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Yu-Izanagi-12

Chewin wrote:

Hi mod request from my queu ;3

[General]
Delete "combobreak-old1" and full submit. Unused file.
There are 2 .mp3 files in your folder omg.. Delete "Ryo- Dazzling World M@ster Version - YouTube" one and full submit.
Opening with File > Open .osz in notepad set "AudioFilename: Idol Master Battle Theme ~Cheria~.mp3" in the "Jayel's Easy"
Inconsistency in PreviewTime, set 80089 in the "Idol Master Special" diff
Inconsistency in Source.. You should set "Idol Master" in all diffs
Set 691 offset and 136BPM in the Idol Master Special like other diffs
Inconsistency in combo colours. Consider to fix this.
Still in "Idol Master Special" inconsistency in kiai times. You have to set:
Use the video in all diffs. No it works best with idol master special (keyword: special)
Remove letterbox during breaks.
And what. The idol master special has got the vocal.. Oh god plz you must use the SAME .mp3 file for every diff of your mapset <.<[/color]

[Jayel's Easy] Done
00:43:043 (2) - Improve this slider's shape using this code: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/361357
200,188,43043,2,0,B|252:220|308:176|288:120,1,150,0|2
01:26:279 (1) - Remove NC and use it on 01:27:161 (3) for consistency with the previous part
01:28:043 (1) - Remove NC
01:44:808 (5) - Add NC
01:47:014 (1) - Remove NC

[Normal]
I think this SV is enough high for a Normal. I suggest you to decrease it
00:27:161 (1) - Remove finish, it's too loud..
00:28:926 (2) - ^
00:43:043 (2) - Remove clap on the end for consistency with 00:41:279 (1) no change
01:12:602 (5) - Distance snap no change

[Hard]
00:13:043 (5) - Add NC here and remove from 00:13:264 (1) Done
00:16:573 (5,1) - ^ done
00:29:588 (4) - Remove finish, too loud no change
01:43:926 (8) - NC no change
Rhythm is good but.. the map is, meh.

[Idol Master Special]
00:43:531 (3) - Improve the overlap with 00:42:207 (1) Done
00:50:810 (4) - New combo no change
00:52:134 (1) - Remove NC no change
00:53:016 (2) - Use NC no change

Please you must follow stuff I wrote above in "General"
Good luck ^^
jesse7419
Hi :3
From A-tan's mod queue

[General]

  1. Timing: offset 1,417 is better.
  2. If you have the skin,you should add below code in your all .osu file
    SliderBorder : 255,255,255
  3. If no make SB,please delete .osb file in your folder.
  4. Add Jayel in your Tags.
  5. The Jayel's Newbie's BG 0.0?
[Jayel's Newbie]

  • 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
    00:10:222 (1) - add finish. Umm..and you can set Inherited to make low Vol.
    00:43:752 (2) - prev fix to 0.8x
    01:28:752 (1) - ^
[Pro]

  1. This is Normal? If yes,the distance should be to consistency in every note.
    00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
    00:40:222 (3) - distance fix to 0.8x
    00:43:751 (2) - ^
    00:57:428 (2) - ^
    00:58:310 (4) - ^
    01:11:546 (1) - remove NC
    01:11:987 (2) - NC
    01:20:810 (1) - this is blocked by 01:15:516 (3)
    01:23:457 (1) - move to x:320 y:332
    01:27:869 (1) - distance ~
    01:32:060 (3,4) - ^
    01:49:046 - I think this add a circle and add finish will more sense in the end~ (or 01:48:604 (4) - change clap to finish same with Jayel's Newbie)
[Star]

  • 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
    01:29:193 (3) - distance fix to 1.2x . It could affect play (the DS with 01:28:531 (2,3) - is so similar with 01:27:869 (1,2) - )
[Idol Master]

  • 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
    00:56:987 (5) - add whistle is slider start?
    01:49:046 - add circle and add finish?
Rhythm is well,just the slider have a little weird.
That's all I can find~
Nice song! Good Luck
Jebok_old
Hi there! Mod as requested from my queue...

[General]
Your spinners mostly do not fit. Also, they are ugly. I suggest not changing the approach circle of the spinners.
00:59:634 - Map the break... The song is short and this break does not fit with the song. OH and... The break HAVE to be the same on every difficulty. So remove all breaks, or use the break times in Jayel's difficulty because it works much better than your break time.

