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Topic Starter
1491625364981

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
You should give kudosu EviElvis. sorry,I really forget it :(
offset -8 changed

[Normal]
00:27:851 (2) - bad visual. separate circle and slider.fixed
01:17:249 (1) - ^ fixed
01:23:114 (2) - ^fixed
01:28:528 (1) - finish=01:28:979 I want to finish on 01:29:206 -
01:38:678 (1) - finish=01:43:641 fixed

[Hard]
00:06:656 - want note. I suggest you put slider Start=00:06:431, Finish=00:06:656 added
00:13:649 - add note and ↓
00:13:649 (1) - Start=00:13:761 added
00:19:287 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I like! Thank!
00:31:693 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:09:588 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I like! but, lools like Insnae. Thanks!

good luck!
Thanks for modding!! :)
ProjectNymph
Normal
00:06:202 (4,5) Spacing - Should be a little bit closer (timing/spacing of 1,2,3,4,5 is the same)
00:50:413 (2,3) Placing - Could be distracting for new players (normal diff)

Hard
00:24:924 (4,5,6,7) Spacing - Too close (look at (8,9,10) same spacing but faster clicking)

Keep on going!
Topic Starter
1491625364981

_CryThis_ wrote:

Normal
00:06:202 (4,5) Spacing - Should be a little bit closer (timing/spacing of 1,2,3,4,5 is the same) fixed
00:50:413 (2,3) Placing - Could be distracting for new players (normal diff) fixed

Hard
00:24:924 (4,5,6,7) Spacing - Too close (look at (8,9,10) same spacing but faster clicking) fixed

Keep on going!
Thanks for modding :)
TTTTTTTTTTTT
背景图片可以换个清晰度更高的其实可以。。。

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

-把source中的ball改成Ball

-不加些tags么?

[Normal]

00:04:624 - 这个kiai线是unsnapped的
00:04:624 - 价格finish在这里,打起来会感觉更好
00:06:428 - 这里不价格whistle么?和后面那个统一,而且这么加感觉不错的ww
00:15:902 - 这个么,NC是不必要的
00:28:082 - 这个跟人声的话,结束在红线上是最合适的了,现在蓝线上感觉有些延迟..
00:42:518 - 和后面的对称不更好么?
00:51:541 - 作为最低难度嘛,这个虽然是合乎一切标准的,不过有些快,在这个难度中,建议换成circle或slider了...
00:55:827 - 这里其实没必要降低note的密度了,继续跟vocal我觉得更不错呢,在这俩circle后面都加一个1/2的slider,这是我的建议,现在的状况还不错的ww
00:57:631 - 这串有些难了,把00:57:857后面这三个circle改成一个从00:57:857到00:58:308的slider是不错的方式..
01:07:781 - 结束在01:09:135,给予更多反应的时间更适合这个难度
01:09:586 - unsnapped kiai timing
01:09:586 - 我的建议是加一个finish
01:22:218 - 这里缺whistle了

[Hard]


00:04:624 - 这个kiai线unsnapped
00:04:624 - finish?
00:06:992 - 右移一格,间距目前看着有些怪
00:07:894 - ^
00:12:744 - 这两个连续的clap 听起来效果并不怎么好,去掉前面的其实会好些
00:13:759 - finish和whistle放一起听起来很刺耳的
00:18:496 - 这串连点音量降到40% 因为声量太大这里显得
00:22:669 - finish加上,去掉clap
00:22:669 - green timing是unsnapped
00:25:827 - (8)(9)(10)(11)这4个右移2格,之前的距离有问题
00:28:646 - 没重叠好
00:32:255 - ^
00:34:849 - (2)(3)下移一格
00:46:127 - 加一个NC
01:09:586 - unsnapped kiai timing
01:09:586 - 我的建议是加一个finish
01:19:285 - (6)(7)(8)上移一格
01:24:022 - (1)没snap,而且要右移2格

Good luck!
Topic Starter
1491625364981

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

背景图片可以换个清晰度更高的其实可以。。。 我會再找找的!

