00:42:199 (6) - Why finish here? It doesn't following the cymbal on the song....
00:49:332 (1) - ^
01:02:548 (1) - Why new combo?
01:22:688 (2,1) - Swap new combo, sometimes the beginning of kiai should start at new combo....
01:47:444 (1) - Why new combo?
02:36:115 (1) - ^


[Insane]
00:25:625 (1) - New combo, since this note is after spinner. This issue just a warning if you forgot or intentional
00:52:269 (1) - Since this is 0,5x slider and the slider shape is same as 00:51:639 (5), this might be confusing for players while gameplay. Consider to make a different slider or pattern
01:21:849 - Add note with finish?
01:37:793 (1) - Shorten to 01:38:003 and add note at 01:38:213 for making a good rhythm like 01:36:115 (1,2)
02:22:164 (7,8) - This spacing were not same as 02:22:059 (6,7). Consider to fix the spacing with 0,6x distance spacing
02:30:660 (2) - Add finish


This songs makes me want to praise to god....
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod from queue~~

[General]
  1. ZUN to tags
  2. 考虑把soft clap做成slidertick.wav然后来填补normal里面那些因为长slider而丢掉的clap？毕竟不是whistle，时有时无的情况下还是能听的很清楚的……
  3. 建议在soft里面加静音sliderslide，前奏段slider音还是能听到的
[Normal]
  1. 00:23:527 - 从你前面的节奏来看……这里可以来个note :>
  2. 00:48:912 (3,4,5) - 这里的节奏塞1/2有一点点拥挤的感觉……把(3)去掉，(4)的起点延长到(3)的位置同时结束位置不变，然后去掉折返之后，后面再做一个slider这样？
  3. 另外我觉得到00:54:996 - 之前的部分和后面的custom clap对比来听的话，其实前面都改成custom clap会更好听一点？
  4. 01:12:618 (3) - slider应该没什么必要，直接放个note在这里就可以了
  5. 01:31:080 (2) - 考虑和前面的(1)做平行了？
  6. 01:35:695 (5) - finish换clap吧
  7. 01:39:891 (2,3,4,5) - 考虑到难度的问题……这毕竟是全图最低的diff所以用slider吧
  8. 01:42:828 (2) - 和前面做平行？
  9. 02:31:499 (1) - 形状没弄好……
  10. 02:34:856 (1) - ^，偷懒
  11. 02:51:639 (2) - 考虑改成向上弯会更舒服一点？
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:451 (1) - 因为高音旋律比较丰富，所以开头的spinner未必是最合适的选择
  2. 00:17:863 (4) - 这里和前面一样用折返条应该更合适一点？
  3. 00:20:381 (1) - (nazi) 说实话这个弧线不算好看…………
  4. 00:26:464 (3) - 这里的鼓点是1/4
  5. 00:27:304 - 从这里开始，建议放2/4clap，1/3clap的感觉有点紧
  6. 00:28:772 (1,2) - 考虑合成一个1/1长的slider？
  7. 00:29:821 (4,5) - 个人感觉这里倒是更适合拆分成2个1/2的slider
  8. 00:30:660 (6) - 下一组的NC放到这里吧
  9. 00:32:129 (4) - finish很吵，而且还是头尾都有，去掉
  10. 00:35:485 (7) - ^
  11. 00:40:730 - clap依然是放2/4位比较好，而且建议用s:c2的
  12. 00:42:199 (6) - finish...去掉……
  13. 00:49:332 (1) - ^
  14. 00:58:143 (6) - ^
  15. 01:00:451 (5) - 这个whislte可以考虑拿掉
  16. 01:05:905 (1) - 这个长度的slider三个描点感觉有点不够用，至少加到5个会让曲线更好一些？
  17. 01:14:087 (1,2) - whistle感觉有些突兀……
  18. 01:16:814 (2,3) - 这里的whistle也是……我的建议是要用就整段都用比较好，像这样突然放2个感觉有点别扭……
  19. 01:24:681 (7,8) - ^，类似的问题，后面的都不重复说了
  20. 01:53:947 (6) - finish不好听
  21. 02:00:660 (5) - ^
  22. 02:06:325 (3,4,5,6) - 像这种一条直线排过去的note，包括前面01:39:471 (5,1,2,1,2) - 这种的……很直来直去的排列放在你这个以曲线为主的map里就显得很刺眼了……而且真心表示并不好看也不好玩，哪怕排列上沿着一个方向上下有些对称的起伏感觉上也会更好，比如
  23. 02:34:856 (6) - finish问题，这里finish可以只放头部的
  24. 02:56:884 - 和02:57:304 - 加note感觉更好听一些
  25. 02:58:562 (1) - spinner感觉多余了，如果真的非要放就静音掉
整体节奏和音效都有些乱，特别是音效建议整个重做——有系统有规划的放音效，而不是随手乱放。排版上虽然没有什么大的问题，但是也确实谈不上好……再多找些mod吧，可以改进的空间应该不小的～

