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Aiuchi Rina - I can't stop my love for you (TV Size)

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Aldwych
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 5 mai 2013 at 15:12:28

Artist: Aiuchi Rina
Title: I can't stop my love for you (TV Size)
Source: Meitantei Conan
Tags: Homura60 Opening Detective Case Closed
BPM: 142,86
Filesize: 4813kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Homura60's Hard (4,73 stars, 179 notes)
  2. Insane (4,97 stars, 232 notes)
  3. Normal (2,95 stars, 104 notes)
Download: Aiuchi Rina - I can't stop my love for you (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap.
Normal
Hard by Homura60
Insane
- If you had dowload it before 10/09/2012. Dowload it again please.
Homu_VT
I've mapped a Hard Beatmap for you :)
I hope you like it :)
Cherry Blossom
I was bored today so i decided to mod that map.
Just suggestions.

Insane :

Lead in : 1.5 s

00:20:993 : add NC
00:44:506 : add NC
00:46:186 : add NC
00:52:064 : (slider) add whistle
00:52:484 : add finish
00:56:682 : add NC
00:57:522 : add a circle with finish and the spinner should start at 00:57:732
01:06:696 : add NC
01:17:256 : add a circle.
01:17:886 : add NC
01:21:455 : add NC
01:25:444 : move NC to 01:26:284
01:32:532 : add NC
01:35:101 : red NC should start here, and add a clap.
01:39:090 - 01:39:300 add 2 circles or a slider and move the spinner at 01:39:510

Problems to fix

00:28:971 : 2 sliders ?
01:15:157 : same problem ^
01:10:118 : select the slider and do Ctrl+r to reverse.


Sorry for my poor english.
Topic Starter
Aldwych

PCBlossom wrote:

I was bored today so i decided to mod that map.
Just suggestions.

Insane :

Lead in : 1.5 s Done!

00:20:993 : add NC Done!
00:44:506 : add NC Why?
00:46:186 : add NC Done!
00:52:064 : (slider) add whistle Done!
00:52:484 : add finish Done!
00:56:682 : add NC Done!
00:57:522 : add a circle with finish and the spinner should start at 00:57:732 Done!
01:06:696 : add NC Not same timing, if it's not at 1:06:550 : Why? If i'ts 1:06:550Done!
01:17:256 : add a circle. Done!
01:17:886 : add NC Done!
01:21:455 : add NC Done!
01:25:444 : move NC to 01:26:284 Done!
01:32:532 : add NC Done! (It's at 01:31:532)
01:35:101 : red NC should start here, and add a clap. Done!
01:39:090 - 01:39:300 add 2 circles or a slider and move the spinner at 01:39:510 Done! (Slider)

Problems to fix

00:28:971 : 2 sliders ? Yes, I moved the second one
01:15:157 : same problem ^ Same!
01:10:118 : select the slider and do Ctrl+r to reverse. That's better!


Sorry for my poor english.
Tu pouvais me le dire en français! =P

Merci de ton aide. :)
Fight69
Ne donne pas des kudosus lorsqu'on te fait une guest diff :<
Donnes-en uniquement lorsqu'on mod ta map

Au passage, change le nom de la diff "Tomtom60's Hard" en "Homura60's Hard"
D'ailleurs on voit pas le background sur sa diff, y a un truc qui cloche, essaie de fixer ça :o

Supprime "(TV Size)" de "Source". (tu peut le mettre dans les tags si tu veut, mais sans les parenthèses.)
Supprime aussi "Meitantei Conan" des tags, c'est déjà dans "Source" donc pas la peine de l'ajouter une seconde fois.
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Re fight.
Ne donne pas des kudosus lorsqu'on te fait une guest diff :<
Donnes-en uniquement lorsqu'on mod ta map
En fait, parcourant parfois les beatmaps en progrès j'avais vu cas similaire. Donc je me suis dit, il faut ptet en donner qui sait. Mais promis je ferais plus cette erreur :'<.

D'ailleurs on voit pas le background sur sa diff, y a un truc qui cloche, essaie de fixer ça :o
Curieusement je la voit, je vais voir si ça va changer en la supprimant et en la re-metteant.

Supprime "(TV Size)" de "Source". (tu peut le mettre dans les tags si tu veut, mais sans les parenthèses.)
Supprime aussi "Meitantei Conan" des tags, c'est déjà dans "Source" donc pas la peine de l'ajouter une seconde fois.
Fait!

Merci de m'avoir aidé un peu. ^^
Fight69
J'ai aussi fait la même erreur auparavant avec les kudos, je m'était fait lyncher par un BAT lol
Essaye plutôt un Full Submit pour le background, ça devrait marcher
Chewin
[General]
Remove TV size in the tags and add it in the title if the song is a TV Size.
Read this topic before to edit the title and submit: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Add Opening, Detective Conan and Homura60 in tags
Use a BG 1024x768, I resized it for you : http://i46.tinypic.com/rjh8c2.jpg

[Normal]
00:23:512 (3) - Reduce it and add a circle at 00:24:562:

00:27:291 Why haven't you mapped here? Please, map this part and remove break
00:38:418 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:048 (3) - Add new combo here
00:40:517 (4) - This slider touches the HP bar. Move it elsewhere
00:52:904 (3) - New combo for consistency
00:54:163 (6) - New combo
00:57:522 (1) - Extendo this slider till white long tick 00:59:201
00:59:411 Map this break
01:12:638 (1) - Add a finish
01:20:615 (3) - The same of point 1 I wrote above
01:24:394 Again.. map this break
01:36:151 (4) - New combo, and almost touches hp bar, move it elsewhere

[Homura60's Hard]
00:27:291 Map this and other breaks please. I won't write it anymore lol
00:32:330 (5) - Add new combo
01:39:510 (1) - Remove clap

[Insane]
00:17:424 (6) - Move this slider elsewhere. This overlapped slider with the previous one is unrankable and unreadable
00:23:932 (6) - Add clap
00:25:192 (3) - Remove clap
00:28:341 (1) - Remove new combo
00:28:971 (4) - Add new combo and start this slider with a finish
01:12:638 (1) - Remove whistle and use a finish
01:25:864 (4) - Add finish at the end of this slider
01:39:510 (1) - Remove whistle

That's all, good luck :3
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello chewin

Chewin wrote:

[General]
Remove TV size in the tags and add it in the title if the song is a TV Size. Done
Read this topic before to edit the title and submit: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443
Add Opening, Detective Conan and Homura60 in tags Ok for Opening and Homura60 but DC is in the source, so why add it?
Use a BG 1024x768, I resized it for you : http://i46.tinypic.com/rjh8c2.jpg Thanks

[Normal]
00:23:512 (3) - Reduce it and add a circle at 00:24:562:

00:27:291 Why haven't you mapped here? Please, map this part and remove break Ok ok for all! x)
00:38:418 (1) - Remove new combo Done Done
00:39:048 (3) - Add new combo here Done
00:40:517 (4) - This slider touches the HP bar. Move it elsewhere Rotate
00:52:904 (3) - New combo for consistency Done
00:54:163 (6) - New combo Done
00:57:522 (1) - Extendo this slider till white long tick 00:59:201 Done
00:59:411 Map this break
01:12:638 (1) - Add a finish Done
01:20:615 (3) - The same of point 1 I wrote above Done
01:24:394 Again.. map this break
01:36:151 (4) - New combo, and almost touches hp bar, move it elsewhere Fixed

[Homura60's Hard]
00:27:291 Map this and other breaks please. I won't write it anymore lol
00:32:330 (5) - Add new combo Done
01:39:510 (1) - Remove clap Was a problem, change into whistle

[Insane]
00:17:424 (6) - Move this slider elsewhere. This overlapped slider with the previous one is unrankable and unreadable Fixed
00:23:932 (6) - Add clap Done
00:25:192 (3) - Remove clap Done
00:28:341 (1) - Remove new combo Done
00:28:971 (4) - Add new combo and start this slider with a finish Done
01:12:638 (1) - Remove whistle and use a finish Done
01:25:864 (4) - Add finish at the end of this slider Done
01:39:510 (1) - Remove whistle Done

That's all, good luck :3
Thanks! <3
Chewin

Aldwych wrote:

Hello chewin

Chewin wrote:

[General]
Add Opening, Detective Conan and Homura60 in tags Ok for Opening and Homura60 but DC is in the source, so why add it?
Thanks! <3
Oh you are right, sorry x)
Flower
iroseka's modding from tha queue
General: Song volume too low. Use some editor to increase the volume.
You should have a diff below difficulty 3 (a bit higher is ok), and the Normal is 3.23, which is a bit too hard.
Kiai time must start and close on white lines
Besides, all of your diffs must have same kiai time (but timing points may be different).

