Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from PM Request
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[General]
全部的音量建议再减低10% （0.0...因为还是感觉响）我也觉得有点想不过怕自己耳机的关系...还是降低一下好了
finish的sound effect..建议剪掉后面的 只取第一个音这个我都没发现~，我去搞一搞试了一下感觉还是现在这样好，不过有可能是我音效剪裁的不好OTL。

combo colour各diff颜色不一样呢0.0 是不是要调成一样的呢？这个倒是故意的lol。和原作有关的颜色梗
- [Eve] :
Combo1 : 255,255,0 (2)
Combo2 : 255,0,0
Combo3 : 128,128,192 (1)

- [Garry] :
Combo1 : 128,128,192 (1)
Combo2 : 255,0,0

- [Mary] :
Combo1 : 255,255,0 (2)
Combo2 : 255,0,0


[Mary]
00:11:316 - 降低音量 k


[Eve]
00:08:370 (1) - 这样放的slider真的大丈夫？应该没关系吧头尾清晰可见嗯
00:51:654 (2) - ^
01:18:964 (1) - ^
00:19:352 (5,6) - 建议删了之后把前面的slider延长一倍 k
01:47:485 (1) - spacing 大丈夫？确实是故意梗嘛再看看~
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Wonderful Mapset
:3 很和谐的音乐 (?)
没mod出什么东西
一些小建议w

1. 很好
   可以後慮OD-1 因為慢歌都不容易掌握節奏，容易打錯對於新手來說
2. 看一看發現Garry是Normal，那麼這個難度應該是Easy，這樣的話現在的數值稍高了

1. 02:24:202 (2) - reverse+1?

1. 00:11:584 (4) - 會誤導的錯誤距離；因為都重疊得很亂，很難靠那個收縮的圈圈辨認時間
2. 00:32:668 (4) - 第3點搬到 X160 Y104 ，重疊得比較好看
3. 02:18:053 (7) - 根據您的規則因該要NC

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from Game-pm

[Mary]

1. 很好
   可以後慮OD-1 因為慢歌都不容易掌握節奏，容易打錯對於新手來說
2. 看一看發現Garry是Normal，那麼這個難度應該是Easy，這樣的話現在的數值稍高了 OD-1

[Garry]

[rhythm]

1. 02:24:202 (2) - reverse+1? 因为SB的关系所以dameT_T

[Ib]

[Layout]

1. 00:11:584 (4) - 會誤導的錯誤距離；因為都重疊得很亂，很難靠那個收縮的圈圈辨認時間 应该问题不大吧这都Hard了ovo
2. 00:32:668 (4) - 第3點搬到 X160 Y104 ，重疊得比較好看 感觉好像不大顺的样子ovo
3. 02:18:053 (7) - 根據您的規則因該要NC 我就说怎么这个那么长lol

很好的圖~ GoodLuck

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,...

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
各难度用一样的combo color? combo color是跟着难度名的o3o特意梗

[SB]
由于SB load长时间保在4x左右，可以隐去BG优化一下：

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,...

结尾做个淡出吧. 直接加就可以了么？我SB新手真心不懂啊TUT其实SB Load高应该是图片大的关系？

[Mary]
挺好。。

[Garry]
AR-1? 谱面不难AR高一点应该不要紧
00:04:352 - 这里建议空拍，这样节奏比较一致 好像没太大必要嗯

[Ib]
00:57:600 (1) - 这里不可读，00:56:519 (2,3) 的300几乎完全遮住了00:57:600 (1)，导致其滑条在玩家看来出现较晚，会将00:57:600 (1)误判为是一个圈，然后紧跟着滑条。 http://puu.sh/ELhN 需要把00:56:519 (2)转个角度 有stack啊...我还特意为了stack调整了这里的位置OTL实在不行我自己做一套300（揍
01:47:485 (1) - 距离坑人啊确实坑了...嘛想了想还是改掉吧。

That's all I can find. GL~

Megurine Luka wrote:

popner wrote:

[SB]
由于SB load长时间保在4x左右，可以隐去BG优化一下：

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,...

结尾做个淡出吧. 直接加就可以了么？我SB新手真心不懂啊TUT其实SB Load高应该是图片大的关系？
Thanks!

