1. Easy (1.51 stars, 65 notes)
2. Hard (4.95 stars, 236 notes)
3. Hinsvar's LIFE (5 stars, 353 notes)
4. Insane (5 stars, 285 notes)
5. Normal (4.23 stars, 153 notes)

SPOILER

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-Added Hard diff
-Added soft-hitclap.wav thanks to osu! template skin
-Added mute slider slide
-New BG *thanks to Konachan* the BG thumbnails can't change
-Added Easy diff
-Added Normal diff
-Changed the tags
-Resized the BG into 800x600
-All diff done
-Moved to pending beatmaps 6/June
-Updated as Athena Tennos 's mod
-Added preview point
-Updated as -Bakari- 's mod
-re-full submitted 8/June
-Updated as Strawberry 's mod except the easy since I will re-map those
-Easy remap-ed! :3
-Finally the thumbnail is changed :"D
-Updated as Nemis 's mod
-Normal re-map-ed
-Updated as ArtBox 's mod
-Updated as ertyukjh010 's mod
-Updated as DarkSkyNight 's mod
-Updated as Akemi_Homura 's mod
-Updated as ertyukjh010 's mod ><
- Fixed tags as Hinsvar 's told
-Updated as iroseka and Amethyst Wolf 's mod
-Updated as Koro McAlpine's mod at pm
-Updated as all mods e v e~
-Re full submit-ed, BG no more questionable bg loland video thanks to Konei :3/
-Updated as L_P 's mod
-Added Hinsvar's Life diff
-Updated as EvilElvis and ssssssssssssssss 's mod

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod..... Yay~ \(^w^)/

[General]
♪~
phew/

[Easy]
00:05:473 (1,2) - not too beautiful~maybe u can make like~

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00:08:139 (1,2) - ^
00:10:806 (1,2) - too close~....and not too beautiful~
00:36:139 (2,3,4) - .......rhythm..not alignment line~u need move to forward~or~like this~

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Done ~

[Normal]
AR-2
00:00:140 (1,2) - i think u can move a bit...complete overlap is harder to this diff~
00:01:473 (4,5) - ^
00:10:806 - nc~
00:12:639 - remove nc?~
00:13:473 - nc?~
Done
[Hard]
00:03:639 (3,4,5,6) - not too beautiful~overlap...

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Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read.

00:05:306 (9,1) - this distance too long...orz...abrupt...just 2.00x i think ok.....xD
00:06:473 - add note?~
00:07:806 - remove nc?~
00:08:139 - nc?~
hmmmmmmmm.............u have a lot of complete overlap in this diff....but this is harder to this diff.....hmmmmmmm...

SPOILER

Repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. Make sure that hitbursts (100s/300s/etc) from previous notes are not covering any repeat arrows or even the paths/ends of sliders (use the default skin to check if using hitbursts from another skin). This way, all sliders will be easily visible and playable.

SPOILER

Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

i just feel a little hard.....
Done rediff some notes ~

[Insane]
00:33:139 (3,4) - this break rule.....change it!~ or u can add nc to 00:33:306 (4) - .....orz
00:40:639 (2,3) - ^
00:41:306 (4,5) - ^
00:53:973 (2,3) - ^
........hmmmm ///this diff....so pro!!!!!orz.....;_;
Done :3

Good Luck~~~\o/
Thank You X3/

ArtBox wrote:

Hello～　From#modrequest

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suggestions

[Easy]
[spoilerbox]HP+1
AR+1 or 2
OD+1
Slider Tick Rate-1

00:06:639 (2) - Short slider to the novice because it is difficult
Would you like to slider, such as 00:15:139 (5) - , please consider taking a different sound

00:09:305 (2) - ^
01:18:806 (2) - ^

00:24:473 (1) - For beginners such special slider is only perplexing, please simply

00:32:473 (1) - This position is difficult for beginners immediately after the end of the spinner, please Preface to the middle
01:04:139 (1) - ^

00:36:473 (2) - 1 on the grid

00:42:806 (1,2,3) - 00:45:473 (1) - So that they do not overlap

00:58:806 (1) - This is the form of a slider form would also momentarily puzzled by persons experienced in the osu,
　　　　　　　　　　　 let's back to form easy to understand

01:10:806 (2) - Repeat until one

[Nomal]