[Jayel's Newbie]
01:26:546 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do this combo diagonally, (1) x:256 and y:260. (2) x:216 and y:192. (3) x:296 and y:192. (4) x:256 and y:124.
01:28:751 (1,2) - Reverse selection of both (1) and (2) then place (1) x:176 and y:264 and place (2) x:336 and y:264.
Yep, that's all :oops:

[Pro]
00:24:340 - Map instead of putting spinner here, does not fit.
00:45:406 - ^
01:40:222 - ^
Sorry but I think that none of the spinner fit.


[Star]
00:23:016 (3) - x:424 and y:176
00:31:398 - I don't think this spinner fits here. Map this part instead.
00:34:928 (4) - New combo
00:36:693 - No new combo
00:38:457 (5) - New combo
00:39:560 - No new combo
00:47:281 (5) - New combo
00:48:384 - No new combo
00:49:046 (5) - New combo
01:13:531 - No new combo
01:13:751 (2) - New combo

[Idol Master]
00:32:722 (3) - Remove. Place a slider from 00:32:501 to 00:32:722 instead. Clap at the end of it.
00:34:266 (8) - x:12 and y:124
00:34:487 (9) - Remove. Copy slider (7) instead, reverse selection, and place it x:52 and y:180.
00:35:148 (1) - x:172 and y:228
00:35:590 (2) - x:280 and y:168
00:39:340 (3) - Spacing 1.00x
00:40:001 (5) - ^
00:48:825 (8) - New Combo
00:49:046 (1) - No New Combo
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

jesse7419 wrote:

Hi :3
From A-tan's mod queue

[General]

  1. Timing: offset 1,417 is better. Done
  2. If you have the skin,you should add below code in your all .osu file
    SliderBorder : 255,255,255
  3. If no make SB,please delete .osb file in your folder. Done
  4. Add Jayel in your Tags. Done
  5. The Jayel's Newbie's BG 0.0? Its Idolmaster yes
[Jayel's Newbie]

  • 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
    00:10:222 (1) - add finish. Umm..and you can set Inherited to make low Vol. done
    00:43:752 (2) - prev fix to 0.8x No change
    01:28:752 (1) - ^
[Pro]

  1. This is Normal? If yes,the distance should be to consistency in every note.
    00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
    00:40:222 (3) - distance fix to 0.8x No Change
    00:43:751 (2) - ^
    00:57:428 (2) - ^
    00:58:310 (4) - ^
    01:11:546 (1) - remove NC Done
    01:11:987 (2) - NC
    01:20:810 (1) - this is blocked by 01:15:516 (3) Done
    01:23:457 (1) - move to x:320 y:332 Done
    01:27:869 (1) - distance ~ No Change
    01:32:060 (3,4) - ^
    01:49:046 - I think this add a circle and add finish will more sense in the end~ (or 01:48:604 (4) - change clap to finish same with Jayel's Newbie)Done
[Star]

  • 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
    01:29:193 (3) - distance fix to 1.2x . It could affect play (the DS with 01:28:531 (2,3) - is so similar with 01:27:869 (1,2) - )
[Idol Master]

  • 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
    00:56:987 (5) - add whistle is slider start? No Change whistle stays on red lines
    01:49:046 - add circle and add finish?
Done

Rhythm is well,just the slider have a little weird.
That's all I can find~
Nice song! Good Luck
Thanks for the mod
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

Jebok wrote:

Hi there! Mod as requested from my queue...

[General]
Your spinners mostly do not fit. Also, they are ugly. I suggest not changing the approach circle of the spinners.
00:59:634 - Map the break... The song is short and this break does not fit with the song. OH and... The break HAVE to be the same on every difficulty. So remove all breaks, or use the break times in Jayel's difficulty because it works much better than your break time. Some guest diffs have different breaks

[Jayel's Newbie] Done
01:26:546 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do this combo diagonally, (1) x:256 and y:260. (2) x:216 and y:192. (3) x:296 and y:192. (4) x:256 and y:124.
01:28:751 (1,2) - Reverse selection of both (1) and (2) then place (1) x:176 and y:264 and place (2) x:336 and y:264.
Yep, that's all :oops:

[Pro] No change
00:24:340 - Map instead of putting spinner here, does not fit.
00:45:406 - ^
01:40:222 - ^
Sorry but I think that none of the spinner fit.


