Ryu wrote:

I LOVE YOU, map.. ok i like you too but I LOVE YOU moar <3 /o/

Ryu wrote:

I LOVE YOU, map.. ok i like you too but I LOVE YOU moar <3 /o/

Rain wrote:

добавь в таги "collab, collaboration"
в источник напиши название альбома
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OmAr97 wrote:

[Kersi's Normal]
1) 00:51:269-00:52:732 сдвинь сюда спин ok
2) 00:54:196 убрать слайд) ok
3) 01:42:514 передвинь круг на координаты (256;104) nope
4) 02:47:392 новое комбо ok
5) 02:48:342 переместить круги 1,2,3 при координатах 1го (424;264) nope
6) 02:49:318 новое комбо (если нету) ok

[Collab Hard]
1) сделай сториборду, непонятно кто какую часть делает)
2) вставь круги с координатами:
00:52:976 (124;100)
00:53:220 (256;100)
00:53:464 (388;100)
00:53:708 (388;232)
00:53:952 (256;232)
00:54:196 (124;232)
3) сделай триплет 00:54:440-00:54:684 коры (388;332) новое комбо
4) 01:10:049 круг (172;96)
5) 01:49:074 так же (128;168)
6) 01:57:123 так же (256;132)
7) 02:18:586-02:19:562 сделай типо звезду из 5 кругов
8) 02:19:806-02:20:537 стрииииим)) в центре
9) 02:44:928 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353479- единственное, что не стал исправлять

Mukku wrote:

[Insane]
00:08:586 (6) - This is not symmetrical, move this 1 grid down.
00:11:757 (2) - This is not directly under the slider's end. Remove and replace it. You can do that by placing it like this, between the slider end and the next note so that it automatically moves DIRECTLY under the slider. Then just move the note back where it was supposed to be.
00:22:489 (1,2,3,4) - These could be wider jumps imo. More fun. Like this. But idk, it might be too much.
00:28:342 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move (7) 3 grid up and then move (3,4,5,6) by 3 grid to the right
00:30:293 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move (7) 3 grid up and then move (3,4,5,6) by 3 grid to the left
02:32:732 (1) - Why is this slider not under the 2 circles fix please
02:41:513 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same as 00:11:757 (2)
02:58:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move all of these down by 6 grids. Then move (3) and (4) 1 grid to the left
02:59:806 (4,5) - If you did ^ that, then move these up to make it symmetrical. If they do not fit you'll have to bend the sliders.



it's pretty cool : D

EvilElvis wrote:

Привет.
Insane :
00:13:952 (4) - делит
00:44:684 (1) - свисток не к чему
00:58:830 (6) - Делит или заглушить(Лучше без них, ибо ноты стоящие на 1/1 попадают на конец строчки в песне , а ниже перечисленные ноты
в свою очередь под вокал не попадают , впрочем это всего лишь мое мнение , возможно я просто придираюсь )
00:59:806 (3) - ^
01:00:781 (3) - ^
01:37:854 (6) - ^
01:38:830 (3) - ^
01:39:806 (3) - ^
01:45:659 (9) - ^
01:46:635 (4) - ^
Collab :
00:11:757 (1) -
00:25:903 (1) -
00:40:537 (6) - клэп не нужен
00:47:367 (3) - ^
Вроде все , удачи с картой.
P.S. Может я не вижу , но почему не написали кто какую часть в коллабе делал?

SPOILER

You must fix it

SPOILER

You must fix it

480,128,33708,2,0,B|428:164|384:136|384:136|332:176|288:160,1,200,8|0

156,280,36147,2,0,B|152:336|80:348,2,100
64,244,36878,1,0
64,139,37122,1,0
156,104,37366,2,0,B|152:48|80:36,2,100

SPOILER

You must fix it

Chewin wrote:

Kersi asked me via game to mod it and.. here we go o.o Hi~~
Issues with red must be fixed. yeah, sorry = =

[Kersi's Normal]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:

