Loctav wrote:

[General]

I think that the combo colours shouldnt be blue if the background is blue. This is pretty blending much and tends to let people delete your neat background image.
Adjust the combo colours and make them brighter in order to prevent this. - suckers will delete it anyways; lightened first one a bit more

Ah yes. Disable countdown, please. - the thing i always forget to do... orz

[Legend]

Generally you change your inbetween combo spacing too much. You should stay at one distance snap or or change adjustments within a combo. So if you want to do a increasing spacing, do it within one combo. Sometimes you do x1 over the whole combo and suddenly it snaps to x1,5 without any reason.
And please. Fix the slider shapes. Adjust them on the grid without spacing and rotate them afterwards. And while rotating, DEACTIVATE GRID SNAP. - which ones do you even mean?~

00:23:740 (5,6,7,8,9) - start stacking on (5) - k
00:24:285 (1,2,3,4) - total mess. let's fix this. http://puu.sh/m0Re - k

232,184,24285,6,0,B|208:192|192:216,3,40,6|0|0|0
199,275,24558,2,0,B|207:289|231:297,3,40,6|0|0|0
299,297,24830,2,0,B|322:289|331:274,3,40,6|0|0|0
331,206,25103,2,0,B|327:193|157:73|303:177,3,40,2|0|0|0

00:27:830 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/m0RT - k; btw., don't just post screenshots in here
00:30:830 (1,2,3,4) - use sliders with only 3 reverses - k
00:34:103 (1) - spacing! - wall!
00:34:103 (1,2,3) - nevertheless I would suggest using hitcircles here. - i don't~
00:34:649 (3,4) - even more spacing! no unreasonable spacing changes within a combo! - you touched my tralalala there
00:36:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this upper bow looks messy - the upper bow plays, feels and looks fine
00:40:376 (3,4) - that's what I meant in the beginning. Nevertheless, the ending of (3) is misplaced - where is that misplaced?
00:42:558 (3) - http://puu.sh/m0Uh - http://tinyurl.com/6tcs4o3
00:47:330 (4,5) - stack them - k, spaced 6 x1.5 though
01:03:967 (3) - messy shaped - fine imo, come up with a better suggestion if you think it's worth a rebuild
01:09:421 (2) - shape like (1) - for usual i don't copypaste... anyways, did it since that seems okay to me
01:21:558 (1,2,3,4) - this one looks out of order, should have the same bowing as the previous and following ones. - it's meant to have 3 placed on previous 2, so is the way it's built
01:27:558 (5,6) - ugly overlap is ugly - pretty overlap is pretty
01:30:694 (5,6) - unreasonable jump - adjusted 01:29:603 (3,1) to make the point more clear; both these jumps are reasoned on the suddenly increasing vocals (in point of volume); 01:31:785 (9,10) is not much enough of a change in sound as previous ones, before you come up with that
01:45:421 (1) - remove NC - k
01:45:830 (1) - ^ - k
01:48:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - messy shaped. the second one looks fine at all, but together with the first, both appear ugly. Adjust the first one. - look fine imo
02:07:103 (5,1) - spacing - fine
02:39:421 (12,1) - this is the way you should do it. - i see a difference there
02:55:103 (10,11) - eww - totally fine
02:55:649 (15,1) - even more eww - even more fine
02:56:194 (5,6) - another big big eww. and wait. why is (5) a slider? - dunno, anyways adjusted that part
02:58:103 (13,1) - okay, I stop pointing this out from here. - good thing, since there's no problem with it anyways~
03:02:467 (7) - what a mess. use this code:

89,273,182467,2,2,B|5:210|42:108|131:44|214:106,1,320

03:05:194 (1) - remove NC and adjust spacing of (3) - you should point out ideas and ways to redesign patterns if you go for things like this; done anyways~
03:10:512 (3) - messy shape. - nope
03:11:194 (5) - ^ - ^
03:12:285 (7) - ^ - ^
03:13:376 (9) - okay, this one is really ugly or is just strangely rotated so it looks ugly. I'm sure, the points are not symmetrical. - it's not even built for being symmetrical, why would i try to build a symmetric slider in a powermetal song?
03:21:421 (7) - no reason for a slider here - yes
03:21:967 (7) - ^ - ^
03:22:512 (7) - ^ - ^
03:27:421 (9) - ^ - ^
03:29:467 (11) - messy - adjusted it a bit; that's one of the sliders that pissed me of while mapping
03:42:558 (7) & following - do this: http://puu.sh/m10r - i don't see the point there, it's fine like this imo
04:00:967 (11) - no - yes


Good work so far. Good luck! Ah, since this is the best map you did so far, take this: - you don't even follow my maps, but ikr

32,80,62467,2,0,B|112:192|270:120,1,239.999992847443,4|4

It would looks like this

80,72,123285,2,2,B|16:176|112:264,1,192.000004577637,2|4
96,248,123626,1,0
96,248,123694,1,2

Open me!11!

They fit perfect to the End Point. It took a while but I got it.

I'm sorry..

TicClick wrote:

^ It should be Impact, not something Arial-ish.

kriers wrote:

/o/ wooh desktop backgrounds! /me steals BG from Theowest's collection

• Legend

1. 01:11:603 (4) - Finish instead of whistle
2. 01:16:512 (7) - No whistle on the return I pointed out
3. 01:46:103 (6) - 1 or 2 grids to the right
4. 01:52:375 (4) - How about moving this one 3 up and 6 to the right, then snapping the fallowing notes so that (8) isn't so far left?
5. 02:03:149 (4) - Finish instead of whistle?
6. 02:31:103 (9) - Finish at 1st repeat and at the end?
7. 03:04:785 (7) - I don't think you need this jump here

• @theowest: because you want to see when this gets bubbeled (that day might never come since I am the mapper)

• you're always a good and welcome modder when it comes to approvel L_P (imo)

Mafiamaster wrote:

Bubble #1

1. 01:40:649 (7) - How about a new combo here?
2. 03:16:308 (11) - I would change this slider to notes if I were you.You decide it.
3. 03:39:012 (1) - Probably rise the volume to 30%?It sounds great to me.

kanpakyin wrote:

[Legend]

1. 01:40:649 (7) - How about a new combo here?
2. 03:16:308 (11) - I would change this slider to notes if I were you.You decide it.
3. 03:39:012 (1) - Probably rise the volume to 30%?It sounds great to me.

yea. Everything sounds cool

Jenny wrote:

winber1 was the first to first to pass it - GJ winber, I can't do this!