SPOILER

It has been certified to substantially rather than Hard, Hard is making instead of Nomal Overall · · ·Let's a little easier

（Will be the difficulty of the nomal we have to leave just enough to note from the white line white line BPM180 The high）
(4.50 to 4.00 as possible, please suppressed because of their high stars)

HP-1 or 2
CS-1
OD-1

00:11:473 (3,4,5,6) - This arrangement is not in Hard Nomal

00:12:306 (7,8,9) - So as not to stack three or
00:35:806 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:973 (1,2,3) - ^
00:58:473 (8,9,1) - ^

00:24:639 (3,4,5) - This sequence is close to the Hard, easily
00:25:306 (5,6) - ^
00:35:806 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:43:139 (1,2) - ^
00:38:306 (2,3) - ^ (Reverse Arrow No. 3 has been hidden, this is absolutely, please re-）↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

00:44:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (Too difficult, please also re-)

01:21:806 (1) - This position is difficult for beginners immediately after the end of the spinner, please Preface to the middle

[Hard]

SPOILER

AR-1?

00:21:223 (5) - delete
00:20:973 (4) - +1 Repeat

[Insane]

SPOILER

HP-2(Is not common to almost groan senior level, please re absolutely）
AR-1（Is not common, please change when you're）
OD-2(Is not common to almost groan senior level, please re absolutely）

00:04:139 (6) - Please if you bend halfway to vertical
00:04:473 (7) - ^
00:06:973 (7) - ^

00:10:806 (1) - It is hard to come out ahead of the stream, and that shifting the position of the edges

Added

SPOILER

Finally, the error has gone out in the Aimod
Let's re-make sure ↓（Select File screen to open the edit, it'll open in the middle because there is open AiMod）

Sorry for the short MOD
Good luck!

1. Previewtime inconsistency
   

   Easy → 69139
   Normal → 68973 
   Hard → 68973
   Insane → 68973

1. 00:42:806 (1) - Do not stack with different colors, new players can not adapt, it will lead to a new player confusion.
2. 00:57:473 (2) - Look good but I can see they are asymmetrical. Why don't copy 00:56:139 (1) and Ctrl+R ?
3. 01:00:139 (2) - Move the third point to X184 Y184 and it was surround by 00:58:806 (1)
4. 01:05:473 (2) - The same problem with 00:57:473 (2) but it's not good-looking this time.
5. 01:09:306 (1) - Delete the third point. You can not take the Slider 180 degrees to return. It's unrankble. Okay I try it so I know QAQ
6. 01:12:139 (1) - Why do not symmetrical? Placed it in the middle, and move left and right point, use Ctrl + H or Ctrl + J to make them symmetrical; You can also put the point in the middle of a slide , easy painting symmetric and control the time. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341510

1. 00:09:305 (2) - Unsnap and move to 00:09:306.
2. 00:44:806 (3) - Take it end at 00:45:139. 1/2 beat some hard for new player.
3. 01:06:473 (3,4,5) - I suggest using this rhythm, more in line with the rhythm of the song. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341507
4. 01:08:139 (3) - If you have not changed the rhythm of the above ( 01:06:473 (3,4,5) ), Just move it to 01:07:973 better.
5. 01:18:806 (2) - I don't suggest to use the reverse 2 times or more, because the new players do not adapt, it is easy to overlook and miss a second reverse. Try add a Slider at 01:18:806 and end at 01:19:639.
6. 01:20:139 (1) - Start at 01:19:973 and end at 01:22:139

1. Rhythm is okay but you should strengthen your slider shape and layout. Good Slider velocity and Distance spacing can help you layout. For example, 00:43:473 (1,2) and 00:44:473 (2,3), Their distances are very similar. It is difficult to judge is 1/1 or 3/2 for new player. Try to take a Slider velocity=0.8 and Distance spacing=0.8. Of course, you must re-arrangement and map sliders if you do.

