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FreeSky
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Joined January 2011
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FreeSky

h-728 wrote:

こんにちわ。再びお邪魔します。

[General]
  1. リズムが同じところはもう少しスペースを整えたほうが綺麗に見えると思います。
  2. 特にInsaneで感じたのですが、スライダーの上にほかのオブジェクトが重なっていて見づらいところがあるので
    配置の変更を検討してみてください。
指摘ありがとうございます！
意識してみますー

[Normal]
  1. AIbatより、スナップされていないオブジェクトや緑線がありました。
    SPOILER

    AIBat v2.0 wrote:

    Snapping
    00:35:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:45:043 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:46:276 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:46:687 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:54:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:56:139 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:05:180 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:06:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:15:043 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:15:865 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:16:687 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:19:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:20:180 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:21:002 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:21:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:25:317 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:34:358 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:34:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:46:687 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:54:495 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:05:591 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:06:413 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:06:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:21:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:24:495 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:26:139 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:29:632 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).

    Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
    01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
    01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
    01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
    01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
    01:32:817 (snap to 01:32:815)
    01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
    01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
    02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
    02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)
fixed

[Hard]
  1. Normalに同じです。
    SPOILER

    AIBat v2.0 wrote:

    Snapping
    00:30:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:31:276 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:34:358 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:35:591 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:36:002 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:40:728 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:41:550 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:45:043 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:45:865 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:46:687 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:50:180 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:50:385 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
    00:54:906 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:56:139 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:04:358 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:05:180 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:06:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:09:906 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:11:139 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:14:324 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:16:687 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:19:769 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:21:002 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:25:317 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:29:632 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:31:276 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:34:050 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:34:358 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:34:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:36:824 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:49:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:50:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:50:591 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:51:002 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:51:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:54:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:56:858 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:59:632 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:05:591 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:06:413 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:06:824 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:09:495 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:09:906 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:10:317 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:15:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:16:687 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:25:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:26:139 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
    04:24:288 (3) - Unsnapped circle.

    Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
    01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
    01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
    01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
    01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
    01:30:043 (snap to 01:30:041)
    01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
    01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
    02:09:495 (snap to 02:09:493)
    02:09:906 (snap to 02:09:904)
    02:10:317 (snap to 02:10:315)
    02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
    02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)
fixed

[Insane]
  1. Normalに同じです。
    SPOILER

    AIBat v2.0 wrote:

    Snapping
    00:28:502 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:30:865 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:31:276 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:34:769 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:35:180 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:36:002 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:36:413 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:36:824 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:40:728 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:41:550 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:42:680 (12) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:44:632 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:45:454 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:49:050 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:49:358 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:49:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:50:180 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:51:824 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:54:906 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    00:55:728 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    00:56:139 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:00:043 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:01:687 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:04:358 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:05:591 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:06:002 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:07:543 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:09:495 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:09:906 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:11:139 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:12:680 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:15:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:15:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:15:865 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:16:276 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:18:228 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:19:358 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:20:180 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:20:591 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:20:694 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:20:797 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:21:002 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:21:413 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:21:824 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:24:187 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:24:495 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:25:317 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:25:728 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:28:913 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:29:632 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:30:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:30:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:31:276 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:34:358 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:34:769 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:36:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:49:461 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:49:769 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:50:180 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:50:591 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:51:002 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:51:413 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:51:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:56:858 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:56:961 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:59:632 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:00:043 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:03:228 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:05:180 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:06:002 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:06:413 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:06:824 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:07:543 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
    02:09:187 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:09:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:09:906 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:10:317 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:11:550 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:16:687 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:24:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:24:906 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:25:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:26:139 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:26:550 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    02:28:913 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
    02:29:632 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).

    Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
    01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
    01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
    01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
    01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
    01:30:043 (snap to 01:30:041)
    01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
    01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
    02:09:495 (snap to 02:09:493)
    02:09:906 (snap to 02:09:904)
    02:10:317 (snap to 02:10:315)
    02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
    02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)
    fixed
  2. 00:38:467 (9,1) - 急に間隔が狭くなるので混乱しやすいです。
  3. 01:30:659 (5,1) - もう少し広く間を取ったほうがいい気がします。
  4. 01:54:493 ~ 01:55:932 - 何かnoteが欲しいです。
  5. 02:13:193 (8,9) - ここだけ間隔が違います。
  6. 03:10:317 (3,4) - リズムが違うので、等間隔で配置するのは好ましくないです。
  7. 03:13:810 (4,5) - リズムが同じなので、等間隔で配置するのが好ましいです。
  8. 03:52:851 (1) - 03:54:495 で終わる。
  9. 04:53:467 (1) - 04:53:673 で始めて、04:56:139 で終わる。
all fixed

snapに関しては修正してください。
他は提案ですので、無視して頂いても結構です。
頑張ってください :)
ありがとう :) がんばります！
DarkSkyKnight
64 posts
Joined June 2012
DarkSkyKnight
[Normal]
00:31:481 (3) - arrange the combo so that it looks like this maybe?

00:33:535 - add a note here :)
00:35:178 (2,3) - visually these two notes are too near
00:46:276 (4) - put this here: 00:46:069
01:04:974 (1,2,3) - merge to repeat slider maybe
01:06:618 (1,2,3) - ^ but maybe add a fourth beat as well.
01:08:261 - add a note?
01:11:550 (1,2,3,4) - this part doesn't fit the rhythm of the music...like this maybe:

01:15:043 (1) - move to here: 01:14:836 and maybe change the combo so it looks like this...:

01:59:015 (3) - maybe change the rhythm to this:

02:09:700 (1,1,2,3) - the distance spacing here is a bit small compared to before the spinner, which makes it a bit confusing.
02:21:411 - Add a note here?
02:23:878 (4,5,6,1) - A bit hard for a Normal difficulty.
02:25:726 - Add a note here?
03:03:947 (3) - Delete 3 and move Slider 4 here maybe.
03:37:234 (4) - Move this here: 03:37:029
03:38:879 - Add note
03:39:289 (2) - Delete 2 and move Slider 3 here
03:39:906 - Add note
03:43:604 (1,2) - Feels awkward, remove 2 maybe
03:46:892 (2) - Change it to this:
?
04:39:700 (3) - Move this here: 04:39:495

[Hard]
00:38:673 (1,2,3) - Put 3 directly below 2. (x 256 y 144)
01:15:659 (3,4) - Position them so that they match the shape of Slider 1 and 2. Use rotation...
03:41:344 - Add a note

It is a very nice map :)

[Insane]
00:44:426 (3,4) - Is this position intentional, because a circle intersecting a slider like this seems awkward
04:52:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seems unnatural

Insane was very well done as well, the jumps are really well done, it feels very natural.
But i think you should work on the overall look since the overlapping of circles and sliders seems unnatural to me.
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

DarkSkyKnight wrote:

[Normal]
00:31:481 (3) - arrange the combo so that it looks like this maybe?

fixed
00:33:535 - add a note here :) fixed
00:35:178 (2,3) - visually these two notes are too near no changed
00:46:276 (4) - put this here: 00:46:069 fixed
01:04:974 (1,2,3) - merge to repeat slider maybe fixed
01:06:618 (1,2,3) - ^ but maybe add a fourth beat as well. fixed
01:08:261 - add a note? fixed
01:11:550 (1,2,3,4) - this part doesn't fit the rhythm of the music...like this maybe:

fixed!!

01:15:043 (1) - move to here: 01:14:836 and maybe change the combo so it looks like this...:

hmm.. I feel good your rhythm. But I put just ugly... I considering now.

01:59:015 (3) - maybe change the rhythm to this:

fixed
02:09:700 (1,1,2,3) - the distance spacing here is a bit small compared to before the spinner, which makes it a bit confusing.
fixed :)
02:21:411 - Add a note here? fixed
02:23:878 (4,5,6,1) - A bit hard for a Normal difficulty. fixed
02:25:726 - Add a note here? fixed
03:03:947 (3) - Delete 3 and move Slider 4 here maybe. fixed
03:37:234 (4) - Move this here: 03:37:029 fixed
03:38:879 - Add note fixed
03:39:289 (2) - Delete 2 and move Slider 3 here fixed
03:39:906 - Add note fixed
03:43:604 (1,2) - Feels awkward, remove 2 maybe fixed
03:46:892 (2) - Change it to this:
?
fixed
04:39:700 (3) - Move this here: 04:39:495 fixed

[Hard]
00:38:673 (1,2,3) - Put 3 directly below 2. (x 256 y 144) sorry no change
01:15:659 (3,4) - Position them so that they match the shape of Slider 1 and 2. Use rotation...fixed
03:41:344 - Add a note fixed

It is a very nice map :)
Thank you :D

[Insane]
00:44:426 (3,4) - Is this position intentional, because a circle intersecting a slider like this seems awkward considering...

04:52:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seems unnatural
fixed. But I don't feel good.. I considering now.

Insane was very well done as well, the jumps are really well done, it feels very natural.
But i think you should work on the overall look since the overlapping of circles and sliders seems unnatural to me.
Thank you~ :D
HAPPY! I was praised :oops:

Nice Mod!
Aldwych
2,831 posts
Joined February 2012
Aldwych
Hello frsk

[Normal]

00:33:535 NC and disable next?
01:25:110 Add circle?
02:212:062 ^
03:20:591 You can change the circle by a spinner and finish to the next circle
03:43:605 No need to NC imo.

[Hard]

01:54:493 You can change by a slider with a slow SV to 01:55:521 for example
02:07:233 Spinner should be start at 02:07:439, no?
04:29:632 NC?
04:42:577 NC?