[Normal]
can kiai all timing sections of refrains.
00:35:619 (1) - Unsnapped
00:39:048 (1) - The position and angle is not so awesome. Ctrl+. then DS?
00:44:716 (2) - Could be removed
01:05:500 (1) - DS
01:12:008 (5) - Could be removed


[Hard]
The first 15 second is not a rap. I recommend you remove those notes.
01:16:837 (3) - Unsnapped

[Insane]
The first 15 send is lazy... also remove

[Others]
I promise to recheck you when you fix the red colored problems (sorry for no other suggestion because I can hardly hear the song). PM me and if I am online, I will come again.
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello iroseka

I saw your mod, thanks to help me!
For instance i had problem with my computer, and i will change my map soon, maybe in the evening (of france! x) ).
RikiH_
Hi from my queue o/
Sorry for my bad english :°

General

All diffs must have the same Kiai Time. Normal doesn't have the same kiai of other diffs.
Set a preview point!

Normal

00:55:003 (2) - I don't like this slider's shape. Change it (Just a suggestion)
01:32:792 (1) - ^

There should be at least one difficulty around ~2.5/3 star difficulty level. This diff is 3.23, so you have 2 chances:

Map an easy or make the Star Rating 3!

Homura60's Hard

00:49:335 (7) - End this slider at 00:49:440
01:07:389 (5) - Repeat this slider
01:16:836 (7) - This slider has a strange shape. Make it symmetric

Insane

00:16:794 (4) - Make this slider symmetric
00:17:424 (6) - ^
00:24:142 (7) - End slider at x:276 y:120
00:37:368 (7) - x:216 y:348
00:54:163 (2,3) - I don't like these 2 sliders' shape. Change them please (Just a suggestion)

I hope I'm helpful, I can't stop my love for this song.
If you want check out my map t/87094

Byee ~
HelloSCV
Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
General

Combo Colours Inconsistency in combo colours
Homura60's Hard
Combo1 : 149,55,162
Combo2 : 21,96,234
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 255,74,74
Insane
Combo1 : 72,43,30
Combo2 : 21,96,234
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 255,72,72
Normal
Combo1 : 72,43,30
Combo2 : 21,96,234
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 255,74,74

You have 5 osb. Files delete it plz

Add Preview Point

Normal
00:39:048 (1) - reduce slider's length 00:39:888 on this time
01:36:151 (1) - ^ 01:36:990


Homura60's Hard
00:22:253 (1) - add finish
00:35:689 (1) - add finish in front of slider
00:39:048 (3) - ^
00:41:567 (5) - how about increase slider's length to 00:41:987 here?
00:59:202 (1) - add finish in front of slider
01:10:118 (5) - NC ( Changing slider's speed )
01:11:588 (6) - ^
01:26:074 (1) - add finish
01:39:510 (1) - remove finish?


Insane
01:08:439 (6) - you purpose to make straight pattern? then fix it
01:10:118 (5) - NC ( Changing slider's speed )
01:11:588 (6) - ^
01:29:433 (5) - NC

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Ok, I take all your mods now.

iroseka wrote:

[box=iroseka's modding from tha queue]General: Song volume too low. Use some editor to increase the volume. Ok, i will fix it soon.
You should have a diff below difficulty 3 (a bit higher is ok), and the Normal is 3.23, which is a bit too hard. Some music had 2 Diff and they have hard and insane diff like The Veronicas, Untouched. or S-C-U - yellow head joe for example.
Kiai time must start and close on white lines You have right, i will fix all.
Besides, all of your diffs must have same kiai time (but timing points may be different). Same


[Normal]
can kiai all timing sections of refrains.
00:35:619 (1) - Unsnapped Slider was in a blue tick, but that's fix now.
00:39:048 (1) - The position and angle is not so awesome. Ctrl+. then DS? That's better! But what is DS?
00:44:716 (2) - Could be removed Huh? Why?
01:05:500 (1) - DS Same that the second one
01:12:008 (5) - Could be removed I want to delete all break time or hp draining useless.


[Hard]
The first 15 second is not a rap. I recommend you remove those notes. I will see if a MAT or BAT want it too, sorry
01:16:837 (3) - Unsnapped I don't know what circle or slider you mean, in this section all are snap, and a 01:16:836 , it's number (7) and it's snap.

[Insane]
The first 15 send is lazy... also remove Same like hard.

[Others]
I promise to recheck you when you fix the red colored problems (sorry for no other suggestion because I can hardly hear the song). PM me and if I am online, I will come again.No problem! :)/[box]
You had interesting suggestions, some had good ideas. Thanks for mod!

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/
Sorry for my bad english :°

General

All diffs must have the same Kiai Time. Normal doesn't have the same kiai of other diffs. Iroseka said it too, so all will be fix soon with kiaï time.
Set a preview point! It's for Kiaï time? Or i don't understand what did you mean.

Normal

00:55:003 (2) - I don't like this slider's shape. Change it (Just a suggestion) That's better!
01:32:792 (1) - ^ Fix, and I change all aroud it.

There should be at least one difficulty around ~2.5/3 star difficulty level. This diff is 3.23, so you have 2 chances:

Map an easy or make the Star Rating 3! So you are the second one to say it. And i will choose the number 2!

Homura60's Hard

00:49:335 (7) - End this slider at 00:49:440 I don't change the slider, even if i must follow the lyrics.
01:07:389 (5) - Repeat this slider What? I don't understand.
01:16:836 (7) - This slider has a strange shape. Make it symmetric I don't know if i fix it, but i will say yes.

Insane

00:16:794 (4) - Make this slider symmetric Done.
00:17:424 (6) - ^ Done.
00:24:142 (7) - End slider at x:276 y:120 Done.
00:37:368 (7) - x:216 y:348 Done.
00:54:163 (2,3) - I don't like these 2 sliders' shape. Change them please (Just a suggestion) You think it? Me too!

I hope I'm helpful, I can't stop my love for this song. Haha! :D You are!
If you want check out my map t/87094 I will see it coming soon!

Byee ~
Bye nee!! :)

Edit : Ok HelloSCV fix or suggestions now.

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER
General

Combo Colours Inconsistency in combo colours You have right, it's fix now thaks to see it! :)
Homura60's Hard
Combo1 : 149,55,162
Combo2 : 21,96,234
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 255,74,74
Insane
Combo1 : 72,43,30
Combo2 : 21,96,234
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 255,72,72
Normal
Combo1 : 72,43,30
Combo2 : 21,96,234
Combo3 : 225,225,225
Combo4 : 255,74,74

You have 5 osb. Files delete it plz Ok

Add Preview Point i don't understand :S
Normal
00:39:048 (1) - reduce slider's length 00:39:888 on this time Fix
01:36:151 (1) - ^ 01:36:990 Fix


Homura60's Hard
00:22:253 (1) - add finish Done
00:35:689 (1) - add finish in front of slider Done
00:39:048 (3) - ^ Done
00:41:567 (5) - how about increase slider's length to 00:41:987 here? Done
00:59:202 (1) - add finish in front of sliderDone
01:10:118 (5) - NC ( Changing slider's speed ) That's important?
01:11:588 (6) - ^ Done
01:26:074 (1) - add finish Done
01:39:510 (1) - remove finish? No, with volume at 20% that's sounds good, will change if an other mod tell it!