[Lunatic]
  1. 其实Hard都用STR2了。。。Lunatic不用用试试？
  2. 00:13:038 (2,3,4,5) - 试试做成whislte和clap交替？另外前奏这里的hitsounds感觉略重，建议降低一点音量
  3. 00:32:129 (1) - 感觉上，这个似乎应该向另外一侧弯～
  4. 00:40:730 (1) - 从这里开始建议Clap用Custom2
  5. 00:52:269 (1) - 这个很坑啊……而且被前面遮挡的很严重……
  6. 02:26:884 (3,4,5,6,7) - 亮点
第一个kiai以及之前的部分质量略不幸福……感觉上越到后面做的越顺手了，前面的部分自己看看再调整调整吧，尤其是前奏那一段真心看着像新人做的…………

总之加油吧～～GL with rank
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
a32

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
滑条静音？nice

[Normal]
01:35:276 (4,5) - finish太多了就反而起不到强调的作用了，一定要用的话至少在音量上有些差别比较好ok
02:53:318 (5) - 头上finish?ok


[Lunatic]
00:20:590 (1) - 不对称啊这段remapped了...
00:25:625 (1) - 少了个NC?fixed
00:46:395 (1) - 和前面00:45:555 (1)音乐一样但滑条速度不一样想做个渐变的效果所以留着...
00:51:639 (5,1) - 这个妥妥的要被喷。。不要冒这个险。把(1)往右往下一格可破好吧
01:08:423 (3) - 建议四锚点，现在的不好看ok
01:13:877 (7,1) - 觉得这个overlap略难看。。感觉还好...
01:15:975 (1,4) - 不做个包围么。。现在这样还可以0.0
01:46:185 (1) - ctrl+r?ok
02:08:842 (1) - 头上移掉finish?ok
02:09:681 (3) - 头上加finish?ok

That's all I can find. GL~

Leorda wrote:

Random mod


[General]
* Add "raku" in tags, since he is an arranger of this song
* Add "blaze out", since this come from that album


[Normal]
00:54:996 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)fixed~
01:05:485 (2) - Add finish?ok
01:19:332 (1) - ^ok
02:28:143 (1) - ^ok
02:30:451 - Add note with finish?ok



[Insane]
00:25:625 (1) - New combo, since this note is after spinner. This issue just a warning if you forgot or intentionalfixed~
00:52:269 (1) - Since this is 0,5x slider and the slider shape is same as 00:51:639 (5), this might be confusing for players while gameplay. Consider to make a different slider or patternchanged a bit~
01:21:849 - Add note with finish? ok
01:37:793 (1) - Shorten to 01:38:003 and add note at 01:38:213 for making a good rhythm like 01:36:115 (1,2)
02:22:164 (7,8) - This spacing were not same as 02:22:059 (6,7). Consider to fix the spacing with 0,6x distance spacingok
02:30:660 (2) - Add finishfixed


This songs makes me want to praise to god....

