This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 17 agosto 2013 at 23.48.36

Artist: sakuzyo
Title: AXION
Source: BMS
Tags: Yucali
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4943kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:

1. Another (5 stars, 543 notes)
2. Hyper (4,97 stars, 355 notes)
3. Yucali's Beginner (2,66 stars, 126 notes)

Download: sakuzyo - AXION
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ready for modding!
Beginner by Yucali~
Hyper by me~
Another by me~
Modding Status:
Maddy @Sat Mar 10, 2012 Done~
0OoMickeyoO0 @Mon Mar 19, 2012 Done~
Katty Pie @Mon Mar 19, 2012 Done~
Tony @Fri Mar 23, 2012 Done~
Slave @Fri Mar 23, 2012 Done~
TheVileOne @Mon Sep 17, 2012 Done~
xxheroxx @Tue Sep 18, 2012 Done~
RikiH_ @Wed Sep 19, 2012 Done~

Stelline stellose~

Maddy wrote:

1. 00:02:087 (2) - Segui il piano.
2. 00:13:900 (3) - http://puu.sh/k4c0
3. 00:47:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Brutto da vedere, se proprio vuoi un incremento, fanne uno ogni nota. Ad es. 0.4-0.5-0.6-0.7
4. 01:00:493 (3) - http://puu.sh/k4hm
5. 01:30:587 (6,7,8) - Allunga slider di 1/4 + 1.5 spacing su note.
6. 01:39:400 (2) - Aggiungi nota.
7. 01:55:243 (1) - http://puu.sh/k4j7
8. 01:56:181 (4) - http://puu.sh/k4jt
   
   Migliorato un po' di pattern, spero ti piacciano.

Fatto e ho migliorato qualcosa, thanks

I want to make beginner. ~

Jacob wrote:

I want to make beginner. ~

sorry but Yucali is currently making a diff "Beginner"

Trallallero Trallallà, la mia diff eccola qua ~ E poi boh, un'altra stellina ♣

Download: sakuzyo - AXION (giO-) [Yucali's Beginner].osu

Yucali wrote:

Trallallero Trallallà, la mia diff eccola qua ~ E poi boh, un'altra stellina ♣

ma grazie carissima u.u ♥

\:D/

great map!!XD

my map is lol ;_;

rrtyui wrote:

\:D/

great map!!XD

my map is lol ;_;

thanks
why :O

~mod request via in game pm~

[General]
Slider Tick Rate should be 1 at all diff, but Yucali's diff is 2. fix it
Hitsound is hard to hear @.@ increase by 30% ?
delete .osb file
Your diff spread is not good, It's N-I-I
move to pending if you're finish mapping


[Yucali's Beginner]
00:11:275 (1) - remove nc
00:30:400 (1) - too many return, change it to 3 notes
00:37:900 (2) - finish head?
01:27:400 (1) - ^
01:31:337 - delete break here
01:45:400 (1) - add finish?
01:51:400 (1) - ^
01:52:900 (1) - ^


[Hyper]
AR -1 ?
OD -1 ?
Actually, this difficult shoudn't have a stream. And some stream are mixing notes and 1/4 sliders together. It's too hard for Hyper. and It has many error spacing. I highly recommended you to decrease a star from this diff or remap it.
00:04:712 (1) - why nc here? It's unnecessary to add nc
00:07:712 (1) - ^
01:33:025 (1,1,1) - It's 1/3 Beat Snap here.


[Another]
OD +1 ?
AR -1 ?
00:10:900 (8,9,1,2) - move 1 grid right?
00:13:900 (3) - add finish head?
00:33:025 (3) - add whistle?
00:46:525 (6) - forgot to add clap
01:02:650 (7) - add whistle?
01:08:837 (10) - remove nc
01:09:025 (12) - nc this and change to 5 stack & 5 stream like this
01:11:275 (4) - error spacing, or nc
01:27:400 (8) - nc and remove nc next note
01:31:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do like this please...