[Star] No Change
00:23:016 (3) - x:424 and y:176
00:31:398 - I don't think this spinner fits here. Map this part instead.
00:34:928 (4) - New combo
00:36:693 - No new combo
00:38:457 (5) - New combo
00:39:560 - No new combo
00:47:281 (5) - New combo
00:48:384 - No new combo
00:49:046 (5) - New combo
01:13:531 - No new combo
01:13:751 (2) - New combo

[Idol Master] No Change
00:32:722 (3) - Remove. Place a slider from 00:32:501 to 00:32:722 instead. Clap at the end of it.
00:34:266 (8) - x:12 and y:124
00:34:487 (9) - Remove. Copy slider (7) instead, reverse selection, and place it x:52 and y:180.
00:35:148 (1) - x:172 and y:228
00:35:590 (2) - x:280 and y:168
00:39:340 (3) - Spacing 1.00x
00:40:001 (5) - ^
00:48:825 (8) - New Combo
00:49:046 (1) - No New Combo
BeatofIke
Request from modding queue. Here's what I've found!

General
-> Your slider shapes and hitsounds could use some improvement. >.<
-> Source should be "THE IDOLM@STER" not "Idolmaster" or "Idol Master." Also, make sure to change it in ALL of your difficulties, not just in one of them.
-> Your tags are useless. Delete those tags. Your tags should NEVER be the name of artist, title, source, genre, beatmap creator (you), or difficluty. Again, make sure to remove those tags in ALL of your difficulties and not just in one of them.
-> Your hitsound volumes are kinda random. Make your hitsound volumes consistent in multiples of 5. For example, change 34% to 35%

Newbie
-> There's no background on this difficulty! Every difficulty must have a background unless it's unrankable.
-> Approach Rate +1?
Pro
-> This difficulty looks rankable, so I'll skip this difficulty.

Star
-> This difficulty looks rankable, so I'll skip this difficulty.

Idol Master
-> Your combo colors are different on this difficulty. It must be the same in ALL difficulties, unless it's unankable.

Map has potental, but it has some unrankable issues. This map needs more mods.
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue. Here's what I've found!

General
-> Your slider shapes and hitsounds could use some improvement. >.<
-> Source should be "THE IDOLM@STER" not "Idolmaster" or "Idol Master." Also, make sure to change it in ALL of your difficulties, not just in one of them. Done
-> Your tags are useless. Delete those tags. Your tags should NEVER be the name of artist, title, source, genre, beatmap creator (you), or difficluty. Again, make sure to remove those tags in ALL of your difficulties and not just in one of them. Done

Newbie
-> There's no background on this difficulty! Every difficulty must have a background unless it's unrankable. should be there now
-> Approach Rate +1?

Pro

Star

Idol Master
-> Your combo colors are different on this difficulty. It must be the same in ALL difficulties, unless it's unankable. Done

Map has potental, but it has some unrankable issues. This map needs more mods.
Thanks for the mod
BeatofIke
No problem. =)
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue. Here's what I've found!

General
-> Your slider shapes and hitsounds could use some improvement. >.<
-> Source should be "THE IDOLM@STER" not "Idolmaster" or "Idol Master." Also, make sure to change it in ALL of your difficulties, not just in one of them.
-> Your tags are useless. Delete those tags. Your tags should NEVER be the name of artist, title, source, genre, beatmap creator (you), or difficluty. Again, make sure to remove those tags in ALL of your difficulties and not just in one of them.
-> Your hitsound volumes are kinda random. Make your hitsound volumes consistent in multiples of 5. For example, change 34% to 35%Done

Newbie
-> There's no background on this difficulty! Every difficulty must have a background unless it's unrankable. Should be there now
-> Approach Rate +1? Done
Pro
-> This difficulty looks rankable, so I'll skip this difficulty. :D

Star
-> This difficulty looks rankable, so I'll skip this difficulty. :D

Idol Master
-> Your combo colors are different on this difficulty. It must be the same in ALL difficulties, unless it's unankable. Done

Map has potental, but it has some unrankable issues. This map needs more mods.
h-728

Thank you for request

[General]
  • where is the BG of Jayel's Newbie? and I think you should be the BG name more simple.
    specify the color of sliderborder.
first you have to fix the 2 above things.
then the things I want say you are almost same as I wrote in your guest diff.
before this mod, please read that. and if can you find what is pointed out, then you should review this map. after read that mod, and still you need my mod, PM for me.
but if you think that your that guest diff is nothing wrong, I'll ignore this map. because it means my mod is meaningless for you.
of course, this is your map. I don't say you must change as I say. It depends on you.

