KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~

[Insane]

00:44:630 - add clap
00:45:041 - remove clap
00:45:454 (7) - add clap
00:45:863 - remove
00:46:274 - clap
fixed

00:46:685 - remove
00:47:096 - clap
00:47:507 - remove
00:47:918 - clap
00:48:329 - remove
00:48:740 - clap
00:49:152 (3) - remove
sorry no change

00:49:563 (6) - clap
00:49:973 - remove
00:49:050 (2) - clap
00:50:795 - remove
00:51:206 - clap
00:51:617 - remove
00:51:824 (5) - maybe clap?
00:59:837 (1) - remove
01:00:247 - clap
01:00:658 - remove
01:01:069 - clap
01:03:535 - ^
01:04:973 - ^
01:05:178 - remove
01:05:796 (4) - remove whistle and add clap
01:06:002 (5) - remove clap and add whistle
01:06:617 - clap
01:06:822 - remove
01:07:645 (5) - ^
01:07:851 (6) - clap
01:09:288 - remove
fixed

01:16:070 (3) - remove finish
01:16:480 - ^
01:17:507 - ^
sorry no change

01:32:918 - ^
01:59:014 - clap
02:01:070 (4) - finish
02:07:028 - remove
02:07:439 - finish
02:10:932 - ^
02:13:399 (9) - remove finish
02:14:219 - finish
fixed

02:27:165 - remove
02:34:152 (3) - ^
sorry no change

03:40:728 - ^
03:45:454 (7) - finish
04:07:440 - remove
04:07:645 (4) - REMOVE
fixed

04:11:960 (2) - ^
change whistle

04:46:687 - ^
04:46:892 - ^
04:49:769 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - REMOVE THEM!
fixed

Sorry, that's all for me. PLEASE USE Distane Snap!
When you fix all mistakestoo many mistakes, i will mod it again. I'm sorry.. ._.
hmm.. I don't think mistakes. Intentional Distanse Snap.
When other Modder point them, I'll fix.

1. 02:29:838 (T) - why +2ms here? if you're trying to reset the signature, make sure there is no difference with the former one (as the bpm/offset doesn't change)
2. check the unsnapped notes with AIMod (ctrl shift a)

1. 01:38:056 (1,2,3) - just stack them or keep the normal spacing, don't see why sudden shortened, as the rhythm or pace didn't change at all.
2. 02:56:139 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 03:36:207 (6,7,8) - make the spacing more smooth
4. 04:51:002 (7,8) - how about just a 1/4 slider here?
5. 04:52:440 (1,2) - remove them?

1. 00:44:015 (3) - clap at the end
2. 01:01:070 (2) - clap
3. 01:02:714 (4) - ^
4. 01:04:358 (4,5) - ^
5. 01:15:248 (2) - clap at the end (c1)
6. 01:55:726 (T) - 1 more note here
7. 02:33:536 (2) - c1 clap
8. 02:46:481 (2) - c1 clap at the end
9. 03:44:221 (6) - replace this with 1/2 slider?
10. 03:47:714 (5) - shorten it to 03:48:125 and add a note at 03:48:331?
11. 04:51:618 (1) - end this at 04:52:646
12. 04:52:851 (1) - replace this with a slider and end at 04:53:262?

1. 04:52:851 (1) - end this at the same time as other diffs.
2. 00:56:960 (2) - end this at 00:57:576
3. 00:58:604 (4) - let this start at 00:58:398 and end at 00:59:014, add a note at 00:59:425. the current slider just stays nowhere
4. 03:02:303 (1,2,3) - spacing
5. 03:15:454 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 03:36:002 (3) - make this end at 03:36:618
7. 03:42:166 (3) - make this end at 03:42:802
8. 03:47:098 (2,3) - not fitting the vocal here, rhythm is like 3/4 3/4 4/4 1/4

Colin Hou wrote:

from #modreq

[General]

1. 02:29:838 (T) - why +2ms here? if you're trying to reset the signature, make sure there is no difference with the former one (as the bpm/offset doesn't change)
2. check the unsnapped notes with AIMod (ctrl shift a)

fixed +2ms
I didn't know AIMod.Thank you

[insane]

1. 01:38:056 (1,2,3) - just stack them or keep the normal spacing, don't see why sudden shortened, as the rhythm or pace didn't change at all.
2. 02:56:139 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 03:36:207 (6,7,8) - make the spacing more smooth
4. 04:51:002 (7,8) - how about just a 1/4 slider here?
5. 04:52:440 (1,2) - remove them?

All fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:44:015 (3) - clap at the end
2. 01:01:070 (2) - clap
3. 01:02:714 (4) - ^
4. 01:04:358 (4,5) - ^
5. 01:15:248 (2) - clap at the end (c1)
6. 01:55:726 (T) - 1 more note here
7. 02:33:536 (2) - c1 clap
8. 02:46:481 (2) - c1 clap at the end
9. 03:44:221 (6) - replace this with 1/2 slider?
10. 03:47:714 (5) - shorten it to 03:48:125 and add a note at 03:48:331?
11. 04:51:618 (1) - end this at 04:52:646
12. 04:52:851 (1) - replace this with a slider and end at 04:53:262?

All fixed

[Normal]

1. 04:52:851 (1) - end this at the same time as other diffs.
2. 00:56:960 (2) - end this at 00:57:576
3. 00:58:604 (4) - let this start at 00:58:398 and end at 00:59:014, add a note at 00:59:425. the current slider just stays nowhere
4. 03:02:303 (1,2,3) - spacing
5. 03:15:454 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 03:36:002 (3) - make this end at 03:36:618
7. 03:42:166 (3) - make this end at 03:42:802
8. 03:47:098 (2,3) - not fitting the vocal here, rhythm is like 3/4 3/4 4/4 1/4

All fixed

good luck

Thank you Modding!!

terametis wrote:

はろーはろー

[General]
Easyを作るか、Normalのスターレーティングを最低でも3.25以下にしてください。
最近modしてなかったのでルールが変わってるかもしれませんが、☆3以下のdiffが必須だったと思います。
いつのまにか超えてた・・・　
3.25以下になるようにしてみましたが、今後のModでどうしても超えてしまうようならEasyを作る方針でいきます

[Insane]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed


赤線　　　=downbeat
青線　　　=backbeat

パターンを作って音をつける場合、基本的にはそのパターンに従って音を置いて、曲による変化だとか、自分の感覚でところどころ音を変えます。
良くあるパターンだと、ダウンビート(1,3拍目)はfinish系の音か、何も音をつけないことが多いです。
バックビート(2,4拍目)にはclap系の音を置くことが多いです。
Insaneを見てみると、00:40:521から00:42:987までは2,4拍目にclapを置くパターンになっています。
ところが、00:43:398から00:46:274からは1,3拍目にclapを置くパターン、00:46:685からは2,4拍目にclapを置くパターンに戻っています。
Hitsoundのつけ方はmapperの好みだと(僕は)思いますが、パターンを作る場合はダウンビートにどんなパターンを置くか、バックビートにどんなパターンを置くかを意識して作ったほうが良いと思います。
メモ帳にはっときます！

00:40:110 (1)　　　　remove clap　　音が無いほうがかっこいいきがする!
02:10:521 (9)　　　　中心に置いた方が良いと思います　modとは関係がないですが綺麗な図形配置の作り方を一応!

SPOILER

①　適当な位置にサークルを置く
②　Ctrl+C,Ctrl+V,Ctrl+Shift+R 6角形:60度　5角形:72度 etc
③　②を繰り返し

02:51:002 (7)　　　　Add New combo
02:52:029 (3)　　　　Remove New combo
03:16:892 (1)　　　　^
03:31:276 (8)　　　　リズムが分かりづらいので近づけたほうが良いと思います。
03:35:591 (4)　　　　Add New combo　こんな配置はどうですか!

