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ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone

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eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd

OSUtoto wrote:

[Hard] - Done (By [EGGPAIN]Ar3sgice)
._.

AR9可以接受，OD9微高，虽然我是打不出什么区别，但是100应该会增多很多，而且听说好像AR+OD=18是UNRANK的？

L难度前面还好，节奏下的和我感觉也差不多【趴】就是KIAI都是长slider感觉不够爽，有些地方排列有点乱……说不定是这个曲子本身就比较难做._.

No kd

qq944364487 wrote:

有歌词吗？
给我一份
lyrics
Mami Mami Zone

[原曲：佐渡の二ッ岩/東方神霊廟]
Vocal, Lyrics - 野宮あゆみ
Arrange - REDALiCE

踊れそれ騒げ 今宵の月は美しい
遥か向こう側 懐かしく広がる
歌えほれ叫べ こんなに愉快な時には
思い出してみよう 皆(みな)の面影

郷(さと)の風は冷たくて
花は咲き乱れ
眼鏡越しの景色は見事だった

えいやっさ えいやっさ 帰ろう
えいやっさ えいやっさ 海越え
えいやっさ えいやっさ そんじゃあ
化かし笑い転げてやるか
えいやっさ えいやっさ 封印
えいやっさ えいやっさ まだまだ
えいやっさ えいやっさ お困り？
そんなら希望を聞こうじゃないか

遊べやれ走れ やっぱり此処は美しい
夜にこだまする 鳥の声惑わす
集えどれ喋れ こんなに愉快な時には
目をつむっていよう 過去の足跡

街の星は見えなくて
花は朽ち枯れて
眼鏡越しの景色は悲しかった

えいやっさ えいやっさ 帰ろう
えいやっさ えいやっさ 海越え
えいやっさ えいやっさ そんじゃあ
化かし笑い転げてやるか
えいやっさ えいやっさ スパーク
えいやっさ えいやっさ まだまだ
えいやっさ えいやっさ お困り？
そんなら希望を聞こうじゃないか

郷(さと)の風は冷たくて
花は咲き乱れ
眼鏡越しの景色は見事だった

えいやっさ えいやっさ 帰ろう
えいやっさ えいやっさ 海越え
えいやっさ えいやっさ そんじゃあ
化かし笑い転げてやるか
えいやっさ えいやっさ 封印
えいやっさ えいやっさ まだまだ
えいやっさ えいやっさ お困り？
そんなら希望を聞こうじゃないか
灯のある場所へ 行こうじゃないか
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
求时间 不会日文的说
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
还有 要闪屏吗
如果有taiko谱给我说一声
raririn那个家伙不早告诉我
害得我又改的…………
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
Ar3sgice's Hard
01:29:653加个绿线吧 audio改为s：c1可能更好
02:08:843 两个滑条接的有些快 把第一个滑条改为两个note吧
滑条声改掉 不然1.5吧 拖拖拉拉的好难受
OD7
Normal好像有点跳
不太适合新手吧…………
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar
>eikkaleyd
AR+OD=18就unrank吗，那么就AR-1吧(……
某些人觉得跳图很爽，某些人觉得连打图很爽
这节奏在我做过的图中算是比较容易做的了，而且混乱的排列才是我的最初的风格

>qq944364487
应该没有taiko的谱
闪屏可以的话就弄吧
Normal那简单到完全是拿来凑3星以下难度的


lyrics
Mami Mami Zone

[原曲：佐渡の二ッ岩/東方神霊廟]
Vocal, Lyrics - 野宮あゆみ
Arrange - REDALiCE

00:23:063 踊れそれ騒げ 00:25:491 今宵の月は美しい
00:28:612 遥か向こう側 00:31:040 懐かしく広がる
00:34:161 歌えほれ叫べ 00:36:589 こんなに愉快な時には
00:39:710 思い出してみよう 00:41:965 皆(みな)の面影

00:45:260 郷(さと)の風は00:46:647 冷たくて
00:48:034 花は咲き00:49:421 乱れ
00:50:809 眼鏡越しの景色は 00:54:971見事だった

