Hi ! As I promised

Easy
00:46:618 (1) - a bit nazi , this is too close to this note 00:44:118 (1) - , move right a bit, (move to x:146 y:80)
nice one

Normal
01:22:868 (3) - move left 1 grid , this spacing is odd to see ;_;

Insane
00:19:118 (2) - don't place this note at here because the hitburst from 00:17:555 (3) - might cover it
I recommend you to move 00:19:118 (2) - to x:464 y:184 and start new combo 00:19:118 (2) - , (remove newcombo this 00:18:805 (1) - )
It will follow the vocal more than before
00:20:368 (5) - ^ new combo here if you choose to do new combo from above suggestion
if this is your hardest diff..
I would recommend you to add note here
00:26:930 (3) -
00:27:086 (4) -
00:27:555 (2) -
00:34:118 (2) - start new combo here instead of 00:33:805 (1) - and move 00:33:805 (1) - to x:288 y:56 and move 00:33:493 (5) - to x:192 y:184
I find it give better flow here
from using the large distance between 00:32:243 (3,4) - , it's too short to place 00:33:493 (5) - at your point , and 00:33:805 (1) - should be more far to 00:34:118 (2) - , because from my opinion , this song represents it in that way
01:15:993 (1,2,3) - this should be large jump like this , because the vocal sounds louder than other part , so this jump will emphasize more than others
01:18:493 (1,2,3) - ^ same

problem here is some jump are not following the song in some way but , in my mod , those are all that I think it's problem

Easy and Normal has the great arrangement and rhythm , star here
Good Luck \:D/

thanks for mod and star XD
update

Easy
try to use distance snap to re-arrange ur beats
01:26:930 - put spinner

Normal
01:26:952 - put spinner

Hard
nothing to say

thanks for other's mod
looks like this beatmap is PERFECT!
good luck and i'm sure your beatmap will be ranked!!!

thank you mod
I can't add because music has run out

from my queue ^^

[General]
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[Easy]
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[Normal]
Rhythms
[Hard]
Rhythms
wonderful mapset ><
super good luck for you~~ >w<

thank you for mod

Hi/


[General]
remove .osb
E/E/H?


[Easy]
00:08:493 (3) - add nc
00:10:993 (3) - ^
00:18:493 (4) - ^
01:02:868 (3) - ^


[Normal]
OD-1
00:13:493 (5) - add note and whistle
00:45:055 (2) - end add N2 clap
00:45:993 (3) - start and end add N2 clap


[Hard]
00:01:618 (3) - remove whistle add finish
00:26:930 (3) - add note
00:27:555 (5) - ^
00:32:868 (4) - 0.5x? end at 00:33:493
00:45:680 (3) - jump?
00:46:149 (6) - add note
00:54:274 (2) - ^
00:54:586 (4) - ^

good luck

thank you for mod

Hey

[General]

• Tick rate 2 matches up well with this song.

[Normal]
• 00:33:493 - I suggest adding a note here. I find that doing so helps this combo flow into the next combo.
• 01:13:180 (2,3,4) - This does not flow all to well. Change it so that it looks like this.

[Hard]
* I found the difficulty jump from Normal to Hard unusually large.Try to make Normal harder or Hard easier, and avoid this in the future.
* The spacing here is really random and inconsistent. They seem to follow nothing and have no direction at all. Please clean this up.

• 00:12:868 (5,6,7) - A 1/4 jump like this seems too hard for this difficulty level.
• 00:19:118 (6) - Add in a new combo here and remove it from 00:20:368. That way, it matches the music and previous combo patterns.
• 00:45:680 (3,4,5,1,2) - This part seems awfully choppy. To fix this, add in a note in between these two compressions on 00:46:149. It plays a lot better this way.
• 00:55:055 (4,5) - This pattern here does not play well at all. The flow is nothing but awkward. Change this up.

[Insane]

• 00:26:618 (2,3,4,5) - This part does not play very well, because of its awful flow. It would play well if you curves the mini stream like this.

Could use some work, so I won't re-check in a while.

thank you for mod

I forgot to tell you to delete the audio in the video.
No kds.

thank~ you
and update

[General]

*12 Mb for a video with a medium quality is bad; if you find a good source I will help to compress it for you. As it is for now, it occupies a lot of useless space. Is that taken from djpop's map?