SPOILER

　

03:36:618 (7)　　　　もうちょっと離した方が良いと思います。こんな配置はどうですか!

SPOILER

03:45:865 (1)~(4)　DS揃えたほうがいいと思います
04:48:536 (1)　　　　Remove New combo
04:49:769 (3)　　　　Add New combo
All fixed

[Hard]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed

00:58:192 (x)　　　　Add note
01:09:083 (~)　　　　音取りに違和感を感じます。こんな感じの音取りどうでしょうか

SPOILER

01:16:480 (~)　　　　こんなかんじの音取りはどうでしょうか!

SPOILER

01:21:411 (x)　　　　Add note
01:27:987 (~)　　　　こんなかんじは!

SPOILER

03:14:016~03:15:865　　マッピングしたほうが良いと思います　　　　　
03:39:906 (4)　　　　スライダーの終わりを03:40:317に
03:42:577 (3)　　　　スライダーの終わりを03:42:783に
03:47:714 (5)　　　　もっと離したほうがいいとおもいます!
04:09:906 (~)　　　　こんな音取りはどうですか!

SPOILER

All fixed

[Normal]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed

00:54:288 (~)　　　　こんな音取りどうですか!

SPOILER

00:56:959 (~)　　　　こんなかんじは

SPOILER

01:24:699 (~)　　　　こんな(r

SPOILER

01:52:028 (1)　　　　Remove New combo
02:06:411 (~)　　　　すこし分かりづらい気がします。　こんなかんじは!

SPOILER

02:37:646 (~)　　　　ここから始めるとわかりづらいです　こんなかんじは

SPOILER

03:47:098 (2)　　　　難しいと思います　ふつうに単発にしてみては！

SPOILER

All fixed

以上です！


ぐっどらっく！！

ありがとう！！！！
アドバイスはメモ帳にはりつけて永久保存します！

Thank you Modding

EvilElvis wrote:

Hello from E.E's modding queue!
Hard:
00:45:863 (10) - maybe something like this? Think this sound better.
01:27:370 (8) - ^
01:55:932 (2) - add circle after this
01:57:781 (1) - ^
03:47:305 (4) - ^
04:24:703 (1) - ^
04:28:607 (2) - ^
Insane:
01:11:959 (4) - ?
01:33:329 (3) - ?
01:38:466 (3) - delite , move spinner :
03:02:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - something like this?
All @suggestion@
P.S. If my mod help you , don't give me kd , mod this pls http://osu.ppy.sh/s/54225.

FreeSky wrote:

ALL fixed! Thank you!!
give a kd, and I will Modding

1. 01:37:234 - 同じタイミングに緑線が複数存在しておりUnrankableです
   必ずどちらか片方の緑線を削除してください
   
   

NewRulerNA wrote:

ちょっと拾ってUnrank要素を見つけたのでそれだけ

[General]

1. 01:37:234 - 同じタイミングに緑線が複数存在しておりUnrankableです
   必ずどちらか片方の緑線を削除してください
   
   

no kudosu

yuugeki1234 wrote:

Yo pick up from modreqs~
hi~

[General]
nothing


[Normal]

Change spinner point 04:52:442 from 04:52:853? Vocalのブレスに合わせているようならNo changeでも。
おっしゃるとおりブレスにあわせてるのでNo changeで！

[Hard]

00:30:658- move this slider at x432,y264. follow to 00:30:247(1,2,3) hits.
if u change ^ line up 00:31:274 sliders distance.
fixed!
01:14:836- ここからの音量を下げていくようなら、01:16:891と01:17:507のFinishが浮いているように聞こえます。音量を下げている為、強い音が違和感を生む場合があるからです。
打開策としては、Removeするか、Finishの音を弱くすると改善するかもしれません！
音を弱くしてみました　70%→45%
03:45:867- 単発じゃなく長めのスライダーでもいいかもしれません。
fixed!

