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angela - Peace of Mind (Short Ver.)

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Cygnus
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Cygnus
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 27, 2013 at 11:27:58 AM

Artist: angela
Title: Peace of Mind (Short Ver.)
Source: Soukyuu no Fafner: Right of Left
Tags: Opening Theme Song Fafner in the Azure
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5856kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.63 stars, 169 notes)
  2. Hard (4.75 stars, 347 notes)
  3. Normal (4.07 stars, 286 notes)
Download: angela - Peace of Mind (Short Ver.)
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Hihi! (:
Last edited by Cygnus , edited 16 times in total.
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Ulysses
:) #1

don't quit !!!
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus
let's go guys :) :) :)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~


Hard

  1. hitsound volume too loud imo, 50% in no vocal parts, 65% in vocal parts, 80% kiai are enough
  2. 00:01:734 (1) - I think it's better to longer this one by 1/2 o.o
  3. 00:04:734 (1) - ^
  4. 00:16:359 (1) - whistle
  5. 00:23:390 - add slider here to next note?
  6. 00:24:234 (3) - make this a 2/1 slider and remove next slider?
  7. 00:27:046 - slider._.
  8. 00:30:609 (3,4) - ._. don't overmap this
  9. 00:54:984 (6,7) - here, it may be too much distance for slider (7) and next (1), I think like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400046
  10. 01:39:234 (8,9) - slider? .. like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400052
  11. I think kiai part is mapped better ^^
  12. 02:33:984 (5) - long slider here fits better, imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400055
  13. 02:52:921 (2) - better put NC here, may misread as 1/1
  14. 03:04:171 (3) - remove this www
Normal

  1. bell sounds louder in sliderticks than slider ends? why o.o
  2. 01:01:734 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400062 put here o.o
  3. 01:04:734 (3) - ^
  4. 02:09:609 (3) - move starting point right 1 grid
I think the first part in Hard needs some improvement, others are all good :3

btw who is Angela, there is a Chinese singer with the same name wwwwwwww

good luck :3
Cygnus
1,517 posts
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
fixed all ^^ Thank you Ar3! :D
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus
Okay, done with all diffs. Let's go! ~
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
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Joined April 2010
HeatKai
real source called " Soukyuu no Fafner: Right of Left " got " : " you're missing that
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
[Easy]
This is overkill for Easy!


Otherwise, good Map! Have my star!
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus
lolol. Those weird errors.FIXED! XD
Cancel
956 posts
Joined August 2012
Cancel
Hi. M4M

General

Since (Cut Ver.) is not allowed in a title, you must put the info in the beatmaps description.
Great map.

Lets start!

Easy

00:40:734 (1) - I think at 00:42:234 it sounds better, and then it is easier to get control over the mouse.
00:58:734 (1) - I think that this is too hard for an easy diff. Why not place it here: http://puu.sh/1NcWJ
02:28:546 (3) - That must be removed, because that is something for a normal diff or harder.
02:40:546 (3) - ^

Normal

00:14:421 (4) - Remove that.

Hard

My suggeston: 00:13:734 (4,5) - Remove these, and add spinner.

Good Luck
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
Hello Philippines~
From my queue

[General]
silder moving sound is not match the song.how about this hitsound on 'soft hitsound' part?
http://puu.sh/1Q6KK

[Easy]
CS - 1,just suggestion
i think this diff spacing is long.how about reduce 0.8?

[Normal]
00:43:734 (1) - add whistle at the beginning?
01:54:984 (1) - add finish the end

[Hard]
00:14:671~00:15:984 -Add Break time here?
00:17:671~00:19:359 - ^
00:16:734 (2) - How about make more crooked?
00:49:734 (1) - add clap at the beginning and remove clap the end. i think it fit the rhythm.
01:01:734 (1) - add clap at the beginning.^same reason :)
02:47:484 (2) - how about make like 02:46:734 (1) ?.it`s more clearly

good song :D
good luck~
stevemin_old
103 posts
Joined April 2011
stevemin_old
hello~
(m4m)
i am a newb mapper and modder so feel free to just ignore me~

[Easy]
00:22:359 - maybe add a note
01:31:734 - adding a re-kiai time will be awesome~
01:54:609 (1,2) - this sliders looks better and fits better with the song
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/132/33870734.png/
02:18:234 - nc
generally, the sliders might be too fast for a easy, maybe lower? but real nice symmetry

[Normal]
01:06:046 (4) - reverse selction, looks better
01:30:046 (4) - "
01:50:484 - add a note
01:54:609 - mayb like this?
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/267/82512015.png/
02:08:296 - more up, different spacing

[Hard]
00:05:484 - too far
01:38:859 - nc
01:54:609 (2) - change like this but with a long slider at (4) (can't think of a good slider)
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/823/53721610.png/
02:12:234 (3,4) - maybe a little too far
02:39:234 (4) - nc
02:39:234 (4) - "
this diff is VERY FUN~~ I love the kiai time~ star~~

overall put some hitsounds, i think i didn't see many hitsounds.. especially in the kiai times, put some finishes when the song has a cymbol sound
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

[Ranger] wrote:

Hello Philippines~
From my queue

[General]
silder moving sound is not match the song.how about this hitsound on 'soft hitsound' part? sure thanks XD
http://puu.sh/1Q6KK

[Easy]
CS - 1,just suggestion okay
i think this diff spacing is long.how about reduce 0.8? that's like saying 'Remap the whole diff'. But I think the current one is fine. It will cause a problem in the diff spread if i do this.

