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project-ALCA- feat. yanaginagi - Neoage Dreamers

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Moway
1,143 posts
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Moway
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, November 20, 2012 at 11:33:10 AM

Artist: project-ALCA- feat. yanaginagi
Title: Neoage Dreamers
Tags: supercell gazelle regenerate yanagi nagi
BPM: 163
Filesize: 10721kb
Play Time: 04:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dream (5 stars, 749 notes)
  2. Hard (4.52 stars, 485 notes)
  3. Normal (3.08 stars, 289 notes)
Download: project-ALCA- feat. yanaginagi - Neoage Dreamers
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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<3

All difficulties by me.
Last edited by Moway , edited 203 times in total.
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
Oh, so I am your first modder and it's your first beatmap? That's good!
Mod 4 Mod
Don't kudo this now, I am going to come back!

General

There's an inconsistency with kiai times.
for the BPM, I gets 162.99

Hard
Unsnapped timing points:

Insane
Unsnapped timing points:

Call me back after the changes
miss_master_old
539 posts
Joined April 2011
miss_master_old
Artist: yanaginagi~
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele

miss_master wrote:

Artist: yanaginagi~
I don't think so, http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 0&g=0&la=0
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
Hello from my M.Q.
[Hard]
00:04:184 (1) - try something like this
SPOILER
00:06:208 (3,4,1,2) -
SPOILER
01:03:467 (7) -
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:43:776 (1,2,3,4,1) - try this
SPOILER
02:11:556 (1) - ?
SPOILER

Good luck!
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Moway

EvilElvis wrote:

Hello from my M.Q.
[Hard]
00:04:184 (1) - try something like this SPOILER
[img'>http://puu.sh/IH2R[/img:36f9d]

00:06:208 (3,4,1,2) - Fixed
SPOILER
01:03:467 (7) - Fixed
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:43:776 (1,2,3,4,1) - try this Fixed
SPOILER
02:11:556 (1) - ? Kept the same, flows a bit better.
SPOILER

Good luck!

Thanks!
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Moway

Gabe wrote:

Oh, so I am your first modder and it's your first beatmap? That's good!
Mod 4 Mod
Don't kudo this now, I am going to come back!

General

There's an inconsistency with kiai times.
for the BPM, I gets 162.99

Hard
Unsnapped timing points:

Insane
Unsnapped timing points:

Call me back after the changes

All unsnapped points have been snapped. My timing seems okay so I don't think I need to change it.
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
Hello~

Storyboard

all images are included in the storyboards(black,brightbg,darkbg,pulse ) - should be the same size - as BG. so 1024х768.



00:01:056 (1) - Why circle begins earlier timing? maybe then you need to change offset? or start with the exact timing.

Normal more 3 star. you need to make Easy or easier to do Normal.

00:01:056 (1) - 00:24:795 (1) - I do not understand what you did there, a voice or the music?! I'm sorry, but I can not check this piece....

In your place I would have added another hitsounds :)

good map, good luck.
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Moway

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hello~

Storyboard

all images are included in the storyboards(black,brightbg,darkbg,pulse ) - should be the same size - as BG. so 1024х768.

"Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes." From the wiki, what i have should be fine, so I'll leave it unless another mod tells me that I should change.



00:01:056 (1) - Why circle begins earlier timing? maybe then you need to change offset? or start with the exact timing.
The first part is the 4th beat before the real 1st beat, so it really isn't the first 4/4 cycle. Unless another mod tells me I cannot do this, then I will leave it the same.

Normal more 3 star. you need to make Easy or easier to do Normal. Maybe, ranking rules say it just has to be Normal, and around 3 start level, if another mod says I have to change it, then I will.

00:01:056 (1) - 00:24:795 (1) - I do not understand what you did there, a voice or the music?! I'm sorry, but I can not check this piece.... It's a combination of both, I think it is okay this way, but if other people say it is confusing I will change.

In your place I would have added another hitsounds :)

good map, good luck.
Thank you for your mod. I think that I don't need to make any of those changes, but I don't know for sure, so thank you for modding.
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
Haii ~
yanaginagi ~ >w<


[General]
- I think... Project Alca should be the source..? owo
- Music track lead-in 3, is too long, put it a 2
- You can remove the bookmarks.
- Up to 04:25:525, you leave it unmapped, maybe cut the mp3 ?
- You should use distance spacing 1 or higher for hard and insane diffs. Keep that in mind for future maps ~


[Normal]
- Approach Rate -2
01:45:056 (1) - Place where 01:43:216 (3) was.
04:16:876 (1,2,1) - A bit messy. ><


[Hard]
00:59:234 (2) - Make this slider look better?
01:45:056 (1) - Place where the end of 01:43:216 (3) was properly.
02:28:302 (4) - Stack properly.
02:31:246 (4) - ^
03:20:012 (2) - ^


[Insane]
03:16:332 (1,1,1,1) - Stack.
04:01:418 (3) - Place where (1) was.