[Insane]

move clap 01:20:076 and 01:20:692.
if u change ^ add clap at 01:20:178 and 01:20:795.
Sorry, No change
01:28:911 remove whis?　fixed!
04:13:196- remove finish? fixed!

some mod~ good map! good luckkkk~

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]

Hello!!! :3

[Normal]
01:38:055 - Add Circle? <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377366
02:28:809 - Move it at 02:28:603 - +2 Repeat and snap the Inherited point at 02:28:603, fits better imo
02:28:603 - Fix their shape? o: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377371

[Hard]
Perfect <3

[Insane]
Perfect <3

[Comments]
The maps are nice made, tho, no offense but I got bored listening to almost 6 mins slow song several times :C Good luck ranking it ^.^

R e d wrote:

[Normal]

01:06:822 (2) - kinda hard for "normal players" ;o in my opinion

01:51:206 - new combo?

[Hard]

01:26:405 - new combo?

03:45:867 - new combo?

[Insane]

turn "Insane" to "Lunatic" since this is touhou seems better



i loved the map, good luck

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388,152,44630,2,0,B|340:204|276:204|232:152,1,180,0|8

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zeroclover wrote:

かわい～　せいが
( ´⌒ω⌒`)
かわい～！(*'▽'*)♪


General

Lunatic

00:27:987 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - try symetric those notes, it will make more good

SPOILER

00:31:069 (6) - move this circle, and make 00:30:658 (3,4,5) - around (6) it will look like this

SPOILER

00:31:274 (7) - curve like this, because slider body not hiding (8) a lot after change

SPOILER

256,328,31274,2,0,B|308:320|324:276|324:276|344:228|384:212,1,180

00:33:535 (1) - New Combo colour should start at 00:33:946 (2) -
00:34:562 (3) - make some jump to (4) , because it was Lunatic difficult.. not must using same distance snap to all flow

SPOILER

00:38:261 (8) - same like above, make some jump to (9) , but make sure it was 2x distance snap jump
00:38:466 (9) - remove finish hitsound, too noise because (1) have finish hitsound, dont overuse it
00:42:370 (8,9,10,11,12) - set like this, more neat

SPOILER

00:44:630 (4) - make it blanket, because it fit and look more curve than 00:43:398 (1) -

SPOILER

388,152,44630,2,0,B|340:204|276:204|232:152,1,180,0|8

00:47:507 (2) - symetric with (1)?
it wil make look like this

SPOILER

00:50:178 (2) - use snap 1.0x ??
00:52:233 (1,2,3,6) - move, 00:52:233 (1,2,3) - at x168 y272 and 00:53:055 (6) - at x304y48
01:00:555 (5) - make this slider blanket to (4)

SPOILER

01:04:151 (4,5,6) - move like this

SPOILER

01:15:041 - suddenly , soft hitsound very low here
01:15:658 (1,2,3,4,1) - do like this

SPOILER

01:31:069 (1) - move to x256y348
01:48:329 (2) - try dont make this note stacked with (1)
02:00:658 (3) - ctrl+ r, more fun
02:10:726 - should have note here
02:14:836 (2) - dont stack
02:23:055 (5) - blanket it

SPOILER

02:26:959 (6) - ctrl +h / ctrl + j , make more fun
02:33:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - move 2 grid up
02:34:771 (1) - should at x292y72
02:35:593 (3) - move , follow y axis line
02:38:881 (5) - blanket 02:38:470 (2,3,4) -
02:39:908 (4) - more blanket
02:55:319 (1) - ctrl +h
03:29:223 (2) - more blanket

SPOILER

03:41:963 (3) - i like this have empty note , and this should start at 03:42:168 -
03:47:511 - add note
04:09:908 (1) - move to x480y180 , after that the rest is yours
04:24:908 - sound to low
04:41:757 (3) - move, dont get touch (2) slider body, after that 04:42:579 (5) - dont get this note hide because slider, hidden note because slider body look bad when playing
04:42:579 (5) - move, this note hidden bacve
04:51:107 - at inherit point and set volume 5% here
04:52:648 - dont forget to redo the volume hitsound

