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SYNC.ART'S - Sins -Kokoro no Tsumi- [Osu|Taiko]

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Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月15日 at 21:12:31

Artist: SYNC.ART'S
Title: Sins -Kokoro no Tsumi-
Source: Touhou
Tags: shoujou girl komeiji satori reitaisai9 3rd eyes Aihara Kaori Gojou kai BB kuroiwa satoshi reitaisai Lundlerol Leorda
BPM: 145
Filesize: 11874kb
Play Time: 03:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Guilty (4.81 stars, 535 notes)
  2. Innocent (3.02 stars, 272 notes)
  3. Lundle's Taiko (4.83 stars, 1230 notes)
  4. Nightmare (5 stars, 779 notes)
Download: SYNC.ART'S - Sins -Kokoro no Tsumi-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Snowy Dream's 15th beatmap.
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[Innocent](Normal) by Snowy Dream
[Guilty](Hard) by Snowy Dream
[Lundle's Taiko](Taiko Oni) by Lundlerol
[Nightmare](Insane) by Snowy Dream
[Story Board] by Leorda
Last edited by Snowy Dream , edited 78 times in total.
inaba-tan
609 posts
Joined August 2010
inaba-tan
may i make taiko diff ~ ?

edit
i see ~ ><
Last edited by inaba-tan , edited 1 time in total.
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

inaba-tan wrote:

may i make taiko diff ~ ?
:( sorry someone has booked for it
but anyway thank you :3
Mei_coN
372 posts
Joined March 2009
Mei_coN
你开坑略快了吧.........
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Mei_coN wrote:

你开坑略快了吧.........
:3 巨慢 都过了2天了才开
Mei_coN
372 posts
Joined March 2009
Mei_coN
为啥我记得是昨天的CD,难道我记错了0 0
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Mei_coN wrote:

为啥我记得是昨天的CD,难道我记错了0 0
@.@ 我也不清楚 反正是这两天内的
Lundlerol
651 posts
Joined May 2011
Lundlerol
Taiko Done~@v@

http://puu.sh/C5lJ

update plz >w<


(Plz Mod~)
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
哇小五萝莉

晚点来MOD我先堆积着债……
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
M4M here :3

wow this song is very moe , I remember it released lately about 3-4 weeks in album which has only 3 songs :3
(btw, I like naked wind the best :P)

Innocent
00:48:444 (2) - miss clap
00:57:134 (3) - maybe add finish at 00:57:547 ?
01:47:616 (4,5,6) - how about this rhythm? ,only single note at one point in this diff is not easy to read in my opinion
SPOILER
02:06:651 (3) - I see new combo this is not necessary , probably remove it cuz it doesn't quite match with the sound for me
02:09:134 (1) - miss finish at the start
02:32:306 (1,2,3) - how about this so ? , (1)'s repeat is fit more than the current one you use.
SPOILER

Guilty
01:13:685 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - oh, I don't think this distance is appropriate for hard diff ? = =''
01:14:202 (5) - I would remove this note , it may gives the way to relax
01:48:237 (2) - add 1/2 slider instead ? , and remove 01:48:444 (2) - also , slider will be the part of vocal
03:00:444 (1) - finish at the start
03:18:858 (1) - add new combo for consistency with normal diff?
emm, don't you add any clap last part ? , just mentioned that I just feel it's empty ~

Nightmare
00:20:720 (4) - how does this whistle come ? , I mean you should add more whistle for making it better right ?
00:49:271 (11,1) - the suitable sound for these note should be like this , just swap each other
SPOILER
00:57:547 (5,7) - finish these 2 notes
01:26:927 (1) - finish
03:16:996 (1) - finish

star :D
also move into pending plzz :p , I guess I will be practicing this map with DT \:D/

Good Luck ~~
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
FrostMourne

Frostmourne wrote:

M4M here :3

wow this song is very moe , I remember it released lately about 3-4 weeks in album which has only 3 songs :3
(btw, I like naked wind the best :P)