[Normal]
00:43:734 (1) - add whistle at the beginning?ok
01:54:984 (1) - add finish the endok

[Hard]
00:14:671~00:15:984 -Add Break time here? ok
00:17:671~00:19:359 - ^ ok
00:16:734 (2) - How about make more crooked? no thanks. I think it's fine.
00:49:734 (1) - add clap at the beginning and remove clap the end. i think it fit the rhythm. no thanks
01:01:734 (1) - add clap at the beginning.^same reason :) same
02:47:484 (2) - how about make like 02:46:734 (1) ?.it`s more clearly i don't see the problem here? :O

good song :D
good luck~ Thank you!!
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

stevemin wrote:

hello~
(m4m)
i am a newb mapper and modder so feel free to just ignore me~

[Easy]
00:22:359 - maybe add a note no thank you
01:31:734 - adding a re-kiai time will be awesome~ i hate rekiais D: sorry
01:54:609 (1,2) - this sliders looks better and fits better with the song no thank you
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/132/33870734.png/
02:18:234 - nc okay
generally, the sliders might be too fast for a easy, maybe lower? but real nice symmetry i think it's fine, thank you ^^

[Normal]
01:06:046 (4) - reverse selction, looks better spacing error
01:30:046 (4) - " " XD
01:50:484 - add a note i'm following the vocals here, so it's a no. :O
01:54:609 - mayb like this? no thank you :O
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/267/82512015.png/
02:08:296 - more up, different spacing where ?.?

[Hard]
00:05:484 - too far fixed
01:38:859 - nc fixed XD
01:54:609 (2) - change like this but with a long slider at (4) (can't think of a good slider) nty :O
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/823/53721610.png/
02:12:234 (3,4) - maybe a little too far it's readable and playable so i'm gonna have to say no :O
02:39:234 (4) - nc fixed
02:39:234 (4) - " same time? XD
this diff is VERY FUN~~ I love the kiai time~ star~~ thanks XD

overall put some hitsounds, i think i didn't see many hitsounds.. especially in the kiai times, put some finishes when the song has a cymbol sound I don't want it to have too many hit sounds >.< sorry :O
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
Hi~ from my Q

[General]
lolwat, nearly 50% of the song is with kiai. Isn't that too much?
Apart from that, everything's fine.

[Easy]
01:00:984 (4) - Just for the aesthetics: move this somewhere else to avoid overlapping with slider borders. This might be considered NAZI lol.
01:06:609 (4) - That overlap with (3) isn't very beautiful. You might want to fix this one.
01:29:484 (1) - I personally very dislike the overlap with previous (5).
02:28:546 (3) - This really might trick players that are new to this game. Maybe consider removing.
02:40:546 (3) - Same about this guy.
02:43:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Lack of creativity? Whatever, acceptable.
02:49:734 (1) - Imperfect blanket.
02:51:234 (2) - ^
03:16:734 (1) - Maybe try arranging this so the slider tick in the middle of the playfield is exactly ON the y-axis?

Nice one!

[Normal]
00:19:734 (1) - IMO this slider doesn't fit to the general rhythm of that song. Maybe you can lengthen it a bit?
00:28:734 (1) - Same about him.
Good actually, but TBH, I liked Easy a bit more. :lol:

[Hard]
00:09:984 (4) - Flow killeerrrr
00:12:234 (2,3,4) - Can you remake this pattern? Maybe round slider?
00:22:734 (1,2) - Was it intention having (1)s end and (2) offbeat?
02:10:734 (1,2) - Offbeat by intention, again?
02:33:046 (3) - Flow killer again. Maybe avoid overlap:
SPOILER
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi~ from my Q

[General]
lolwat, nearly 50% of the song is with kiai. Isn't that too much?
Apart from that, everything's fine.

[Easy]
01:00:984 (4) - Just for the aesthetics: move this somewhere else to avoid overlapping with slider borders. This might be considered NAZI lol.
01:06:609 (4) - That overlap with (3) isn't very beautiful. You might want to fix this one.
01:29:484 (1) - I personally very dislike the overlap with previous (5).
02:28:546 (3) - This really might trick players that are new to this game. Maybe consider removing.
02:40:546 (3) - Same about this guy.
02:43:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Lack of creativity? Whatever, acceptable.
02:49:734 (1) - Imperfect blanket.
02:51:234 (2) - ^
03:16:734 (1) - Maybe try arranging this so the slider tick in the middle of the playfield is exactly ON the y-axis?