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

-把source中的ball改成Ball 已修正

-不加些tags么? 不是很懂Tag是做甚麼的 我會再去問問

[Normal] 都已修正 除了倒數第四項

00:04:624 - 这个kiai线是unsnapped的
00:04:624 - 价格finish在这里,打起来会感觉更好
00:06:428 - 这里不价格whistle么?和后面那个统一,而且这么加感觉不错的ww
00:15:902 - 这个么,NC是不必要的
00:28:082 - 这个跟人声的话,结束在红线上是最合适的了,现在蓝线上感觉有些延迟..
00:42:518 - 和后面的对称不更好么?
00:51:541 - 作为最低难度嘛,这个虽然是合乎一切标准的,不过有些快,在这个难度中,建议换成circle或slider了...
00:55:827 - 这里其实没必要降低note的密度了,继续跟vocal我觉得更不错呢,在这俩circle后面都加一个1/2的slider,这是我的建议,现在的状况还不错的ww
00:57:631 - 这串有些难了,把00:57:857后面这三个circle改成一个从00:57:857到00:58:308的slider是不错的方式..
01:07:781 - 结束在01:09:135,给予更多反应的时间更适合这个难度 不過這樣對節奏有一點不太合呢 抱歉了OAO
01:09:586 - unsnapped kiai timing
01:09:586 - 我的建议是加一个finish
01:22:218 - 这里缺whistle了

[Hard] 以全部修正 有小部分更動


00:04:624 - 这个kiai线unsnapped
00:04:624 - finish?
00:06:992 - 右移一格,间距目前看着有些怪
00:07:894 - ^
00:12:744 - 这两个连续的clap 听起来效果并不怎么好,去掉前面的其实会好些 我去掉後面的@.@
00:13:759 - finish和whistle放一起听起来很刺耳的
00:18:496 - 这串连点音量降到40% 因为声量太大这里显得
00:22:669 - finish加上,去掉clap
00:22:669 - green timing是unsnapped
00:25:827 - (8)(9)(10)(11)这4个右移2格,之前的距离有问题
00:28:646 - 没重叠好
00:32:255 - ^
00:34:849 - (2)(3)下移一格
00:46:127 - 加一个NC
01:09:586 - unsnapped kiai timing
01:09:586 - 我的建议是加一个finish
01:19:285 - (6)(7)(8)上移一格
01:24:022 - (1)没snap,而且要右移2格

Good luck!
感謝你得mod :)
Arnold0
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
You have two times the red combo color, you should change or delete one

[Normal]
00:30:563 (1) - Finish this slider at 00:30:789 -
00:31:014 - New slider which end at 00:31:240 -
01:01:466 (1) - end at 01:01:804 - (1/4Beat snap dividor needed) - without reverse arrow
01:02:142 - Add note

[Hard]
This diff should be called insane I think, it's too hard for an hard diff.
00:28:647 (2) - Remove note
00:29:775 (4) - Remove note
00:32:256 (6) - Remove note
00:33:609 (2) - Remove note
00:33:722 (2) - Remove note
01:02:142 (5) - End at 01:02:368 -
01:02:706 - Add note
01:02:932 - Add note

Nice for your first map
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Arnold0 wrote:

From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
You have two times the red combo color, you should change or delete one sorry,I can't find another red. so I misunderstand what you say :(

[Normal]
00:30:563 (1) - Finish this slider at 00:30:789 - It wil be harder, sorry :?
00:31:014 - New slider which end at 00:31:240 - ^
01:01:466 (1) - end at 01:01:804 - (1/4Beat snap dividor needed) - without reverse arrow fixed
01:02:142 - Add note ^

[Hard]
This diff should be called insane I think, it's too hard for an hard diff
00:28:647 (2) - Remove noteremoved
00:29:775 (4) - Remove note^
00:32:256 (6) - Remove note[color=#FF0000^][/color]
00:33:609 (2) - Remove note^
00:33:722 (2) - Remove note^
01:02:142 (5) - End at 01:02:368 - ]It wil be harder,and you maybe miss 01:03:045 - , sorry :(
01:02:706 - Add note^
01:02:932 - Add note^

Nice for your first map Thank you!
Good luck :)
Thank for your mod! :)
Aunxfb
Hi,From m4m

