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Ootani Ikue - Watashi wa Ojamajo Hanachan !!

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digiaria
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
_nara_
Lol! nc map xD

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-1 Circle Size pls? (to large)
dont forget add TV Size

00:59:909 (3) grid 1 top, grid 1 left

01:00:109 (4) grid 1 right
Topic Starter
digiaria

_nara_ wrote:

Lol! nc map xD

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-1 Circle Size pls? (to large)
dont forget add TV Size

00:59:909 (3) grid 1 top, grid 1 left

01:00:109 (4) grid 1 right
Thanks.
But this is full song.
_lolipop
Oh... your CHILDHOOD...
プリチー・ウィッチー・どれみッチー
啊 终于有两个kd位了吗
skin文件好像损坏了 还留着PSD文件 过一会儿(上完托福课)重新做

[General]
Add Magical DoReMi Ojamajo Doremi into tags
End Kiai Time at 04:18:104

[Normal]
OD -1
00:23:904 (5,6) - Change them to a slider (?)
01:39:104 (7,8) - ^
03:11:904 (7,8) - ^
00:56:704 (x) - add a circle
02:11:904 (x) - ^
02:23:304 (x) - ^ (or remove 02:22:904 (4) - )
02:36:104 (x) - ^ (or remove 02:35:704 (4) - )
04:09:704 (x) - ^ (or remove 04:09:304 (5) - )
01:01:904 (1,2) - a bit too hard for a normal difficulty
01:55:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
03:50:704 (4,5) - ^
01:14:704 (4,5) - ^
02:29:904 (4,5) - ^
03:06:704 (2) - prolong the slider to 03:07:304

[Hard]
OD -1 and AR +1
02:31:904 (x) - add a circle
04:16:704 (5,6,1,2,3) - try to make them more symmetrical
02:44:304 (4,5) - sounds strange, I think it could be better in this way
Topic Starter
digiaria

_lolipop wrote:

Oh... your CHILDHOOD...
プリチー・ウィッチー・どれみッチー
啊 终于有两个kd位了吗
skin文件好像损坏了 还留..
Thanks 雨点酱 > <
tsuka
占座 前排出售
P A N
Oh, it's hard with hidden mods O_o
popner
PM mod request.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Disable letterbox since you have SB?
Remove 'Ojamajo Doremi' from tags since they are already in Source. When people search for 'Ojamajo Doremi', this map will be found for its source, so the tags makes no sense.

[Easy]
00:29:104 (2) - extend this slider for 1/2 tick? (to 00:29:904) Or the rhythm is a little difficult for such a lowest diff.
00:45:104 (2) - try to avoid over 1 time repeat, because the second repeat is unexpected for new player.
00:57:104 (1,2) - If you use stack notes in Easy, you should be sure that this is the unique. That means, when you use 2/1 stack, you should not use 1/1 stack any more. For an Easy player, it is hard to judge whether a stack is 1/1 or 2/1.
02:45:104 - I think you can add a note here to make the rhythm more complete.
03:29:904 (3,1) - another overlap issue..

[Normal]
00:43:504 (1,2) - the pattern can be easily read as two kick sliders which have 2 times repeat, so you'd better change it. (maybe rotate them a little)
01:01:104 (7,1) - ^ player will think they are the same kind of sliders.
01:05:904 (1) - try to avoid using a anti direction flow like this..It will makes player confused.
01:16:304 (2,4) - the overlap looks bad imo.
02:16:304 (3,4) - same as 01:01:104 (7,1)

[Hard]
About note arrangement: put them horizontally or vertically is a way, but generally this kind of patterns lacks creativity and makes player boring..I highly recommend you to use more various patterns.
00:23:104 (1) - You can use higher gird level to make this kind of sliders more symmetric.
01:02:704 (1,3) - try to avoid overlaps like this.. They looks weird and doesn't make the map clean.
01:03:504 (3,6) - sames as above.
01:07:504 (1,2) - another position of overlap.
02:24:904 (2) - the reverse arrow is nearly completely covered by the hitburst of 02:23:704 (5), and you must fix this by changing the arrangement of notes or changing the pattern you use.
02:44:304 (4) - if you want to follow the vocal here, at least 2 more red timing section are needed. Current slider is off, especially at the slider end.
03:05:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why don't make these notes perfectly symmetric? I think they are mirror copy of themselves.
03:33:904 (5,1) - overlap.
04:18:104 (1) - use silence spinner end? Or at least decrease the volume, since there is no clear end sound exists.