Insane
01:08:439 (6) - you purpose to make straight pattern? then fix it i don't understand, but i think i know what do you mean.
01:10:118 (5) - NC ( Changing slider's speed ) That's important?
01:11:588 (6) - ^ Done
01:29:433 (5) - NC Done

Good luck :) Thanks! :)
Sorry for late!
Kokatsu
Hey there, as promised, my mod after some complications ;3

[General]
There are 5 .osb files. Since you don't use a Storyboard, you must delete all and full submit
Maximum bitrate for a .mp3 is 192kb, yours is 224kb, make sure you get it down to 192 (you need to check offset again after you did so)
Unused file "Spinner.png", delete and full submit
Audio Lead-in must be the same in all diffs (currently, they all got different lead-ins D:)
Preview time must be the same in all diffs
Countdown-offset should be the same in all diffs
No previewpoint in Normal and Insane, set one and make sure it's the same as in Hard
Remove "TV size" from the Tags, as it already is in the title
Add Detective to tags? (so you get map as result for search for detective conan?)
All diffs use Custom Hitsounds, but there are no Custom Hitsounds in the songfolder. Either add some or change all timingsections to "default" (I would recommend you to add two blank .wav files, which you can find here and name them "Soft-Sliderslide.wav" and "Normal-Sliderslide.wav", you should use custom hitsounds then. This will make all sliders silent, which sounds better IMO)

[Normal]
HP-1
You do not use breaks and it's a normal diff. Try to add some whereever you can~
00:43:561 - move timingsection to 00:43:666
00:49:755 - move timingsection to 00:49:335
01:40:559 - move timingsection to 01:40:769
If you add the blank sliderslide.wav's, you must erase these timingsections: 01:07:284 - 01:07:599
00:25:612 (1) - end at 00:27:291
00:35:269 (3) - remove finish, sounds better IMO
00:42:197 (1) - use either whistle or finish, both is meh :x
00:47:445 (6) - would remove finish
00:49:545 (3,6) - remove finish from both (3 is a must q__q)
00:53:743 (3) - finish q__q
00:57:522 (1,1) - sorry, but they are too close together (in time). Maybe remove the spinner? :x
01:06:340 (2) - hitsounds? now? so random? stick to one way of hitsounding please. (in other words: continue as you did b4 and only add these 4beat normal sections, remove all other hitsounds)

[Homura60's Hard]
I dislike the whole hitsounding you did there. Consider reworking it completely since it would take about 5mods to get it in the right direction. I won't mod hitsounds for this diff. (Maybe do something similar to Normal-diff?)
HP-1 OD-1
00:43:561 - this timingsecton needs to be at 00:43:666
01:40:664 - this timingsection needs to be at 01:40:769
00:39:048 (3) - looks a bit poor, try this one:
SPOILER

328,68,39048,2,0,B|408:68|440:96|440:192|408:220|252:224,1,337.49999128282,4|0

[Insane]
OD-1?
00:01:574 - this timingsection needs to be at 00:01:679
00:13:331 - this timingsection needs to be at 00:13:435
00:28:131 - remove? the vol.drop here doesn't make sense to me.
00:43:561 - this timingsection needs to be at 00:43:666
01:25:234 - remove? the vol.drop here doesn't make sense to me.
01:40:664 - this timingsection needs to be at 01:40:769
00:02:099 - 00:12:176 this part lacks hitsounds. If you don't want to add some, tune down vol. for that section.
00:15:535 (1) - remove whistle
00:20:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bit loud here, reduce vol.
00:25:402 (4) - remove whistle
00:33:170 (8,9) - they overlap, try to avoid it. In this case, maybe move the 2cnd sliderwaypoint to 248|360 to solve this problem?
00:47:445 (6) - remove finish? :x
00:50:804 (5) - ^
00:53:743 (6) - ^
00:56:263 (8) - remove finish, add whistle? fits better IMO
00:57:522 (5) - ^
00:58:992 - 01:03:400 maybe use whistle on ever white tick to make it more consistent?
01:00:881 (2) - :x I would say, move second waypoint to 360|192 but if you do so, you lose the connection with the prev. slider. Try to find a solution which satisfies you~
01:16:836 (5) - whoops, needs to be 3grids lower. adjust distance to following notes aswell.
01:19:146 (4) - remove finish
01:19:356 (1) - add finish
01:33:631 (4) - remove finish, add whistle?
01:35:101 (8,9) - (8) add clap (9) remove finish,clap, add whistle
01:37:620 (1) - guess the sliderstart needs the heavier normalsound. you should move the timingsection~
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello kokatsu!

Kokatsu wrote:

Hey there, as promised, my mod after some complications ;3

[General]
There are 5 .osb files. Since you don't use a Storyboard, you must delete all and full submit Are you sure that you dl my beatmap after 20/06? Maybe i'm wrong, but now it's fix
Maximum bitrate for a .mp3 is 192kb, yours is 224kb, make sure you get it down to 192 (you need to check offset again after you did so) How? I don't really understand
Unused file "Spinner.png", delete and full submit Done!
Audio Lead-in must be the same in all diffs (currently, they all got different lead-ins D:) Done!
Preview time must be the same in all diffs Done!
Countdown-offset should be the same in all diffs Done!
No previewpoint in Normal and Insane, set one and make sure it's the same as in Hard Done!
Remove "TV size" from the Tags, as it already is in the title Done!
Add Detective to tags? (so you get map as result for search for detective conan?) Yes, why not, for french players x)
All diffs use Custom Hitsounds, but there are no Custom Hitsounds in the songfolder. Either add some or change all timingsections to "default" (I would recommend you to add two blank .wav files, which you can find here and name them "Soft-Sliderslide.wav" and "Normal-Sliderslide.wav", you should use custom hitsounds then. This will make all sliders silent, which sounds better IMO) I will see, i will see. Thanks!

[Normal]
HP-1 Done!
You do not use breaks and it's a normal diff. Try to add some whereever you can~ Mahhh! Chewin didn't want break time, and you yes! :o Now, i wil change if a MAT/BAT say it.
00:43:561 - move timingsection to 00:43:666 Done!
00:49:755 - move timingsection to 00:49:335 Done!
01:40:559 - move timingsection to 01:40:769 Done!
If you add the blank sliderslide.wav's, you must erase these timingsections: 01:07:284 - 01:07:599 Fix!
00:25:612 (1) - end at 00:27:291 Done!
00:35:269 (3) - remove finish, sounds better IMO Yes
00:42:197 (1) - use either whistle or finish, both is meh :x Whistle
00:47:445 (6) - would remove finish Done!
00:49:545 (3,6) - remove finish from both (3 is a must q__q) Ja ja! ^^'
00:53:743 (3) - finish q__q I love finish! x)
00:57:522 (1,1) - sorry, but they are too close together (in time). Maybe remove the spinner? :x Reduce a little the spinner and longer slider
01:06:340 (2) - hitsounds? now? so random? stick to one way of hitsounding please. (in other words: continue as you did b4 and only add these 4beat normal sections, remove all other hitsounds) Like that?

[Homura60's Hard]
I dislike the whole hitsounding you did there. Consider reworking it completely since it would take about 5mods to get it in the right direction. I won't mod hitsounds for this diff. (Maybe do something similar to Normal-diff?) Yes of course!
HP-1 OD-1 Okay
00:43:561 - this timingsecton needs to be at 00:43:666 Done!
01:40:664 - this timingsection needs to be at 01:40:769 Done!
00:39:048 (3) - looks a bit poor, try this one:
SPOILER

328,68,39048,2,0,B|408:68|440:96|440:192|408:220|252:224,1,337.49999128282,4|0
That's pretty! Thank you very much!

[Insane]
OD-1?
00:01:574 - this timingsection needs to be at 00:01:679 Done!
00:13:331 - this timingsection needs to be at 00:13:435 Done!
00:28:131 - remove? the vol.drop here doesn't make sense to me. Whistle is only at the begining now and fix.
00:43:561 - this timingsection needs to be at 00:43:666 Done! But dont write 666 è_é
01:25:234 - remove? the vol.drop here doesn't make sense to me. Done!
01:40:664 - this timingsection needs to be at 01:40:769 Done!
00:02:099 - 00:12:176 this part lacks hitsounds. If you don't want to add some, tune down vol. for that section. What?
00:15:535 (1) - remove whistle Done!
00:20:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bit loud here, reduce vol. 40%
00:25:402 (4) - remove whistle Done!
00:33:170 (8,9) - they overlap, try to avoid it. In this case, maybe move the 2cnd sliderwaypoint to 248|360 to solve this problem? 256/356
00:47:445 (6) - remove finish? :x Done!
00:50:804 (5) - ^ Done!
00:53:743 (6) - ^ Done!
00:56:263 (8) - remove finish, add whistle? fits better IMO Better!
00:57:522 (5) - ^ ^
00:58:992 - 01:03:400 maybe use whistle on ever white tick to make it more consistent? Yes for the begining, but not arrived to 01:01:721 and then.
01:00:881 (2) - :x I would say, move second waypoint to 360|192 but if you do so, you lose the connection with the prev. slider. Try to find a solution which satisfies you~ Fix, but maybe not pretty!
01:16:836 (5) - whoops, needs to be 3grids lower. adjust distance to following notes aswell.Done!
01:19:146 (4) - remove finish Done!
01:19:356 (1) - add finish Done!
01:33:631 (4) - remove finish, add whistle? Remove finish add whistle
01:35:101 (8,9) - (8) add clap (9) remove finish,clap, add whistle Clap, remove finish clap,, Whistle
01:37:620 (1) - guess the sliderstart needs the heavier normalsound. you should move the timingsection~ I don't thnk so
.