Well mapped and nice storyboard ~
Good luck !
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Moway

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
yanaginagi ~ >w<


[General]
- I think... Project Alca should be the source..? owo I think you might be correct, it should be Project Alca feat. yanaginagi. I will change when I figure out how to change it :D
- Music track lead-in 3, is too long, put it a 2 Fixed
- You can remove the bookmarks. Okay
- Up to 04:25:525, you leave it unmapped, maybe cut the mp3 ? going to leave this in
- You should use distance spacing 1 or higher for hard and insane diffs. Keep that in mind for future maps ~ I didn't even know it was possible to change that :D


[Normal]
- Approach Rate -2fixed
01:45:056 (1) - Place where 01:43:216 (3) was. fixed
04:16:876 (1,2,1) - A bit messy. >< changed (2) to make it less crowded


[Hard]
00:59:234 (2) - Make this slider look better? going to leave it for now unless I get another mod telling me it looks bad, I think it plays well and it's symmetrical, but if enough people say that it's bad then I will change it.
01:45:056 (1) - Place where the end of 01:43:216 (3) was properly. fixed
02:28:302 (4) - Stack properly. fixed
02:31:246 (4) - ^ fixed
03:20:012 (2) - ^ fixed


[Insane]
03:16:332 (1,1,1,1) - Stack. uff -_- fixed
04:01:418 (3) - Place where (1) was. fixed



Well mapped and nice storyboard ~
Good luck !
Thanks for your feedback!
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
It should be styled as " project-ALCA- "
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Moway

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

It should be styled as " project-ALCA- "
Okay, I'll fix it. Thanks.
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin


General

[Normal]

  • 01:06:779 (1) - Finish at beginning the slider
    01:33:095 (1) - Remove Finish
    01:43:584 (1) - NC?
    01:53:889 (1) - Finish? Clap
    02:41:920 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider
    03:06:027 - Finish?
    04:25:525 - Clap
[Hard]

00:46:169 (1) - you could make more beautiful the slider



like this:


01:26:838 (1) - Remove NC
01:27:206 (3) - NC
02:20:205 (2) - more to the center
04:19:820 (1,2) - more to the center

[Insane]

00:48:929 (7) - you could make more beautiful the slider

Good Job!

Good Luck !
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Moway

Xin-Kun wrote:



General

[Normal]

  • 01:06:779 (1) - Finish at beginning the slider fixed
    01:33:095 (1) - Remove Finish fixed
    01:43:584 (1) - NC? fixed
    01:53:889 (1) - Finish? Clap I think it is okay with the finish
    02:41:920 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider Did not do this change, but I did change the beatsounds at that part, so thanks for pointing it out
    03:06:027 - Finish? removed
    04:25:525 - Clap added finish
[Hard]

00:46:169 (1) - you could make more beautiful the slider



like this: fixed


01:26:838 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:27:206 (3) - NC fixed
02:20:205 (2) - more to the center did not change, I want this to distance snap with (7)
04:19:820 (1,2) - more to the center fixed

[Insane]

00:48:929 (7) - you could make more beautiful the sliderslight change, but I like how that shape plays

Good Job!

Good Luck !
Thank you for your mod!
Gyuunyu
215 posts
Joined April 2011
Gyuunyu
Hello!

This is my mod from Here is my mod from Palinus - Gyuunyu Duo Modding Queue~

[General]

Tags - Yanagi nagi should be removed from all diffs because it's already in the artist section
Same as for Project alca. not really know if the other three tags are right but let them be o3o


[Insane]

00:40:280 (1) - finish
00:46:169 (1) - finish
01:13:220 (2) - add Finish on the head of the slider
01:13:956 (4) - ^
01:15:613 (1) - ^
01:45:792 (2) - add finish on the head
01:48:001 (1) - ^
01:48:737 (3) - finish
01:49:841 (2) - head finish
02:14:500 (1) - Finish on the head
02:20:205 (7) - remove finish
02:41:183 (2) - Finish on the tail
03:49:456 (3) - finish on the head
03:50:192 (1) - finish
03:50:928 (1) - finish
04:03:442 (1) - remove finish on head
04:15:219 (3) - Finish on head

The mapping was perfect :D

[Hard]
00:46:169 (1) - Finish on the head
00:59:234 (2) - Curve it more ? like this : http://puu.sh/LfeW
01:15:613 (1) - Finish on head
01:18:557 (1) - Finish
01:18:557 (1) - Finish
01:50:945 (1) - Remove finish
02:02:723 (1) - Finish on head
02:20:205 (8) - remove finish
02:20:389 - Add note ? and if add finish
02:31:798 (5,6) - AIbot found an error there please move it
02:48:176 (4) - Add Finish on head
02:51:121 (7) - finish
03:20:012 (2) - finish on head
03:20:749 (3) - ^
03:21:485 (4) - ^
03:49:272 (2) - Remove clap
04:03:442 (1) - Finish
04:15:219 (1) - ^
04:18:532 (3) - ^
04:18:900 (1) - ^
04:19:268 (3) - ^

Very nice Hard !

[Normal]

01:13:956 (4) - Finish on head
01:30:334 (4) - ^
01:33:095 (1) - finish

Soo much finish xD

Well i hope this mod helped !

Good luck and I hope I will see this ranked soon !
Mikan
244 posts
Joined January 2011
Mikan
hi~
nice map,skin,BG~~

Insane
AR -1

00:07:312 - How is such an arrangement? http://puu.sh/LhlR
00:27:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Change the timing, It is difficult the first time
03:53:137 - add note ?


Might be better turned into high quality mp3

gl~~ :)
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Moway
Thank you both for your mods!

@Gyuunyu I didn't change all of the beatsound things, but I did change a lot of them. Thanks for your suggestions!

@Mikan I found a better mp3, so hopefully that fixes that problem.
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Hey, saw your post in #modreq about timing.

Try BPM 163, Offset 1241. You won't need a second timing point this ones worked the whole song.

Don't forget to resnap all notes after you put in the new timing.

Once you update I will mod the map~
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Moway

MMzz wrote:

Hey, saw your post in #modreq about timing.

Try BPM 163, Offset 1241. You won't need a second timing point this ones worked the whole song.

Don't forget to resnap all notes after you put in the new timing.

Once you update I will mod the map~
Hi,

If I time the map as you said I should, the beats in most of the song fall on weird ticks on the timeline. Is that okay? If it is, then I'll make the change.
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