Hi Metaforce, I just noticed that Hardcore is mentioned twice in the tags :S
Changed it, thank you.Autonom wrote:
Hi Metaforce, I just noticed that Hardcore is mentioned twice in the tags :S
Encrypto wrote:
I hereby shall mod this!
[Firebug]
00:23:976: New Combo. changed
00:26:376: The (8) clips a bit trough the (6). Not entirely bad, but it looks strange. won't change this, because it would destroy the spacing of the two sliders
00:39:276: Maybe move the Spinner a bit to 00:39:576? changed
00:55:476: Would sound better if (3) and (4) would clap too. changed
01:26:676: Move (4) down, so it aligns with (3). Also, new Combo? changed it another way, I didn't want it to be in a straight line, also new Combo added
01:28:776: Same as above with (1) and (6). same as above
[Firefly]
00:33:576: That (5) looks strangely misplaced. improved it
Rest is fine, although it could use more whistles like in Firebug.
[Firebird]
00:53:976: Align (1) with the rest. changed
A few alignment errors, but I wont point them out here, because they´re not that bad.
[Phoenix]
01:29:976: New Combo. changed
01:30:276: For some reason I think this stream doesn´t fit right into the song. May be just me though. I won't change this
It would feel better if you lower the Approach Rate and the Overall Difficulty by 1. I won't change this, because I think it would be too easy then
Well then, nice map. Good Luck, buddy.
Thank you very much for modding.those wrote:
From #modreqs.
[General]
Delete .osb file(s) and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties. done
I think you should set combo colours. A set of four work nicely; try to find colours that work well with the background picture. ok, I set 4 new colors
Use 80% volume for Kiai time, and 60% for any other. changed
Apply volume changes across all diffs. maybe I will add some more volume changes later
[Firebug]
Use tick rate 1. changed
Consider HP2, AR3, OD2. changed
00:27:576 (5) - NC changed
00:46:776 (4) - NC changed
[Firefly]
-
[Firebird]
00:19:176 (8) - NC changed
00:33:276 (4) - Stack isn't very intuitive; just map thilike how you have mapped the other similar patterns. changed
01:34:776 (9) - NC {also, add whistles to this pattern} changed and added
01:35:226 (1) - RNC changed
[Phoenix]
00:25:176 (1) - Spacing is awkward here. Move this or the previous combo further away. changed
00:44:976 (2) - Try x:248 y:368 for much better spacing. changed
00:51:576 (5) - NC changed
01:06:576 - add note. changed
01:14:376 (1) - End at 01:15:576, move 01:15:576 (1) - to next blue. changed
01:19:851 (1) - RNC changed
01:30:126 (1) - RNC changed
Good luck :3
Thank you for modding. Despite your expectations of this mod being not helpful, it is helpful, as every mod. It still helps to improve my map.^^ So again thank you, I changed most of the things you mentioned.kanye west wrote:
Hi! First mod! Sorry if it doesn't help :/
~Firebug~
00:28:776 (3) - Whistle here makes it sound more consistent with previous combo changed
01:26:376 - http://puu.sh/r8LL this placement on timeline sounds better and more consistent with following combo, what you currently have might make sense for harder diffs, but for an easy i think this makes the most sense won't change this
~Firefly~
00:32:376 (1) - move 1 grid right changed
01:17:076 - consider adding a note here, something like http://puu.sh/r91D changed
01:26:976 (1) - whistle changed
01:28:776 (1) - whistle changed
~Firebird~
00:17:976 - Remove NC changed
00:21:876 (8) - whistle changed
00:22:176 (9) - ^ changed
00:29:076 (10) - ^ changed
00:29:376 (11) - ^ changed
00:33:276 (4) - this looks unsymmetrical but I don't know how to fix, sry changed, I made it a small jump
00:47:826 - I think this looks better than what you have currently http://puu.sh/r98u changed
01:34:776 (1) - the whistle you have here sounds a little off, I think the one on the end slider is enough changed
01:35:226 (4) - ^ changed
~Phoenix~
01:07:626 - consider adding a note here for rhythm consistency, something like http://puu.sh/r9fy changed
01:30:276 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - doesn't go with the music, i don't know what to suggest otherwise though I think it's fine, if another modder mentions it, I will change it
I really liked the song and mapset! Good luck getting ranked!
