yongtw123 wrote:

by request

Overall
hitsound volume is a bit small IMO, perhaps, say, bump it up by 10%? bump , but not 10% >~<

[Normal]
02:00:605 (2) - i suggest remove this because this note implies there should be one 02:00:976, which is instead a spinner. consider this as a way to slow down the rhythm or make this diff a bit easier
04:35:050 (1) - remove NC?
all fixed~
man, this diff is a tad bit hard for being the easiest but it's way below 3 stars! how did you manage it! wow! i don't know ;w; , when i have done this , i find the star rating ... lol!

[Yume]
02:00:975 (3) - SC2 finish may sound cool?
02:38:938 (2,3) - the whistles sound a bit weird, maybe remove whistle for 02:38:938 (2) ?
04:36:531 (1) - SC2 finish at start?
all fixed~
=============================

very well-done, can't pick much

i shall leave a star and good luck!

1. 00:12:457 (1,1,2) - 再包好些唄
2. 01:00:235 (1) - finish吧
3. 04:05:790 (1,2,1) - 間距不用一樣嘛??
4. 04:46:284 (2,1) - 覺得有點怪怪的>_> 04:46:284 (2) - 拉個長slider直接到04:47:457 - 聽起來好些~

1. 01:00:235 (1) - finish~
2. 01:25:790 (1,2,3,1) - 嘛.. 這邊我會用兩個Slider 像這樣ww http://puu.sh/VLr3
   然後第1個slider速度0.6x 第2個0.9x 再來就1.2x 覺得這樣挺好的~ 比較有迎接高潮的fu~ xP
3. 02:11:346 (4) - 放到[X:144 Y:108]吧!!~ 放中間好看! 別管間距了><(被打
4. 04:05:790 (1,2,3,1) - 同之前摟~
5. 04:31:161 - 加顆小圈圈?
6. 04:47:087 (3) - 要不要試試把這Slider直接拉到....04:49:494 - ?
   最後來個長Slider結尾 覺得比轉盤更有感覺呢~ :>

12BARRY21 wrote:

安安阿~ barry醬 早灣~

<Normal>

1. 00:12:457 (1,1,2) - 再包好些唄
2. 01:00:235 (1) - finish吧
3. 04:05:790 (1,2,1) - 間距不用一樣嘛??
4. 04:46:284 (2,1) - 覺得有點怪怪的>_> 04:46:284 (2) - 拉個長slider直接到04:47:457 - 聽起來好些~ 改不了 ;w; 1個是1/6 . 1個是1/4

<Yume>

1. 01:00:235 (1) - finish~
2. 01:25:790 (1,2,3,1) - 嘛.. 這邊我會用兩個Slider 像這樣ww http://puu.sh/VLr3
   然後第1個slider速度0.6x 第2個0.9x 再來就1.2x 覺得這樣挺好的~ 比較有迎接高潮的fu~ xP
3. 02:11:346 (4) - 放到[X:144 Y:108]吧!!~ 放中間好看! 別管間距了><(被打 咱沒改~咱這邊故意不想放中間?!(被打
4. 04:05:790 (1,2,3,1) - 同之前摟~
5. 04:31:161 - 加顆小圈圈?
6. 04:47:087 (3) - 要不要試試把這Slider直接拉到....04:49:494 - ?
   最後來個長Slider結尾 覺得比轉盤更有感覺呢~ :> 雖說沒錯 ... 可是改slider咱覺得怪怪的 所以沒改~

~ Really Soft Song ~ 是阿~
聽的我都快睡著了xDD 沒關係 咱半睡半醒做這張圖的?(哎?!