Innocent
00:48:444 (2) - miss clap
00:57:134 (3) - maybe add finish at 00:57:547 ?
01:47:616 (4,5,6) - how about this rhythm? ,only single note at one point in this diff is not easy to read in my opinion
SPOILER
02:06:651 (3) - I see new combo this is not necessary , probably remove it cuz it doesn't quite match with the sound for me
02:09:134 (1) - miss finish at the start
02:32:306 (1,2,3) - how about this so ? , (1)'s repeat is fit more than the current one you use.
SPOILER

Guilty
01:13:685 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - oh, I don't think this distance is appropriate for hard diff ? = =''
01:14:202 (5) - I would remove this note , it may gives the way to relax
01:48:237 (2) - add 1/2 slider instead ? , and remove 01:48:444 (2) - also , slider will be the part of vocal
03:00:444 (1) - finish at the start
03:18:858 (1) - add new combo for consistency with normal diff?
emm, don't you add any clap last part ? , just mentioned that I just feel it's empty ~

Nightmare
00:20:720 (4) - how does this whistle come ? , I mean you should add more whistle for making it better right ?
00:49:271 (11,1) - the suitable sound for these note should be like this , just swap each other
SPOILER
00:57:547 (5,7) - finish these 2 notes
01:26:927 (1) - finish
03:16:996 (1) - finish

star :D
also move into pending plzz :p , I guess I will be practicing this map with DT \:D/

Good Luck ~~
Thanks Frost > <
all done
kyuten
171 posts
Joined August 2008
kyuten
Hi~Request from forum PM

[General]
Fine~

[Innocent]
-Beatmap-
00:24:030 (2) - 结尾处也add clap..?
00:37:271 (2) - ^
01:03:340 - 这里感觉加一个sliderslide
01:11:616 - ^(后面也有...试试看ww
01:49:271 (6) - NC
03:04:582 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里的话...比较倾向于舒缓一点的节奏ww
03:20:099 - add a note
03:20:720 (1) - 也换成3个的stack..?
03:51:134 (6) - clap
03:52:582 (3) - 这里的clap听起来有点奇怪诶


[Guilty]
-Beatmap-
00:27:754 - 这种地方类似的没有音效就感觉很别扭了._.
02:13:065 (2,3,4) - 稍微跳一点的感觉0 0？随便摆了一下..
SPOILER
03:18:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 试试这样的节奏？
SPOILER



[Nightmare]
-Beatmap-
00:40:996 (9) - 这个是故意歪掉的还是nazi 0 0
03:15:340 (8,1,2,1,2,3) - 真的要用3/4么...好像不太好读...
03:57:754 (3,4) - 换成从上到下的1/4拍连打><

Nice map~给颗星~☆
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from forum PM

[General]
Fine~

[Innocent]
-Beatmap-
00:24:030 (2) - 结尾处也add clap..?
00:37:271 (2) - ^
01:03:340 - 这里感觉加一个sliderslide
01:11:616 - ^(后面也有...试试看ww
01:49:271 (6) - NC
03:04:582 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里的话...比较倾向于舒缓一点的节奏ww
03:20:099 - add a note
03:20:720 (1) - 也换成3个的stack..?
03:51:134 (6) - clap
03:52:582 (3) - 这里的clap听起来有点奇怪诶


[Guilty]
-Beatmap-
00:27:754 - 这种地方类似的没有音效就感觉很别扭了._.
02:13:065 (2,3,4) - 稍微跳一点的感觉0 0？随便摆了一下..
SPOILER
03:18:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 试试这样的节奏？
SPOILER



[Nightmare]
-Beatmap-
00:40:996 (9) - 这个是故意歪掉的还是nazi 0 0
03:15:340 (8,1,2,1,2,3) - 真的要用3/4么...好像不太好读...
03:57:754 (3,4) - 换成从上到下的1/4拍连打><

Nice map~给颗星~☆

谢谢星 >A<
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod.....

