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popner
Hi ~ M4M

Just suggestions:

[General]

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 2000
- [Insane] : 2000
- [Normal] : 2000
- [Sekai's Hard] : 2000
- [Verdi's Extra] : 2040

Inconsistency in Source:
- [Easy] : Kannazuki no Miko
- [Insane] : Kannazuki no Miko
- [Normal] : Kannazuki no Miko
- [Sekai's Hard] : Kannazuki No Miko
- [Verdi's Extra] : Kannazuki no Miko

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : opening yuri sekai Verdisphena
- [Insane] : opening yuri sekai verdisphena
- [Normal] : opening yuri sekai verdisphena
- [Sekai's Hard] : opening yuri sekai verdisphena
- [Verdi's Extra] : opening yuri sekai verdisphena

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:489
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:489
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:045
- [Sekai's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:489
- [Verdi's Extra] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:489
your own diffs' Kiai must be consistent, or it is unrankable.

[Easy]

http://puu.sh/lzlP notes gathered up

[Normal]

http://puu.sh/lzlz I think you know..
01:11:378 (3) - ds

[Insane]

00:02:934 (3) - NC
00:11:823 (3,4) - this? http://puu.sh/lzki
00:17:934 (6) - the spacing is too difficult and needless

GL~
Topic Starter
Darksonic

popner wrote:

[General]

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Easy] : 2000
- [Insane] : 2000
- [Normal] : 2000
- [Sekai's Hard] : 2000
- [Verdi's Extra] : 2040

Inconsistency in Source:
- [Easy] : Kannazuki no Miko
- [Insane] : Kannazuki no Miko
- [Normal] : Kannazuki no Miko
- [Sekai's Hard] : Kannazuki No Miko
- [Verdi's Extra] : Kannazuki no Miko

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : opening yuri sekai Verdisphena
- [Insane] : opening yuri sekai verdisphena
- [Normal] : opening yuri sekai verdisphena
- [Sekai's Hard] : opening yuri sekai verdisphena
- [Verdi's Extra] : opening yuri sekai verdisphena

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:489
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:489
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:045
- [Sekai's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:489
- [Verdi's Extra] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:54:045, ends on 01:22:489
your own diffs' Kiai must be consistent, or it is unrankable.

[Easy]

http://puu.sh/lzlP notes gathered up

[Normal]

http://puu.sh/lzlz I think you know..
01:11:378 (3) - ds

[Insane]

00:02:934 (3) - NC
00:11:823 (3,4) - this? http://puu.sh/lzki
00:17:934 (6) - the spacing is too difficult and needless

lol, I think I've fixed these inconsistencies a lot of times, but well.. Thanks :D
hillaryzx
Ok, I go for M4M~

General

- Just pointing it out.... - http://puu.sh/lAlt
Edit it via Notepad...

Easy

00:07:823(1) - why don't put clap on the slider's head. normal sound does not fit here, and if you follow, remove clap at slider's tail..

Normal

Want increase the size of the hitcircle? seems a bit tough Normal diff to me...

00:07:823(3) - add whistle here
00:14:934(1) - ^
00:30:045(2) - why don't change it into 1/1 slider, no reason to have repeating slider here though(my opinion)
00:33:823 - why don't do like this? By removing two circle after this timeline, add 1 slider that starts here and end at 34:267. Here is the picture if you don't understand :



00:42:045(2,3,4) - do like this?



Sekai's Hard

00:54:934(1,2) - remove finish on (1) and add whistle to (2) slider's head.
01:26:045(9) - swap finish at slider's tail to slider's head.

Other Diff seems fine to me, though...

Ok, I'll take my leave...
Topic Starter
Darksonic

hillaryzx wrote:

Easy

00:07:823(1) - why don't put clap on the slider's head. normal sound does not fit here, and if you follow, remove clap at slider's tail..

Normal

Want increase the size of the hitcircle? seems a bit tough Normal diff to me...

00:07:823(3) - add whistle here
00:14:934(1) - ^
00:30:045(2) - why don't change it into 1/1 slider, no reason to have repeating slider here though(my opinion)
00:33:823 - why don't do like this? By removing two circle after this timeline, add 1 slider that starts here and end at 34:267. Here is the picture if you don't understand :



00:42:045(2,3,4) - do like this?