加油唄~ 送星閃人!!

yanlu wrote:

Hi~飛翔 又來MOD你的圖了~
[Yume]

00:40:605 (3,4) - 3跟4互換 感覺拍子比較好 (如果有換 4放在5的開頭~
00:47:642 (3) - 刪掉note
00:50:605 (4,1) - 互換(拍子)
00:56:716 (3) - 刪note
00:58:013 (3,4,5) - snap
01:02:457 (4) - 好怪??
01:05:420 (4) - 刪note
01:09:864 (2) - 靠近一點我覺得比較好讀
01:17:457 (1,2,3) - 改成這樣呢? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/407390
01:23:938 (1) - 拉長一點(到紅線?
01:47:087 (5) - 刪note
02:44:679 (2,3,4,5) - snap (突然變近不好讀..
03:23:938 (4,5) - snap
03:41:346 (2,3,4,5) - snap
04:03:938 (1) - 拉長一點(到紅線?
04:46:284 (2) - 怪??

[Normal]

02:00:790 (3) - 刪note
03:50:605 (2) - 改成silder+note?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/407407
03:53:198 (2,3) - 互換
04:33:568 (1) - 改成silder+note?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/407409
04:42:457 (1) - 改成silder+note?(不要來回的
04:46:284 (2,1) - 最後結尾有些奇怪;w;

神SB 我瞎了(拜
大概就這樣 加油喔~~:3[/color] 嗯...

Licnect wrote:

OK Let's GO

Overall:
資料夾中lighting這張圖是?
offset:990 不敢確定 要請別人確認
02:02:457-02:26:161 這邊開Hard就反過來 建議要搞就放橫的中間 反過來也沒差
歌曲可能太長 不合rank規定 (忘記不能多長 DT好像4:30以下即可...

Normal:
Looks good

Yume:
高音或是高潮(?的timing 有jump 感覺比較好
00:56:531 [2.3.4.5] 間距 感覺怪怪
03:29:864 [3] 沒放好

大致上就這樣
對怎麼排沒有意見

nold_1702 wrote:

hmm..as your request,
but seeing you being afk.
If you come back,
PM me again so I can mod it.

Quilt wrote:

Maika <3

1. nothing to see

1. Diff Name i think Hard or Lunatic is better than
2. 02:41:531 (2) - sounds much better for me~ http://puu.sh/13dtm
3. 02:42:642 - vol.25% i think it will be much better if you change this
4. 02:43:938 - vol.30% if you change ↑
5. 03:38:568 - add note
6. 04:37:642 - vol.25% i think it will be much better if you change this
7. 04:41:716 - vol.22% ^

1. 01:15:050 (1) - i think it doesn't follow the music. change to a another pattern?

Wreath wrote:

hi, L18 Hi~
thx for request

[General]

1. nothing to see

[Yume]

1. Diff Name i think Hard or Lunatic is better than
2. 02:41:531 (2) - sounds much better for me~ http://puu.sh/13dtm no~ i think the sound is fine to me~
3. 02:42:642 - vol.25% i think it will be much better if you change this
4. 02:43:938 - vol.30% if you change ↑
5. 03:38:568 - add note
6. 04:37:642 - vol.25% i think it will be much better if you change this
7. 04:41:716 - vol.22% ^

[Normal]

1. 01:15:050 (1) - i think it doesn't follow the music. change to a another pattern? fix~

please fix the places that don't match the rhythm as well

that's all
sry for short modding
good map, good song
good luck

Lan wings wrote:

