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OT!Executions S5 Chap 7

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Voting Round 7

Momiji
1
25.00%
Mara
0
0.00%
Wojjan
3
75.00%
Gabe
0
0.00%
Total votes: 4
Polling ended
Topic Starter
Zekks
The room began to quickly fill with water and everyone was desperately trying to find other options to escape. Wojjan finds a safe in the wall and assumes that it’s an escape route, but it actually is a note. She reads the note and the group finds out in order to really escape, they must vote to sacrifice someone and leave them in this room to escape. The sacrifice will help Enetro become more powerful but will also help the survivors escape. The group quickly votes and decides to leave Dawnsday. The hatch in the ceiling opens and everyone quickly climbs up the ladder to freedom. Dawnsday desperately tries to escape but being spell bound to the room, he cannot leave. Once the last person leaves, the hatch closes and they hear his screams until it stops, assuming he is now submerged.

The remaining four sneak around the buildings to avoid the citizens and walk into the buildings Railey was taken into through the back. Everyone steps into a room and in the middle is Railey, turned around, he hears the group and quickly turns around to warn them but it was too late. The door closed and the light turned on to reveal Enetro, standing in the corner. Enetro orders a life for a life, he will spare Railey only if the group votes on someone to take Railey’s place and die. If they do not decide on someone within 30 minutes everyone in the room dies and Enetro will become powerful enough to take over the town.

Who will take Railey’s place?
Achromalia

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

The room began to quickly fill with water and everyone was desperately trying to find other options to escape. Wojjan finds a safe in the wall and assumes that it’s an escape route, but it actually is a note. She reads the note and the group finds out in order to really escape, they must vote to sacrifice someone and leave them in this room to escape. The sacrifice will help Enetro become more powerful but will also help the survivors escape. The group quickly votes and decides to leave Dawnsday.
Yeah, seems like some slightly lazy writing here. You didn't give any hints or context clues as to why they should leave someone to die, yet you give some cryptic inquiry expecting me to find the answer for you and left it incredibly vague: t/762779/start=5

It was treated as if it was supposed to be obvious.

And now it just comes to "hey i trapped you hah leave one person I'll save the rest of you".

Merely justifying it with "oh it makes me stronger"? He couldn't just get it over with and deal with a couple or multiple or even all of them at the same time? Slowly eliminating them doesn't seem practical if you can simply trap everyone like Enetro does.

Fine. Apparently there are magic spells and shit so I guess anything can happen in your eyes.

...Sorry if that's a bit harsh, I'm being critical as usual.

I probably shouldn't even be taking this seriously xD
ColdTooth
I'M SORRY WOJJAN I LOVE YOU BUT I LIKE EVERYONE ELSE MORE INCLUDING GABE
Topic Starter
Zekks

Achromalia wrote:

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

The room began to quickly fill with water and everyone was desperately trying to find other options to escape. Wojjan finds a safe in the wall and assumes that it’s an escape route, but it actually is a note. She reads the note and the group finds out in order to really escape, they must vote to sacrifice someone and leave them in this room to escape. The sacrifice will help Enetro become more powerful but will also help the survivors escape. The group quickly votes and decides to leave Dawnsday.


Yeah, seems like some slightly lazy writing here. You didn't give any hints or context clues as to why they should leave someone to die, yet you give some cryptic inquiry expecting me to find the answer for you and left it incredibly vague: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/762779/start=5

It was treated as if it was supposed to be obvious.

And now it just comes to "hey i trapped you hah leave one person I'll save the rest of you".

Merely justifying it with "oh it makes me stronger"? He couldn't just get it over with and deal with a couple or multiple or even all of them at the same time? Slowly eliminating them doesn't seem practical if you can simply trap everyone like Enetro does.

Fine. Apparently there are magic spells and shit so I guess anything can happen in your eyes.

...Sorry if that's a bit harsh, I'm being critical as usual.

I probably shouldn't even be taking this seriously xD

Just stop posting on my threads
Achromalia

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

Achromalia wrote:

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

The room began to quickly fill with water and everyone was desperately trying to find other options to escape. Wojjan finds a safe in the wall and assumes that it’s an escape route, but it actually is a note. She reads the note and the group finds out in order to really escape, they must vote to sacrifice someone and leave them in this room to escape. The sacrifice will help Enetro become more powerful but will also help the survivors escape. The group quickly votes and decides to leave Dawnsday.


Yeah, seems like some slightly lazy writing here. You didn't give any hints or context clues as to why they should leave someone to die, yet you give some cryptic inquiry expecting me to find the answer for you and left it incredibly vague: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/762779/start=5

It was treated as if it was supposed to be obvious.

And now it just comes to "hey i trapped you hah leave one person I'll save the rest of you".

Merely justifying it with "oh it makes me stronger"? He couldn't just get it over with and deal with a couple or multiple or even all of them at the same time? Slowly eliminating them doesn't seem practical if you can simply trap everyone like Enetro does.

Fine. Apparently there are magic spells and shit so I guess anything can happen in your eyes.

...Sorry if that's a bit harsh, I'm being critical as usual.

I probably shouldn't even be taking this seriously xD

Just stop posting on my threads

I would have considered not posting had the writing not seemed lazy and arbitrarily set up.

But who am I to criticize someone's work, since OT has lacked proper quality and is in need of some housecleaning.

I guess that's really all I have to say. It's a pretty fun and interactive idea, but the execution is just a little sloppy. That's my point in a less critical nutshell.
Topic Starter
Zekks

Achromalia wrote:

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

Achromalia wrote:

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

The room began to quickly fill with water and everyone was desperately trying to find other options to escape. Wojjan finds a safe in the wall and assumes that it’s an escape route, but it actually is a note. She reads the note and the group finds out in order to really escape, they must vote to sacrifice someone and leave them in this room to escape. The sacrifice will help Enetro become more powerful but will also help the survivors escape. The group quickly votes and decides to leave Dawnsday.


Yeah, seems like some slightly lazy writing here. You didn't give any hints or context clues as to why they should leave someone to die, yet you give some cryptic inquiry expecting me to find the answer for you and left it incredibly vague: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/762779/start=5

It was treated as if it was supposed to be obvious.

And now it just comes to "hey i trapped you hah leave one person I'll save the rest of you".

Merely justifying it with "oh it makes me stronger"? He couldn't just get it over with and deal with a couple or multiple or even all of them at the same time? Slowly eliminating them doesn't seem practical if you can simply trap everyone like Enetro does.

Fine. Apparently there are magic spells and shit so I guess anything can happen in your eyes.

...Sorry if that's a bit harsh, I'm being critical as usual.

I probably shouldn't even be taking this seriously xD

Just stop posting on my threads

I would have considered not posting had the writing not seemed lazy and arbitrarily set up.

But who am I to criticize someone's work, since OT has lacked proper quality and is in need of some housecleaning.

I guess that's really all I have to say. It's a pretty fun and interactive idea, but the execution is just a little sloppy. That's my point in a less critical nutshell.

Just.
Stop.
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