1. Easy (2.07 stars, 176 notes)
2. Hard (4.6 stars, 351 notes)
3. Normal (3.52 stars, 235 notes)

Verlaren wrote:

Can I create a guest diff?

Verlaren wrote:

I completed the insane, could you please look at my guest diff?

1. There should only be one .osb in your map folder. Remove one, or even better, remove both because you aren't using them.
2. Your preview point is a bit off.. It starts halfway through the bridge, which isn't exactly always the best place to put a preview point; usually right before a kiai is. So, hows' about you add it near the end of the bridge where the chorus leads into the kiai section? (( at 02:54:725 - ))
3. Your background is not 800 x 600 pixels nor 1024 x 768 pixels.. I suggest for you to either resize the background, or find a new one, please.

1. 00:23:132 (3, 4, 5) - I know you've been wanting to remap some parts in the easy/normal, and I was wondering if this specific part was one of them. It it rhythm-ly correct (( this pattern )), but something about how it transitions into the last slider, (5), makes it feel very awkward to me to play this map. I don't know exactly what's causing this, most likely (5)'s curve, but if there is anything you think you can do to improve it, please tell me. I'm very confused on what to tell you right now.. so uh. Hm.. hows' about you try inverting (5)'s slider curve so that it faves downward? If you have any better ideas on what to do, please consult me for I will try to help you think of something.
2. 00:41:185 (1) - Maybe move this slider's end anchor point to an area in which it could look like the small repeat slider is indicating the flow direction of the up comming slider? Here, I get that's kinda vague, so i'll take a picture of what I mean for ya.
   
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3. 00:47:292 (4, 1, 2) - The way these notes are positioned look messy.. I would suggest for you to instead of mapping (1) and (2) over to the right of the big slider (1), to map to the left of it so that they wouldn't interfere with the long slider's path which would make the map look overall more appealing in this specific area.
4. 01:22:336 (3) - Maybe you can rotate the slider a bit and then try to reposition the repeat slider so that it does not look cramped up near the bottom of the screen int he playing field?
5. 02:10:389 (2, 3, 4) - Look at this, then look at (4)'s position. Test play it. I thought that (4) felt waaaay too close to (2) and it was somewhat crowded into the beatmap. I suggest for you to reposition it and then adjust the spacing afterwards so it's not as crushed togeth as it is atm.
6. 02:17:557 (3, 1, 2) - The way (3) and (2) are placed in gameplay are very crowded together and makes me want to puke the rainbow in my mouth a bit. Here's how to improve it: I suggest spacing (2) out a bit so that it doesn't interfere with (3)'s 300/100/50 fadeout during gameplay so the beats/sliders don't look mashed together but instead look neater and in an orderly pattern.

1. 00:21:008 (1) - Hm, this slider flow is kinda weird in the beginning. Not exactly the slider itself, but how it transitions into the next two notes. If you're trying to keep a flow like the current patterns in your map (( their flow )), I suggest you do something like invert the slider curve. Plays a bit better and looks more visually-appealing to me.
   
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2. 00:26:318 (4) - It may be of your best interest to center this slider anchor point before nazi-modders come and start complaining, "It isn't centered! Fix it!". So, yeah. Do that for me?
3. 00:58:177 (5) - May you perhaps concider making this into a arc slider? The transition into the next pattern (( with the note and the sliders blanketing eachother )) is a wee bit awkward and i feel as if it would look better with an arc slider, for I tried it and it played better. Remember, this is just my opinion. You may do whatever you wish.
   