[Hard]
SV很舒服!大贊!!Fav B 有空研究下SV=w= 謝謝 :3 ~ 咱都靠感覺選SV的 (被打
以下nazi mod
00:23:198 (1,2,3) - 弄成等邊三角形?大概是3放到x260 y196的位置
00:23:568 (2,3) - ctrl+r可能會好點?原來的話感覺有點斷flow
00:23:938 (3,5) - 然後兩個的距離弄成跟00:24:309 (4,5) - 的距離一樣
00:23:938 (3,5,1) - 於是這裡可以繼續等邊三角形``這一部份整體大概是這樣http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430204
00:31:716 (3) - 試試尾巴指向00:32:827 (1) - ?
00:51:346 (1,2,5) - 等邊三角怎麼我最近那麼喜歡三角 5放在x504 y17600:51:716 (2,3,4) - 然後這裡改一下弧度
00:52:827 (6) - 這裡改一下弧度跟5呈弧線
00:58:568 (4) - 上移4格左移1格(grid 4)
01:09:864 (2) - 左移一格01:10:235 (3) - 右移2格
01:16:531 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 這個好漂亮
01:26:346 (2,1) - 0.6跳到1.2``稍微遠了點``拉近點?
01:28:383 (3,4,5,6) - 微調下使3的尾巴跟6的距離和4到6的距離一樣
01:37:272 (5) - 放到x100 y168
01:40:605 (4,5,6) - 複製4然後順時針轉30° (ctrl+shift+r)
01:44:679 (1) - 不夠圓
03:26:901 (3,4,5) - 大概擺這樣http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430232
03:35:605 (4,5) - 這裡節奏略彆扭``暫時沒想到修改方案0.0
03:49:864 (2,3,4) - 你懂的
04:06:346 (2,1) - 看起來是故意的?
04:24:679 (1) - 下移兩格左移一格
04:28:198 (2,3,4) - 你懂的
04:37:827 (4,6) - 沒有包到
04:46:284 (2) - 1/6........................沒轍
04:47:642 (1) - 還想著說spinner拉長點的``沒想到聽到後面突然就停了``居然沒有一點漸變(音量逐漸降低什麽的)

[Normal]
00:13:938 (2,3,4) - 等邊三角
00:16:901 (2,3,4) - ^
00:18:383 (4,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430250
00:43:568 (2,3,4) - 你懂的
00:52:827 (3) - 大概旋轉-10°(右邊要選Selection Centre)
00:57:272 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430255
00:58:753 (3,4,1) - 要不要來一發等邊三角?(跟3的尾巴)
02:09:124 (1,2,3) - 我終於見到有等邊三角了
02:50:976 (2) - 3複製然後ctrl+j ctrl+r 然後調調DS1.2
02:52:827 (1) - 大概是-15° 同樣要選Selection Centre
02:52:827 (1,2) - 於是別忘了後面的DShttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430260
02:58:753 (1) - 順時針轉10°然後拉到x388 y280
02:59:494 (2) - 大概是放到x260 y360的樣子
03:02:827 (2,4) - 上移兩格左移一格
03:03:198 (3) - x220 y40
04:12:457 (4) - x220 y20
04:46:284 (3) - 拉到這裡04:45:790 - 然後加一個折返http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/430270 最後位置調一調 I love one piece


於是看了下上面的mod``我的offset是964~968 咱還是用原本的~

forevehappy wrote:

はろ 飛翔ﾉ

Open!

[Normal]
GOOD!


[Hard]
01:17:457 (1,2,3) -


03:01:531 (6) - 疊在03:01:161 (5)的尾巴好像比較好?...不然這顆會讓我想跟03:01:716 (1,2) - 1的頭 跟2 排個等距的三角形..(如果改的話..03:01:161 (5) -
滑條可能要在改一下..我知道你接下來要用x1.10的距離 如果直接疊在尾吧的話 距離只有x2.1
嗯~

03:11:161 (2) - 下個距離x2.75(會不會太跳了? 雖然這邊歌詞的語氣比較重.. 改了~

最後麻...這點依舊讓我耿耿於懷 00:57:087 (5) - 怎麼說呢,就是..我知道為了繼續接下來的滑條做出等距x2.00的距離,可是這點又屬於綠色 ..不覺得跟3.4配其來很怪嗎!?? 還好?~

好歌阿~夜裡MOD的我都快睡著了 催眠曲XD

- B R S - wrote:

nice song... nice SB
keep going on!!

intoon wrote:

hi~ relax song > <

[Normal]

