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dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy [Osu|Taiko]

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Steph De Chine
93 posts
Joined June 2012
Steph De Chine
General
首先确认下artist真的是dj TAKA么？不应该写成DJ Taka的么？
图真心不错，果然神麻婆就是和我们这种新麻婆不一样……所以后面的全都是建议，爱改不改随你便~

Basic
00:07:246 (4) - 这种折返的动作不是很好看……或许移到1那里，然后加点小弧度以衔接前面的移动轨迹？
00:09:827 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个的轨迹有些诡异啊……试着保持鼠标移动线路的转弯角度一致？
00:15:633 - 这里习惯性认为应该有一个circle，但是却没有……
00:20:794 - 这里也是
00:22:730 (3) - 这个中间concave up一下？让人家的鼠标轨迹好看些

Medium
到了Medium突然发现鼠标轨迹好看了很多……什么情况？暂时没发现问题……

Hard
00:45:311 (1) - 这个长度长了点吧？看起来你是想做Kick slider 或者Hold slider的，但Following circle在距某一端最远时只能覆盖那一端的一半不到，很容易100&断的。
把那里的Slider velocity调慢点或者缩短一半而加更多折返可以解决。
后面的00:47:246 (3) - 00:48:536 (1) 等等都有同样的问题。

Extreme
Uh……这个还有我说话的地么？

算了，就这样了。毕竟集popner, spboxer, Luka几大神|V| /-\ |º |º Σ Я的图我还是只能拜拜的……
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
不是大神啦XD

谢谢你啦不过看样子我贵阳人了。所以大概如果还有机会把它挖出来的话会改的
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Steph De Chine wrote:

General
首先确认下artist真的是dj TAKA么？不应该写成DJ Taka的么？ dj TAKA无误
图真心不错，果然神麻婆就是和我们这种新麻婆不一样……所以后面的全都是建议，爱改不改随你便~

Basic
00:07:246 (4) - 这种折返的动作不是很好看……或许移到1那里，然后加点小弧度以衔接前面的移动轨迹？ 呜稍微改了下
00:09:827 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个的轨迹有些诡异啊……试着保持鼠标移动线路的转弯角度一致？
00:15:633 - 这里习惯性认为应该有一个circle，但是却没有…… fixed
00:20:794 - 这里也是 fixed
00:22:730 (3) - 这个中间concave up一下？让人家的鼠标轨迹好看些 fixed

Medium
到了Medium突然发现鼠标轨迹好看了很多……什么情况？暂时没发现问题……

Hard
00:45:311 (1) - 这个长度长了点吧？看起来你是想做Kick slider 或者Hold slider的，但Following circle在距某一端最远时只能覆盖那一端的一半不到，很容易100&断的。
把那里的Slider velocity调慢点或者缩短一半而加更多折返可以解决。
后面的00:47:246 (3) - 00:48:536 (1) 等等都有同样的问题。

我个人认为不是什么大问题w

Extreme
Uh……这个还有我说话的地么？

算了，就这样了。毕竟集popner, spboxer, Luka几大神|V| /-\ |º |º Σ Я的图我还是只能拜拜的……
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
忘記什麼時候扔過星的了…既然挖上來了支持一發=w=
Tanzureir
181 posts
Joined October 2009
Tanzureir
M4M~不好意思我不会mod太鼓 :(

[Basic]

00:11:762 (3) - 这个点移动到 (2) 的正下方更加对称一些感觉……
00:38:214 (2) - 这个和前一个间隔比较远，可以考虑New combo……

[Medium]
AiMod
00:41:600 (2) | 00:42:890 (2) | 00:58:858 (1) | 01:02:729 (1) - 这几个拉条尾没有Snap……

01:11:762 (1,2) - 这两个之间DS改1.2感觉更加对称一些……
感觉New combo稍微多了些……可以考虑换成两小节（就是两根长白线）一次NC……毕竟点并不很分散……

[Hard]
AiMod
用了超过三种不同的拉条速度……好像最多只能用三种吧……（不知道rank规则有没有改）

00:12:407 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这几个跳得有点突然……感觉和音乐不太配合……
00:35:956 ~ 00:43:536 - 这段或许不需要这么多New combo……
00:44:665 ~ 00:50:472 - ^，当然这两处不改也没啥问题……
00:53:375 (4) - 这个跳太远了感觉……
01:03:375 (1) | 01:03:698 (1) - 这两个NC可以去掉……
01:19:827 (1) - 这个NC感觉略不和谐……复制粘贴忘记去掉了？
01:20:633 (1) - 这个遮挡感觉太坑了……
01:21:762 (4) - 这个也有点突然……
01:31:278 (4) - 这里可以考虑加个NC……
01:42:730 (4) - ^