Ok, maked some changes, thanks :3
KuronumaSawako
I'm so busy this days...

Ok let's go!

Suggestion only.

[General]


  1. Nothing here.

[Easy]


  1. 00:07:823 (1): I think using normal hitsound here it's a bad idea, but change this if you want, but for me it's a bad idea.
  1. 00:36:267 (3): Make this slider like this? seems better

[Normal]

  1. 00:03:378 (2): Reason to put finish in end of this slider? Don't fit, remove.

[Sekai's Hard]


  1. 00:10:045 (3): Clap here is a good idea.
  1. 00:10:267 (4,5,6): Make something like this to follow the instrument? Just a suggestion. And if you do this, in 00:10:934, add clap at the start of the slider is a good idea.
  1. 00:20:934 (2): Delete this note to follow the previous pattern in 00:18:489 (1,2,3,4).
  1. 00:30:489 (1): Add a whistle?
  1. 00:30:711 (X): Add a note here to follow the instrumental. Also add whistle in this note.
  1. 01:26:045 (9): For me, spinner could start here and end in 01:29:600.

Insane and Verdi's Extra looks good for me so it's all for now.
Good Luck Darksonic, will owe for you.
Topic Starter
Darksonic

KuronumaSawako wrote:

[Easy]


  1. 00:07:823 (1): I think using normal hitsound here it's a bad idea, but change this if you want, but for me it's a bad idea.
  1. 00:36:267 (3): Make this slider like this? seems better

[Normal]

  1. 00:03:378 (2): Reason to put finish in end of this slider? Don't fit, remove.
Ok, fixed some things. Thanks :3
Suimya
Shohei Ohtani
I could have sworn I've modded this song more then twice. Oh well.

Extra:
I almost broke my headphones because of the fact I was making during half of this map. It's a bit fast for my taste.
01:25:600 (1) - No.

Insane:
Decent

Hard:
00:30:045 - I know that this timing point is supposed to do something to the slidertick, but I can't hear a difference between that slider tick and the other one. Same with like, all of the other ones.

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
Fine, but make sure your claps land on the 2nd and 4th beat of each measure. Right now, they're sporadic, and it sounds silly.

Desu.
Sync
General
-- Open the .osu in Verdi's Extra and change the audio lead-in time to 2000 so it is consistent with the rest of the difficulties.

Verdi's Extra
00:11:378 (9) - You should definitely add a new combo here because it lies on a downbeat and it abides to the same combo pattern you've been following. Don't forget to remove the combo at 00:11:600 (1).

00:14:711 (2) - Sliders ending on downbeats are bad and awkward because in musical terms, it fails to stress the beat. I'm adamant about this, and since you're not a huge offender of this, I decided it would be beneficial to point it out. I'd suggest you replace the slider with a hit circle at the start-point and add another hit circle (or a slider) at 00:14:934. Make sure you add a new combo here too.
Other places where the problem persists
00:28:934 (8) - For here, I would suggest extending this two ticks so it lands on a red tick. It follows the vocals and you did the same thing at 00:36:045 (1).

00:42:489 (4,1,2,3) - Yeah, the beat placement here is pretty bad. Having sliders on downbeats isn't a problem if there are only vocals, but you have to take into consideration if the percussion. Since it'd be painfully dull to explain the entire process to you (and since you already know why this is bad), I'll just provide a screenshot: http://puu.sh/lQ9w (notice how I removed the new combo at 00:42:711 (1); it doesn't fit very well).

01:10:267 (1) - Here is another part I find troublesome. Replace the start-point with a hit circle and add a 1/2-beat slider at 01:10:489. Remember to remove the overlapping objects.

01:15:156 (5) - I'm sure you understand the problem and I bet you can fix it without me having to waste my time explaining it. I'll just point out the offending sliders that I think are the most detrimental.

01:24:045 (6) - ^^^ (Actually, since this is the last one and is kind of special, I'll explain it anyways. Remove the slider; add a hit circle at the start-point; add a 1/2-beat slider at 01:24:267 and remove the overlapping hit-circle. At first listen, the way you had it kind of fit but still felt a little off. I did a little experimenting of my own and figured that the process I explained above would be the best way to handle it.
00:53:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - The claps here are pretty outlandish. You'd be better off without them. Do as you wish.