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background) ————————背景层 (BG是默认在背景层的)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240 ————————对BG这个元件做动作
 F,0,...————————改变Fade值(透明度)

_F,变化类型,初始时间,结束时间,初始透明度,结束透明度

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background) 
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240 
 F,0,200,400,1,0

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg"320,240

1. 00:02:477 (3) - Maybe place this more upper (~x:293 y:58)? imo your next (1) is better encircled like this (:
2. 00:13:727 (1,2,3) - Also this, would be much better imo if you can place (3) slightly higher to (1,2,3)'s angle isn't very narrow xD
3. 00:24:977 (1) - Add note here (with finish) and start spinner 1/4 after? Feels quite weird having the finishes discontinued here ._.
4. 00:32:127 (2,1) - (optional) I personally quite disliked how the red (1) and (2) almost overlaps... imo you can move (2) higher and arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:39:166 (3,4) - For this, I suggest to put (4) slightly more to the left compared to (3), to tell players that (1,2,3,4) is an arc~
6. 00:52:735 (2) - (optional) Hmm, imo you can create something like this here for a better encircle effect:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:59:222 (3) - Also an optional thing here, I'd rather rotate this by 35° (selection centre) to let it flow better together with (1) :3
8. 01:03:006 (2,3,1,2,3) - Uhm... Personally I prefer something moving before the spinner instead of stacking (2,3)... Maybe try this?
   

   179,266,63006,1,0
   231,351,63546,1,0
   322,323,64076,6,0,B|375:309|419:341,1,100,4|0
   478,260,65187,1,0
   437,168,65742,1,4

9. 01:23:873 (3) - Put in ~x:261 y:71 instead and make it encircle your (2)'s start? xD
10. 01:28:237 (4,1) - Just a minor stuff here, put these two more to the bottom-left to emphasize the previous arc? Won't hurt to imply, I guess (:
11. 01:32:055 (x) - Same as before, add circle with finish (because the music continues here) and start spinner 1/4 after? You can also extend (4) as a slider, I think (:
12. 01:32:055 (1) - Finish or whistle really fits here >_<
13. 01:51:810 (1,2) - (optional) Create a continuous flow here maybe? Like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:56:675 (2) - Hmm, for better flow I'd rather curve this to the upper-left instead, and:
15. 01:58:357 (3) - Place this slightly higher than (2)'s start (:
16. 02:14:780 (3) - Uhm, encircle (2) better? Compared to your other blankets, this one is very obviously untidy because the repeat is too close to (2) >_<
17. 02:23:037 (1) - Hmm, before the spinner, (again) I prefer something continuous here:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:24:784 (1) - Same as before, add note here and start spinner 1/4 after? Also it's highly recommended to use a lower volume on the spinner as the music isn't strong at all ._.

1. 00:04:352 (2,3) - Uhm, is this rhythm intentional? Due to how the piano sounded, I prefer to put the 1/2 slider first... I can't suggest a better placement though >_<
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:655 (3) - Hum, no whistle on slider's end here? It fits the high-pitched piano imo (:
3. 00:15:334 (3) - I think it won't hurt if you curve this slightly to the left so it will somewhat encircle (2), it flows good with (4) as well though~
4. 00:21:227 (3,4) - (optional) About this, imo it's better to rotate (3) about 25° selection centre and adjust (4) so (3) will continue the angle from (1,2)... Not a must, though >_<
5. 00:24:977 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 after and add a circle here? Also, whistle fits a lot for spinner's end here~
6. 00:39:166 (3) - (optional) Perhaps put the endpoint in ~x:405 y:103, to let it flow together with (4)? (you can curve this slightly as well)
7. 00:42:714 (3) - I'd rather stack this above (4) instead, considering this is a Normal diff it would be much easier to read if placed so (:
8. 00:50:033 (5) - Just stating here - you can put the endpoint more to the right, as it won't be offscreen in play mode~
9. 00:52:735 (3) - Minor stuff, but... Move to ~x:197 y:283 to create a better triangle on (3,4,5)? xD
10. 01:01:925 (3,4) - (optional) Considering (3) is a straight slider... Maybe try this? :3
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:159 (6,1) - I think it's best to put these two slightly lower than (5)'s end because of (5)'s curve >_<
12. 01:19:782 (5,6,1,2,3) - Hmm, the angle on (4,5,6) is quite forced imo... Maybe try this formation? xD
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:51:269 (1) - (optional) Perhaps add a slight curve downward here? It can somewhat give an encircle effect on (4)'s end here~
14. 01:59:478 (2) - Perfect place for whistle imo (:
15. 02:18:053 (2) - Hmm, I suggest a 1/1 slider here instead - because your previous rhythm isn't hectic, suddenly go hectic with 1/2 repeating slider isn't good imo - better to use 1/1 first to let players adapt with the rhythm~
16. 02:24:784 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 after and add a note here? (you can just add a repeat on (2) though :3) - Also same as Mary about the volume >_<