03:06:161 (3) - (nazi) x472 y180 looking for good

[Hard]

01:18:013 (1) - remove NC
01:19:124 (3) - add NC
01:26:346 (2) - i know it's no problem for playing.
just worried different distance snap at (back and forth) have same 1/4 beat gap.
in that sense, x100 y52 is better :3 (normal use same distance snap) I change , but not as you say
01:47:087 (5) - remove note is more follow music
03:01:531 (6) - remove note and 03:01:161 (5) - change repeat slider is better for me
03:42:457 (5,6) - oh.... i think this is 1/4 beat slider and note.
remove 03:42:951 (6) - and 03:42:457 (5) - change repeat slider is more better for playing.
03:54:309 (4,5) - ^
04:05:790 (1,2) - ^
04:42:087 (4) - just suggestion (x216 y40) k

hu.... that'all.
this map have really high quality.
nice mapset :3

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Normal]
01:09:124 (1) - 尾巴有点高了 往下去一格
01:14:556 (4,5) - 建议来个1/3跟vocal? （也可以选择保留.. 總覺得出現在normal會被噴 ;w;

01:23:938 (1) - 加个圈圈效果？
04:03:938 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:23:938 (1) - 圈圈效果
04:03:938 (1) - ^
02:48:383 (2) - 圈圈歪了
--------------------------------------------------
Excellent Mapset!
没什么好挑了 给好评 Star☆

MINI SNOW.png [寬度超過800，高度超過600]
SAKURA Mid-2.png [高度超過600]
SB-BG5.jpg [高度超過600]
SB-BG12.jpg [高度超過600]

SPOILER

SPOILER

S h i a wrote:

[Overall]
很用心做的一張圖哦/ <3


[StoryBoard]
不少素材圖片超過了800*600的最大規定。所以會導致SB LOAD過大而導致一些PC配置偏低的玩家產生LAG。如下圖片需要重新裁切並修改相關代碼 >w< 辛苦了。

MINI SNOW.png [寬度超過800，高度超過600]
SAKURA Mid-2.png [高度超過600]
SB-BG5.jpg [高度超過600]
SB-BG12.jpg [高度超過600]

[Normal]
00:45:420 (1) - [建議] 這裡不要折返直接一條slider，在00:46:161結束，你覺得怎樣？

SPOILER

01:25:790 (1,2,1,2) - [建議]這裡做減法，建議像這樣。

SPOILER

01:50:605 (1) - 有注意到像這種slider你多給了一個整體whistle 所以會有whistle 拖動音，聽起來不太好,建議取消掉整體whistle 而只是在頭加finish 尾加whistle.
04:05:790 (1,2) - [建議]和01:25:790一樣的處理方式



[Hard]
除了有slider多給了一個整體whistle所以有拖動音以外，沒有發現其他值得建議或者錯誤的地方。只是AI給出了 Slider過多的提示 w 應該大丈夫。 很清新的map nice work.

SPOILER

Addition 可無視
[Hitsounds]
因為歌曲很安靜所以有注意到你頻繁使用whistle.過於單調。[個人認為，Hitsounds 一定要有輕重音之分] 我這裡用你的Hard做了音效測試，如果你覺得這樣可以。建議音效修改一下。如果要加Normal-hit也只限於KIAI部分噢 http://puu.sh/17S0q [From 01:25:790 (1) - to 01:38:753 (1) - ]

1. Hard是slider tick rate 1，但normal卻是2。。。有點不對的感覺呢……

1. 如果你要讓BG全程看不到的話，那麼第一行的的code要稍微改動一下：
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
   _F,0,0,,0

2. black.jpg的code
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
   _F,0,-29,,1

   這行F比較莫名其妙，建議刪掉，
   另外下面的_S也是，從offset:0開始即可，不需要-29

3. Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\SB-BG.jpg",320,240
    F,0,86531,87272,0,1
    M,0,86531,122827,320,230,320,248
    S,0,86903,,0.832
    F,0,87272,,1

