alacat wrote:

Hi~
From In-game via PM :3
全て提案です。
Let's go ~

[Rush]
●00:04:282 (1) - こういった配置はどうでしょうかhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/338923 少し違いますが、fixed~
●00:05:175 (6) - 00:04:817 (4) - に重ねてみる? おそらく、no changeで><;
●00:15:710 (2) - 重ねた方が綺麗かもしれませんhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/338931 fixed
●00:04:639 (3) - whistle追加? うーん、ここら辺のwhistleが難しくて悩みますが、このままがいいかなーって思います><
●00:05:175 (6) - ^ ^
●00:23:210 (1,2,3) - 音量を少しずつ下げてみるのはどうでしょう fixed
●00:52:496 (1) - 始点のwhistleを削除 ここはno change!
●00:54:639 (2) - 終点にFinish追加? fixed
●01:10:710 (4) - ^ fixed
●01:23:210 (1,2) - 始点にwhistleを追加? ここは音ないほうがいいかなーって思いました！

[remy11's Insane]音に関しては自分がすこし改善しました
●00:07:853 (3) - whistleを追加? fixed
●00:08:925 (1,2) - 始点にwhistleを追加? fixed
●00:10:532 (4,5,6) - 少し形が汚い気がします、流れを作ってみてはどうでしょうかhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/338947
●00:22:317 (1) - whistleよりfinishのほうがあってる気がします fixed
●00:23:925 (1) - から00:45:175 (4) - までの間にもうすこしclapを追加した方がいいかもです 入れたいですが、音とりを考えると少し難しそうでした><
●00:42:675 (2) - x:30に揃えてみる?00:42:496 (1) - と同じx座標に揃えた方が綺麗だと思います fixed
●00:43:210 (5) - whistleを追加? fixed
●00:49:639 (3) - ^ fixed
●00:50:353 (1) - ^ fixed
●00:57:853 (5) - 始点にwhistleを追加? finishですが追加しました


頑張ってくださいε=(ﾉ・・)ﾉ
リクエストありがとうございました

[Rush]

[remy11's Insane]

Kitsuneko wrote:

Hi there
Modding for improve your map

[Rush]

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding
伴奏がないのでここは音をつけないほうがいいと自分は思いました。 no changeで><

1. 00:17:853 - Add whistle
2. 01:00:710 - ^
3. 01:23:567 - ^

Mapping

1. 00:37:139 (3,4) - (3) X:196 Y:284 と (4) X:308 Y:248 (4)は(6)の終わりに重なる位置で fixed
2. 00:42:317 (6) - X:148 Y:156? スタックさせてた方がいいと思ったのでこのままで。
3. 01:08:925 (5) - 角度はこのコンボ内で揃えた方が綺麗です 01:08:210 (1) - に向く直線に変更 fixed
4. 01:10:710 (4) - リピート削除 ここで音を減らすのはちょっと嫌なのでこのままにしておきます！

Good luck maaagic


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues

Kitsuneko wrote:

[remy11's Insane]

• 
  Setting
  
  

1. Clear

Hitsounding

1. 00:14:996 (1) - Add finish
2. 01:00:710 - Add whistle
3. 01:23:210 (4,8) - ^

Mapping

1. 00:10:889 (6) - X:88 Y:160 もしくは X:32 Y:136に移動
2. 00:13:567 (5,1) - 3連打でいいのでは
3. 00:19:460 - Put any note here
4. 00:31:246 (1) - このスライダーはやめて00:31:425の音を取れるようにしてください
5. 00:45:710 (1,2,3) - 音減らすより連打かなあ
6. 00:50:175 (6) - 分かりづらい上になんの関連性もない場所に飛んでるので(5)にスタックなりした方がいいかな
7. 00:51:425 (1,2,3) - 音減らすべきではない
8. 01:15:353 (3) - ugly slider
9. 01:25:175 - Put any note here

Suzully wrote:

Should be better now. Rebubbled~

304,12,41067,6,0,B|376:36|404:112,1,140,12|0

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
Follow some tags in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48435 ?

[Insane]
00:11:603 (3) - move to (264,168) since you're making spacing gradually larger on the whole long vocal sound.
01:05:978 - add a note here to keep the flow
01:10:710 (4) - finish? You don't really follow the drum sound in the music...
01:22:853 (2,3) - won't hurt if you place (1,2,3,4) in equal spacing...
Two sections that could be improved a bit: 00:51:425 - somehow this breaks the clapping flow; and 01:11:782 - the way you presenting two similar sentences is totally different (and (1,2,3,4,5) spacing sounds odd)

[Rush]
(not really suggesting such a diff name...and it looks harder than [insane]...

[Hard]
00:41:067 (1,2) - tweek (1) so that it curves (2) properly?

304,12,41067,6,0,B|376:36|404:112,1,140,12|0

00:42:496 (1,2) - ^

well [Insane] can still be better imo. Fix ^ or get a bit more mod and find me again.

wmfchris wrote:

Talked with remy before and fixed some pattern there...~

Since it involves a bit remapping around the section mentioned I'll not go for ranking, but it looks ready though.

Rebubbled!

Suzully wrote:

This map became good enough to get ranked.
Ranked!

初rankおめでとう！

AngelEyes wrote:

Love the mapping! xDD
:* Remy11

Static Noise Bird wrote:

inb4 another one tomorrow
and day after tomorrow
etc.