1. 00:00:140 (1) - Why use a 0.6x distance? Very confusing and difficult to read. Use 0.8x distance pls.
2. 00:40:806 (2) - They are asymmetrical with 00:40:139 (1)

1. 00:24:639 (3) - Move to 00:24:806 and add clap at end.
2. 00:25:306 (4) - Cancel the reverse but add a note at 00:25:806 & 00:25:973. You can add clap at 00:25:806.
3. 00:42:139 (4) - Circle instead it because it's the end of song and start the next section at 00:42:806. I don't suggest to put Slider's end on the new section.
4. 01:19:806 (1) - Start at 01:19:973 and too little time between the spinner and the next note, which will lead to new players do not have enough time to regain the control of the mouse. You must be separated by more than two of 1/1 beat. Delete 01:21:806 (1) and add a note at 01:22:139

1. This difficulty a lot of distance transform, which is not allowed. Make sure this distance is consistent in Normal. I think inconsistency in distance is unrankble. Observe their distance again honestly http://puu.sh/q20C.

1. AR+1 easy to read

1. 00:02:806 (1,2) - It's not completely stack of their slider's end
2. 01:29:639 (2) - I can't read them. Try to stack with 01:29:973 (4)
3. 01:30:973 (2) - ^

1. 01:14:973 (2) - start at 01:15:306 and you can add note at 01:14:973
2. 01:19:306 (1) - End at 01:19:973
3. 01:20:223 (1) - Start at 01:20:056
4. 01:35:973 (1) - Why put a note here. I feel very weird. Take a spinner ending at here like "Easy" diff

1. Confusion in the distance, difficult to read. For example, 00:59:639 (3) or 01:03:639 (1,2). You still need to make sure the distance is consistent but you can make some reasonable jump. Observe their distance again honestly http://puu.sh/q20C.

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from forums-pm Yay XD

[General]

1. Previewtime inconsistency
   

   Easy → 69139
   Normal → 68973 
   Hard → 68973
   Insane → 68973

fixed

[Easy]

[Layout]

1. 00:42:806 (1) - Do not stack with different colors, new players can not adapt, it will lead to a new player confusion.
2. 00:57:473 (2) - Look good but I can see they are asymmetrical. Why don't copy 00:56:139 (1) and Ctrl+R ?
3. 01:00:139 (2) - Move the third point to X184 Y184 and it was surround by 00:58:806 (1)
4. 01:05:473 (2) - The same problem with 00:57:473 (2) but it's not good-looking this time.
5. 01:09:306 (1) - Delete the third point. You can not take the Slider 180 degrees to return. It's unrankble. Okay I try it so I know QAQ
6. 01:12:139 (1) - Why do not symmetrical? Placed it in the middle, and move left and right point, use Ctrl + H or Ctrl + J to make them symmetrical; You can also put the point in the middle of a slide , easy painting symmetric and control the time. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341510

[rhythm]

1. 00:09:305 (2) - Unsnap and move to 00:09:306.
2. 00:44:806 (3) - Take it end at 00:45:139. 1/2 beat some hard for new player.
3. 01:06:473 (3,4,5) - I suggest using this rhythm, more in line with the rhythm of the song. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341507
4. 01:08:139 (3) - If you have not changed the rhythm of the above ( 01:06:473 (3,4,5) ), Just move it to 01:07:973 better.
5. 01:18:806 (2) - I don't suggest to use the reverse 2 times or more, because the new players do not adapt, it is easy to overlook and miss a second reverse. Try add a Slider at 01:18:806 and end at 01:19:639.
6. 01:20:139 (1) - Start at 01:19:973 and end at 01:22:139

[Opinion]

1. Rhythm is okay but you should strengthen your slider shape and layout. Good Slider velocity and Distance spacing can help you layout. For example, 00:43:473 (1,2) and 00:44:473 (2,3), Their distances are very similar. It is difficult to judge is 1/1 or 3/2 for new player. Try to take a Slider velocity=0.8 and Distance spacing=0.8. Of course, you must re-arrangement and map sliders if you do.

all done

[Normal]

[Layout]

1. 00:00:140 (1) - Why use a 0.6x distance? Very confusing and difficult to read. Use 0.8x distance pls.
2. 00:40:806 (2) - They are asymmetrical with 00:40:139 (1)

[rhythm]

1. 00:24:639 (3) - Move to 00:24:806 and add clap at end.
2. 00:25:306 (4) - Cancel the reverse but add a note at 00:25:806 & 00:25:973. You can add clap at 00:25:806.
3. 00:42:139 (4) - Circle instead it because it's the end of song and start the next section at 00:42:806. I don't suggest to put Slider's end on the new section.
4. 01:19:806 (1) - Start at 01:19:973 and too little time between the spinner and the next note, which will lead to new players do not have enough time to regain the control of the mouse. You must be separated by more than two of 1/1 beat. Delete 01:21:806 (1) and add a note at 01:22:139