[Extreme]

00:52:730 (1) - 这个可以不用New combo……
01:09:182 - 这里一段节奏上可以考虑改成这样

感觉这个难度做得很赞啊……除了这两处也看不出啥问题了……
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
sorry for delay ><

[Basic]
Spacing:
  1. 00:44:665 (3,1) - look good spacing here
  2. 01:11:762 (1,2) - i'm not really sure about this spacing incostency
  3. 01:36:924 (1,2) - here too
Placement:
  1. 00:13:698 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i think here are to many circles why don't you try to replace some with a slider?
  2. 00:22:730 (3) - reverse this slider since the music stop at 00:24:020 -
  3. 01:11:762 (1) - this slider look not so nice try to use the 3 point formula
Hitsounds:
  1. 01:25:956 - finish sound good here
[Medium]
Spacing:
  1. 00:12:730 (2,3) - nazi but spacing
  2. 00:14:182 (2,1) - little issue
  3. 00:16:278 (1,2,1) - spacing
  4. 00:19:343 (2,1) - little issue
  5. 00:30:472 (1,2,1) - look here
  6. 00:33:859 (2,1) - spacing o3o
  7. 00:41:601 (2) - look here
  8. 00:42:891 (2) - spacing
Placement:
  1. 00:08:214 (4) - move it to x: 152 y: 168
  2. 01:11:762 (1,2) - this pattern can look better why don't you try something like:
    SPOILER
[Hard]

  1. 00:24:020 - add a circle + finish here and remove it from the prev circle
  2. Unsnapped inherited point : 00:38:785 - snap to 00:38:778
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. You must update your diffs to v12 - just simply open them and then save directly.
[Extreme]
  1. 00:21:117 (6) - move to 294:88 for better flow?
  2. 00:34:907 (7) - move to 291:241?
  3. 00:46:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我认为把三连放在00:46:762 (4,5) - 这个位置而不是(1,2,3)的位置会更好听~后面同样
  4. 00:50:472 (7,8) - 各增加一次折返？
  5. 01:03:375 (7,8) - 交换位置感觉flow会更好
  6. 01:06:278 (7,8) - ^
  7. 01:11:762 (4) - 囧………………
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:536 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow?
  2. 00:20:149 (1,2,3,4) - 建议把三连放到红线上slider前
  3. 01:20:633 (1) - 做为hard这位置略坑，放到和前面(5) stack或者232:304？
  4. 01:23:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 同样……hard里放着长的串有些太凶残了吧……
[Medium]
  1. 00:07:246 (1,2,3,4) - 位置弄匀称一点会更好看吧比如这样：
    SPOILER
[Basic]
  1. 00:25:311 (1) - 从这里开始感觉clap用过头了啊听着有点吓人
  2. 01:07:891 (2,3,4) - 我认为2/1的长度比3/2要合适
  3. 01:28:536 (1) - 如果停在红线上的话那么节奏上来说应该加个折返才好，或者是直接延长到白线上(2/1长度)
  4. 01:32:407 (1,2) - ^，类似
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
基本都改了除了

00:21:117 (6) - move to 294:88 for better flow? - 算是恶趣味ww 和后面也有对应

00:46:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我认为把三连放在00:46:762 (4,5) - 这个位置而不是(1,2,3)的位置会更好听~后面同样 - 跟着钢琴音摆了所以没动
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Hollywood Galaxy.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 45311
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Hollywood Galaxy
TitleUnicode:
Artist:dj TAKA
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:Megurine Luka
Version:Sp3's Taiko
Source:REFLEC BEAT
Tags:popner spboxer3 KONAMI BEMANI drum'n'bass DeeN
BeatmapID:149387
BeatmapSetID:48196

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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改掉魚蛋的不規則排法
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
updated
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
irc rechecked with mapper, fixed several unrankable stuffs

Bubbled~~!!
tayko_old
tayko_old
good song
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
lol hi

General
- Hard has no kiai time. You better put that in

Basic
00:22:730 (3) - Add reverse would sound nice because there's a scale going on in the bgm but the current slider suddenly stops :|
00:45:956 (1) - Default soft finish on head, would introduce this stanza nicely
01:11:762 (1) - hm doesn't hurt to remake this slider with the newer method xD http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787254
01:33:698 (2) - the sudden 90 degree looks kinda ugly imo, shape it like (3)
01:36:924 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note

Medium
hm do you feel the diff gap between this and Easy is a little much?