SPOILER

You must fix it

Oh god kersi.. this is a Normal eh.. and this is the easiest diff of the mapset.
So AR-3 OD -3/4
00:11:269 (3) - Add new combo?
00:26:878 (2) - Overlap with 00:25:415 (3) plz
00:43:464 (4) - New combo for consistency
00:58:586 (3) - New combo even for consistency with 01:45:415 (1)
01:05:903 (5) - If you follow above, use NC here too
01:37:610 (4) - ^
02:39:317 (4) - Distance snap
02:44:927 (2) - Ehm.. This is a Normal. Use distance snap here too
02:48:342 (1) - You should to move this further from 02:48:342 (1). It's confusing for beginner players. You can anyways use Distance snap here
02:50:293 (1) - ^
02:51:025 (4) - New combo
03:03:464 (5) - ^
Kersi you can improve it ;3 This just needs more work sorry D:
Fixed all ;3
That's all omg.. good luck >w< Nyaah thanksthanksthanks<333

Типа того

216,200,14195,6,0,B|152:288,1,100
332,280,14683,2,0,B|300:320|244:336|188:320|156:280,1,200,2|0

SniperSAR wrote:

[Normal]
Если разрешают правила(я не знаю),то я лично бы поставил спиннер не на 00:35:659,а на 00:35:171.
Не понял смысл этих секций 01:25:903 и 01:26:147.
В конце последнего спиннера уменьши громкость 03:11:269

[Hard]
01:34:195 слайдер думаю высоковато расположен.
мерещится кривой спейсинг 01:45:659 и 01:45:903.(когда я тебя спрашивал,в под какой snap div ты мапал)
выпрями слайдер-несимметрично 02:30:292.левая сторона завышена.
02:35:171 на один квадратик приподними левую сторону слайдера.
02:48:342 тоже самое,но наоборот вниз.

[Insane]
00:14:683 расположи оба слайдера более удобно для игры.

Типа того

216,200,14195,6,0,B|152:288,1,100
332,280,14683,2,0,B|300:320|244:336|188:320|156:280,1,200,2|0

кодом в модах пользуюсь впервые,может что и накосячил
может ты так и задумывал,но что-то уж слишком резко падает громкость 01:45:781.
01:49:439 .25% громкости? можно и чуть больше~
а тут 02:36:025 .65% бы.
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Удачи в дальнейшем!~

Raimon wrote:

Hi, i love nazi mods Hi~~

[Kersi's Normal]
General:
It looks and plays like an easy... if you want to look more like a normal add more notes following the voice... It looks like an easy because you skip a lot of the triplets the artist sings, or you use a repeat slider.

Maybe reduce slider tick by 1?

approach rate 4-5



Specific:

00:08:098 add circle

00:09:317 add NC

00:09:805 delete NC

00:11:269 (1,2,3) instead of using three long sliders use: one repeat slider/triplet/one repeat slider OR three repeat sliders

00:15:171 (2) Long 2tick slider instead of repeat slider

00:34:195 (2,3,1) Use non repeat slider, delete (3) and make the spinner start at 00:35:171 and finish at 00:38:098 or at 00:38:586 (i like more the second choice)

00:39:073 add circle

00:50:781 (4,1) delete (4) and make the spinner start there

01:05:903 (1,2,3) you should follow the voice and do like on the second advice i gave you.

01:20:537 add NC

01:26:025 this timing point does nothing, delete it

01:29:805 (2,1) delete the note and make the spin start there

01:32:244 (1) instead of this long slider you can put a note where the actual slider starts, move the slider at 01:32:732 and make it finish at 01:33:220 or
01:33:464 or 01:33:708

from 01:37:366 to 01:39:317 it doesnt follow the music, delete that section and notes at: 01:37:366 01:37:610 01:39:073 01:39:317 and a repeat slider at: 01:38:098

01:42:244 add a note

02:04:927 (3) add NC

02:05:659 (4) delete slider and add notes at: 02:05:659 02:05:903 02:06:391 nd here too 02:07:122

02:06:878 add NC

02:07:366 delete NC

02:09:317 add NC

02:30:293 (1) delete NC

02:31:756 add NC

02:39:317 delete note

02:47:366 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) OMG :O this is following the music! BUT 02:51:025 (1) is too separated from the (3), use distance snap

