Zejky wrote:

Hi , From Mod4Mod
General
I think this map too many NC
Sleeping

00:54:216 (1) - move to x316-y148. overlap with 00:50:345 (1) - they're too far apart in timeline to notice this overlap
01:56:152 - http://puu.sh/XYcQ I like how it looks now better
of you

328,264,116152,6,0,B|352:304|412:300,1,80
397,216,117119,2,0,B|380:180|328:184,1,80

my mod

328,264,116152,6,0,B|352:304|412:300,1,80
397,216,117119,2,0,B|380:180|328:184,1,80

Walking
00:00:023 - to 00:15:022 - too much NC yes, and I wanna keep it, see Dancing
01:52:281 (1) - x372-y302 while 01:51:797 (6) - x37-y303
02:08:732 (2) - move to x376-y188
02:54:216 (1) - overlap with 02:52:281 (3) - I don't get what you mean
02:55:184 (2) - ^ 02:51:313 (2) - ^
02:56:152 (3) - ^ 02:50:345 - ^

Dancing

00:30:506 (6) - move to x256-y324 wouldnt make any difference
01:12:603 (4,5) - move to x192-y256 no, I want it in the center of 01:12:361 (3) and 01:11:635 (1)
01:46:232 - add/start spin - 01:48:168 - end spin I'll think about it, dont wanna add a spinner only in Dancing, and it wont fit in Sleeping and Walking here.
01:48:410 (1) - it may be better - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410863 ok, you're the second that tells me this, so changed.
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[General]
clear

[Dancing]
AR/OD/HP Drain - 1 (fits with your SV and BPM better, imo) mmmm it doesn't convince me, I ll keep it as it is.
00:13:087 (2,1,2,3,4) - really hard to read with hidden. :/ unstack maybe?
eh..? really good job I don't consider specific modes while mapping

[Walking]
00:00:023 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - looks like NC spam, tbh. i see why it's here but i still don't like it. maybe remove them to make your map easier-readable? I don't think it affects playability so keeping them.
00:57:603 (2) - inconsistent spacing here, i think. it doesn't looks like jump or anything like this :< Fixeddd~
01:45:506 (2) -1 grid up to make parallel sliders orz owah done
01:53:248 (1) - disagree with NC here. still looks like NC spam to me :< I was just making it similar to dancing, but changed
02:15:023 (5) - breaks your pattern. i think it should be placed like this to follow your pattern true, had to move other stuff, but fixed
03:01:474 (2) - x1.5 jump doesn't really fits here. imo it's better to keep consistent spacing here or fixed
03:36:797 (1) - whistle + finish? (all diffs) done


[Sleeping]
00:22:281 (4,5) - probably beginners won't notice 4 because it's covered with 3's hitburst. is not
00:30:022 (4,5) - same as above ^
01:07:281 (2) - didn't like this slider, tbh. i think 2 reverses doesn't fit here. you don't use sliders like this one really often and this one looks random here. (try to use circle and 1reverse-slider instead example ) do not agree, keeping it
01:11:152 - i think it would be a good idea to put circle here (with clap hitsound probably) because it fits with vocals and music. and also it easier to follow consistent rhythm for beginners I wanna keep it simple, so no
01:15:022 (2) - same as 01:07:281 (2) (also 2 reverses sliders hard to read with hidden >.<). ok, i won't point out same sliders anymore.
01:46:474 - this mini break is confusing for beginners. (maybe you can start spinner at 01:45:990 (instead of 4) and end it at 01:47:442 -) I think is better a short break than a short spinner for beginners
02:18:893 (3,1) - same as 00:22:281 (4,5) wait, do you mean the stack?? the approach circle is there for a reason
02:48:410 (3) - try to add reverse for this slider. fits pretty good imo. also makes flow more consistent I do not like, i prefer as it is
03:07:764 (2) - to keep consisten patterns try to make blanket slider? example done~
03:13:087 (3) - kinda problem here. this one is overlapped with hp bar! it can confuse beginners I see it pretty well while playing
03:36:313 (3,1) - same as 00:22:281 (4,5 no change

nice diffs. <3

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hope it helps

1. 03;00:022-It would be best to remove this new combo from there because I don't find that fitting.
2. 03:05:829-Consider adding a new combo here but I do think its fitting to add one, in my opinion.