01:24:665 (1,2,1) - some symmetry won't hurt http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787266
01:25:956 (1,2) - Using Soft set sound appropriate here~
01:46:601 (1) - you could replace this with a spinner to lower the intensity?

Hard
- Consider naming this "Advanced" to match the rest of the diff names

00:38:536 (1) - unsnapped green line right after this slider
01:23:375 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think you can make this stream neater http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787272 i guess more straighter or something
01:25:956 (1) - Finish, hear bg music
01:34:988 (1,2) - Ctrl + H http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/787274 , i feel like the transition between 01:34:827 (9,1) - is too extreme atm

Extreme
00:54:343 (9) - NC? shortens combo and fits the scale in the bgm going back up imo
01:04:665 (9) - ^
01:47:327 (1,2,3,4) - hm I'd lower the volume or use Soft set to match the softer piano tone


Really unique hitsounds xD!
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Fixed all except the name of Hard

I followed RB naming pattern since it is a game on RB. ~

Thanks -3-
Noobita
597 posts
Joined June 2009
Noobita
go ;w;
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
irc recheck
no kds

SPOILER
21:16 LunarSakuya: general
21:16 Megurine Luka: =v=
21:19 LunarSakuya: do you know about how many taiko mods there are
21:20 Megurine Luka: I forget :<
21:20 LunarSakuya: lol ok
21:21 LunarSakuya: the folder looks fine~
21:22 Megurine Luka: ouo
21:22 LunarSakuya: Basic, if you check AImod for distance snap, there's 3 things you can check
21:22 LunarSakuya: seems like they're only like a grid off lol
21:24 LunarSakuya: 01:00:149 (3) - move 2 grids down to make a diamond shape with 00:58:214 (3,1,2,3) - , would be nicehttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818893
21:25 Megurine Luka: fixed~
21:25 LunarSakuya: 01:25:956 (1) - Finish
21:26 LunarSakuya: 01:32:407 (1) - Clap on tail for hitsound consistency?
21:27 LunarSakuya: if so, also 01:34:988 (3) - clap on head
21:27 LunarSakuya: and 01:36:278 (4) - clap
21:27 Megurine Luka: added~
21:27 LunarSakuya: 01:42:085 (2) -
21:28 LunarSakuya: thats it for basic =v=
21:28 Megurine Luka: ok ovo
21:30 LunarSakuya: Medium, HP+1 but feel like it's already kinda hard...
21:30 Megurine Luka: yes 0.0
21:32 LunarSakuya: 00:46:440 (2) - i feel like the claps on these sliders emphasize the wrong part of the bgm
21:33 Megurine Luka: you mean in the middle?
21:33 LunarSakuya: yeah the reverse
21:33 LunarSakuya: or maybe even the rhythm itself
21:34 Megurine Luka: 0.0 already have clap I think?
21:34 LunarSakuya: i meant they sound wierd
21:34 LunarSakuya: it's too loud
21:34 Megurine Luka: oh
21:34 LunarSakuya: for the piano
21:35 Megurine Luka: del ed~
21:35 LunarSakuya: xD alright
21:35 LunarSakuya: 01:01:439 (1) - Finish on head? i hear cymbals in the bgm~
21:35 Megurine Luka: ok~
21:35 LunarSakuya: 01:02:730 (1) -
21:36 Megurine Luka: added ovo
21:36 LunarSakuya: 01:04:020 (1,2) -
21:36 LunarSakuya: 01:05:310 (1) -
21:36 LunarSakuya: lol sorry
21:37 Megurine Luka: that's fine I understand your meaning ~
21:38 Megurine Luka: all added ovo
21:38 LunarSakuya: kk
21:39 LunarSakuya: 01:06:601 (1) - delete the 4th slider point? it's going in the opposite direction which i found kinda funny http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818907
21:39 LunarSakuya: if you do, same for (2)
21:40 Megurine Luka: that would be fine for me but I think that's popner's style?
21:41 LunarSakuya: oh lol i guess we can leave it for now
21:41 Megurine Luka: ouo
21:41 LunarSakuya: unless you wanna talk to him before i bubble
21:42 Megurine Luka: he might still sleeping so ~
21:44 LunarSakuya: xD yeah i could always wait another day :P
21:45 LunarSakuya: 01:42:730 (1) - Finish on head for cymbals
21:45 Megurine Luka: oh I actually fixed the sliders XD
21:45 LunarSakuya: xDD okay
21:46 LunarSakuya: 01:46:601 (1) - Finish
21:46 Megurine Luka: added
21:46 LunarSakuya: 01:25:956 (1) - finish on head xD