[Insane]

00:40:110 NC?
03:33:536 NC?

Hope it could help you! :)
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

Aldwych wrote:

Hello frsk
Hi~ :)

[Normal]

00:33:535 NC and disable next? sorry no changed
01:25:110 Add circle? fixed

02:212:062 ^
This place is blue line. you mean the next line? I put this.

03:20:591 You can change the circle by a spinner and finish to the next circle sorry no changed
03:43:605 No need to NC imo. fixed

[Hard]

01:54:493 You can change by a slider with a slow SV to 01:55:521 for example sorry no changed
02:07:233 Spinner should be start at 02:07:439, no? that's nice :D
04:29:632 NC? fixed
04:42:577 NC? fixed

[Insane]

00:40:110 NC? fixed
03:33:536 NC? fixed

Hope it could help you! :)
Thank you Mod!!
ArtBox_old
105 posts
Joined February 2012
ArtBox_old
Hello～　From#modrequest

suggestions

[General]
osbファイルは使用していなければ削除して下さい

[Nomal]
SPOILER
この二つは合わせて提案↓
00:31:481 (3) - x:116 y:220
00:32:302 (4) - 一回削除した後、手前の3をコピーしてリピート追加
　　　　　　　　　　　その後、角度を+124℃曲げてx:312 y:92へ（イメージ↓）
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:33:946 (6,7) - この音取りはどうでしょうか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　

00:40:522 (2,3) - この音取りはどうでしょうか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　

00:43:399 (1,2,3) - こんな配置はどうでしょう？↓


00:46:069 (4,5,1,2) - こんな配置はどうですか？


00:47:096 (6,7,8,9,10) - この音取りはどうでしょう？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　9,10辺りにスライダーだと違和感を感じたので
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　サークルに置き換え、スピナーは00:50:384～00:52:028で
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

01:03:535 (1) - こんな配置はどうでしょう？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　

01:09:288 (2) - ここで直線一本は目立つので曲線の方が良いかも↓
　　　　　　　　　　　

01:14:219 (6) - 4のスライダーで6の数字が隠れてるのでずらした方が良いかもしれません
01:16:687 (4,5) - 音取りと合わせてこれはどうですか？↓（音取りは今のままでも大丈夫です）
　　　　　　　　　　　　先に01:16:687 (4) - を削除して01:16:480と01:16:891にadd note
　　　　　　　　　　　　(使えるスペースが狭いので、上に流れるのはあれかもしれません)
　　　　　　　　　　　　

01:18:125 (1) - この音取りはどうですか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　

01:20:180 (1) - ～ 01:25:110 (2) - この間が全て赤線に乗っていて、音を取れているようには思えません
01:47:714 (1,2,3,4) - この間のＤＳが0.80xでないのは意図的でしょうか？
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　私はＤＳ0.80xで揃えるべきだと思います
01:49:974 (1,2,3,4) - ^

02:28:810 (4) - 許容範囲な気もしますが、少し難しいのでは？（Easyの難易度がないので、微妙ですが）
04:13:399 (1) - 一瞬だけのこの短いスライダーのリピートは難しいです
04:18:947 (2,3,4) - 三角形になるように

04:52:645 (1) - 中心に（ＤＳ外しても大丈夫だと思います）
or
04:52:645 (1) - 削除してスピナーをこの位置から引いて04:55:728でスピナーの終わりに

[Hard]
SPOILER
全体的にスライダーの下にサークルやスライダーのサークル部分が来ています
これは個人的にかなり見た目が悪いです、上に配置するか、スタック、もしくは位置を
ずらしてあげると綺麗に見えると思います

02:29:630 (1) - ここから 02:34:358 (4) - ここまで綺麗に作られているので、
　　　　　　　　 これを参考にすると良いと思います（全体的に流れが悪いので）

これらの提案はあくまでイメージです
00:27:577 (3,4,5) - 流れよくこんなイメージに↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

00:32:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - ↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

00:34:974 (4,5,6,7,8) - ↓


00:55:522 (4,5,6,1) - ↓



01:14:221 (3,4,5) - スタックさせるか、もう少しスライダーの流れの先にサークルが来るようにした方が良いと思います

01:23:262 (5) - こういった配置はかなり目立ちます、スタックさせた方がまだ綺麗かと(ごめんなさい、スルーして下さい)

00:36:002 (8) - HPバーにあたっています

01:46:892 (4) - ここは数字が出るように配置されては？

02:33:947 (3) - 若干曲がってるので、真ん中の支点を左にちょっとだけずらして下さい

02:34:563 (5) - ここは02:33:947 (3) - のコピーで良いかと

02:43:193 (2,3,4,5,6) - この流れは変えたほうが良いと思います

04:17:097 (6) - この配置はかなり危ないです


[Insane]
SPOILER
00:28:810 (8) - スライダーの上に乗らないように
02:49:152 (1) - ^

01:10:726 (1,2) - clap削除してデフォルトのwhistle
01:11:139 (3) - clap削除
01:22:645 (8) - ここまでの流れが良く出来ているので、
　　　　　　　　　　　スライダーを綺麗にしてあげると良いと思います

01:26:960 (2,3,4) - BPMが低いので大半の人は押せる位置だとは思いますが、
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　ちょっと急な位置かなと思いました

01:49:459 (1) - 見た目で言えば、ＮＣ入れて色を揃えた方が良い気もします
　　　　　　　　　　　が、歌に合わせるなら曲調変わってるのでこのままでも良いです

02:01:481 (5,6,7) - DS0.80xで等間隔に

02:04:974 (3,4,5) - 2のスライダーの先に来るように

02:50:385 (6) - こんな感じの方が流れるように打てると思います↓（少し適当ですが）
　　　　　　　　　　　（上に持って来てあげると良いと思います）
　　　　　　　　　　　

04:09:906 (1) - 位置が重ならないように

04:18:330 (1) - 水平で良いかと（一回作り直してから、きちんと水平にならないので）

04:41:755 (3) - もう少し数字が見えるように

[Added]
SPOILER
Edit画面からFileを選択してAIModを開いてください
（こんな画面が出ると思います↓これはNomalです）


この他の難易度も全てスナップエラー（線の上にきちんと乗っていない）が出ていますので直しましょう
一応直したのを上げておきます http://puu.sh/BuvE
（使われても良いし、ご自分で直されても大丈夫です）

+Insaneだと、こんなエラーが出ています↓


これは、01:49:767 の緑線がSV0.75xになっているからだと思います
（ここにスライダーがないので、多分設定ミスだと思います。ちょっと確信ないのであれですが・・・）


Sorry for the short MOD :?
Good luck! :oops:
Last edited by ArtBox_old , edited 9 times in total.
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

ArtBox wrote:

Hello～　From#modrequest
Hi~ thank you~ :)

suggestions

[General]
osbファイルは使用していなければ削除して下さい fixed

[Nomal]
SPOILER
この二つは合わせて提案↓
00:31:481 (3) - x:116 y:220
00:32:302 (4) - 一回削除した後、手前の3をコピーしてリピート追加
　　　　　　　　　　　その後、角度を+124℃曲げてx:312 y:92へ（イメージ↓）
　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

00:33:946 (6,7) - この音取りはどうでしょうか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

00:40:522 (2,3) - この音取りはどうでしょうか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

00:43:399 (1,2,3) - こんな配置はどうでしょう？↓

fixed

00:46:069 (4,5,1,2) - こんな配置はどうですか？

fixed

00:47:096 (6,7,8,9,10) - この音取りはどうでしょう？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　9,10辺りにスライダーだと違和感を感じたので
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　サークルに置き換え、スピナーは00:50:384～00:52:028で
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:03:535 (1) - こんな配置はどうでしょう？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:09:288 (2) - ここで直線一本は目立つので曲線の方が良いかも↓
　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:14:219 (6) - 4のスライダーで6の数字が隠れてるのでずらした方が良いかもしれません fixed

01:16:687 (4,5) - 音取りと合わせてこれはどうですか？↓（音取りは今のままでも大丈夫です）
　　　　　　　　　　　　先に01:16:687 (4) - を削除して01:16:480と01:16:891にadd note
　　　　　　　　　　　　(使えるスペースが狭いので、上に流れるのはあれかもしれません)
　　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:18:125 (1) - この音取りはどうですか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:20:180 (1) - ～ 01:25:110 (2) - この間が全て赤線に乗っていて、音を取れているようには思えません fixed
01:47:714 (1,2,3,4) - この間のＤＳが0.80xでないのは意図的でしょうか？
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　私はＤＳ0.80xで揃えるべきだと思います
01:49:974 (1,2,3,4) - ^
見落としてました :? 　修正しました

02:28:810 (4) - 許容範囲な気もしますが、少し難しいのでは？（Easyの難易度がないので、微妙ですが）
fixed

04:13:399 (1) - 一瞬だけのこの短いスライダーのリピートは難しいです
リピート削除しました

04:18:947 (2,3,4) - 三角形になるようにfixed

04:52:645 (1) - 中心に（ＤＳ外しても大丈夫だと思います）
or
04:52:645 (1) - 削除してスピナーをこの位置から引いて04:55:728でスピナーの終わりに
中心にもってきました


ごめんなさい、途中で力尽きました・・・orz
他の難易度は近いうちにＭＯＤして追記します(糞ＭＯＤですがorz)
いえいえ、ありがとう！ :)
Normalは自信ないので助かります！

Sorry for the short MOD :?
Good luck! :oops:
Thank you Modding :)
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
Hi~ from my queue~

[Insane]

00:44:630 - add clap
00:45:041 - remove clap
00:45:454 (7) - add clap
00:45:863 - remove
00:46:274 - clap
00:46:685 - remove
00:47:096 - clap
00:47:507 - remove
00:47:918 - clap
00:48:329 - remove
00:48:740 - clap
00:49:152 (3) - remove
00:49:563 (6) - clap
00:49:973 - remove
00:49:050 (2) - clap
00:50:795 - remove
00:51:206 - clap
00:51:617 - remove
00:51:824 (5) - maybe clap?
00:59:837 (1) - remove
01:00:247 - clap
01:00:658 - remove
01:01:069 - clap
01:03:535 - ^
01:04:973 - ^
01:05:178 - remove
01:05:796 (4) - remove whistle and add clap
01:06:002 (5) - remove clap and add whistle
01:06:617 - clap
01:06:822 - remove
01:07:645 (5) - ^
01:07:851 (6) - clap
01:09:288 - remove
01:16:070 (3) - remove finish
01:16:480 - ^
01:17:507 - ^
01:32:918 - ^
01:59:014 - clap
02:01:070 (4) - finish
02:07:028 - remove
02:07:439 - finish
02:10:932 - ^
02:13:399 (9) - remove finish
02:14:219 - finish
02:27:165 - remove
02:34:152 (3) - ^
03:40:728 - ^
03:45:454 (7) - finish
04:07:440 - remove
04:07:645 (4) - REMOVE
04:11:960 (2) - ^
04:46:687 - ^
04:46:892 - ^
04:49:769 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - REMOVE THEM!