[General]
~删osb~♪~

[Innocent]
01:26:099 (1) - 对称了一下。。
SPOILER
124,204,86099,6,0,B|384:76|220:-56|56:76|316:204,1,480,4|4

[Guilty]
00:34:582 (3) - 向右移一格？~距离太近了orz~
00:16:582 (2) - ^ .........这回距离太远了？~
01:04:582 (11) - hmm~我觉得这里nc一下或许会好一点~
01:26:099 (1,2,3) - 这个摆近一点？~
SPOILER
03:28:582 (1,2,3) - ^?~...

[Nightmare]
00:14:306 - and 00:14:616 - delete note？~这个地方什么音都没有orz~or 改成这样--->
SPOILER
00:27:651 - add note？~这里正好有个音~
00:40:789 (7) - 与8，9对齐？~。orz~ign me~
00:44:306 (9) - 与5，4，8对齐0。0。。。我在挑刺orz。。。或者往下拉一格~突出点orz~
00:53:823 (3) - 在00:54:134 - 结束？~


。。。。。。我真的找不到什么明显的问题。或好的建议orz。。。。。

果断Star。。囧。。。忘了没KDs了。。。给我在射好了。。。orz
Good Luck！~直接rank~orz。。
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
小五:3
[General]
COMBO COLOUR里绿色乱入……LOL？最好换成头上花朵的蓝色

[Nightmare]
00:24:548 (8,9) - 似乎要往右下再动一点才和左边对称
00:33:754 (1,2,3,4) - 这样好不好？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/359681 1234做菱形【此图中我拉的还是有点歪了……】
00:40:996 (9) - 往右挪几格，现在这个三连往左边弯了
00:54:237 (4,5) - 这个ctrl+r，后面一大堆2点都是一上一下的flow，这两个也统一吧
01:06:444 (2,3,4,5) - 这里似乎是先红线单点再白线3连的，你把这四个按中CTRL+R试听一下看看
01:13:065 (7,8,9,10) - ^ 听过觉得不好再决定吧~
01:18:651 (3) - 听音高是从上往下的拖条更合适呢，从下往上有点……
02:00:858 (1) - 形状233
02:00:858 (1) - 总觉得这里不NC不舒服啊
02:16:996 (3) - x164 y168，包围下面的三连打外加和2,4一起组成三角形~似乎2要往右1-2格
02:21:030 (2) - 推荐删掉，节奏也许更合
02:57:754 (3,4,5) - ……x260 y268
03:42:961 (4) - 显然这里是一个circle，在后面的白线上再开始放slider更好。但这个难度就算了，我看到HARD难度里好多这样的……
03:48:237 (x) - 这里有个音。要么把5移过来要么加一个circle

[Guilty]
01:13:685 (3,4) - 喂这间距不明所以啊
02:56:927 (4) - 形状2333
00:19:685 (2,1) - 听起来很怪。都删掉换成长白线上一个1/1的slider
01:11:202 (1) - 延长到下一个白线

[Lundle's Taiko]
太鼓modは新人です、アドバイスだけで、修正する事は貴方の判断にお任せします。
00:27:858 (2,1) - dk
00:34:789 (2,1,1,2) - kddk
01:02:099 (1,1,1) - ddk
01:40:375 (1,2,1,2,3) - dkdkk
良い譜面です～

[Innocent]
02:15:754 (1) - 这个遮盖多余可以改掉的
03:00:444 (3) - 这个也是，可以往上拉一点
03:57:961 (3,4) - ……x100 y268，另一个 x208 y320

没了:3 很好听~
Lundlerol
651 posts
Joined May 2011
Lundlerol

eikkaleyd wrote:

[Lundle's Taiko]
太鼓modは新人です、アドバイスだけで、修正する事は貴方の判断にお任せします。
00:27:858 (2,1) - dk →Changed
00:34:789 (2,1,1,2) - kddk Changed
01:02:099 (1,1,1) - ddk not Changed
01:40:375 (1,2,1,2,3) - dkdkk Changed
良い譜面です～
没了:3 很好听~
Thx eikkaleyd ><
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
不科學 神mapper居然又ranked圖