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4. 01:01:097 (4) - Mm, honestly, I think this slider could be improved. How, you say? Well, first off, it's nice, but while playing this map, it sticks out the most. Not necessarily as bad, but as a bit weird. You see, most of your sliders are very nice, curvey and blankety. This curves, but doesn't quite blanket the notes therefore giving off a wee bit of awkward transition. You could try to improve it by blanketing the notes with it, (( refer to RJ's slider guide for how to make good blanketing sliders )), or you could try something else and shorten the slider. That is up to you, my friend!
5. 01:04:814 (3) - Mm, gaps. This is where the great gameplay dies a bit; these empty gaps that could easily be filled up. How about you try something as you did at 02:47:557 - where you merged ( what would be in this pattern i'm talking about ) (2) and (3) together to fill up the first empty gap. It keeps consistency and flows a bit better, if you see what i'm getting at! Otherwise, i''d suggest you merge (3) and (4) to make them into a repeat slider. See, i'm fine with the first gap between (2) and (3), but then it feels as if the space could be filled up on the second turn for diversity. You could use this as a last resort for filling up that blank space.
6. 01:35:345 (4) - I recommend you make this into a curve slider to make it flow better with your previous note and maintain the map's awesomeness.
   
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7. 01:39:062 (3) - Mm, this slider's position looks unappealing in game play and is loosing the potential flow that most of your map patterns currently have (( Here's an example: One at 01:21:009 (1, 2, 3) - )). I suggest for you to re-position it a bit so that it looks more appealing and is a bit fun to play for you and your audience you're reaching out to.
   
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8. 02:31:362 (2, 3, 4) - Basically the same thing I said at 01:04:814 (3) -. Refer to that for what to do here!

1. 00:42:778 (2, 3, 4) - The gaps of empty space before (2) and (4) are killing me. I'd suggest for you to fill it up, please!
2. 02:15:168 (4, 5) - I think it'd be a bit better if you were to space these two notes out, concidering you never stacked something like this in the difficulty before and it's a long pause for your mouse / tablet pen to just stay in that position. It'd be fun-er if you were to space it out.
3. 02:40:124 (3) - Personally, i'd try to blanket (4) more. May you please do that and make this slider an arc slider? <3

1. 粉雪のシンフォニーis the Japanese name of the song, which can be romanized by "Konayuki no Shinfonii". I don't know whether that is more accurate, or the English title "Powdered Snow Symphony". Either way, title should be changed to match either one of these.
2. You should consider tagging "omoi" since this track comes from that SOUND HOLIC album.

1. 00:36:938 (3) - Instead of using a simple curved slider which is what the basis of sliders is for this map, this one should have been anchored at 00:37:203 - to map to the song.
2. 01:24:460 (1,1,1,2) - Kinda undermapped. If anything, this could have been one place to use a sv decrease. This map uses x1.00 throughout; not that this is wrong or anything, but even with change in spacing that's not a dramatic enough change between Kiai and calmer parts of the song.
3. 02:24:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not too sure I like this. How about you repeat the use of 02:08:265 (1,2,3,4,1) - ? It certainly makes sense for that to appear here again.
4. 02:26:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't you think this was mapped a little awkwardly for "zenbu" and just for symmetry?

1. You need to add an approachcircle.png into the folder due to having a custom hitcircle.
2. Why are there two .osbs? Remove both of them, please.
3. 02:53:929 - Unused timing section in all difficulties.

1. 00:57:115 (2) - It would make sense and feel smoother for this to be closer to the slider end of (1) rather than away from it. I'd suggest moving up (1) and doing something like this.
2. 01:17:823 (2,3) - Holy crap, this is uguu.
3. 01:21:539 (2) - Add a finish to the beginning of this slider to follow the pattern of finishes that you had going on previously, silly.
4. 01:54:460 (1,2,3) - Something about (3) here bugs me. I think it's the fact that it's linear and pointing straight down. I believe that something similar to this (this is an ugly sketch) would look a lot better. (remember to find a way to arrange the notes after it to follow the distance snap!)
5. 02:17:557 (3) - Odd looking overlap between this circle and 02:18:619 (2). It's also pretty clustered.
6. 02:30:035 (4) - Shouldn't you add a whistle to the end of this slider? I believe that you are following the vocals in terms of whistles.
7. 02:57:115 (2,3) - Make it so that these blanket eachother. Here's an example of what I mean. Doesn't that look super sexy?
8. 03:04:017 (6) - Weird overlap between this note and 03:05:079 (2).