Normal
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00:02:819 (4) - 把它删掉吧,对我来说有点多余 :P
00:03:947 (3) - 把它拉长些,再把它缩短成三个圈>http://puu.sh/LyGe
00:04:624 - 如果跟了上一个,这里加个圈吧
00:19:060 - 这对我来说也是多余了,把它删掉,把spinner拉前到这里,再把spinner弄长些.
00:22:669 - spinner 加个"finish"
00:33:496 (4) - 加个whistle吧
00:34:172 (1,2,3) - 这也好像怪怪的,建议改去http://puu.sh/Lzwa
00:38:458 - 把后面的spinner拉过来吧
00:40:037 - 加个circle 或者把spinner拉长到这
00:45:225 (3,4,5) - timing好像不对,建议改去:http://puu.sh/Lzj2
00:47:368 - 2号好像这个timing比较适合
00:49:060 (1) - slider改短至00:49:736 -
00:49:962 - 加个 circle

Hard
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天啊!这难度还叫[Hard] 吗?...
这难度的Map我 mod 不了,抱歉了!><
不过我玩的时候还蛮顺畅的 :) ,这map还不错,不过难度还是改去[Insane]吧 ><


新手modder,mod不好不要见怪 :oops:
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Aunxfb wrote:

Hi,From m4m

Normal
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00:02:819 (4) - 把它删掉吧,对我来说有点多余 :P 刪了會怪怪的
00:03:947 (3) - 把它拉长些,再把它缩短成三个圈>http://puu.sh/LyGe 不太合節奏
00:04:624 - 如果跟了上一个,这里加个圈吧 ^
00:19:060 - 这对我来说也是多余了,把它删掉,把spinner拉前到这里,再把spinner弄长些. 已修正
00:22:669 - spinner 加个"finish" 已加入
00:33:496 (4) - 加个whistle吧 有些刺耳
00:34:172 (1,2,3) - 这也好像怪怪的,建议改去http://puu.sh/Lzwa 已修正
00:38:458 - 把后面的spinner拉过来吧 這裡跟人聲似乎合適些
00:40:037 - 加个circle 或者把spinner拉长到这 ^
00:45:225 (3,4,5) - timing好像不对,建议改去:http://puu.sh/Lzj2 已修正
00:47:368 - 2号好像这个timing比较适合 我聽不適合@.@
00:49:060 (1) - slider改短至00:49:736 - 已修正
00:49:962 - 加个 circle ^

Hard
-------
天啊!这难度还叫[Hard] 吗?...
这难度的Map我 mod 不了,抱歉了!><
不过我玩的时候还蛮顺畅的 :) ,这map还不错,不过难度还是改去[Insane]吧 >< 我會考慮的>.<


新手modder,mod不好不要见怪 :oops:
感謝你得MOD!! :)
Sure
[General]
You have to make Easy diff that has under 3 stars difficulty level. Or this mapset is unrankable.


[Hard]
There are many unsnapped notes. You can check them by AiMod(Ctrl+Shift+A).
You can snap them by Timing - Resnap All Notes.

00:24:924 (4) - Add NC or adjust spacing. It's too close to previous note. I suggest fixing spacing like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384173
00:29:887 (4) - Stack under end of previous slider?
00:31:691 (5) - x:440 y:304
00:40:714 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384180
01:20:187 (3) - Add clap to end
01:25:827 (7) - NC

This diff is too overmapped.
For an example, 00:41:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11). Here are not any beats in the music for streams.
Also other parts have many triple circles that doesn't fit music.
Please follow the music correctly, which is the best way.


[Normal]
00:35:977 (3) - Spacing. This position would work well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384186
00:45:225 (3,4,5) - Its rhythm is a bit hard to read. You'd better bind them to a slider.
01:01:466 (1,2) - ^
01:07:781 (1) - Shorten its length to 01:09:135. Because the next note comes too soon after spinner.
01:23:120 (2) - Stack under the end of previous slider correctly.
01:28:082 (4) - NC instead of next note
01:34:398 (4) - Hidden slider track is unrankable.
01:38:684 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).


Not bad stuff for first map. Good luck!
Beige
Hello~ I'm late.. sorry..

[General]

You must make more diff

[Normal]

00:03:947 (3) - : It is Normal diff this build is not good.