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue~~

[General]
  1. ZUN to tags好
  2. 考虑把soft clap做成slidertick.wav然后来填补normal里面那些因为长slider而丢掉的clap？毕竟不是whistle，时有时无的情况下还是能听的很清楚的……弄了...
  3. 建议在soft里面加静音sliderslide，前奏段slider音还是能听到的好
下面有时间继续弄> >
[Normal]
  1. 00:23:527 - 从你前面的节奏来看……这里可以来个note :>感觉不错~
  2. 00:48:912 (3,4,5) - 这里的节奏塞1/2有一点点拥挤的感觉……把(3)去掉，(4)的起点延长到(3)的位置同时结束位置不变，然后去掉折返之后，后面再做一个slider这样？
    好的www
  3. 另外我觉得到00:54:996 - 之前的部分和后面的custom clap对比来听的话，其实前面都改成custom clap会更好听一点？这个嘛...前面和后面的鼓点用的乐器不太一样于是先摆着吧0.0
  4. 01:12:618 (3) - slider应该没什么必要，直接放个note在这里就可以了好
  5. 01:31:080 (2) - 考虑和前面的(1)做平行了？想做成略有变化的效果...> <
  6. 01:35:695 (5) - finish换clap吧好的
  7. 01:39:891 (2,3,4,5) - 考虑到难度的问题……这毕竟是全图最低的diff所以用slider吧行
  8. 01:42:828 (2) - 和前面做平行？理由同上啦> <
  9. 02:31:499 (1) - 形状没弄好……改了
  10. 02:34:856 (1) - ^，偷懒我错了...
  11. 02:51:639 (2) - 考虑改成向上弯会更舒服一点？改了www

[Lunatic]
  1. 其实Hard都用STR2了。。。Lunatic不用用试试？好
  2. 00:13:038 (2,3,4,5) - 试试做成whislte和clap交替？另外前奏这里的hitsounds感觉略重，建议降低一点音量由于前奏remapped于是
  3. 00:32:129 (1) - 感觉上，这个似乎应该向另外一侧弯～
  4. 00:40:730 (1) - 从这里开始建议Clap用Custom2这个先放着吧..
  5. 00:52:269 (1) - 这个很坑啊……而且被前面遮挡的很严重……改了~
  6. 02:26:884 (3,4,5,6,7) - 亮点谢谢0v0
第一个kiai以及之前的部分质量略不幸福……感觉上越到后面做的越顺手了，前面的部分自己看看再调整调整吧，尤其是前奏那一段真心看着像新人做的…………
嗯 前奏remapped了
总之加油吧～～GL with rank

Thanks for modding~~
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
hi
一点建议

[General]
我觉得2秒的lead in足够了 不过这个不算什么问题

[Normal]
00:49:961 (4,5) - N就不要有spacing问题了...
00:23:947 (1) - 在00:26:884结束 再在00:27:723放note会不会好点
01:04:227 (1,2) - (1)直接折返吧不然太坑了
01:18:912 (3,1) - 倒不如把(3)去掉直接把spinner拉到(3)的位置
01:46:185 (1,1) - 节奏略违和
02:27:723 (1,1) - 同01:18:912 (3,1)
02:48:283 (1,2,3) - 坑
02:54:996 (1,2,3) - ^
02:56:674 (1) - 前面红线开始

[Hard]
开始的时间最好统一一下
00:19:122 (1) - 去nc
00:44:087 (1) - ^
01:18:492 (4) - 去掉这个note
01:49:541 - 加note
02:14:087 (1) - 去nc
02:36:115 (1) - ^
后面其实还有这样没啥意义的nc 就不一一列举了...
另外结尾的时间点也统一点吧

[Lunatic]
01:05:485 (4,1) - 间距坑
01:06:744 (5) - nc
嗯别的没什么
Licnect
Elite Mapper
367 posts
Joined May 2010
Licnect
HI from Queue
sor for delay


[Overall]
offset:460


[Normal]
00:48:912 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:21:849 (?) - add note?


[Hard]
00:27:304 (1,2) - spacing? 感覺也不像jump
00:49:332 (1) - remove Finish?
01:18:492 (4) - 左1?
01:22:688 (2) - add Finish? 小聲點佳
01:27:094 01:27:304 (4) - add whistle?
01:29:611 (2) - ^?
01:39:471 (5) - add Finish?
01:40:101 (2) - ^?
01:40:730 (2) - ^?
01:42:828 (2) - ^?
02:07:583 (2) - add Clap? forget?
02:12:409 (2) - remove Finish and you can add in (3)(6)
02:14:087 (1) - add Finish
02:24:367 (6) - add Clap? forget?
02:54:996 (7) - add Finish?
02:55:625 (8) - ^?
02:56:255 (1) - ^?
03:00:660 spin尾 小聲點?


