FireballFlame wrote:

Okayy let's see...

Add +10 to the offset. 395 should be perfect ♪ Oook~

There are a few spacing irregularities in [Hard]. I'm not sure if you intended them, but - since everything else is snapped to 1.0x or 2.0x - assuming you didn't:
00:18:003 (6,7) - is .8 instead of 1
00:23:547 (7,1) - is 1.6 instead of 1 or 2 (don't forget to keep 00:22:449 (3) and 00:23:862 (1) stacked though)
00:30:286 (5,6) - is .7 instead of 1
00:35:503 (5,1) - is .9 instead of 1
00:50:938 (4,1) - is .7 instead of 1 Yup, most of these are intentional, for the looks~

And here's a few stacked objects that are a bit off:
00:23:873 (1,5) -
00:31:699 (1,3) -
00:46:047 (5,1) -
and
00:12:025 (3,1) - in [Normal] I'll try to fix these~


As expected, I couldnt find anything major... your maps are too perfect

1. 00:13:112 (2,3) - (optional) Hmm, I think it would be nicer if these two is placed few grids right so (1,2,3)'s angle would be less narrow... Optional though
2. 00:15:069 (1) - Switch to clap? (because of that low-pitched notes from the music ><)
3. 00:19:960 (2,3) - Hmm, I personally dislike how (1) is placed horizontally beside (2)... Why don't you continue your flow here? There won't be an overlap or such, because your approach rate is high enough :3
   
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4. 00:25:178 (3) - Minor stuff, but perhaps one grid down for the midpoint to make it encircle (1)'s start better?
5. 00:26:482 (1,2) - (optional) Uhm... Not sure if elbow slider like this would give a cheerful effect >_< Like this would be more natural imo: (also, one grid left for your red waypoint on (1))
   
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6. 00:35:612 (3,4) - (optional) Alter into two sliders? (I personally think you need a rhythm on 00:35:938 ><)
7. 00:41:482 (3) - Is it intentional to let the slider's end silent? A whistle there would be fancy imo :3
8. 00:46:047 (2,3) - idk... I think the crescendo could be emphasized more if the starting volume isn't 70%... Perhaps try 60 -> 73 -> 87 -> 100 or something like that? xD
9. 00:46:699 (3,1) - (optional) Why don't you create something like 00:31:047 (3,1) here? Would be fancier imo~ (plus, moving (3) upward a bit to obtain this pattern won't hurt imo :3)
10. 00:54:525 (1,1) - Hmm, these two's placement is quite forced imo. Maybe an encircling slider here will help?
    
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11. 01:00:395 (1,2) - I feel the two continuous whistle on (5,1) is too loud, perhaps use clap on (1) and whistle on (2) here?
12. 01:07:895 (1) - It's not perfectly parallel with (2)... Why don't you just copy-paste (2) here and flip it orz ><

1. 00:13:438 (1) - Is it meant to be curved like this? imo, it will be tidier if curved encircling (1) imo
2. 00:16:698 (2,3) - (optional) I'd arrange like this, to give more freedom to arrange (4) - (4) is much better here if facing upward, definitely ><
   
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3. 00:19:633 (3) - Add a slight downward curve here? It will flow good with (4) here, plus I don't think sudden straight slider here after your previous curves is a good idea...
4. 00:25:068 (3,1,1,1) - (optional) I'd prefer to create a diamond pattern here, as it will play tidier:
   
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5. 00:31:698 (1) - Rather than forcing to curve this slider in a corner like this, how about curving this slider encircling (4)? Would look much better imo :3
6. 00:39:525 (1) - Here also, adding a slight curve would make this flow better with (2) imo~
7. 00:46:046 (1,1) - Same as [Easy] here about the crescendo. Also, (optional) if you curve this slider, would look good with your previous (2) here~
   
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8. 00:51:264 (4) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid up to encircle (2) better
9. 00:59:090 (4) - Hmm, fits the vocals more if placed 1/3 before. Maybe you can alter your previous (2,3) as a slider, and move this 1/3 earlier, to follow the music more and keep the flow?
10. 01:05:285 (4) - I suppose it should be moved one grid left (as it's closer to (1) instead of your (3))
11. 01:06:916 (1) - (optional) Uh, idk... Your angle from (2) in this slider is too sharp imo. Perhaps you can drag the endpoint a bit, and move the slider a bit to the right as well?
    