[Easy]

In general it's okay, I just can't understand why so many new combo! just an example: 00:58:493 (2,1) - 00:25:368 (2,1) - 00:09:743 (2,1) -
01:26:618 (3) - a spinner would be better too

[Normal]

00:52:243 (2) - a bit unexpected since you are following only the vocal voice here x: remove it if you can
01:26:618 (5) - this slider feels so out- of place, just for its end is on a red tick; consider to make the map end on the previous white tick or to extend the slider to 01:27:868

[Hard]

00:41:618 (1) - it felt too boring to play; since there's a "climax" here I expected the difficulty would be increased, but whatever ):
I expected a better rhythm here, not just a simple 1/2; just to make an example you could add a "light" stream from 00:13:180 to 00:14:118, keep following the instrumental here 00:45:993 or the vocal voice here 00:51:618 (3) -
also... what if you increase the HP drain value and the OD here? :v

thk you for mod

[General]

*12 Mb for a video with a medium quality is bad; if you find a good source I will help to compress it for you. As it is for now, it occupies a lot of useless space. Is that taken from djpop's map?

yes, if like you can find video, please help me

and update !!!

[Easy]

1. 00:08:493 (1) - Slider blanket it?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:08:493 (1,2) - Since of the maps "feeling" being soft, the map would be better with some curves
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:493 (1,2) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:805 (1,2,3) - ^
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. OD+1
2. Tick rate 2? should stay better since the rhythm is 1/2
3. 00:38:336 (5,6) - Curve?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. Slider Tick 2
2. You needed this to differentiate from hard? if yes My guest here should make you know how to insert other notes aka overmapping, but making it understandable
3. I should complete the mod of this diff, in the meanwhile, did you do the last mod for this diff?

thank you for mod
update

Uhm, I think you can add the Insane, to differentiate it from the hard you can just "overmap" it a bit in a non-fastidious manner like I posted in the example....
Meanwhile I did find the video....
There is some noise in the start, it's not so visible, anyway.
Video Link

thank you
but i don't think no change on map

Hi, Zejky

My mod from your request






That's all that I can find them. (If my mod is useless, don't give a kd for me.)
Great map, give a star

Good luck~

thank you mod and star
update

[Easy]
some of the rhythms feel weird; here are some suggestions:
00:20:993 (3) - turn this 3 beat slider into a note + 2 beat slider?
00:48:493 (2) - turn this 3 beat slider into note + 2 beat slider or 2 beat slider + note?
01:08:493 (2,3) - turn this 2 beat slider + note into a note + 2 beat slider?
01:18:493 (2) - slider is too long for the rhythms; break it up somehow?

[Normal]
why isn't there a spinner at the end like the other diffs?

[Hard]
00:55:055 (4,5) - is there a reason the note is on the left instead of on the right of the slider?

overall, this is a pretty nice map.

thank you for mod

General

your video size, reduce it to 7 mb or less ._.

Hard

00:06:305 (5) - more distance? im looking this 00:08:493 (4,5) - have more distance than 1.2x , i prefer u make this similiar spacing to all flows like that. better do that and really fit to the song
00:08:805 (5) - it was too far from (1), move to x312y48, make (4) >(5) > (1) have similiar spacing
00:16:305 (5) - just like the first point
after that, if you found similiar notes like i mention, maybe fix it later...
overall it was already easy to read for those jump
this not a general mod


Normal

01:02:243 (2) - pretty close to (1) , better move to x192 y344

overall : really good normal difficult

Easy

01:22:243 - add circle, feel weird when have less notes at the end of song, but it will make your easy have 0.75 diff rating


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so, my mod is the shortest than other ._.

zeroclover wrote:

Hard

00:06:305 (5) - more distance? im looking this 00:08:493 (4,5) - have more distance than 1.2x , i prefer u make this similiar spacing to all flows like that. better do that and really fit to the song
00:08:805 (5) - it was too far from (1), move to x312y48, make (4) >(5) > (1) have similiar spacing
00:16:305 (5) - just like the first point

this is jump , should i don't fix, but thank you for mod

Here comes my mod

black is suggestion
blue is highly recommended
red is unrankable

[General]
That video...but from reading other posts im assuming you are getting a replacement? if you cant find one then pm me anytime and i will give you one
delete .osb file if you are not making a storyboard (and then full submit)
Try to end all your difficulties at the same time. i gave a possible solution in suggestions below

[Easy]
AI Mod tells me that there are some spacings you should fix...go check it
00:13:493 (3) - music suggest add a note here
00:24:118 (1,2) - try lining these two up? like the tail of 1 is horizontal with 2
00:29:118 (1,2) - ^
01:26:618 (1) - extended this spinner to when the music actually finishes (around 01:29:118, and its best if you can silence the sound effect)