[Lunatic]
01:11:569 (2) - spacing?
01:15:975 (1,2,3,4) - 建議可以拉好一點
02:14:087 (3) - slider尾 remove Finish?
02:50:171 (6) - ^
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
hi,there._.
just some suggestions.....总说好蛋疼


Lunatic
00:03:807 (1,2) - 不对称？
00:09:681 (3,1) - 不好看，嘛
00:16:185 (2) - 移动到148.280
01:08:423 (3) - 目测不对称。。
01:12:933 (3) - whistle
01:18:283 (4) - ^
01:26:045 (1) - 好随便的摆放。。。

Hard
00:13:877 (1) - 不对称。。。
00:32:758 (6) - NC
00:43:248 (9,1,1) - spacing
01:18:073 (2,3,4) - ^
02:28:982 (6) - finshi在结尾
02:58:562 (1) - 删掉，感觉多余了。。。

Normal
01:31:080 (2) - 跟前面的slider拉成一样的弧度
01:41:989 (1,2) - 像这样？
SPOILER

就这么多，做这么简单干啥呢233
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
a32

JauiPlaY wrote:

hi
一点建议

[General]
我觉得2秒的lead in足够了 不过这个不算什么问题改了~

[Normal]
00:49:961 (4,5) - N就不要有spacing问题了...这个好像是上次不小心弄得...fixed
00:23:947 (1) - 在00:26:884结束 再在00:27:723放note会不会好点现在这样还好吧...
01:04:227 (1,2) - (1)直接折返吧不然太坑了改了
01:18:912 (3,1) - 倒不如把(3)去掉直接把spinner拉到(3)的位置这样感觉还好..
01:46:185 (1,1) - 节奏略违和改了点
02:27:723 (1,1) - 同01:18:912 (3,1)嘛 依然不想改
02:48:283 (1,2,3) - 坑先摆着吧233
02:54:996 (1,2,3) - ^^
02:56:674 (1) - 前面红线开始ok

[Lunatic]
01:05:485 (4,1) - 间距坑感觉还好233
01:06:744 (5) - ncok
嗯别的没什么

Licnect wrote:

HI from Queue
sor for delay


[Overall]
offset:460 喵 timing什么的先放着吧


[Normal]
00:48:912 (3,4,5) - spacingfixed~
01:21:849 (?) - add note?ok:3


[Lunatic]
01:11:569 (2) - spacing?改了~
01:15:975 (1,2,3,4) - 建議可以拉好一點ok~
02:14:087 (3) - slider尾 remove Finish?fixed
02:50:171 (6) - ^这个留着吧

x847606653 wrote:

hi,there._.
just some suggestions.....总说好蛋疼所以咱mod时从来不写这句话...(写不写反正都会被ignore233


Lunatic
00:03:807 (1,2) - 不对称？诶 应该没有吧> > 这可是Ctrl+H弄得
00:09:681 (3,1) - 不好看，嘛实在想不出好梗了;_;
00:16:185 (2) - 移动到148.280fixed~
01:08:423 (3) - 目测不对称。。改了点...虽然感觉没动什么orz
01:12:933 (3) - whistleok~
01:18:283 (4) - ^fixed
01:26:045 (1) - 好随便的摆放。。。233 其实是懒了 现在也不知道怎么改了



Normal
01:31:080 (2) - 跟前面的slider拉成一样的弧度嘛 这个是特意做出一点区别的...
01:41:989 (1,2) - 像这样？
SPOILER
ok

就这么多，做这么简单干啥呢233做善良图真开心啊



Thank all of you for modding~
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ a3272509123 ~ :)

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]


  1. 01:28:143 (2) - Ctrl+r flow much better.
  2. 01:41:150 - Why not add circle to here? really fit.

[Hard]


  1. Inconsistent tags in this diff.
  2. 01:05:905 (1) - Move to center?
  3. 01:49:541 - Add a circle.
  4. 02:14:087 (1) - Remove short new combo.
  5. 02:24:367 - Missing add clap to here.
  6. 02:38:423 (2,3,4) - Remove whistle,Sound really weird to me.
  7. 02:50:800 (6,7) - ^
  8. 02:58:353 - Add finish sound much better.

[Normal]


  1. 02:56:464 (1) - Remove whistle and Add finish.

Hope this can help you,nice map.

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
a32

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ a3272509123 ~ :)

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]


  1. 01:28:143 (2) - Ctrl+r flow much better.fixed
  2. 01:41:150 - Why not add circle to here? really fit.nice~


[Normal]


  1. 02:56:464 (1) - Remove whistle and Add finish.fixed~

Hope this can help you,nice map.

