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Hi ~ Verlaren again~ 
This map waitting for a lot ~ so i recheck for my Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
OK ~ You improved map a lot ~ Looks enough for rank ~
Call me back ~
This map waitting for a lot ~ so i recheck for my Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions
[General]
- Please use this tags(Removed some unneed stuff and Added opening) :
opening lacryma satomura momiji yoshino reiji sakura nagisa suzushiro sayuki kurobane ryuichi - 00:20:039 - #1 kiai end to here,much better IMO.
- 01:28:079 - #2 kiai end to here,much better IMO.
[Insane]
- 00:34:691 (9) - Move to X:0 Y:136,don't overlapping with 00:34:341 (8) - .
- 00:44:982 (7) - Try use ctrl+g,flow much better when you test play.
- 00:50:563 (7) - Same as above.
[Hard]
- 00:54:574 - You are forgot add finish to here.
- 00:57:017 (1,2) - Swich new combo,vocal start on 00:57:713 - .
- 00:59:807 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 01:25:637 - You are forgot add clap to here.
- 01:44:797 - Remove whistle and Add clap,sound much better.
- 01:45:497 - ^
- 01:46:545 (3,4) - The steam should start on 01:46:720 - same as insane,like this.
also use clap on repeat slider.
[Normal]
- 00:14:283 (8) - Remove this note,made more easy playable.
- 00:34:865 (7) - ^
- 01:35:911 (8) - ^
- 01:44:273 (8) - ^
- 00:54:225 (4) - Move to X:200 Y:336,balanced spacing to here.
[Easy]
- 00:32:248 - The finish sound too soft,increase volume to 50% is better.
- 00:43:411 - You are forgot add finish to here.
- 00:49:341 - Remove whistle and Add clap,sound much better.
- 01:01:202 - ^
- 01:35:737 - ^
- 01:11:335 - Remove clap and Add finish,sound much better.
OK ~ You improved map a lot ~ Looks enough for rank ~
Call me back ~
Rechecked via irc ~ Looks much better ~
Enjoy your 1st Ranked map ~ <3
Enjoy your 1st Ranked map ~ <3
GRATZ!!!!
This has gone a long way and you really deserve it
This has gone a long way and you really deserve it
one year and finally
Oh finally 
congrats!!
congrats!!Congratulations!
Gratz!!! for 1th Ranked Map Velaren-chan
Congratulations!
congratz Verlaren
Congratz~~!
Congratulations! It has been a long way but you finally made it. Hope to see more maps from you ranked in the future.
Congratulations, well deserved.
More red.
Grats!
Grats!
Verlaren
It's nice to see it ranked, congratulations!
Just kidding.
Congratulations, you really deserve it as you didn't give up.
Congratulations, you really deserve it as you didn't give up.
And this should be an example for every new mapper.DakeDekaane wrote:
Congratulations, you really deserve it as you didn't give up.
wogh, this is soo much better than the last time i saw it when i'm modded this
grats!!! ^_^b
grats!!! ^_^b
congratulations !
gratz :3
Finally
congratz :p
Andrea wrote:
And this should be an example for every new mapper.DakeDekaane wrote:
Congratulations, you really deserve it as you didn't give up.
It's not as easy as you might think.
Anyway, gz Verlaren! You finally did it
I know, I've been a new mapper as well.Irreversible wrote:
It's not as easy as you might think.Andrea wrote:
And this should be an example for every new mapper.
I know, I've been a new mapper as well.Andrea wrote:
It's not as easy as you might think.Irreversible wrote:
And this should be an example for every new mapper.
..really? loljk
Finally, congratz!
so many BATs here
gratz~
Gratz :3 you did it !
Finally 
congratz
nice hard work
congratz
nice hard work
Congratulations!
Congratulations
Congrats. Its been a Year of work for you. :>
Gratz, good to see that your hard work was worth it :>
Congratz, great work :3
Congrats Varlaren ! >w<
Sorry. I'm late. Congratz!
Happy new year grats
congratulations for 1st ranked mapset
Rankeooooooooooooooooooooooooou ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Congratulations Verlaren!!!!
13 Months waiting and YOU NEVER GAVE UP !
So congratulations for your perserverance
And as for your next map, I can make a diff? (it depends on what song you'll choose, and if you want take a GD)
Congratulations Verlaren!!!!
13 Months waiting and YOU NEVER GAVE UP !
So congratulations for your perserverance
And as for your next map, I can make a diff? (it depends on what song you'll choose, and if you want take a GD)
Verlaren
Thanks for yours support~
ty~ and yes, if you want, you can make GD for my next map. I'll let you know. when I start her to do.Alarido wrote:
Rankeooooooooooooooooooooooooou ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Congratulations Verlaren!!!!
13 Months waiting and YOU NEVER GAVE UP !
So congratulations for your perserverance
And as for your next map, I can make a diff? (it depends on what song you'll choose, and if you want take a GD)
Cragts. Respect to your hardwork.