Insane
lolnewcombobullshit itsstillimportantthoughsoyoushouldtotallyfixit
00:02:934 (1) - Remove this combo. It's inconsistent with what you did the bar before and combos are based off the music, not the patterns.

00:04:045 (1,2) - Same thing here. Remove the combo at (1) and add it where (2) is.

00:04:934 (1) - Again, combos should be placed when there is a transition in the music. Remove the combo here and add one at 00:05:156 (5).

00:06:045 (3) - Add a new combo here for the sake of consistency

01:11:156 (1) - Right, so this one doesn't make much sense either. Nor does it follow the pattern of new combos you've had up until now. Remove it and add a new combo at 01:11:823.

01:12:934 (1) - Same deal. Remove and add it at 01:13:600.
00:21:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm... not even sure what is going on here ;_; In the editor, I can point out what you were following, but it's totally out of the blue and it's pretty confusing the first time playing. I don't like it, but do whatever you want here.

00:40:600 (5) - This slider doesn't play very well. It's pretty awkward. I would get rid of it and replace it's start-point with a hit-circle.

00:44:156 (4) - ^

01:14:860 (2) - This is snapped incorrectly. It should be on the blue tick. It's not 1/3. Snap it to 01:14:823.

01:15:749 (2) - ^
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Sync wrote:

General
-- Open the .osu in Verdi's Extra and change the audio lead-in time to 2000 so it is consistent with the rest of the difficulties. OK SERIOUSLY I THINK THAT I DID THIS LIKE 58479872349382479238473247 TIMES..Fixed again.

Insane
lolnewcombobullshit itsstillimportantthoughsoyoushouldtotallyfixit
00:02:934 (1) - Remove this combo. It's inconsistent with what you did the bar before and combos are based off the music, not the patterns.

00:04:045 (1,2) - Same thing here. Remove the combo at (1) and add it where (2) is.

00:04:934 (1) - Again, combos should be placed when there is a transition in the music. Remove the combo here and add one at 00:05:156 (5).

00:06:045 (3) - Add a new combo here for the sake of consistency

01:11:156 (1) - Right, so this one doesn't make much sense either. Nor does it follow the pattern of new combos you've had up until now. Remove it and add a new combo at 01:11:823.

01:12:934 (1) - Same deal. Remove and add it at 01:13:600.
00:21:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm... not even sure what is going on here ;_; In the editor, I can point out what you were following, but it's totally out of the blue and it's pretty confusing the first time playing. I don't like it, but do whatever you want here.

00:40:600 (5) - This slider doesn't play very well. It's pretty awkward. I would get rid of it and replace it's start-point with a hit-circle.

00:44:156 (4) - ^

01:14:860 (2) - This is snapped incorrectly. It should be on the blue tick. It's not 1/3. Snap it to 01:14:823.

01:15:749 (2) - ^
Ok, fixed some things.. Thanks :3
Verdisphena
everything fixed but I fix somethings in my way, thanks.

Download: KOTOKO - Re-Sublimity (TV Size) (Darksonic) [Verdi's Extra].osu
No_Gu
request from my queue

[easy]
00:07:823 (1) - why you changed hitsound set here?
don't like this kind of hitsound set...maybe 24clap?

[normal]
00:01:600 (2,1) - spacing...
00:33:378 (3,3) - don't overlap
00:45:156 (3) - NC
00:45:378 (1,1) - remove NC
hitsound sounds really noisy...
also don't change spacing in normal diff

[hard]
fine

[insane]
00:53:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - use normal hitsound
01:07:378 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
orz really noisy claps

[extra]
nice
Topic Starter
Darksonic

No_Gu wrote:

[easy]
00:07:823 (1) - why you changed hitsound set here?
don't like this kind of hitsound set...maybe 24clap?

[normal]
00:01:600 (2,1) - spacing...
00:33:378 (3,3) - don't overlap
00:45:156 (3) - NC
00:45:378 (1,1) - remove NC
hitsound sounds really noisy...
also don't change spacing in normal diff

[insane]
00:53:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - use normal hitsound
01:07:378 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
orz really noisy claps
Maked some changes... Yeah I suck using hitsounds.