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. offset目前:6651.27320882796 請一律調到整數

Innocent



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:08:513 - & 00:08:927 - 去tick聲吧 聽起來不怎適合
  2. 00:10:582 - & 00:10:996 - ^
  3. 00:13:478 - & 00:13:892 - ^
  4. 03:58:375 - 我會建議你找個類似像大鐘的聲音來做這邊的finish... 會適合許多 (在我的Hatsuki Yura - Yami no Kodomo tachi有類似的音效 你可以拿去將聲音放大些 就可以拿去用了)
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:31:582 (1,1) - 其實我覺得這離中心太遠了些 對於最簡單的難度來說... 對新手來說有些困難了些
  2. 00:50:099 (4,5) - [nazi] 弧型(曲線)不同弧度 考慮修成一樣的弧度? ((我也知道這mod挺蠢的 但是每次看到這類的雙slider沒有相同弧度都會感覺不舒服 所已多少還是會提一下 至於是否會改就看你個人感覺~有些人認為打起來不影響所以不改 這也沒關係^^
  3. 01:26:099 (1) - 額... 未對稱?(水平對稱) 如果你認為有需要對稱那我幫你作個code
    96,176,86099,6,0,B|355:48|191:-83|28:48|287:176,1,480,4|4
  4. 02:22:375 (1) - 這圖形我真心覺得不怎麼好看 原因:前段的弧度不夠大 所以看起來有些類直線 可能是個人不是很喜歡這種模稜兩可的感覺 所以我提出這點讓你作參考
  5. 02:45:547 (1,1) - 同00:31:582 (1,1) -
  6. 03:15:340 (1,2,3,4) - [suggestion] 給我的感覺不如用03:13:685 (1,2,3,4) - 去rotate 感覺會比較好些 就是一種比較流暢的感覺~不介意的話試試看吧~
  7. 03:43:582 (1,1) - 同00:31:582 (1,1) -

Guilty



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:06:858 - 去tick聲?
  2. 00:14:616 - ^
  3. 01:46:996 - ^
  4. 01:47:202 - ^
  5. 01:48:651 - ^
  6. 01:50:616 - ^
  7. 01:51:961 - ^
  8. 03:58:375 - 同上一個難度~音效建議
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:44:720 (1,1,2,3) - 被spinner text給擋住了 這樣會影響到player的read的 所以最好改掉吧~
    photo
  2. 00:57:961 (1) - 建議在這加個note 因為這地方確實有個重音 如果直接用spinner就會少了一個重音的打擊感 並且 這難度應該可以算是hard了 所以我認為加個note在轉盤前應該是沒什麼問題的((spinner開始在00:58:065 - 吧
  3. 01:04:582 (11) - 感覺NC在這會比較適合些 因為這是段落的開頭處 而且這是重音 所以我認為這邊會比01:04:996 (1) - 用NC更加合適
  4. 01:14:513 (7) - 01:17:823 (12) - ...etc
  5. 02:32:306 (10)同樣的~NC問題
  6. 02:33:961 (5) - ^
  7. 02:53:409 (4) - 是否考慮向上移動一個grid(size4) 然後把02:55:065 (5) - 的結尾與02:53:409 (4) -作stack?

2夢((炸




  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:10:996 - 去tick聲
  2. 00:11:202 - ^
  3. 01:42:651 - 到01:55:892 - 之間同樣去tick吧
  4. 03:58:375 - 同樣建議音效
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:08:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 恩...其實這段節奏用o ooo o o會比較適合些 不過還是看你個人的看法
  2. 00:57:134 (3,4,5,6,7) - 用多邊型工具去做吧~這個並不等距呢(由右上方的DS可以看出來並不是等距離的)
  3. 01:44:306 (5,6,7,8,9) - 節奏同樣建議用o ooo o o
  4. 02:04:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - [nazi] 不夠圓的stream...
  5. 02:07:685 (7) - 可以用NC來突顯重音
  6. 02:07:996 (8) - ^
  7. 02:09:134 (9) - NC該從這開始的(段落開始處)
  8. 02:20:720 (1,2,3) - 不均勻的間距 建議修好些
  9. 02:24:858 (8,9,10,11) - 可以轉一點點角度讓這pattern看起來比較不會那麼死板(例如:10∘或15∘)
  10. 03:02:099 (9) - 變速需要NC
  11. 03:15:340 (8) - 重音與段落開始 NC設在這吧
  12. 03:18:651 (5) - NC 因為03:16:996 (1) - 不同速度 所以需要用個NC來區別


