Hi:3 As requested
[General]
●Delete to (David Guetta Ft Sia - Titanium (kratoz).osb) file. It's unnecessary.
●add to "Nothing But the Beat" tag ? this is album name . I think the addition of something better :3
[Steel]
●Approach Rate +1 . It is too low ><
●00:16:342 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end
●00:18:247 (5) - ^same here
●00:21:104 (4) - add whistle on the slider's head
●00:23:961 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end
●00:25:866 (3) - move to x:408 . 00:23:961 (1) - same to here.
●00:26:819 (1,3) - add whistle on the slider's head
●00:30:628 (1) - add finish.
●00:34:438 (1) - bend it to the opposite direction ? the flow is good :3
●01:11:580 (3) - remove slider's reverse. and spinner start at here 01:11:580 (3) -
●01:20:628 (2) - move to y:112
●01:27:771 (2,3,4,1) - this part is too hard for beginner.make some slider !
●01:33:961 (3) - spacing too close (0.85x) it is better to use DS0.8x
●01:39:199 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:42:533 (1,3) - stack is confusing many beginners ><
●02:00:628 (5) - add New combo
●02:10:628 (1) - move to y:192 . 02:12:533 (3) - same to here
●02:19:199 (5) - add New combo
●02:24:914 (2) - spacing too close (1.07x) it is better to use DS0.8x
●02:30:628 - spinner start at here.
●03:06:819 (5,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
●03:48:485 (1) - gradually add volume?
you should put clap sound o.o
[Iron]
●00:36:818 (2) - slider end at here . 00:37:294 -
●01:04:913 (5) - remove finish. it doesn't follow the music well.
●01:27:294 (3,4) - 1/2 make slider?
●01:41:104 (1) - hmm , make 1/4 slider ?
[Titanium]
●why you use volume of kiai time 50%? up to 70%!
●Overall Diffculty or HP Drain rate +1
●00:16:342 (4,5,6) - same to this pattern 00:15:389 (1,2,3) - ? make Triangle~ looks better imo
●00:28:723 (1,2) - spacing too close (1.08x) it is better to use DS1.4x.
●01:26:818 (3,5) - add whistle
●01:30:389 (5,6,7) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:39:675 (3) - stack to 01:41:104 (1) - ?
●01:53:961 (1) - this spinner isn't he music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●02:12:770 - add note :3 follow the Lyrics
●02:43:009 (2) - move to x:396 y:280
●03:32:294 (1) - remove New combo .
poor english... sorry
good luck ^^