Thanks :3
LunarSakuya
hello

General
-Whats with Sekai's osu file title lol: KOTOKO - Re-Sublimity %28TV Size%29 %28Darksonic%29 %5BSekai%27s Hard%5D
Change it to match the others please ^^

Easy
00:02:489 (2) - Add whistle at beginning
00:07:823 (1) - Maybe whistle at beginning and clap at end
00:30:045 (2) - Put this note to the right instead of to the left of (1)
00:34:045 (2) - Try this: http://puu.sh/lY8Q, less boring?
00:40:711 (2) - Whistle
00:50:045 (1) - Start slider at 00:50:489, follows vocals and flows better imo; put a single note on 00:50:045 if you want

01:02:934 (1) - Make a curvy slider to blanket (3)
01:11:823 (4) - Whistle at beginning (btw these hitsounds are suggestions xD)

Normal
00:08:267 (4) - Delete a reverse, and start the slider at 00:08:711 http://puu.sh/m1ra
00:14:934 (1) - Delete the inheritance point here
00:32:934 (2,3) - pattern a bit confusing, why not put a 1/1 slider at 00:33:156
00:34:267 (2) - Delete
00:36:267 (1,2) - Put the claps at the beginnings instead of at the reverse
00:44:934 (2) - Delete
00:45:378 (1,2,1,2) - Not feeling so hot about this.. xD
00:50:045 (3) - NC? and then delete the NC on 00:50:489 (1)
00:59:156 (4) - Delete

01:03:823 (1,2,3) - Maybe do something like this: http://puu.sh/m1tr (ignore the bad spacing lol)
01:08:267 (1) - Move a little farther away so that it doesn't touch (2)
01:11:600 (4) - Delete, might make it less difficult
01:15:600 (2) - Delete
01:17:378 (1,2,3) - Sounds kinda funny

Sekai's Hard
00:06:711 (2) - Spacing
00:21:823 (4) - Start the NC here instead of at 00:22:267 (1)
00:24:267 (3) - Delete a reverse, then make a slider probably using the open white tick and (4,5)

01:08:489 - I feel like there's something missing
01:24:267 (5) - Maybe try and make this slider identical to 01:22:934 (1) http://puu.sh/m1wt (something like that)
01:25:378 (6) - NC

Insane
00:04:045 (6) - Move closer to (5) because it's in the same combo
00:07:823 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like you're restricting yourself to distance snap, we need insane! ;D xD
00:21:600 (8) - Move somewhere else, looks kinda awkward
00:24:711 (1,2) - Too soft
00:29:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (nazi) make a neater circle if you can
00:58:045 (1) - Whistle

01:15:711 (2) - Maybe move further away, a bit inconsistent with the other distances

Nice streams

Verdi's Extra
00:02:044 (3,4) - Go the other direction for every "square", feels better to play imo http://puu.sh/m1zF
00:19:156 (3) - Move farther away, matches the future spacings
00:20:267 (2) - Spacing
00:56:934 (1) - Move further away, plus it's at the really bottom lol
01:25:600 (1) - Border-line burai, redesign please

I started modding this a day before so sorry if a couple things don't make sense xD

Good song and anime <3 Good luck!
Verdisphena

LunarSakuya wrote:

Verdi's Extra
00:02:044 (3,4) - Go the other direction for every "square", feels better to play imo http://puu.sh/m1zF no thx
00:19:156 (3) - Move farther away, matches the future spacings nothx
00:20:267 (2) - Spacing k
00:56:934 (1) - Move further away, plus it's at the really bottom lol no
01:25:600 (1) - Border-line burai, redesign please no

I started modding this a day before so sorry if a couple things don't make sense xD

Good song and anime <3 Good luck!
x_x

Download: KOTOKO - Re-Sublimity (TV Size) (Darksonic) [Verdi's Extra].osu
Suimya
Topic Starter
Darksonic

LunarSakuya wrote:

Easy
00:02:489 (2) - Add whistle at beginning
00:07:823 (1) - Maybe whistle at beginning and clap at end
00:30:045 (2) - Put this note to the right instead of to the left of (1)
00:34:045 (2) - Try this: http://puu.sh/lY8Q, less boring?
00:40:711 (2) - Whistle
00:50:045 (1) - Start slider at 00:50:489, follows vocals and flows better imo; put a single note on 00:50:045 if you want

