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Mell - Proof (TV size)

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Princess God
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Princess God
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年9月16日 at 11:56:39

Artist: Mell
Title: Proof (TV size)
Source: Hayate no Gotoku
Tags: Bulter combat Princess God Athena Tennos Gundam -[NYAN]- Mell
BPM: 92
Filesize: 14399kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. -[NYAN]-'s Ojou-sama (4.37 stars, 169 notes)
  2. First Meeting... (0.99 stars, 54 notes)
  3. Hayate no Gotoku! (4.94 stars, 214 notes)
  4. Proof (3.99 stars, 131 notes)
Download: Mell - Proof (TV size)
Download: Mell - Proof (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st map...
Ending 1 from Hayate no Gotoku!
Hope everyone enjoys it and,of course,likes this beautiful song,also~XD
I will be really really appreciated if you give me some advice...
Special thanks to Athena Tennos,Gundam and Rotte(-[NYAN]-)
Ps:First Meeting...=Easy
Proof=Normal
-[NYAN]-`s Ojou-sama=Hyper
Athena no Gotoku?!=Hyper
Hayate no Gotoku!=Insane
2013/4/20 remap easy and insane
5/2 finish easy and insane,looking for modding
5/4 gd vanished temporarily,back soon
5/5 nm 50%,fixed some se in other diff
5/9 finished nm except its se
5/17 all finished,ready for modding
sorry for no upgrading these days~
8/11 remap for the 4th time,remap insane today
8/12 finished normal,and maybe there will be no more than two diff at last cuz somehow unncessary
8/29 fixed some se
Last edited by Princess God , edited 43 times in total.
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
TV size -> TV Size
tags移掉proof hayate
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
0.0好
Twice_old
Twice_old
BPM92，一定是个良心图
Gundam
136 posts
Joined January 2011
Gundam
先留名 啦啦啦
Twice_old
Twice_old
哇哈哈哈喵！

[Easy]

00:04:654-(3) nc

00:07:263-(5) 去掉,然后让00:07:426的滑条从那里开始

00:20:306-(4) nc

00:22:915-(8) ^

00:25:524-(10) ^

00:43:459-00:53:567 别偷懒啊喵！

00:56:828-(5) nc

01:11:501-(4) ^

01:26:501-(4) 到 01:28:621-(8) 音效求不坑爹

01:27:480-(5) nc

01:28:947-(1) 转圈移动到 01:28:784 ,然后结束在01:33:675
建议加根绿线降低音量。


[Proof]

卧槽general都没改动过啊 > >建议先去改改

比如说HP+2
CS-1
AR+1
之类的....

[Princess God]

怒瞎这个难度的note更小了，波波油（拍飞

今天先吐槽到这里o.o因为好晚了....
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Princess God

Twice wrote:

哇哈哈哈喵！

[Easy]

00:04:654-(3) nc

00:07:263-(5) 去掉,然后让00:07:426的滑条从那里开始

00:20:306-(4) nc

00:22:915-(8) ^

00:25:524-(10) ^

00:43:459-00:53:567 别偷懒啊喵！

00:56:828-(5) nc

01:11:501-(4) ^

01:26:501-(4) 到 01:28:621-(8) 音效求不坑爹

01:27:480-(5) nc

01:28:947-(1) 转圈移动到 01:28:784 ,然后结束在01:33:675
建议加根绿线降低音量。


[Proof]

卧槽general都没改动过啊 > >建议先去改改

比如说HP+2
CS-1
AR+1
之类的....

[Princess God]

怒瞎这个难度的note更小了，波波油（拍飞

今天先吐槽到这里o.o因为好晚了....

我一看写了这么多就果断先怒给kds~
Gundam
136 posts
Joined January 2011
Gundam
演示版本._.第一次做图这样很不错了 加油~

Download: Mell - Proof (TV size) (Princess God) [Gundam mod].osu
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Princess God

Gundam wrote:

演示版本._.第一次做图这样很不错了 加油~
谢谢鼓励，我会努力的！
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
喵0.0
我也是新人 都只是些建议
哪说得不对的话请多包涵 :)

General
combo colour最好自己设置 不麻烦的>.<
PreviewTime还没有设置
http://puu.sh/uQoe最下面 推荐点01:04:654这个要求所有难度一致
所有难度的kiai time要一致

First Meeting...
00:19:002(3)easy里面这种快速折返还是少用比较好
另外开AImod改掉unsnapped http://puu.sh/uQbB
01:19:419 unsnapped 可以检查一下其他的绿线