120,304,35976,2,0,B|104:344|72:344|56:304,4,80,8|0|0|0|800:38:076 (4) - turn into a slider
192,120,32976,2,2,B|152:80|112:128,4,8000:41:976 - add circle
Thank you very much for your mod.Tshemmp wrote:
Hi, please remember you don't have to follow all of my points, some are personal opinons.
[General]
Delete osb-file and do full submit afterwards. done
nice diff names ;D thank you
[Phoenix]
OD 9? I would really decrease it to 8. changed
Also the HP drain is quite high imo, I prefer 7 but you should take also other opinions into consideration. As a result of this high drain you should add maybe more NCs. HPD changed to 7
00:15:276 (5) - I would move this to 00:15:576 and put in 2 circles 00:15:276. Don't forget to make the slider 1 repeat shorter. changed
00:16:776 (6) - NC changed
00:20:076 (5) - NC? changed
00:20:376 (7) - change this into a slider? won't change this
00:33:576 (8) - change into a slider and delete (9)? won't change this
00:33:876 (10) - change into a repeat slider and delete (11,12)? changed
00:44:826 - add circle changed
00:47:676 (7) - NC? changed
00:53:676 (10) - 2 grids down and 2 grids to the right (nice pattern imo) changed
01:21:726 (1,2,3) - why are they so close to (16)? changed
01:25:026 (5) - this slider doesn't fit changed it
01:28:776 - personal opinion: this pattern is too rectangular will keep it that way
01:30:651 (16,17) - delete changed
[Firebird]
AR +1 maybe? changed
00:27:576 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe you should replace some circles with sliders because 200 bpm are really fast I will keep it that way to increase the difficulty a bit
00:31:176 (6) - too many repeats, I suggest mapping some additional sliders instead changed it into 2 sliders
00:35:976 (6) - ^ and maybe try this changed it into 2 sliders120,304,35976,2,0,B|104:344|72:344|56:304,4,80,8|0|0|0|8
00:38:076 (4) - turn into a slider changed
00:38:376 (5) - move to 00:38:676 and make it 2 repeats shorter, add circle 00:38:376 changed
00:39:576 - end the kiai time here (should be the same in all diffs) changed
00:56:676 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - put some sliders instead of so many circles changed
01:20:076 (5,6) - Is this spacing intended? dunno anymore, just changed it
01:26:376 (1,2) - both 1 repeat shorter changed
01:27:576 (3) - too many repeats imo, map something instead! changed it, added a jump
01:29:076 (2) - 1 repeat shorter changed
01:33:576 - some sliders please xD added two sliders
[Firefly]
AR 5 please (and maybe OD 4) changed AR, OD is already 4
Apart from that this diff is fine.
[Firebug]
Kiai time should be consistent in all diffs. Move the inheriting section from 00:40:776 to 00:39:576. changed
00:29:076 (4) - avoid multiple repeats in easy diffs don't know how to change it here
00:32:976 (5) - ^ and re-shape the slider , atm it looks ugly; maybe try this192,120,32976,2,2,B|152:80|112:128,4,8000:41:976 - add circle changed
00:43:176 - ^ changed
00:49:176 (1) - I am not sure about this double repeat I'll keep it that way
00:59:976 (3) - this multiple repeat is fine imo because it's the end of a section here
01:16:776 - the following rectangular pattern looks boring imo changed it
01:22:776 (3) - change this double repeat? I'll keep it that way
01:25:176 - ^ I'll keep it that way
That's it, good luck!
Thank you very much for your mod.crabovan wrote:
Hello. Your map is awesome. ^_^ It should be ranked!