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
Thanks for modding~
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from PM Req
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[Normal]
00:13:877 - too noisy!
00:12:199 (3) - 1/1 slider感觉就行了> > （自己觉得哪种好就哪种
00:28:143 (1) - 后面这部分觉得应该需要个clap在24白线上
00:36:534 - remove whistle
00:40:730 (1) - 就用你自定义的clap感觉会好听...
00:58:353 - remove whistle
00:59:192 (3,4,5) - 有点难啊 试着改1/2 slider加个return
02:41:989 (1) - spacing
02:56:464 (1) - finish明显太吵 改whistle



[Hard]
00:32:129 (5) - 音效啊啊啊！
00:35:485 (7) - ^
00:40:730 (1) - 觉得24白线下clap好...
01:05:905 (1) - spacing
02:56:464 - 这里应该有个重音


[Lunatic]
00:03:178 - 这里没有音最好
00:03:807 - 太吵
00:10:520 - ^
00:18:702 - whistle
00:22:269 (1) - finish意义不明
00:37:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,…) - 间距太小
00:54:157 (1) - 先往上转（红点往上移）会好看很多
01:47:444 (3) - finish
02:56:674 (1) - 改whistle
--------------------------------------------------
Great Mapset
GL
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
For 善(gui)良(chu) 嗯,bg微福利(这画师好喜欢不画胖次的)

排版说不上什么，所以多数都是音效mod.按我mod加音效,可能“会”很吵

祝早日rank

normal
节奏抓得不错,但感觉不太美观?
01:18:073 (2) - 不重叠比较好?(为了善良,为了1pchd,嗯)
01:34:227 (3) - 打着不舒服
01:35:695 (5) - 同不重叠

hard
00:28:772 (1) - 头加clap
00:40:730 (1) - 开头用finish比较好？话说这clap加得有点微妙
00:48:492 (5) - 头加whistle
00:49:332 (1) - 加whistle
00:49:541 (2) - 头加whistle
00:57:094 (2) - 头加clap
00:57:933 (5) - 加whistle
00:58:143 (6) - 头加whistle
01:14:297 (3) - ↑
01:14:716 (4) - 收尾加whistle
01:24:681 (8) - whistle去掉
01:24:996 (1) - 加whistle
01:26:045 (4) - 头加whistle
01:26:464 (1,2) - 加whistle
01:28:562 (3) - 头加whistle
01:29:402 (1) - 加whistle
01:29:611 (2) - 末尾加whistle
01:30:031 (3) - 只留下头的whistle
01:30:451 (1) - 加whistle
01:31:080 (3) - 头加whistle
02:05:485 (2) - 头尾都加whistle
01:36:115 (8) - whistle
01:36:325 (1) - ↑
01:36:534 (3) - 末尾加whistle
01:36:954 (4) - 加whistle
01:37:374 (6) - 加whistle
01:39:471 (5) - finish
01:40:101 (2) - finish
01:40:730 (2) - finish
01:41:150 (1) - whistle
01:41:569 (3) - ↑
01:41:779 (4) - ↑
01:42:828 (2) - 头加finish
01:49:541 - 加个note?如果加的话,用finish
02:28:982 (6) - 末尾finish
02:30:660 (1) - finish
02:31:499 (1) - 首尾whistle
02:31:919 (2) - 末尾whistle
02:33:807 (2) - 加个note,用whistle
02:34:017 (2) - 删掉
02:37:374 (4) - 首尾whistle
02:38:842 (5) - 头加whistle
02:41:989 (4) - 漏了个clap?
02:48:283 (3,4) - 都加whistle
02:48:912 (5) - 末尾whistle
02:49:961 (4) - 都加whistle
02:50:381 (5) - 头加whistle