Sorry, that's all for me. PLEASE USE Distane Snap!
When you fix all mistakestoo many mistakes, i will mod it again. I'm sorry.. ._.
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~

[Insane]

00:44:630 - add clap
00:45:041 - remove clap
00:45:454 (7) - add clap
00:45:863 - remove
00:46:274 - clap
fixed

00:46:685 - remove
00:47:096 - clap
00:47:507 - remove
00:47:918 - clap
00:48:329 - remove
00:48:740 - clap
00:49:152 (3) - remove
sorry no change

00:49:563 (6) - clap
00:49:973 - remove
00:49:050 (2) - clap
00:50:795 - remove
00:51:206 - clap
00:51:617 - remove
00:51:824 (5) - maybe clap?
00:59:837 (1) - remove
01:00:247 - clap
01:00:658 - remove
01:01:069 - clap
01:03:535 - ^
01:04:973 - ^
01:05:178 - remove
01:05:796 (4) - remove whistle and add clap
01:06:002 (5) - remove clap and add whistle
01:06:617 - clap
01:06:822 - remove
01:07:645 (5) - ^
01:07:851 (6) - clap
01:09:288 - remove
fixed

01:16:070 (3) - remove finish
01:16:480 - ^
01:17:507 - ^
sorry no change

01:32:918 - ^
01:59:014 - clap
02:01:070 (4) - finish
02:07:028 - remove
02:07:439 - finish
02:10:932 - ^
02:13:399 (9) - remove finish
02:14:219 - finish
fixed

02:27:165 - remove
02:34:152 (3) - ^
sorry no change

03:40:728 - ^
03:45:454 (7) - finish
04:07:440 - remove
04:07:645 (4) - REMOVE
fixed

04:11:960 (2) - ^
change whistle

04:46:687 - ^
04:46:892 - ^
04:49:769 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - REMOVE THEM!
fixed

Sorry, that's all for me. PLEASE USE Distane Snap!
When you fix all mistakestoo many mistakes, i will mod it again. I'm sorry.. ._.
hmm.. I don't think mistakes. Intentional Distanse Snap.
When other Modder point them, I'll fix. :?
Thank you Modding!!
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
from #modreq

[General]
  1. 02:29:838 (T) - why +2ms here? if you're trying to reset the signature, make sure there is no difference with the former one (as the bpm/offset doesn't change)
  2. check the unsnapped notes with AIMod (ctrl shift a)
[insane]
  1. 01:38:056 (1,2,3) - just stack them or keep the normal spacing, don't see why sudden shortened, as the rhythm or pace didn't change at all.
  2. 02:56:139 (2,3,4) - ^
  3. 03:36:207 (6,7,8) - make the spacing more smooth
  4. 04:51:002 (7,8) - how about just a 1/4 slider here?
  5. 04:52:440 (1,2) - remove them?
[Hard]
  1. 00:44:015 (3) - clap at the end
  2. 01:01:070 (2) - clap
  3. 01:02:714 (4) - ^
  4. 01:04:358 (4,5) - ^
  5. 01:15:248 (2) - clap at the end (c1)
  6. 01:55:726 (T) - 1 more note here
  7. 02:33:536 (2) - c1 clap
  8. 02:46:481 (2) - c1 clap at the end
  9. 03:44:221 (6) - replace this with 1/2 slider?
  10. 03:47:714 (5) - shorten it to 03:48:125 and add a note at 03:48:331?
  11. 04:51:618 (1) - end this at 04:52:646
  12. 04:52:851 (1) - replace this with a slider and end at 04:53:262?
[Normal]
  1. 04:52:851 (1) - end this at the same time as other diffs.
  2. 00:56:960 (2) - end this at 00:57:576
  3. 00:58:604 (4) - let this start at 00:58:398 and end at 00:59:014, add a note at 00:59:425. the current slider just stays nowhere
  4. 03:02:303 (1,2,3) - spacing
  5. 03:15:454 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 03:36:002 (3) - make this end at 03:36:618
  7. 03:42:166 (3) - make this end at 03:42:802
  8. 03:47:098 (2,3) - not fitting the vocal here, rhythm is like 3/4 3/4 4/4 1/4
good luck
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
はろーはろー

[General]
Easyを作るか、Normalのスターレーティングを最低でも3.25以下にしてください。
最近modしてなかったのでルールが変わってるかもしれませんが、☆3以下のdiffが必須だったと思います。

[Insane]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!


赤線　　　=downbeat
青線　　　=backbeat

パターンを作って音をつける場合、基本的にはそのパターンに従って音を置いて、曲による変化だとか、自分の感覚でところどころ音を変えます。
良くあるパターンだと、ダウンビート(1,3拍目)はfinish系の音か、何も音をつけないことが多いです。
バックビート(2,4拍目)にはclap系の音を置くことが多いです。
Insaneを見てみると、00:40:521から00:42:987までは2,4拍目にclapを置くパターンになっています。
ところが、00:43:398から00:46:274からは1,3拍目にclapを置くパターン、00:46:685からは2,4拍目にclapを置くパターンに戻っています。
Hitsoundのつけ方はmapperの好みだと(僕は)思いますが、パターンを作る場合はダウンビートにどんなパターンを置くか、バックビートにどんなパターンを置くかを意識して作ったほうが良いと思います。

00:40:110 (1)　　　　remove clap　　音が無いほうがかっこいいきがする!
02:10:521 (9)　　　　中心に置いた方が良いと思います　modとは関係がないですが綺麗な図形配置の作り方を一応!
SPOILER

①　適当な位置にサークルを置く
②　Ctrl+C,Ctrl+V,Ctrl+Shift+R 6角形:60度　5角形:72度 etc
③　②を繰り返し
02:51:002 (7)　　　　Add New combo
02:52:029 (3)　　　　Remove New combo
03:16:892 (1)　　　　^
03:31:276 (8)　　　　リズムが分かりづらいので近づけたほうが良いと思います。
03:35:591 (4)　　　　Add New combo　こんな配置はどうですか!
SPOILER
　
03:36:618 (7)　　　　もうちょっと離した方が良いと思います。こんな配置はどうですか!
SPOILER
03:45:865 (1)~(4)　DS揃えたほうがいいと思います
04:48:536 (1)　　　　Remove New combo
04:49:769 (3)　　　　Add New combo

[Hard]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!

00:58:192 (x)　　　　Add note
01:09:083 (~)　　　　音取りに違和感を感じます。こんな感じの音取りどうでしょうか
SPOILER
01:16:480 (~)　　　　こんなかんじの音取りはどうでしょうか!
SPOILER
01:21:411 (x)　　　　Add note
01:27:987 (~)　　　　こんなかんじは!
SPOILER
03:14:016~03:15:865　　マッピングしたほうが良いと思います　　　　　
03:39:906 (4)　　　　スライダーの終わりを03:40:317に
03:42:577 (3)　　　　スライダーの終わりを03:42:783に
03:47:714 (5)　　　　もっと離したほうがいいとおもいます!
04:09:906 (~)　　　　こんな音取りはどうですか!
SPOILER

[Normal]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!