Phoenix
00:17:976 (6) - delete clap changed
00:18:576 (1) - add clap in start changed
00:24:576 (11) - delete whistle changed
00:36:276 (6) - add whistle changed
00:38:226 (8) - delete clap changed
00:55:476 (9,10) - add clap changed
01:10:176 (10) - add clap changed
Firebird
00:25:476 (2) - add clap changed
00:26:076 (5) - add clap changed
00:27:576 (1) - it`s a little crooked http://puu.sh/rXEx changed
00:59:076 (3,5) - add clap changed
01:23:676 (9) - add finish changed
01:23:976 (1,2,3) - maybe better do something like this? http://puu.sh/rXDq changed
01:25:176 (1,2,3) - ^ changed
01:32:676 (8) - add clap changed
F6 Point 01:16:776 - maybe better do samples sound 90%? changed
Firefly
00:34:776 (1) - delete whistle in the end changed
00:37:776 (2,4) - add whistle changed
00:38:376 (3) - add clap changed
01:29:976 (5) - delete clap in the middle and put there whistle changed
Firebug
00:37:176 (1) - it`s a little crooked http://puu.sh/rXPh changed
01:19:176 (1) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/rXQ1 , after http://puu.sh/rXQ8) changed
Good luck~
And also thank you very much for this mod.crabovan wrote:
Hello again I found a few more bugs (sorry for my slowpoking)
Firebird
00:42:876 (4) - why it have 2 white points? http://puu.sh/s4Fn changed
00:58:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - it`s a little crooked (before http://puu.sh/s4EZ , after http://puu.sh/s4Ff ) changed
01:17:976 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/s4FP , after http://puu.sh/s4G7 ) changed
01:20:076 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/s4GU ,after http://puu.sh/s4GN ) changed
01:33:576 (1,2,3) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/s4He , after http://puu.sh/s4HB ) changed
01:34:176 (4,5,6) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/s4HF , after http://puu.sh/s4I7 ) changed
01:34:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/s4Ih , after http://puu.sh/s4IP ) changed
Phoenix
00:30:876 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - - it`s a little crooked (before http://puu.sh/s4KT , after http://puu.sh/s4KO ) changed
00:47:076 (4,5,6) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/s4M2 , after http://puu.sh/s4LB ) changed
01:09:276 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/s4MK , after http://puu.sh/s4MZ ) changed
01:33:576 (1) - ^ (before http://puu.sh/s4Nt , after http://puu.sh/s4Nw ) changed
And one more: do all cirles like a this modding for better look.
You can`t give kudosu if I help is not the topic (I think what it is your mapping style, yes?)
Thank you very much for the mod._KcN_ wrote:
Hello! From #modreq
I am Newbie Modder
GeneralFirebug
- BG is 1024*768,Change it to 800*600
Autonom wrote:
General
The resolution isn't right, It should be 1024x768- 00:09:576 - 00:20:376 Phoenix map it and other diffs not.I think other 3 diffs should map there too. I did not want to map this part in the easier diffs, because I wanted Phoenix to be the longest and most difficult map
Firefly
- 00:23:376 - Add note? changed
- 00:39:576 (1) - how about let this sponner finish at 00:41:376? won't change this, because the distance between the spinner and the first hitcircle after the spinner on the timeline would be too short
- 00:49:176 (1) - how about change rhythm to this: http://puu.sh/szlu won't change this
- 00:51:576 (1,2,3) - how about change rhythm to this: http://puu.sh/szmy ^
- 00:55:176 - Add note? ^
- 01:25:176 (3,1,2,3) - how about change rhythm to this: http://puu.sh/sznR changed
- and the breaktime looks too long? in my opinion it's ok
Firebird
- 00:23:376 - Add note? won't change this
- 00:32:076 - Add note? won't change this
Phoenix
- 00:21:876 (8,9) - how about change to this: http://puu.sh/szsP changed
- and i think this diff need more slider I don't think so
Awesome song and I like it.Good Luck!