00:35:977 (3) - : this overlap is not good

00:41:390 (3) - : It is Normal diff so many turns

01:01:466 (1,2,3) - : It is Normal diff, these overlap are not good

01:06:654 (2,1) - : so far

01:23:120 (2) - : you must do stuck

01:38:458 (3,1) - : so far

[Hard]


00:03:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - : Same distance spacing plz

00:06:878 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - : rhythm is weird

00:13:194 (4,5,6,7,8) - : these build are not good

00:26:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - : these overlap are not good

00:30:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - : ^

00:41:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - : Same distance spacing plz

00:55:828 (5) - : NC

That's all good luck
Topic Starter
1491625364981

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
You have to make Easy diff that has under 3 stars difficulty level. Or this mapset is unrankable.


[Hard]
There are many unsnapped notes. You can check them by AiMod(Ctrl+Shift+A).
You can snap them by Timing - Resnap All Notes. fixed

00:24:924 (4) - Add NC or adjust spacing. It's too close to previous note. I suggest fixing spacing like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384173fixed
00:29:887 (4) - Stack under end of previous slider? fixed
00:31:691 (5) - x:440 y:304 fixed
00:40:714 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384180 fixed
01:20:187 (3) - Add clap to end fixed
01:25:827 (7) - NC fixed

This diff is too overmapped.
For an example, 00:41:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11). Here are not any beats in the music for streams.
Also other parts have many triple circles that doesn't fit music.
Please follow the music correctly, which is the best way. I got it! I will check it again.


[Normal]
00:35:977 (3) - Spacing. This position would work well. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/384186 fixed
00:45:225 (3,4,5) - Its rhythm is a bit hard to read. You'd better bind them to a slider. fixed
01:01:466 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:07:781 (1) - Shorten its length to 01:09:135. Because the next note comes too soon after spinner. fixed
01:23:120 (2) - Stack under the end of previous slider correctly. fixed
01:28:082 (4) - NC instead of next note fixed
01:34:398 (4) - Hidden slider track is unrankable. fixed
01:38:684 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).fixed


Not bad stuff for first map. Good luck!
Thank for mod!! :)
Topic Starter
1491625364981

W h i t e wrote:

Hello~ I'm late.. sorry.. That's ok :)

[General]

You must make more diff

[Normal]

00:03:947 (3) - : It is Normal diff this build is not good.sorry

00:35:977 (3) - : this overlap is not good fixed

00:41:390 (3) - : It is Normal diff so many turns ??

01:01:466 (1,2,3) - : It is Normal diff, these overlap are not good fixed

01:06:654 (2,1) - : so far

01:23:120 (2) - : you must do stuck fixed

01:38:458 (3,1) - : so far

[Hard]


00:03:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - : Same distance spacing plz fixed

00:06:878 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - : rhythm is weird fixed

00:13:194 (4,5,6,7,8) - : these build are not good fixed

00:26:955 (1,2,3,4,5) - : these overlap are not goodsorry

00:30:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - : ^ sorry

00:41:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - : Same distance spacing plz I remove it

00:55:828 (5) - : NC
fixed

That's all good luck
Thank for mod!! :)
Walaaa
Hi~哇啦啦來也

[Easy]
有些slider的反彈次數過多 我遇過有MAT不太喜歡這樣
00:28:759~00:29:210 - add slider
00:32:142 - back to 00:31:917
00:32:142~00:32:593 - add slider
00:44:999(1,2,3) - 換成反彈2次的slider?
另外有幾個note 對新手有點難以判斷
00:35:977(3)、00:55:827(3)、00:56:729(4)

[Normal]
circle size希望改回3,畢竟spacing1.1x讓新手夠辛苦了

[Hard]
哇這hard有點難=_=
01:08:909(1,2,3) - 三連打增加成五連打如何? ;)
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Walaaa wrote:

Hi~哇啦啦來也

[Easy]
有些slider的反彈次數過多 我遇過有MAT不太喜歡這樣 遇到再說(誤
00:28:759~00:29:210 - add slider 不接受 沒有比較好得感覺
00:32:142 - back to 00:31:917 fixed
00:32:142~00:32:593 - add slider add
00:44:999(1,2,3) - 換成反彈2次的slider? 換成兩個slider
另外有幾個note 對新手有點難以判斷
00:35:977(3)、00:55:827(3)、00:56:729(4) 第一個刪除 二三刪不得 也不好處理