Lundle's Taiko


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line (It doesn't affect to player. but I suggest you to remove it):
    01:47:927
    01:51:961 -
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:06:651 (1) - D?
  2. 00:07:685 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2) - sound d d k k d d k k it's better
  3. 00:17:616 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - try to use ddkkkdk?
  4. 00:18:858 (3,1,1,2,1) - dkkdd?
  5. 00:30:858 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - same as 00:17:616 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - d d k k d d k k ?
  6. 00:33:134 (7) - used K is better then D [imo]
  7. 01:07:892 (1) - K?
  8. 01:29:823 (4) - feel like k is better?
  9. 02:07:685 (4,5,6) - looks K K K is more fit then D D D [imo]
  10. 02:15:754 (1) - K?
  11. 02:42:030 - add note? (( It's a kinda empty here
  12. 03:29:823 (5,6,7) - kkd?
  13. 03:58:375 (3,1) - [suggestion] Umm... I think add spinner at the end it's not a good pattern (for Taiko). because in Taiko. spinner should batter the d and k. but it's not fit about the background at this song. so I suggest remove the spinner

Well~ Good luck~
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
so many!!!
认真看@.@
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

spboxer3 wrote:

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. offset目前:6651.27320882796 請一律調到整數
Fixed!

Innocent



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:08:513 - & 00:08:927 - 去tick聲吧 聽起來不怎適合 Fixed!
  2. 00:10:582 - & 00:10:996 - ^ Fixed!
  3. 00:13:478 - & 00:13:892 - ^ Fixed!
  4. 03:58:375 - 我會建議你找個類似像大鐘的聲音來做這邊的finish... 會適合許多 (在我的Hatsuki Yura - Yami no Kodomo tachi有類似的音效 你可以拿去將聲音放大些 就可以拿去用了) 虽然乃这个没问题...不过我感觉我这个直接默认finish也不错@.@


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:31:582 (1,1) - 其實我覺得這離中心太遠了些 對於最簡單的難度來說... 對新手來說有些困難了些 新手都喜欢玩大转盘....所以外面应该没问题 反而中心难打到
  2. 00:50:099 (4,5) - [nazi] 弧型(曲線)不同弧度 考慮修成一樣的弧度? ((我也知道這mod挺蠢的 但是每次看到這類的雙slider沒有相同弧度都會感覺不舒服 所已多少還是會提一下 至於是否會改就看你個人感覺~有些人認為打起來不影響所以不改 這也沒關係^^ 试着搞了下
  3. 01:26:099 (1) - 額... 未對稱?(水平對稱) 如果你認為有需要對稱那我幫你作個code Fixed!
    96,176,86099,6,0,B|355:48|191:-83|28:48|287:176,1,480,4|4
  4. 02:22:375 (1) - 這圖形我真心覺得不怎麼好看 原因:前段的弧度不夠大 所以看起來有些類直線 可能是個人不是很喜歡這種模稜兩可的感覺 所以我提出這點讓你作參考 Fixed!
  5. 02:45:547 (1,1) - 同00:31:582 (1,1) - 同
  6. 03:15:340 (1,2,3,4) - [suggestion] 給我的感覺不如用03:13:685 (1,2,3,4) - 去rotate 感覺會比較好些 就是一種比較流暢的感覺~不介意的話試試看吧~ 感觉自己的好.-.
  7. 03:43:582 (1,1) - 同00:31:582 (1,1) - 同