Proof
记事本打开.osu把这个值修复一下http://puu.sh/uQ8F
感觉clap很吵 可以整体减小音量
00:20:306(9)nc
00:52:263(x)加一个note怎么样
01:14:111(1)remove nc
01:15:089(3)nc

Hayate no Gotoku
note太小啦 :(
可以试试整体减小音量
bpmx2感觉用在kiai time比较好
还是snapping的问题http://puu.sh/uQiT
01:06:285(1)remove nc
01:06:937(3)nc
01:08:893(1)remove nc
01:09:546(3)nc
01:10:361(1)remove nc
01:10:850(2)nc
01:13:459(13)^
01:14:763(x)试试加一个note

大概就这些 看得出做的很用心诶ww
加油 ;)
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Princess God

Melt wrote:

喵0.0
多谢指点~
kds无疑奉上~
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
做完了。。。话说找个hitsound - finish~把我呢个吵死人的finish音降低点把。。。。好吵。。。又不知道放什么音效好。。。纠结
BG换这个把。。。。
BG
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos

Athena Tennos wrote:

做完了。。。话说找个hitsound - finish~把我呢个吵死人的finish音降低点把。。。。好吵。。。又不知道放什么音效好。。。纠结
BG换这个把。。。。
BG
啊~等下。。。忘了改NC了。。。。无视掉先。。。。囧。
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos

Athena Tennos wrote:

做完了。。。话说找个hitsound - finish~把我呢个吵死人的finish音降低点把。。。。好吵。。。又不知道放什么音效好。。。纠结
BG换这个把。。。。
BG
改好了。。。

Download: Mell - Proof (TV size) (Princess God) [Hayate no Baka!].osu
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Princess God

Athena Tennos wrote:

[/box]
改好了。。。[/quote]
哇~太感谢啦~果断先submit了
不过我还是提议还是把难度名字改得有你名字（或者一部分）比较好……（真心）
Athena no Gotoku什么的（笑）
游戏中再议吧……
再次感谢！
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos

Princess God wrote:

哇~太感谢啦~果断先submit了
不过我还是提议还是把难度名字改得有你名字（或者一部分）比较好……（真心）
Athena no Gotoku什么的（笑）
游戏中再议吧……
再次感谢！
orz。。。。话说怎么给了我3个KD啊= =.....会被删掉哒。。。话说说好的kiai timeQAQ.....居然没了QAQ！我才加了2个而已么QAQ...又不多QAQ...
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Princess God

Athena Tennos wrote:

orz。。。。话说怎么给了我3个KD啊= =.....会被删掉哒。。。话说说好的kiai timeQAQ.....居然没了QAQ！我才加了2个而已么QAQ...又不多QAQ...
好吧……表示这是我的错……
其实本来觉得其实每个难度都这么做了也许效果会不错
但是反应过来的时候已经都删没了呢……OTL
对了，求射~
-Athena-
1,414 posts
Joined June 2011
-Athena-
First mod post orz, sorry if i'm not much help

General:
Hayate no Gotoku <3, and nice map and song, but your triples and some double (i notice quite a lot of them) could use a little more variation, perhaps instead of just a straight line all the time, use a triangular pattern.

Hayate no Gotoku
00:14:330 - The three beats here don't belong, perhaps a slider or a jump.

00:36:159 - This double feels unnecessary, perhaps replace with a slider.

00:51:947 - The 2 sliders together don't feel smooth.

00:53:768 - 2 very sudden notes after a spinner, quite unexpected.

01:11:296 - This part with the doubles in general feels very abrupt, needs more flow.

01:16:206 - The sliders are too fast, try to make them follow her voice, she sings itsuka sube~~~te(place a note here).

01:18:246 - A double or a note then a slider is enough here.

01:28:625 - One note before the spinner is enough.

okay~ 1 diff only orz sorry... modding is so hard ;_;
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Princess God

-A t H e N a- wrote:

First mod post orz, sorry if i'm not much help


okay~ 1 diff only orz sorry... modding is so hard ;_;
Well，perfect modding,thanks
plz don`t worry~
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos

-A t H e N a- wrote:

First mod post orz, sorry if i'm not much help

General:
Hayate no Gotoku <3, and nice map and song, but your triples and some double (i notice quite a lot of them) could use a little more variation, perhaps instead of just a straight line all the time, use a triangular pattern.

Hayate no Gotoku
00:14:330 - The three beats here don't belong, perhaps a slider or a jump.

00:36:159 - This double feels unnecessary, perhaps replace with a slider.

00:51:947 - The 2 sliders together don't feel smooth.