[Normal]
00:11:618 (4) - this slider can look better
00:18:493 (1) - make this curve the other way to contrast 00:19:743 (2)
00:33:493 (4) - line this up with 00:32:555 (3)
00:33:805 (1) - take away the whistle at beginning of slider
00:48:493 (2) - make it this beat instead 01:20:055 (4) - position this better
01:26:618 (5) - replace this with a spinner that ends in the same time as easy (even if you didnt follow the suggestion on easy it is important that you end them at the same time)

[Hard]
change stack leniency to 7, should be consistent across all diffs
00:29:430 (4) - 5 grid down and 4 grid left for better spacing
00:46:149 (8) - add a note here to make a mini stream
00:46:305 (1) - take NC off
00:46:618 (3) - NC here, the whole thing can look like this 00:52:555 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - you can use the polygon tool to get a perfect hexagon here
01:26:618 (1) - same suggestion as easy

Sora no Woto brings back some memories...good mapset and hope to see this ranked soon ^_^

thaqnk you for mod
update !!!
i need moding

Hi, from my modding queue

[Normal]
00:11:618 (4) - Weird shape
00:33:493 (4) - Voluntary unaligned, or it's just a mistake ?

[Hard]
Lots of snapping problems

Good luck for rank ^^

thank for mod

from moddingqueue..

folder seems fine.. and i found nothing really x.x just a few random suggestions..

[Easy]
01:28:493 - silence spinnerend?

[Normal]
00:39:118 - whistle?
00:40:368 - ^
00:43:493 - delete whistle?
01:15:993 (1,2,3) - isn't the spacing a little bit weird here? gap between 2 and 3 is much smaller..

[Hard]
00:44:118 - NC?
01:23:493 (7) - Edit -> Reverse Selection? (would have moaar flow :3)
01:28:493 - silence spinnerend?

very nice mapset :3 video has a nice quality for the low filesize :0 gj

thank you for mod
help me about silence
update

Hi Zejky I'm Newbie to Mod but i will try it

My Idea is wrong so Sorry i'm newbie to mod map

Color Rule
Pink : It's ok do or not to do it's fine
Black : Please Fix it (by My idea other i don't know)
Blue : Impassive Pass


Let's Start at Easy
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01:22:243 Maybe add 1 note ?

Easy Pass!
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Normal
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Impassive You Pass Normal

Normal Check Pass!
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Hard
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00:00:368 Switch Start to End To Start

Hard Check 95% Pass!
-----------------------
Overall Result Pass!
Congratulation You Map Nearly to be Ranked

+Star

thank for mod

Maybe turn up the volume when she sings the chorus, so that its more exciting? by 10 or 20...

[Easy]

00:15:368 (1) - Move the 3rd shaping box 1 to the left so that the ends are on the same diagonal line.
00:16:605 (3) - Rotate by -2 to make it symmetrical. If you do this also move the fallowing (1) 1 to the right.
00:55:993 (4,6) - Make Y:252 so that it is on the same high as this combo's (2) note.

[Normal]

00:27:555 (3) - Make Y:64 so that it is on the same high as this combo's (1) slider.
Its best if you end all the difficulties the same so maybe its better to put a spinner at the end of this difficulty same place and length as in Easy?

[Hard]

00:09:743 (2,3) - Replace with a slider like at 00:10:993.
00:17:086 (1) - Extend (1) to here.
00:37:243 (3) - Make it a different placing so that it does not appear in the place where (1) did? E.g. You could move (1) at 00:36:305 to x:388 and y:204.
00:46:149 - I would add a note here because there is definitely a sound there.

2 Stars. One for really nice beatmaps and one for a beautiful song choice

EDIT: And an extra for nothing. Cheers!

thank you for moding and 3 star
update !!!

