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Nika Lenina - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (Russian Ver.) (TV Size)

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ryuu

Siesta- wrote:

[Ryuu's Normal]
SPOILER
I recommend sv = 0.7 :) no.

- 00:55:436 - add circle kay.
- 00:55:697 - ^ ^
Download: Nika Lenina - Kuusou Mesorogiwi (Russian Ver.) (TV Size) (Kuma-san) [Ryuu's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Siesta- wrote:

Hi :)

[Kuma's Nikki]
SPOILER
- 00:00:653 (3,4,5,6)

<- I recommend it :)
no
spboxer3
from #modreqs

[general]


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. please check your tags. need add [Ryuu] and leyko in all diff.
  2. unify your combo colours?

[Easy]


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:12:653 -
    01:16:566 -

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:00:132 (1) - ctrl + H this. you can find a bit depart off. maybe you can fix it?
  2. 00:18:914 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:48:131 (1) - ^
  4. 00:50:218 (2) - ^

[Ryuu's Normal]


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:07:045 -
    01:24:784 -
    01:16:566 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:30:914 (4,2) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:02:218 (3) - parallel it. It's looks like a bit depart off
  2. 00:41:871 (3) - maybe move to x:328 y:56 to parallel this pattern?
  3. 01:07:958 (1,2,3) - spacing have a bit depart off.
  4. 01:09:131 (1,1) - have too far spacing for the center after spinner. because it's too hard for the new player.
  5. 01:25:827 (1) - awkward slider. please make the layout better...

[Hard]


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused geen line:
    00:42:197 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:43:697 (5,7) -
  2. 00:44:218 (6,1) -
  3. 01:08:740 (3,2) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:06:131 (6,8,10) - make those use same spacing?
  2. 01:16:305 (1,2,3,4) - wrong rhythm. it's 1/3 rhythm.

[Insane]



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:24:262 (2,5) -
  2. 00:34:305 (10,3) -
  3. 00:59:218 (3,4) -
  4. 01:23:871 (2,6) -
Hitsound
(For I listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:22:305 (6) - ??? why have soft clap at this way?

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:24:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - awkward pattern. please make the layout better~
  2. 00:31:436 (1,2,3,4) - spacing.
  3. 00:56:479 (1,2,3,4) - awkward pattern.
  4. 01:16:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 1/3 rhythm.


red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
ryuu
Melan Blue
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Kuma-san ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'opening' in tags.

[Kuma's Nikki]


  1. 00:08:479 - Add finish.
  2. 00:16:827 (12,1) - Sound strange here,I think slider should start to here 00:16:827 - and end to here 00:16:958.
  3. 01:16:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe change repeat slider much better with play.

[Hard]


  1. 00:08:479 - Add finish.
  2. 01:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as Insane diff.

[Ryuu's Normal]


  1. AR+1 or 2 much better play with me.
  2. 00:30:392 - Add finish.
  3. 00:58:827 (2) - This slider should start to here 00:58:566.

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~
ryuu
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Kuma-san ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'opening' in tags.

[Kuma's Nikki]


  1. 00:08:479 - Add finish.
  2. 00:16:827 (12,1) - Sound strange here,I think slider should start to here 00:16:827 - and end to here 00:16:958.
  3. 01:16:305 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe change repeat slider much better with play.

[Hard]


  1. 00:08:479 - Add finish.
  2. 01:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as Insane diff.

[Ryuu's Normal]


  1. AR+1 or 2 much better play with me.
  2. 00:30:392 - Add finish.
  3. 00:58:827 (2) - This slider should start to here 00:58:566.

That's all ~

Good luck with rank ~
Thanks Rikaaa~ :3
Cygnus
  • Easy
  1. Nothing wrong, but I think you need to bump your Approach Rate +1.

  • Normal
  1. 00:17:349 (2) - The spacing between this note is not equal.

  2. 01:12:392 (1,2,3,4) - They don't look good. How bout this?

  3. Bump OD, AR, and HP +1.

  • Hard
  1. Seems fine ~

  • Nikki
  1. 00:11:871 (8,9) - Ctrl + R them. Looks better.