02:51:025 delete NC

02:51:756 add NC

02:52:244 (1) delete NC

02:59:073 (1) delete NC

03:00:049 add NC

03:05:415 delete NC

03:10:781 maybe the spinner should finish here, it sounds better

Megaluffy wrote:

[Kersi's Normal]
00:53:220 - на слайдер можно добавить еще стрелку

[Collab Hard]
00:07:732 - помоему эта нота здесь лишняя
00:54:927 - переставить ноту на 256,164
00:55:171 - ^ 192,164
00:56:391 - ^ 256,164
00:56:634 - ^ 324, 164
02:53:586 - опять же нота кажется лишней

1. I think you need to add a Easy diff because Normal is too hard for a Normal , Beginner can't pass this kind of diff spread
2. Change the background to jpg!!! png is too large!!!
3. Different Kiai Time on each difficulties , You should make it the same
4. I think you need to add SB on Collab Hard difficulty to make player know which part is done by -Bakari- , which part is done by you
5. Different Red Timing Section , You must make them the same

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Change spacing on easiest isn't good , it just make beginner hate this map , and will get a low rate from them , try to make the spacing the same , and use distance spacing 1.0 may be better
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:09:317 (3,1) - Swap New Combo , to follow the lyrics excellent!!~
   2. 00:25:903 (1,2) - Make sure the spacing the same
   3. 00:43:464 (1) - Reduce one repeat and add two notes : 00:44:927 - and 00:45:415 - sounds better IMO
   4. 00:51:269 (1) - Make spinner start 00:51:025 - follow vocal more
   5. 01:01:756 (4) - Delete this note may be better I think , because this difficulty always use 1/1 beat divisor to map , this note is on 1/2 , it is a best way if you delete this note
   6. 01:05:171 (3) - Same as above! but you can ignore this because this note is follow the vocal xD
   7. 01:07:854 (3) - Change to a 1/2 slider and add a repeat , this long slider isn't fit the song i think >_<
   8. 01:25:415 (3) - Add a New Combo here , sense this pattern is a bit long
   9. This difficulty needs more work and mod , but this is a good beginner
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:17:366 (1) - This slider's hitsounds isn't follow music well , try to use these hitsounds , add clap on first repeat and remove clap on second repeat ( clap - clap - none - finish )

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 03:05:903 (1,3) - Slider 1's end hit300.png cover slider 3's head , Is it unrankable?
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. The setting is too hard for a hard diff I think
   2. 00:39:073 (1,8) - Stack them , to make it symmetrical
   3. 01:33:708 (1,2,3) - Why change spacing here? on purpose? The change just make them become bad
   4. 01:46:634 (5,1,2,3,4) - Spacing issue , there is nothing you must to reduce spacing here
   5. 02:14:195 (5,6,7) - I think most of OSU players will think this is a short stream
   6. 02:15:659 (2,3,4) - Same as above
   7. 02:18:586 (1,2) - Make them symmetrical ?
   8. 02:19:317 (4,5) - Same as above
   9. 02:58:830 (4,5) - New Combo because Spacing become huge
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:22:488 (5) - Maybe add finish start?
   2. 00:34:683 (4) - Clap start sounds better to me
   3. 00:54:683 (11) - Finish here , to follow the music well
   4. 02:53:586 (7) - Clap here to follow the drum?

1. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. This difficulty has too many huge jump although it is Insane.
   2. Because Spacing is too random , I can't mod this diff QAQ Sorry
   　
2. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:23:220 (4) - Finish here isn't follow the music at all , remove it!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Change Lead-In 1.5 to 3 on Taiko difficulty , It is too short now
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:27:489 (1) - Delete this note sounds better :3
   2. 02:51:635 (1) - Same as above!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:23:464 (1) - The same cymbal like 00:31:269 (2) - , so D here may be better than K
   2. 00:24:196 (4) - d to follow the vocal?
   3. 00:28:098 (3) - Same as above
   4. 00:35:171 (2) - K to fits the music more while Gameplay
   5. 00:39:806 (3) - d , same reason
   6. 00:43:708 (3) - Same as above
   7. 00:45:415 (2,3) - kk because vocal become high here