00:54:288 (~)　　　　こんな音取りどうですか!
SPOILER
00:56:959 (~)　　　　こんなかんじは
SPOILER
01:24:699 (~)　　　　こんな(r
SPOILER
01:52:028 (1)　　　　Remove New combo
02:06:411 (~)　　　　すこし分かりづらい気がします。　こんなかんじは!
SPOILER
02:37:646 (~)　　　　ここから始めるとわかりづらいです　こんなかんじは
SPOILER
03:47:098 (2)　　　　難しいと思います　ふつうに単発にしてみては！
SPOILER

以上です！

ぐっどらっく！！
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

Colin Hou wrote:

from #modreq

[General]
  1. 02:29:838 (T) - why +2ms here? if you're trying to reset the signature, make sure there is no difference with the former one (as the bpm/offset doesn't change)
  2. check the unsnapped notes with AIMod (ctrl shift a)
fixed +2ms
I didn't know AIMod.Thank you :D

[insane]
  1. 01:38:056 (1,2,3) - just stack them or keep the normal spacing, don't see why sudden shortened, as the rhythm or pace didn't change at all.
  2. 02:56:139 (2,3,4) - ^
  3. 03:36:207 (6,7,8) - make the spacing more smooth
  4. 04:51:002 (7,8) - how about just a 1/4 slider here?
  5. 04:52:440 (1,2) - remove them?
All fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:44:015 (3) - clap at the end
  2. 01:01:070 (2) - clap
  3. 01:02:714 (4) - ^
  4. 01:04:358 (4,5) - ^
  5. 01:15:248 (2) - clap at the end (c1)
  6. 01:55:726 (T) - 1 more note here
  7. 02:33:536 (2) - c1 clap
  8. 02:46:481 (2) - c1 clap at the end
  9. 03:44:221 (6) - replace this with 1/2 slider?
  10. 03:47:714 (5) - shorten it to 03:48:125 and add a note at 03:48:331?
  11. 04:51:618 (1) - end this at 04:52:646
  12. 04:52:851 (1) - replace this with a slider and end at 04:53:262?
All fixed

[Normal]
  1. 04:52:851 (1) - end this at the same time as other diffs.
  2. 00:56:960 (2) - end this at 00:57:576
  3. 00:58:604 (4) - let this start at 00:58:398 and end at 00:59:014, add a note at 00:59:425. the current slider just stays nowhere
  4. 03:02:303 (1,2,3) - spacing
  5. 03:15:454 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 03:36:002 (3) - make this end at 03:36:618
  7. 03:42:166 (3) - make this end at 03:42:802
  8. 03:47:098 (2,3) - not fitting the vocal here, rhythm is like 3/4 3/4 4/4 1/4
All fixed

good luck
Thank you Modding!! :)
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

terametis wrote:

はろーはろー

[General]
Easyを作るか、Normalのスターレーティングを最低でも3.25以下にしてください。
最近modしてなかったのでルールが変わってるかもしれませんが、☆3以下のdiffが必須だったと思います。
いつのまにか超えてた・・・　
3.25以下になるようにしてみましたが、今後のModでどうしても超えてしまうようならEasyを作る方針でいきます

[Insane]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed


赤線　　　=downbeat
青線　　　=backbeat

パターンを作って音をつける場合、基本的にはそのパターンに従って音を置いて、曲による変化だとか、自分の感覚でところどころ音を変えます。
良くあるパターンだと、ダウンビート(1,3拍目)はfinish系の音か、何も音をつけないことが多いです。
バックビート(2,4拍目)にはclap系の音を置くことが多いです。
Insaneを見てみると、00:40:521から00:42:987までは2,4拍目にclapを置くパターンになっています。
ところが、00:43:398から00:46:274からは1,3拍目にclapを置くパターン、00:46:685からは2,4拍目にclapを置くパターンに戻っています。
Hitsoundのつけ方はmapperの好みだと(僕は)思いますが、パターンを作る場合はダウンビートにどんなパターンを置くか、バックビートにどんなパターンを置くかを意識して作ったほうが良いと思います。
メモ帳にはっときます！

00:40:110 (1)　　　　remove clap　　音が無いほうがかっこいいきがする!
02:10:521 (9)　　　　中心に置いた方が良いと思います　modとは関係がないですが綺麗な図形配置の作り方を一応!
SPOILER

①　適当な位置にサークルを置く
②　Ctrl+C,Ctrl+V,Ctrl+Shift+R 6角形:60度　5角形:72度 etc
③　②を繰り返し
02:51:002 (7)　　　　Add New combo
02:52:029 (3)　　　　Remove New combo
03:16:892 (1)　　　　^
03:31:276 (8)　　　　リズムが分かりづらいので近づけたほうが良いと思います。
03:35:591 (4)　　　　Add New combo　こんな配置はどうですか!
SPOILER
　
03:36:618 (7)　　　　もうちょっと離した方が良いと思います。こんな配置はどうですか!
SPOILER
03:45:865 (1)~(4)　DS揃えたほうがいいと思います
04:48:536 (1)　　　　Remove New combo
04:49:769 (3)　　　　Add New combo
All fixed

[Hard]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed

00:58:192 (x)　　　　Add note
01:09:083 (~)　　　　音取りに違和感を感じます。こんな感じの音取りどうでしょうか
SPOILER
01:16:480 (~)　　　　こんなかんじの音取りはどうでしょうか!
SPOILER
01:21:411 (x)　　　　Add note
01:27:987 (~)　　　　こんなかんじは!
SPOILER
03:14:016~03:15:865　　マッピングしたほうが良いと思います　　　　　
03:39:906 (4)　　　　スライダーの終わりを03:40:317に
03:42:577 (3)　　　　スライダーの終わりを03:42:783に
03:47:714 (5)　　　　もっと離したほうがいいとおもいます!
04:09:906 (~)　　　　こんな音取りはどうですか!
SPOILER
All fixed

[Normal]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed

00:54:288 (~)　　　　こんな音取りどうですか!
SPOILER
00:56:959 (~)　　　　こんなかんじは
SPOILER
01:24:699 (~)　　　　こんな(r
SPOILER
01:52:028 (1)　　　　Remove New combo
02:06:411 (~)　　　　すこし分かりづらい気がします。　こんなかんじは!
SPOILER
02:37:646 (~)　　　　ここから始めるとわかりづらいです　こんなかんじは
SPOILER
03:47:098 (2)　　　　難しいと思います　ふつうに単発にしてみては！
SPOILER
All fixed

以上です！


ぐっどらっく！！
ありがとう！！！！ :D
アドバイスはメモ帳にはりつけて永久保存します！ :P

Thank you Modding :)
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
Hello from E.E's modding queue!
Hard:
00:45:863 (10) - maybe something like this? Think this sound better.
01:27:370 (8) - ^
01:55:932 (2) - add circle after this
01:57:781 (1) - ^
03:47:305 (4) - ^
04:24:703 (1) - ^
04:28:607 (2) - ^
Insane:
01:11:959 (4) - ?
01:33:329 (3) - ?
01:38:466 (3) - delite , move spinner :
03:02:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - something like this?
All @suggestion@
P.S. If my mod help you , don't give me kd , mod this pls http://osu.ppy.sh/s/54225.
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

EvilElvis wrote:

Hello from E.E's modding queue!
Hard:
00:45:863 (10) - maybe something like this? Think this sound better.
01:27:370 (8) - ^
01:55:932 (2) - add circle after this
01:57:781 (1) - ^
03:47:305 (4) - ^
04:24:703 (1) - ^
04:28:607 (2) - ^
Insane:
01:11:959 (4) - ?
01:33:329 (3) - ?
01:38:466 (3) - delite , move spinner :
03:02:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - something like this?
All @suggestion@
P.S. If my mod help you , don't give me kd , mod this pls http://osu.ppy.sh/s/54225.
ALL fixed! Thank you!!
give a kd, and I will Modding
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-

FreeSky wrote:

ALL fixed! Thank you!!
give a kd, and I will Modding
<3
NewRulerNA
1,301 posts
Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
ちょっと拾ってUnrank要素を見つけたのでそれだけ

[General]
  1. 01:37:234 - 同じタイミングに緑線が複数存在しておりUnrankableです
    必ずどちらか片方の緑線を削除してください
no kudosu
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

NewRulerNA wrote:

ちょっと拾ってUnrank要素を見つけたのでそれだけ

[General]
  1. 01:37:234 - 同じタイミングに緑線が複数存在しておりUnrankableです
    必ずどちらか片方の緑線を削除してください
no kudosu
ほんとだ･･･ :?
Thank　you!!
yuugeki1234
115 posts
Joined April 2009
yuugeki1234
Yo pick up from modreqs~

[General]
nothing


[Normal]

Change spinner point 04:52:442 from 04:52:853? Vocalのブレスに合わせているようならNo changeでも。

[Hard]

00:30:658- move this slider at x432,y264. follow to 00:30:247(1,2,3) hits.
if u change ^ line up 00:31:274 sliders distance.
01:14:836- ここからの音量を下げていくようなら、01:16:891と01:17:507のFinishが浮いているように聞こえます。音量を下げている為、強い音が違和感を生む場合があるからです。
打開策としては、Removeするか、Finishの音を弱くすると改善するかもしれません！
03:45:867- 単発じゃなく長めのスライダーでもいいかもしれません。

[Insane]

move clap 01:20:076 and 01:20:692.
if u change ^ add clap at 01:20:178 and 01:20:795.
01:28:911 remove whis?
04:13:196- remove finish?

some mod~ good map! good luckkkk~
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

yuugeki1234 wrote:

Yo pick up from modreqs~
hi~ :D

[General]
nothing


[Normal]

Change spinner point 04:52:442 from 04:52:853? Vocalのブレスに合わせているようならNo changeでも。
おっしゃるとおりブレスにあわせてるのでNo changeで！

[Hard]

00:30:658- move this slider at x432,y264. follow to 00:30:247(1,2,3) hits.
if u change ^ line up 00:31:274 sliders distance.
fixed!
01:14:836- ここからの音量を下げていくようなら、01:16:891と01:17:507のFinishが浮いているように聞こえます。音量を下げている為、強い音が違和感を生む場合があるからです。
打開策としては、Removeするか、Finishの音を弱くすると改善するかもしれません！
音を弱くしてみました　70%→45%
03:45:867- 単発じゃなく長めのスライダーでもいいかもしれません。
fixed!