1. -1 AR suits this so much better due to the slow BPM and the fact that this is a calming song.
2. 00:37:203 (6) - Add a whistle to the beginning of this slider. It just seems.. fitting.
3. 00:41:451 (5) -nazi- Space this a bit farther apart from (4) according to the distance snap.
4. 02:43:309 (1,2) - Make these blanket eachother. Just like the example I put in Easy.
5. 02:51:274 (1) - Remove the finish from this spinner. You didn't do it in any other difficulties.
6. 03:02:955 (5) - Ctrl + R this. It feels more smooth and natural like that.
7. 03:16:230 (6) - You forgot to add a finish to the beginning of this slider to follow the finish pattern.

1. Oh wow, jeez. Take -1 off of the HP drain or overall difficulty (or both, as I recommend)! This is a really calm song and there is no need for such high difficulty setting (especially on a Hard difficulty like this).
2. AR 8 is so undeserving. Really.
3. 00:25:256 (4) - You should add a whistle to the beginning of this slider in order to follow the whistle pattern you currently have going on.
4. 00:26:319 (1) - And you need to add a finish at the beginning of this slider to keep consistent with your pattern.
5. 00:30:301 (2) - Make it so that this slider and 00:31:628 (1) don't oddly overlap by curving (1) the other way. If you don't understand what I mean, here's an example.
6. 00:41:982 (3) - Move this up to be aligned with (1) to form a more intuitive triangle formation.
7. 01:01:362 (1) - A whistle to the beginning of this slider sounds more fitting to the vocals.
8. 01:15:964 (1) - You really should make this a jump to avoid confusion with the previous jumps.
9. 02:39:858 (2,3) - Odd overlap. You should know what to do by now~.
10. 02:55:787 (1) - Make this follow the jump pattern to avoid confusion.

Elly-chan wrote:

Hey! Mod Request Via IRC. (／・ω・)／ Beautiful Mapset, only a few things that I could find! Pretty solid for your second map!

[General]

1. There should only be one .osb in your map folder. Remove one, or even better, remove both because you aren't using them. Done
2. Your preview point is a bit off.. It starts halfway through the bridge, which isn't exactly always the best place to put a preview point; usually right before a kiai is. So, hows' about you add it near the end of the bridge where the chorus leads into the kiai section? (( at 02:54:725 - )) Done
3. Your background is not 800 x 600 pixels nor 1024 x 768 pixels.. I suggest for you to either resize the background, or find a new one, please. Done

[Easy]

Hitsound mods

1. 00:50:478 (2) - I discussed with you in IRC what the whistles were following throughout this map and you replied whenever there was a note that landed on a vocal. Well, here, it seems as if you had missed one! To keep the pattern consistent, add in a whistle. Done
2. 01:21:539 (2) - Seems as if you missed a custom whistle, or to be technically correct, custom finish. Add one here to keep your hitsound pattern consistent! ♥ Done
3. 01:54:460 (1) - This section, man. You're doing great at following your current custom finish hitsound, but may I suggest for you to spice up the pattern until we get back into the vocals? Here, this is what I mean.. You see, when you first enter the section, there are more sounds like your custom finish in the BGM throughout this whole section. I suggest that you use timing sections so gradually increase the volume within these little spurts of the pattern so it's something like this.. Then, rinse and repeat for the first blue-combo repeat slider. Done!
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Combo mods

1. Crap, I checked this three times and this looks absolutely clean consistency-wise and it as a whole.. amazing job to the mapper and the modders before me! ♥♥♥

AR +1? Done

1. 00:23:132 (3, 4, 5) - I know you've been wanting to remap some parts in the easy/normal, and I was wondering if this specific part was one of them. It it rhythm-ly correct (( this pattern )), but something about how it transitions into the last slider, (5), makes it feel very awkward to me to play this map. I don't know exactly what's causing this, most likely (5)'s curve, but if there is anything you think you can do to improve it, please tell me. I'm very confused on what to tell you right now.. so uh. Hm.. hows' about you try inverting (5)'s slider curve so that it faves downward? If you have any better ideas on what to do, please consult me for I will try to help you think of something. Done
2. 00:41:185 (1) - Maybe move this slider's end anchor point to an area in which it could look like the small repeat slider is indicating the flow direction of the up comming slider? Here, I get that's kinda vague, so i'll take a picture of what I mean for ya. Done
   