[Opinion]

1. This difficulty a lot of distance transform, which is not allowed. Make sure this distance is consistent in Normal. I think inconsistency in distance is unrankble. Observe their distance again honestly http://puu.sh/q20C.

all done

[Hard]

1. AR+1 easy to read

[Layout]

1. 00:02:806 (1,2) - It's not completely stack of their slider's end
2. 01:29:639 (2) - I can't read them. Try to stack with 01:29:973 (4)
3. 01:30:973 (2) - ^

[rhythm]

1. 01:14:973 (2) - start at 01:15:306 and you can add note at 01:14:973
2. 01:19:306 (1) - End at 01:19:973
3. 01:20:223 (1) - Start at 01:20:056
4. 01:35:973 (1) - Why put a note here. I feel very weird. Take a spinner ending at here like "Easy" diff to equating with the song :3

[Opinion]

1. Confusion in the distance, difficult to read. For example, 00:59:639 (3) or 01:03:639 (1,2). You still need to make sure the distance is consistent but you can make some reasonable jump. Observe their distance again honestly http://puu.sh/q20C.

all done

I skip a "Insane" diff because I think you need to fixed Easy~Hard.
If you rearrange the three difficulty and my mod help. Call me back and I can recheck but you must be sure that the correct distance.
Good Luck

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~~ Random modding~ :3

Hello :3

• [General]

1. Fine~!

• [Easy]

1. Not bad~ :3

• [Normal]

1. OD +1

• [Hard]

1. 00:59:639 (3) - too close 00:59:306 (2) I think DS 0.8x is better~
2. 01:29:639 (2,3,4,5) - place like this~
   
   Click~

   

   352,136,89639,1,4
   224,200,89806,1,4
   344,220,89973,1,4
   268,128,90139,1,4

3. 01:30:973 (2,3,4,5) - make symmetrical with 01:29:639 (2,3,4,5)
   
   Click~

   

   160,136,90972,1,8
   288,200,91139,1,8
   168,220,91306,1,8
   244,128,91472,1,8

• [Insane]

1. 00:25:139 (3) - overlap perfectly with 00:25:639 (4)
2. 00:37:639 (1) - remove this slider, add note 00:37:806 and 00:37:973
   
   Click~

   
3. 00:53:973 (2) - overlap perfectly with 00:53:806 (1)
4. 00:54:639 (4,5) - I think note-slider is more follow vocal~ :3
   
   Click~

   
5. 01:00:806 (7) - overlap~ ><
6. 01:04:639 (3) - this note almost hidden by slider~ move this~
   
   Click~

   
7. 01:04:806 (4) - overlap perfectly~
8. 01:09:139 - add note~
9. 01:12:806 (3) - overlap issue again~ orz
10. 01:31:306 (4) - move this note and make symmetrical~
    
    Click~

    

GL to rank~ :3
thank you >w<

1. 00:14:139 (4) - Touch a 00:12:806 (3) at beginner, In my opinion it is better to separate them.
2. 00:38:139 (1) - wrong distance with 00:36:473 (2)
3. 00:42:806 (4) - NC here but not 00:43:973 (1)
4. 01:01:139 (1) - Do not stack with different colors, new players can not adapt, it will lead to a new player confusion.
5. 01:04:139 (1) - Don't touch with 01:01:473 (2) at end, look like 1/1 beat.
6. 01:17:473 (1,2) - Make them balance like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349108

1. 00:21:806 (1) - Add a more interesting rhythm like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349100
2. 00:24:473 (1) - ^
3. 00:29:139 (2) - Instead by this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349110
4. 00:30:639 (1) - The spinner length is too short, this will lead to new players do not have enough time to rotate, also make it easier to miss. Please increase the length of the spinner or other instead.
5. 00:32:473 (1) - Move to 00:32:139 but you must delete 00:30:639 (1). Because it's too close.
6. 00:36:473 (2) - reverse at 00:36:806

1. 00:46:139 (4) - Make balance so move second point to X384 Y192 and third point is X304 Y312
2. 01:23:806 (1) - Wrong distance lol
3. 01:24:473 (3) - ^

1. 00:36:139 (4) - Move at 00:36:306

1. 00:21:306 (5) - Distance
2. 00:22:473 (3) - Overlap so that they are confusing, unread for me.
3. 00:36:639 (7) - Why put them too close?
4. 00:42:806 (1) - Distance. Just suggest but it's fake for me.
5. 01:18:473 (3) - Too low, moved a little higher. I think stack with 01:17:473 (7) is okay
6. 01:18:806 (4,5,1) - Try this layout: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349125. And than, you can put 01:18:473 (3,4,5,1) into middle of the screen.