[Insane]

move clap 01:20:076 and 01:20:692.
if u change ^ add clap at 01:20:178 and 01:20:795.
Sorry, No change
01:28:911 remove whis?　fixed!
04:13:196- remove finish? fixed!

some mod~ good map! good luckkkk~
Thank you Modding!! :)
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]
[Mod Request]

Hello!!! :3

[Normal]
01:38:055 - Add Circle? <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377366
02:28:809 - Move it at 02:28:603 - +2 Repeat and snap the Inherited point at 02:28:603, fits better imo
02:28:603 - Fix their shape? o: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377371

[Hard]
Perfect <3

[Insane]
Perfect <3

[Comments]
The maps are nice made, tho, no offense but I got bored listening to almost 6 mins slow song several times :C Good luck ranking it ^.^
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]

Hello!!! :3

[Normal]
01:38:055 - Add Circle? <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377366
02:28:809 - Move it at 02:28:603 - +2 Repeat and snap the Inherited point at 02:28:603, fits better imo
02:28:603 - Fix their shape? o: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377371

[Hard]
Perfect <3

[Insane]
Perfect <3

[Comments]
The maps are nice made, tho, no offense but I got bored listening to almost 6 mins slow song several times :C Good luck ranking it ^.^
All fixed! thank you~ :)
R e d
226 posts
Joined January 2011
R e d
[Normal]

01:06:822 (2) - kinda hard for "normal players" ;o in my opinion

01:51:206 - new combo?

[Hard]

01:26:405 - new combo?

03:45:867 - new combo?

[Insane]

turn "Insane" to "Lunatic" since this is touhou :P seems better



i loved the map, good luck :D
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

R e d wrote:

[Normal]

01:06:822 (2) - kinda hard for "normal players" ;o in my opinion

01:51:206 - new combo?

[Hard]

01:26:405 - new combo?

03:45:867 - new combo?

[Insane]

turn "Insane" to "Lunatic" since this is touhou :P seems better



i loved the map, good luck :D
All fixed!! :)
Thank you~
zeroclover
468 posts
Joined December 2010
zeroclover
かわい～　せいが
( ´⌒ω⌒`)


General

Lunatic

00:27:987 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - try symetric those notes, it will make more good
SPOILER
00:31:069 (6) - move this circle, and make 00:30:658 (3,4,5) - around (6) it will look like this
SPOILER
00:31:274 (7) - curve like this, because slider body not hiding (8) a lot after change
SPOILER
256,328,31274,2,0,B|308:320|324:276|324:276|344:228|384:212,1,180

00:33:535 (1) - New Combo colour should start at 00:33:946 (2) -
00:34:562 (3) - make some jump to (4) , because it was Lunatic difficult.. not must using same distance snap to all flow :)
SPOILER
00:38:261 (8) - same like above, make some jump to (9) , but make sure it was 2x distance snap jump
00:38:466 (9) - remove finish hitsound, too noise because (1) have finish hitsound, dont overuse it
00:42:370 (8,9,10,11,12) - set like this, more neat
SPOILER
00:44:630 (4) - make it blanket, because it fit and look more curve than 00:43:398 (1) -
SPOILER
388,152,44630,2,0,B|340:204|276:204|232:152,1,180,0|8
00:47:507 (2) - symetric with (1)?
it wil make look like this
SPOILER

00:50:178 (2) - use snap 1.0x ??
00:52:233 (1,2,3,6) - move, 00:52:233 (1,2,3) - at x168 y272 and 00:53:055 (6) - at x304y48
01:00:555 (5) - make this slider blanket to (4)
SPOILER
01:04:151 (4,5,6) - move like this
SPOILER
01:15:041 - suddenly , soft hitsound very low here
01:15:658 (1,2,3,4,1) - do like this
SPOILER
01:31:069 (1) - move to x256y348
01:48:329 (2) - try dont make this note stacked with (1)
02:00:658 (3) - ctrl+ r, more fun
02:10:726 - should have note here
02:14:836 (2) - dont stack
02:23:055 (5) - blanket it
SPOILER
02:26:959 (6) - ctrl +h / ctrl + j , make more fun
02:33:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - move 2 grid up
02:34:771 (1) - should at x292y72
02:35:593 (3) - move , follow y axis line
02:38:881 (5) - blanket 02:38:470 (2,3,4) -
02:39:908 (4) - more blanket
02:55:319 (1) - ctrl +h
03:29:223 (2) - more blanket
SPOILER
03:41:963 (3) - i like this have empty note , and this should start at 03:42:168 -
03:47:511 - add note
04:09:908 (1) - move to x480y180 , after that the rest is yours
04:24:908 - sound to low
04:41:757 (3) - move, dont get touch (2) slider body, after that 04:42:579 (5) - dont get this note hide because slider, hidden note because slider body look bad when playing
04:42:579 (5) - move, this note hidden bacve
04:51:107 - at inherit point and set volume 5% here
04:52:648 - dont forget to redo the volume hitsound

Hard

00:28:192 (5) - curve like this, more pretty
SPOILER
00:35:384 (5,6,7,8) - try dont do this, because (8) going to hit lifebar.png , ctrl + j and move it
00:47:096 (2,3,4) - symetric ??just give some idea
SPOILER
01:01:685 - add circle, because have drum hit here
01:07:439 (4,5) - make (4) more curve and blanket it for (5), look neat later
SPOILER
01:09:083 (4) - blanket (3)
01:12:165 (2,3,4,5,1) - order those notes like this, and the rest is yours
SPOILER
01:18:124 (1) - blanket (2)?
01:28:603 (2,3) - crtl + r
02:01:891 (3,4,5) - move and make symetric
SPOILER
02:04:973 (3,4) - try dont touch slider body, because it look bad when play view
SPOILER

02:15:452 (3) - i prefer make this
SPOILER
02:17:096 (7) - try make like this

02:34:566 (5) - move to x376y192
02:43:196 (2) - more curve, but dont get this slider hiding (1) and (2)
02:49:976 (3) - its too close to (2) slider body
03:17:100 (3) - move to x272 y104
03:31:689 (4,1) - move 1 grid to left for symetric
04:17:100 (6) - move far from slider body
04:22:031 (2) - move and make like this
SPOILER
04:23:059 (1,2,3) - change those notes like ^ (just copy paste)
04:35:182 (2,3) - move
SPOILER
04:36:209 (1,2,3) - just like before, copy 04:34:566 (1,2,3) -
04:40:113 - add circle
04:50:182 (1) - change this look
SPOILER
04:51:620 (1) - i dont think this spinner needed because Lunatic and normal have empty note here

Normal

00:46:069 (4) - move

01:55:932 (1) - move 1 grid to right
02:05:589 (4) - rotate about 15 - 30 degress, slider touch life bar
02:50:798 (2,3) - try symetric
SPOILER
04:40:113 (4) - move it to 04:39:908 - then extend it

a few mod for normal because already fine to play


oh.. sorry for long mod
i want to short it but lazy
star~
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

zeroclover wrote:

かわい～　せいが
( ´⌒ω⌒`)
かわい～！(*'▽'*)♪


General

Lunatic

00:27:987 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - try symetric those notes, it will make more good
SPOILER
00:31:069 (6) - move this circle, and make 00:30:658 (3,4,5) - around (6) it will look like this
SPOILER
00:31:274 (7) - curve like this, because slider body not hiding (8) a lot after change
SPOILER
256,328,31274,2,0,B|308:320|324:276|324:276|344:228|384:212,1,180

00:33:535 (1) - New Combo colour should start at 00:33:946 (2) -
00:34:562 (3) - make some jump to (4) , because it was Lunatic difficult.. not must using same distance snap to all flow :)
SPOILER
00:38:261 (8) - same like above, make some jump to (9) , but make sure it was 2x distance snap jump
00:38:466 (9) - remove finish hitsound, too noise because (1) have finish hitsound, dont overuse it
00:42:370 (8,9,10,11,12) - set like this, more neat
SPOILER
00:44:630 (4) - make it blanket, because it fit and look more curve than 00:43:398 (1) -
SPOILER
388,152,44630,2,0,B|340:204|276:204|232:152,1,180,0|8
00:47:507 (2) - symetric with (1)?
it wil make look like this
SPOILER

00:50:178 (2) - use snap 1.0x ??
00:52:233 (1,2,3,6) - move, 00:52:233 (1,2,3) - at x168 y272 and 00:53:055 (6) - at x304y48
01:00:555 (5) - make this slider blanket to (4)
SPOILER
01:04:151 (4,5,6) - move like this
SPOILER
01:15:041 - suddenly , soft hitsound very low here
01:15:658 (1,2,3,4,1) - do like this
SPOILER
01:31:069 (1) - move to x256y348
01:48:329 (2) - try dont make this note stacked with (1)
02:00:658 (3) - ctrl+ r, more fun
02:10:726 - should have note here
02:14:836 (2) - dont stack
02:23:055 (5) - blanket it
SPOILER
02:26:959 (6) - ctrl +h / ctrl + j , make more fun
02:33:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - move 2 grid up
02:34:771 (1) - should at x292y72
02:35:593 (3) - move , follow y axis line
02:38:881 (5) - blanket 02:38:470 (2,3,4) -
02:39:908 (4) - more blanket
02:55:319 (1) - ctrl +h
03:29:223 (2) - more blanket
SPOILER
03:41:963 (3) - i like this have empty note , and this should start at 03:42:168 -
03:47:511 - add note
04:09:908 (1) - move to x480y180 , after that the rest is yours
04:24:908 - sound to low
04:41:757 (3) - move, dont get touch (2) slider body, after that 04:42:579 (5) - dont get this note hide because slider, hidden note because slider body look bad when playing
04:42:579 (5) - move, this note hidden bacve
04:51:107 - at inherit point and set volume 5% here
04:52:648 - dont forget to redo the volume hitsound