00:57:745 えいやっさ えいやっさ 00:59:306 帰ろう
01:00:520 えいやっさ えいやっさ 01:01:907 海越え
01:03:294 えいやっさ えいやっさ 01:04:855 そんじゃあ
01:06:069 化かし笑い01:07:456転げてやるか
01:08:843 えいやっさ えいやっさ 01:10:404封印
01:11:618 えいやっさ えいやっさ 01:13:005 まだまだ
01:14:393 えいやっさ えいやっさ 01:15:953 お困り？
01:17:167 そんなら希望を01:18:554 聞こうじゃないか

有点事情要做，先到这._.

遊べやれ走れ やっぱり此処は美しい
夜にこだまする 鳥の声惑わす
集えどれ喋れ こんなに愉快な時には
目をつむっていよう 過去の足跡

街の星は見えなくて
花は朽ち枯れて
眼鏡越しの景色は悲しかった

えいやっさ えいやっさ 帰ろう
えいやっさ えいやっさ 海越え
えいやっさ えいやっさ そんじゃあ
化かし笑い転げてやるか
えいやっさ えいやっさ スパーク
えいやっさ えいやっさ まだまだ
えいやっさ えいやっさ お困り？
そんなら希望を聞こうじゃないか

郷(さと)の風は冷たくて
花は咲き乱れ
眼鏡越しの景色は見事だった

えいやっさ えいやっさ 帰ろう
えいやっさ えいやっさ 海越え
えいやっさ えいやっさ そんじゃあ
化かし笑い転げてやるか
えいやっさ えいやっさ 封印
えいやっさ えいやっさ まだまだ
えいやっさ えいやっさ お困り？
そんなら希望を聞こうじゃないか
灯のある場所へ 行こうじゃないか
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
ar+od=18不可能unrank吧

绿线s:c1貌似确实好点lol 那个滑条还好吧

话说为什么觉得0108那个版本好送分
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
  1. Ar3sgice's Hard
AR7 吧 ;)
希望修改
00:45:433 -

改为

00:49:855 -

改为

好看一些
00:53:410 -
这的长拖可以加一个往返
会好听一些
像这样↓↓↓

01:07:976 (9) -

觉得挨在一起会好点
01:08:843 -

不用我说了吧
01:35:202 - 加一个newcombo
02:27:051 -
跳到8的距离有点大吧

03:03:988 -

排版换一下
先这样吧 明天再说
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
改了一些

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (OSUtoto) [Ar3sgice's Hard].osu
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
nomal坏了，重传一次吧
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar
我硬盘坏了233，我也没normal了
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
QAQ，我求个eazy或者nomal做一下吧，纯新手。如果做出来图不行的话就算了。
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

angelfix wrote:

QAQ，我求个eazy或者nomal做一下吧，纯新手。如果做出来图不行的话就算了。
好，欢迎@w@
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
突然发现nomal档可以修复，下载之后把lunatic 以nomal为名字当做新难度保存的话然后再按一下歌曲左边的update to lastest version就行了。
我才不说我是自己做完图之后按了一下然后才发现的QAQ
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

angelfix wrote:

突然发现nomal档可以修复，下载之后把lunatic 以nomal为名字当做新难度保存的话然后再按一下歌曲左边的update to lastest version就行了。
我才不说我是自己做完图之后按了一下然后才发现的QAQ

那么你的图的……233

还要做吗，2个normal也行的
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders

OSUtoto wrote:

angelfix wrote:

突然发现nomal档可以修复，下载之后把lunatic 以nomal为名字当做新难度保存的话然后再按一下歌曲左边的update to lastest version就行了。
我才不说我是自己做完图之后按了一下然后才发现的QAQ

那么你的图的……233

还要做吗，2个normal也行的
不了，重新排一遍太麻烦了， :)
我看了一下自己做的也没有原版好。
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

angelfix wrote:

不了，重新排一遍太麻烦了， :)
我看了一下自己做的也没有原版好。
嗯0.0
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


您好 :)