01:02:934 (1) - Make a curvy slider to blanket (3)
01:11:823 (4) - Whistle at beginning (btw these hitsounds are suggestions xD)

Normal
00:08:267 (4) - Delete a reverse, and start the slider at 00:08:711 http://puu.sh/m1ra
00:14:934 (1) - Delete the inheritance point here
00:32:934 (2,3) - pattern a bit confusing, why not put a 1/1 slider at 00:33:156
00:34:267 (2) - Delete
00:36:267 (1,2) - Put the claps at the beginnings instead of at the reverse
00:44:934 (2) - Delete
00:45:378 (1,2,1,2) - Not feeling so hot about this.. xD
00:50:045 (3) - NC? and then delete the NC on 00:50:489 (1)
00:59:156 (4) - Delete

01:03:823 (1,2,3) - Maybe do something like this: http://puu.sh/m1tr (ignore the bad spacing lol)
01:08:267 (1) - Move a little farther away so that it doesn't touch (2)
01:11:600 (4) - Delete, might make it less difficult
01:15:600 (2) - Delete
01:17:378 (1,2,3) - Sounds kinda funny

Insane
00:04:045 (6) - Move closer to (5) because it's in the same combo
00:07:823 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like you're restricting yourself to distance snap, we need insane! ;D xD
00:21:600 (8) - Move somewhere else, looks kinda awkward
00:24:711 (1,2) - Too soft
00:29:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - (nazi) make a neater circle if you can
00:58:045 (1) - Whistle

01:15:711 (2) - Maybe move further away, a bit inconsistent with the other distances
Ok, maked some changes, thanks :3

Updated.
Kirino Kousaka
Hola!~ Here's my mod~ (a request from my queue)

[General]
Delete that .osb file in your folder, it is not needed since you're not using any SB's.

[Easy]
00:00:712 (1,2) - Replace "clap" with "whistle" on these sliders' ends.
00:41:156 (3) - Put "clap".
00:41:600 (1) - Replace "clap" with "finish" on start. Put "clap" on reverse arrow. Remove "clap" on end.
00:42:934 (2) - Put "clap" on start and end.
00:44:267 (3) - Remove "clap" on start. Replace "clap" with "finish" on end.

[Normal]
00:00:712 (1) - Replace "whistle" with "finish".
00:01:600 (2) - Put "whistle".
00:02:489 (1) - Put "finish".
00:03:378 (2) - Put "whistle" on start and "finish" on end.
00:05:156 (1) - Put "whistle".
00:06:045 (3) - Put "finish".
00:06:934 (1) - Put "whistle".
00:07:823 (3) - Put "finish".
00:08:267 (4) - Put "whistle" on reverse arrow.
00:14:934 - Remove Green line.
00:14:934 (1) - Remove "whistle" on this whole slider.
00:16:711 - Put a Green line here. Soft Audio, Vol=65%, Svm=1.0x
00:29:156 (1,2) - Remove the "whistle"'s on these sliders. Put "clap"'s on their ends.
00:32:711 (1) - Put "finish".
00:34:045 (1) - Put "clap".
00:34:489 (2) - Replace "clap" with "finish" on start.
00:35:378 (3) - Delete "clap" on start and put it on end.
00:36:267 (1,2) - Remove all hitsounds on these, then add "clap"'s on their ends.
00:43:823 (2) - Turn it into something like this (as shown below). [Steps: Delete current (2), copy (1), Ctrl+V on this point, Ctrl+H, Ctrl+R, fix spacing, remove new combo.]


[Verdi's Extra]
01:00:600 (2) - Remove "clap" on start. Sounds weird.

[Insane]
00:05:600 (2) - Put "clap" on start. Sounds better imo.

meh that's all :3
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

[General]
Delete that .osb file in your folder, it is not needed since you're not using any SB's.

[Easy]
00:00:712 (1,2) - Replace "clap" with "whistle" on these sliders' ends.
00:41:156 (3) - Put "clap".
00:41:600 (1) - Replace "clap" with "finish" on start. Put "clap" on reverse arrow. Remove "clap" on end.
00:42:934 (2) - Put "clap" on start and end.
00:44:267 (3) - Remove "clap" on start. Replace "clap" with "finish" on end.