Hard

00:28:192 (5) - curve like this, more pretty
SPOILER
00:35:384 (5,6,7,8) - try dont do this, because (8) going to hit lifebar.png , ctrl + j and move it
00:47:096 (2,3,4) - symetric ??just give some idea
SPOILER
01:01:685 - add circle, because have drum hit here
01:07:439 (4,5) - make (4) more curve and blanket it for (5), look neat later
SPOILER
01:09:083 (4) - blanket (3)
01:12:165 (2,3,4,5,1) - order those notes like this, and the rest is yours
SPOILER
01:18:124 (1) - blanket (2)?
01:28:603 (2,3) - crtl + r
02:01:891 (3,4,5) - move and make symetric
SPOILER
02:04:973 (3,4) - try dont touch slider body, because it look bad when play view
SPOILER

02:15:452 (3) - i prefer make this
SPOILER
02:17:096 (7) - try make like this

02:34:566 (5) - move to x376y192
02:43:196 (2) - more curve, but dont get this slider hiding (1) and (2)
02:49:976 (3) - its too close to (2) slider body
03:17:100 (3) - move to x272 y104
03:31:689 (4,1) - move 1 grid to left for symetric
04:17:100 (6) - move far from slider body
04:22:031 (2) - move and make like this
SPOILER
04:23:059 (1,2,3) - change those notes like ^ (just copy paste)
04:35:182 (2,3) - move
SPOILER
04:36:209 (1,2,3) - just like before, copy 04:34:566 (1,2,3) -
04:40:113 - add circle
04:50:182 (1) - change this look
SPOILER
04:51:620 (1) - i dont think this spinner needed because Lunatic and normal have empty note here

Normal

00:46:069 (4) - move

01:55:932 (1) - move 1 grid to right
02:05:589 (4) - rotate about 15 - 30 degress, slider touch life bar
02:50:798 (2,3) - try symetric
SPOILER
04:40:113 (4) - move it to 04:39:908 - then extend it

a few mod for normal because already fine to play

realy?Thank you :D


oh.. sorry for long mod
i want to short it but lazy
star~
All fixed!!

Yes, long and very good mod
i took a lot time to fix
But i got much from you <3
Thank you~!! :)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Konnichiwa


[General]
* Your hitsound are messy, there are some random finishs, claps and whistles. Please listen to the song and put clap where snare are hit, and put whistle where bass are hit


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:36:617 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
02:09:699 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu, so beginners are hard to see (sometimes, begginers are slow to read)
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:42:168 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:20:593 (7) - New combo?
03:29:018 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:30:250 (2) - ^
04:50:182 (2) - ^


[Hard]
* There is a whistle at sliderbody, which is annoying. Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)

00:38:672 (1) - This note is almost overlapped by hitbursts, I think it's better to move further away from it
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider


[Lunatic]
00:56:137 (8) - New combo for 0,5x slider, it's confusing without NC it


I hate Seiga
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa
Konniciha!!


[General]
* Your hitsound are messy, there are some random finishs, claps and whistles. Please listen to the song and put clap where snare are hit, and put whistle where bass are hit

OK, I'll try recheck sounds and to find fitting notes


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:36:617 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
02:09:699 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu, so beginners are hard to see (sometimes, begginers are slow to read)
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:42:168 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:20:593 (7) - New combo?
03:29:018 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:30:250 (2) - ^
04:50:182 (2) - ^

All fixed

[Hard]
* There is a whistle at sliderbody, which is annoying. Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)

00:38:672 (1) - This note is almost overlapped by hitbursts, I think it's better to move further away from it
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider

All fixed

[Lunatic]
00:56:137 (8) - New combo for 0,5x slider, it's confusing without NC it

fixed


I hate Seiga
oh...
Thank you Modding~
I'll try to recheck spot hitsounds
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Normal]
If the entire map had the spacing of the kiai section it would be so great because your notes wouldn't have the ugly overlap. (When non-stream notes overlap each other it's my pet peeve ._.)
00:36:822 (5) - Maybe make this a curved slider?
03:10:113 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing change confused me so much that I combobroke. don't think that's a good idea in a Normal...
04:14:634 (1,2) - spacing

[Hard]
00:43:192 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - increase the spacing?
00:56:137 (5,1) - ^?
01:49:767 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^?
02:01:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^?
02:23:055 (3,1) - I don't like this antijump

[Lunatic]
parts of this feels overmapped :/ like you're still mapping to the lyrics but just adding 1/4 triples everywhere. IMO if you want to use 1/4 triples in this song you should map to the instruments instead
03:36:620 (4,5) - don't like this antijump

Overall, I like Hard a lot, but I think Lunatic feels overmapped (it feels like Hard with 1/4 triples, really and I wish it were more of its own thing) and the flow in Normal is kind of eh.
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
If the entire map had the spacing of the kiai section it would be so great because your notes wouldn't have the ugly overlap. (When non-stream notes overlap each other it's my pet peeve ._.)
00:36:822 (5) - Maybe make this a curved slider?
03:10:113 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing change confused me so much that I combobroke. don't think that's a good idea in a Normal...
04:14:634 (1,2) - spacing

All fixed
I should considere this map and some change :?

[Hard]
00:43:192 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - increase the spacing?
00:56:137 (5,1) - ^?
01:49:767 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^?
02:01:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^?
02:23:055 (3,1) - I don't like this antijump

All fixed

[Lunatic]
parts of this feels overmapped :/ like you're still mapping to the lyrics but just adding 1/4 triples everywhere. IMO if you want to use 1/4 triples in this song you should map to the instruments instead
I see... thanks

03:36:620 (4,5) - don't like this antijump fixed

Overall, I like Hard a lot, but I think Lunatic feels overmapped (it feels like Hard with 1/4 triples, really and I wish it were more of its own thing) and the flow in Normal is kind of eh.
Thank you Modding!!
In Lunatic, I'll find good Mapping in the future Modding...
CTB Fia
CTB Fia
as you say i only mod 2 diff so
let's started

Normal
00:28:603 - missing notes
00:30:247 - this too
00:35:178 - and here
00:37:644 - 00:38:363 - fill it please
00:41:754 - same
00:43:398 - same
00:45:041 - 00:46:682 - 00:48:329 - 00:51:719 - missing notes

Hard
00:01:571 - start here
well the beats seems to be in place so i have no comment :o

That's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

shojimeguro wrote:

as you say i only mod 2 diff so
let's started

Normal
00:28:603 - missing notes sorry no change
00:30:247 - this too
00:35:178 - and here

00:37:644 - 00:38:363 - fill it please fixed
00:41:754 - same sorry no change
00:43:398 - same fixed
00:45:041 - 00:46:682 - 00:48:329 - 00:51:719 - missing notes fixed

Hard
00:01:571 - start here
well the beats seems to be in place so i have no comment :o

That's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!
Thank you Modding :)
pyransc
44 posts
Joined March 2012
pyransc
Hi my mod.

[Normal]
CS +1 large?

00:28:603 - add circle?
00:35:178 - ^
00:38:672 (2) - remove NC
00:41:754 - add circle ?
00:42:165 (1) - remove NC
00:43:398 (7) - add NC
00:43:809 (1) - remove NC
01:38:055 (2) - remove circle, start spinner here
02:28:192 - add circle
02:28:809 (4) - delete this. add slider with one reverse, end at 02:29:219

[Hard]
hitsound are a little chaotic. I do not understand why you sometimes Turn down the audio.
01:01:480 - 01:02:713 - a very strange part
02:27:987 (1,2,3) - use distance snap

[FreeSky]
ok
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

pyransc wrote:

Hi my mod.

[Normal]
CS +1 large? sorry no change

00:28:603 - add circle? no change
00:35:178 - ^ no change
00:38:672 (2) - remove NC fixed
00:41:754 - add circle ? fixed
00:42:165 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:43:398 (7) - add NC fixed
00:43:809 (1) - remove NC no change
01:38:055 (2) - remove circle, start spinner here fixed
02:28:192 - add circle no change
02:28:809 (4) - delete this. add slider with one reverse, end at 02:29:219 no change

[Hard]
hitsound are a little chaotic. I do not understand why you sometimes Turn down the audio. hm..ok I'll consider
01:01:480 - 01:02:713 - a very strange part no change
02:27:987 (1,2,3) - use distance snap already,use 1.8x distance

[FreeSky]
ok
Thank you Modding~ :)
Last edited by FreeSky , edited 2 times in total.
pw384
2,288 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
hi~ from CLANNAD MODDING QUEUE~

here's my mod >_<

* suggestion
** hightly suggestion
*** unrankable

[Normal]
* 00:27:370 (2,3) - blanket?
** 00:32:302 (3,4,1) - spacing
* 00:38:055 (1) - why new combo? OAO
* 00:45:041 (4,5) - blanket?
** 00:58:192 - add a note
** 00:58:398 (2,3) - spacing
* 01:03:535 (1,2) - blanket
* 01:33:124 (4,1) - don't want to see overlap
* 01:51:206 (1,2) - blanket
* 02:28:809 (3) - not suitable for normal
* 02:49:360 (1,3) - not good-looking
* 02:55:319 (1,2) - confusing..move them left?
* 03:17:511 (4,5) - blanket better
* 03:49:976 (2) - spacing

good luck~ :)
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

384059043 wrote:

hi~ from CLANNAD MODDING QUEUE~

here's my mod >_<

* suggestion
** hightly suggestion
*** unrankable

[Normal]
* 00:27:370 (2,3) - blanket?
** 00:32:302 (3,4,1) - spacing
* 00:38:055 (1) - why new combo? OAO
* 00:45:041 (4,5) - blanket?
** 00:58:192 - add a note
** 00:58:398 (2,3) - spacing
* 01:03:535 (1,2) - blanket
* 01:33:124 (4,1) - don't want to see overlap
* 01:51:206 (1,2) - blanket
* 02:28:809 (3) - not suitable for normal
* 02:49:360 (1,3) - not good-looking
* 02:55:319 (1,2) - confusing..move them left?
* 03:17:511 (4,5) - blanket better
* 03:49:976 (2) - spacing

