Ok.
Overall:
Your timing right now is 126.003. Change it to 126.000
Put your claps on 2 and 4 :>~. It makes the map kawaii~. (Like this = )
YOUR SPACING. It's not horrible but it's not good at all. Make sure you're consistently mapping with distance snap with a small grid snap
You need a preview point
Make the combo colors the same~
Find a background that is 1024x768
Hard:
00:20:129 (3) - Make this symmetrical :3
00:24:891 (5) - ^
00:41:081 (4) - This slider isn't really kawaii at all. Make it just regular
00:49:652 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Remove these
01:42:032 (5) - Change this slider to look more like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347110
02:05:841 (1,2,3) - unfitting slider speed change.
02:09:650 (1) - Make this symmetrical :3
02:24:888 - Map this part
02:39:888 (1) - Make this symmetrical
03:07:744 (4) - Add NC
03:17:268 (4) - Don't make the curve so sharp
03:24:887 (6) - Make this a regular curved slider
03:26:315 - Map this part
Easy:
00:16:319 (3) - Make this symmetrical
01:09:175 - Map this
01:22:032 (8) - Not moe ;~;
01:44:889 (7) - ^
02:38:221 (1) - lower the last sliderpoint
03:06:792 (4) - Make this symmetrical
whee.
Overall:
Your timing right now is 126.003. Change it to 126.000
Put your claps on 2 and 4 :>~. It makes the map kawaii~. (Like this = )
YOUR SPACING. It's not horrible but it's not good at all. Make sure you're consistently mapping with distance snap with a small grid snap
You need a preview point
Make the combo colors the same~
Find a background that is 1024x768
Hard:
00:20:129 (3) - Make this symmetrical :3
00:24:891 (5) - ^
00:41:081 (4) - This slider isn't really kawaii at all. Make it just regular
00:49:652 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Remove these
01:42:032 (5) - Change this slider to look more like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347110
02:05:841 (1,2,3) - unfitting slider speed change.
02:09:650 (1) - Make this symmetrical :3
02:24:888 - Map this part
02:39:888 (1) - Make this symmetrical
03:07:744 (4) - Add NC
03:17:268 (4) - Don't make the curve so sharp
03:24:887 (6) - Make this a regular curved slider
03:26:315 - Map this part
Easy:
00:16:319 (3) - Make this symmetrical
01:09:175 - Map this
01:22:032 (8) - Not moe ;~;
01:44:889 (7) - ^
02:38:221 (1) - lower the last sliderpoint
03:06:792 (4) - Make this symmetrical
whee.