[General]

bg wtf.jpg 的大小是 1023x768 ，換成1024x768
Kiai 不一致

[Ar3sgice's Hard]

Lead-in 調到0，這個圖沒需要Lead-in
00:00:967 - unsnap inherited point
00:52:716 (1,1) - 這樣放會看成1/1 beat........放遠一點
嘛，這個難度就是很多3/4沒有良好的排版，很容易看成1/1，例如 00:31:387 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12)；嘗試改善它們

[Lunatic]

調到OD7.......OD8的話有2012，OD9印象中沒這種rankmap，就算有都是老圖
00:45:260 - 有兩條重疊的綠線，刪除其中一條
00:45:433 - Useless inherited point
01:53:236 - 有兩條重疊的綠線，刪除其中一條

就這樣吧
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

ertyukjh010 wrote:



您好 :)

[General]

bg wtf.jpg 的大小是 1023x768 ，換成1024x768
Kiai 不一致 这个……等AR3回来改吧233

[Lunatic]

調到OD7.......OD8的話有2012，OD9印象中沒這種rankmap，就算有都是老圖 改为8了
00:45:260 - 有兩條重疊的綠線，刪除其中一條
00:45:433 - Useless inherited point 还是有用的233
01:53:236 - 有兩條重疊的綠線，刪除其中一條
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General
Normal难度忘了写tag


[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:52:196 (3,1,2) - 建议别叠 把12拿出去把 读着更舒服些

Hitsound
03:20:115 (2) - 结尾whistle故意加的？我感觉一个finish就足够了


[Ar3sgice's Hard]
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:32:774 (10,11,12) - 前面的1/3snap跟兰红线很好 但是结尾这vocal已经结束了 还用一样拍子很奇怪 我建议直接拉一个slider 或者砍了11和12


Hitsound
00:27:225 (4) - 这里的音乐突然停了一下 相应的我觉得clap也可以删掉
00:38:670 (10) - ^(后面类似的不提了 只是建议一种方法
00:50:462 (3) - 这里这个clap很单只 感觉略突兀了 建议在之前的slider跟前面似的加whistle就好 不太需要这个clap在最后
02:21:329 (6) - 这种clap感觉也不太需要 也只是建议 4个重音如果是我的话 就在第一个和第三个放finish就好


[Lunatic]
Hitsound
00:45:260 (1) - 这种段落我觉得加点whsitle会更好 不过都是个人喜好了（后面同
00:57:051 (4) - slider尾加个clap过度满不错的
02:05:028 (4) - ^
02:54:971 (4) - ^


大概就这些
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
嗯

clap基本都改了, 毕竟是用24clap_tool做的没考虑那么多

3/4拍我觉得还好吧。。六边形那个地方有背景drum。

kiai什么的有不同么/.\ 有的话改成一样好了

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (OSUtoto) [Ar3sgice's Hard].osu
Hitomi May
362 posts
Joined September 2009
Hitomi May
Hi

[Normal]
00:26:358 (2) - add
00:27:745 (5) - add
00:45:260 (1) - maybe you can add some whistles in this slow part?
00:57:051 (2) - it's looks badly == Try to move in another place
SPOILER
01:17:167 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing
01:53:237 (1) - whistles in this part?
02:40:057 (4) - add
02:54:971 (4) - hard to see this circle :(

[Lunatic]
Why lunatic easier then Hard? :P
00:33:641 (1,2,3) - too large jumps, but maybe only for me
00:45:260 (1) - whistles
This diff full of silly jumps ==

[Hard]
00:23:063 (4) - nc
00:24:797 (1) - delete nc
00:28:612 (4) - nc
00:30:346 (1) - delete nc..
00:43:872 (8) - add circle with finish
01:07:630 (8) - delete 1 repeat
01:31:040 (7) - nc
01:51:676 (8) - add circle
03:20:635 (1) - hey, move to 03:20:375

