Dancing is my remedy oh ~
[General]
- +12 offset is much better for me.
[Easy]
00:08:355 (2,3) - For places like this I'd like to see you follow the vocal more because it's much stronger than the beat. To make it easier for new players I'd say a returning slider that starts at 00:08:355 (2) - and the return starting at 00:09:053
00:15:797 (2,3) - I think you could do the same here with the return landing on 00:16:495 -
00:19:518 (1,2) - This one might be harder to do but a return on 00:20:216 - would be nice to catch the vocal.
00:20:913 - If you don't do ^ I think a note would fit really nicely here.
00:32:076 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo to 00:33:471 (2) - ? Follows vocal better.
00:57:657 (1) - Remove new combo. Also I think this would be better as a curved slider; linear just seems odd here.
01:23:704 (3,4) - Returning slider? With the return landing on 01:24:402 - to catch the vocal. Because 01:24:634 (4) - is quite hard to catch right now imo.
01:36:727 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the gaps here because I think the other choruses had better rhythm. But I guess it's fine if you want to keep it as it is.
01:41:378 (1,2) - The rhythm is much better at 00:41:844 (3,4) - I think it'd be better if you use it here too.
01:49:750 (1) - Remove new combo? Seems kinda pointless.
01:57:192 (1) - ^ so it's consistent with 00:48:820 (1,2,3) - ?
02:13:937 (1,2,3) - I think using sliders here for the vocal would be better here.
02:16:727 (4) - Move to 02:16:495 - consider adding a note at 02:16:495 - if you do this.
02:19:285 - Note? Stack it on 02:19:518 (1) - ?
02:21:843 (1) - Move to 02:22:076 - and add a note at 02:21:843 -
02:24:402 (2,3) - Reposition if you do ^
02:56:727 (1) - Remove new combo, seems odd for 1 slider.
03:01:378 (1) - Remove new combo and add new combo for 03:03:239 (3) -
03:04:169 (1) - Remove new combo
03:10:216 - Note? I think this is better if it's not blank
03:11:146 - ^ I suppose you could use a slider instead of the notes if you wanted too.
[Normal]
00:19:983 (3) - I think it's smoother if you placed this in the same position as 00:18:123 (1) - maybe something like
this00:23:704 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:35:099 (3,4) - I think if you use a returning slider for the first "remedy" the rhythm is better like you did at 01:34:867 (3,4) - Right now the 1/2 sliders at 00:34:634 (2,3,4) - feel strange.
00:42:541 (2,3) - Think the rhythm could be better. It's better if you have returning sliders on "remedy, remedy" imo instead of having a long slider cutting through this rhythm. What you did at 01:42:309 (3,4,5) - was better too.
00:51:378 (5) - Whistle start, remove whistle from end.
00:58:820 (4) - Whistle.
00:59:053 (5) - Remove whistle.
01:05:099 (1,2,3,4) - This plays better if it's something like
this.
01:50:913 (3) - Add whistle to the start and remove it from the end.
01:57:890 (2) - Add whistle to the end.
01:58:588 (3) - Remove whistle
02:50:448 (2) - Whistle
02:50:681 (3) - Remove whistle
02:57:192 (4) - ^
02:57:890 (5) - ^ from the end
03:01:146 (2) - Long slider doesn't fit imo, just use 1/2 notes / slider instead?
03:05:564 (3) - Remove whistle
03:07:890 (1,2,3,4) - very ugly... align 03:08:588 (2,3,4) - vertically with the end of 03:07:890 (1) - to make it look much better.
03:12:774 (4) - Whistle
03:13:006 (5) - Remove whistle
[Hard]
00:09:983 (2) - Move left 1 square, may as well make this diamond neat xD
00:49:750 (3) - This jump feels a bit awkward to me, I think it might be better to stack it or place it to the left or below 00:49:053 (2) -
00:50:913 (3) - Whistle end and remove whistle from the start of 00:51:611 (4) -
00:58:123 (2) - Remove whistle
00:59:053 (5) - ^
01:50:913 (4) - Whistle
01:51:146 (5) - Remove whistle
01:58:355 (4) - Whistle
01:58:588 (5) - Remove whistle
02:18:355 (2,3,1) - Maybe make this kind of stacking more obvious by moving 02:18:355 (2,3,1) - down. Right now it looks like it failed to stack xD
02:31:146 - Note? Since you seem to be following the vocal.
02:33:006 - ^
02:50:448 (3) - Whistle
02:50:681 (4) - Remove whistle
02:57:890 (4) - Whistle
02:58:123 (5) - Remove whistle
03:05:332 (4) - Whistle
03:05:564 (5) - Remove whistle
03:12:309 (2) - Whistle end
03:13:006 (3) - Remove whistle (you're probably fed up of this by now, don't worry it's the last one! =P)
Few more mods maybe and then I'll pay another visit ★