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3. 00:47:292 (4, 1, 2) - The way these notes are positioned look messy.. I would suggest for you to instead of mapping (1) and (2) over to the right of the big slider (1), to map to the left of it so that they wouldn't interfere with the long slider's path which would make the map look overall more appealing in this specific area. Done!
4. 01:22:336 (3) - Maybe you can rotate the slider a bit and then try to reposition the repeat slider so that it does not look cramped up near the bottom of the screen int he playing field? Done??
5. 02:10:389 (2, 3, 4) - Look at this, then look at (4)'s position. Test play it. I thought that (4) felt waaaay too close to (2) and it was somewhat crowded into the beatmap. I suggest for you to reposition it and then adjust the spacing afterwards so it's not as crushed togeth as it is atm. Done
6. 02:17:557 (3, 1, 2) - The way (3) and (2) are placed in gameplay are very crowded together and makes me want to puke the rainbow in my mouth a bit. Here's how to improve it: I suggest spacing (2) out a bit so that it doesn't interfere with (3)'s 300/100/50 fadeout during gameplay so the beats/sliders don't look mashed together but instead look neater and in an orderly pattern. Done

[Normal]

Hitsound mods

1. 01:27:911 (1) - Seems as if you've gotten sidetracked by your whistle pattern and forgot to add in a custom hitfinish here instead. So, yeah! Inconsistencies! Please replace the whistle with your custom finish hitsound. Done
2. 01:54:460 (1) - Without noticing, i've figured out that you used a pattern sort of like the same thing I suggested in easy. The only difference is not adding in a whistle with a lowered timing section point at 20%. I suggest you do this because there's clearly that noise in the BGM where you're placing your current custom hitsounds to but skipping here most likely because of a larger volume amount. So.. yeah. If you're confused, look back to the first hitsound mod on Easy. Done!
3. 02:35:610 (2) - It seems as if you're missing a whistle hitsound since you use all of your whistles to follow every single vocal she says.. add one in here to keep your pattern consistent? Done
4. 02:38:000 (7) - IIRC, there should be a custom finish here instead of a whistle if you want to keep your hitsound pattern consistent and make it sound a bit less awkward because of it missing out on a custom hitfinish. Add one in and remove the whistle, please? Done
5. 02:44:106 (1) - It seems as if there's a few missing whistles in this pattern. I just went back to recheck it and as I thought, there were quite a few missing whistles within this combo. To keep your hitsound consistent and as you did it in the first bridge before the first kiai, add a whistle at 02:44:106 -, 02:44:902 -, and one last one at 02:45:168 -. Done
6. 03:11:982 (1) - Same thing as i've mentioned at 01:27:911 -. Refer to that mod! Done
7. 03:16:230 (6) - Whew, good thing I checked the hitsounds over one more time. I just figured out that you missed a custom hitfinish here.. please add one in to keep your hitsound pattern consistent, ofc. ♥ Done
8. 03:16:230 (6, 7) - Mm.. here's yet another consistency. Add in four whistles; three on the (6) slider at the beginning, repeat, and end, then one on (7). As you already know, it follows the whistle-vocal hitsound pattern you've been doing and it's consistent with the previous break. Done
9. 03:19:150 (4) - Eeyup, here's another missing whistle, too. Add one for all of the same reasons i've been mentioning the above mods for. ♥ Done