GL~
Topic Starter
digiaria

popner wrote:

PM mod request.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Disable letterbox since you have SB?
Remove 'Ojamajo D....................
Thank you~
Rotte
From M4M >_>

[General]

spinner不能没声音
请仔细check,很多重复的梗需要自行修正,因为频率出现过高

[SB]

关了 letterbox during breaks 位置song setup>>story boarding>>Misc.Toggles
白背景羽化会好些>_>
SB1-4 打开osb ,删掉
F,0,23904,,1
SB4-2 删了
F,0,42904,,1
SB6-1 删了
M,0,54304,,360,442



[Easy/Basic]

AR+1 OD+1

00:21:104 (3) - NC
00:24:304 (1) - NC
00:35:904 (5,6) - 请尽量不要在easy中出现任何遮挡,后面不说了
00:33:904 (4) - NC
00:37:104 (7) - NC 后面不再赘述,easy的cb不要超过5
01:26:004 - 拉break到01:26:704 -


[Normal/Standard]

HP+1 AR+3 OD+2

00:21:904 (2,3) - 禁止
00:24:304 (1,2) - 不对称
00:29:704 (4) - 删了
00:30:104 (1,2) - 类似在normal尽量能不出现就不出现,换slider
00:36:704 (5,6) - >_>
00:41:904 (4) - NC
00:43:504 (1,2) - 2009年
00:49:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 分开
01:08:504 (4) - 取缔 节奏如下图

01:17:104 (3,4) - 下来一格
01:21:304 (5) - 如 01:08:504 (4)的处理

01:22:704 (2,3) - 不要stack
01:24:504 (5) - >_>
01:26:004 - 如easy
01:36:304 (1,2,3) - >_>
01:44:104 (4,5,6) - 遇到这种不再赘述,请修正
01:51:904 (5,6,1) - 不合适啊,在normal里
01:59:504 (2) - 挡的真爽>_>
02:01:904 (1,2) - <_<
02:05:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 一夜回到2009
02:17:104 (4) - 减少一次repeat
02:22:704 (3,4,5) - <_< 不再赘述
02:44:304 (2) - 这是什么?我看见了什么!!! 02:44:904 - 请结束于这里
03:31:504 (1,2,3) - ...
04:03:504 (4,5) - ......!!!!
04:18:104 (1) - spinner不能没声音


[Hard/Hyper]

00:23:704 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这种梗很不感冒>_> ,就像回到了2009
00:27:504 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ 对于这种梗的修改不再赘述

00:17:904 (1,2,3) - 三角跳如何?
00:42:704 (6) - ctrl + j
00:46:704 (1,2,3) - 建议取缔
00:48:304 (3,4) - spacing
00:49:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 快速取缔,2009来了
00:54:704 (1) - 节奏错误,可如下图

00:58:704 (1,2) - 这个如果是跳该有多好
01:01:904 (1,2,3,4) - 只是来回跳太可惜了
01:09:104 (1,1) - 遮住了
01:26:504 - 如同

01:57:904 (6) - ctrl+j
02:05:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 又来了 T.T
02:09:904 (13) - 应该是个stream
02:17:904 (1,2,3) -

02:27:904 (3,4,5,6) - 有点坑
02:28:704 (7,8,10) - slider好些
02:39:504 (1,2) - 2按照1来个完全对称,但是不建议还是这样子的slider,或弯曲或倾斜
03:31:504 (1,2,3) - 遮挡啊,快取缔
03:34:504 (6,1) - .........
03:37:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这种节奏我觉得spacing全部都是正常的会更好
03:42:704 (1) - 去掉spinner变成stream
04:04:304 (1,2) - >_>
04:12:304 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 多好的DS匀速减小梗啊!!啊啊啊!!居然被反过来了

不是我打击你....提升质量需remap>_> 我指的hard
Topic Starter
digiaria

-[NYAN]- wrote:

From M4M >_>

[General]

spinner不能没声音
请仔细check,很多重复的梗需要自行修正,因为频率出现过高

[SB]

关了 letterbox dur.......
Thanks 小喵~
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