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1. 00:05:938 (2) - Minor stuff, move this slider's midpoint one grid up to encircle (1) better - barely noticeable, though (:
2. 00:09:851 (5) - (optional) Why don't you slightly curve this slider inward of (4) as you mostly did on your previous diffs? Straight slider kills the flow here imo...
3. 00:15:068 (6's end, the pink (1), the purple (1)) - Considering this is a 1/3 song, I think it's better to distribute the whistle like this (also fits with the high-pitched synth here xD)
4. 00:18:329 (7) - This note is definitely too close to (6) - I think, moving (6) to the right a bit wouldn't be a big problem to fix this (:
5. 00:22:894 (4,5,6,7) - Does the whistling intended to halt here? o.o
6. 00:28:111 (4,5,6,7) - (optional) You can arrange these four like this, to make this part slightly more patterned:
   
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7. 00:33:872 (6,7,1) - imo, would give a much better angle with your previous (5) if these three is moved two grids left and up ^^
8. 00:46:046 (5,1) - These two isn't perfectly stacked, is it intentional? Also, same with your previous diffs about the crescendo here
9. 00:56:481 (1,1,2,1,2) - (optional) You can somewhat make a fan pattern here, not really necessary but I thought it would be fancier:
   
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10. 00:58:981 (5) - You already have a clap on (4), so I think another clap here (on slider's start) would sound abrupt. I highly recommend to use a whistle instead
11. 01:05:285 (6) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint and the midpoint one grid down to make this slider encircle around (3) better?

Niva wrote:

Random mod ~ yay~

Hi Lanttu (:
(uh yeah, I came here because I'm still amazed by that Sky High map :3)

[General]

-> Actually for vocaloid songs, it's more accurate to use the composer as source (just look at the recent examples orz, this one for example), so perhaps move daniwell to source? (uh, plus, I'm sure he is more famous with daniwell-P alias instead of daniwell) Sorry, but I really do not agree with this. ;_; Added Daniwell-P to tags, though.
-> Add "schrodinger no neko" to tags? (I know Schrodinger's Cat will translate to it in Japanese. idk what's Kitten in Japanese, though ><) Sure~

[Easy]

-> That difficulty setting is just... orz >< - I don't think you need HP Drain and OD setting maximized to the left, HP Drain and OD +1 will still show this difficulty as a 3-star Easy orz (: Oh, ok then. ;w;

1. 00:13:112 (2,3) - (optional) Hmm, I think it would be nicer if these two is placed few grids right so (1,2,3)'s angle would be less narrow... Optional though I was going for the triangle-look, so.. ;w;
2. 00:15:069 (1) - Switch to clap? (because of that low-pitched notes from the music ><) Ok~
3. 00:19:960 (2,3) - Hmm, I personally dislike how (1) is placed horizontally beside (2)... Why don't you continue your flow here? There won't be an overlap or such, because your approach rate is high enough :3 Hmm, sure, why not.
4. 00:25:178 (3) - Minor stuff, but perhaps one grid down for the midpoint to make it encircle (1)'s start better?
5. 00:26:482 (1,2) - (optional) Uhm... Not sure if elbow slider like this would give a cheerful effect >_< Like this would be more natural imo: (also, one grid left for your red waypoint on (1)) I like the elbow more.. ;w;
6. 00:35:612 (3,4) - (optional) Alter into two sliders? (I personally think you need a rhythm on 00:35:938 ><) Oh, sure~
7. 00:41:482 (3) - Is it intentional to let the slider's end silent? A whistle there would be fancy imo :3 Sure~
8. 00:46:047 (2,3) - idk... I think the crescendo could be emphasized more if the starting volume isn't 70%... Perhaps try 60 -> 73 -> 87 -> 100 or something like that? xD Sure~
9. 00:46:699 (3,1) - (optional) Why don't you create something like 00:31:047 (3,1) here? Would be fancier imo~ (plus, moving (3) upward a bit to obtain this pattern won't hurt imo :3) Because I like the curve 2 and 3 make... ;w;
10. 00:54:525 (1,1) - Hmm, these two's placement is quite forced imo. Maybe an encircling slider here will help? No, I like it more like this.
11. 01:00:395 (1,2) - I feel the two continuous whistle on (5,1) is too loud, perhaps use clap on (1) and whistle on (2) here? ehm, ok~
12. 01:07:895 (1) - It's not perfectly parallel with (2)... Why don't you just copy-paste (2) here and flip it orz >< Done~

[Normal]