   最後一行是冗餘的，刪掉

4. Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\SB-BG3.jpg",320,240
    M,0,36531,,323,242

   第二行要合併到初始設置裡
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\SB-BG3.jpg",323,242

   另外確認這個坐標確實是你要放的位置而不是沒小心多加上的
5. 好長……後面沒有仔細看了…………沒有SB-Load超5.0的情況……所以就不nazi代碼上的細節了

1. 00:19:864 (2) - 感覺上可以加上個折返？
2. 00:50:605 (4) - 考慮刪掉，然後在00:50:976 - 放note？我覺得也許這裡用空拍會更合適一點？
3. 01:00:235 (1) - 這裡的finish太輕了……用default的話又不合適……你要不要試試這個finish？
   [url=puu.sh/18MvS]點擊這裡下載soft-hitfinish.wav文檔[/url]
4. 01:23:938 - 這裡……sb元件和note的定位關係是: sb元件的x為note的x+64，y則是note的y+48……手動在代碼裡微調一下吧
5. 01:25:790 (1) - 這個nc是必要的嘛？我覺得用follow point做一個慢慢點過去的效果也不錯呢
6. 01:38:013 (3) - 尾巴上的clap有一點點多餘的感覺
7. 01:43:938 (4) - ^
8. 01:47:272 (4) - ^
9. 01:49:864 (3) - ^
10. 04:05:790 (1) - 同前面一樣的建議～
11. 04:18:013 (4) - 還是覺得2/4clap就好了……尾音上沒有什麼clap的必要吧………………
12. 04:30:235 (4) - ^

1. 00:19:864 (3) - 考慮加個reverse?
2. 00:39:309 - 也許這裡可以放個note，或者把前面的00:39:124 (3) - 做成一個1/4的slider?
3. 01:18:568 (2) - 試試看ctrl+r? flow感覺會更好一點～
4. 01:23:938 (1) - 嗯…………建議試試3拍上都放上whistle~~
5. 01:32:457 (6) - 和normal一樣的建議，我感覺Kiai段用2/4clap就好了……這種地方的clap有一點點畫蛇添足的感覺…………
6. 01:38:383 (9) - ^……好吧這個我就不來回說了……
7. 01:57:272 (1) - 要不要試試把這個刪掉的效果？
8. 02:51:346 (3) - 類似前面，把3拍都放上whistle？
9. 03:01:531 (7,1) - 在我自己的經驗裡……類似這種的stack，也就是一串跳之後突然一個stack是很容易破壞flow的……
10. 03:06:901 (4) - ctrl+r一下試試看？
11. 03:54:309 (4,5) - 這裡放3個note效果也許會更好？
12. 04:03:938 (1) - 依然是建議嘗試放3個whistle的地方……當然這種要保持前後一致就好……

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~m4m

[General]

1. Hard是slider tick rate 1，但normal卻是2。。。有點不對的感覺呢……

[Storyboard]

1. 如果你要讓BG全程看不到的話，那麼第一行的的code要稍微改動一下：
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
   _F,0,0,,0

2. black.jpg的code
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\black.jpg",320,240
   _F,0,-29,,1

   這行F比較莫名其妙，建議刪掉，
   另外下面的_S也是，從offset:0開始即可，不需要-29

3. Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\SB-BG.jpg",320,240
    F,0,86531,87272,0,1
    M,0,86531,122827,320,230,320,248
    S,0,86903,,0.832
    F,0,87272,,1

   最後一行是冗餘的，刪掉

4. Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\SB-BG3.jpg",320,240
    M,0,36531,,323,242

   第二行要合併到初始設置裡
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\SB-BG3.jpg",323,242

   另外確認這個坐標確實是你要放的位置而不是沒小心多加上的
5. 好長……後面沒有仔細看了…………沒有SB-Load超5.0的情況……所以就不nazi代碼上的細節了

[Normal]