Thank you very much! :D
Kokatsu

Aldwych wrote:

There are 5 .osb files. Since you don't use a Storyboard, you must delete all and full submit Are you sure that you dl my beatmap after 20/06? Maybe i'm wrong, but now it's fix I am. I re-dl't the beatmap b4 I modded it ;3

Maximum bitrate for a .mp3 is 192kb, yours is 224kb, make sure you get it down to 192 (you need to check offset again after you did so)
How? I don't really understand You can for example use audacity to crop the bitrate, therefore, just download Audacity here, open the .mp3 and save it as a .mp3 again. this will reduce the bitrate to 128, which is the minimum bitrate for a rankable .mp3 file. The offset might change if you do so, but since you have to, check it again afterwards~

00:02:099 - 00:12:176 this part lacks hitsounds. If you don't want to add some, tune down vol. for that section. What? Just reduce the vol. here, sounds better~
For the things you didn't understand I tried to express them more clearly.

No KDS for this post pls. <3
BCI
hi there
mod time via my queue

[General]
You're missing some skin elements: download template skin via osume! and place this elements to your map, or take this elements from another map, or make this myself. don't forget to full-sumbit~
pause-overlay.png must be 1024*768, yours - 1023*698 lol pleaze resize them.
on Insane diff kiai #3 end on 01:14:947 but in Normal and Hard it ends on 01:14:737 - plz fix this
rignt name is (TV Size) READ THIS BEFORE
[Normal]
00:24:982 (0) - add a 1/2 slider? (ends on white tick)
00:56:682 (0) - add a 1/1 slider? (ends on big white tick)
01:18:096 (0) - add a slider like this or this
01:22:295 (0) - add a note
01:24:814 (0) - http://puu.sh/ELDY

[Hard]
00:20:993 - 00:21:833 - map this. i guess you (this i see in normal also) don't map this because you map only vocal, but it's a very big break in the begin of map
00:25:192 (0) - circle?
00:39:048 (3) - so bad slider D: http://puu.sh/ELGH
00:40:517 (4) - this is a bad way. more then 1 repeat was too boring and easy. i suggest this => http://puu.sh/ELHz
00:41:567 (5) - plz end this on big white tick
00:56:682 (0) - add a 1/1 slider? (ends on big white tick)
01:18:096 (0) - add a slider like this or this

[Insane]
01:00:881 (2) - http://puu.sh/ELKC
01:14:527 (5) - end this on white tick, not on red

sorry for found nothing.
overall mapset is good, but you need to map more for learning more patterns.
good luck~
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello Black_Cherry_Ita, thanks for modding. :)

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

hi there
mod time via my queue

[General]
You're missing some skin elements: download template skin via osume! and place this elements to your map, or take this elements from another map, or make this myself. don't forget to full-sumbit~ It will take player's skin, so no need to give this files isn't it?
pause-overlay.png must be 1024*768, yours - 1023*698 lol pleaze resize them. Fixed
on Insane diff kiai #3 end on 01:14:947 but in Normal and Hard it ends on 01:14:737 - plz fix this Fixed for all diff
rignt name is (TV Size) READ THIS BEFORE Fixed
[Normal]
00:24:982 (0) - add a 1/2 slider? (ends on white tick) No, some people wanted that normal diff will be under 3 stars, it's nearly 3 stars, if i add sliders it will increase difficulty, sorry.
00:56:682 (0) - add a 1/1 slider? (ends on big white tick)
01:18:096 (0) - add a slider like this or this
01:22:295 (0) - add a note
01:24:814 (0) - http://puu.sh/ELDY

[Hard]
00:20:993 - 00:21:833 - map this. i guess you (this i see in normal also) don't map this because you map only vocal, but it's a very big break in the begin of map I accept with 3 circles.
00:25:192 (0) - circle? Yes with 1 slider and NC at 00:23:512
00:39:048 (3) - so bad slider D: http://puu.sh/ELGH Hard to create your slider but done.
00:40:517 (4) - this is a bad way. more then 1 repeat was too boring and easy. i suggest this => http://puu.sh/ELHz That's better thanks!
00:41:567 (5) - plz end this on big white tick Don't know why it was on blue tick but fixed.
00:56:682 (0) - add a 1/1 slider? (ends on big white tick) Done
01:18:096 (0) - add a slider like this or this I prefer 3 circles.

[Insane]
01:00:881 (2) - http://puu.sh/ELKC Done but not really like your slider of course.
01:14:527 (5) - end this on white tick, not on red Done

sorry for found nothing.
overall mapset is good, but you need to map more for learning more patterns. This is my first beatmap so that's a little normal. ;)
good luck~
Thanks to you! :D
meiikyuu


General

- kiai times seem kind of short o.o.. for example, the kiai starting at 01:12:638 - could extend to 01:24:184 -
(same for the first main verse) . just a suggestion though ><

Normal
00:24:562 - it fits the beat more if you add a note here
00:40:727 (3) - move middle point 1 grid to the left for a better blanket around 4
00:47:445 (6) - new combo
00:47:865 (1) - remove new combo
00:50:804 (7) - same situation as above, new combo here and then remove new combo on the next note/slider
01:04:240 (4) - move the 2nd point of the slider one grid up to form a neater blanket

Homura60's Hard
00:14:485 (1) - move 2nd slider point one grid up to make a perfect curve
00:15:535 (1) - add whistle?
00:55:843 (6) - new combo?
01:10:118 (5) - it might sound better if you end the slider with a finish sound


Insane
00:17:214 (5) - remove clap


good luck! ^^
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello meiikyu, thanks for modding!

meiikyuu wrote:



General

- kiai times seem kind of short o.o.. for example, the kiai starting at 01:12:638 - could extend to 01:24:184 -
(same for the first main verse) . just a suggestion though >< Why not, i will see if i do that.

Normal
00:24:562 - it fits the beat more if you add a note here I will just add this one and delete the next one, i don't want to increase my diff.
00:40:727 (3) - move middle point 1 grid to the left for a better blanket around 4 done
00:47:445 (6) - new combo Done
00:47:865 (1) - remove new combo Done
00:50:804 (7) - same situation as above, new combo here and then remove new combo on the next note/slider Done
01:04:240 (4) - move the 2nd point of the slider one grid up to form a neater blanket Done

Homura60's Hard
00:14:485 (1) - move 2nd slider point one grid up to make a perfect curve Done
00:15:535 (1) - add whistle? Was a mistake for normal and hard.
00:55:843 (6) - new combo? Done
01:10:118 (5) - it might sound better if you end the slider with a finish sound Done


Insane
00:17:214 (5) - remove clap Done


good luck! ^^
Thanks to you! :)
Nichiyouki
Hi, Aldwych

My mod from your request in nich95's modding / mod4mod Queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Remove Enable countdown and Letterbox during breaks in Song setup>Storyboarding

Normal

  1. 00:22:253 (1) - Move to right 1 grid
  2. 00:35:689 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
  3. 00:57:522 (1) - Spinner end at 00:59:202, and add finish?
  4. 01:20:615 (3,4) - Spacing is too far
  5. 01:26:074 (2) - Add finish
  6. 01:32:372 (3) - Remove finish, but add finish in slider begin at 01:32:792 instead.
  7. 01:36:151 (1) - Add finish in slider begin

Homura60's Hard

  1. 00:39:048 (3) - Add finish in slider begin
  2. 00:44:086 - Add a note?
  3. 01:15:787 (4) - Move to up 1 grid

Insane

  1. 00:23:093 (3) - Move to up 1 grid

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Saturnalize


BPM 142.863 Offset 419
Way better to hear.

For hitsound you may want to mix normal hitsound and custom clap (http://puu.sh/GT3b), changing these two to soft-hitwhistle and soft-hitclap. Combining with soft-hitnormal that won't create annoying sound when it doesn't needed and nice hitfinish, it will create a great hitsound on the beatmap.

=Normal=
Great.

=Homura60's Hard=
1. 00:46:186 (1,2,3,4) - Create a neat trapezium.

=Insane=
1. 00:08:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Symmetric would be better. http://puu.sh/GToz
2. 00:28:971 (1) - Make this more audible for the end of the slider.
3. 00:44:856 (3) - Snap to 00:44:821, sounds better.
4. 01:10:118 (5) - I've discussed it with some people and it's not just ugly, but it may confuse people because the end of the slider is under the start. We don't know if it's repeat or not. I believe there's another alternative for this slider, so change it would work the best.

Great stuffs, but you should work hard for this one.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello nich95 thanks for mod!