Hard

00:28:192 (5) - curve like this, more pretty

SPOILER

00:35:384 (5,6,7,8) - try dont do this, because (8) going to hit lifebar.png , ctrl + j and move it
00:47:096 (2,3,4) - symetric ??just give some idea

SPOILER

01:01:685 - add circle, because have drum hit here
01:07:439 (4,5) - make (4) more curve and blanket it for (5), look neat later

SPOILER

01:09:083 (4) - blanket (3)
01:12:165 (2,3,4,5,1) - order those notes like this, and the rest is yours

SPOILER

01:18:124 (1) - blanket (2)?
01:28:603 (2,3) - crtl + r
02:01:891 (3,4,5) - move and make symetric

SPOILER

02:04:973 (3,4) - try dont touch slider body, because it look bad when play view

SPOILER

02:15:452 (3) - i prefer make this

SPOILER

02:17:096 (7) - try make like this

02:34:566 (5) - move to x376y192
02:43:196 (2) - more curve, but dont get this slider hiding (1) and (2)
02:49:976 (3) - its too close to (2) slider body
03:17:100 (3) - move to x272 y104
03:31:689 (4,1) - move 1 grid to left for symetric
04:17:100 (6) - move far from slider body
04:22:031 (2) - move and make like this

SPOILER

04:23:059 (1,2,3) - change those notes like ^ (just copy paste)
04:35:182 (2,3) - move

SPOILER

04:36:209 (1,2,3) - just like before, copy 04:34:566 (1,2,3) -
04:40:113 - add circle
04:50:182 (1) - change this look

SPOILER

04:51:620 (1) - i dont think this spinner needed because Lunatic and normal have empty note here

Normal

00:46:069 (4) - move

01:55:932 (1) - move 1 grid to right
02:05:589 (4) - rotate about 15 - 30 degress, slider touch life bar
02:50:798 (2,3) - try symetric

SPOILER

04:40:113 (4) - move it to 04:39:908 - then extend it

a few mod for normal because already fine to play

realy?Thank you


oh.. sorry for long mod
i want to short it but lazy
star~

Yes, long and very good mod
i took a lot time to fix
But i got much from you <3
Thank you~!!

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa
Konniciha!!


[General]
* Your hitsound are messy, there are some random finishs, claps and whistles. Please listen to the song and put clap where snare are hit, and put whistle where bass are hit

OK, I'll try recheck sounds and to find fitting notes


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:36:617 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
02:09:699 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu, so beginners are hard to see (sometimes, begginers are slow to read)
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:42:168 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:20:593 (7) - New combo?
03:29:018 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:30:250 (2) - ^
04:50:182 (2) - ^

All fixed

[Hard]
* There is a whistle at sliderbody, which is annoying. Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)

00:38:672 (1) - This note is almost overlapped by hitbursts, I think it's better to move further away from it
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider

All fixed

[Lunatic]
00:56:137 (8) - New combo for 0,5x slider, it's confusing without NC it

fixed


I hate Seiga
oh...

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
If the entire map had the spacing of the kiai section it would be so great because your notes wouldn't have the ugly overlap. (When non-stream notes overlap each other it's my pet peeve ._.)
00:36:822 (5) - Maybe make this a curved slider?
03:10:113 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing change confused me so much that I combobroke. don't think that's a good idea in a Normal...
04:14:634 (1,2) - spacing

All fixed
I should considere this map and some change

[Hard]
00:43:192 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - increase the spacing?
00:56:137 (5,1) - ^?
01:49:767 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^?
02:01:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^?
02:23:055 (3,1) - I don't like this antijump

All fixed

[Lunatic]
parts of this feels overmapped :/ like you're still mapping to the lyrics but just adding 1/4 triples everywhere. IMO if you want to use 1/4 triples in this song you should map to the instruments instead
I see... thanks