no kds
Jayel
You should have at least informed me if you changed the name of my guest diff :(
Anyways, good luck.
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

Jayel wrote:

You should have at least informed me if you changed the name of my guest diff :(
Anyways, good luck.
sorry that was my bad :(
Nichiyouki


Hi, Yu-Izanagi-12

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Kiai time are different, please fix it is 01:20:810 - 01:34:928 all diff.
  2. Combo colours in Idol diff is different, please fix it as well follow this.
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 128,0,128
    Combo2 : 128,128,192
    Combo3 : 255,128,192
    Combo4 : 255,32,32

Jayel's Newbie

  1. Nice diff

Pro

  1. 00:34:487 (2) - Add whistle or clap.
  2. 00:37:134 (4) - ^
  3. 00:38:457 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
  4. 01:15:516 (3) - ^
  5. 00:41:987 (1,2) - Spacing is too far.
  6. 00:39:340 (2,3) - Spacing is too close
  7. 00:57:428 (2) - Move to x:352 y:188, because same as 00:39:340 (2,3) -.
  8. 01:14:634 (2,3) - Same as 00:41:987 (1,2) -.
  9. 01:31:399 (1,2,5) - Stack it.
  10. 01:32:060 (3,4) - Same as 00:41:987 (1,2) -.

Star

  1. 00:15:296 (1) - I suggest try it doesn't stack anything.
  2. 00:34:928 (1) - Add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  3. 00:38:457 (5,1) - Add NC in (5), but remove it in (1).
  4. 01:09:119 (6,2) - Stack it.
  5. 01:32:722 (5,7) - ^
  6. 01:48:825 (9) - Add NC?

Idol

  1. I don't find the problem.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

nich95 wrote:



Hi, Yu-Izanagi-12

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Kiai time are different, please fix it is 01:20:810 - 01:34:928 all diff. done
  2. Combo colours in Idol diff is different, please fix it as well follow this.done and thanks
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 128,0,128
    Combo2 : 128,128,192
    Combo3 : 255,128,192
    Combo4 : 255,32,32

Jayel's Newbie

  1. Nice diff
:)

Pro

All Done
  1. 00:34:487 (2) - Add whistle or clap.
  2. 00:37:134 (4) - ^
  3. 00:38:457 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
  4. 01:15:516 (3) - ^
  5. 00:41:987 (1,2) - Spacing is too far.
  6. 00:39:340 (2,3) - Spacing is too close
  7. 00:57:428 (2) - Move to x:352 y:188, because same as 00:39:340 (2,3) -.
  8. 01:14:634 (2,3) - Same as 00:41:987 (1,2) -.
  9. 01:31:399 (1,2,5) - Stack it.
  10. 01:32:060 (3,4) - Same as 00:41:987 (1,2) -.

Star

  1. 00:15:296 (1) - I suggest try it doesn't stack anything.done
  2. 00:34:928 (1) - Add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.done
  3. 00:38:457 (5,1) - Add NC in (5), but remove it in (1).done
  4. 01:09:119 (6,2) - Stack it.done
  5. 01:32:722 (5,7) - ^done
  6. 01:48:825 (9) - Add NC?
no change

Idol

  1. I don't find the problem.
:)

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Leorda
What's up?

[General]
* I suggest you to change your diff name into difficulty name, because your diff name are confusing for players (e.g. "Hard", "Insane")
* For all diff, the break space are mappable. Please map that part....
* Your video has an audio. Please remove the audio from the video


[Skinning]
* Rename the sliderb0 to sliderb and remove the sliderb1, sliderb2, etc. Because all sliderb are completely similar


[Jayel's Newbie]
00:27:869 - Remove this timing section. Sudden loud hitsound is bad
01:40:222 (3) - Why silence this slider? It's useless
01:47:722 (2) - Overlapped by head slider is pointless. Move further away from it?


[Pro]
00:24:340 (1) - What's the point having a spinner here? Try remove this spinner and remap that part
00:45:406 (1) - ^
01:15:516 (3) - The top slider is touch the HP Bar, also, the tail slider is overlap the sliderpath....