1. 00:19:864 (2) - 感覺上可以加上個折返？
2. 00:50:605 (4) - 考慮刪掉，然後在00:50:976 - 放note？我覺得也許這裡用空拍會更合適一點？
3. 01:00:235 (1) - 這裡的finish太輕了……用default的話又不合適……你要不要試試這個finish？
   [url=puu.sh/18MvS]點擊這裡下載soft-hitfinish.wav文檔[/url]
4. 01:23:938 - 這裡……sb元件和note的定位關係是: sb元件的x為note的x+64，y則是note的y+48……手動在代碼裡微調一下吧
5. 01:25:790 (1) - 這個nc是必要的嘛？我覺得用follow point做一個慢慢點過去的效果也不錯呢
6. 01:38:013 (3) - 尾巴上的clap有一點點多餘的感覺
7. 01:43:938 (4) - ^
8. 01:47:272 (4) - ^
9. 01:49:864 (3) - ^
10. 04:05:790 (1) - 同前面一樣的建議～
11. 04:18:013 (4) - 還是覺得2/4clap就好了……尾音上沒有什麼clap的必要吧………………
12. 04:30:235 (4) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:19:864 (3) - 考慮加個reverse?
2. 00:39:309 - 也許這裡可以放個note，或者把前面的00:39:124 (3) - 做成一個1/4的slider?
3. 01:18:568 (2) - 試試看ctrl+r? flow感覺會更好一點～
4. 01:23:938 (1) - 嗯…………建議試試3拍上都放上whistle~~
5. 01:32:457 (6) - 和normal一樣的建議，我感覺Kiai段用2/4clap就好了……這種地方的clap有一點點畫蛇添足的感覺…………
6. 01:38:383 (9) - ^……好吧這個我就不來回說了……
7. 01:57:272 (1) - 要不要試試把這個刪掉的效果？
8. 02:51:346 (3) - 類似前面，把3拍都放上whistle？
9. 03:01:531 (7,1) - 在我自己的經驗裡……類似這種的stack，也就是一串跳之後突然一個stack是很容易破壞flow的……
10. 03:06:901 (4) - ctrl+r一下試試看？
11. 03:54:309 (4,5) - 這裡放3個note效果也許會更好？
12. 04:03:938 (1) - 依然是建議嘗試放3個whistle的地方……當然這種要保持前後一致就好……

that's all~~超喜歡～～star and good luck~~

Lizellota wrote:

Sorry for the delay..and i want to say..sorry i didn't found anything wrong..this map and song are really perfect, SB so beautiful..thank you for map this..and i'm sorry again ><... star~ hope see this ranked soon!~ good luck

Jarby wrote:

Normal:

00:12:827 (1) - Remove new combo. Separating the first object is quite strange, plus you didn't do it in Hard either.

Hard:

Please change stack leniency to 9 so that all objects that are meant to stack do so. Some aren't working at the moment without it.

Jarby wrote:

Alright, bubbled. Small notes to next modder: SB Load goes just above 5 at times, but I don't see a way of optimizing it without compromising the storyboard. As it's a guideline, this should be okay as it is. Also, spacing on Hard isn't consistent throughout, of course, but I didn't have trouble reading it for what it's worth. I haven't checked the storyboarded lyrics for errors simply because I can't; a Japanese person has already modded it, but I would get someone else to check it before ranking.

Garven wrote:

Just something I noticed on a quick playthrough in [Hard]

03:41:346 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - This reads fairly poorly. It's difficult to tell that it goes to 1/3.

I'll see if I can sneak in a full mod later on, but I've been really busy of late, so see if you can get Jarby to recheck and maybe someone with more time can give this map a full mod sooner than I can, hehe.

Jarby wrote:

I didn't think it was too bad, but okay.

Jarby wrote:

Rebubbled.

Flask wrote:

So why not shoot a star again :3