  2. 00:16:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Move two grids right to maintain spacing.
ryuu
Verlaren
Первый раз слышу о русской перепевке...Да и хоть кто-нибудь заметил что текст песни переведён неправильно в некоторых местах?
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Verlaren wrote:

Первый раз слышу о русской перепевке...Да и хоть кто-нибудь заметил что текст песни переведён неправильно в некоторых местах?
Лол? кого это волнует?
Natsume
Мапа норм, а вот даб не очень. х)
Удачи!
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

TakamuraRin wrote:

Мапа норм, а вот даб не очень. х)
Удачи!
Сяп о/
Verlaren

Kuma-san wrote:

Verlaren wrote:

Первый раз слышу о русской перепевке...Да и хоть кто-нибудь заметил что текст песни переведён неправильно в некоторых местах?
Лол? кого это волнует?

Меня например.
ryuu

Verlaren wrote:

Меня например.
обращайся тогда к переводчику.
а не к мапперу.
Verlaren

[Ryuu] wrote:

Verlaren wrote:

Меня например.
обращайся тогда к переводчику.
а не к мапперу.
Ок, но я просто высказал своё мнение.
lovhin456
Hello

[General]
- Adding the video would be nice

[Leyko's Easy]
- 00:21:001 ~ Add finish ?
- 00:38:740 ~ ^
- 00:45:523 (3,4) ~ How about moving (4) to 00:46:566 and instead of a note make (3) a slider that goes until the next big white tick ?
- 00:48:131 ~ Why the new combo didn't change the color ?

[Ryuu's Normal]
- The slider speed is kind of slow also it's the same as Easy :/
- 00:00:142 (1,2,3) ~ Add whistles on the end of these three
- 00:28:305 ~ Add finish
- 00:32:479 ~ ^
- 00:38:740 ~ Remove whistle, add finish
- 00:39:784 ~ Add whistle
- 01:00:653 ~ Add finish
- 01:02:740 ~ ^
- 01:04:827 ~ ^
- 01:06:914 ~ ^
- 01:12:392 ~ This is too close to the spinner's end, players will most likely find this hard
- 01:13:175 ~ Add finish
- 01:15:262 ~ ^ and maybe new combo ?
- 01:19:436 ~ Move (5) here and maybe start the new combo here instead ?
- 01:21:523 ~ The finish sound in the music goes here so maybe add a note with a finish here or something else ?
- 01:23:610 ~ Move (4) here and start the new combo here instead ?
- 01:25:697 ~ Move (1) here but end at the same spot as before moving it
- I think you can do better

[Hard]
- 00:00:132 ~ From here to where the spinner starts it feels really empty, there are no hitsounds
- 00:02:740 (1) ~ End the slider here
- 00:16:827 ~ Add finish
- 00:28:305 ~ ^
- 00:32:479 ~ ^
- 00:33:653 ~ Add a note
- 00:34:566 ~ Add finish
- 00:37:697 ~ ^
- 00:38:740 ~ ^
- 00:42:914 ~ ^
- 00:47:088 ~ ^
- 00:47:349 ~ Remove new combo then add new combo on 00:48:131
- 00:50:871 ~ Maybe add notes here and on the next red tick ?
- 00:56:476 ~ Add finish
- 00:55:175 ~ Something like this http://puu.sh/Dv0c seems better imo
- 00:56:479 ~ Add finish
- 00:57:784 ~ Remove new combo
- 01:00:653 ~ Add finish
- 01:02:740 ~ ^
- 01:04:827 ~ ^
- 01:06:914 ~ ^
- 01:13:175 ~ ^
- 01:15:262 ~ ^
- 01:17:349 ~ ^
- 01:21:523 ~ ^
- 01:23:871 ~ New combo then remove new combo on the next object
- 01:25:697 ~ Use 10% for volume
- This diff is kind of boring to be honest, you could add some jumps and maybe the slider speed you could make it a bit higher too

[Kuma's Nikki]
- 00:00:132 ~ Again, from here to 00:08:479 no hitsounds, try to add some
- 00:21:001 ~ Add finish
- 00:25:175 ~ ^
- 00:26:218 ~ ^
- 00:28:305 ~ ^ and new combo
- 00:32:479 ~ Add finish
- 00:38:740 ~ ^ or whistle
- 00:47:088 ~ Add finish
- 00:56:479 ~ ^