[Normal]
00:00:712 (1) - Replace "whistle" with "finish".
00:01:600 (2) - Put "whistle".
00:02:489 (1) - Put "finish".
00:03:378 (2) - Put "whistle" on start and "finish" on end.
00:05:156 (1) - Put "whistle".
00:06:045 (3) - Put "finish".
00:06:934 (1) - Put "whistle".
00:07:823 (3) - Put "finish".
00:08:267 (4) - Put "whistle" on reverse arrow.
00:14:934 - Remove Green line.
00:14:934 (1) - Remove "whistle" on this whole slider.
00:16:711 - Put a Green line here. Soft Audio, Vol=65%, Svm=1.0x
00:29:156 (1,2) - Remove the "whistle"'s on these sliders. Put "clap"'s on their ends.
00:32:711 (1) - Put "finish".
00:34:045 (1) - Put "clap".
00:34:489 (2) - Replace "clap" with "finish" on start.
00:35:378 (3) - Delete "clap" on start and put it on end.
00:36:267 (1,2) - Remove all hitsounds on these, then add "clap"'s on their ends.
00:43:823 (2) - Turn it into something like this (as shown below). [Steps: Delete current (2), copy (1), Ctrl+V on this point, Ctrl+H, Ctrl+R, fix spacing, remove new combo.]


[Insane]
00:05:600 (2) - Put "clap" on start. Sounds better imo.
Ok, fixed some things. Thanks :3 YES I SUCK SO BAD AT HITSOUNDS ;_________;
Kirino Kousaka

Darksonic wrote:

Ok, fixed some things. Thanks :3 YES I SUCK SO BAD AT HITSOUNDS ;_________;
If that's your problem, then I can teach you some tips. But not here. orz
S h i a
Sorry a bit late.. I have little problem with my queue mate.
Mod request via my queue. yeah

[Overall]
Oops what's this?Disable all letterbox? since you have a video..

[Easy]
Technically fine.

[Normal]
00:32:934 (2,3) - These parttens seems a bit hard in normal. But yeah. it's OK.If you like.. fix it like this?yeah. that's all

[Sekai's Hard]
01:03:600 (1) - New combo here? and remove this new combo here01:05:823. add new combo here01:06:489
01:26:045 (4) - let this slider blank with 01:25:823 (3) - better?

[Verdi's Extra]
<3

[Insane]
00:02:934 (3) - no reason jump here.
00:17:934 (6,7,8,9) - stack to 00:17:600 (5) - slider end?
00:19:600 (8) - Note like this kill your flow so badly.Try another ways to deal these?
00:40:600 (5,1,2) - this part feel very weird to me. and you starting a stream at a blue line also doesn't make any sence. If you like this is my suggestion 00:44:156 (4,1,2) - yeah... same here. feel weird again

yeah. Goodluck
Verdisphena
No changes :d
Melophobia
As requested

[Easy]
01:14:489 (3) - make it longer by 1 tick

[Normal]
00:11:378 (1) - finish
00:29:156 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:46:934 (2) - finish
00:50:489 (3) - finish at the beginning
01:07:378 (2) - finish at the end
01:15:378 (1) - finish

[Sekai's Hard]
01:14:489 (3) - finish at the beginning
01:15:378 (5) - ^
01:19:378 (1) - finish

[Insane]
00:11:823 (3,4) - keep the spacing
00:16:267 (5) - remove whistle
00:25:600 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:53:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - move to x:272 y:208 to desplay at center in play mode
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/275774
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Melophobia wrote:

[Easy]
01:14:489 (3) - make it longer by 1 tick

[Normal]
00:11:378 (1) - finish
00:29:156 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:46:934 (2) - finish
00:50:489 (3) - finish at the beginning
01:07:378 (2) - finish at the end
01:15:378 (1) - finish

[Insane]
00:11:823 (3,4) - keep the spacing
00:16:267 (5) - remove whistle
00:25:600 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:53:156 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - move to x:272 y:208 to desplay at center in play mode
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/275774

S h i a wrote:

[Overall]
Oops what's this?Disable all letterbox? since you have a video..

[Easy]
Technically fine.