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Aldwych

My mod from your request in nich95's modding / mod4mod Queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Remove Enable countdown and Letterbox during breaks in Song setup>Storyboarding

Normal

  1. 00:22:253 (1) - Move to right 1 grid Following lyrics
  2. 00:35:689 (1) - Add finish in slider begin Done
  3. 00:57:522 (1) - Spinner end at 00:59:202, and add finish? No, it's a normal diff and i don't want that a circle/sider is near of a spinner.
  4. 01:20:615 (3,4) - Spacing is too far Oups, was a mistake!
  5. 01:26:074 (2) - Add finish Done
  6. 01:32:372 (3) - Remove finish, but add finish in slider begin at 01:32:792 instead. Done
  7. 01:36:151 (1) - Add finish in slider begin Done

Homura60's Hard

  1. 00:39:048 (3) - Add finish in slider begin Done
  2. 00:44:086 - Add a note? Yes with finish
  3. 01:15:787 (4) - Move to up 1 grid Yes, thanks

Insane

  1. 00:23:093 (3) - Move to up 1 grid Done

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Thanks! :)

Hello loli Cjj!

Loli Cjj wrote:

Oh yeah!

BPM 142.863 Offset 419 Ok thanks, i will change everything whith timing as soon as possible.
Way better to hear.

For hitsound you may want to mix normal hitsound and custom clap (http://puu.sh/GT3b), changing these two to soft-hitwhistle and soft-hitclap. Combining with soft-hitnormal that won't create annoying sound when it doesn't needed and nice hitfinish, it will create a great hitsound on the beatmap. Will fix soon too, thanks

=Normal=
Great.

=Homura60's Hard=
1. 00:46:186 (1,2,3,4) - Create a neat trapezium. Done but something else, but it's better.

=Insane=
1. 00:08:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Symmetric would be better. http://puu.sh/GToz Thanks!
2. 00:28:971 (1) - Make this more audible for the end of the slider. Done
3. 00:44:856 (3) - Snap to 00:44:821, sounds better. prefering a little slider
4. 01:10:118 (5) - I've discussed it with some people and it's not just ugly, but it may confuse people because the end of the slider is under the start. We don't know if it's repeat or not. I believe there's another alternative for this slider, so change it would work the best. Ok fixed.

Great stuffs, but you should work hard for this one. Yes ^^"
Good luck.
Thanks you! :)
Jebok_old
Okay, mod as requested!

> Take care with your placing. If you look below beat snap divisor there you got the position on the graph (x and y) of the selected item. Sometimes you do like row of beat for example horizontally but they not all the same y, which they should be to make the spacing accurate unless you creating a pattern (e.g y rises by 6 then goes down by 6).
> I think the normal sampleset is still too loud so i suggest lowering it by 10% in places where it applys?

[Normal]

00:40:317 (4) - x:204 and y:220
00:40:737 (1) - x:284 and y:220
00:41:577 (2) - x:292 and y:300
00:53:756 - No nc
00:54:176 - Nc
01:07:248 - On 1/8 beat snap advisor add timing point, make it S sampleset
01:08:036 - Add timing point, make it N sampleset
01:08:456 - Add timing point, make it S sampleset
01:08:876 - Whistle on beginning and end of this slider (not on the repeat)
01:10:556 (3) - 1 grid to the right
01:10:976 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 grid to the right
01:12:026 (5) - 1 grid to the right
01:37:435 (2) - x:216 and y:164
01:37:855 (3) - x:296 and y:164
01:38:694 (4) - x:308 and y:244

[Homura60's Hard]

00:03:568 (5) - 1 grid down
00:30:867 (5) - Use the same kind of shape of the slider as you used for (4), this one is doggy.
01:17:485 (8,9) - Remove whistle sounds from both of them.

[Insane]

00:25:407 (4) - x:132 and y:256
00:30:237 (4,5,6,7) - 2 grids down
00:34:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do spacing 1.3x Like THIS
00:50:816 (5) - x:424 and y:240
01:00:056 (4) - Finish
01:02:156 (1) - Finish on the beginning
01:08:876 (1) - Whistle on the beginning
01:09:296 (2) - ^
01:25:465 (3) - ^
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello Jebok!!

Jebok wrote:

Okay, mod as requested!

> Take care with your placing. If you look below beat snap divisor there you got the position on the graph (x and y) of the selected item. Sometimes you do like row of beat for example horizontally but they not all the same y, which they should be to make the spacing accurate unless you creating a pattern (e.g y rises by 6 then goes down by 6). Yes, because thid is my first beatmap, i didn't take care of my circles/sliders about it's positions.
> I think the normal sampleset is still too loud so i suggest lowering it by 10% in places where it applys? You mean that i decrease volume sampleset to 30%? ok but i do same for soft sampleset

[Normal]

00:40:317 (4) - x:204 and y:220
00:40:737 (1) - x:284 and y:220
00:41:577 (2) - x:292 and y:300 Done
00:53:756 - No nc
00:54:176 - Nc Done
01:07:248 - On 1/8 beat snap advisor add timing point, make it S sampleset Done
01:08:036 - Add timing point, make it N sampleset Done
01:08:456 - Add timing point, make it S sampleset Done and disable the next one
01:08:876 - Whistle on beginning and end of this slider (not on the repeat) Done
01:10:556 (3) - 1 grid to the right
01:10:976 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 grid to the right
01:12:026 (5) - 1 grid to the right Done
01:37:435 (2) - x:216 and y:164
01:37:855 (3) - x:296 and y:164
01:38:694 (4) - x:308 and y:244 Done

[Homura60's Hard]

00:03:568 (5) - 1 grid down Done
00:30:867 (5) - Use the same kind of shape of the slider as you used for (4), this one is doggy. I dont know what is doggy (i think it's like ugly) but done.
01:17:485 (8,9) - Remove whistle sounds from both of them. Done

[Insane]

00:25:407 (4) - x:132 and y:256 Done
00:30:237 (4,5,6,7) - 2 grids down Done
00:34:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do spacing 1.3x Like THIS That's a little ugly, so i prefer do something else it, you can see when i will upload. ;) but use spacing here is interesting.
00:50:816 (5) - x:424 and y:240Done
01:00:056 (4) - Finish Done
01:02:156 (1) - Finish on the beginning Done
01:08:876 (1) - Whistle on the beginning Done
01:09:296 (2) - ^ Done
01:25:465 (3) - ^ Done
Thanks for all!! :)
Alltur
From the queue!
My modding is not great, so take these as suggestions! :D
[General]
Clear.

[Normal]
01:12:656 (1,2,3,4) - nazi. slider 4 is little bit above compare to 1,2,3. make them all lined up.
01:22:739 (1) - Not snapped note.

[Homura60's Hard]
01:14:335 - Add a note here?
01:32:815 (1,2) - Nazi. how about just straight slider?

[Insane]
00:54:176 (2,3,4,5) - properly stack the sliders [if it's hard, start making slider from the end of the previous slider and press Ctrl+R]
01:00:056 (4) and end of slider at 01:00:476 (1) looks better when they are overlapped imo.
01:15:595 (2,4) - looks better when the end of 2 and head of 4 overlaps imo.
01:32:815 (1,2) - too sudden jump, it does not go with the music either.

[Hard/Insane]
The beginning part, I rather not map it like normal because he just talks and the music behind it is not audible.


Good luck!
Topic Starter
Aldwych

Akashi_S wrote:

From the queue!
My modding is not great, so take these as suggestions! :D
[General]
Clear.

[Normal]
01:12:656 (1,2,3,4) - nazi. slider 4 is little bit above compare to 1,2,3. make them all lined up. y=332? Fix so.
01:22:739 (1) - Not snapped note.What? A spinner doesn't need to be snapped. And the spinner start at 01:22:735. What note do you mean?

[Homura60's Hard]
01:14:335 - Add a note here? I follow the lyrics so no.
01:32:815 (1,2) - Nazi. how about just straight slider? Yes, i changed here.

[Insane]
00:54:176 (2,3,4,5) - properly stack the sliders [if it's hard, start making slider from the end of the previous slider and press Ctrl+R] Done, thanks
01:00:056 (4) and end of slider at 01:00:476 (1) looks better when they are overlapped imo. I change things here.
01:15:595 (2,4) - looks better when the end of 2 and head of 4 overlaps imo.< Couldn't change here (snapping)
01:32:815 (1,2) - too sudden jump, it does not go with the music either. Fix

[Hard/Insane]
The beginning part, I rather not map it like normal because he just talks and the music behind it is not audible. I won't change unless a MAT/BAT will say it


Good luck!
Thank you very much! :)
JudgeTheDude
From my modding queue

[General]
Mets l'offset à 15538 pour le Normal, le temps de battement entre le point de début et le départ des notes est trop long.