00:53:768 - 2 very sudden notes after a spinner, quite unexpected.

01:11:296 - This part with the doubles in general feels very abrupt, needs more flow.

01:16:206 - The sliders are too fast, try to make them follow her voice, she sings itsuka sube~~~te(place a note here).

01:18:246 - A double or a note then a slider is enough here.

01:28:625 - One note before the spinner is enough.

okay~ 1 diff only orz sorry... modding is so hard ;_;
\o/!!!小雅\o/!!!
Pokie
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Pokie
(´･ω･`) Requested via 新人群


[General]
  1. BG size should be under 1024*768, BG GDM.jpg is 1229*768 atm.
  2. Offset: 2042, Delete the second timing section on all difficulties
  3. It's better to unified your kiai sections.


[First Meeting...]
  • 00:09:872 (1) - This note appears while spinner is still going, and that's not the right place for a spinner :< Consider keep that part mapped.
    00:19:002 (3) - Suggest to devide them into two sliders with this rhythm, ooo ooo (Also finishs sounds weird :<)
    00:28:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - No claps?
    00:33:024 (1) - Start from 00:33:350 -
    00:52:915 (5,1) - Spacing error, only 0.73x between these two objects
    00:53:567 (2) - Extend to 1/2 beat
    01:04:002 (1) - ^


    [Gundam's Butter]
  1. Hitsound are toooooo softly, consider to increase the volume.
00:13:785 (4,5,6) - spacing (Becareful of your spacing while with grid snap on.
00:19:980 (4,5) - Try not to stack them under (2) /pattern breaks while testing
00:25:198 (1) - Don't see the reason of a new combo here. :<
00:34:654 (3,4,5) - spacing
00:49:654 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - That's totally an Insane pattern imo, they mixed up together. Please use a better on instead.
01:10:197 (2,3) - spacing
01:19:419 - unsnapped section


[Proof]

00:02:699 (4,5,6) - I count this difficulty as a Normal+, but it's not a suitable pattern for Normal+. D: (Overlaps too much)
00:07:916 (1) - Do a new combo here.
00:20:306 (1) - Slider streams actually should be 4 beats for a single slider.
00:34:654 (3) - Stack this better
00:35:959 (5) - oh wow what a big jump here, doesn't make sence :<
00:39:872 (2,3,4) - Keep these three in same spacing.
00:50:306 (4) - This should be ended at 00:51:284 -
00:59:437 (1) - overlapped under slider

:< gonna ignore the following parts, I'm sorry, this difficulty still need works!
Remapping should be a nice choice, imho.


[NYAN's Ojou-sama]
  1. Since I'm not sure are there any proof for using such a circle size. I may skip this atm

[Hayate no Gotoku]
  1. As above.

[Athena no Gotoku!]

00:50:959 (6) - New comobo

Something was wrong while kiai starts, meh.



Overall, it's a real 1st map though. Get your mapping skills better is a most important thing for newbie :D Good Luck to all guys.
Athena Tennos
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Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos

Pokie wrote:

(´･ω･`) Requested via 新人群


[Athena no Gotoku!]

00:50:959 (6) - New comobofix♪~
=_=//为什么要用英文。。。。。。orz
thx♪~

>>update<<
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Princess God

Pokie wrote:

(´･ω･`) Requested via 新人群
wow，nice modding，thx~
I will practise more to be a good newbie lol
Athena Tennos
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Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos

Princess God wrote:

Pokie wrote:

(´･ω･`) Requested via 新人群
wow，nice modding，thx~
I will practise more to be a good newbie lol
wtf all saw f#%# english!!#!@$@$%#$%!!!!!!kuso!!!~english XINAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Princess God
135 posts
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Topic Starter
Princess God

Athena Tennos wrote:

wtf all saw f#%# english!!#!@$@$%#$%!!!!!!kuso!!!~english XINAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hahaha,我只是钥匙丁罢了
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos

Princess God wrote:

Athena Tennos wrote:

wtf all saw f#%# english!!#!@$@$%#$%!!!!!!kuso!!!~english XINAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hahaha,我只是钥匙丁罢了
$%@#$^$%^$%不科学！~
Jemmmmy
526 posts
Joined September 2012
Jemmmmy
Hayate no Gotoku!
00:26:661 (5) - 调整到与前后note间距相同
00:32:939 (9) - 去掉或者放到放在00:33:020 (1) - 上
01:25:521 - 最好添加滑条，vocal是拖音


Proof
00:09:543 (1) - 滑条尾部换成circle
00:52:750 (4) - 滑条尾部对上白线


第一次mod见谅
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