Combo mods

1. 00:48:619 (5) - It seems as if you've forgotten to place a new combo here! Why? First off, it makes sense because the next vocal verse starts here, and second off, you added a new combo here in the second section of the song that matches this one. So, add one, please? ^^ Done
2. 01:05:610 (5) - Mm, there's a new vocal line that starts here, plus you added a new combo here in the next bridge-section before the end of the song.. I suggest you add one here, too! Done
3. 02:05:610 - Done
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   17:49 <Elly-chan> : 02:05:610 - around this part
   17:49 <Elly-chan> : the combos are a bit off
   17:49 <Elly-chan> : 02:07:203 - remove this combo
   17:49 <Elly-chan> : 02:08:265 - add one here
   17:50 <Red Layfon> : Is that all?
   17:50 <Elly-chan> : 02:09:327 - and remove this one too
   17:50 <Elly-chan> : 02:13:044 - then maybe add a new combo here
   17:51 <Elly-chan> : since it's going up to 7-8
   17:51 <Red Layfon> : And remove the next one's NC?
   17:51 <Elly-chan> : yep
   17:51 <Red Layfon> : Gotcha~
   17:51 <Elly-chan> : soo yeah, a a few mods in one, i'll just put this small log for that bullet xD
4. 02:25:522 (1) - Looking at the first section of this song you mapped which is almost identical to this one, you didn't add a new combo here. Can you remove this one to keep consistency / keeping it flowing right with the vocals, please? Done

1. 00:21:008 (1) - Hm, this slider flow is kinda weird in the beginning. Not exactly the slider itself, but how it transitions into the next two notes. If you're trying to keep a flow like the current patterns in your map (( their flow )), I suggest you do something like invert the slider curve. Plays a bit better and looks more visually-appealing to me. Done
   
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2. 00:26:318 (4) - It may be of your best interest to center this slider anchor point before nazi-modders come and start complaining, "It isn't centered! Fix it!". So, yeah. Do that for me? Pending
3. 00:58:177 (5) - May you perhaps concider making this into a arc slider? The transition into the next pattern (( with the note and the sliders blanketing eachother )) is a wee bit awkward and i feel as if it would look better with an arc slider, for I tried it and it played better. Remember, this is just my opinion. You may do whatever you wish. Done
   
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4. 01:01:097 (4) - Mm, honestly, I think this slider could be improved. How, you say? Well, first off, it's nice, but while playing this map, it sticks out the most. Not necessarily as bad, but as a bit weird. You see, most of your sliders are very nice, curvey and blankety. This curves, but doesn't quite blanket the notes therefore giving off a wee bit of awkward transition. You could try to improve it by blanketing the notes with it, (( refer to RJ's slider guide for how to make good blanketing sliders )), or you could try something else and shorten the slider. That is up to you, my friend! Done!
5. 01:04:814 (3) - Mm, gaps. This is where the great gameplay dies a bit; these empty gaps that could easily be filled up. How about you try something as you did at 02:47:557 - where you merged ( what would be in this pattern i'm talking about ) (2) and (3) together to fill up the first empty gap. It keeps consistency and flows a bit better, if you see what i'm getting at! Otherwise, i''d suggest you merge (3) and (4) to make them into a repeat slider. See, i'm fine with the first gap between (2) and (3), but then it feels as if the space could be filled up on the second turn for diversity. You could use this as a last resort for filling up that blank space. Done
6. 01:35:345 (4) - I recommend you make this into a curve slider to make it flow better with your previous note and maintain the map's awesomeness. Done
   
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7. 01:39:062 (3) - Mm, this slider's position looks unappealing in game play and is loosing the potential flow that most of your map patterns currently have (( Here's an example: One at 01:21:009 (1, 2, 3) - )). I suggest for you to re-position it a bit so that it looks more appealing and is a bit fun to play for you and your audience you're reaching out to. Done
   
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8. 02:31:362 (2, 3, 4) - Basically the same thing I said at 01:04:814 (3) -. Refer to that for what to do here! Done

[Hard]

Hitsound mods

1. 00:25:256 (4) - Seems as if you're missing a whistle. Don't break your hitsound pattern! Keep your consistency and add one in here. Done
2. 00:26:318 (1) - Aah! You broke your hitsound pattern this early in the map! No need to fear. Just remove the whistle, add in a custom hitfinish and all shall be good! Done
3. 01:54:460 (1) - "Without noticing, i've figured out that you used a pattern sort of like the same thing I suggested in easy. The only difference is not adding in a whistle with a lowered timing section point at 20%. I suggest you do this because there's clearly that noise in the BGM where you're placing your current custom hitsounds to but skipping here most likely because of a larger volume amount. So.. yeah. If you're confused, look back to the first hitsound mod on Easy." Done!