[Normal]
00:25:197 Fais durer ce Spinner jusqu'à 00:27:717

[Hard]
Rien à redire

[Insane]
Je ne modde pas les Insane, pas assez bon pour ça :3

C'pas grand chose, mais c'est toujours ça :3
Bon courage pour le Rank, t'as fait du bon boulot ^^

PS: Homura, je t'avais pas moddé un truc ou l'inverse ? Ton nom me dit un truc
Alltur

Aldwych wrote:

Akashi_S wrote:

From the queue!
My modding is not great, so take these as suggestions! :D
[General]
Clear.

[Normal]
01:12:656 (1,2,3,4) - nazi. slider 4 is little bit above compare to 1,2,3. make them all lined up. y=332? Fix so.
01:22:739 (1) - Not snapped note.What? A spinner doesn't need to be snapped. And the spinner start at 01:22:735. What note do you mean?


Thank you very much! :)
^ Sorry I was meaning for the spinner. Spinner needs to be snapped still imo.

no kds please
Topic Starter
Aldwych

JudgeTheDude wrote:

From my modding queue

[General]
Mets l'offset à 15538 pour le Normal, le temps de battement entre le point de début et le départ des notes est trop long. Ok

[Normal]
00:25:197 Fais durer ce Spinner jusqu'à 00:27:717 Justement ça tombe bien que tu me le signale, mais sur cette map je suis plutôt les paroles, donc le spinner sera de 00:25:617 à 00:27:087.
[Hard]
Rien à redire

[Insane]
Je ne modde pas les Insane, pas assez bon pour ça :3

C'pas grand chose, mais c'est toujours ça :3
Bon courage pour le Rank, t'as fait du bon boulot ^^

PS: Homura, je t'avais pas moddé un truc ou l'inverse ? Ton nom me dit un truc Oui ici
Merci beaucoup! :D
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

[General]
  1. Timing:
    Red line 1: BPM: 143 offset: 462
    Red line 2: BPM: 143 offset: 44125
  2. These skins must be used together:
    spinner-background.png
    spinner-circle.png
    spinner-approachcircle.png - you don't have this
    spinner-metre.png

[Normal]
Red line in this diff is inconsistent with other diffs.
01:22:739 (1) - unsnapped both head and end.

[Homura60's Hard]
Many unsnapped notes. Change divisor to 1/4 and resnap all notes. Check out my mod after doing this.
00:39:057 (3) - make a better round?

[Insane]
01:28:195 - end Kiai here to be same as other diffs

About the patterns: putting notes horizontally and vertically make the map boring..try to use more patterns. There are many good patterns in ranked map.


GL~
Topic Starter
Aldwych

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

[General]
  1. Timing:
    Red line 1: BPM: 143 offset: 462
    Red line 2: BPM: 143 offset: 44125
    I think it's fix now.
  2. These skins must be used together:
    spinner-background.png
    spinner-circle.png
    spinner-approachcircle.png - you don't have this
    spinner-metre.png
Added


[Normal]
Red line in this diff is inconsistent with other diffs. Fix
01:22:739 (1) - unsnapped both head and end. I don't understand what is the problem here.

[Homura60's Hard]
Many unsnapped notes. Change divisor to 1/4 and resnap all notes. Check out my mod after doing this. Ok, but i'm not sure if every notes are snap
00:39:057 (3) - make a better round? Like that?

[Insane]
01:28:195 - end Kiai here to be same as other diffs Fix

About the patterns: putting notes horizontally and vertically make the map boring..try to use more patterns. There are many good patterns in ranked map. I'm not so strong to remake all patterns


GL~
popner

Aldwych wrote:

popner wrote:

01:22:739 (1) - unsnapped both head and end. I don't understand what is the problem here. That means it is not exactly on tick. Maybe 2ms later/earlier and you cant hear it out, but it should be fixed. You can re-put it to fix.

[Homura60's Hard]
Many unsnapped notes. Change divisor to 1/4 and resnap all notes. Check out my mod after doing this. Ok, but i'm not sure if every notes are snap Use File-Open AiMod to check snapping issue.
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Ok thanks for AiMod, it could help me in the future. :D
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:26:877 - http://puu.sh/Ohop sounds better
00:54:176(2,3,4,5) - stack better end sliders
00:59:006 - remove this note, not sound here
01:00:896 - make more roundish and symmetric http://puu.sh/Ohwa
01:10:136 - NC here bcz you change speed
01:15:595(2,4) - stack it
01:33:445 - remove clap and add on note 4
01:35:125 - remove clap and add on note 9

Hard

00:24:778(4,5) - stack better
00:39:057(3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391469 try this looks and sound better
01:09:716 - add note here, it's better follow the music
01:38:904(4,5) - stack better

Good luck~~
Topic Starter
Aldwych

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:26:877 - http://puu.sh/Ohop sounds better Prefering guitar sounds
00:54:176(2,3,4,5) - stack better end sliders
00:59:006 - remove this note, not sound here Lyrics here! :)
01:00:896 - make more roundish and symmetric http://puu.sh/Ohwa
01:10:136 - NC here bcz you change speed
01:15:595(2,4) - stack it
01:33:445 - remove clap and add on note 4
01:35:125 - remove clap and add on note 9

Hard

00:24:778(4,5) - stack better
00:39:057(3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391469 try this looks and sound better
01:09:716 - add note here, it's better follow the music
01:38:904(4,5) - stack better

Good luck~~
Others things are fixed and done!

Thank you!! :)
wmfchris
- the mp3 itself is quite soft comparing with most of the mp3 in the game. Consider make it louder by software like audacity?
- You'll need the following skin element to make a complete spinner skinning:
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
[Insane]
00:08:398 (10,11,1) - just use equal spacing here as there's nothing special in the music.
01:15:595 (2,4) - (4) is highly covered by (2) so they should be separated.
01:39:534 (1) - I prefer muting the ending of spiner

- As the music itself and the hitsound are generally quiet it's really hard to make variation there, but the normal-hit is too loud comparing with the rest, and you'll need a better balance between normal hit and soft clap because both works with the same role here.
- The custom rhythm in the intro part just sounds odd, you may get more clue from the music.
- Object placement can be imprroved qutie a lot, you can play more (modern) maps and see how they place stuffs :3

[Hard]
00:08:608 - add a note here to keep the flow, as (1) has an accent the highlighting effect is unaffected
00:33:177 (2,3) - slider fixing so that it curves with (1) properly
260,188,33177,2,0,B|236:144|168:152,2,75.000000298023
232,240,33807,2,0,B|208:204|160:216,1,75.000000298023
00:47:877 - looks a bit hard in hard, use slider instead?

[Normal]
why not mapping the intro part? even some spinners make sense.

The biggest problem is that the song itself is too quiet and it limits your hitsound variation and player's judgement...then you'll have to consider to use a unique idea to place the hitsounds.
ssssssssssssssss
From this t/85328/start=165 modding queue cuz I'm a guset modder there

1st-3nd pending map i only mod ur diff...GD i dont mod it...
,According to Athena Tennos 's rule I'll only mod your diff,if I mod other diff,it's because that diff is interesting enough :)


ok let's mod

[General]
  1. i think you can improve your placement more beautiful.I suggest you play some ranked beatmap carfully,and try to use some pattern which you think is beautiful into your map
  2. i think you're kiai time is wrong,the correct kiai time should be00:15:538 - to 00:43:677 - and01:12:656 - to 01:40:794 -
  3. reduce all your hitsound 's volume,it's noisy now
[Insane]
  1. circle size+1?
  2. 00:00:419 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use soft hitsound will be better
  3. 00:02:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this section's rhythm sounds weird ,i suggest you remap it,or use more sliders to make players easy to play
  4. 00:15:538 (1) - add finish here
[Normal]
  1. circle size +1
  2. 00:15:538 (1) - finish
  3. 01:37:855 (3) - add finish at start?
and i also suggest you add clap on most bars' second and fourth beat,
that's all ,good luck :)
Topic Starter
Aldwych

wmfchris wrote:

- the mp3 itself is quite soft comparing with most of the mp3 in the game. Consider make it louder by software like audacity? +10 db, it will be fine now
- You'll need the following skin element to make a complete spinner skinning:
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
I didn't think that we must have it too, il will make its soon.

[Insane]
00:08:398 (10,11,1) - just use equal spacing here as there's nothing special in the music. Fix
01:15:595 (2,4) - (4) is highly covered by (2) so they should be separated. Fix, i change sliders and their positions too
01:39:534 (1) - I prefer muting the ending of spiner Why not it sounds good too

- As the music itself and the hitsound are generally quiet it's really hard to make variation there, but the normal-hit is too loud comparing with the rest, and you'll need a better balance between normal hit and soft clap because both works with the same role here. I thinks it's better now, but don't make soft hitsound quiet is hard
- The custom rhythm in the intro part just sounds odd, you may get more clue from the music. ok, but i can i improve it?
- Object placement can be imprroved qutie a lot, you can play more (modern) maps and see how they place stuffs :3 Do i have to change all my maps, just to get moddern placement, it's necessary for a bubble?