[Normal]
circle size希望改回3,畢竟spacing1.1x讓新手夠辛苦了 改了

[Hard]
哇這hard有點難=_=
01:08:909(1,2,3) - 三連打增加成五連打如何? ;)
不好 會跟不上下一個slider

感謝MOD :)
Deni
From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
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Easy

00:02:819 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
00:03:721 (1) - That Spinner is too short for Easy! (AiMod)
00:05:075 (1) - This circle is too close after this spinner.(AiMod)
00:06:428 (3) - Same as 00:02:819 (1)
00:10:037 (4) - New Combo
00:13:195 (1) - That Spinner is too short for Easy! (AiMod)
00:14:999 (1) - This circle is too close after this spinner (AiMod)
00:16:804 (4) - New Combo
00:18:157 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:29:436 (3,4) - Stacks can be too hard for beginner!
00:30:563 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
00:36:428 (1) - This slider doesn't fit. Map something normal and not 3000 reverse arrows :P
00:40:037 (3) - New Combo
00:42:969 (6) - New Combo
01:00:563 (3) - Add a curve to this slider.
01:01:917 (4,5) - No Stacks in Easy + Maybe change this slider into something else.
01:09:586 (1) - Too short after Spinner (AiMod)
01:11:842 (4) - New Combo
01:17:255 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
01:19:962 (3) - New Combo
01:22:218 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:29:436 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
01:36:654 (5) - New Combo

Normal

00:03:721 (2) - Delete this circle
00:03:947 (3) - Move this to 00:03:721 .
00:26:954 (1) - Those Sliders don't look that pretty :? Maybe only add 3 points. Begin, Curve in the Middle, End.
00:28:082 (3) - ^
00:56:729 (3) - Move this circle to x:120 , y:48
00:03:721 (2,3) - Same as the 2 thing I coloured green.
Topic Starter
1491625364981

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much! ;)
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Easy OK! I almost fixed! Expect spinner.Because I turn it with150(speed) can be 300 .so I think it is fine :)

00:02:819 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
00:03:721 (1) - That Spinner is too short for Easy! (AiMod)
00:05:075 (1) - This circle is too close after this spinner.(AiMod)
00:06:428 (3) - Same as 00:02:819 (1)
00:10:037 (4) - New Combo
00:13:195 (1) - That Spinner is too short for Easy! (AiMod)
00:14:999 (1) - This circle is too close after this spinner (AiMod)
00:16:804 (4) - New Combo
00:18:157 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:29:436 (3,4) - Stacks can be too hard for beginner!
00:30:563 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
00:36:428 (1) - This slider doesn't fit. Map something normal and not 3000 reverse arrows :P
00:40:037 (3) - New Combo
00:42:969 (6) - New Combo
01:00:563 (3) - Add a curve to this slider.
01:01:917 (4,5) - No Stacks in Easy + Maybe change this slider into something else.
01:09:586 (1) - Too short after Spinner (AiMod)
01:11:842 (4) - New Combo
01:17:255 (1) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
01:19:962 (3) - New Combo
01:22:218 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:29:436 (4) - More than 1 reverse arrow is often too hard for Easy.
01:36:654 (5) - New Combo

Normal all fixed.But I understand last one.Maybe it is important,so say twice?

00:03:721 (2) - Delete this circle
00:03:947 (3) - Move this to 00:03:721 .
00:26:954 (1) - Those Sliders don't look that pretty :? Maybe only add 3 points. Begin, Curve in the Middle, End.
00:28:082 (3) - ^
00:56:729 (3) - Move this circle to x:120 , y:48
00:03:721 (2,3) - Same as the 2 thing I coloured green.
^this

good mod and Thank for mod!!
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q ^^

• AudioLeadIn: 1996 better put 2000 on all diffs
• offset 993
• slider tick rate 2 on all diffs

Hard

00:13:173 - add whistle on all slider
00:14:526 - remove whistle
00:24:902 - remove NC and add nc on 00:25:805
00:25:579 - remove whistle
00:31:669(5,6) - stack better
00:32:571 - add note here
00:33:925 -^
00:38:662 - make this slider double
00:44:752 - add note
00:48:812 - ^
00:51:519 - add NC
00:53:774 - add note
01:03:699 - ^
01:06:632(1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421563
01:14:977(6) - lift it http://puu.sh/11HaZ
01:22:196(6) - add whistle on all slider
01:31:218 - add note
01:33:023 - add whistle on all slider and remove NC
01:33:925 - remove NC

Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diffs~

00:02:368(1,3) - overlap
00:39:811 - end spinner here
00:41:390(3) - this slider have many repeats it's not playable~ http://puu.sh/11Hlr better try this, it sounds better and more playable
00:42:518(1,2) - stack better
00:45:225(3,1) - overlap
00:51:541 - this spinner better replace on slider with nc http://puu.sh/11Hpy
00:58:533 - remove this note. not sound here
01:28:533(2,3) - stack better
01:32:593(2,3) - ^

Easy

Slider velocity should be 1.0-1.2 correct it~

00:05:075 -remove this note~ very close to spinner, for beginners it will be difficalt
00:14:999 - ^
00:32:142(5) - NC
00:57:631 - make this slider shorter and put on white tick (end on big white tick) and add note on 00:57:405
01:02:368(5) - NC
01:08:684 - end spinner here, very close to spinner
01:11:842 - remove NC
01:33:045(3) - add whistle on all slider

This is just basic things that you should fix~ need MOREEEEE work but good luck ^^
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^^

• AudioLeadIn: 1996 better put 2000 on all diffs not change
• offset 993 not change
• slider tick rate 2 on all diffs fixed

Hard

00:13:173 - add whistle on all slider fixed
00:14:526 - remove whistle fixed
00:24:902 - remove NC and add nc on 00:25:805 fixed
00:25:579 - remove whistle fixed
00:31:669(5,6) - stack better fixed
00:32:571 - add note here fixed
00:33:925 -^ fixed
00:38:662 - make this slider double fixed
00:44:752 - add note fixed
00:48:812 - ^ not changed
00:51:519 - add NC fixed
00:53:774 - add note mot changed
01:03:699 - ^ ^
01:06:632(1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421563 fixed
01:14:977(6) - lift it http://puu.sh/11HaZ fixed
01:22:196(6) - add whistle on all slider fixed
01:31:218 - add note fixed
01:33:023 - add whistle on all slider and remove NC fixed
01:33:925 - remove NC fixed

Normal

• Distance spacing should be 0.8 on normal diffs~not changed

00:02:368(1,3) - overlap I not got it
00:39:811 - end spinner here mot fixed
00:41:390(3) - this slider have many repeats it's not playable~ http://puu.sh/11Hlr better try this, it sounds better and more playable
00:42:518(1,2) - stack better fixed
00:45:225(3,1) - overlap I mis understand
00:51:541 - this spinner better replace on slider with nc http://puu.sh/11Hpy fixed
00:58:533 - remove this note. not sound here not fixed
01:28:533(2,3) - stack better fixed
01:32:593(2,3) - ^ ^

Easy

Slider velocity should be 1.0-1.2 correct it~ all fixed expect 1 2 6

00:05:075 -remove this note~ very close to spinner, for beginners it will be difficalt
00:14:999 - ^
00:32:142(5) - NC
00:57:631 - make this slider shorter and put on white tick (end on big white tick) and add note on 00:57:405
01:02:368(5) - NC
01:08:684 - end spinner here, very close to spinner
01:11:842 - remove NC
01:33:045(3) - add whistle on all slider

This is just basic things that you should fix~ need MOREEEEE work but good luck ^^
I think that mean I should get more mod or.....remap?(I not hope so. I will do it if remap is necessary. :(

Thank for your mod!!
Flower
Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Easy]
00:03:721 (5) - Slider end add whistle
00:05:075 (1) - Add whistle
00:08:233 (1,2) - ^
00:13:195 (1) - Does not fit the groove. Suggest replace with 2 one-beat long sliders.
00:29:436 (3) - Slider begin add clap
00:32:142 (1) - Add clap
00:33:496 (4) - Remove clap
00:33:947 (1) - Slider begin add clap
00:34:849 (2) - Slider begin add clap, slider end remove clap
00:36:202 (3) - Slider end add clap
00:37:105 (4) - ^
00:38:458 (6) - Slider begin add clap
00:42:969 (1) - Add clap
00:44:323 (3) - Remove clap. Rearrange position, avoid stacking
00:44:774 (4) - Slider begin add clap
01:02:368 (1) - Slider begin add whistle and finish, slider body add whistle
01:04:172 (2) - ^
01:09:586 (1,2) - Add whistle
01:13:195 (1,2) - ^
01:24:022 (1,2) - ^, but remove slider body whistle

[Normal]
Sound suggestion is same to Easy.
However, the diff seems to be a bit messy. Increase SV and avoid overlapping like 00:11:390 (4,5,1,2,3)
Besides, you should choose follow the vocal or the drum. Some notes like 00:28:082 (3) are weird.