1. 00:05:691 (4,5) - How about adding a slight curve (downward for (4) and leftward for (5)) here, to let it flow together with (3)? Won't hurt, I guess xD
2. 00:13:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (optional) Here also, it would be a lot cuter imo if (1,3,5) and (2,4,6) are both an arc~
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:566 (5,1) - Rather than stack I prefer another jump here to give more power to your next jump, perhaps stack (1) to (3)'s start and put (5) in ~x:413 y:287?
4. 00:34:022 (6) - CTRL+R? Better rotating like this imo (: (or you can CTRL+R (5) as well :3)
5. 00:43:805 (4) - (optional) Stack to (3) instead? The pattern will be more sophisticated this way imo~
6. 00:46:789 (5) - I'd rather put this to the far right (~x:477 y:258) here, but of course it's not a must (:
7. 00:55:168 (4,5,6) - Hmm, I'd rather put (4) in the left, (5) in the top, and (6) in the bottom of this triangle instead, because imo it would fit the song more if (6,1) is a jump >_<
8. 00:58:141 (2,3,4,5) - Uhm, to be honest I don't really get the pattern here... Perhaps try this? (yes, with this diamond (4) will be stacked to your yellow (6)~)
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:07:974 (2,3) - Just a minor stuff here, to emphasize the accelerated spacing I'd rather put these two more to the right ((2) in ~x:256 y:181, (3) in x:158 y:143)
10. 01:23:601 (5,6,7) - (optional) Uhm, I prefer an arc here ((2,4,5) is set into a triangle : )
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:30:419 (4,5,6) - Hmm, I prefer CTRL+R-ing these three one by one, as the flow created will be more unique imo (:
12. 01:33:189 (3) - Would be really nice if you add a curve here to fit the music, for example put a waypoint on ~x:270 y:190 and put the endpoint in x:226 y:172 xD
13. 01:38:296 (6) - (optional) Unstack and put this in ~x:309 y:74 to keep it flowing?
14. 01:40:458 (6,7,8) - Hmm, I personally feel it's better to put the triangle here on a sparser distance to help players sightread:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:53:431 (6) - CTRL+R this? I personally feel better this way >_<
16. 02:01:690 (5,6,7) - On pattern like this, it would be better if you put these three more to the upper-right to emphasize the arc - I'd put (5) in ~x:292 y:189 and adjust the two circles (:
17. 02:23:619 (3) - Just a minor stuff here, I'd rotate this ~18° selection centre to create a more continuous arc xD
18. 02:24:784 (1) - Same as Mary about the volume suggestion >_<

Niva wrote:

Alright, I think it's time for a full-mod~ o3o

[General]

-> I'd rather use "kouri" as the artist's name as "Ib Original" is not a valid artist name imo... (not sure yet though >_<) I'm not sure if it is kouri who wrote this piece of music, but I find here : http://vgboy.dabomstew.com/other/ib.htm In the music list, the source is written as Original so that's why :3
-> Set the preview time 1/4 earlier for more accurate preview time (on your case, 01:08:977) Fixed
-> As your first note starts in 00:00:870, I don't think you need lead-in time 1500, 1000 is enough imo (: fixed

[Mary]