Combo mods

1. Everything looks okay. I need to know what your combo-pattern is though before I can mod the combos.. I couldn't exactly detect it. ^^"

AR -1. Overall, the difficulty settings are too hard for such a slow song. Done

1. 00:42:778 (2, 3, 4) - The gaps of empty space before (2) and (4) are killing me. I'd suggest for you to fill it up, please! Done!
2. 02:15:168 (4, 5) - I think it'd be a bit better if you were to space these two notes out, concidering you never stacked something like this in the difficulty before and it's a long pause for your mouse / tablet pen to just stay in that position. It'd be fun-er if you were to space it out. Done!
3. 02:40:124 (3) - Personally, i'd try to blanket (4) more. May you please do that and make this slider an arc slider? <3 Done!

I Really Wish I Could've Helped More, But Your Map Is Just Too Good For Me.. Good Luck!

those wrote:

Awesome choice of song. I love SOUND HOLIC and I love Nana Takahashi :3

[General]

1. 粉雪のシンフォニーis the Japanese name of the song, which can be romanized by "Konayuki no Shinfonii". I don't know whether that is more accurate, or the English title "Powdered Snow Symphony". Either way, title should be changed to match either one of these. Done
2. You should consider tagging "omoi" since this track comes from that SOUND HOLIC album. Done

[Hard]

1. 00:36:938 (3) - Instead of using a simple curved slider which is what the basis of sliders is for this map, this one should have been anchored at 00:37:203 - to map to the song. Don't quite understand..
2. 01:24:460 (1,1,1,2) - Kinda undermapped. If anything, this could have been one place to use a sv decrease. This map uses x1.00 throughout; not that this is wrong or anything, but even with change in spacing that's not a dramatic enough change between Kiai and calmer parts of the song. Done
3. 02:24:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not too sure I like this. How about you repeat the use of 02:08:265 (1,2,3,4,1) - ? It certainly makes sense for that to appear here again. Done
4. 02:26:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Don't you think this was mapped a little awkwardly for "zenbu" and just for symmetry? Pending

Best of luck :3

Red Layfon wrote:

those wrote:

1. 00:36:938 (3) - Instead of using a simple curved slider which is what the basis of sliders is for this map, this one should have been anchored at 00:37:203 - to map to the song. Don't quite understand..

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Jacob wrote:

Hey, Lora! I see your map is going well.

General

1. You need to add an approachcircle.png into the folder due to having a custom hitcircle. Done
2. Why are there two .osbs? Remove both of them, please. Done
3. 02:53:929 - Unused timing section in all difficulties. Done

Easy

1. 00:57:115 (2) - It would make sense and feel smoother for this to be closer to the slider end of (1) rather than away from it. I'd suggest moving up (1) and doing something like this. Pending
2. 01:17:823 (2,3) - Holy crap, this is uguu. ♥
3. 01:21:539 (2) - Add a finish to the beginning of this slider to follow the pattern of finishes that you had going on previously, silly.
4. 01:54:460 (1,2,3) - Something about (3) here bugs me. I think it's the fact that it's linear and pointing straight down. I believe that something similar to this (this is an ugly sketch) would look a lot better. (remember to find a way to arrange the notes after it to follow the distance snap!) Pending
5. 02:17:557 (3) - Odd looking overlap between this circle and 02:18:619 (2). It's also pretty clustered. Done
6. 02:30:035 (4) - Shouldn't you add a whistle to the end of this slider? I believe that you are following the vocals in terms of whistles. Done
7. 02:57:115 (2,3) - Make it so that these blanket eachother. Here's an example of what I mean. Doesn't that look super sexy? Done
8. 03:04:017 (6) - Weird overlap between this note and 03:05:079 (2).I was going for symmetry. Erased the unnecessary slider.