[Normal]
00:32:934 (2,3) - These parttens seems a bit hard in normal. But yeah. it's OK.If you like.. fix it like this?
[Insane]
00:02:934 (3) - no reason jump here.
00:17:934 (6,7,8,9) - stack to 00:17:600 (5) - slider end?
00:19:600 (8) - Note like this kill your flow so badly.Try another ways to deal these?
00:40:600 (5,1,2) - this part feel very weird to me. and you starting a stream at a blue line also doesn't make any sence. If you like this is my suggestion 00:44:156 (4,1,2) - yeah... same here. feel weird again
Ok, fixed some things, Thanks :3
Suimya
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Yay, updated.
Betsuto
Sorry with late >.<

[Genaral]
SPOILER
Is that's MIKO ? o.o
They're cute >w<
I like it

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:21:156 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:934 (1) - remove new combo

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:02:489 (1) - remove new combo
00:42:934 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:378 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:267 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:045 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:267 (1) - remove whistle (reverse)
01:16:045 (1) - remove new combo
01:23:378 (1) - remove new combo

[Sekai's Hard]
SPOILER
00:54:934 (1) - remove new combo
00:55:823 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:711 (8) - add new combo
01:13:600 (1 , 2) - like this ? http://puu.sh/nwJL

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:06:045 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:600 (5) - add new combo
00:40:823 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:156 (4) - add new combo
00:44:378 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:600 (9) - add new combo
01:11:823 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:600 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:156 (1) - remove new combo

[Verdi's Extra]
SPOILER
00:14:378 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:378 (1) - remove new combo
00:55:156 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:711 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:378 (1) - remove new combo

Good luck ˊ• ᵜ •ˋ) ~
Topic Starter
Darksonic

bestz2541 wrote:

[Genaral]
SPOILER
Is that's MIKO ? o.o
They're cute >w<
I like it

[Easy]
SPOILER
00:21:156 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:934 (1) - remove new combo

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:02:489 (1) - remove new combo
00:42:934 (1) - remove new combo
00:45:378 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:267 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:045 (1) - remove new combo
00:58:267 (1) - remove whistle (reverse)
01:16:045 (1) - remove new combo
01:23:378 (1) - remove new combo

[Insane]
SPOILER
00:06:045 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:600 (5) - add new combo
00:40:823 (1) - remove new combo
00:44:156 (4) - add new combo
00:44:378 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:600 (9) - add new combo
01:11:823 (1) - remove new combo
01:13:600 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:156 (1) - remove new combo
Thank you for mod :3
SkyDevil
./Ish late just like the others-

Mod~

Easy
NOthing special o-o

Normal
00:03:378 - I think it's better to reverse this slider and put this under 2
00:32:711 - Don't let this whole combo overlap with the next combo
00:45:378 - No new combo needed
01:16:045 - ^

Sekai's Hard
00:30:489 - Maybe this >
01:04:045 - Newcombo? :D

Insane
00:03:045 - euh place these circles closer to 2
00:04:934 - ^ But then clsoer to 3
00:14:045 - ^ Closer to 4
00:21:600 - Dont place a circle beneath a stream ><
00:30:267 - ^
00:32:934 - circle 2 to 6 closer to 1
00:34:045 - Also too far from last combo
00:46:934 - ^
01:25:156 - Place somewhere else but not under the last stream ><

Verdi's Extra
In general: wowowow for such a low BPM you can't have a AR of 9, it looks already pretty fast on AR 8 so lower AR by 1
01:25:600 - was that speed change really neccessary (or how do you write that ><)

I like this map, but insane needs some moddings, the others are pretty fine~
Topic Starter
Darksonic

SkyDevil wrote:

Easy
NOthing special o-o

Normal
00:03:378 - I think it's better to reverse this slider and put this under 2
00:32:711 - Don't let this whole combo overlap with the next combo
00:45:378 - No new combo needed
01:16:045 - ^

Insane
00:03:045 - euh place these circles closer to 2
00:04:934 - ^ But then clsoer to 3
00:14:045 - ^ Closer to 4
00:21:600 - Dont place a circle beneath a stream ><
00:30:267 - ^
00:32:934 - circle 2 to 6 closer to 1
00:34:045 - Also too far from last combo
00:46:934 - ^
01:25:156 - Place somewhere else but not under the last stream ><
Thanks for mod. And about the Insane diff, remember that is an INSANE, so most of these jumps are ok, same with streams.. my intention was to make a jump/stream diff.
Verdisphena
@SkyDevil
No and no :33
Suimya
Topic Starter
Darksonic
Updated.
Ayu
Well, just took this map randomly to learn a bit of modding. took you out of my friends (SkyDevil) queue /o/