Guilty



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:06:858 - 去tick聲? Fixed!
  2. 00:14:616 - ^ Fixed!
  3. 01:46:996 - ^ Fixed!
  4. 01:47:202 - ^ Fixed!
  5. 01:48:651 - ^ Fixed!
  6. 01:50:616 - ^ Fixed!
  7. 01:51:961 - ^ Fixed!
  8. 03:58:375 - 同上一個難度~音效建議 同
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:44:720 (1,1,2,3) - 被spinner text給擋住了 這樣會影響到player的read的 所以最好改掉吧~ Fixed!
    photo
  2. 00:57:961 (1) - 建議在這加個note 因為這地方確實有個重音 如果直接用spinner就會少了一個重音的打擊感 並且 這難度應該可以算是hard了 所以我認為加個note在轉盤前應該是沒什麼問題的((spinner開始在00:58:065 - 吧 Fixed!
  3. 01:04:582 (11) - 感覺NC在這會比較適合些 因為這是段落的開頭處 而且這是重音 所以我認為這邊會比01:04:996 (1) - 用NC更加合適 stress,虽然乃说的有理有据 ..不过真心感觉我这样也没问题...而且看起来比较舒服..
  4. 01:14:513 (7) - 01:17:823 (12) - ...etc 同
  5. 02:32:306 (10)同樣的~NC問題 同
  6. 02:33:961 (5) - ^ ^
  7. 02:53:409 (4) - 是否考慮向上移動一個grid(size4) 然後把02:55:065 (5) - 的結尾與02:53:409 (4) -作stack? Fixed!

2夢((炸




  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:10:996 - 去tick聲 Fixed!
  2. 00:11:202 - ^ Fixed!
  3. 01:42:651 - 到01:55:892 - 之間同樣去tick吧 Fixed!
  4. 03:58:375 - 同樣建議音效 同
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:08:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 恩...其實這段節奏用o ooo o o會比較適合些 不過還是看你個人的看法 支持个人看法
  2. 00:57:134 (3,4,5,6,7) - 用多邊型工具去做吧~這個並不等距呢(由右上方的DS可以看出來並不是等距離的) ....这个....
  3. 01:44:306 (5,6,7,8,9) - 節奏同樣建議用o ooo o o 个人...
  4. 02:04:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - [nazi] 不夠圓的stream... 哭了我辛辛苦苦手动搞出来的..
  5. 02:07:685 (7) - 可以用NC來突顯重音 Fixed!
  6. 02:07:996 (8) - ^ Fixed!
  7. 02:09:134 (9) - NC該從這開始的(段落開始處) .-.
  8. 02:20:720 (1,2,3) - 不均勻的間距 建議修好些 Fixed!?
  9. 02:24:858 (8,9,10,11) - 可以轉一點點角度讓這pattern看起來比較不會那麼死板(例如:10∘或15∘) Fixed!
  10. 03:02:099 (9) - 變速需要NC
  11. 03:15:340 (8) - 重音與段落開始 NC設在這吧 Fixed!
  12. 03:18:651 (5) - NC 因為03:16:996 (1) - 不同速度 所以需要用個NC來區別 Fixed!


Well~ Good luck~

瞎 看起来也很累的样子
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from my queue

[General]
I think offset need to +4, but not a big deal o.o
lead-in=0 plz

[Innocent]
01:20:306 (4) - move it up a bit, it's nearly out of the screen
02:04:168 (3) - better to change a direction, it's kinda confusing now how many times it repeat
02:19:065 (1) - move it up a bit, it's out of the screen

[Guilty]
OD+1?
03:47:616 (8) - move it up a bit, it's out of the screen

[Nightmare]
OD+1
00:40:789 (7,8,9) - not on a line
01:14:720 (1) - change direction or it's nearly out of the screen
02:07:996 (1,1) - useless newcombo here, remove them?

