1. Pretty nice enough :3

1. 00:57:130 - add a note and overlap with the 00:57:267 (2) -
2. 01:22:028 (2,3) - it's better to change there situation like what you did 01:20:396 (5,6) - , or you can use 5 notes instead
3. 02:12:641 (6,7) - a liitle fast if you put such pattren like this, I prefer a slider from 02:12:777 to 02:13:185

1. 00:57:130 (1) - I prefer it overlap with the 00:56:586 (2) - , it's not good for stop here.
   
   Sample

   
2. 01:25:702 (5,6) - ctrl+g
3. 01:36:450 (1) - remove NC
4. 01:36:722 (2) - NC
5. 01:36:858 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:37:130 (2) - NC
7. 03:05:021 (1,2,3) - I prefer a reverse slider here, it's just a buffer between those side.
   
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KayeSara wrote:

[Normal]

1. Pretty nice enough :3

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[Insane]

1. 00:57:130 (1) - I prefer it overlap with the 00:56:586 (2) - , it's not good for stop here. move note but not overlap
   
   Sample

   
2. 01:25:702 (5,6) - ctrl+g ok
3. 01:36:450 (1) - remove NC fixed
4. 01:36:722 (2) - NC fixed
5. 01:36:858 (1) - remove NC fixed
6. 01:37:130 (2) - NC fixed
7. 03:05:021 (1,2,3) - I prefer a reverse slider here, it's just a buffer between those side. no changed
   
   Sample

   

Pretty Nice song and awesome mapping style :3 I'm glad to hear that

KayeSara wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:57:130 - add a note and overlap with the 00:57:267 (2) - ok
2. 01:22:028 (2,3) - it's better to change there situation like what you did 01:20:396 (5,6) - , or you can use 5 notes instead no
3. 02:12:641 (6,7) - a liitle fast if you put such pattren like this, I prefer a slider from 02:12:777 to 02:13:185 no

1. Mapsets must have at least two osu! standard or Taiko difficulties, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level. It is possible for Marathon difficulties to have only 1 difficulty, but it must be named Marathon for the BSS to allow the submission to pending

   So you have to add another taiko diff

1. 00:36:042 (3) - This slider is hidden by hitburst of 00:35:090 (4,5), made it hard to tell this is a slider or some note, maybe you can move this slider to another place just in case it's been hidden
   

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Mapsets must have at least two osu! standard or Taiko difficulties, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level. It is possible for Marathon difficulties to have only 1 difficulty, but it must be named Marathon for the BSS to allow the submission to pending

   So you have to add another taiko diff

No problem imo because this map made over 5 months ago. so the rule is not applied this map. For example osu.ppy.sh/s/55318
[Insane]

1. 00:36:042 (3) - This slider is hidden by hitburst of 00:35:090 (4,5), made it hard to tell this is a slider or some note, maybe you can move this slider to another place just in case it's been hidden
   

Relocationed this part
Others looked fine, when you added taiko diff and get some mod of that taiko diff. call me back for a recheck

Milkshake wrote:

better qulity bg

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
AR -1 plays a lot better no changed AR9 is best imo because I feel bodily sensation over BPM 200
OD +1 changed

02:37:266 (3,4,5,6) - This would be better if you positioned it like you did with other patterns like at 02:43:797 (3,4,5,6) - so it doesn't look like a sequential pattern. ok changed
Use that sexy BG that Milkshake provided ;D of course! changed great Milkshake'sBG XD

lord bishop wrote:

I really want to know the name of this song in Japanese, please...