- i think this diff need more streams and jump to make it harder I know, but I don't know where^^
- how about move the greenline at 00:20:076 to 00:20:301? nope, this is alright
- 00:20:076 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 00:20:376 (3) won't change this
- 00:20:676 (1) - remove NC ^
- 01:23:226 (12,13,14) - too many whistle.how about remove whistle at 12,13 and add whistle at 01:23:676 (15)? changed
- 01:28:326 (12,13,14) - As above,maybe you can remove a part of whistlechanged
- 01:30:276 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ changed
- 01:32:376 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ changed
- 01:30:126 (6) - this note is hard to read,move it out? moved it to another position
- 01:30:876 - Add note? changed
ok, I added Lapfox on the tags, snapped the timing section, changed the slider and added your taiko map.[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:
Lapfox on tags? o3o
also... the last inherited section is unsnapped in all diffs D: I think it was supposed to be on 01:35:976
and only one suggestion for Phoenix
00:39:576 (3) - One more reverse so it ends up here 00:39:876
(Sounds really better)
so, good luck o3oI love this song <3
184,128,29076,2,2,B|144:120|104:144,3,80
72,224,11976,6,0,B|102:205|140:224|177:267|140:310|102:329|72:310,2,200
Thank you very much for your mod.GamerX4life wrote:
My Mod:
[Firebug][Firefly]
- 00:22:176 (4) Slider (from 00:22:176 to 00:22:476) instead changed
- 00:29:076 ugly slider try this:
184,128,29076,2,2,B|144:120|104:144,3,80changed- 00:32:976 same changed
- 00:37:176 spacing changed
- 00:49:176 ugly imo changed the slider a bit
- 00:49:176 try this: http://puu.sh/vMBd changed
- 01:28:476 add note changed
[Phoenix]
- 00:21:876 (4) repeat the slider changed
- 00:38:676 try this: http://puu.sh/vMI1 changed
- 00:54:876 (3) try to avoid this touch changed
- 01:27:876 put (5) at this point and add a note at 01:28:476 changed
- 01:29:676 same changed
- 01:35:826 add note changed
[Firebird]
- all Diffs should start at the same time... and should have breaks at the same time... I will keep it my way
- 00:11:976 (1) ugly try this:
72,224,11976,6,0,B|102:205|140:224|177:267|140:310|102:329|72:310,2,200changed- 01:04:626 (6) delete it changed and inserted some jumps
- 01:08:076 add note changed
Good Luck
- 00:17:976 (4,...,10) Slider instead (?) no, I will keep it that way
- 00:18:576 add clap changed
- 00:45:426 delete note changed
- 00:54:876 try this: http://puu.sh/vN1C changed
also thanks for your modPure Force wrote:
SPOILERFirebug
Please follow distance snap in every note, that's all.SPOILERFirefly
00:20:376 (2,4) - sliders are ugly changed
00:25:176 (1,2,3) - ^ changed
00:29:976 (1,3) - ^ changed
00:46:476 (1) - delete this, make 2 short sliders just changed the shape of the slider
00:56:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is a big mistake! put more sliders in this combos changed
01:35:676 (9,10,11) - same gridSPOILERPhoenix
00:20:076 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - use more sliders! won't change this
00:23:826 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ ^
00:37:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this jump is too damn hard, change it! won't change this, this is an Insane, so the difficulty is ok
00:37:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ (...?) ^
01:17:676 (6) - new combo changed
01:20:376 (10) - ^ changed
01:21:876 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - try to put 1 or 2 sliderI think it fits well, so won't change thisSPOILERFirebird
01:27:576 (3,4,5,6,7) - change this jump at better one. changed
use some more sliders, that's all
you have a big problem, too much circle and less slider? that's not good. Try to use more sliders in some places. this sure will be better in my next maps
Thank you for modding and also thank you very much for the star.Marcin wrote:
[Firebug]
Beat snap divisor - you can use 1/2 for easy
00:20:976 (2,3) - nazi mod - spacing\ / changed
00:31:176 (2,3) - ^ changed
01:16:776 (1,2) - ^ changed
01:19:776 (2,3) - ^ changed
01:29:976 (3) - Feels strange changed
[Firefly]
again nazi spacing mods:
00:32:976 (3,4,5) - ^ changed
01:20:076 (2) - ^ changed
01:29:076 (2,3,5,6) - ^ (or you can use diffrent spacing for (1),(2)) changed
00:46:476 (1) - you can use moar curves points to make this look better. changed
[Phoenix]
Great map <3
00:15:576 (7) - ~~opinion - ugly slider :< changed
00:17:376 (3,4) - NAZI SPACING OMG OMG changed
00:20:826 (2,3) - ^ changed
00:23:226 (3,4) - ^ changed
00:24:126 (8,9) - ^ changed
00:30:276 (2,3) - REALLY NAZI ^ changed
00:32:676 (2,3) - ^ changed
00:33:576 (8,9) - ^ changed
00:36:276 (6,7) - again really nazi ^ changed
00:51:876 (3,4,5,6) - ^ changed
01:17:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ changed
01:04:476 (5,6,7,8) - ~opinion - strange spacing made it to a different jump
~~~means nothin 00:37:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - don't even trying to nazi this won't change something there
00:38:226 (8,9,10,11) -
changed
[Firebird]
looks fine~
Star~~
Thank you very much for the mod.RikiH_ wrote:
Hi from #modreqs o/
I'm not the best modder but I hope I'm helpful. Sorry for my horrible english.