Hi~

[Hard]
00:07:555 (3,4,5) - The spacing in this combo is not even, if you are trying to make a jump from 4 to 5 I really find it pointless because is so short, and it looks more like a wrong in spacing
00:19:118 (6) - according to your combo pattern, this should have a new combo, and then remove the new combo here 00:20:368 (1) -
00:23:805 - 00:30:993 - your idea of jump on this part is good, but looks a bit messy, try using new combo empathize jumps, for example: 00:25:680 (3) - new combo here, to make more readable the change in spacing, 00:30:680 (3) - new combo here, also this note 00:31:305 (1) - should be part of the previous combo and have the same distance as 00:30:680 (3,4) - to make it consistent with 00:26:305 (5) - then a new combo here 00:31:618 (2) -
00:54:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - space this combo even, the jump from 3 to 4 doesn't fit, imo, it would look and play nicer if this is all at the same space
00:59:118 (3) - like I said at 00:07:555 (3,4,5) - this looks more like an wrong spacing than a jump
01:25:055 (1) - this sounds like it should be part of the previous combo, remove new combo and add it to the next note
01:26:618 (1) - start the spinner 1/4 beat later and add a note here stacked on previous note, sounds and plays better, you could also add a finish sound here

[Normal]
01:02:243 (2) - remove this note, to keep it consistent with 00:50:993 (1,2) - or you could just add a note here 00:52:243 - and both patterns will have the notes
01:10:993 (7) - this should be part of the next combo, to keep it consistent with 00:50:993 (1,2) - and 01:00:993 (1,2,3) - and remember to add the note at 01:12:243 - if you added it to the previous one
I suggest you to add a spinner, to make the score varies

Lovely song/map <3

thank for modding and update

Hi~! Sorry for the super late mod..

Insane

Hard

Normal

Easy

good luck on ranking it~

thank you for mod
update

[General]

1. Start Easy and Normal in the same place as Hard please. Or remove the intro from Hard. (If you do that you may as well delete the first timing section.)
2. Tick rate 2 works best here.

[Easy]

00:11:618 (2) - Move this down 1 square and right 1 square, so it's like 00:06:618 (2,1) -
00:41:618 (3) - New combo? Remove new combo from 00:44:118 (1) - if you do this
00:44:118 (1) - I think you can use a better slider shape here because this one doesn't look very nice. Maybe something like 00:44:118 (4) - or make a better pattern with 00:41:618 (3,1) -
00:50:368 (3,1) - Align these notes with 00:48:493 (2) -
01:03:493 - Add note?
01:04:118 (2,3) - I think a slider would fit nice here for the long vocal.
01:22:243 - Add note? To keep the rhythm.

Minor suggestions, it's a nice easy. I like the style.

[Normal]

00:06:618 (3) - Make this slider symmetrical? It will look better.
00:33:493 (4,1) - Move down 2 squares [grid 4] to align this properly.
00:54:118 (5) - Move it up 2 squares and make it look neater.
01:08:493 (4,5,6,7) - Do you think you could make a better pattern here? The placement looks kinda random.
01:26:618 (5) - Use a spinner here and end it in the same place as the other diffs?

Nice diff, just a few cosmetic suggestions.

[Hard]

00:06:305 (5) - Use x1.5 distance snap on this note to make the jump smoother, here is an example
00:09:118 (6) - New combo?
00:16:305 (5) - x1.4 distance snap on this note? Same suggestion as 00:06:305 (5) -
00:18:805 (5) - I suggest something like this because the movement feels better. If not try to keep this distance between 00:17:868 (4,5,1) - equal.
00:31:305 (1) - Remove new combo? Looks very strange.
00:38:336 (5) - Delete this note and add a jump at 00:38:493 (6) - ? Right now the small stream at the end of the slider is very strange and plays odd. If you don't want to do this maybe stack these notes at the end of the slider.
00:38:805 (1,2) - Stack these notes on top of 00:39:118 (3) - it plays much better imo.
00:45:055 (2) - Rotate this clockwise? It looks neater imo.
00:45:680 (3) - Instead of having a returning slider here why not use notes and make it part of the 00:46:149 (4,5,6) - stream? A returning slider straight to stream doesn't play great imo.
00:55:211 (5) - Delete this note and make a pattern with 00:55:055 (4,6) - ? Rhythm seems kinda odd right now, I think it would play better as 1/2.
00:58:805 (2) - x1.5 distance snap? 00:58:493 (1,2,3) - Plays better if the distance is equal.
01:00:055 (4) - Place this in the same position as 00:58:805 (2) - ? Flows better. You'll have to respace 01:00:368 (5) - if you do this =P
01:06:618 (1,2,3) - Make the distance between these equal.
01:14:118 (1) - Maybe you can draw a slider here that matches the shape of 01:13:180 (6) - to make it look nicer?
01:15:211 (3) - Delete this note? Better to follow the vocal here imo.
01:16:618 (3,4) - These look messy, try a different slider shape / pattern?

I suggested places where I think it's best to keep the spacing equal to stop a sudden slow down in spacing so please consider them. ^_^

Nice maps. That's all for now.

thank you for mod
conplete !!