21:46 LunarSakuya: yea theres random cymbal spots around
21:46 LunarSakuya: pattern's ok though ^^
21:46 Megurine Luka: lol
21:47 Megurine Luka: ouo
21:47 LunarSakuya: 01:01:439 (1) - and finishes in this section, similar to basic
21:47 LunarSakuya: and thats it for medium
21:51 LunarSakuya: lol how2modtaiko
21:52 Megurine Luka: I don't know too ~
21:53 LunarSakuya: well no unrankable issues at least
21:53 Megurine Luka: lol
21:54 LunarSakuya: so i guess Hard now~
21:55 LunarSakuya: 00:08:375 (4) - Delete Finish, don't hear it following anything
21:56 LunarSakuya: 00:18:053 (4,1) - i feel this jump is a bit too big for a hard compared to the rest of the map
21:57 LunarSakuya: you could Ctrl + G (1,2) to fix this?
21:57 Megurine Luka: I actually exchange 2 and 3
21:57 LunarSakuya: okay
21:57 Megurine Luka: that would be easier
21:57 Megurine Luka: ouo
21:57 LunarSakuya: sure :)
21:59 LunarSakuya: 00:52:730 (2,3,4,1) - yeah too extreme imo
21:59 LunarSakuya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818919 perhaps move (4) down here or something
22:00 Megurine Luka: fixed~
22:00 Megurine Luka: I moved 2 and 4 a bit down
22:01 LunarSakuya: kk
22:01 Megurine Luka: http://puu.sh/3idbH.jpg
22:01 LunarSakuya: pretty skin xD
22:02 LunarSakuya: yeah looks nice
22:02 Megurine Luka: ouo
22:04 LunarSakuya: 01:01:117 (7,8,9,10,11) - a pattern more for insane, a reverse slider would do just fine imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818923
22:05 Megurine Luka: fixed~
22:06 LunarSakuya: 01:21:117 (6,1,2,3,4) - this kinda came off as random, perhaps something simpler like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818925
22:06 LunarSakuya: spacing-wise
22:07 Megurine Luka: fixed~
22:09 LunarSakuya: 01:24:504 (1) - Change this to 1/8 and start on the white tick, if you slow down the music it's still in 1/8
22:10 Megurine Luka: you mean start from 01:24:665 ?
22:11 LunarSakuya: yeah
22:11 Megurine Luka: fixed
22:12 LunarSakuya: k
22:12 LunarSakuya: 01:25:956 (1) - Finish sounds cool
22:14 LunarSakuya: 01:47:327 (1,2) - Make these touch?
22:14 LunarSakuya: and thats it, i'm just worried about the large spacing a bit
22:15 Megurine Luka: stacked ovo
22:22 Megurine Luka: I lost connect for a minute. did you say anything about ext yet?
22:23 LunarSakuya: not yet~
22:23 Megurine Luka: oh ok ovo
22:25 LunarSakuya: 00:50:472 (7,8) - Bring these closer, the spacing is very similar to 00:50:311 (6,7) -
22:27 Megurine Luka: fixed
22:28 LunarSakuya: 01:03:536 (8,9,10) - looks a bit random again, equalize the spacing between these
22:28 LunarSakuya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818943 a nicer diamond or something =v=
22:28 Megurine Luka: fixed
22:28 Megurine Luka: yep ovo
22:31 LunarSakuya: 01:11:762 (4) - hmm NC?
22:32 Megurine Luka: OK~
22:32 LunarSakuya: 01:26:359 (6) - delete note, hear the bgm closely
22:33 Megurine Luka: But I like this stream TUT
22:34 LunarSakuya: xD well alright i guess
22:34 LunarSakuya: move (7) up a grid too, it juts out a little
22:34 Megurine Luka: fixed~
22:37 LunarSakuya: im kinda skeptical about the last several notes lol
22:37 LunarSakuya: trying to follow the piano seems almost impossible? xD
22:38 LunarSakuya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818950 i think 1/8 is alright =v=
22:39 Megurine Luka: lost connect again T.T did you say anything after 01:26:440 (7) - ?
22:39 LunarSakuya: im kinda skeptical about the last several notes lol
22:39 LunarSakuya: trying to follow the piano seems a bit impossible
22:39 Megurine Luka: lol
22:39 Megurine Luka: yep
22:39 LunarSakuya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/818950 i think 1/8 is alright
22:40 Megurine Luka: 0.0 But I like the current one 0.0
22:43 LunarSakuya: oops i meant 1/4*
22:43 LunarSakuya: er the current one?
22:43 Megurine Luka: yep 0.0 1/8
22:44 LunarSakuya: uhh
22:44 LunarSakuya: i guess its playable
22:45 Megurine Luka: yes 0,0
22:47 LunarSakuya: im gonna try to ask another bat
22:47 LunarSakuya: i really dont know lol