Firebug
01:29:976 (3,4,5) - Maybe this part is a little confusing for a newbie player... (Just a suggestion) I think it's ok this way
Firefly
00:27:576 (1) - I don't like this slider's shape, can you make it like the sliders at 00:25:176 (1,2,3) ? changed
00:32:076 - Can you add a note here? changed
00:34:776 (1) - I don't like this slider's shape, can you change it? tried a different one
01:18:876 - Add a note here D: changed
Firebird
Fine
Phoenix
00:52:176 (4) - Move this note to x:232 y:280 changed
00:52:326 (5) - Move this note to x:288 y:336 changed
01:17:526 - Add a note here changed
01:18:726 - Add a note here changed
01:21:126 - Add a note D: changed
01:23:526 - Add a note changed
I'm sorry but I can't mod Taiko :C
Again: I'm hope I'm helpful D:
Check out my map if you want t/87094
Byee
thank you very much for the mod.h-728 wrote:
Hi~ from modreq
[General][Firebug]
- Taiko's timing section is at 00:08:376
other's at 00:09:576[Firefly]
- 00:32:976 (5) - I think it is better to divide two sliders and one note. divided it into 2 sliders and added 2 notes
00:59:976 (3) - ...?
01:29:376 (2) - covered with hitburst. in normal(or Easy), it's better to make notes visible. changed
01:29:976 (3) - kick slider and reverse, may be difficult for new player. changed[Phoenix]
- 00:32:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,) - I want some pattern here, like... changed
01:17:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ changed
01:34:476 (6) - 1grid above and adjust to put 01:32:376 (3,5,7) to the same distance. changed[Firebird]
- 00:15:276 (5) - 1grid down changed
01:14:376 (1,1) - unify won't change this
consecutive whistle sound so loudly. consider decrease them. won't change this, unless another modder mentions itnice song!
- 00:39:651 (1) - end at 00:41:676 changed
00:53:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think this hitsounds pattern is pretty good. use them in other place more! added it to the following 2 combos
01:14:376 (1,1) - unify changed
gl
So delete the taiko folder since it's not needed, and why not just start all the timing sections at 00:08:376 or 00:09:576?AIBat v3.0 wrote:
[Skin/SB]Unused Image Files
taiko\taikobg.png
[All .osu Files]Timing Sections
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:
- [Firebird]
Red timing sections at:
00:09:576, BPM of 200.000
- [Firebug]
Red timing sections at:
00:09:576, BPM of 200.000
- [Firefly]
Red timing sections at:
00:09:576, BPM of 200.000
- [PhNyx's Taiko Oni]
Red timing sections at:
00:08:376, BPM of 200.000
- [Phoenix]
Red timing sections at:
00:09:576, BPM of 200.000
[ModTrace]Firebird
00:36:426 (7) - Move node #2 to {x:184 y:240}, move node #3 to {x:232 y:240}, move node #4 to {x:248 y:272}.
00:59:976 (7) - Move node #2 to {x:424 y:288}.
01:26:376 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:368 y:24}, move node #3 to {x:344 y:64}.
01:26:976 (2) - Move node #2 to {x:272 y:48}.
01:27:576 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:168 y:128}.
01:28:326 (6) - Move to {x:288 y:168}.
01:29:226 (2) - Move node #1 to {x:144 y:192}, move node #2 to {x:168 y:224}, move node #3 to {x:216 y:224}.
01:29:976 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:328 y:272}, move node #3 to {x:352 y:232}.
01:31:476 (2) - Move to {x:472 y:64}.
Firebug
00:23:976 - Pretty sliders like this are good, try and use more of them!
00:29:076 (4) - Don't make sliders that repeat more than once on easy diffs, they're unexpected and tend to confuse newbies.
00:49:176 (2) - ^
00:59:976 (3) - ^
01:22:776 (3,3) - ^
00:43:176 (3) - Move to {x:384 y:208}.