All fixed!!

good luck~ :)
thank you Modding~ :)
jogfi2002
189 posts
Joined July 2009
jogfi2002
こんばんはー鏡からのMODです、よろしくね。

[General]
タイミングは問題ないと思う。
ストーリーボードがない場合、マップセットのフォルダーから「.osb」ファイルを削除すべきです。

素晴らしい曲ですね、聞きたら少し悲しみを感じたけど…



[Normal]
01:16:685 - add note
01:47:918 (1) - このスライダーと前のノートの距離はDSに合っていない。
02:39:497 (1,2,3,4) - このnoteを白線に配置するのはうがいいかな？
04:20:593 (1) - これもDS問題
04:50:182 (2) - ＾

[Hard]
01:44:220 (1,2) - ちょっとこのサークルとこのスライダーは連撃じゃないかって勘違いをしたｗスライダーをもっと少し遠くしてのはいいかも。
03:19:771 (7,8) - ＾
04:47:922 (2,1,2,3) - 前のとは同じで、初見の時は思わずすぐに1をヒットしまった(^_^;)

[Lunatic]
00:34:562 (2,3,4,5) - この跳びは平和なリズムに合ってないと思う。そしてここは小節の始まりでもない。
00:56:137 (1) - リズムは変わっていない、突然の減速はちょっと迷わす。
01:12:576 (7,8,9) - 前のようにもっと緊密に配置して、先後一致するのはいいと思う。
01:14:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - この跳びはちょっと後にして、ずんずんあがっている「木霊する」って歌詞に合ってのほうはもっと適当だと思う。
02:32:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ＾
03:14:429 (5,6,7,8) - これらのノートと 03:15:456 (1,2) は同じに1/8の間隔をとっているですけど、配置の距離は違います。一致するのはいいと思う。


ほかに特に問題はない。
下手な日本語ですが、申し訳ございません。変なことを言ったら、指摘してください。
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

jogfi2002 wrote:

こんばんはー鏡からのMODです、よろしくね。

[General]
タイミングは問題ないと思う。
ストーリーボードがない場合、マップセットのフォルダーから「.osb」ファイルを削除すべきです。fixed!

素晴らしい曲ですね、聞きたら少し悲しみを感じたけど…
ありがとう！少し切ないですよね！

[Normal]
01:16:685 - add note サークル3つにするとstar diffがあがってしまうのでスライダーにしてリターンつけました
01:47:918 (1) - このスライダーと前のノートの距離はDSに合っていない。 fixed
02:39:497 (1,2,3,4) - このnoteを白線に配置するのはうがいいかな？ fixed

04:20:593 (1) - これもDS問題
04:50:182 (2) - ＾
後半は全部1.0xにそろえてあるはずなのですが問題あったのかな 保留

[Hard]
01:44:220 (1,2) - ちょっとこのサークルとこのスライダーは連撃じゃないかって勘違いをしたｗスライダーをもっと少し遠くしてのはいいかも。
03:19:771 (7,8) - ＾
04:47:922 (2,1,2,3) - 前のとは同じで、初見の時は思わずすぐに1をヒットしまった(^_^;)
All fixed!

[Lunatic]
00:34:562 (2,3,4,5) - この跳びは平和なリズムに合ってないと思う。そしてここは小節の始まりでもない。別のModでこうしたのでそのままで！
00:56:137 (1) - リズムは変わっていない、突然の減速はちょっと迷わす。強調したい部分だったのでそのままで！
01:12:576 (7,8,9) - 前のようにもっと緊密に配置して、先後一致するのはいいと思う。どういうことだろう・・？ごめんなさいそのままで

01:14:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - この跳びはちょっと後にして、ずんずんあがっている「木霊する」って歌詞に合ってのほうはもっと適当だと思う。
02:32:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ＾
四角形ジャンプはそのままに、スライダーのジャンプを加えてみました！
03:14:429 (5,6,7,8) - これらのノートと 03:15:456 (1,2) は同じに1/8の間隔をとっているですけど、配置の距離は違います。一致するのはいいと思う。fixed!


ほかに特に問題はない。
下手な日本語ですが、申し訳ございません。変なことを言ったら、指摘してください。

会話もできるレベルの上手な日本語だと思います！
Moddingありがとう～ :)
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
lily-an yay x)
star ~*
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

- t e n n y a - wrote:

lily-an yay x)
star ~*
thank you star~!!
lily-an so cute <3
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky
remaking soon
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky
Finished Remake!!
Satellite
Beatmap Nominator
3,686 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
hi~ 思ったことをばんばん書いていくので、参考になれば(｡ÒωÓ。)~
(この前のM4Mのあれです！)

General

  1. tagのTouhouはいらないんじゃないかな！ソースにあるし！
  2. tagに作詞のazuki、編集のkaztora,eba、アルバム名のreunion、原曲のdesire driveを追加?

Lunatic

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:31:891 (7) - がんばって先端を綺麗にスタック~
  2. 00:36:000 (7) - x^448 y^296にもってくると6.7.8で綺麗な三角形~
  3. 01:06:206 (4,5) - ちょっと見づらい感あるから4と5の配置を逆にしてみたり？
  4. 01:11:137 (3) - ここはremove Finishで 01:11:548 (1) - こっちにadd Finish? ( 01:18:124 (1) - ここについてるし！ )
  5. 01:19:767 (1) - 手前の5.6と1で綺麗に三角形を作ってみては？
  6. 01:23:261 (2,3,4,5,6) - 音の強さを拾うと2をもう少しジャンプさせて、5.6の距離が近い感じがしました・・・改善案は思い浮かびませんでした!!
  7. 01:28:911 - Lunaticですし、ここの音を拾って3連打にしてみては？
  8. 01:34:254 - 同じくここも拾って5連打にしても全然問題ないように思えました
  9. 01:45:247 (2,3,4) - 2.3.4の順番を　4.2.3に変えてみては？
  10. 01:55:521 - ここの音を拾いたい感じがするので 01:55:726 - ここのnoteを削除し、スライダーを引いてみては？
  11. 02:03:946 (11) - 3grid左 1grid上で綺麗になるかも？
  12. 02:27:781 - remove noteでもいいかも？
  13. 02:29:219 (5) - 曲調的にここから遅いスライダーで伸ばしたい感じ~
  14. 02:29:630 (1) - サビここからじゃないですかね・・？前後のサビのパターンを確認してみてください
  15. 02:46:997 - add note
  16. 02:56:757 - ここからスピン始まってもいい感じ？
  17. 03:20:798 (7) - メロディ拾ってるのであればここのnoteはいらない・・・？
  18. 03:36:415 (6) - 4のヒットバーストに少しかぶって見づらい感あったので移動できるのであれば右に移動したほうがいいかも?(remove noteでもいい感じがするけど！)
  19. 03:45:456 (7) - x^296 y^140くらいが好ましい感じ?
  20. 03:48:127 (9,10) - 9と10は平行に配置したい感じ
  21. 04:36:004 - add noteしてもいいかも
  22. 04:37:853 (2) - この部分はadd finishかも？
  23. 04:45:250 (3) - ちょっといきなり近い気がします　手前にnoteを配置するか　間隔を調整したほうがいいです

Hard

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:38:672 (1) - 1grid右で△~
  2. 00:56:137 (1) - 1grid落として高さそろえた方が綺麗かも? 00:56:959 (1) - こちらは同様に2gridかな~
  3. 00:58:192 - 音的にここにnote　00:58:398 - ここから 00:58:809 - ここまでスライダーって感じがしました
  4. 01:00:658 - ここの音を拾いたい~
  5. 01:17:507 (9) - 2grid右?
  6. 02:04:356 (2) - clap忘れかな？Lunaticにはここにclapがあります~
  7. 02:29:840 (2) - 何だこのスライダーはｗｗｗ　02:30:250 - ここまできっちりひこう！ｗ
  8. 02:51:826 (4) - 1grid右~
  9. 03:35:182 - んん・・・Lunaticならここ音拾ってる気がします~・・・どうなんだろう今のままであってるきがするけど・・！
  10. 04:26:141 (5) - このnoteは超難しいと思うｗｗｗ (同じタイミングに2個noteおくのはunrankableなので消しておこう！)
  11. 04:31:278 (1) - ^
  12. 04:34:566 (1) - ^
  13. 04:43:812 (9) - ^
  14. 04:50:593 (8) - あまり綺麗に見えない感じ・・・！スライダーにかぶらないようにしたほうがいいかも！

Normal

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:34:973 - remove note
  2. 00:40:110 (3) - normalでスライダーの後ろにnoteを被せるのはあまりよくないように思えました~・・・。(以後はスルーで！)
  3. 04:17:305 (3) - いきなりこれだけリバースするのはわかりづらいかも？

Lizsig's Easy

  • Suggestion

  1. 02:29:630 (1) - ここだけunsnapだったよ！！
  2. 02:29:840 - 謎の赤線・・・!?
リメイクお疲れ様です~　がんばって下さいlω-。)/☆
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

hi~ 思ったことをばんばん書いていくので、参考になれば(｡ÒωÓ。)~
(この前のM4Mのあれです！)

ありがとう～！！！

General

  1. tagのTouhouはいらないんじゃないかな！ソースにあるし！
  2. tagに作詞のazuki、編集のkaztora,eba、アルバム名のreunion、原曲のdesire driveを追加?
Fixed!!

