Alright let's see what I can find. found this on #modreqs
General:CLEAR!
alacat's Yukiko:00:40:794 (1) - i suggest that you move it down a bit because the hitburst is slightly covering this note.
00:46:127 (1) - yes it's near the middle, but the spinner-osu is covering this slider which makes it hard to find for beginners.
00:58:127 (6) - make this a NC because the instrumental changes.
00:59:460 (1) - maybe add a finish? sounds empty without it IMO
01:14:127 (5) - this slider can look a bit smoother. it looks ugly IMO
01:16:127 (2) - remove the whistle at the sliderbody and add it at the beginning and end. that sound gets in the way during gameplay IMO
01:23:794 (1) - move this down a bit. the hitburst is slightly covering this note.
01:34:127 (1) - same as 01:14:127
01:39:460 (5) - make this a NC because of new lyrics
01:44:127 (1) - same as 00:46:127
01:44:793 (2) - same as 01:14:127
01:46:793 (4) - same as above and remove the repeat and add a circle. i think beginners will let go after the second repeat.
02:11:460 (1) - same as above and same as 01:16:127
Gamu's Shiori:00:41:960 (4) - i think that this slider can look a bit smoother.
00:51:127 (4) - replace the clap for a finish at the end. the finish matches with the instrumental IMO
01:04:794 (2) - add a finish? sounds empty without it.
01:08:627 (3) - same as above but at the beginning to match with the vocals.
01:10:127 (1) - ^
01:15:460 (5) - same as 01:04:794
01:22:127-01:23:127 - how about adding notes to follow vocals?
01:28:793 (6) - same as 01:04:794
01:55:460 (2) - (1) is ok but my concern is on this slider. the spinner-osu is covering this note which makes it hard for players to spot. I suggest that you move it somewhere else so that it'd look fully or slightly visible.
02:00:127 (4,5) - the first 3 sliders in this combo look good, but these ones look ugly. these 2 slider can look a bit smoother.
Misao:00:50:960 (9) - *nazi* not stacked properly. go 1 grid right
aww man i regret this.01:04:127 - add a circle to follow the guitar? i don't like how the rhythm suddenly stops because players might hit the next note too early.
01:34:127 (3) - add a finish at the beginning to match with the vocals like the last few notes.
01:39:460 (1) - ^
01:53:460 (4,1) - inconsistent spacing unless this is intentional.
02:01:460 (1) - extend this spinner till 02:04:127 to follow the long pause.
Misuzu:00:59:460 (3) - replace the whistle for a finish like the 1st 2 sliders?
01:03:627 (2) - the hitburst is covering the repeat slider which is
unrankable01:37:793 (3) - hmm either change the look of this slider or space it out to avoid the overlapping.
02:01:293 (1) - same as Misao
02:13:127 (6,7,8) - replace these whistles for finishes to match the cymbals. and make (6) a NC because the tone of the piano changes.
This is the best I can do. GL