1. 00:02:477 (3) - Maybe place this more upper (~x:293 y:58)? imo your next (1) is better encircled like this (: Fixed
2. 00:13:727 (1,2,3) - Also this, would be much better imo if you can place (3) slightly higher to (1,2,3)'s angle isn't very narrow xD Fixed
3. 00:24:977 (1) - Add note here (with finish) and start spinner 1/4 after? Feels quite weird having the finishes discontinued here ._. Fixed
4. 00:32:127 (2,1) - (optional) I personally quite disliked how the red (1) and (2) almost overlaps... imo you can move (2) higher and arrange like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed
5. 00:39:166 (3,4) - For this, I suggest to put (4) slightly more to the left compared to (3), to tell players that (1,2,3,4) is an arc~ Fixed
6. 00:52:735 (2) - (optional) Hmm, imo you can create something like this here for a better encircle effect:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed, also shorten the slider o3o
7. 00:59:222 (3) - Also an optional thing here, I'd rather rotate this by 35° (selection centre) to let it flow better together with (1) :3 Fixed
8. 01:03:006 (2,3,1,2,3) - Uhm... Personally I prefer something moving before the spinner instead of stacking (2,3)... Maybe try this?
   

   179,266,63006,1,0
   231,351,63546,1,0
   322,323,64076,6,0,B|375:309|419:341,1,100,4|0
   478,260,65187,1,0
   437,168,65742,1,4

   I changed the circle into a slider
9. 01:23:873 (3) - Put in ~x:261 y:71 instead and make it encircle your (2)'s start? xD Fixed
10. 01:28:237 (4,1) - Just a minor stuff here, put these two more to the bottom-left to emphasize the previous arc? Won't hurt to imply, I guess (: hmm, I might keep this :3
11. 01:32:055 (x) - Same as before, add circle with finish (because the music continues here) and start spinner 1/4 after? You can also extend (4) as a slider, I think (: Fixed
12. 01:32:055 (1) - Finish or whistle really fits here >_< added
13. 01:51:810 (1,2) - (optional) Create a continuous flow here maybe? Like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Fixed, also changed the style of the following
14. 01:56:675 (2) - Hmm, for better flow I'd rather curve this to the upper-left instead, and: ^
15. 01:58:357 (3) - Place this slightly higher than (2)'s start (: ^
16. 02:14:780 (3) - Uhm, encircle (2) better? Compared to your other blankets, this one is very obviously untidy because the repeat is too close to (2) >_< Ooops, how does this happened lol
17. 02:23:037 (1) - Hmm, before the spinner, (again) I prefer something continuous here:
    
    SPOILER

    Fixed
18. 02:24:784 (1) - Same as before, add note here and start spinner 1/4 after? Also it's highly recommended to use a lower volume on the spinner as the music isn't strong at all ._. Fixed. Actually someone mentioned this one before, but I was considering the Storyboard lol.

[Garry]

1. 00:04:352 (2,3) - Uhm, is this rhythm intentional? Due to how the piano sounded, I prefer to put the 1/2 slider first... I can't suggest a better placement though >_< ><yes it's intentional, I might keep this :3
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:12:655 (3) - Hum, no whistle on slider's end here? It fits the high-pitched piano imo (: added
3. 00:15:334 (3) - I think it won't hurt if you curve this slightly to the left so it will somewhat encircle (2), it flows good with (4) as well though~Fixed
4. 00:21:227 (3,4) - (optional) About this, imo it's better to rotate (3) about 25° selection centre and adjust (4) so (3) will continue the angle from (1,2)... Not a must, though >_< Fixed
5. 00:24:977 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 after and add a circle here? Also, whistle fits a lot for spinner's end here~ Fixed
6. 00:39:166 (3) - (optional) Perhaps put the endpoint in ~x:405 y:103, to let it flow together with (4)? (you can curve this slightly as well) Fixed
7. 00:42:714 (3) - I'd rather stack this above (4) instead, considering this is a Normal diff it would be much easier to read if placed so (: Fixed
8. 00:50:033 (5) - Just stating here - you can put the endpoint more to the right, as it won't be offscreen in play mode~
9. 00:52:735 (3) - Minor stuff, but... Move to ~x:197 y:283 to create a better triangle on (3,4,5)? xD I might keep this :3
10. 01:01:925 (3,4) - (optional) Considering (3) is a straight slider... Maybe try this? :3 Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:159 (6,1) - I think it's best to put these two slightly lower than (5)'s end because of (5)'s curve >_< Fixed
12. 01:19:782 (5,6,1,2,3) - Hmm, the angle on (4,5,6) is quite forced imo... Maybe try this formation? xD Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:51:269 (1) - (optional) Perhaps add a slight curve downward here? It can somewhat give an encircle effect on (4)'s end here~ I make it upward :3
14. 01:59:478 (2) - Perfect place for whistle imo (: added
15. 02:18:053 (2) - Hmm, I suggest a 1/1 slider here instead - because your previous rhythm isn't hectic, suddenly go hectic with 1/2 repeating slider isn't good imo - better to use 1/1 first to let players adapt with the rhythm~ Fixed
16. 02:24:784 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 after and add a note here? (you can just add a repeat on (2) though :3) - Also same as Mary about the volume >_< Fixed