01:32:837 (1,1,1) - It's 1/3 beat snap here
01:37:900 (1) - place on heavy beat(?)
01:51:025 (6) - nc


GL~

hi :3 meom meom am nom nom ~~~~

Another

00:05:650(5) - maybe put this not on spaicing?
00:34:525(3,4) - i think that this very big jump maybe make this less?
01:01:806(1) - make this note Hardly more low http://puu.sh/lrTk
01:16:900(1,2,3) - bpp this sliders bad sound( maybe make 3 sliders on red and white section?
01:28:431 - add note
01:27:868(2) - remove note
01:29:462 - make this kombo http://puu.sh/lrUu

Hyper

00:03:400(1) - remove this note
AR - 7
In some places it is necessary make stack notes and check up all spaicing ><

Yucali's Beginner

00:01:900 - make this slider double
00:46:525 - add note
01:31:337 - brrr remove this break ><

On all diff's Should be identical slider tick rate.

And why at you on complexities Another and Hyper The identical slider velocity?? Hyper Should be easier. And at you it turns out that they almost identical ;w;

good luck with map :3

m4m :3

[General]
01:03:351 - not snapped end of kiai in all diffs D:
Everything else seems fine! btw look at this : Click me!

[Yucali's Beginner]
00:10:900 (3,1) - switch new combo(add new combo to 3 and remove new combo on 1) to keep the previous pattern
00:20:275 (1) - remove new combo. useless D:
00:27:400 (1) - add a finish here. It fits the song you know
00:37:900 (2) - ^ (on start)
00:39:400 (1) - ^
00:51:400 (1) - ^
01:03:025 (4) - ^ (on end)
01:27:400 (1) - ^ (on start)
01:45:400 (1) - ^
01:51:400 (1) - ^
01:52:900 (1) - ^
00:55:900 (1) - remove new combo. useless D:
01:22:900 (1) - ^
Awesome diff overall GJ

[Hyper]
AR-1 for better flow :S
00:04:712 (1) - useless new combo. Consider removing this :3
00:07:712 (1) - ^
01:33:025 (1,1,1) - yay. A rainbow :3
Well mapped. Add hitsounds and it will be fine :3

[Another]
AR 9 Seems too high, and the rest of the difficulty settings are pretty low compared to it. Consider changing to AR8. It really plays better. :3
Awesome Another. I enjoyed it :3

Good luck with it giO- and Yucali :3

thanks all, ill fix ASAP :v

Hyper:
00:23:087 (10) - spacing
01:24:306 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - cerca di farli tutti uguali, se no viene fuori un casino
Poi boh, non so moddare. Buona fortuna tvoia ♥

Wao :Q_ bellissima :3

Jordan wrote:

Wao :Q_ bellissima :3

grazie jordan

noob

General
A preview point has not been set.
01:03:400 - Kiai end is unsnapped.

Beginner

00:14:650 (2) - Why is the clap on the repeat and not the end?
00:21:212 (1) - I suggest start on previous white tick to keep the hitsound rhythm going. End in the same place though.
00:39:400 (1,2,1,2,1) - Instead of having one follow snap and the other be larger, just use 1.04 ~1.06 snap for all of the notes. You can keep the slightly larger snap but make the spacing equal.
00:57:400 - Should these notes be this loud compared to the music?

01:30:025 (3) - Bleh weird slider, ends in a random spot. A weird break that follows after. It would technically pass, but it's just an okay mapping. (I would find a way to map the gap if this were my map, but its not).

Hyper

I don't hear any hitsounds. You must have hitsounds.

00:03:400 (1) - Delete note and space segment out. This is just awkward to hit and read. It serves no useful purpose to the beat. Once that is done you can add a note here 00:02:837 - and form a pattern. (No sudden changes in distance snap)

I rather like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/434773 (notice timeline) instead of your pattern. It's closer to the beat and clicking on actual notes is more fun IMO than loosely following sliders.