insane
00:28:772 (1) - 头加finish
00:30:660 (1) - ↑
00:32:129 (1) - ↑
00:35:485 (1) - ↑
01:02:968 (2) - 尾巴加whistle
01:13:248 (5) - whistle
01:13:457 (6) - 头也加上whistle
02:42:199 (3) - finish
02:42:618 (6) - ↑
02:43:248 (1) - 头加上finish
Lan wings
790 posts
Joined August 2010
Lan wings
Mod request from QQ Req
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[General]
BG略和谐``需要做部分打码处理``(比如圣光什么的)
[Lunatic]
这难度whistle下的很怪异
00:03:807 (1,2) - 干嘛不上下对称```Insane已经不需要跟死DS的了http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441779像这样好看多了
00:09:681 (3,1) - 1的形状跟3不衬``改为像下弯曲吧?
00:14:297 (2) - ctrl+r
00:13:667 (4,1,2) - 12跟4拉开点``弄成等距离的``http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441782
00:18:702 (1) - whistle
00:25:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用N的hitnormal``音量50%
00:28:143 - ^
00:29:821 - ^
00:30:241 - ^大概就是这样的音``听到这样的音都可以放个normal-hitnormal``不过这样会放比较多的绿线``看你喜欢了``也不一定说要全部放``偶尔放一点点点缀一下效果也是不错的``你可以在这个重音特别明显的时候放一下``后面有类似的可以自己试着放看看会不会违和``
00:37:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2) - 可以做个音量逐渐增加的效果``最后两个slider是40和45
00:40:520 - 可以放个N的whistle音量50%``哨子音听着不错``前面也可以放``不过得做个音量渐变
00:42:199 (1) - 左两格上一格
00:44:087 - whistle
00:45:555 (1,2) - 既然1的尾巴跟2是斜的``那么这个也应该跟着斜过去00:46:395 (1) -
01:05:905 (1,2,3,4) - 这里可以50%音量``后面的连打回复40%
00:48:073 (4) - whistle
00:48:492 - 删whistle
00:49:122 (1) - 尾巴whistle移到头
00:49:961 - whistle
00:50:800 (1,2) - 交换whistle
00:51:639 (5) - 头尾交换whistle
00:52:269 - whistle
00:52:269 (1) - 0.5略坑
00:55:835 (1) - 交换whistle
00:56:674 - N-normal50%
01:00:031 - ^
01:41:989 (3) - whistle
01:42:094 (4) - 头尾换whistle
02:36:534 (1,2) - same 01:41:989 (3,4) -
02:39:891 - finish好像好点
[Hard]
这hard的音效简直是不堪入目
最基础的24clap啊``居然下的全是13clap``难听死了``差评差评差评
00:13:877 (1) - 可以加个whistle
00:17:234 (3) - ^
00:18:702 (1) - ^
00:19:541 (3) - ^
00:21:430 - 50%音量的clap
00:23:108 - 40%音量的clap
00:28:772 (1) - whistle
00:40:730 (1) - 这里开始默认的拍掌声太难听``换SC1音量70%
00:41:569 (4) - clap换whistle
00:42:199 (6) - clap
00:43:248 (9) - 换whistle
00:46:395 (3) - clap
00:47:444 (1) - 换whistle
00:47:863 - clap
00:48:283 (4) - 换whistle
卧槽我看不下去``快去重做音效``
[Normal]
00:00:451 (1) - 同Hard
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hey there

[General]
* Title : 解放-Infinity- (please keep the word at title romanised title)


[Normal]
00:48:702 (2,3) - Make a pattern like this for better flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/663276
01:08:423 (1) - Flip this slider for better flow
02:44:926 (1) - ^


[Hard]
* You should map this diff at 00:00:451 for consistency on each diff

00:27:304 ~ 01:04:227 - This hitsound pattern for this part is off. It didn't follow the snare drum sound in music. Consider to add clap at upbeat (2nd and 4th white tick)
01:18:702 (1,1) - Add finish
01:27:723 (6) - Whistle here is don't fit, IMO
01:30:031 (3) - ^
01:31:499 (4,5) - ^
02:38:423 (2,3,4) - ^
02:50:800 (6,7) - ^
02:51:430 (1) - Add finish at head slider
02:57:513 (5) - Add finish at end slider


[Lunatic]
00:45:555 (1,1) - Since the song is not calm/slow yet, I don't think this slow slider is exist here.....
01:21:010 (1,2) - Use soft sampleset for this object, like other diffs
01:28:562 (1) - Same issue as 00:45:555 (1,1)
02:18:912 (1) - ^
02:29:821 (1,2) - Use soft sampleset for this object, like other diffs
02:36:534 (1,2) - Remove (1), move (2) to 02:36:534 and add an object at the next slider. I think your current rhythm is not fit to the song


I think this map needs more work..... Get 8 modpost and then ask me again
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