[Hard]
00:19:285 (1) - Remove NC. Put a bit farther.
00:19:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Do you think this jump look good?
00:19:962 (4,1,4,1,4,1) - NC is wrong. Select them and press Q.
00:25:939 (6) - Move to 00:25:714
00:47:481 (2,3,4) - DS is no good.
01:06:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jump is weird. Create polygon circles (Ctrl+Shift+D) and select comfortable scale. Then rearrange like a star.
Neverend Story
Hi, 1491625364981.
Mod ths beatmap by your request.

[General]
- Inconsistency in Kiai Times at Normal. Please change to this inherited section.
00:22:664 move to 00:22:669
- Unsnapped inherited sections at all difficulty. Please change to this inherited section.
01:38:454 snap to 01:38:458
- I think combo colour 3 and 4 looks same colour. Remove combo colour 3 or 4.
- Unchecked Letterbox during breaks.

[Easy]
- I think Easy and Normal have same slider velocity is not good. How about change slider velocity at this difficulty?

[Normal]
- Unsnapped inherited sections at this difficulty. Please change to this inherited section.
00:22:664 - snap to 00:22:669
00:51:541 (5) - New Combo
00:52:894 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:29:436 (3) - New Combo
01:38:684 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end

[Hard]
- I think Approach Rate 8 is so fast at this song. Approach Rate - 1.

Good luck :D
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Flower wrote:

Hi~ mod from the queue~

[Easy]
00:03:721 (5) - Slider end add whistle
00:05:075 (1) - Add whistle
00:08:233 (1,2) - ^
00:13:195 (1) - Does not fit the groove. Suggest replace with 2 one-beat long sliders.
00:29:436 (3) - Slider begin add clap
00:32:142 (1) - Add clap
00:33:496 (4) - Remove clap
00:33:947 (1) - Slider begin add clap
00:34:849 (2) - Slider begin add clap, slider end remove clap
00:36:202 (3) - Slider end add clap
00:37:105 (4) - ^
00:38:458 (6) - Slider begin add clap
00:42:969 (1) - Add clap
00:44:323 (3) - Remove clap. Rearrange position, avoid stacking
00:44:774 (4) - Slider begin add clap
01:02:368 (1) - Slider begin add whistle and finish, slider body add whistle
01:04:172 (2) - ^
01:09:586 (1,2) - Add whistle
01:13:195 (1,2) - ^
01:24:022 (1,2) - ^, but remove slider body whistle
almost fixed
[Normal]
Sound suggestion is same to Easy.
However, the diff seems to be a bit messy. Increase SV and avoid overlapping like 00:11:390 (4,5,1,2,3)
Besides, you should choose follow the vocal or the drum. Some notes like 00:28:082 (3) are weird.
no fixed
[Hard]
00:19:285 (1) - Remove NC. Put a bit farther.
00:19:285 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Do you think this jump look good?
00:19:962 (4,1,4,1,4,1) - NC is wrong. Select them and press Q.
00:25:939 (6) - Move to 00:25:714
00:47:481 (2,3,4) - DS is no good.
01:06:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jump is weird. Create polygon circles (Ctrl+Shift+D) and select comfortable scale. Then rearrange like a star.
some fixed
Thanks for mod!!
Topic Starter
1491625364981

Neverend Story wrote:

Hi, 1491625364981.
Mod ths beatmap by your request.

[General] fixed
- Inconsistency in Kiai Times at Normal. Please change to this inherited section.
00:22:664 move to 00:22:669
- Unsnapped inherited sections at all difficulty. Please change to this inherited section.
01:38:454 snap to 01:38:458
- I think combo colour 3 and 4 looks same colour. Remove combo colour 3 or 4.
- Unchecked Letterbox during breaks. I not think so.red and orange is diffence,right?