[Hard]
00:08:608 - add a note here to keep the flow, as (1) has an accent the highlighting effect is unaffected Make a circle
00:33:177 (2,3) - slider fixing so that it curves with (1) properly It's better now
260,188,33177,2,0,B|236:144|168:152,2,75.000000298023
232,240,33807,2,0,B|208:204|160:216,1,75.000000298023
00:47:877 - looks a bit hard in hard, use slider instead? Why not, i change circles placement before slider

[Normal]
why not mapping the intro part? even some spinners make sense. I've just map normal intro part.

The biggest problem is that the song itself is too quiet and it limits your hitsound variation and player's judgement...then you'll have to consider to use a unique idea to place the hitsounds. It's my first map, and i had to work hard for this one (even aleks said it too), maybe i strated to map with a hard music to map, maybe not, i will add clap sounds all around the beatmap
Thank you so much to help me! (I think you won't recheck). To ssssssssssssssss, i will make your changes soon. But thanks to mod my map! :)

EDIT :

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

From this t/85328/start=165 modding queue cuz I'm a guset modder there

1st-3nd pending map i only mod ur diff...GD i dont mod it...
,According to Athena Tennos 's rule I'll only mod your diff,if I mod other diff,it's because that diff is interesting enough :)


ok let's mod

[General]
  1. i think you can improve your placement more beautiful.I suggest you play some ranked beatmap carfully,and try to use some pattern which you think is beautiful into your map Same question as Wmfchris
  2. i think you're kiai time is wrong,the correct kiai time should be00:15:538 - to 00:43:677 - and01:12:656 - to 01:40:794 - Why not making that, i was just affraid if kiai time took too much time in this beatmap
  3. reduce all your hitsound 's volume,it's noisy now
By wmfchris suggest, volume sound and volume hitsounds was changed.

[Insane]
  1. circle size+1? Fix
  2. 00:00:419 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - use soft hitsound will be better Fix (and delete finish hitsound at the end, it's ugly to hear
  3. 00:02:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this section's rhythm sounds weird ,i suggest you remap it,or use more sliders to make players easy to play Will make it soon (same for hard)
  4. 00:15:538 (1) - add finish here Fix
[Normal]
  1. circle size +1 Fix
  2. 00:15:538 (1) - finish fix
  3. 01:37:855 (3) - add finish at start? Fix
and i also suggest you add clap on most bars' second and fourth beat, Will be fix soon too
that's all ,good luck :)
Thank you!! :)
Colin Hou
M4M so I'm coming

[General]
  1. volume too low, use this file: http://puu.sh/VuQc , I tried to fix that. after that you should find the new offset.
  2. I actually think this mp3 is in quite poor situation, can you find a better one?
  3. source: Detective Conan
  4. tags to add: Case Closed
  5. use a blank sliderslide for your hitsounds
  6. remove the audio-leanin for Normal/Hard
[Missing Skin Files]
  1. spinner-clear.png spinner-spin.png spinner-osu.png, use the default one is ok. just don't leave them missing
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:338 (7,8) - too close to 00:10:498 (5,6) , try make them apart?
  2. 00:38:427 (1,2) - rhythm changes here but not working well
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:238 (2) - try stack this with 00:08:398 (8)?
  2. 01:30:715 (6) - clap not necessary here
this is quite old style, kind of missing old guys (/off-topic

good luck
Topic Starter
Aldwych

Colin Hou wrote:

M4M so I'm coming

[General]
  1. volume too low, use this file: http://puu.sh/VuQc , I tried to fix that. after that you should find the new offset. How can i dl it?
  2. I actually think this mp3 is in quite poor situation, can you find a better one? Searched on youtube and nothing's better find, full version is not really the same music as TV size
  3. source: Detective Conan Was added to taggs (Detective), and meitantei is more international isn't it?
  4. tags to add: Case Closed Add
  5. use a blank sliderslide for your hitsounds Where can i find it?/How can i do it?
  6. remove the audio-leanin for Normal/Hard Fix
[Missing Skin Files]
  1. spinner-clear.png spinner-spin.png spinner-osu.png, use the default one is ok. just don't leave them missing It will be fix soon, i just have to find them.
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:338 (7,8) - too close to 00:10:498 (5,6) , try make them apart? It will be an overmapp and ugly
  2. 00:38:427 (1,2) - rhythm changes here but not working well I don't know know what you mean to change, if it's distance spacing it's fix, if it's not that i don't know
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:238 (2) - try stack this with 00:08:398 (8)? Fix
  2. 01:30:715 (6) - clap not necessary here Delete
this is quite old style, kind of missing old guys (/off-topic Same question as Wmfchris and SSSSSSSSSS

good luck
Thank you very much! ;)
Colin Hou
That source is official translation.

You can find a blank slider slide in most beatmap. I'm replying with my mobile. Sorry for cannot providing it.
Topic Starter
Aldwych
New mp3 sound uploaded. I hope it's fix now. Thanks for Kanna's help!
Leeg
My suggestions (follow them only if you like the changes!):

~[Normal]~

All ok!

~[Homura 60's Hard]~

01:00:213 (3) - Move to previous blue tick
01:01:788 (8) - Move to previous blue tick
01:02:629 (3) - Delete
01:02:839 (4) - Move to where (3) was
01:03:258 (?) - You can add a note here

~[Insane]~

00:21:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It sounds a little weird... Try replacing 2,3 and 5,6 with two sliders
01:00:108 (4) - Move to previous blue tick

I hope I've been of some help ;)
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello leeg!

Leeg wrote:

My suggestions (follow them only if you like the changes!):

~[Normal]~

All ok!

~[Homura 60's Hard]~

01:00:213 (3) - Move to previous blue tick Done
01:01:788 (8) - Move to previous blue tick Done
01:02:629 (3) - Delete Done
01:02:839 (4) - Move to where (3) was Done
01:03:258 (?) - You can add a note here Prefer reverse arrow and delete the next one

~[Insane]~

00:21:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It sounds a little weird... Try replacing 2,3 and 5,6 with two sliders Done


I hope I've been of some help ;)

I change all placement of hard an insane to make a little more moddern.

Thank you for random mod!! :D
jogfi2002
Modding from kagami's queue!

[General]
Kiai time is too long. The total length of this song is 1:41, nearly half of it is in Kiai time. And you know we are always suggesting no more than one Kiai time in one minute. Try to reserve only the latter Kiai time.

Skins:
spinner-osu.png - Try to cut off the blank space in this picture to keep it at just neccessary size.

About the mapping style, perhaps it's due to my own custom, I just felt a little strange.
For example, 00:15:380 (2,1) in HARD. NC is ok, but I thought 2 and 1 is at the same period, cause they are close and the following notes has farther distance than there between 2 and 1. Maybe arranging the notes more closely to rythm and bars in the song would be better.
This is just personal feeling, ignore my words if it is your own sense.

[Normal]
Period before the song really starts is a little hard to catch, cause the background music is too weak.(Better when using a headphone)
00:15:590 - Set custom sound vol to 80% is better, vocal is not so loud.
00:22:731 (2) - Double the length of this slider, let it ends at 00:23:150, following the vocal.
00:37:430 (4,1,2,3) - I suggest to arrange it like this => image001 It has better sense of continuity.
01:28:668 (1) - Reduce the length of slider by 1/2 beat, let it ends at 01:29:507. Then add one note after it.
01:32:868 (1,2) - Rearrange it like this => image002

[Homura06's Hard]
00:00:000 to 00:08:660 - As I mentioned in NORMAL, this peroid is hard to catch. Maybe you should consider to remap it into some sliders, instead of notes. Try to let players get familiar to the rythm first.
00:42:259 - Add one circle here, let spinner starts at the coming white line.(A clap sound for the new note might be good, too)
01:39:376 (5) - This note is too close to the slider, try to place it with DS.

[Insane]
01:34:547 (7) - Add a clap sound at the end of slider?
01:35:807 (2) - Add a clap sound?
01:36:227 (4) - Add a clap sound at the end of slider?


Hope my mod could help you someway~
Feel free to contact me at any time, both in forum and in game are OK.
Topic Starter
Aldwych
Hello Jogfi2002

jogfi2002 wrote:

Modding from kagami's queue!