Lunatic

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:31:891 (7) - がんばって先端を綺麗にスタック~　Fixed
  2. 00:36:000 (7) - x^448 y^296にもってくると6.7.8で綺麗な三角形~　Fixed
  3. 01:06:206 (4,5) - ちょっと見づらい感あるから4と5の配置を逆にしてみたり？　Fixed
  4. 01:11:137 (3) - ここはremove Finishで 01:11:548 (1) - こっちにadd Finish? ( 01:18:124 (1) - ここについてるし！ )
    ほんとだ・・・何を考えていたんだ
  5. 01:19:767 (1) - 手前の5.6と1で綺麗に三角形を作ってみては？　Fixed
  6. 01:23:261 (2,3,4,5,6) - 音の強さを拾うと2をもう少しジャンプさせて、5.6の距離が近い感じがしました・・・改善案は思い浮かびませんでした!!
    適当にジャンプさせたった！
  7. 01:28:911 - Lunaticですし、ここの音を拾って3連打にしてみては？Fixed
  8. 01:34:254 - 同じくここも拾って5連打にしても全然問題ないように思えました　ここはのーちぇんじでいきます～
  9. 01:45:247 (2,3,4) - 2.3.4の順番を　4.2.3に変えてみては？NICE!!
  10. 01:55:521 - ここの音を拾いたい感じがするので 01:55:726 - ここのnoteを削除し、スライダーを引いてみては？Fixed
  11. 02:03:946 (11) - 3grid左 1grid上で綺麗になるかも？ Fixed
  12. 02:27:781 - remove noteでもいいかも？ Fixed
  13. 02:29:219 (5) - 曲調的にここから遅いスライダーで伸ばしたい感じ~ ここはのーちぇんじで～
  14. 02:29:630 (1) - サビここからじゃないですかね・・？前後のサビのパターンを確認してみてください oh... おっしゃるとおりで。。
  15. 02:46:997 - add note Fixed
  16. 02:56:757 - ここからスピン始まってもいい感じ？ Fixed
  17. 03:20:798 (7) - メロディ拾ってるのであればここのnoteはいらない・・・？ Fixed
  18. 03:36:415 (6) - 4のヒットバーストに少しかぶって見づらい感あったので移動できるのであれば右に移動したほうがいいかも?(remove noteでもいい感じがするけど！)
    ずらしました～
  19. 03:45:456 (7) - x^296 y^140くらいが好ましい感じ? Fixed
  20. 03:48:127 (9,10) - 9と10は平行に配置したい感じ どういうことだろう・・？のーちぇんじにします
  21. 04:36:004 - add noteしてもいいかも Fixed
  22. 04:37:853 (2) - この部分はadd finishかも？Fixed
  23. 04:45:250 (3) - ちょっといきなり近い気がします　手前にnoteを配置するか　間隔を調整したほうがいいです
add note しましたー

Hard

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:38:672 (1) - 1grid右で△~ Fixed
  2. 00:56:137 (1) - 1grid落として高さそろえた方が綺麗かも? 00:56:959 (1) - こちらは同様に2gridかな~ Fixed
  3. 00:58:192 - 音的にここにnote　00:58:398 - ここから 00:58:809 - ここまでスライダーって感じがしました Fixed
  4. 01:00:658 - ここの音を拾いたい~ Fixed
  5. 01:17:507 (9) - 2grid右? Fixed
  6. 02:04:356 (2) - clap忘れかな？Lunaticにはここにclapがあります~ Fixed
  7. 02:29:840 (2) - 何だこのスライダーはｗｗｗ　02:30:250 - ここまできっちりひこう！ｗ uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
  8. 02:51:826 (4) - 1grid右~ Fixed
  9. 03:35:182 - んん・・・Lunaticならここ音拾ってる気がします~・・・どうなんだろう今のままであってるきがするけど・・！
    そのままにしますー
  10. 04:26:141 (5) - このnoteは超難しいと思うｗｗｗ (同じタイミングに2個noteおくのはunrankableなので消しておこう！)
  11. 04:31:278 (1) - ^
  12. 04:34:566 (1) - ^
  13. 04:43:812 (9) - ^
    なんでこうなってるんだろうｗｗｗｗｗｗ
  14. 04:50:593 (8) - あまり綺麗に見えない感じ・・・！スライダーにかぶらないようにしたほうがいいかも！
Fixed

Normal

  • Suggestion

  1. 00:34:973 - remove note
  2. 00:40:110 (3) - normalでスライダーの後ろにnoteを被せるのはあまりよくないように思えました~・・・。(以後はスルーで！)
  3. 04:17:305 (3) - いきなりこれだけリバースするのはわかりづらいかも？
All Fixed!!


リメイクお疲れ様です~　がんばって下さいlω-。)/☆

なんかnoteがいつのまにかずれてたりして見直すとカオスだった・・・
Thank you~~!! :)
NewRulerNA
1,301 posts
Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
hi
found issues. you must fix.

[General]
  1. tag is not same between diffs. Either "kaztora" and "kaztra" are wrong
[Lizsig's Easy]
  1. 02:29:634 (1) - unsnapped note
gl
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found issues. you must fix.

[General]
  1. tag is not same between diffs. Either "kaztora" and "kaztra" are wrong
[Lizsig's Easy]
  1. 02:29:634 (1) - unsnapped note
gl
All Fixed！
Thank you~
zaczac
409 posts
Joined September 2011
zaczac
(y'o')y <thanks mod!!!
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
[General]
  1. Inconsistency in Tags: (I can not find where is not the same, you'd better copy one of these and paste to other
    - [Hard] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
    - [Lizsig's Easy] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
    - [Lunatic] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
    - [Normal] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
  2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: (Try to make these the same)
    - [Hard] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
    Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
    Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
    Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381
    - [Lizsig's Easy] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:40:110
    Kiai #2: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:58:196
    Kiai #3: Starts on 04:21:413, ends on 04:34:360
    Kiai #4: Starts on 04:34:566, ends on 04:49:360
    - [Lunatic] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:411
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:39:497
    Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
    Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
    Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:483
    - [Normal] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
    Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
    Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
    Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381
[Lizsig's Easy]
  1. Unsnapped things:
    02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

    Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    01:34:582 - snap to 01:34:562
    03:24:906 - snap to 03:24:908
    04:08:262 - snap to 04:08:264
    04:21:413 - snap to 04:21:415
    04:44:529 - snap to 04:44:429
  2. 03:24:086 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  3. 02:56:552 (1) - Needless whistle, just remove it then it will sound better in my view.
  4. 04:52:853 (1) - ^^^
    Fine!
[Normal]
  1. Unsnapped things:
    02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  2. 00:52:439 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  3. 00:40:110 (3) - I guess soft sound effect is the best choice, normal is really a bit noisy.
  4. 01:14:836 - A note should be here since you add a note like 01:13:192, so keep it the same plz.
  5. 01:27:987 - ^^^
  6. 02:55:319 (5) - You'd better not use only a slider to map here, what about this? It can sound better via you change like it.
  7. 03:19:976 (1,1) - Where is the spacing :< ? They are almost in the same spacing, ppl can hardly recognize it, try make the spacing fit their timing position.
[Hard]
  1. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:05:795 (1,3) - Ctrl+G please, or it may confuse ppl since the strange arrangement.
  2. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great! ;)
Good Luck
FreeSky
80 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
FreeSky

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
[General]
  1. Inconsistency in Tags: (I can not find where is not the same, you'd better copy one of these and paste to other
    - [Hard] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
    - [Lizsig's Easy] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
    - [Lunatic] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
    - [Normal] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
    Fixed!
  2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: (Try to make these the same)
    - [Hard] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
    Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
    Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
    Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381
    - [Lizsig's Easy] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:40:110
    Kiai #2: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:58:196
    Kiai #3: Starts on 04:21:413, ends on 04:34:360
    Kiai #4: Starts on 04:34:566, ends on 04:49:360
    - [Lunatic] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:411
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:39:497
    Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
    Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
    Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:483
    - [Normal] :
    Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
    Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
    Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
    Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
    Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381
I fixed only my diff


[Normal]
  1. Unsnapped things:
    02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  2. 00:52:439 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  3. 00:40:110 (3) - I guess soft sound effect is the best choice, normal is really a bit noisy.
  4. 01:14:836 - A note should be here since you add a note like 01:13:192, so keep it the same plz.
  5. 01:27:987 - ^^^
  6. 02:55:319 (5) - You'd better not use only a slider to map here, what about this? It can sound better via you change like it.
  7. 03:19:976 (1,1) - Where is the spacing :< ? They are almost in the same spacing, ppl can hardly recognize it, try make the spacing fit their timing position.
ALL fixed
[Hard]
  1. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.
Nice :)
[Lunatic]
  1. 01:05:795 (1,3) - Ctrl+G please, or it may confuse ppl since the strange arrangement.
  2. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.
ALL fixed
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great! ;)
Good Luck
Thank you Modding~ :)
zaczac
409 posts
Joined September 2011
zaczac

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions
[General]



  • Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    01:34:582 - snap to 01:34:562
    03:24:906 - snap to 03:24:908
    04:08:262 - snap to 04:08:264
    04:21:413 - snap to 04:21:415
    04:44:529 - snap to 04:44:429[/box]
  1. 03:24:086 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  2. 02:56:552 (1) - Needless whistle, just remove it then it will sound better in my view.
  3. 04:52:853 (1) - ^^^
    Fine!
all fixed~
ty!! :) :) http://puu.sh/1VduB
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少しずつ完成してきてる。。。！
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