Nice one!

[Normal]
00:19:734 (1) - IMO this slider doesn't fit to the general rhythm of that song. Maybe you can lengthen it a bit?
00:28:734 (1) - Same about him.
Good actually, but TBH, I liked Easy a bit more. :lol:

[Hard]
00:09:984 (4) - Flow killeerrrr
00:12:234 (2,3,4) - Can you remake this pattern? Maybe round slider?
00:22:734 (1,2) - Was it intention having (1)s end and (2) offbeat?
02:10:734 (1,2) - Offbeat by intention, again?
02:33:046 (3) - Flow killer again. Maybe avoid overlap:
SPOILER
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2010
lolcubes
Timing is off. Use this timing:

BPM 160 Offset 1728
BPM 158 Offset 66228
BPM 160 Offset 67746
BPM 159 Offset 150246
BPM 160 Offset 151755

This will fix everything pretty much.
Though I have to say I think this would be more like 80 BPM and 79/79.5 BPM alternatives up there, this doesn't really sound like 160 BPM to me. I would recommend using 80 BPM for each 160 bpm value up there, and then 79 for 158 and 79.5 for 159.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun

WARNING, THESE ARE MODS USING OLD TIMING. IF YOU'VE ALREADY APPLIED lolcubes' TIMING THEN EVERYTHING MAY BE OFF.

Nevertheless, shall we begin~?

[General]
* Consider removing the letterboxing since the black boxes are annoying when you have two breaks close to each other, like you have in hard.
* Timing is off, lolcubes will be on that. got it above.
* The volume at the beginning seems way too loud. Bring it down. (00:19:734 - to 00:40:734 -)
* Maybe have the BG related to the source.

[Easy]

• 00:28:734 (3) -This part feels kind of abrupt, this would be a lot more interesting and fun if you added a repeat on this slider.
• 00:43:734 (1) - A finish would work well with the music here.
• 00:56:109 (2,6) - The way this overlaps with (4) is ugly. Move them outwards more.
• 01:06:609 (4,5) - This part has a bad flow and an awful overlap. Try out something like this, don't forget to fix the spacing.
• 01:28:359 (5) - Whistle or finish here, it should not go un-stressed.
• 01:52:734 (4) - Slider speed change in an easy difficulty is never ideal!
• 02:16:359 (4) - Shuffle this note so that it aligns with (2) to make for a cleaner pattern.

[Normal]

• 00:27:234 (1) - Remove the new combo. It's unnecessary and doesn't match the music nor you previous combos.
• 00:56:484 (3,4) - This kind of stops in an abrupt manner. Something like this would match the music better.
• 01:49:734 (1) - This slider ends too early. End it at 01:50:484 - to match the vocals.
• 01:37:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add finishes in this section like you did in Easy. The music calls for it.
• 03:16:359 (5) - Finish at the end of this slider to match the music.
• 03:18:984 (1) - A sped of 0.55 is way too slow and player are going to over jump it. 0.75 works perfectly.

[Hard]

• 01:29:109 (3,4,5,6,7) - This here does not match the music very well and it will screw some players up because of that very reason. Try something along the lines of this.
• 02:17:296 (3) - Whistle at the end of this.
• 03:16:734 (1) - Finish at the start of this slider to match the music.

[Overall]
You have some interesting concepts here, and the spread is nice. But your execution is sloppy. Polish the work with the aid of more modders. This map isn't ready yet.
Good luck.
Cygnus
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
Fixed most. And thanks for the timing check. Pretty much appreciated that a lot <3 XD
Kiddo-Kun
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Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
Which didn't you change, and why?
Cygnus
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Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus
I'm very sorry, I wasn't able to make feedbacks for your mod. I am trying to gather a few more mods since you think it's not yet ready. D:
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
hi :)
[Hard]
HP Drain-1 cause this map is really slow, so if missed is hard to get HP back
00:06:288 stop use blanket here, there are enough blanket in there and 00:06:603 and 00:07:353 need the slider ticks sound, so my tips is make this part like this http://puu.sh/2Gkvp.jpg
00:07:728 this should be circle and the next is 00:08:478 also, old maps always use circle to confirm the exact feelings of strong parts also please make these two notes close like http://puu.sh/2GkNj.jpg
00:10:728 this slider is much better like that http://puu.sh/2GkTF.jpg
00:23:196 wrong end time and 00:23:384 wrong start time the correct should be http://puu.sh/2Gl6A.jpg
00:27:603 this is better http://puu.sh/2GlpG.jpg
00:30:603-00:31:728 40%
00:32:478 http://puu.sh/2GlD8.jpg try?
00:38:290-00:42:987 40%
00:57:228 make it far
02:44:130 x:208 y:152

[Normal]
00:07:728 slider curve should fix
00:16:353 this kick slider is too fast in normal
00:23:478 slider curve should fix
01:25:746 blanket should fix

[Easy]
nothing to say
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