[General]
Kiai time is too long. The total length of this song is 1:41, nearly half of it is in Kiai time. And you know we are always suggesting no more than one Kiai time in one minute. Try to reserve only the latter Kiai time. Some people say it's good some not. See precedent mod

Skins:
spinner-osu.png - Try to cut off the blank space in this picture to keep it at just neccessary size. What? This osu.png could be downloaded in the options skins, so it's correct and there's nothing blank.

About the mapping style, perhaps it's due to my own custom, I just felt a little strange.
For example, 00:15:380 (2,1) in HARD. NC is ok, but I thought 2 and 1 is at the same period, cause they are close and the following notes has farther distance than there between 2 and 1. Maybe arranging the notes more closely to rythm and bars in the song would be better.
This is just personal feeling, ignore my words if it is your own sense. Imo i don't know why i would change this period

[Normal]
Period before the song really starts is a little hard to catch, cause the background music is too weak.(Better when using a headphone) By a quote fo wfmchris
why not mapping the intro part? even some spinners make sense.
00:15:590 - Set custom sound vol to 80% is better, vocal is not so loud. For all soft so, if it's for vocal.
00:22:731 (2) - Double the length of this slider, let it ends at 00:23:150, following the vocal. Done
00:37:430 (4,1,2,3) - I suggest to arrange it like this => image001 It has better sense of continuity. Done
01:28:668 (1) - Reduce the length of slider by 1/2 beat, let it ends at 01:29:507. Then add one note after it. No, beacause i couldn't follow lyrics (1/4) so it will be stay like that
01:32:868 (1,2) - Rearrange it like this => image002 Imo it's like that, if i could skip 1/2 as much as i can, it's better.

[Homura06's Hard]
00:00:000 to 00:08:660 - As I mentioned in NORMAL, this peroid is hard to catch. Maybe you should consider to remap it into some sliders, instead of notes. Try to let players get familiar to the rythm first. As i mentioned in NORMAL, but i change 3 circle in 1 slider just it
00:42:259 - Add one circle here, let spinner starts at the coming white line.(A clap sound for the new note might be good, too) Lyrics for all spin
01:39:376 (5) - This note is too close to the slider, try to place it with DS. That's normal i would like make some good paterns, that why it's close

[Insane]
01:34:547 (7) - Add a clap sound at the end of slider?
01:35:807 (2) - Add a clap sound?
01:36:227 (4) - Add a clap sound at the end of slider? All done and change clap placement something wrong


Hope my mod could help you someway~
Feel free to contact me at any time, both in forum and in game are OK.
Thanks for mod! ;)
Aurele
Mod Request by pm.
Je suis très visuel donc je risque de te donné beaucoup de photo dans mes explications.
Répond à tout ce que tu n'as pas suivis.

Bold/Red (): Vraiment recommandé de changé
Bold/Purple (): Recommandé de changé, mais c'est ton choix.
Bold (): Commentaire/Petite Suggestion

[En Général]
Dans tout les difficultées, 00:00:471 à 00:08:870 n'est pas très mappable. On entend plus une personne parler que la chanson. C'est mieux que tu supprimes cette partie. Donc, dans mon mod, je ne vais pas touché à cette partie puisque ce n'est pas très bien fait pour être jouer. Partir la difficulté à 00:08:870 (1) - serais parfait puisqu'on entend parfaitement une basse.

[Normal]

Mapping
Puisque j'ai mentionné de supprimé cette partie, ajoute un cercle ici.
Sépare ses cercles.

Hitsounds
00:20:420 (4,5) - Remplace pour des whistles.
00:33:229 (4) - Supprime le clap et ajoute-le à 00:33:649 pour suivre la circonstance.
00:47:089 - Ajoute un clap pour la circonstance.
00:54:228 (1,2,3) - ajoute des claps ici

[Hard]
Since you have the French's flag, I will write my mod in french. If you aren't french, just poke me and I will translate it.
Comme mentionné dans le Général, supprime tout entre 00:08:870 et 00:02:150 (1) - .

Mapping
Personnellement, j'ai rien à dire sur le mapping. C'est bien construit. La seule et unique chose que je pourrais dire est ce spinner 00:12:860 (1) - . Il commence trop tard à comparé du vocal. Fait commencé le spinner à 00:12:650.
Ah non tien, j'ai mentis. La différence de spacing entre ses cercles 00:21:050 (1,2,3) - sont très élevées. Essaye de sois rapprocher le (2) du (1) ou d'éloigné le (3) du (2).

New combos
00:10:550 (5) - Comme fait pour l'Insane, ajoute un nouveau combo ici et au cercle (9). Il es inutile pour un pattern de ce genre d'avoir un combo de (9) cercles.

Hitsounds
00:20:420 (7) - J'ai bien fait de mentionné cela pour la Insane... Remplace les deux claps du slider par des whistles. Il es énervant d'y avoir trois claps l'un-à-côté-de-l'autre et puis ils sonnent très forts.
01:03:048 - La circonstance... LA CIRCONSTANCEEEEE! OkGabeTg. Donc je dissais que tu devrais ajouté un clap ici pour suivre la circonstance de tes claps. Pareil pour 01:04:728.
01:17:537 (8,9) - Comme dit pour le premier point.

[Insane]

Mapping
00:08:870 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Tu pourrais faire quelleque chose de plus amusant que ce pattern qui s'élargis. J'ai aussi remarqué que les circles n'étais pas très bien alignés... J'ai donc été en conclusion que ce pattern serais parfait dans cette situation. Comme tu pourras remarqué, j'ai aussi ajouté des new combos puisque il étais inutile d'y avoir un combo à 9 cercles.
Screenshot+Code

368,44,8870,5,2
468,128,9290,1,0
468,256,9710,1,0
368,340,10130,1,0
144,340,10550,5,2
44,256,10970,1,0
44,128,11390,1,0
144,44,11810,1,0
256,192,12230,5,2

Si tu as un problème avec les codes, fait-moi signe!
00:12:650 (1) - J'aimerais bien que tu fasses un seul spinner avec ces deux spinners. Je comprend l'utilité du deuxième mais c'est un peu mélangant de finir un spinner et ensuite embarqué dans un autre.
00:16:850 (4,5,6) - J'adore ce blanket avec le cercle entre les sliders. Le seul problème que je pourrais te dire ici c'est le fait qu'il es par dessus le cercle (1). Comme tu peux le voir ici.
00:18:740 (4) - Ce cercle n'est pas aligné avec les cercles précédents et ce n'est pas très beau à voir... Un petit indice qu'il m'as aidé à savoir cela est, en cliquant sur le cercle (3), on peut constaté qu'il y a un changement de "spacing" entre les cercle (2,3,4). Tu peux le voir facilement vers la droite dans le "Previous" et "Next" http://puu.sh/16bOw . 00:24:830 (1,2,3,4) - Ceci pourrais être un autre exemple, mais c'est très minime.
00:40:999 (2) - Tu peux collé ce slider avec les cercle (4,5)? Comme cela
00:48:349 - Tu devrais ajouté un cercle ici pour finir ce stream en beauté puisqu'il y a du vocal ici.
00:50:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - J'adore les Star Pattern. Si tu suit mes maps, j'ai toujours ce petit pattern (:. Bref, je vais te donné un code pour le faire mieux.
296,120,50028,5,0
252,260,50238,1,2
372,176,50448,1,8
220,176,50658,1,2
344,260,50868,1,2
J'ai mis ce point en noir puisque je ne sais pas si tu va aimé o3o. 01:03:258 - Supprime ce cercle et commence le spinner à cet endroit.
01:35:387 - Ce cercle me semble inutile, tu peux le supprimé s'il-vous-plaît?

New combos
00:37:639 (1) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici et 00:39:109 (1) - la aussi.
Nothing else to say o3o

Hitsounds
J'adore comment t'as fait pour les tons. Même si c'est très facile, tu les as bien utilisés.
00:20:420 (8,9) - Remplace ses claps par des whistles. Avoir trois claps un à la suite de l'autre, c'est pas très cool.
01:00:948 (2,3,1,2,3) - Tes claps ne se suit plus. À cause du slider 01:00:948 (2) - , ton 2/4 est devenu un 1/3. Continue tes claps sur les chaques 2 et 4 lignes.
01:17:537 (7,8) - Comme dit un peu plus haut, remplace ses claps par des whistles.
01:26:147 - J'aimerais bien que tu y ajoute un finish ici.
Point inutile à la vie. 01:29:507 (1,2) - Pour suivre la circonstance des ses whistles, ajoute-s'en à (Début du slider 4, Cercle 5, Cercle 6)

Dès que tu es prêt à avoir un mod d'un MAT après quelleque autre mods, pm moi et je vais revoir la mapset. (Même si je ne suis pas MAT ;DD)

Bon, moi je vais dormir, bonne nuit.
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