1. 00:50:473 (1) - End at 00:51:806 with "Yo~~~~"
2. 01:04:806 (3,4) - Ctrl+R for the rhythm
3. 01:07:973 (1) - Try to foloowed this rhythm: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349122
4. 01:12:973 (1) - ^, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349123

1. 00:08:139 (3) - Complex shape, why not simplify it? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349128
2. 00:26:806 (1) - Don't touch with 00:27:639 (4) like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349130
3. 00:36:639 (1) - The distance is fake.
4. 01:08:973 (2,3) - Look like same rhythm with 01:08:473 (1,2) but the fact is not
5. 01:27:639 (2) - Fake of distance
6. 01:35:973 (1) - I suggest it second time. It's fake and easy to neglect for player. I hope you can consider removing it.

1. 00:06:806 (6,7) - Ctrl+R for rhythm, More in line with the rhythm.
2. 01:03:889 () - Add note here to finish the stream
3. 01:04:056 () - ^
4. 01:10:639 (1) - Cancel reverse and end at 01:11:139 fit than
5. 01:19:973 (1) - Add note here and the spinner start at 01:20:056, end at 01:22:639. Or delete the spinner is okay

• 01:14:806 - The same two inherited point. Delete one.

- t e n n y a - wrote:

Re-Full Submit please re-download :3

Still need more mods T w T

Hinsvar wrote:

...Why are you placing commas on the Tags section? They're useless, as far as I know. You might as well delete them, since commas won't separate a phrase from each another here.

I hope I'm not wrong.

Also, if you want me to mod this, I can, but give me around 2-3 days; I still have some more stuff to mod.

Oh, and don't give this post a kudosu if it's not obvious yet.

1. Uh... The BG... You know... You should change it with something less questionable. I wonder why all modders before me didn't point this out... Also, yes, I'm being a hypocrite.

1. Huh... To be honest, I dislike some of the sliders' shapes, but that's a mapper's choice, and I don't see a slider that's so ridiculously bad that I need to point it out.
2. 00:34:473 (2,1) - I don't think new players (the ones that Easy diffs are made for) will be able to hit this stack...
3. 01:00:139 (2) - Move the first anchor point to (208,288)? This way, the slider blanketing will look better.
4. 01:18:806 (2) - I don't really like this slight overlap. Rearrange this?
5. 01:26:806 (1) - Remove NC. I'm sure enough it will be better this way.

1. ...Why don't you map Easy from the offset too? You mapped this diff from the offset, correct? Also, I think the timing at the beginning of this diff is... weird.

• 
  *Won't write any reason anymore; it's going to be too long. Just try them first.

1. Too much unexpected slider speed change around here...
2. 00:04:139 (6) - NC?
3. 00:07:639 (7) - ^
4. 00:11:973 (4) - Make this a 1/2 slider?
5. 00:12:306 (5) - NC?
6. 00:14:639 (2) - ^
7. 00:21:973 (2,3) - ...I don't really like this overlap. At least make the end of (2) cover (3)'s middle path completely.
8. 00:23:973 (1) - Remove NC, then add one on 00:24:473 (2)?
9. 00:32:473 (1,2) - Weird overlap. At least make them curve (not sure for the right verb...) each other.
10. 00:34:473 (1) - Remove NC, then add one on 00:35:139 (2)?
11. 00:40:139 (1,2,3) - Huh? It would be better if (1) blankets (2)'s end like 00:48:139 (3,4,5). Also, what's with the overlap between (2) and (3)?
12. 00:47:139 - I think you still need to make the section after this a slowdown one...
13. 00:49:306 (6) - NC?
14. 00:53:473 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...This part is a mess with all those hitbursts and overlap, I swear. Consider rearranging stuff here.
15. 00:57:473 (1,2) - Overlapping stuff.
16. 01:06:806 (4,5) - Huh? This blanketing looks weird.
17. 01:14:306 - You should really map this part...
18. 01:15:306 (3) - What's with the sudden slowdown?