[Star]
00:15:296 (1,2) - If you do this, players will confuse which one is head slider and tail slider. I suggest you to unstack together
00:31:399 (1) - What's the point having a spinner here? Try remove this spinner and remap that part


[Idol]
00:11:325 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying
00:21:031 (1,2,3) - ^


A bit needs work, good luck!
Jayel

Leorda wrote:

[Jayel's Newbie]
00:27:869 - Remove this timing section. Sudden loud hitsound is bad
01:40:222 (3) - Why silence this slider? It's useless
01:47:722 (2) - Overlapped by head slider is pointless. Move further away from it?
Fixed everything. Thanks.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9yx3tr86gf4fd ... bie%5D.osu

EDIT: Now you can try it again.
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

Jayel wrote:

Leorda wrote:

[Jayel's Newbie]
00:27:869 - Remove this timing section. Sudden loud hitsound is bad
01:40:222 (3) - Why silence this slider? It's useless
01:47:722 (2) - Overlapped by head slider is pointless. Move further away from it?
Fixed everything. Thanks.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9yx3tr86gf4fd ... bie%5D.osu

EDIT: Now you can try it again.
got it thanks
JudgeTheDude
Hi, from my modding queue.
That music was awesome ^^ Thanks, I didn't know it. What a great 3D animation.

[Normal]
Kiai Time should end at 01:34:928
01:15:516 (3) - Good job ^^

That's all, you did a very great job ^^

Good luck
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.
That music was awesome ^^ Thanks, I didn't know it. What a great 3D animation.

[Normal]
Kiai Time should end at 01:34:928 Done
01:15:516 (3) - Good job ^^

That's all, you did a very great job ^^ thanks

Good luck
Thank you for modding
pimp
hi there o/

i'm random modding this, again

general

Video contains noiseless audio track, proof (muting the audio is not enough, sooner or later someone will force you to remove the audio track to reduce video's filesize)
inconsistency in combo colours
osb file is empty remove and full submit
imo, no need to end kiai at 01:34:928 ... better end it at 01:49:046


jayels newbie

00:15:957 - i think you should make a circle here, for rhythm consistency to 00:10:222 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:16:840 (3) - remove this circle for the same reason above (it sounds alot better too, imo)
..........
00:24:340 (1,2,3,1,2) - just imo, but same thing about consistency, this is the new players diff, better make it easy to read and consistent, as much as possible
00:31:398 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - same as above
00:45:516 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this . this also fills the empy space at 00:47:722
01:20:590 - remove this inherit, there is no note here, no need to start the kiai / change volume here if there is nothing here
01:28:751 (1,2) - the previous notes rhythm are not bad but this two repeat-sliders does not fit (imo)
01:32:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:35:810 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:39:340 (1,2,3) - ^

normal

strange rhythm at kiai part, better follow vocal imo.

00:15:847 - note here?
00:31:398 (3,1,2,3) - no consistency here, just like jayel's newbie. try this
00:41:546 - note here?
00:41:987 (1,2) - sounds better if you move the claps to the repeats at the red ticks in both sliders and remove the whistles imo
01:02:722 - better make as note here and start the spinner at 01:03:163 , imo
01:34:266 (7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - strange rhythm here / not properly following the vocal
01:41:987 - spinner end sounds like you will follow vocal but you follow instrumental again

hard

same thing about kiai rhythm as normal, better fully map it following vocal
too many whistles


00:10:663 (3,6) - ugly overlap imo
00:14:634 (4) - add 2 more repeats, or make a circle at 00:15:296 ?
00:15:516 (1,2,3,4) - remove all whistles / claps at red ticks here (sound alot better imo, seriously)
01:15:516 - here is too soon to start the spinner, better map a bit more and start the spinner at 01:17:171
01:19:046 - i sugest you end the spinner here, and make some notes before kiai starts

insane

volume is too high here, the other diffs are arround 65% but insane is 90%
too many whistles


00:15:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing as hard about claps and whistles at red ticks
00:21:031 (1,2,3) - why changed to red tick 1/1 sliders?
00:49:928 (2) - this slider shape / placing looks bad with the previous note
01:11:931 (3) - this slider shape could be better

good luck :D
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

pimpG wrote:

hi there o/

i'm random modding this, again

general

Video contains noiseless audio track, proof (muting the audio is not enough, sooner or later someone will force you to remove the audio track to reduce video's filesize)There is a 24MB limit on map folders anything beyond that can't be uploaded so the fact that I can upload it means its fine
inconsistency in combo coloursdone
osb file is empty remove and full submit done
imo, no need to end kiai at 01:34:928 ... better end it at 01:49:046[/color]done

good luck :D
thanks for the mod again
Kanari
Halloww ~
You requested in my queue ~