03:36:620 (4,5) - don't like this antijump fixed

Overall, I like Hard a lot, but I think Lunatic feels overmapped (it feels like Hard with 1/4 triples, really and I wish it were more of its own thing) and the flow in Normal is kind of eh.

shojimeguro wrote:

as you say i only mod 2 diff so
let's started

Normal
00:28:603 - missing notes sorry no change
00:30:247 - this too
00:35:178 - and here

00:37:644 - 00:38:363 - fill it please fixed
00:41:754 - same sorry no change
00:43:398 - same fixed
00:45:041 - 00:46:682 - 00:48:329 - 00:51:719 - missing notes fixed

Hard
00:01:571 - start here
well the beats seems to be in place so i have no comment

That's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!

Thank you Modding

pyransc wrote:

Hi my mod.

[Normal]
CS +1 large? sorry no change

00:28:603 - add circle? no change
00:35:178 - ^ no change
00:38:672 (2) - remove NC fixed
00:41:754 - add circle ? fixed
00:42:165 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:43:398 (7) - add NC fixed
00:43:809 (1) - remove NC no change
01:38:055 (2) - remove circle, start spinner here fixed
02:28:192 - add circle no change
02:28:809 (4) - delete this. add slider with one reverse, end at 02:29:219 no change

[Hard]
hitsound are a little chaotic. I do not understand why you sometimes Turn down the audio. hm..ok I'll consider
01:01:480 - 01:02:713 - a very strange part no change
02:27:987 (1,2,3) - use distance snap already,use 1.8x distance

[FreeSky]
ok

384059043 wrote:

hi~ from CLANNAD MODDING QUEUE~

here's my mod >_<

* suggestion
** hightly suggestion
*** unrankable

[Normal]
* 00:27:370 (2,3) - blanket?
** 00:32:302 (3,4,1) - spacing
* 00:38:055 (1) - why new combo? OAO
* 00:45:041 (4,5) - blanket?
** 00:58:192 - add a note
** 00:58:398 (2,3) - spacing
* 01:03:535 (1,2) - blanket
* 01:33:124 (4,1) - don't want to see overlap
* 01:51:206 (1,2) - blanket
* 02:28:809 (3) - not suitable for normal
* 02:49:360 (1,3) - not good-looking
* 02:55:319 (1,2) - confusing..move them left?
* 03:17:511 (4,5) - blanket better
* 03:49:976 (2) - spacing

All fixed!!

good luck~

jogfi2002 wrote:

こんばんはー鏡からのMODです、よろしくね。

[General]
タイミングは問題ないと思う。
ストーリーボードがない場合、マップセットのフォルダーから「.osb」ファイルを削除すべきです。fixed!

素晴らしい曲ですね、聞きたら少し悲しみを感じたけど…
ありがとう！少し切ないですよね！

[Normal]
01:16:685 - add note サークル3つにするとstar diffがあがってしまうのでスライダーにしてリターンつけました
01:47:918 (1) - このスライダーと前のノートの距離はDSに合っていない。 fixed
02:39:497 (1,2,3,4) - このnoteを白線に配置するのはうがいいかな？ fixed

04:20:593 (1) - これもDS問題
04:50:182 (2) - ＾
後半は全部1.0xにそろえてあるはずなのですが問題あったのかな 保留

[Hard]
01:44:220 (1,2) - ちょっとこのサークルとこのスライダーは連撃じゃないかって勘違いをしたｗスライダーをもっと少し遠くしてのはいいかも。
03:19:771 (7,8) - ＾
04:47:922 (2,1,2,3) - 前のとは同じで、初見の時は思わずすぐに1をヒットしまった(^_^;)
All fixed!