[Ib]

1. 00:05:691 (4,5) - How about adding a slight curve (downward for (4) and leftward for (5)) here, to let it flow together with (3)? Won't hurt, I guess xD added
2. 00:13:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (optional) Here also, it would be a lot cuter imo if (1,3,5) and (2,4,6) are both an arc~ I like the current one ><
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:566 (5,1) - Rather than stack I prefer another jump here to give more power to your next jump, perhaps stack (1) to (3)'s start and put (5) in ~x:413 y:287? OK
4. 00:34:022 (6) - CTRL+R? Better rotating like this imo (: (or you can CTRL+R (5) as well :3) Fixed the 6
5. 00:43:805 (4) - (optional) Stack to (3) instead? The pattern will be more sophisticated this way imo~ Yep, and fit the feeling of the song
6. 00:46:789 (5) - I'd rather put this to the far right (~x:477 y:258) here, but of course it's not a must (: Fixed
7. 00:55:168 (4,5,6) - Hmm, I'd rather put (4) in the left, (5) in the top, and (6) in the bottom of this triangle instead, because imo it would fit the song more if (6,1) is a jump >_< yep
8. 00:58:141 (2,3,4,5) - Uhm, to be honest I don't really get the pattern here... Perhaps try this? (yes, with this diamond (4) will be stacked to your yellow (6)~) Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:07:974 (2,3) - Just a minor stuff here, to emphasize the accelerated spacing I'd rather put these two more to the right ((2) in ~x:256 y:181, (3) in x:158 y:143) fixed
10. 01:23:601 (5,6,7) - (optional) Uhm, I prefer an arc here ((2,4,5) is set into a triangle : ) fixed.
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:30:419 (4,5,6) - Hmm, I prefer CTRL+R-ing these three one by one, as the flow created will be more unique imo (: Nope cuz I need to turn in flow for 3&4
12. 01:33:189 (3) - Would be really nice if you add a curve here to fit the music, for example put a waypoint on ~x:270 y:190 and put the endpoint in x:226 y:172 xD I think staight is fine :3
13. 01:38:296 (6) - (optional) Unstack and put this in ~x:309 y:74 to keep it flowing? Fixed
14. 01:40:458 (6,7,8) - Hmm, I personally feel it's better to put the triangle here on a sparser distance to help players sightread: OK
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:53:431 (6) - CTRL+R this? I personally feel better this way >_< Fixed
16. 02:01:690 (5,6,7) - On pattern like this, it would be better if you put these three more to the upper-right to emphasize the arc - I'd put (5) in ~x:292 y:189 and adjust the two circles (: Fixed
17. 02:23:619 (3) - Just a minor stuff here, I'd rotate this ~18° selection centre to create a more continuous arc xD
18. 02:24:784 (1) - Same as Mary about the volume suggestion >_< Fixed

I hope this helps... Sorry if my suggestions aren't much helping here, it's hard to mod this map, really >_<
I think that's it for now, really have to overview the artist's name atm...

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Megurine Luka ~

Random check map ~

2 osb file in osz,remove 'kouri - Memory (Megurine Luka).osb' and full submit please.

Also normal and easy diff AR-1 much better with play.

That's all ~ other stuff looks fine ~ good job ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~