[General]
- Try to get a louder mp3? This one sounds a bit soft.
- Comboburst 1 and 2 look... a bit off.. their squished. ;w;
Also, in the 4th comboburst, theres a little something on the top left corner. owo
- The idol who sings this is Akidzuki Ryou? So add it into the tags? ~
- Since it came from the album THE iDOLM@STER DREAM SYMPHONY 02, maybe add it to the tags as well?


[Jayel's Easy]
01:49:046 - Add a circle there to end off at the same point as all the other diffs.


[Normal]
00:15:957 - Add a circle?
01:11:546 (4) - Make this line with (2)
01:11:987 (1) - Make this line with 01:10:222 (1)
01:20:810 (1) - Reverse?
01:27:869 (1) - ^
01:29:193 (3) - ^
01:36:913 - Add a circle.
01:37:354 - ^
01:45:516 (1) - Place at x:320 y:96


[Hard]
00:24:781 (1) - Make this slider blanker around the next note better. Dont forget to make this change to (4) as well ~
01:15:516 (1) - Start this at 01:15:296 and end at the same place.
01:27:649 (7) - Line this with (4)
01:28:310 - Add a circle?
01:34:928 (1) - Make this blanket around the previous note better, do the same change for the next slider too ~
01:44:634 (8) - New combo.


[Insane]
- Approach Rate -1
00:12:207 (6) - New combo?
00:14:634 (5) - ^
00:23:457 (4) - ^
00:42:428 (2) - Make the spacing the same.
00:43:751 (4) - Line with the previous note.
00:54:781 (7) - Stack properly.
01:29:193 (4) - Stack with 01:27:428 (9)
01:47:943 (8) - New combo.
- For an insane diff, this feels kind of easyy D:
Maybe try to add some jumps?


Overall the mapset is nicely done ~
Good luck with your map ~ >w<
Loneight
Hi~
M4M from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. too many sliders let me feel "it is casually pulled" , maybe you can spend more time to improve much pretty in my eyes

[Jayel's Newbie]

  1. Useless green line:
    01:41:987 -

  2. 00:32:281 (3,4) - Crtl+G ?
  3. 01:13:751 (5,1) - swap NC
  4. 01:27:428 (3,4) - crtl+G
  5. 01:47:722 (2) - how about this

[Normal]

  1. Useless green line:
    01:34:928 -

  2. 00:24:340 (5) - NC

[Hard]

  1. 00:11:546 (6) - overlap is not a good method
  2. 00:31:398 (5) - NC and 00:32:943 (1,2) - swap NC ?
  3. 00:43:090 (3) - overlap is not a good method
  4. 01:06:693 (4,5,6,1,2) - these are i see the best typesetting in this diff , because flow is smooth
  5. 01:29:193 (3) - distance may let player press too fast

[Insane]

  1. BPM only 136 , you use ar 9 ... , what you think ? ;w; , ar 7 maybe more acceptable

  2. 00:54:340 (5) - move it away 00:53:898 (4) - , instead of stacking it ?~
  3. 01:41:987 (1) - overlap
good song & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww ~
You requested in my queue ~


[General] Done
- Try to get a louder mp3? This one sounds a bit soft.
- Comboburst 1 and 2 look... a bit off.. their squished. ;w;
Also, in the 4th comboburst, theres a little something on the top left corner. owo
- The idol who sings this is Akidzuki Ryou? So add it into the tags? ~
- Since it came from the album THE iDOLM@STER DREAM SYMPHONY 02, maybe add it to the tags as well?


[Jayel's Easy]Done
01:49:046 - Add a circle there to end off at the same point as all the other diffs.


[Normal]Done
00:15:957 - Add a circle?
01:11:546 (4) - Make this line with (2)
01:11:987 (1) - Make this line with 01:10:222 (1)
01:20:810 (1) - Reverse?
01:27:869 (1) - ^
01:29:193 (3) - ^
01:36:913 - Add a circle.
01:37:354 - ^
01:45:516 (1) - Place at x:320 y:96


[Hard]Done
00:24:781 (1) - Make this slider blanker around the next note better. Dont forget to make this change to (4) as well ~
01:15:516 (1) - Start this at 01:15:296 and end at the same place.
01:27:649 (7) - Line this with (4)
01:28:310 - Add a circle?
01:34:928 (1) - Make this blanket around the previous note better, do the same change for the next slider too ~
01:44:634 (8) - New combo.