Firefly
00:30:876 (2) - Move to {x:160 y:128}.
00:57:276 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:128 y:256}.
00:57:276 (4,6,3) - IMO the pinched shape of these sliders is ugly.
00:58:176 (6) - Move node #2 to {x:-16 y:176}.
00:59:826 (4) - Remove this circle.
00:59:976 (5) - Move to {x:224 y:192}.
Phoenix
00:15:576 (7) - Move node #2 to {x:280 y:112}, move node #3 to {x:408 y:240}, move node #4 to {x:408 y:112}.
00:42:876 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:392 y:296}, move node #3 to {x:400 y:248}.
00:44:376 (1,4) - Use copies of 00:44:976 (3) here.
01:05:676 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:512 y:240}.
01:06:876 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:48 y:56}.
01:11:676 (7) - Move node #2 to {x:272 y:24}.
Thank you very much for this mod and the star. Both are very appreciated.akrolsmir wrote:
Going to test ModTrace on your map, so don't be overwhelmed by the "Move Node"... xPSo delete the taiko folder since it's not needed, and why not just start all the timing sections at 00:08:376 or 00:09:576? both already doneAIBat v3.0 wrote:
[Skin/SB]Unused Image Files
taiko\taikobg.png don't have such a folder here...maybe I already deleted it
[All .osu Files]Timing Sections
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:
- [Firebird]
Red timing sections at:
00:09:576, BPM of 200.000
- [Firebug]
Red timing sections at:
00:09:576, BPM of 200.000
- [Firefly]
Red timing sections at:
00:09:576, BPM of 200.000
- [PhNyx's Taiko Oni]
Red timing sections at:
00:08:376, BPM of 200.000 changed the timing here
- [Phoenix]
Red timing sections at:
00:09:576, BPM of 200.000
[ModTrace]Firebird
00:36:426 (7) - Move node #2 to {x:184 y:240}, move node #3 to {x:232 y:240}, move node #4 to {x:248 y:272}. changed
00:59:976 (7) - Move node #2 to {x:424 y:288}. changed
01:26:376 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:368 y:24}, move node #3 to {x:344 y:64}. changed
01:26:976 (2) - Move node #2 to {x:272 y:48}. changed
01:27:576 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:168 y:128}. changed
01:28:326 (6) - Move to {x:288 y:168}. changed
01:29:226 (2) - Move node #1 to {x:144 y:192}, move node #2 to {x:168 y:224}, move node #3 to {x:216 y:224}. changed
01:29:976 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:328 y:272}, move node #3 to {x:352 y:232}. changed
01:31:476 (2) - Move to {x:472 y:64}. changed
Firebug
00:23:976 - Pretty sliders like this are good, try and use more of them!
00:29:076 (4) - Don't make sliders that repeat more than once on easy diffs, they're unexpected and tend to confuse newbies. changed
00:49:176 (2) - ^ changed
00:59:976 (3) - ^ changed
01:22:776 (3,3) - ^ won't change it here, because it fits well
00:43:176 (3) - Move to {x:384 y:208}. changed
Firefly
00:30:876 (2) - Move to {x:160 y:128}. changed
00:57:276 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:128 y:256}. changed
00:57:276 (4,6,3) - IMO the pinched shape of these sliders is ugly. I will keep it that way
00:58:176 (6) - Move node #2 to {x:-16 y:176}. changed
00:59:826 (4) - Remove this circle. changed
00:59:976 (5) - Move to {x:224 y:192}. changed
Phoenix
00:15:576 (7) - Move node #2 to {x:280 y:112}, move node #3 to {x:408 y:240}, move node #4 to {x:408 y:112}. changed
00:42:876 (3) - Move node #2 to {x:392 y:296}, move node #3 to {x:400 y:248}. changed
00:44:376 (1,4) - Use copies of 00:44:976 (3) here. changed
01:05:676 (1) - Move node #2 to {x:512 y:240}. changed
01:06:876 (4) - Move node #2 to {x:48 y:56}. changed
01:11:676 (7) - Move node #2 to {x:272 y:24}. changed
General comments: Some of your sliders were really pretty and symmetrical- you could tell which ones you had spent effort on, so try and spend that effort on more of them (many of the short sliders looked off, I tried to correct some in my mod). For the most part the rhythm of the mapping made sense, but you could work on better-looking and more fun to play patterns; much of the time I couldn't see any pattern at all, which is a definite problem.