[Easy] no fixed
- I think Easy and Normal have same slider velocity is not good. How about change slider velocity at this difficulty?

[Normal] some fixed
- Unsnapped inherited sections at this difficulty. Please change to this inherited section.
00:22:664 - snap to 00:22:669
00:51:541 (5) - New Combo
00:52:894 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:29:436 (3) - New Combo
01:38:684 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end

[Hard] I think 8 is fitter than 8
- I think Approach Rate 8 is so fast at this song. Approach Rate - 1.

Good luck :D
Thanks for mod!!
Flask
149教練! Mod due to join the queue

[General]
  1. BG好模糊哦~_~ 要不要換一張?
  2. Kiai Time 不一致哦, Hard的#2 結束點快了4mms, 條到01:38:458 -吧~
  3. 這是OP? 那就在Title後面加上(TV Size)啊 lol, 記得改標題改完要直接上傳 不要退出editor哦
  4. Tags上opening
[Easy]
  1. 為什麼全部都上clap? 照理來說應該要2424的下法才對, 這樣下反而不好聽, 不管是不是故意的
  2. 00:05:526 (2) - Spacing
  3. 00:26:278 - 加一顆note 然候finish
  4. 00:40:714 - finish
  5. 00:45:676 - clap呢._.
  6. 00:49:060 (4) - 在00:49:736 - 結束
  7. 00:46:127 (1,2) - 為啥這個slider (begin) 跟note有clap._.
  8. 00:47:481 (3) - clap
  9. 01:19:962 (1) - Spacing
    感覺hitsound還有slider的形狀要在稍微修一下OAO
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:721 (2) - 太長了啦.. 到00:04:172 - 就停
  2. 00:04:624 - 補顆note上finish
  3. 00:06:202 (4) - Spacing
    因為Spacing滿多出錯的 自己check! (炸
  4. 01:02:368 (2) - 撞hp Bar
    Normal大概還要在修一下 就不給建議了 多看一下Normal地diff吧 o.o
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:759 (1) - 這個用一個slider就可以過去了吧
  2. 00:17:255 (1) - ^
  3. 00:18:608 (1,2) - 做個包
  4. 01:42:067 (1) - 跟前面相同
e 其實還不錯啦對於第一張map, 多看點然後再回來remap一次說不定會比較好o.o
加油~
NicholasSaputra
can you change the picture?
Lanturn
Slightly better BG image if you want it: http://puu.sh/2HhPQ.jpg

Topic Starter
1491625364981

Flask wrote:

149教練! Mod due to join the queue

[General]
  1. BG好模糊哦~_~ 要不要換一張?
  2. Kiai Time 不一致哦, Hard的#2 結束點快了4mms, 條到01:38:458 -吧~
  3. 這是OP? 那就在Title後面加上(TV Size)啊 lol, 記得改標題改完要直接上傳 不要退出editor哦
  4. Tags上opening
[Easy]
  1. 為什麼全部都上clap? 照理來說應該要2424的下法才對, 這樣下反而不好聽, 不管是不是故意的
  2. 00:05:526 (2) - Spacing
  3. 00:26:278 - 加一顆note 然候finish
  4. 00:40:714 - finish
  5. 00:45:676 - clap呢._.
  6. 00:49:060 (4) - 在00:49:736 - 結束
  7. 00:46:127 (1,2) - 為啥這個slider (begin) 跟note有clap._.
  8. 00:47:481 (3) - clap
  9. 01:19:962 (1) - Spacing
    感覺hitsound還有slider的形狀要在稍微修一下OAO
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:721 (2) - 太長了啦.. 到00:04:172 - 就停
  2. 00:04:624 - 補顆note上finish
  3. 00:06:202 (4) - Spacing
    因為Spacing滿多出錯的 自己check! (炸
  4. 01:02:368 (2) - 撞hp Bar
    Normal大概還要在修一下 就不給建議了 多看一下Normal地diff吧 o.o
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:759 (1) - 這個用一個slider就可以過去了吧
  2. 00:17:255 (1) - ^
  3. 00:18:608 (1,2) - 做個包
  4. 01:42:067 (1) - 跟前面相同
e 其實還不錯啦對於第一張map, 多看點然後再回來remap一次說不定會比較好o.o
加油~

DONE!
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