Random modFirebug00:20:376 (1,2,3) - The difference between these notes is so small, might as well just make them straight.
00:22:176 (4) - Make this more symmetrical.
00:22:776 (5) - New combo.
00:23:976 (1) - remove new combo.
00:26:376 (5) - new combo.
00:29:976 (5) - Part of next combo.
00:32:376 (5) - new combo.
00:39:576 (1) - I don't like that I'm not really spinning to anything and it doesn't end in any meaningful way. I would just delete and have a gap. Just map up to the spinner start.
00:41:976 (1,2,3,4) - Slant is too flat. Add more shape to these.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/39779300:49:176 (2) - Place middle move point in center of slider.
00:51:576 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I just love this part.
Firefly00:20:376 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - The speed of those sliders just kills the flow here. 0.8 snap is a little better, but really the flow issues don't go away unless it's 1.0 snap.
01:01:176 - Add note?
01:21:276 - It would sound better with a note. just my opinion....
01:23:676 - ^
01:27:876 (4,5,1) - Should look more like 01:29:676 (4,5,6) - IMO
01:33:276 (4) - clap?
01:34:476 (6) - remove clap
01:35:676 (9) - Add clap
PhoenixDrain -1.
00:14:376 (1,2) - spacing
00:14:976 (4,5,6,7) - I wish you used more symmetry.
00:23:376 (4,5) - Make exactly 0.8
00:23:826 (6,7) - ^
00:35:076 (2) - slider could be better. Try to match 00:35:676 (4) -
00:39:576 (3) - End here 00:39:801 -? Sounds better.
00:40:026 (1) - Start 1/2th beat earlier.
00:42:876 (3) - Make sure this is symmetrical and it's perfectly vertical.
00:51:876 (3) - Bad looking slider.
00:52:476 (6) - ^
Same goes for any other sliders that look like that.
00:54:876 (6) - symmetry is off.
00:59:676 (6) - Could be more symmetrical. the more even the move points the better the slider.
01:18:876 (9) - sounds bad. Doesn't have a follow up hitsound rhythm. In other words you only had claps like this once.
01:20:076 (9) - symmetry!!!
01:26:376 (1) - maybe this should be a slider. I'm not sure though.
01:27:726 (8,9,10,11) - Make shape perfect. line these 01:28:326 (12,13,14) - back up after
01:30:276 (7) - Move to x 288 y 104 to fix alignment.
01:34:176 (3) - symmetry?
ConclusionWork on your polish. You have the beat down, now you need to make everything look nice.