[Lundle's Taiko]
use a taiko bg?
open .osu file and remove "2,102851,108071" under the "//Break Periods", pay attention not to save the diff agian after fixed this

改完在找我好了0.0
taiko记得update
Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
I think offset need to +4, but not a big deal o.o w not big deal...If I change this means that I will change other a lot of things
lead-in=0 plz done!

[Innocent]
01:20:306 (4) - move it up a bit, it's nearly out of the screen done!
02:04:168 (3) - better to change a direction, it's kinda confusing now how many times it repeat done!
02:19:065 (1) - move it up a bit, it's out of the screen done!

[Guilty]
OD+1? 我是善良mapper
03:47:616 (8) - move it up a bit, it's out of the screen done!

[Nightmare]
OD+1 我是善良mapper 不过这里改了貌似没多大关系,done
00:40:789 (7,8,9) - not on a line done!
01:14:720 (1) - change direction or it's nearly out of the screen done!
02:07:996 (1,1) - useless newcombo here, remove them? done!

[Lundle's Taiko]
use a taiko bg? .-.
open .osu file and remove "2,102851,108071" under the "//Break Periods", pay attention not to save the diff agian after fixed this done!

改完在找我好了0.0
taiko记得update
Waiting for Leorda's StoryBoard.
Lundlerol
651 posts
Joined May 2011
Lundlerol
thx mod wcx19911123 and spboxer3 >~<

Taiko http://puu.sh/IJGP
BG http://puu.sh/IJPp
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
SB Done~

http://puu.sh/JPNa
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Leorda wrote:

SB Done~

http://puu.sh/JPNa
Uploaded!
Thanks Leorda > <
Excellent StoryBoard!
BCI
1,081 posts
Joined May 2011
BCI
hi there~ mod time via my queue and sorry for the delay lol

[SB]
you don't use tree3.png or i don't see it lol, if this right, delete it and full-submit?

[Innocent]
00:33:961 (1,2) - i think these circles a bit too far from a spinner, beginners may confusing here
00:57:133 (3) - don't like sliders with two repeats. you may add here 2 short/1 long slider / other variations as you want. will be more creativity and fun to play.
01:53:409 (3) - ^
02:37:271 (0) - drag break into this bookmark?

[Guilty]
00:20:719 (2,4) - stack (4) under (2) ?
01:02:926 (6) - NC? over10 combo on hard isn't so kawaii :<
01:16:168 (6) - ^
03:12:030 (4) - ^

[Nightmare]
00:11:616 (2) - why no end it on white tick?
00:58:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - compose => create polygon circles. current stream is a bit, meh, unsymmetrically? D:
02:24:857 (8) - NC for square pattern?
02:29:202 (0) - add a note?
03:02:099 (1) - i try to make this slider more symmetric. screen and code below if you're interesting
~

235,161,182099,6,0,B|259:209|328:232|368:208|384:176|403:141|456:120|508:140|536:192,1,340,0|4

sorry for my poor mod, gl on this map~ /me runs
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
recheck

[sb]
there are many place that sb load>5.00
00:26:513 - 5.33
01:01:271 - 5.19
01:27:857 - 5.25
and so on, this need to be fixed
03:03:754 - also the tree3.png here, why it's not the same with other trees o.o? anyway, it looks kinda odd to me

[Lundle's Taiko]
still need to remove break and sb

call me back then
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

wcx19911123 wrote:

recheck

[sb]
there are many place that sb load>5.00
00:26:513 - 5.33
01:01:271 - 5.19
01:27:857 - 5.25
and so on, this need to be fixed
03:03:754 - also the tree3.png here, why it's not the same with other trees o.o? anyway, it looks kinda odd to me

[Lundle's Taiko]
still need to remove break and sb

call me back then
all done
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
fine now
bubbled
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

wcx19911123 wrote:

fine now
bubbled
> < ..
来 拿好 15kds
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd
这么多星，不科学啊QAQ

祝早日rank

EDIT: T T对不起我只是随手路过……
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Snowy Dream
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Joined September 2009
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

eikkaleyd wrote:

这么多星，不科学啊QAQ

祝早日rank
我以为被戳泡了T T
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