From the queue..
My modding is not 'great' but this is my suggestions.
[General]
The song ends so suddenly XP.. but not a problem
Have you been using 1/8 snap divisor? if did, use 1/4 instead..
There's no break so disable letterbox during breaks.
[Easy]
00:00:122 (1) - maybe longer slider with one repeat.
00:10:622 (3,4) - circle underneath the sliderend is hard for easy.
00:21:122 (1,2) - Feel too empty here.
00:24:872 (2,3) - Better blanket here please
00:36:122 (1,2) - Hard for easy
[Normal]
If possible, try to keep the difficulty around 3.60~3.90 star rating giving a nice well-spreaded difficulties in the mapset.
Try to refrain yourself using blue ticks in normal diff unless it's really needed... sometimes it can be confusing. (example: 00:42:122 (1,2))
00:40:247 (3) - how about make it into a slider (instead of a circle because there's a beat in 00:40:434?) that looks similar to slider 1 and 2 in that combo?
00:43:247 (3) - ^
01:00:122 (1,3) - Blanket the end of slider 1 with slider 3?
01:12:122 (1,2,3) - Clean these up a little bit, they look a bit messy.
[Hard]
Wait. wait. wait. hang on there. slider velocity 1.60, don't do x2.00 with the inherited points with 0.80 sv...
... why all of a sudden 1/3 (or 1/6) divisor? 00:09:372 (2,4,5)
00:09:122 (1) - make this note visible, or stack it. doesn't look good imo.
00:10:622 (6,8) - if possible, make the slider neater. it seems unbalanced.
00:15:684 (2,3) - blanket better here.
00:17:184 (5,6) - ^
00:50:372 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - too hard for hard.
00:46:997 (8,10,11,12) - overlap perfectly. it looks messy if not.
01:20:747 (7,8,9,10,11) - unreadable imo.
[Kogure's Insane]
Great map
I don't mod insane usually. So this is skipped.
Good luck mapping