1. 00:13:438 (1) - Is it meant to be curved like this? imo, it will be tidier if curved encircling (1) imo Changed a bit~
2. 00:16:698 (2,3) - (optional) I'd arrange like this, to give more freedom to arrange (4) - (4) is much better here if facing upward, definitely >< ummm... I think it's much better facing down, actually.
3. 00:19:633 (3) - Add a slight downward curve here? It will flow good with (4) here, plus I don't think sudden straight slider here after your previous curves is a good idea... Upward curve would match with 4 better imo. Though I can't see the problem with a straight slider..
4. 00:25:068 (3,1,1,1) - (optional) I'd prefer to create a diamond pattern here, as it will play tidier: Oooh, yesh!
5. 00:31:698 (1) - Rather than forcing to curve this slider in a corner like this, how about curving this slider encircling (4)? Would look much better imo :3 Ehh, it flows bad to me like that... ;_; Besides, I like it in the corner.
6. 00:39:525 (1) - Here also, adding a slight curve would make this flow better with (2) imo~
7. 00:46:046 (1,1) - Same as [Easy] here about the crescendo. Also, (optional) if you curve this slider, would look good with your previous (2) here~ I like it straight here... ;w;
8. 00:51:264 (4) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid up to encircle (2) better Ok~
9. 00:59:090 (4) - Hmm, fits the vocals more if placed 1/3 before. Maybe you can alter your previous (2,3) as a slider, and move this 1/3 earlier, to follow the music more and keep the flow? I can see what you mean but, hmm.. I also kind of like it like this. ;_; I'll think about it.
10. 01:05:285 (4) - I suppose it should be moved one grid left (as it's closer to (1) instead of your (3)) Ok~
11. 01:06:916 (1) - (optional) Uh, idk... Your angle from (2) in this slider is too sharp imo. Perhaps you can drag the endpoint a bit, and move the slider a bit to the right as well? OK~

[Hard]

-> OD -1? This map isn't a super-streamy map anyway, I think it's better this way so Hidden+HardRock players could enjoy playing this map more with lots of 300s~ Sure~

1. 00:05:938 (2) - Minor stuff, move this slider's midpoint one grid up to encircle (1) better - barely noticeable, though (: Ok~
2. 00:09:851 (5) - (optional) Why don't you slightly curve this slider inward of (4) as you mostly did on your previous diffs? Straight slider kills the flow here imo... Hmm, sure, why not.
3. 00:15:068 (6's end, the pink (1), the purple (1)) - Considering this is a 1/3 song, I think it's better to distribute the whistle like this (also fits with the high-pitched synth here xD) I hope I understood that right.. ;w;
4. 00:18:329 (7) - This note is definitely too close to (6) - I think, moving (6) to the right a bit wouldn't be a big problem to fix this (: I can't move it to right without breaking the nice linear thing with 5 and 6. >: Besides, it's so little spacing difference, does it really matter?
5. 00:22:894 (4,5,6,7) - Does the whistling intended to halt here? o.o oops, fixed~
6. 00:28:111 (4,5,6,7) - (optional) You can arrange these four like this, to make this part slightly more patterned: I prefer it the way it is right now.. ;w;
7. 00:33:872 (6,7,1) - imo, would give a much better angle with your previous (5) if these three is moved two grids left and up ^^ I wasn't going for an angled look, I prefer it being soft and round here.
8. 00:46:046 (5,1) - These two isn't perfectly stacked, is it intentional? Also, same with your previous diffs about the crescendo here Can you really notice that stacking when playing? Because I can't. ;w;'
9. 00:56:481 (1,1,2,1,2) - (optional) You can somewhat make a fan pattern here, not really necessary but I thought it would be fancier: Hmm, it looks nice, but it would break the linear thing with purple combo. >:
10. 00:58:981 (5) - You already have a clap on (4), so I think another clap here (on slider's start) would sound abrupt. I highly recommend to use a whistle instead Ok~
11. 01:05:285 (6) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint and the midpoint one grid down to make this slider encircle around (3) better? Ok~

Charming one minute map~
Star (:

1. Offset +10
2. Unsnapped kiai and sections
3. Some files in skin were missed
4. Fixed stats in Normal
5. Removed some notes in Easy for better star rating / one nazi spacing thing.

Aleks719 wrote:

enjoy your perkele !

Jacob wrote:

the offset and source is different from the ranked one.

?!?!

Garven wrote:

All dat new combo spam
And no video. :<

[Easy]
01:07:904 (1) - Add whistle or finish to start

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Unranking over the lack of mp3 in the uploaded file. When you have time, please do a full resubmit, so we can rank it again.