Could use some more mods
Melan Blue

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello Hi c:

[Leyko's Easy]
- 00:21:001 ~ Add finish ? Okay
- 00:38:740 ~ ^ Okay
- 00:45:523 (3,4) ~ How about moving (4) to 00:46:566 and instead of a note make (3) a slider that goes until the next big white tick ? No...
- 00:48:131 ~ Why the new combo didn't change the color ? Whoops o.o Fixed
Thank you!
Еше я kiiiinda сделала хитсаунды повкуснее :3... kinda.
Держи. ( ・ω ・)ノ ノ http://puu.sh/DL5s
Megurine Luka
omg modding a map that is three years old..
/me runs away~

[General]

  1. Why audioleadin 1999? Doesn't really matter but just curious lol
  2. add 未来日記 in tag?
  3. Well, you can try mute the sliderslide sound before 00:04:305 (1) - ? (except Nikki diff)
[Easy]

  1. 00:04:305 (1) - add whistle?
[Normal]

  1. 00:19:436 (5) - well, I think it might be good if you add default whistle on this note also. It can somehow cover the missing clap
  2. 00:23:088 (3) - ^ slider end
  3. 00:32:479 (2) - move upward a bit? avoid overlap with 00:30:914 (4) -
  4. 01:04:305 (6) - for the same reason, a bit downward?
  5. 01:12:653 (1,2) - well, for the current ranking criteria, you need to remain at least two beats after the spinner (which sometimes drive me crazy)
  6. 01:16:827 (x) - add a note here?
[Hard]

  1. AR+1? The gap btw Hard and Insane is too large.
  2. 00:02:218 (1) - why prolonged to the red line? It sounds kinda awkward to me. I would prefer shorten it at 00:02:740
  3. 00:59:088 (9) - try to curve in another direction? encircle 00:59:871 (1) - ?
  4. 01:02:740 (3) - missing clap on tail?
  5. 01:17:349 (1) - stack on 01:16:045 (12) - ?
[Nikki]

  1. 00:01:175 (4) - same as Hard, why prolong to red line?
  2. 00:20:479 (4) - CTRL+G?
  3. 00:51:784 (4) - NC to indicate SV change?
  4. 00:52:436 (1,2) - stack better
Topic Starter
Kuma-san

Megurine Luka wrote:

omg modding a map that is three years old..
/me runs away~

[General]

  1. Why audioleadin 1999? Doesn't really matter but just curious lol
  2. add 未来日記 in tag?
  3. Well, you can try mute the sliderslide sound before 00:04:305 (1) - ? (except Nikki diff)
[Easy]

  1. 00:04:305 (1) - add whistle?
[Normal]

  1. 00:19:436 (5) - well, I think it might be good if you add default whistle on this note also. It can somehow cover the missing clap
  2. 00:23:088 (3) - ^ slider end
  3. 00:32:479 (2) - move upward a bit? avoid overlap with 00:30:914 (4) -
  4. 01:04:305 (6) - for the same reason, a bit downward?
  5. 01:12:653 (1,2) - well, for the current ranking criteria, you need to remain at least two beats after the spinner (which sometimes drive me crazy)
  6. 01:16:827 (x) - add a note here?
[Hard]

  1. AR+1? The gap btw Hard and Insane is too large.
  2. 00:02:218 (1) - why prolonged to the red line? It sounds kinda awkward to me. I would prefer shorten it at 00:02:740
  3. 00:59:088 (9) - try to curve in another direction? encircle 00:59:871 (1) - ?
  4. 01:02:740 (3) - missing clap on tail?
  5. 01:17:349 (1) - stack on 01:16:045 (12) - ?
[Nikki]

  1. 00:01:175 (4) - same as Hard, why prolong to red line?
  2. 00:20:479 (4) - CTRL+G?
  3. 00:51:784 (4) - NC to indicate SV change?
  4. 00:52:436 (1,2) - stack better
Thanks Luka-san~
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