Normal

1. -1 AR suits this so much better due to the slow BPM and the fact that this is a calming song.
2. 00:37:203 (6) - Add a whistle to the beginning of this slider. It just seems.. fitting. Done
3. 00:41:451 (5) -nazi- Space this a bit farther apart from (4) according to the distance snap. Love this kind of nazi.
4. 02:43:309 (1,2) - Make these blanket eachother. Just like the example I put in Easy.
5. 02:51:274 (1) - Remove the finish from this spinner. You didn't do it in any other difficulties. Done
6. 03:02:955 (5) - Ctrl + R this. It feels more smooth and natural like that. Pending Nevermind, I think I like the original better (sorry).
7. 03:16:230 (6) - You forgot to add a finish to the beginning of this slider to follow the finish pattern. Done

Hard

1. Oh wow, jeez. Take -1 off of the HP drain or overall difficulty (or both, as I recommend)! This is a really calm song and there is no need for such high difficulty setting (especially on a Hard difficulty like this). Done
2. AR 8 is so undeserving. Really. Done
3. 00:25:256 (4) - You should add a whistle to the beginning of this slider in order to follow the whistle pattern you currently have going on. Done
4. 00:26:319 (1) - And you need to add a finish at the beginning of this slider to keep consistent with your pattern. Done
5. 00:30:301 (2) - Make it so that this slider and 00:31:628 (1) don't oddly overlap by curving (1) the other way. If you don't understand what I mean, here's an example. Done
6. 00:41:982 (3) - Move this up to be aligned with (1) to form a more intuitive triangle formation. NOPE!
7. 01:01:362 (1) - A whistle to the beginning of this slider sounds more fitting to the vocals. Done
8. 01:15:964 (1) - You really should make this a jump to avoid confusion with the previous jumps. Done but I don't know if it's that much better...
9. 02:39:858 (2,3) - Odd overlap. You should know what to do by now~. Pending
10. 02:55:787 (1) - Make this follow the jump pattern to avoid confusion. Don't quite understand.. Nevermind, it looks fine as is (sorry).

Good job, Lora. I'm proud of you.

I mean this:

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Also, you will need to properly change the name of your map so you don't get a duplicate. You'll also need a full update to update tags.

Elly-chan wrote:

call me back for a recheck when you get five or more mods; i want to be the one to bubble this

411662 wrote:

o-o... great song... >-<...

[Easy]
02:13:309 (1,2) - have you thought of adding another note in between these to fit more with the vocals? Done

[Normal]
02:25:787 (4,5,6,7,1) - try moving 6, and 1, both to y:68, to match 4, and 7 to y:31 to match with 5, ♥♥♥
03:08:531 (4) - y:344 to make the decline steady through out that combo o-o Already at y:344?

[Hard]
00:52:070 (5) - try moving to x:447, y:204, o-o I can't make it 447, but I see where you're going with this. Done~
01:24:062 (2) - try moving that to x:224 y:243 so the jump distance is equal in that combo Done.
02:45:433 (1,2) - try curving 1 a bit more, to fit with 2, Done, had to duplicate 2 and reposition 5.

Elly-chan wrote:

call me back for a recheck when you get five or more mods; i want to be the one to bubble this

Pereira006 wrote:

Request by elly-chan anyway

hello~~

Imo -> my opinion

[easy]

00:31:628 (5) - I feel this need new combo because the lyrics change Done
00:33:752 (1) - grid 1 up? to make symentric with 00:35:345 (2) the start slider Done
00:41:185 (1) - remove new combo and at 00:42:247 (8) - put new combo is better imo Done
00:42:247 (3,4) - IMO this is not perfect follow lyrics try this http://puu.sh/w18V just change so is better follow lyrics if you fix this you need remap this part also carefully hitsound Pending I think it's fine. (sorry)
02:26:318 (1,2,3) - IMO same happened 00:42:247 (3,4) like this http://puu.sh/w1hB Pending Same as above. (sorry)

stuff cool

[Normal]

IMO the hp look is hard for this normal if better is -1HP Done

02:19:416 (1) - Can you use same timing green Easy at 02:19:416 (1) ? because song score is high for this nice song Thank you!

ho god very good,stuff armazing
[hard]

ho god pro mapping,the gameplay look good for me ♥
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that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
good luck and bye bye