[Insane]Done
- Approach Rate -1
00:12:207 (6) - New combo?
00:14:634 (5) - ^
00:23:457 (4) - ^
00:42:428 (2) - Make the spacing the same.
00:43:751 (4) - Line with the previous note.
00:54:781 (7) - Stack properly.
01:29:193 (4) - Stack with 01:27:428 (9)
01:47:943 (8) - New combo.
- For an insane diff, this feels kind of easyy D:
Maybe try to add some jumps?


Overall the mapset is nicely done ~
Good luck with your map ~ >w<
Thank you for the mod
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

l1106188 wrote:

Hi~
M4M from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. too many sliders let me feel "it is casually pulled" , maybe you can spend more time to improve much pretty in my eyes

[Jayel's Newbie]

  • Done
  1. Useless green line:
    01:41:987 -

  2. 00:32:281 (3,4) - Crtl+G ?
  3. 01:13:751 (5,1) - swap NC
  4. 01:27:428 (3,4) - crtl+G
  5. 01:47:722 (2) - how about this

[Normal]

  • Done
  1. Useless green line:
    01:34:928 -

  2. 00:24:340 (5) - NC

[Hard]

  1. 00:11:546 (6) - overlap is not a good method Done
  2. 00:31:398 (5) - NC and 00:32:943 (1,2) - swap NC ?Done
  3. 00:43:090 (3) - overlap is not a good methodno change
  4. 01:06:693 (4,5,6,1,2) - these are i see the best typesetting in this diff , because flow is smooth :)
  5. 01:29:193 (3) - distance may let player press too fast
no change

[Insane]

  1. BPM only 136 , you use ar 9 ... , what you think ? ;w; , ar 7 maybe more acceptableChanged to 8

  2. 00:54:340 (5) - move it away 00:53:898 (4) - , instead of stacking it ?~Done
  3. 01:41:987 (1) - overlap
Done

good song & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English
thanks for the mod
Wafu
Hi from your modding queue
M4M

[General]

Since there is "Romanised Artist" and "Romanised Title" function, use 三瓶 由布子 for artist and keep Romanised Artist how it's now.
Really... we must use it if it's here. If we won't use this, it's non-sense to keep it there.

[Insane]

Well... let's improve this a bit.
I like more CS -1. I don't recommend small circle size, if you're not making awesomely perfect shapes.
00:13:751 (3) - NC or swap NC with 00:12:869 (1)
00:11:987 (5,1) - Swap NC, it's unnecessary on (1)
00:12:869 (1,2) - They're not symmetrical, copy 00:12:869 (1) and flip it.
00:13:751 (3) - All of these shapes are bad. Try to move center point on 392;276. Of course you could do it on all these sliders
00:15:075 (1) - ^..
00:24:560 - 00:51:913 - This part calls to be snapped in 1,0 distance snap, because this part is so calm. Also decrease volume by 10-20%. Btw. you unnecessary combinated distance snap in this part..
01:08:237 (3) - Something called "symmetrical sliders" exists. And this really isn't symmetrical, fix it.

Well... small mod, because you're doing the same wrongs.

[Hard]

00:13:751 (5,1) - Swap NC
00:17:722 (3,5) - Symmetry
00:48:384 (1,2,3,4) - Use CTRL+SHIFT+D and make perfect square from this.
01:00:075 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:693 (4) - Move center point one grid left to make it symmetrical.
01:07:575 (6) - ^

[Normal]

01:15:516 (3) - Symmetry, good luck.
01:21:472 (2,3) - Easy to miss for newbies, because it's on red line.
01:22:796 (5,6) - ^

[Jayel's Newbie]

01:27:869 (4,1) - Swap NC for consistency with 01:23:898 (5,1)
01:34:928 - Kiai is missing here.
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

dragonxcz wrote:

Hi from your modding queue
M4M

[General]

Since there is "Romanised Artist" and "Romanised Title" function, use 三瓶 由布子 for artist and keep Romanised Artist how it's now.
Really... we must use it if it's here. If we won't use this, it's non-sense to keep it there.I don't understand this romanised process I find it useless