00:19:712 (5) - Make part of next combo? (There's a purpose)
00:20:837 (5) - New combo.
00:22:337 (5) - New combo.
00:22:337 (1,2,3) - Awkward. Don't speed up and then slowdown over a gap with a main beat in it. Map main beat please, I would prefer you use distance snap to do it.
00:37:900 (6) - New combo.
00:58:150 (7,8) - This is awkward. There's a very distracting sound on 1/4th. IMO 8 should be pushed 1/4th back and repositioned.
01:23:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - Edges of this just look sharp and uneven. Try to smooth the shape a bit more?
01:30:587 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Okay the beat is much simpler than this. There's no need to make it awkward. http://puu.sh/15QXpThis is the beat. It just repeats this over and over. Remap with respect to the beat please.
01:49:337 (3,4,5) - Don't go fast and then slow down. It makes people 100 when you do things like this. I suggest spacing 4,5 the same as 3,4.
01:50:275 (6) - I would move 1/2th forward.
01:50:650 (7) - I would delete and start next slider here.
01:51:025 - I would add a half beat long slider here.

Another

00:08:650 (7) - I really don't think this note is necessary. Beat is more interesting without it.
00:15:400 (1,2,3) - Line up with previous slider better. Position where the slider end is pointing.
00:25:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Such an unpolished curve. It should look something like this http://puu.sh/15RjB
00:31:056 - Add note?
00:35:462 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - ugly curve.
00:43:337 - Have a whistle here to follow the previous two whistles?
00:45:587 (2) - This slider does not belong in this difficulty level. It's out of place. I highly recommend mapping differently.
00:46:712 (9) - ^
00:47:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing. Also the beat is more like doubles than a full stream. Do this instead. http://puu.sh/15RrG
00:55:056 - Add note.
00:59:650 (4,5,6) - I expected a much larger snap here since you have jumps for the very same sounds right before it.
01:00:775 (4) - Why are you breaking the stream here? A double repeat here would create a solid stream and would make more sense.
01:01:525 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Curve could use work.
01:27:962 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ugh, 1.2 is too short IMO.
01:31:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is 1/4th.

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
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[General]

• • Aggiungi un Preview Point in ogni difficoltà. (ti consiglio di metterlo a 00:27:400 o 00:51:400)
  • Tags: aggiungi "Be-Music Source Magic Mash Man"
  • Non riesco a capire il criterio con cui hai deciso di mettere alcune new combo: cerca di posizionarle secondo una logica precisa in modo che vadano "a ritmo" con la musica (che ne sò, prova a mettere una new combo ogni 1 o 2 tick bianchi grandi, ad esempio)
  • Fai partire il Kiai a 00:51:400 e fallo finire a 01:03:400.

[Yucali's Beginner] (questa difficoltà mi sembra una Normal camuffata da Easy D:)

• • Approach Rate: 4
  • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • 00:02:650 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 00:07:900 (3) - Elimina questo cerchio. Fai partire uno slider qui e fallo finire a 00:08:275, poi aggiungi un cerchio a 00:08:650.
  • 01:30:025 (4) - Rimuovi una ripetizione. Fai partire uno spinner a 01:31:150 e fallo finire a 01:33:025.

[Hyper]

• • 00:02:837 (x) - Aggiungi un cerchio.
  • 00:06:025 (5,6) - Rimuovi la ripetizione dal (6) e muovi sia lui che il (5) 1/2 in avanti, poi aggiungi un cerchio a 00:06:025.
  • 00:13:806 (1) - Fai partire questo slider a 00:13:900.
  • 00:54:025 (8,9) - Prova a creare qualcosa del genere.
  
  SPOILER

  

Bella beatmap, bravi.