Good luck)
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

Hitomi May wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
00:26:358 (2) - add this makes the diff more than 3 stars
00:27:745 (5) - add ^
00:45:260 (1) - maybe you can add some whistles in this slow part? I dont want to do that
00:57:051 (2) - it's looks badly == Try to move in another place
SPOILER
01:17:167 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing YES,its 0.5DS
01:53:237 (1) - whistles in this part? NO
02:40:057 (4) - add it make the diff more than 3 stars
02:54:971 (4) - hard to see this circle :(

[Lunatic]
Why lunatic easier then Hard? :P
00:33:641 (1,2,3) - too large jumps, but maybe only for me :arrow: I dont think
00:45:260 (1) - whistles :arrow: hmm.i dont like
This diff full of silly jumps == :arrow: :( This is art

Good luck)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Changed "remove 1 reverse arrow"

Why lunatic easier then Hard? ahahahahaha
爆星爆的比hard还低啊233

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (OSUtoto) [Ar3sgice's Hard].osu
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Changed "remove 1 reverse arrow"

Why lunatic easier then Hard? ahahahahaha
爆星爆的比hard还低啊233
我也不想，但无法抗力233
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Normal]

Kiai在03:22:023结束

[Ar3's Hard]

00:49:421 (1,2) - 略难看啊，调整下形状？
00:57:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:03:294 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考虑整个Kiai都用一种节奏，或者两种有规律的变化
01:46:127 (7,8,9) - 这样？ http://puu.sh/sukq http://puu.sh/sujM
02:37:976 - 音乐里那么重的音空着，感觉不好
03:20:635 (1) - 在03:23:410结束？

[Lunatic]

改OD7可以不爆星
00:23:757 (5,6) - 因为后面三连所以交换这两个的位置？
00:39:190 (1) - 这spacing让人非常不爽
02:29:306 (1) - 02:40:231 (3) - 这段里面大量白线三连，考虑改红线或者折返滑条stream

That's all I can find. GL~
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Normal]

Kiai在03:22:023结束

[Lunatic]

改OD7可以不爆星 不爆星不性福
00:23:757 (5,6) - 因为后面三连所以交换这两个的位置？ NO
00:39:190 (1) - 这spacing让人非常不爽 各人有各人的看法
02:29:306 (1) - 02:40:231 (3) - 这段里面大量白线三连，考虑改红线或者折返滑条stream 白线三连怎么了._.

That's all I can find. GL~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

popner wrote:

[Ar3's Hard]

00:49:421 (1,2) - 略难看啊，调整下形状？ok
00:57:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:03:294 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考虑整个Kiai都用一种节奏，或者两种有规律的变化 那不是很单调
01:46:127 (7,8,9) - 这样？ http://puu.sh/sukq http://puu.sh/sujM no. 感觉这里pause的感觉好点。
02:37:976 - 音乐里那么重的音空着，感觉不好 这整段都是自己下的节奏, 没关系啦233
03:20:635 (1) - 在03:23:410结束？ 改了
Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (OSUtoto) [Ar3sgice's Hard].osu
eikkaleyd
624 posts
Joined July 2010
eikkaleyd

[General槽点]
你们这堆人全都是节奏变慢的B段和后面的吉他solo做的最好。
COLOUR有点瞎眼，试试这个【代码
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 14,190,53
Combo4 : 175,29,32
[Normal]
一看就是压星压得很累的样子lol虽然我知道你懒得这么做，其实SV降低就行了……
00:24:971 (3) - 又是这种红线系列slider._.感觉没有理由放这里，还是放白线上吧
00:35:895 (3) - ^
00:36:589 (1) - reverse不要
01:44:566 (1) - ^
02:39:017 (1) - 这一段改成，从这里开始转盘，直到02:41:791，然后02:43:179 (1) - 之前的Note都删掉
02:52:889 (1,2,3) - 换成没有reverse的长拖条不就好了._. 都被AI MOD检测出来了
03:20:635 (1) - 奇怪没转盘？._.
[Hard]
00:16:820 (8) - 没必要呢，普通的1/2节奏就行了
00:50:462 (3) - 这个clap真的有用吗
00:56:184 (6) - 和前面保持一致，把这个删了
01:31:040 (7) - NC
02:09:884 (5,6) - 两次reverse超奇怪，删一次
02:39:017 (6,7,1) - 改成三个没reverse的slider，1删掉
02:43:179 (1,2,3) - tsume的me是唱在蓝线上的哦，应该放个带反转的slider在这儿
[Lunatic]
A段clap下的真有趣ww
00:17:167 (2) - 这一组的sliders全都是对称放的这两个却是同向就像是一堆基佬中的BG一般不和谐
00:50:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样么 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/307996