So yeah the last notes in Extreme, i feel uncomfortable doing anything now orz :(
leaving this open for now..ok ok sorry lol
Edit: rebubble
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
It's fine. T.T Still thanks =3=
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
I think those sliders are fine because it is pretty easy to read and play, and it did fit the music :3
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
The last kick sliders fit the music and play fine(easily 300 them all with the first trial). But I will suggest them to be symmetric.


小圈好难打啊，HR党会疯


Here is some suggestions for Extreme, feel free to ignore.
00:52:246 (1,2,3) - the spacing is inconsistent here
00:54:746 (6) - I would like to delete this note to make the rhythm consistent with 00:52:246 (1,2,3), but it is up to you.
01:00:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part. 00:56:278 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:57:569 (1,2,3,4,5) are symmetric in direction, so I think this part is better to be a symmety of 00:58:859 (1,2,3,4,5). Random example:
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eveless
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eveless
Checked the last kick sliders as Megurine Luka's request, I think they're readable/playable/rankable.
CSY the corrupt
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CSY the corrupt
[EXT]

01:47:327 (1,2,3,4) - OF COURSE READABLE.
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka

popner wrote:

The last kick sliders fit the music and play fine(easily 300 them all with the first trial). But I will suggest them to be symmetric.


小圈好难打啊，HR党会疯
fixed to symmetric

0.0 大圈总觉得太简单了一些，毕竟都是常用梗
CrissCross
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CrissCross


and here is rep:http://puu.sh/3j2WB.osr

The sliders are readable and playable
LunarSakuya
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LunarSakuya
small changes made by mapper~ rebubble =v=
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka
Thanks sakuya =3=
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka
OMG What happened?



Nymph
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18:42 Megurine Luka: OK
18:43 Nymph: 好开始了
18:43 *Nymph is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/150116 dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy [Extreme]]
18:43 Megurine Luka: =V=
18:44 Nymph: 00:18:859 (1,2,3) - ok maybe make this pattern more straight?
18:44 Nymph: 00:20:149 (1,2,3) - and same stuff here
18:44 Megurine Luka: 0.0~
18:45 Megurine Luka: I like curved sliders =3= and Nymph
18:45 Nymph: ok then
18:46 Nymph: 01:34:343 (5,6,7,8) - maybe try CTRL+H?
18:46 Nymph: 01:47:327 (1,2,3,4) - and maybe this one could be more :symmetry ?
18:46 Nymph: oh this is already fixed, my bad :3
18:47 Megurine Luka: OK -v-
18:47 Megurine Luka: -3-
18:48 Nymph: nothing found in hard diff :3 good job here
18:50 Megurine Luka: Thank you 3
18:56 Nymph: well seems that is all :D


some small suggestions, I don't know about that bubble bug... but anyway it doesn't hurt us and we can go on.


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Kyouren
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Gratz!!! :) :)
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这是什么妈妈片
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阿拉拉~
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哇大哥
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Gratz~ :D
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Congratz! owo
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Finally congrats :D
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grats!! so cool song!! :3

but...bad taiko diff.
taiko mod is very few. why ranked? :o
this is BAT power!? x3
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congratz Luka! :3
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grats
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Why the hell 8.8 of rating, this map is epic.
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