[Lunatic]
00:34:562 (2,3,4,5) - この跳びは平和なリズムに合ってないと思う。そしてここは小節の始まりでもない。別のModでこうしたのでそのままで！
00:56:137 (1) - リズムは変わっていない、突然の減速はちょっと迷わす。強調したい部分だったのでそのままで！
01:12:576 (7,8,9) - 前のようにもっと緊密に配置して、先後一致するのはいいと思う。どういうことだろう・・？ごめんなさいそのままで

01:14:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - この跳びはちょっと後にして、ずんずんあがっている「木霊する」って歌詞に合ってのほうはもっと適当だと思う。
02:32:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ＾
四角形ジャンプはそのままに、スライダーのジャンプを加えてみました！
03:14:429 (5,6,7,8) - これらのノートと 03:15:456 (1,2) は同じに1/8の間隔をとっているですけど、配置の距離は違います。一致するのはいいと思う。fixed!


ほかに特に問題はない。
下手な日本語ですが、申し訳ございません。変なことを言ったら、指摘してください。

会話もできるレベルの上手な日本語だと思います！
Moddingありがとう～

- t e n n y a - wrote:

lily-an yay x)
star ~*

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

hi~ 思ったことをばんばん書いていくので、参考になれば(｡ÒωÓ。)~
(この前のM4Mのあれです！)

ありがとう～！！！

General

1. tagのTouhouはいらないんじゃないかな！ソースにあるし！
2. tagに作詞のazuki、編集のkaztora,eba、アルバム名のreunion、原曲のdesire driveを追加?

Fixed!!

Lunatic

• Suggestion

1. 00:31:891 (7) - がんばって先端を綺麗にスタック~　Fixed
2. 00:36:000 (7) - x^448 y^296にもってくると6.7.8で綺麗な三角形~　Fixed
3. 01:06:206 (4,5) - ちょっと見づらい感あるから4と5の配置を逆にしてみたり？　Fixed
4. 01:11:137 (3) - ここはremove Finishで 01:11:548 (1) - こっちにadd Finish? ( 01:18:124 (1) - ここについてるし！ )
   ほんとだ・・・何を考えていたんだ
5. 01:19:767 (1) - 手前の5.6と1で綺麗に三角形を作ってみては？　Fixed
6. 01:23:261 (2,3,4,5,6) - 音の強さを拾うと2をもう少しジャンプさせて、5.6の距離が近い感じがしました・・・改善案は思い浮かびませんでした!!
   適当にジャンプさせたった！
7. 01:28:911 - Lunaticですし、ここの音を拾って3連打にしてみては？Fixed
8. 01:34:254 - 同じくここも拾って5連打にしても全然問題ないように思えました　ここはのーちぇんじでいきます～
9. 01:45:247 (2,3,4) - 2.3.4の順番を　4.2.3に変えてみては？NICE!!
10. 01:55:521 - ここの音を拾いたい感じがするので 01:55:726 - ここのnoteを削除し、スライダーを引いてみては？Fixed
11. 02:03:946 (11) - 3grid左 1grid上で綺麗になるかも？ Fixed
12. 02:27:781 - remove noteでもいいかも？ Fixed
13. 02:29:219 (5) - 曲調的にここから遅いスライダーで伸ばしたい感じ~ ここはのーちぇんじで～
14. 02:29:630 (1) - サビここからじゃないですかね・・？前後のサビのパターンを確認してみてください oh... おっしゃるとおりで。。
15. 02:46:997 - add note Fixed
16. 02:56:757 - ここからスピン始まってもいい感じ？ Fixed
17. 03:20:798 (7) - メロディ拾ってるのであればここのnoteはいらない・・・？ Fixed
18. 03:36:415 (6) - 4のヒットバーストに少しかぶって見づらい感あったので移動できるのであれば右に移動したほうがいいかも?(remove noteでもいい感じがするけど！)
    ずらしました～
19. 03:45:456 (7) - x^296 y^140くらいが好ましい感じ? Fixed
20. 03:48:127 (9,10) - 9と10は平行に配置したい感じ どういうことだろう・・？のーちぇんじにします
21. 04:36:004 - add noteしてもいいかも Fixed
22. 04:37:853 (2) - この部分はadd finishかも？Fixed
23. 04:45:250 (3) - ちょっといきなり近い気がします　手前にnoteを配置するか　間隔を調整したほうがいいです