就这样，看来你需要星
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

eikkaleyd wrote:

[attachment=0:46c84]e.jpg[/attachment:46c84]
[General槽点]
你们这堆人全都是节奏变慢的B段和后面的吉他solo做的最好。
COLOUR有点瞎眼，试试这个【代码
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 128,128,255
Combo3 : 14,190,53
Combo4 : 175,29,32
[Normal]
一看就是压星压得很累的样子lol虽然我知道你懒得这么做，其实SV降低就行了…… 没有太刻意压233
00:24:971 (3) - 又是这种红线系列slider._.感觉没有理由放这里，还是放白线上吧 这里0.0没跟曲子，和00:29:999 (2,3)等处相呼应233要改的话就应把00:24:450 (2)换成长滑条
00:35:895 (3) - ^ ^
00:36:589 (1) - reverse不要
01:44:566 (1) - ^
02:39:017 (1) - 这一段改成，从这里开始转盘，直到02:41:791，然后02:43:179 (1) - 之前的Note都删掉
02:52:889 (1,2,3) - 换成没有reverse的长拖条不就好了._. 都被AI MOD检测出来了 0.0
03:20:635 (1) - 奇怪没转盘？._. 压星233

[Lunatic]
A段clap下的真有趣ww 犯2而已
00:17:167 (2) - 这一组的sliders全都是对称放的这两个却是同向就像是一堆基佬中的BG一般不和谐 0.0
00:50:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样么 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/307996

就这样，看来你需要星 也没到欲求不满的程度233
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

eikkaleyd wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:820 (8) - 没必要呢，普通的1/2节奏就行了 这个...还是不改了...
00:50:462 (3) - 这个clap真的有用吗 24clap_tool的副产物233 fixed
00:56:184 (6) - 和前面保持一致，把这个删了 那样节奏很奇怪啊0.0
01:31:040 (7) - NC fixed
02:09:884 (5,6) - 两次reverse超奇怪，删一次 加强一下flow, 然后第二个slider2rev是因为不这样打起来很奇怪
02:39:017 (6,7,1) - 改成三个没reverse的slider，1删掉 改成两个slider加一个note了, 叠三个note是跟背景drum的
02:43:179 (1,2,3) - tsume的me是唱在蓝线上的哦，应该放个带反转的slider在这儿 fixed
thx~

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (OSUtoto) [Ar3sgice's Hard].osu
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

[normal]
最低难度我推荐CS用3，而且看起来更整洁
00:53:236 (1,2) - 这里为啥减spacing
01:17:167 (1,2,3) - 这和前面都一样的间隔，低难度减spacing不太好
其他没了

[ar3]
00:31:387 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 把3/4用slider连上更好读
00:53:236 (1,2) - 1和2的开头换成N然后把whistle拿掉
01:19:942 加个带finish的note
01:40:751 (6) - finish
02:09:884 (5,6) - 都是1/1的节奏你这么放很不舒服

[lunatic]
00:27:225 (3,4) - 略挑战极限。
01:08:323 (5) - 建议加个NC
03:06:242 (5) - ^
orz太鬼畜了
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[normal]
最低难度我推荐CS用3，而且看起来更整洁 嗯
00:53:236 (1,2) - 这里为啥减spacing 好
01:17:167 (1,2,3) - 这和前面都一样的间隔，低难度减spacing不太 好
其他没了 嗯，看也知道:3

[lunatic]
00:27:225 (3,4) - 略挑战极限。 滑条跳，很简单吧:3
01:08:323 (5) - 建议加个NC
03:06:242 (5) - ^
orz太鬼畜了 某2B：很爽快的刷分图
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. You forgot to add Tags in [Normal]

  • Normal
  1. Seems fine, but I'm not very confident with your New Combos. I suggest don't put new combos like on 01:52:716 (1). I can see there are a lot more combos in this diff and I think you can all find them yourself. As much as possible try not to overuse New combo. I suggest you let it reach until 4 or 5 or 6 before you start a new one.