1. 03:21:313 (1)-I believe you forgot to put in the default Soft Sampleset and forgot to add a finish on the beginning.

1. I highly suggest you to don't use the white combo colour because during the kiai time it could be really bothering.
   Still about combo colours it'd be better if you change 3rd colour too because it's similar to the 1st. What about to use this combo colour set instead? Colours are selected from the BG:
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 53,220,255
   Combo2 : 128,0,255
   Combo3 : 255,255,98
   Combo4 : 178,178,178

   
   

1. 01:24:700 (1) - Remove new combo and add it on 01:25:184 (2) instead to keep consistency with 01:20:829 (3,1)
2. 01:26:152 (1) - Remove new combo
3. 01:28:571 (1) - ^ and add it on 01:29:055 (2). Always to keep consistency
4. 03:11:152 (2) - Why don't you make it curved to blanket it together with 03:09:700 (1)? Like you did for 03:17:442 (1,2)
5. 03:26:635 (2) - ^

1. 00:14:539 (2) - New combo
2. 00:22:281 (5) - This circle should be 1 grid up
3. 00:50:345 (1) - Remove clap to keep consistency with 00:46:474 (1) and the next (1) sliders
4. 01:29:055 (2) - What is this bad whistle D: Remove it from the slider's body
5. 01:40:184 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) and add it on (2)
6. 01:45:506 (2) - CTRL + R?
7. 02:38:732 (1) - It'd be better if you extend this slider by 1/4 :\ Adding a finish on reverse arrow
8. 03:00:990 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency

1. 00:13:571 (1) - Forgot whistle?
2. 00:39:216 (2) - CTRL + R?
3. 00:45:264 (1,2) - Select them and CTRL + H? This blanket could be bothering to play
4. 01:17:200 (1) - Remove new combo and use it on 01:17:442 (2) instead
5. 02:45:264 (7) - New combo?

Chewin wrote:

Eww Hi lizbeth, random mod here <3

[General]

1. I highly suggest you to don't use the white combo colour because during the kiai time it could be really bothering.
   Still about combo colours it'd be better if you change 3rd colour too because it's similar to the 1st. What about to use this combo colour set instead? Colours are selected from the BG: I wanna keep the combo colors as they are, because I want to keep consistence with the others map in this project >~<
   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 53,220,255
   Combo2 : 128,0,255
   Combo3 : 255,255,98
   Combo4 : 178,178,178

   
   

[Sleeping]

1. 01:24:700 (1) - Remove new combo and add it on 01:25:184 (2) instead to keep consistency with 01:20:829 (3,1) Done
2. 01:26:152 (1) - Remove new combo Done
3. 01:28:571 (1) - ^ and add it on 01:29:055 (2). Always to keep consistency Done
4. 03:11:152 (2) - Why don't you make it curved to blanket it together with 03:09:700 (1)? Like you did for 03:17:442 (1,2) Cuz right side of the chart is only for linear sliders
5. 03:26:635 (2) - ^ ^

[Walking]

1. 00:14:539 (2) - New combo Done
2. 00:22:281 (5) - This circle should be 1 grid up Done
3. 00:50:345 (1) - Remove clap to keep consistency with 00:46:474 (1) and the next (1) sliders oops, removed
4. 01:29:055 (2) - What is this bad whistle D: Remove it from the slider's body ooops, thanks ;~;
5. 01:40:184 (1,2) - Remove new combo from (1) and add it on (2) I ll keep this as it is
6. 01:45:506 (2) - CTRL + R? ok~
7. 02:38:732 (1) - It'd be better if you extend this slider by 1/4 :\ Adding a finish on reverse arrow ok~
8. 03:00:990 (1) - Remove new combo for consistency Done, also one like this in the first kiai

[Dancing]

1. 00:13:571 (1) - Forgot whistle? is there
2. 00:39:216 (2) - CTRL + R? wanna keep it like that
3. 00:45:264 (1,2) - Select them and CTRL + H? This blanket could be bothering to play I unstacked them, but didn't mirrowed
4. 01:17:200 (1) - Remove new combo and use it on 01:17:442 (2) instead no change
5. 02:45:264 (7) - New combo?^

That's it, Lizbeth :3
You can call me back when you have fixed

1. 01:32:926 (1) - Why this whistle? Remove it from the slider's body to keep consistency with 01:40:668 (1)

1. 01:32:926 (1) - Same of above