Yeah, as I already said, I'm not a very experienced mapper, but I already try to use some better and more fun patterns and much better slider shapes in my upcoming maps, so these will be much better than this one. I still try to figure out some fun-to-play-patterns.
Thanks for being a guinea pig. Take a star and my best wishes!
Thank you very much for your mod.yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
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Firebird:
00:10:026 - Add a note? Similar to what u did 00:14:676 (2,3,4,5,6,7). Kinda was expecting a note here. changed
Phoenix:
00:39:576 (3) - End this repeat here 00:39:876 changed (listen on 25%)...?
01:01:026 (1) - This is isn't the right snap. There is no 1/8th at this part. This slider should be 1/4 and should start 01:00:951 like this: changed
01:03:276 - Add a note here? To continue following the Nintendo sound. changed
01:12:876 - ^ changed
Firefly:
Fine
Firebird:
You may want to increase you distance snap on this map. .6 seems too small for the slider velocity you're using and makes the notes seem REALLY cramped and smushed. I suggest maybe using a 1.0 or .8 DS and move your notes around a bit to make the easy flow a bit better. Right now with the low DS and the SV it feels like you're hovering over the note waiting forever to hit it. I think, I will keep this, though
Thank you very much for your mod.TheVileOne wrote:
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Firebug
00:20:376 (1,2,3) - The difference between these notes is so small, might as well just make them straight. changed
00:22:176 (4) - Make this more symmetrical. changed
00:22:776 (5) - New combo. changed
00:23:976 (1) - remove new combo. changed
00:26:376 (5) - new combo. changed
00:29:976 (5) - Part of next combo. changed
00:32:376 (5) - new combo. changed
00:39:576 (1) - I don't like that I'm not really spinning to anything and it doesn't end in any meaningful way. I would just delete and have a gap. Just map up to the spinner start. changed
00:41:976 (1,2,3,4) - Slant is too flat. Add more shape to these. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/397793 changed
00:49:176 (2) - Place middle move point in center of slider. changed
00:51:576 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I just love this part. glad you like it
Firefly
00:20:376 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - The speed of those sliders just kills the flow here. 0.8 snap is a little better, but really the flow issues don't go away unless it's 1.0 snap. I think I will keep it this way, though
01:01:176 - Add note? changed
01:21:276 - It would sound better with a note. just my opinion.... changed
01:23:676 - ^ changed
01:27:876 (4,5,1) - Should look more like 01:29:676 (4,5,6) - IMO I will keep it as it is
01:33:276 (4) - clap? changed
01:34:476 (6) - remove clap changed
01:35:676 (9) - Add clap changed
Phoenix
Drain -1. I find it good as it is now
00:14:376 (1,2) - spacing changed
00:14:976 (4,5,6,7) - I wish you used more symmetry. changed
00:23:376 (4,5) - Make exactly 0.8 changed
00:23:826 (6,7) - ^ changed
00:35:076 (2) - slider could be better. Try to match 00:35:676 (4) - changed
00:39:576 (3) - End here 00:39:801 -? Sounds better. changed
00:40:026 (1) - Start 1/2th beat earlier. changed
00:42:876 (3) - Make sure this is symmetrical and it's perfectly vertical. changed
00:51:876 (3) - Bad looking slider. changed
00:52:476 (6) - ^ changed
Same goes for any other sliders that look like that.
00:54:876 (6) - symmetry is off. changed
00:59:676 (6) - Could be more symmetrical. the more even the move points the better the slider. changed
01:18:876 (9) - sounds bad. Doesn't have a follow up hitsound rhythm. In other words you only had claps like this once. deleted the clap in the middle of the slider
01:20:076 (9) - symmetry!!! changed
01:26:376 (1) - maybe this should be a slider. I'm not sure though. changed
01:27:726 (8,9,10,11) - Make shape perfect. line these 01:28:326 (12,13,14) - back up after changed
01:30:276 (7) - Move to x 288 y 104 to fix alignment. changed
01:34:176 (3) - symmetry? changed
Conclusion
Work on your polish. You have the beat down, now you need to make everything look nice.