[Insane]
All Done
Well... let's improve this a bit.
I like more CS -1. I don't recommend small circle size, if you're not making awesomely perfect shapes.
00:13:751 (3) - NC or swap NC with 00:12:869 (1)
00:11:987 (5,1) - Swap NC, it's unnecessary on (1)
00:12:869 (1,2) - They're not symmetrical, copy 00:12:869 (1) and flip it.
00:13:751 (3) - All of these shapes are bad. Try to move center point on 392;276. Of course you could do it on all these sliders
00:15:075 (1) - ^..
00:24:560 - 00:51:913 - This part calls to be snapped in 1,0 distance snap, because this part is so calm. Also decrease volume by 10-20%. Btw. you unnecessary combinated distance snap in this part..
01:08:237 (3) - Something called "symmetrical sliders" exists. And this really isn't symmetrical, fix it.

Well... small mod, because you're doing the same wrongs.

[Hard]
All done
00:13:751 (5,1) - Swap NC
00:17:722 (3,5) - Symmetry
00:48:384 (1,2,3,4) - Use CTRL+SHIFT+D and make perfect square from this.
01:00:075 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:693 (4) - Move center point one grid left to make it symmetrical.
01:07:575 (6) - ^

[Normal]

01:15:516 (3) - Symmetry, good luck.done
01:21:472 (2,3) - Easy to miss for newbies, because it's on red line.No change
01:22:796 (5,6) - ^no change

[Jayel's Newbie]
All Done
01:27:869 (4,1) - Swap NC for consistency with 01:23:898 (5,1)
01:34:928 - Kiai is missing here.
sherrie__fay
mod req randomly pick from scorpiour's baka queue for new mappers 0v0☆

[General]
  1. better hit300/300k/300g/100/100k/50/0.png to use different colours :3
[Normal]
  1. 01:39:781 (3) - +whistle?
[Hard]
  1. slider shape need to be improved
  2. 00:15:296 - add note
  3. 00:51:913 (6) - +clap
  4. 01:28:972 - add note
[Insane]
  1. slider shape need to be improved
  2. 00:11:325 (4) - remove whistle in sliderbody
  3. 00:21:913 (2) - ^
  4. 00:22:796 (3) - ^
  5. 00:37:354 (6) - ^
  6. 00:57:648 (6) - ^
  7. 01:08:237 (3) - ^
  8. 01:16:619 (7) - ^
  9. 01:43:090 (5) - ^
  10. 00:11:325 (4) - clap at start
  11. 00:12:428 (8) - clap
  12. 00:17:060 (5) - finish at end
  13. 00:25:443 (3,4,5,6) - try place like this
  14. 01:29:193 (4,5) - ctrl+G
  15. 01:36:031 (3) - clap at start
  16. 01:43:090 (5) - ^
  17. 01:49:046 (10) - NC
take it easy guy sco never add new mapper who break rules into blacklist
because he's a baka
Topic Starter
Yu-Izanagi-12

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req randomly pick from scorpiour's baka queue for new mappers 0v0☆

[General]
  1. better hit300/300k/300g/100/100k/50/0.png to use different colours :3
[Normal]Done
  1. 01:39:781 (3) - +whistle?
[Hard]Done
  1. slider shape need to be improved
  2. 00:15:296 - add note
  3. 00:51:913 (6) - +clap
  4. 01:28:972 - add note
[Insane]Done
  1. slider shape need to be improved
  2. 00:11:325 (4) - remove whistle in sliderbody
  3. 00:21:913 (2) - ^
  4. 00:22:796 (3) - ^
  5. 00:37:354 (6) - ^
  6. 00:57:648 (6) - ^
  7. 01:08:237 (3) - ^
  8. 01:16:619 (7) - ^
  9. 01:43:090 (5) - ^
  10. 00:11:325 (4) - clap at start
  11. 00:12:428 (8) - clap
  12. 00:17:060 (5) - finish at end
  13. 00:25:443 (3,4,5,6) - try place like this
  14. 01:29:193 (4,5) - ctrl+G
  15. 01:36:031 (3) - clap at start
  16. 01:43:090 (5) - ^
  17. 01:49:046 (10) - NC
take it easy guy sco never add new mapper who break rules into blacklist
because he's a baka
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