That beautiful moment when another Graveyarded AXION mapset will back from the ashes <3

Ecco il modding

General

Missà che te l'hanno già detto ma metti il Preview Point, e poi aggiungi gli HS nella Hyper xD

Yucali's Beginner

Apri con il blocco note, dove vedi SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 sostituisci con 1, occhio poi che gli oggetti siano snappati bene

00:10:150 (2) - Fallo più curvo per blankettarlo con il 3 e inoltre rimuovi la NC da 00:11:275 (1)
00:12:212 (1) - Spostalo in modo che il tick rosso sia al centro della griglia e cerca di tirare un po' su la parte destra, è più carino

128,284,12212,6,0,B|176:324|248:292|248:292|308:328|376:296,1,250

00:20:275 (1) - Questa NC mi sembra superflua
00:30:400 (1) - Per favore, questo no D: E' difficile da leggere in una easy! Se ti piace sostituiscilo con uno slider che inizia in a 00:30:400 e finisce a 00:30:775 e una nota a 00:31:150
01:48:962 (2) - Non so, io la eliminerei siccome non hai mai messo note a 1/2 di distanza in tutta la map un nabbo non se l'aspetterebbe xD

Hyper

00:04:712 (1) - Non capisco perchè questa NC D:
00:07:712 (1) - ^

Non trovo altro

Another

00:02:087 (2) - Perchè questo repeat così "storto"? E' brutto da vedere...

Davvero non riesco a trovare altro, la mappa è molto bella :V Ti darei una stellina ma ho un solo kudosu xD Spero che quel poco che ho scritto ti possa servire

M4M richiesta tramite IRC

[Another]

Nel complesso semplice e bella ma hai fatto un po di confusione con gli hitsounds

00:02:087 (2) - Questo è un po bruttino da vedere puoi fare un normale slider tondeggiante? (?)
00:02:837 (4) - Leggermente curvo?
00:06:775 (9) - Whistle alla fine dello slider
00:07:431 (3) - 00:08:462 (6) - 00:12:212 (4) - Whistle
00:12:775 (8) - O togli il finish o cambi suono al finish, è brutto da ascoltare
00:13:900 (3) - Start aggiungi anche finish
00:13:900 (3) - Whistle e toglilo da 00:17:087 (2) -
00:17:462 (5) - Fine slider whistle e toglilo da 00:17:837 (6) -
00:18:025 (8) - ^ Stai mettendo il Whitle al levare, è brutto da ascoltare magari si può fare qualche volta ma così ripetutamente non si può ascoltare
Ora raddoppiamo il tempo con i whistle:
00:19:150 (3) - aggiungi whistle
00:19:712 (5) - Fine slider: whistle
00:20:087 (6) - Leva whistle
00:20:275 (8) - Whistle
00:20:462 (1) - Fine slider whistle
00:20:837 (2) - ^
00:21:212 (3) - Leva whistle
00:21:400 (4) - Start: aggiungi whistle
00:21:962 (7) - alla return arrow whistle
e così via, togli tutti i whistle dai 2/4 rossi e mettili sui bianchi
00:26:650 (1,2,3,4) - Tutti whistle anche lo slider 5 alla partenza
Ricontrolla un po tutti gli hitsounds.

Ritornando al mapping owo:

00:29:837 (6) - Spostalo in 272||264
00:30:587 (8,9,10) - Muovilo in modo da stackare lo slider a 6
00:33:400 (6) - Muovi il terzo anchor point in 172||136 e il secondo anchor point in 164||88
00:45:587 (2,3,4) - Stacka meglio
00:55:056 - Aggiungi nota e stacka meglio
00:57:400 (2) - Spostalo un po più a sinistra e stacka 00:57:775 (4) - su 00:56:650 (7)
01:02:650 (7,8) - Stack meglio
01:04:525 (3,4) - Stack alla fine dello slider
01:06:025 (3,4) - ^
01:08:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - é in 1/3 questa parte
01:24:400 (2) - NC e toglilo da 1
01:45:962 (3) - Ctrl + G
01:46:337 (4) - ^
01:56:650 (6) - NC

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