1. 00:01:473 (5) - NC?
2. 00:04:139 (6) - ^
3. 00:08:139 (3) - Bad jump, IMO.
4. 00:08:973 (5,6) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats once?
5. 00:17:473 (1) + 00:18:806 (1) - What's with these sliders? Are you inspired by val? (lol) Not that it's a bad thing though.
6. 00:19:973 (2) - NC?
7. 00:31:473 (2) - ^
8. 00:46:473 (5) - ^
9. 00:49:973 (3,4) - ^ (Yes, to (3) AND (4))
10. 00:54:806 (5) - ^
11. 00:57:473 (5) - ^
12. 01:00:139 (5) - ^
13. 01:03:139 (5) - NC and remove the one on 01:03:306 (1)?
14. 01:05:306 (6) - NC?
15. 01:07:806 (6) - NC and remove the one on 01:08:473 (1)?
16. 01:13:306 (4) - NC?

Konei wrote:

^

I think there are BG's which are more questionable

Konei wrote:

^

how about:

http://puu.sh/G3GF

Konei wrote:

^

I think there are BG's which are more questionable

Matoryoshika wrote:

anyway, read the spoiler! >,<

Hinsvar wrote:

And some of them are used on ranked beatmaps, unfortunately...

Oh, and the new BG looks nice

L_P wrote:

(if you find someone not complaining about this, he is probably not serious about his mod .. XD)

Hinsvar wrote:

Also, because I am bored, I made an awesome Extra/Extreme/whatever-you-would-like-to-call-a-diff-harder-than-Insane-by diff. No need to add it to your mapset; I did it for fun Although it will be funny if you really add that.

Speedmapped in 112 and a half minutes. Enjoy

- t e n n y a - wrote:

Hinsvar wrote:

Also, because I am bored, I made an awesome Extra/Extreme/whatever-you-would-like-to-call-a-diff-harder-than-Insane-by diff. No need to add it to your mapset; I did it for fun Although it will be funny if you really add that.

Speedmapped in 112 and a half minutes. Enjoy

whatta awesome diff ; A ;
I wish I can make a diff like you T w T

lollol if you want me to add that diff it's okay tough xD
since that awesome Extra/Extreme/whatever-you-would-like-to-call-a-diff-harder-than-Insane-by diff is really awesome

L_P wrote:

No unrankable, so only suggestion...
mainly shapes etc

General : when you found a MAT, he/she will probably want you to remove "hentai" from tags nyaho done

Insane
00:13:473 (1) - spacing was too close(cause slow slider speed made the distance snap like um) , not comfortable...and the slider could be more like this:
and thus the flow is better for next note
00:14:639 (2,3) - NC note 2 or slider 3 (change of slider velocity)
00:27:639 (4,5) - there was a lot of sliders like this, (and they are not very pretty together) try adjusting the arc / the angle etc
for these, suggestion is like ↓

00:30:639 (1,2) - could make like this : http://puu.sh/GiIh （so the sliders wont look weird together orz)orz

00:41:473 (5) - my friend, plz NC this (SV change

00:45:473 (3) - same

00:50:639 (2) - hi

00:53:473 (1,3) - same suggestion : http://puu.sh/GiKe we call this blanketing ha

01:13:306 (2) - NC (sv change ) and it was too close to previous slider (also same distance snap problem)
for the shape, suggest adjust the both slider's arc a bit : http://puu.sh/GiLl

01:13:973 (3) - because of ↑, so this slider will need a NC


Hard

00:02:306 (6) - too close to previous note

00:42:306 (4,5,6) - because the bpm was quite high (180) it is pretty hard for most average player in this diff. recommend change it into a repeat slider

00:51:973 (1) - too close to the spinner, it was too hard for a Hard diff. maybe end the spinner here?


01:29:639 (2) - NC?

01:30:973 (2) - NC?


thats all oh ye...i have no kudos left orz

plz reply what you follow, and what you didnt follow and state the reason from other mod plzzzzz
because it is important for some modders to improve themselves..(if you find someone not complaining about this, he is probably not serious about his mod .. XD)

Hinsvar wrote:

You know what?

Feel free to add it

I can somehow see a few modders telling me to remap this ahead...

j/k

EvilElvis wrote:

01:16:806 (3) - add circle after this? Done.