add note しましたー

Hard

• Suggestion

1. 00:38:672 (1) - 1grid右で△~ Fixed
2. 00:56:137 (1) - 1grid落として高さそろえた方が綺麗かも? 00:56:959 (1) - こちらは同様に2gridかな~ Fixed
3. 00:58:192 - 音的にここにnote　00:58:398 - ここから 00:58:809 - ここまでスライダーって感じがしました Fixed
4. 01:00:658 - ここの音を拾いたい~ Fixed
5. 01:17:507 (9) - 2grid右? Fixed
6. 02:04:356 (2) - clap忘れかな？Lunaticにはここにclapがあります~ Fixed
7. 02:29:840 (2) - 何だこのスライダーはｗｗｗ　02:30:250 - ここまできっちりひこう！ｗ uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
8. 02:51:826 (4) - 1grid右~ Fixed
9. 03:35:182 - んん・・・Lunaticならここ音拾ってる気がします~・・・どうなんだろう今のままであってるきがするけど・・！
   そのままにしますー
10. 04:26:141 (5) - このnoteは超難しいと思うｗｗｗ (同じタイミングに2個noteおくのはunrankableなので消しておこう！)
11. 04:31:278 (1) - ^
12. 04:34:566 (1) - ^
13. 04:43:812 (9) - ^
    なんでこうなってるんだろうｗｗｗｗｗｗ
14. 04:50:593 (8) - あまり綺麗に見えない感じ・・・！スライダーにかぶらないようにしたほうがいいかも！

Fixed

Normal

• Suggestion

1. 00:34:973 - remove note
2. 00:40:110 (3) - normalでスライダーの後ろにnoteを被せるのはあまりよくないように思えました~・・・。(以後はスルーで！)
3. 04:17:305 (3) - いきなりこれだけリバースするのはわかりづらいかも？

All Fixed!!


リメイクお疲れ様です~　がんばって下さいlω-。)/☆

1. tag is not same between diffs. Either "kaztora" and "kaztra" are wrong

1. 02:29:634 (1) - unsnapped note

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found issues. you must fix.

[General]

1. tag is not same between diffs. Either "kaztora" and "kaztra" are wrong

[Lizsig's Easy]

1. 02:29:634 (1) - unsnapped note

gl

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

1. Inconsistency in Tags: (I can not find where is not the same, you'd better copy one of these and paste to other
   
   - [Hard] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Lizsig's Easy] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Lunatic] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Normal] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: (Try to make these the same)
   
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381
   - [Lizsig's Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:40:110
   Kiai #2: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:58:196
   Kiai #3: Starts on 04:21:413, ends on 04:34:360
   Kiai #4: Starts on 04:34:566, ends on 04:49:360
   - [Lunatic] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:411
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:39:497
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:483
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381

1. Unsnapped things:
   
   02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   
   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   01:34:582 - snap to 01:34:562
   03:24:906 - snap to 03:24:908
   04:08:262 - snap to 04:08:264
   04:21:413 - snap to 04:21:415
   04:44:529 - snap to 04:44:429
2. 03:24:086 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
3. 02:56:552 (1) - Needless whistle, just remove it then it will sound better in my view.
4. 04:52:853 (1) - ^^^
   Fine!

1. Unsnapped things:
   
   02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
2. 00:52:439 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
3. 00:40:110 (3) - I guess soft sound effect is the best choice, normal is really a bit noisy.
4. 01:14:836 - A note should be here since you add a note like 01:13:192, so keep it the same plz.
5. 01:27:987 - ^^^
6. 02:55:319 (5) - You'd better not use only a slider to map here, what about this? It can sound better via you change like it.
7. 03:19:976 (1,1) - Where is the spacing :< ? They are almost in the same spacing, ppl can hardly recognize it, try make the spacing fit their timing position.

1. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.

1. 01:05:795 (1,3) - Ctrl+G please, or it may confuse ppl since the strange arrangement.
2. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.