[easy]
- I would say that sometimes it's just a bit linear, for example from 01:02:934 to 01:11:378

[normal]
00:06:934 - A bit to linear, use this for example: http://puu.sh/olDE

[Insane]
00:36:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - A bit to linear

Uhm, well.. I couldn't really get more out if this. :(
To less experience for that.

You don't have to use this mod, I'm just trying to learnz~
Wasabi
Hello! Sorry it took me longer than expected to get to this.

Overall I like it, nice song and it plays very nicely. Good job with hitsounding too!

Easy
Nothing wrong from what I can see. Good!

Normal
00:50:267 (2) - Soft finish here? Just a suggestion, it would fit nice here with the song.
01:00:267 to 01:11:378 - It feels too linear. Seems like there are too many straight sliders in this part.

Sekai's Hard
00:30:489 (3, 4, 5) - The spacing should be consistent here, there's no need for spacing changes.
00:32:711 (1, 2, 3, 4) - These don't seem to fit the section. Even though it goes with the music, this isn't done again until the kiai time and doesn't feel necessary for the calmer part of the song. Just my opinion though.
00:41:600 (4) - This slider looks sloppy. It should be symmetrical like the slider at 00:39:156 (6)


Verdi's Extra
The AR on this song seems way to fast for the BPM that this song is at. I would suggest lowering it by 1.
I'm not a fan of the spacing changes in the beginning either, they don't seem to really fit.

01:00:489 - The change in speed on this ending slider doesn't feel right at all. Make it a normal slider.

Insane
01:00:489 - A stream under a stream doesn't look good. Possibly put the last stream next to the first one.

Overall very good. I played through all of the difficulties, other than a few small problems, I really enjoyed it. Good work!
Topic Starter
Darksonic

Ayu wrote:

[easy]
- I would say that sometimes it's just a bit linear, for example from 01:02:934 to 01:11:378

[normal]
00:06:934 - A bit to linear, use this for example: http://puu.sh/olDE

[Insane]
00:36:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - A bit to linear
It's ok, I did something different in Insane, thanks.

Snickerz wrote:

Easy
Nothing wrong from what I can see. Good!

Normal
00:50:267 (2) - Soft finish here? Just a suggestion, it would fit nice here with the song.
01:00:267 to 01:11:378 - It feels too linear. Seems like there are too many straight sliders in this part.

Insane
01:00:489 - A stream under a stream doesn't look good. Possibly put the last stream next to the first one.
Ok, I'll try to make something different with these linear parts. Thanks :3
Verdisphena
Mystica
Here comes my mod
[General]
How about mute the slider?

[Easy]
00:42:934 (2) - add finish
00:51:378 (2) - ^
00:56:711 (4) - whistle not fit here

[Normal]
00:32:711 (1,2,3) - not fit.consider another style
make maps more curve.Now just seems draw square

[Hardl]
consider to mute the slider volume?
00:34:489 (8,1) - as 00:32:711 (1,2,3,4) - may fit more
01:26:045 (4) - make it away from (3)

[Insane]
full with streams...I think parts of them do not fit well..you could looks [Extra] for some you wanna

[Extra]
00:07:823 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read

Good job
a32
From modding queue~Sorry for late
[General]
Nothing~
[Easy]
00:22:934(1) - spacing?
00:47:823(3) - add clap here?
00:49:600(4) - ^
00:50:045(1) - spacing?
[Normal]
00:32:711(1,2,3) - I think this pattern is a bit hard for beginners orz
00:42:934(5) - add NC
00:45:156(8,1,2) - I think this pattern is a bit hard too
01:10:489(1,2,3) - ^
[Sekai's Hard]
00:46:934(1) - down a grid?
[Insane]
00:11:934(3) - add whistle?
00:14:378(6) - ^
00:36:267(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this stream sounds weird...
[Verdi's Extra]
Nothing~(a bit hard orz)
Nice map~ Good luck :)
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