  2. Bump your HP Drain +1.

  • Hard
  1. 00:43:872 - I believe you're missing a note here.

  2. 02:00:693 (1) - I think there's no need for a new combo here.

  • Lunatic
  1. Nothings wrong here too. Except those new combos again. At least try to put a new combo only on Long white ticks. Please?
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
\:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. Remove the .osb then full submit? Completely fine if you don't want to, though.
>Normal
  1. 03:20:115 (2) - I would make this a circle and begin the 03:20:635 (1) spinner on 03:20:288, but that's my opinion. You should consider this though.
>Ar3sgice's Hard
  1. 00:12:138 (5) - NC?
  2. 00:16:300 (6) - ^
  3. 00:19:075 (5) - ^
  4. 00:56:358 (7) - ^
  5. 00:59:306 (7) - ^
  6. 01:01:733 (4) - ^
  7. 01:04:855 (7) - ^
  8. 01:07:109 (5) - ^
  9. 01:10:404 (5) - ^
  10. 01:15:953 (5) - ^
  11. 01:18:554 (6) - ^ (To make the long story short, since I myself DO feel that these NC suggestions are retarded anyway, I think that there are so many places where NC should be placed, but most of them didn't have one. You may reject these suggestions, but I recommend you to do these things.)
  12. 01:30:520 (4) - Uh... I think you should unstack or NC this.
  13. 02:34:161 (7) - Repeat this once more?
>Lunatic
  1. This diff is pretty much unplayable with AR9 for me. Oddly enough, I don't see others whining at this, so it might be just me that suck, but anyway...
You know, this mapset is actually pretty good. Keep up the good job.

Good luck on the way 8-)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
GJ.

Download: ALiCE'S EMOTiON - Mami Mami Zone (OSUtoto) [Ar3sgice's Hard].osu
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
hi ~
from our queue.

[General]

Philippines wrote:

you forgot to add tags in normal
big difference between normal and lunatic.

[Normal]

00:22:543 (1) - use distance snap
00:54:971 (3) - replaced by 1/2 slider
02:01:213 (1,2) - 320, 264
02:02:948 (1) - replaced by 1/2 slider

[Lunatic]


00:19:942 (2) - stack with 00:18:901 (1)
00:36:242 (6) - 2nd point - 288, 124. 3rd - 240, 132
00:37:456 (1) - stack end with 00:36:069 (5)
00:37:803 (2) - stack with 00:36:242 (6)
01:10:057 (6) - 3rd - 44, 136

[Ar3sgice's Hard]

00:11:965 (4) - nc
00:16:127 (5) - ^
00:18:901 (4) - ^
00:23:063 (4) - ^
00:28:612 (4) - ^
00:31:387 (4) - ^
00:34:161 (4) - ^
00:38:323 (8) - ^
00:39:710 (4) - ^
00:45:260 (4) - ^
00:56:358 (7) - ^
01:01:907 (5) - ^
01:10:404 (5) - ^
01:13:005 (5) - ^
01:30:520 (4) - ^
01:36:589 (4) - ^
01:42:138 (4) - ^
01:47:687 (4) - ^
02:04:335 (7) - ^
02:20:982 (5) - ^
02:26:531 (3) - ^
02:59:826 (5) - ^
03:05:375 (7) - ^
03:10:924 (5) - ^

all fine for me. except nc.

nice map.
star and good luck.
716 Girl
716 Girl
Normal
00:14:393 (4) - add finish
00:16:127 (4) - ^
00:18:901 (2) - ^
00:26:705 (2) - remove to 00:26:531 (2) - and add repeat
00:51:502 (2,3) - overlap
02:20:289 (2) - make it like 02:19:595 (1) -
02:48:033 (2,2) - stack ends
02:52:022 (2,1) - overlap

Ar3 Hard
00:19:421 (6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/xrAJ
00:43:786 (1) - start spinner here
01:30:520 (1) - reNC
01:32:601 (1) - ^
01:33:468 (8) - NC
01:35:202 (1) - reNC

Lunatic
01:35:549 (5,1) - perfect stack
03:01:213 (1,6) - prefect stack
03:02:427 (6,1) - looks like overlap
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General
Lunatic
  1. 大跳微妙的有些不爽，中评
  2. 00:23:236 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个部分最好放置在屏幕上半部分，现在这样一方面是之前的点有遮挡影响读图，另一方面会使得画面上部太空荡了
  3. 00:28:786 (2,3) - 和00:27:572 (5) 的开头进行叠加
  4. 00:32:774 (4) - 因为用了变速最好用下NC。另外要让滑调的S形更明显可以在中间再加一个锚点，像这样：http://puu.sh/xFa2
  5. 00:33:641 (1,2,3) - 我找不出2、3之间这么大间距的理由，这里保持间距一致比较好
  6. 00:54:797 (1,2,3) - 以为和之前的点有了1/1beat的间距，这里在玩的时候会很难看。将这三个元件错开一点距离做成flow，像这样：http://puu.sh/xFbC
  7. 01:36:762 (2,3) - 这种坑爹的梗会招人黑的orz
  8. 01:40:751 (4) - 同00:32:774 (4)
  9. 最后那个逐次拉开间距的梗不错 好评
Hard
  1. 00:11:965 (4) - NC
  2. 00:16:127 (5) - ^
  3. 00:31:387 (4) - ^
  4. 00:34:161 (4) - ^
  5. 00:39:710 (4) - ^
  6. 00:45:260 (4) - ^
  7. 02:52:890 (1,2,3) - 做个角度逐渐变化的梗？
Normal
  1. 代码最好修正一下
    SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
  2. 01:19:421 (4,1) - 低难度中不要用滑条末尾的叠加
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

:!:default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General
Lunatic
  1. 大跳微妙的有些不爽，中评
  2. 00:23:236 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个部分最好放置在屏幕上半部分，现在这样一方面是之前的点有遮挡影响读图，另一方面会使得画面上部太空荡了
  3. 00:28:786 (2,3) - 和00:27:572 (5) 的开头进行叠加 改边了(5)的位置，叠不了233
  4. 00:32:774 (4) - 因为用了变速最好用下NC。另外要让滑调的S形更明显可以在中间再加一个锚点，像这样：http://puu.sh/xFa2 不要
  5. 00:33:641 (1,2,3) - 我找不出2、3之间这么大间距的理由，这里保持间距一致比较好
  6. 00:54:797 (1,2,3) - 以为和之前的点有了1/1beat的间距，这里在玩的时候会很难看。将这三个元件错开一点距离做成flow，像这样：http://puu.sh/xFbC 这里，每个人读图能力不同
  7. 01:36:762 (2,3) - 这种坑爹的梗会招人黑的orz 爽爆了
  8. 01:40:751 (4) - 同00:32:774 (4) 同上
  9. 最后那个逐次拉开间距的梗不错 好评
Normal
  1. 代码最好修正一下
    SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
  2. 01:19:421 (4,1) - 低难度中不要用滑条末尾的叠加
RL_Tibbar
303 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
RL_Tibbar

3er123 wrote:

Normal
00:14:393 (4) - add finish
00:16:127 (4) - ^
00:18:901 (2) - ^
00:26:705 (2) - remove to 00:26:531 (2) - and add repeat NO
00:51:502 (2,3) - overlap i dont think
02:20:289 (2) - make it like 02:19:595 (1) -
02:48:033 (2,2) - stack ends
02:52:022 (2,1) - overlap



Lunatic
01:35:549 (5,1) - perfect stack
03:01:213 (1,6) - prefect stack
03:02:427 (6,1) - looks like overlap
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